Who was the better QM?

  • Astra Myst

    Votes: 23 19.2%
  • SVS

    Votes: 97 80.8%

  • Total voters
    120
[x] Yes
-[x] (thoughts) Even if you don't deserve Madoka's friendship... Things are so strange, this time around. You think that perhaps, just maybe, you can protect Madoka better as a friend than as a stranger. And- and that's what matters, isn't it?
 
[x] No...yes...maybe? I don't know...
-[x] You're thrown for a loop, the timeline has made you hope again once more, but the emotion is so foreign by you don't know how to parse it. Revert to moemura while you sort out your feeling. It's super effective.
 
Article 1 - Oh shit, please don't tell me I have to do a PMMM/Digimon crossover when this is done. I'd much rather do the Pokemon Quest I've been contemplating.

[x] No...yes...maybe? I don't know...
-[x] You're thrown for a loop, the timeline has made you hope again once more, but the emotion is so foreign by you don't know how to parse it. Revert to moemura while you sort out your feeling. It's super effective.
Article 2 - Double oh shit, welcome aboard new guy. We're Mr. Kotomine Kyubey's Wild Ride, and we hope you enjoy your stay.

Article 3 - Triple oh shit, I think I can actually get one more post out before I have to do the stuff I said I'd be busy with today. Lemme get on that real quick.
 
Day 2 Chapter 5
[x] Yes
-[x] (thoughts) Even if you don't deserve Madoka's friendship... Things are so strange, this time around. You think that perhaps, just maybe, you can protect Madoka better as a friend than as a stranger. And- and that's what matters, isn't it?
[x] No...yes...maybe? I don't know...
-[x] You're thrown for a loop, the timeline has made you hope again once more, but the emotion is so foreign by you don't know how to parse it. Revert to moemura while you sort out your feeling.



"If you'd like, I'd be happy to be your friend."

You don't know how to respond to that. You should know how to respond; it's the same question she's asked you for so many, many loops that it's one you should be able to answer the same way you always have. But, this timeline is so abnormal, so strange... And so dangerous. Witches are stronger, you were unable to kill Mikuni Oriko and Kure Kirika, and now strange people called servants have materialized to fight alongside the puella magi of this city. This time, at least, it may be easier to keep Madoka safe if you remain close to her.

This feeling inside your chest... Hope... It hurts; it hurts so much because you remember how much worse it feels when that hope is inevitably crushed by Walpurgisnacht. You've given up hoping so long ago, because hope doesn't bring results. You don't know how to react to this, to process this and comprehend what it would mean to even have hope anymore...

You don't deserve to feel this hope.

It takes every ounce of your willpower to avoid breaking down and crying, to avoid reverting to that weak little girl you started life as, right there in the hall. But you can't; you know you can't. You have to stay strong. Stay strong for Madoka. She's the only one that matters.

You don't matter.

"I..." The word falters as it clears your lips, and the words to follow are no less lacking in their surety. "I don't know. I... I think I would like to say yes, but I barely know you." That isn't true.

"Oh, well that's easy! Why don't you sit with me at lunch? We can talk and get to know each other better." Madoka... How can she be so oblivious, so incapable of seeing how unworthy you are of her kindness? Why does she insist on treating you like you matter?

That is why you love her.


"I'm sure Sayaka-chan and Hitomi-chan would love to be your friends, too."

The very first thing you do in each timeline is heal your heart with magic. The medicine the nurse gives you has no effect. She doesn't need to know that. You take it anyway. Madoka watches you, shuffling awkwardly as she awaits your answer. She's so cute.

And you are so hideous.

Do you sit with Madoka and her friends at lunch?
[ ] Yes. You can catch up with Archer after lunch
[ ] Yes, but only after you've caught up with Archer
[ ] No. You need to catch up with Archer and begin planning before you can do anything else
?
 
[x] Yes, but only after you've caught up with Archer

I definitely feel like I want to add one of my 'subvote full of Homu-thoughts' things to this, but I've got to run off and do stuff shortly and I can't quite think of how to phrase it without time to think it through.
 
Day 2 Chapter 6
[x] Yes, but only after you've caught up with Archer



"Oh, well that's easy! Why don't you sit with me at lunch? We can talk and get to know each other better. I'm sure Sayaka-chan and Hitomi-chan would love to be your friends, too."

You contemplate your response as the nurse gives you your medicine. You take it, knowing full well that it won't do anything. Madoka fidgets as she waits for your reply. She's so cute. You wish this were an earlier timeline, one in which the two of you were close enough that you could feel comfortable giving voice to your love for her.

How could she ever love you?

"... I would appreciate that," you say, heart soaring at the smile on her face. You can sense that Archer has been around the campus. You need a status update from him in case he has learned anything of the servant you sensed earlier. "However, there is something else I need to take care of first. I'll only be a moment; could you save a seat for me?"

"Sure, that's not a problem, Akemi-san."

"I... Homura is fine."

"Oh, okay. Homura-chan, let's do our best to become friends!"

You aren't sure where else you can go to commune with Archer in private, so you head to one of the bathrooms on the upper level of the main building, one which you know will be unoccupied at this hour. You close the door behind you, and you can barely restrain yourself from choking on your pathetic tears.

"Madoka... Why? Why can't I ever keep you safe? It's... It's all my fault... It's always been my fault... If you and Tomoe-san hadn't been focused on keeping me safe, then... Then..." The rest of your words make no sense, and you can barely hear them escaping your mouth.

"I take it your day hasn't been going so well, miss Akemi. Care to talk about it?"

How long has Archer been there? For how long has he been privy to the sight of just how weak and pathetic and worthless you are? You take a deep breath inward and turn on the faucet, splashing cold water on your face in an attempt to hide your tears from your servant. "Archer, status report, now."

"All right, all right, I can take a hint." As helpful as he may be in battle, you can't help but find his sharp tongue to be quite grating. "I made contact earlier with the servant on the roof. It's Caster; he's an incredibly strong servant, possibly the strongest. And he's willing to lend his assistance, as long as we can secure the alliance of his master. Additionally, I've informed him of Lancer's movements, and he doesn't think that his master will get in the way us of eliminating their block."

"That's good to hear. Is there anything else?"

"A couple things, yes. I've been thinking about the girls Lancer murdered last night, and I have reason to believe they were all targeted because they possessed the capacity to become another master. Assuming your guesses about the masters of Caster and the unknown fourth servant are correct, then I believe it would be smart to keep an especially close eye on girls who might be potential puella magi candidates."

Madoka... This is what you expected to happen when you were unable to terminate Mikuni Oriko and Kure Kirika. Last time, you remember, it was to draw the Incubator's attentions away from Madoka, in order to kill her before she could become a puellla magi. This time, now that servants have been thrown into the mix, her intentions might be more destructive than before. Or perhaps not; perhaps the elimination of potential masters - and thus, potential threats to the realization of her goal - may just be a welcome bonus to her, with her original objective remaining unchanged.

"Furthermore, Caster was kind enough to give me some intel on what the future may hold. He said, 'the witch sleeping under the Brocken will awaken and turn the world to ash. And, if that girl is allowed to wish on her soul, there will be salvation, but only for a day, before it's snuffed out by darkness.' If there's anything beyond that, he was unable to say. Do you have any idea what that could mean?"

So... Tomoe Mami - and you are almost positive that it is Tomoe Mami - has summoned a servant who is also gifted with the power of precognition. They will make a useful ally in the fight against Mikuni Oriko and Lancer. Tomoe Mami less so, if Archer's own offensive power is anything to go by.

"I know exactly what Caster is referring to, but this is neither the time nor the place to have that discussion."

"You're right, you should get going. I heard you've got a lunch date with the pink-haired girl in your class. You probably shouldn't keep her waiting."

Archer... He's got some nerve, talking about Madoka like that. You say nothing, exiting the bathroom and leaving Archer to vanish in thin motes of gold.

True to her word, Madoka has saved you a seat at the table with Miki Sayaka and Shizuki Hitomi. You don't deserve this, but if it will further the goal of keeping Madoka safe, then that doesn't matter.

Only Madoka matters.

"Oh, Homura-chan!" "Hey, transfer student!" "Good afternoon, Akemi-san" They all interrupt their previous conversation to greet you in their own way, clearly not bothered in the slightest at having to share their seats with someone like you. To be polite, you fake a smile as you take the empty seat next to Shizuki Hitomi. You wonder if they realize just how hollow that smile is.

Just how hollow you are.

Be sociable!
[ ] Talk to
-[ ] Madoka
-[ ] Sayaka
-[ ] Hitomi
[ ] About (write-in)
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NEW
Major characters unlocked!
Kaname Madoka - Where can I begin? To Homura, Madoka is the alpha, the omega, her sole reason to exist, and her only love. Madoka unfortunately thinks little of herself, and though she will always want to, she cannot be allowed to contract under any circumstance.
Miki Sayaka - The tomboyish and energetic best friend of Madoka. Sayaka is brash and headstrong, but with a heart as large as the greater Tokyo metropolitan area. Be careful though- Sayaka desperately wants to be a hero of justice, a desire which brings with it its own set of risks.

Minor character unlocked!
Shizuki Hitomi - A close friend of Madoka's and potential love rival to Sayaka over the heart of a certain violinist.
 
I... am not touching those social options. On account of me unable to hold a conversation without shared interest
 
What a coincidence! So do I, except I will never make them and when I do the result is... this

I can stop at any time if you're unsatisfied with my work. Sometimes, being the muse is just as important a part to play as being the creator. I'm enjoying what I'm doing so far, but it isn't something I would have ever done on my own without finding the desire to save your work from the trash bin.
 
I can stop at any time if you're unsatisfied with my work. Sometimes, being the muse is just as important a part to play as being the creator. I'm enjoying what I'm doing so far, but it isn't something I would have ever done on my own without finding the desire to save your work from the trash bin.

Oh no, I am very satisfied with this. See the ideas in my head are never complete and half-baked at best. And when I do make them, It is a completely radioactive waste that melts the trash bin.
 
Oh no, I am very satisfied with this. See the ideas in my head are never complete and half-baked at best. And when I do make them, It is a completely radioactive waste that melts the trash bin.

That's how a lot of my ideas go as well. I knew I wanted to do a Homura quest and a Fate quest, but it never crossed my mind to do them in the same go. Actually, the Fate quest I wanted to do wouldn't have looked remotely like what we've got now, because I wanted to do a period piece- Mordred Quest, set in 5th century Britain with the goal of obtaining Chichue's love and the throne of Camelot without starting a rebellion.

The Pokemon quest I want to do was a half-baked idea until I decided to hammer out the battle mechanics and play it as though you were playing a written transcription of one of the games. I swear, I really will get to it one of these days.

Even this started out as me just wanting to stretch my muscles and get in the swing of QMing before I tried one of my own ideas. Going in, I only had the vaguest idea of how I wanted it to turn out, and for maybe the first day or two until I hammered out a servant list and a more detailed map of the possible major plot points I was pretty much winging it. Then it hit me how everything had to come together, and to be honest I'm still fine-tuning things as I find new ways I can make it better. Heck, just earlier today I reevaluated the master/servant list and realized that in my haste to compile a full roster of seven I had missed a golden opportunity, so that's been corrected.

The point is, all ideas start life as half-baked ones, and it's only through putting in the requisite time and effort do you see them come to fruition. If you only rush your ideas, of course they'll be radioactive waste.
 
So our servant-master roster is being rearranged. Well, @mCooperative. Get to speculating, we're going to be for a while
 
So our servant-master roster is being rearranged. Well, @mCooperative. Get to speculating, we're going to be for a while
Not the entire roster. Just the single pair that I needed to change in order to make way for what would be in the Madoka universe a wonderful opportunity. Still, I invite speculation as to what will be changed.

By the way is it possible to have archer train Homura to raise her level and/or stats?
You'll never know until you try. The next time we're in a conversation with Archer, suggest that she ask him about it as a [ ] write-in.

[X] Madoka
[X] Anime
I was wondering when you'd show up.
Indeed. Good to have you back, Jaune my boy.

And @Astra Myst, your vote is entirely unfair simply due to the massive discrepancy in the number of quest posts we've both made. Biases are likely going to be heavily swung on numbers alone, if I know the way people usually think.
 
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