That 5 minutes of effort has been the most ive used my kindle unlimited subscription in a few months. I use it a few times a year, it's mostly used by my brother for coloring books for my niece.
that's so sweet! Damn, now I want to see my little cousins. The oldest are in college now and the youngest isn't even one. family events are chaos of the best sort. got to remember to look into train tickets before thanksgiving rolls around.
 
It is possible that the reading of the Will hasn't occurred yet. Doesn't Dumbledore come near the end of Summer? You @Fencer, never specified when exactly Harry and Taylor have met. So it's entirely possible that Remus and Tonks were on orders from Dumbledore trying to distract Harry by taking him to Vegas for a week or two to get him away from being at the reading of the Will. Them coming back early because Tonks fucked up and got Harry married to an unknown is something I could see happening.
 
It is possible that the reading of the Will hasn't occurred yet. Doesn't Dumbledore come near the end of Summer? You @Fencer, never specified when exactly Harry and Taylor have met. So it's entirely possible that Remus and Tonks were on orders from Dumbledore trying to distract Harry by taking him to Vegas for a week or two to get him away from being at the reading of the Will. Them coming back early because Tonks fucked up and got Harry married to an unknown is something I could see happening.
timing I can absolutely play with. I'm not calling the Vegas trip a Dumbledore plan for a number of reasons, starting with Dumbledore's obsession with the blood wards... still I'm thinking on things now. Early in the summer works just fine on a lot of levels ... and I don't need to take the impending conversation to Hogwarts if number 12 is off the table. I can take it back to the Dursley's and ohhh wouldn't it be fun to introduce them to Taylor? Paraphrase canon... just need to include Talyor and the Lupin's reactions at a few points which could be enough to write Vernon out of the scene entirely after his first interjection. They move into headquarters that night because Taylor refuses to sleep in a house where the occupants might try to kill her in her sleep. Bring up the fallacy in using blood wards because Voldemort has already proven he can touch Harry? what good even are they it was half the point of using him in the ritual.

then Taylor would be respecting Harry's boundaries because the reminders should send him right back into mourning. with all that drama she doesn't get a chance to show Dumbledore her fangs then everyone's too busy until the order is back in Number 12. Dung doesn't get the chance to run off with the necklace until school starts though I don't know if I can invent a plausible reason for them to discover the damn thing. Taylor hides all the pretty valuables in the basement past her massive black widow breading farm? *cackling intensifies*

but if I put off the Dumbledore Taylor introduction... Then I could still run with my fun version of their first clash...

buzzing on rum, buzzing on rum the muse is on fire and so is the Erdtree. still can't beat the stupid cosmic dragon whale thing. and I'm definitely overplaying how drunk I am by letting the ADD run rampant, but this has been a good weekend, and I'm actually pretty excited about this.
 
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Dude… you are a legend. Sadly now I have to go with my other version and it's going to need some serious tweaking, but I really do appreciate this and you are a Legend.
Fuck yes! That means I get to run with the extra fun version I was plotting! 🤩
Could you still post the "Extra Fun" version so we could see it? You sound really excited about it and I'd love to see where the passion took you.
 
Could you still post the "Extra Fun" version so we could see it? You sound really excited about it and I'd love to see where the passion took you.
check the post above yours. if I wake up tomorrow and the thought process still makes sense you should get the extra fun version as Chapter 5 instead of chapter 4..... oh mother fuck this really is turning into a long fic.... Damn it all!!!!!!! I mean yes I'm having a blast and I'm excited but juggling three fics is not great at all
 

Ok that's fair and I understand about the Dumbledore point, yeah he probably would want Harry in the blood wards and it might just be leaning a bit too much into the "manipulative! Dumbles" stereotype. I'm glad my idea is fueling your muse. Heck you might be able to butterfly Dumbledore getting cursed away as well.

As for juggling three Fics, you could put one of them into hiatus for a bit. Just while your muse runs rampant. For my writing I have 7 distinct columns I regularly write but I've switched up the subject matter on some of them because I've lost interest in reading or watching a particular type of thing for a while.
 
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Well one way of having Taylor find the locket horcrux, is to have her absolutely terrify Kreature, with it slipping out in a somewhat unrelated happening. Like securing the valuables. Or after an interaction with that rude painting.

Alternate possibility is that Taylor happens to look just enough like some other Black family member. From a branch that ended up moving to the United States/MACUSA.
 
Ok that's fair and I understand about the Dumbledore point, yeah he probably would want Harry in the blood wards and it might be just a bit too "manipulative! Dumbles". I'm glad my idea is fueling your muse. Heck you might be able to butterfly Dumbledore getting cursed away as well.
ooooophh now that is a hella tall order. keep feeding my muse ideas by all means but..... I don't think that's likely. Dumbles kept things close to the chest as a default he didn't even start sharing the pertinent bits until he was dying. and even then he handed them out one useless drip of info at a time over the course of... weeks? months? hell the dumb fucking scavenger hunt should never have happened. that was like loading the deck in the DE's favor. Taylor is going to be so very unimpressed with the teaching staff it's not even funny comparisons to Winslow are going to be the default.

Well one way of having Taylor find the locket horcrux, is to have her absolutely terrify Kreature, with it slipping out in a somewhat unrelated happening. Like securing the valuables. Or after an interaction with that rude painting.

Alternate possibility is that Taylor happens to look just enough like some other Black family member. From a branch that ended up moving to the United States/MACUSA.
huh.... not sure about the first few bits but the looking like a black thing... hmm that is a tempting thought though a bit of a stretch.
 
Well one way of having Taylor find the locket horcrux, is to have her absolutely terrify Kreature, with it slipping out in a somewhat unrelated happening. Like securing the valuables. Or after an interaction with that rude painting.

Alternate possibility is that Taylor happens to look just enough like some other Black family member. From a branch that ended up moving to the United States/MACUSA.
I really find this a stretch since as far as I remember Krecher is magically bound to the black family. The idea that he would not know on sight who he needs to serve via magical bs is unlikely.
 
ooooophh now that is a hella tall order. keep feeding my muse ideas by all means but..... I don't think that's likely. Dumbles kept things close to the chest as a default he didn't even start sharing the pertinent bits until he was dying. and even then he handed them out one useless drip of info at a time over the course of... weeks? months? hell the dumb fucking scavenger hunt should never have happened. that was like loading the deck in the DE's favor. Taylor is going to be so very unimpressed with the teaching staff it's not even funny comparisons to Winslow are going to be the default.

True, but you've already got the start of Harry and Taylor getting real answers about the Horcruxes already written. Him opening up when confronted about it, by an angry teenage wife who is not going to put up with any bullshit no less, is the sort of thing I see a reasonable Dumbledore doing. Heck he'd very probably want her along on the journey to the ring solely because she can find things through illusions or in hidden spaces very easily and without much personal danger with her ability to use bugs as an intermediary. If you're writing a prefty intelligent but maybe not an out of the box thinking Dumbledore it's what I'd see him doing.
 
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True, but you've already got the start of Harry and Taylor getting real answers about the Horcruxes already written. Him opening up when confronted about it, by an angry teenage wife who is not going to put up with any bullshit no less, is the sort of thing I see a reasonable Dumbledore doing. Heck he'd very probably want her along on the journey to the ring solely because she can find things through illusions or in hidden spaces very easily and without much personal danger with her ability to use bugs as an intermediary.
.... huh... you know what I said about feeding my muse? Good work. keep it up please and thank you.
 
I really find this a stretch since as far as I remember Krecher is magically bound to the black family. The idea that he would not know on sight who he needs to serve via magical bs is unlikely.
I was more thinking that it was a vague look alike situation, catching him off guard a bit. Plus the official story that they've given is that Taylor got cast out of an unnamed family, magically.

With the likely result in that Taylor isn't actually thought to be a Black by the end of it. (Maybe it ended upbeing just the hairstyle she had ended up matching, or a few other features.)
 
.... huh... you know what I said about feeding my muse? Good work. keep it up please and thank you.

Feel free to use me as a sounding board via DM any time, though I can't promise I'll always respond in a very prompt fashion. Other thoughts I have is that Taylor would very likely take in Dobby and Winky as well, allies who can teleport, use magic, and be invisible? She'd snatch them up in a heartbeat. Harry making an offhand comment about Kreacher not being as helpful as Dobby would be an excellent way to introduce them. Maybe even be a way to eventually introduce the Locket horcrux. Her wanting to take her place as the new "Lady Black" and earning his trust and service is one way I could see Kreacher circumventing the orders Regulus gave him before dying. Taylor would want to try to get Kreacher on her side before writing him off as a waste of time, and appealing to Kreacher's loyalty to the House of Black is absolutely something she'd do. That further feeding into Taylor and Harry confronting Dumbledore about the Horcruxes would be probable.

Hell Kreacher would probably be ecstatic to have someone like Taylor brought into the House of Black via Marriage. She thinks in very much the sort of ruthless Slytherin mentality that the Blacks loved.
 
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I was more thinking that it was a vague look alike situation, catching him off guard a bit. Plus the official story that they've given is that Taylor got cast out of an unnamed family, magically.

With the likely result in that Taylor isn't actually thought to be a Black by the end of it. (Maybe it ended upbeing just the hairstyle she had ended up matching, or a few other features.)
Problem with her being mistaken for a branch of the blacks is that they intermarried with nearly everyone in Britain to begin with. If just being related to the Blacks was enough, he would happily be serving nearly every pureblood that Harry was friendly with. Krecher would wait and see how Taylor treats him before committing cause he is not an idiot.
 
Lucky me I'll probably need to re read 6… on the other hand maybe I'll just go digging through my favorites list for HP fics


Dude… you are a legend. Sadly now I have to go with my other version and it's going to need some serious tweaking, but I really do appreciate this and you are a Legend.
Why? If the questioning is an issue, simply have Dumbledore forget it because of the stuff that has happened
 
Why? If the questioning is an issue, simply have Dumbledore forget it because of the stuff that has happened
It's not an issue. It's a matter of the chain of events. Where their first meeting happens dictates a lot of things. If they met at Hogwarts and Kreacher wasn't an issue the focus would be solely on the marriage and Taylor and how that effects dumbles plans. Homefield advantage so to speak. If it's at # 12 that's more neutral and the reason he's there is likely order related which allows taylor to drag the conversation towards the resistance movement. If instead as I'm now thinking it takes place at the Dursley's and kreacher is the focus Taylor will likely keep her thoughts to herself out of respect for Harry's grief and the confrontation gets punted over to the next chapter.

I tend to think of writing as a chain of dominoes. You can't force the conversation to go a certain way without breaking character so you have to let things flow how they want to. And everything builds into which domino falls next. Even if that means I don't get the conversation to go the way I wanted I have to roll with it because to do otherwise is to break character.
 

I do want to point out that there is a fourth option of Taylor and Dumbledore meeting for the first time at Gringotts. Her being Harry's new spouse might be enough to have Taylor get a mail owl from them informing them both of the upcoming Reading of the Will, which might conveniently be scheduled for the next evening in the plot. I could see Goblins being tricksy and getting Harry's attention that way. Also I could see magic viewing Taylor as being "keyed" into the Fidelius via the marriage which would potentially allow the next stop to be at Grimmauld. I don't think she'd be ok with Harry and her going back to the Dursleys at all. A thoroughly abusive home? No she'd freak out and want to murder them within a few minutes, she'd probably push to go anywhere but there.
 
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I do want to point out that there is a fourth option of Taylor and Dumbledore meeting for the first time at Gringotts. Her being Harry's new spouse might be enough to have Taylor get a mail owl from them informing them both of the upcoming Reading of the Will, which might conveniently be scheduled for the next evening in the plot. I could see Goblins being tricksy and getting Harry's attention that way. Also I could see magic viewing Taylor as being "keyed" into the Fidelius via the marriage which would potentially allow the next stop to be at Grimmauld. I don't think she'd be ok with Harry and her going back to the Dursleys at all. A thoroughly abusive home? No she'd freak out and want to murder them within a few minutes, she'd probably push to go anywhere but there.
Good thoughts and good points but Harry hadn't given details of his life with the Dursley's. Taylor's just running off intuition and assumption at this point. Taylor would not murder petty civilians even if they are guilty of child abuse. And possibly most important of all Taylor wanting to make the Dursley's pay for all they've done is hardly a bad thing in my mind. Good for the developing camaraderie.
 
Good thoughts and good points but Harry hadn't given details of his life with the Dursley's. Taylor's just running off intuition and assumption at this point. Taylor would not murder petty civilians even if they are guilty of child abuse. And possibly most important of all Taylor wanting to make the Dursley's pay for all they've done is hardly a bad thing in my mind. Good for the developing camaraderie.

True, it was more exaggeration than me thinking she'd go straight to murder, but she'd not put up with the bullshit the Dursley's are likely to throw her way very much. I foresee many termite and roach infestations occurring soon. Also I just saw Taylor wanting an itinerary of what to expect once they got back in Britain before ever leaving Vegas, which would segue into being told she'd be going with Harry to the Dursleys and very likely noticing that Harry wasn't exactly thrilled with that. Which would lead to him apologizing in advance for the very likely verbal abuse she should expect and things escalating (pun very much intended) from there. But if you want to run it a different way that's fine.
 
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True, it was more exaggeration than me thinking she'd go straight to murder, but she'd not put up with the bullshit the Dursley's are likely to throw her way very much. I foresee many termite and roach infestations occurring soon. Also I just saw Taylor wanting an itinerary of what to expect once they got back in Britain before ever leaving Vegas, which would segue into being told she'd be going with Harry to the Dursleys and very likely noticing that Harry wasn't exactly thrilled with that. Which would lead to him apologizing in advance for the very likely verbal abuse she should expect and things escalating (pun very much intended) from there. But if you want to run it a different way that's fine.
Hmmm thoughts to think and so many ways to play things. Not sire just yet. I do not want to slow down because I want to keep riding this rush but slowing down means time to think and debate options. Hmmm
 
Hmmm thoughts to think and so many ways to play things. Not sire just yet. I do not want to slow down because I want to keep riding this rush but slowing down means time to think and debate options. Hmmm

You could just do quick outlines to play out various options to see which works best for you, but do whatever works best for you. Though I will say I don't see Taylor and Dumbledore meeting within the first 24 hours of her arrival in Britain if it's anywhere, but Gringotts. Dumbledore is a fairly experienced educator he's probably well aware of when to introduce himself to someone who might be very overwhelmed by everything new. Sure Taylor is an unknown but even he'd give her a day to adapt to Britain and her newfound marriage. If only to observe her from a distance. Him being in the observation room next to the interview area we saw in this last chapter would be logical.
 
But the important part is Taylor being an OCP and rampaging through some Death Eaters. Death Eaters, meet Skitter. You will have nightmares about her for the rest of your lives and not even the Dark Lord's personal attention with the cruciatus curse will make you more scared of him than her. The Dark Lord will just hurt you. Skitter will make you wish for the cruciatus just to make the crawling stop.
 
One last thought I have before I go to sleep for the night @Fencer, but seriously consider butterflying away Amelia Bones being killed during this summer before the 6th Year. Having a nearly blank slate character that is known to be stern but fair and competent around that works in law enforcement would be highly beneficial to this story I think. It was a thought that occurred to me right before I decided to head to bed, and I figured it's worth mentioning now before you write any more chapters just yet and I might've forgotten when I fall asleep. Her being around for that interview in the Observation room also makes a lot of sense. Hell it makes more sense than Dumbledore being there.
 
There are two interactions I'm really looking forward to. Taylor meeting Luna, who is going to push ALL sorts of "must protect with extreme prejudice" buttons. And Taylor meeting Ginny. Between her likely going off on the man-stealer and being a redhead, it's gonna be messy.
 
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