Who was the better QM?

  • Astra Myst

    Votes: 23 19.2%
  • SVS

    Votes: 97 80.8%

  • Total voters
    120
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
--[X] Ask if she enjoyed the outing. Sit as close to Madoka as she will let her.
[X] Don't talk to anyone...unless they talk to you first.
-[X] But listen in on their conversations
--[X] Sayaka & Kyoko give their compliments to the chef at the same time unintentionally. Hitomi follows up with a polite 'thank you for the food', which urges everyone who hasn't already to do so as well. Mami comments on Sayaka & Kyoko's love of Archer's food despite their differences. Madoka talks to the others about the possibility of another outing in a week or two. Sayaka jokes about the two lovebirds at the table, and Kyoko gets in on the joke.



@Enetious I made a slight change to your vote so that we don't appear rude, if someone else takes the initiative to talk to Homura.
 
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
--[X] Ask if she enjoyed the outing. Sit as close to Madoka as she will let her.
[X] Don't talk to anyone...unless they talk to you first.
-[X] But listen in on their conversations
--[X] Sayaka & Kyoko give their compliments to the chef at the same time unintentionally. Hitomi follows up with a polite 'thank you for the food', which urges everyone who hasn't already to do so as well. Mami comments on Sayaka & Kyoko's love of Archer's food despite their differences. Madoka talks to the others about the possibility of another outing in a week or two. Sayaka jokes about the two lovebirds at the table, and Kyoko gets in on the joke.
 
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
--[X] Ask if she enjoyed the outing. Sit as close to Madoka as she will let her.
[X] Don't talk to anyone...unless they talk to you first.
-[X] But listen in on their conversations
--[X] Sayaka & Kyoko give their compliments to the chef at the same time unintentionally. Hitomi follows up with a polite 'thank you for the food', which urges everyone who hasn't already to do so as well. Mami comments on Sayaka & Kyoko's love of Archer's food despite their differences. Madoka talks to the others about the possibility of another outing in a week or two. Sayaka jokes about the two lovebirds at the table, and Kyoko gets in on the joke.
 
Day 12 Chapter 11
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
--[X] Ask if she enjoyed the outing. Sit as close to Madoka as she will let her.
[X] Don't talk to anyone...unless they talk to you first.
-[X] But listen in on their conversations
--[X] Sayaka & Kyoko give their compliments to the chef at the same time unintentionally. Hitomi follows up with a polite 'thank you for the food', which urges everyone who hasn't already to do so as well. Mami comments on Sayaka & Kyoko's love of Archer's food despite their differences. Madoka talks to the others about the possibility of another outing in a week or two. Sayaka jokes about the two lovebirds at the table, and Kyoko gets in on the joke.



You take a seat beside Madoka, and immediately she scoots over to your side until the two of you are practically touching. Sayaka and Hitomi sit on the couch directly adjacent to you, Kyouko kicks up her feet and practically steals the entirety of the couch directly across from you, and Tomoe-san chooses to pull one of the small green ottomans over to where everyone else is sitting before seating herself on that.

You turn to Madoka, asking her "Did you have fun today?"

Madoka nods enthusiastically. "I had a lot of fun today, Homura-chan! Thank you for coming with us!" Her eyes dart to a certain redhead and a certain bluenette, and she adds "It was a little scary when Kyouko-chan punched Sayaka-chan, but I'm glad everything worked out in the end."

"Yeah... Again, Kyouko, I'm really sorry about what I said." Sayaka rubs at her bruised jaw, massaging the swelling area with an ice pack Archer had given her. "But geez, you really pack a punch. Where'd you learn to hit like that?"

"Eh, I pick things up here an' there; nothing ta get yerself worked up about," Kyouko responds. She stretches her limbs out, further sprawling her form over your couch. You pay special attention as she massages her feet against the cushions of your couch, adding "Man, it feels great ta have socks again that're more sock than hole. Yer a lifesaver, ya know that spooky?"

"Yes, I'm aware." ... "The morning of May first. You owe me. Don't forget it."

"Geez, alright, I get it."


"Alright, eat it while it's hot!" Archer announces his presence with three large bowls balanced in his grasp. "I'll bring the other three out in just a second. Let me know if anyone needs anything else." You stare at the dishes Archer has brought in; you recognize the rice, and the main dish is clearly a curry of some sort, with thick chunks of meat and potatoes drizzled in a dark orange-coloured sauce whose intense flavour you can smell even from several paces away, but it's distinctly different from traditional Japanese curries. It smells... Exotic, would probably be the best way to describe it.

Archer returns with the other three bowls and sets them down just as he did the previous three. "So... What kind of curry is this?" Sayaka asks, staring at the dish as she prods at a chunk of meat with her spoon. "It's got this really strong... Almost, exotic, kind of smell to it. I've never seen anything like it before in my life."

"Who cares what it is, as long as it's good," Kyouko shoots back, hungrily eying her own bowl.

"It's lamb vindaloo... Or at least, that's what it would be if I hadn't been forced to settle for beef on account of lamb being nonexistent in this city. I spent some time in the Middle East and happened to pick up a few of their recipes, and I just thought you girls might like to try something you've probably never had before."

"Well, it certainly has a strong scent to it," Hitomi adds. "But I'm sure that it'll taste just fine, since you prepared it."

"Trying to butter up mister Archer, are we?" Sayaka winks naughtily at Hitomi "How scandalous; you and Kyousuke aren't even official yet and you're already putting the moves on another man." Kyouko gives a raucous laugh as Hitomi tries to hide the red cabbage that her face has become.

"Well, I ain't one ta complain about free food," Kyouko proclaims, spooning up a large portion of meat and rice, practically salivating as she brings it to her mouth. "Rub a dub dub thanks fer the grub, an' all that jazz." The moment her lips close around the spoon, you can see it in her eyes. "Fuck. I think I just died an' went ta heaven."

"You said it," Sayaka adds, withdrawing her own spoon from her mouth, with not a single spec left on it. "This is amazing."

Tomoe-san tries and fails to suppress a giggle. "What's so funny?" Kyouko asks.

"It's just that, you and Miki-san have been at each others' throats almost the entire day, and yet you're both so alike when it comes to Archer-san's food." She brings the spoon up to her mouth, hesitantly letting the complex flavours mesh together in her mouth before proclaiming "My, that's certainly something else."

"It really is, isn't it?" Hitomi chimes in. "Archer-san, thank you for the meal; it's delicious."

"Thank you so much!" Madoka adds, and you nod your head as well.

"Well, I'm glad you girls are all enjoying yourselves. There's still some left over if anyone wants seconds, or wants to take some home." The hands of Sayaka and Kyouko shoot up straightaways, and Archer walks away chuckling. "I should have figured you two would be the first to take me up on that."

"Today was really fun," Madoka says, in between those moments that she isn't excitedly devouring her meal. "We should all get together like this next weekend."

You nod your head, and your fingers find their way into hers when Madoka puts down her empty bowl. "I wouldn't mind spending next Sunday out with everyone," you add.

"Sorry, but I'm going to be too busy birdwatching to join you," Sayaka says. Birdwatching? Surely you misheard her. Miki Sayaka has never once in any timeline displayed an interest in birdwatching. It seems that you aren't the only one to be confused.

"Birdwatching?" Hitomi asks, looking just as confused as you. "Sayaka-san, since when did you enjoy birdwatching?"

"Since our little Madoka got herself a girlfriend, duh." Sayaka's explanation doesn't add up, and Hitomi retains her quizzical stare. Sayaka rolls her eyes, adding "Birdwatching? Because they're lovebirds, get it?"

Kyouko laughs, saying "Hey you got a second pair'a 'nocs I can borrow? 'Cuz I'd like to start 'birdwatchin'' myself."

The stares directed at Sayaka and Kyouko from Madoka, Hitomi, Tomoe-san, and yourself, are more than enough to silence the pair. Well, at least they aren't currently at each others' throats; that's an improvement.

[ ] Wat do?
 
[X] Finish eating with everyone. Make sure they exchanged contact info in case Kyoko wants to join in on another outing.
-[X] If it is just about dusk, ask if anyone wants to make it a sleepover.
-[X] If there is still time in the day, wait until everyone says their goodbyes before contacting Mami telepathically about spending some time coordinating their fighting styles if she's up for it.

Wasn't clear about the time, so I added a couple paths in this plan.
 
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[X] Finish eating with everyone. Make sure they exchanged contact info in case Kyoko wants to join in on another outing.
-[X] If it is just about dusk, ask if anyone wants to make it a sleepover.
-[X] If there is still time in the day, wait until everyone says their goodbyes before contacting Mami telepathically about spending some time coordinating their fighting styles if she's up for it.

Thanks for the help, Enetious.
 
[X] Finish eating with everyone. Make sure they exchanged contact info in case Kyoko wants to join in on another outing.
-[X] If it is just about dusk, ask if anyone wants to make it a sleepover.
-[X] If there is still time in the day, wait until everyone says their goodbyes before contacting Mami telepathically about spending some time coordinating their fighting styles if she's up for it.

I feel like we're stretching things with the sleepover, but eh.
 
Day 12 Chapter 12
[X] Finish eating with everyone. Make sure they exchanged contact info in case Kyoko wants to join in on another outing.
-[X] If it is just about dusk, ask if anyone wants to make it a sleepover.
-[X] If there is still time in the day, wait until everyone says their goodbyes before contacting Mami telepathically about spending some time coordinating their fighting styles if she's up for it.



Dinner has grown cold by the time everyone has finished chatting, yet the six of you still finish all you were given. Satisfied, you set your emptied bowl down among the others. Archer comes to collect the dirty dishes a few moments later, looking to Sayaka and Kyouko as he says "There's some leftovers in the fridge if either of you want it." The two eagerly nod their heads as Archer leaves with the dirty dishes.

"Man, I'm stuffed!" Sayaka exclaims, almost causing Hitomi to fall from her seat as her stretching encroaches upon Hitomi's personal space.

"You said it blueberry." Kyouko licks her lips clean of any last specs of food, returning to her reclined position. "I tell ya spooky, that man can cook. You really lucked out with him, ya know?" Awkward stares from Sayaka and Hitomi make their way to Kyouko, and Madoka holds you just a little bit tighter. Kyouko, sensing their change in demeanor towards her, responds with "What?"

Knowing what happened to her family, you aren't going to try attempting to one-up her, and so you say nothing. Madoka, Sayaka, and Hitomi follow your lead, leaving Kyouko to shrug their stares off. "Fine, whatever, see if I ever try ta compliment you again."

The six of you lounge in silence in the comfort of your living room for what feels like an eternity, but a quick check of the time reveals that only fifteen minutes have gone by since Archer came around to collect the dishes. You even note that you can no longer hear the sound of running water coming from the kitchen, or the soft scraping of his slippers against the floor. In silence, you ponder Kyouko's words.

Are you truly lucky to have met Archer in this timeline?

True, he has been uniquely helpful in combating the many new challenges that have emerged in this timeline, but all of those seem to be tied to his appearance here, and you wonder whether any of them would have happened without him. He can cook, and clean, and it is reassuring to once again have a constant father-figure present in your life, but were those things truly things that you needed? You aren't sure. But as you look around the room, seeing yourself surrounded by people you never would have imagined would want to spend their time with you, you are sure of one thing; this, all of this, was all because he urged you to be proactive in establishing alliances on that first night together.

Madoka's giggling snaps you out of your contemplating, and you turn to see her and Kyouko playing with Amy. That stubborn, stupid cat; if only the first Madoka hadn't thrown away her soul to save it, she would not now be trapped by the unyielding chains of fate that now bind her. And yet, if she had done nothing to help another in need, would she still be the Madoka you know?

Would she still be the Madoka you love?

Kyouko is holding Amy up in the air, making a game of mimicking her facial expressions; but Madoka, upon seeing that you have returned to the land of the living, returns to your side. "She's so pretty, Homura-chan," she says, cuddling up close to you. "I wish I could have a kitty too, but papa's allergic."

You smile as you say "You're welcome to come play with her any time you want."

"Be careful Madoka, that's not the only reason Homura wants to invite you over," Sayaka says with a naughty face. Making kissy faces, the bluenette tries to say more, only for Hitomi to silence her. Thank you, Hitomi.

Hitomi checks the time on her phone, and stands, practically dragging Sayaka up with her. "Akemi-san, you and Archer-san have been wonderful hosts, as always, but it's getting late, and I'm afraid I must be going." With a passing glance in Sayaka's direction, she adds "And you should be going as well, Sayaka-san. We have school tomorrow."

Madoka, though still embarrassed by Sayaka's words, says "What if we all had a sleepover? Would that be alright, Homura-chan? Then they wouldn't have to go."

"A sleepover would be fine," you say, though Hitomi still shakes her head.

"As much as I wouldn't mind staying, I'm almost certain that my parents would say no. Tomorrow is a school day, and I've neglected to bring either a change of uniform or my school materials with me."

"Yeah, I'm pretty sure my mom would say the same thing," says Sayaka.

"And with my apartment being so much closer to the school than your own, as much as I would love to stay I simply wouldn't be able to," Tomoe-san adds.

Having been turned down by Hitomi, Sayaka, and Tomoe-san, Madoka then turns her attentions to Kyouko, who hasn't yet said anything. But when Madoka's adorable rose-coloured eyes turn themselves towards Kyouko, she responds "Actually... I was gonna walk home with Mami." Tomoe-san turns to Kyouko, with a mixture of shock and elation brightening her face. "What? Yer place is on my way. It's just less of a hassle than if I tried ta avoid ya."

Recognizing the potential emotional landmine that Kyouko has just stepped into, you interject, saying "In any case, if we are all to part ways now, perhaps those of us who haven't done so already would like to exchange contact information?" When Tomoe-san and Kyouko look your way, both of them confused, you add "That way, it will be easier to coordinate should we decide to get together again next Sunday."

Four pairs of heads bob, and Madoka, Sayaka, and Hitomi exchange numbers with Tomoe-san. Sayaka hesitates, before eventually deciding against asking to exchange numbers with Kyouko, leaving you and Madoka as the only ones to do so. Shortly after, the others file out one by one, leaving only you and Madoka behind. Sayaka and Kyouko took their share of the leftovers with them, leaving none behind, but that's fine with you. It was edible, and far above the food at the school's cafeteria, but of the meals Archer has cooked for you it ranks on the lower end of the scale.

You feel Madoka's hand brush against yours, and her fingers entwine with your own as the two of you sit together in your living room. "Today was a lot of fun, Homura-chan," she says, giving your hand a gentle squeeze. "I'm glad you were able to come with us."

You smile, and reciprocate Madoka's gesture as you say "So am I, Madoka."

 
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Do you still feel that way
Three years earlier...

It had been a week since Kyouko had stormed out of Mami's apartment, and as she kicked up a patch of snow on her way to... Wherever, it didn't matter to her where she was going anymore, she wondered what she might say were she and Mami ever to meet again. It was almost Christmas. This would be the first Christmas that Kyouko ever spent by herself. She'd never hear Papa recant the tale of Christ's birth on Christmas Eve, never have another hot chocolate made by Mama, never see Momo's face light up when she opened her presents... She held her arms close to her chest, trying to suppress her emotions.

It wasn't real. None of this felt real. She'd wake up soon and realize it was all just a bad dream, that Mama and Papa and Momo and Mami would be waiting for her, and it'd be Christmas morning, and everything would be alright.

Only, the stinging cold on her face told her that it wasn't just a dream. This was reality. Her family was dead, and it was all her fault. All her stupid fault. If she hadn't sold her soul to that little fucking bunnycat, if she hadn't tried to help, tried to help Papa put food on the table by making people listen to him... None of this would have happened if Sakura Kyouko hadn't tried to help.

"Sakura-san!" 'Great,' Kyouko thought, 'even the fucking wind is taunting me.' "Sakura-san!" Wait, no, that wasn't the wind. Kyouko turned, and there was Mami, standing there, looking like she had just run a marathon.

Suddenly, the blonde wrapped her arms around Kyouko's waist. "Sakura-san, I... I'm so sorry. I only just read in the paper what happened to your family. I've been looking everywhere for you. I'm... I"m so sorry. I shouldn't have yelled at you back then."

"No, it's..." Kyouko was at a loss for words, finally settling on a very unsatisfactory-sounding "It's okay."

"No, it's not okay. I should have been more accepting of you, especially after what happened. Please, Sakura-san, come..." That was when Mami happened to glance at Kyouko's Soul Gem. "Sakura-san, have you been remembering to cleanse your Soul Gem?"

Somewhat forcefully, Kyouko tears herself out of Mami's embrace, staring her down. "Actually, now that you're here, there's something I've been thinking about lately- So, you know how we've always focused on both the witch and their familiars? Well, I was thinking, maybe we could fight just the witch next time, and forget about the familiars?"

"Sakura-san, I don't think I understand. If we ignore the famliars, they could escape and eat people, and turn into witches themselves. We'd be doing a disservice to the community if we left them alive."

"Mami, listen; it's not our job to run around playing superhero. If we run around spending our magic magic on familiars that don't evn drop Grief Seeds, then we're just wasting our time, energy, and resources."

"Sakura-san, this isn't like you at all. You never used to talk like this."

"Yeah, well I never used to be without a family, either!" Kyouko violently thumbed towards herself "This is what happens when we try to stick our necks out for other people. You want to run around and waste your magic playing hero, be my guest. I'm done trying to waste my time helping people. They're nothing but a bunch of ungrateful pricks who will never appreciate what we do for them, so why even bother?"


At the time, Kyouko's mind had been clouded by sadness and rage, and she hadn't cared that she had drawn her spear on Mami. She hadn't cared that she had tried - had come so very close - to killing the only person left in the world who had stilled cared about her. But now, with the benefit of time behind her...

Kyouko was glad that no one else occupied the traincar in which she and Mami sat, or else the intense aura of awkwardness would have undoubtedly clued any onlookers in to the fact that something was off about the redhead and the blonde that sat beside one another in silence. She turned her head towards the window, watching the scenery of Downtown Mitakihara race by as thoughts turned inside her head.

"Sakura-san, do you..." Mami's words cut through the silence of the otherwise empty traincar, drawing Kyouko's attention towards the blonde. "Back then... You said that you loved me. Do you... Do you still feel that way?"

Did she? Kyouko was unsure. Perhaps, in some dusty, long-forgotten corner of her mind, she still longed for Mami's affection in a way that one friend just couldn't give to another. After all, how many times now could she have killed Mami, just today, but had chosen to stay her hand? That had to mean something, right? God wouldn't have suddenly put Mami back in her life for no good reason, would He?

In the end, Kyouko was being entirely truthful when she replied "I... I really don't know anymore."

The train came to a halt, and the doors slid open. Mami stood, saying "This is my stop. It was... It was nice to be able to spend today with you, Sakura-san. If you ever feel like talking, my door is always open to you."

The doors slid to a close behind Mami, leaving Kyouko in the traincar by herself. She sighed, staring up at the ceiling as the memories danced in her head once more.
 
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Day 13 Chapter 1
You stare at the ceiling, unable to fall asleep. There is a strong pain in your chest, and as you grasp for your heart, you feel something wet and sticky coating your hand. Pulling it back, you are horrified to see blood staining your palm, and your shirt. Your breathing increases, and a crimson spear wielded by a man in blue comes crashing through the ceiling. It is only thanks to the adrenaline pumping through your veins that you are able to dodge the incoming strike. You roll, stand, and steady yourself, but the spearman's next strike sends you running. You run, not thinking of where you are running so much as the fact that you need to run, but soon you can run no more. The azure-clad spearman is upon you, prepared to strike, to end your life.

But then, his blow is stopped, and you open your eyes...


You've backed yourself up against one of your couches. Safe in your living room, there is no sign of the spearman who had been so close to ending your life, nor of the golden-haired woman that had saved you. In her place stands Archer, looking over you with great concern in his eyes. "I heard screaming, and then I heard you running into the living room. Is everything alright?"

Your hand shoots to your chest, clutching at your racing heart as you attempt to compose your thoughts. "It was..." You blink, looking around the living room to make sure that this is real. "It was just a bad dream, that's all. I must have been sleepwalking."

"Do you want to talk about it?"

In previous timelines, the only thing you would ever dream about was Madoka, but ever since Archer entered your life, your dreams have taken on a much stranger, more unfamiliar tone. Places that you've never seen, an unfamiliar city, a hill covered in swords; and people that you've never met, a boy with red hair, a blonde woman in a blue dress; what are they? What does it all mean?

"Perhaps later," you reply, still hearing some shakiness in your voice as your body finally calms down and accepts the fact that this is reality, and that the images you saw had only been a dream.

"Well, whenever you feel like talking, I'll be here to listen," Archer replies, as he helps you to your feet. "Breakfast should be ready shortly. If she isn't already, you should go and wake Madoka."

"Right."

Do you
[ ] Tell Archer about your dream
[ ] Say nothing; just eat your breakfast and get on with the day
And, do you
[ ] Talk to Madoka over breakfast
-[ ] What do you talk about?​
[ ] Wait until you've met up with Sayaka and Hitomi before talking
-[ ] What do you talk about?
[ ] Other (write-in)
?





Monday, 28 March 2011

Major objectives:
Homura
- Stop Mikuni Oriko and Kure Kirika and defeat their servants Lancer and Berserker
- Track down and eliminate the servant Assassin before it can cause further harm
- Grow your social capital with Kaname Madoka, Miki Sayaka, Shizuki Hitomi, Tomoe Mami, and Sakura Kyouko
- Succeed in reconnecting Tomoe Mami with Sakura Kyouko in order to ensure Tomoe Mami's mental stability
- Prevent Kaname Madoka from contracting and becoming a puella magi
- Defeat the witch known as Walpurgisnacht

Archer
- Investigate, identify, and prevent the occurrence of the event that caused a fundamental force of this universe to be twice overwritten
- Protect your master from harm in this unusually dangerous loop
- Further your master's skills in magecraft, now that she's getting the hang of the fundamentals of Projection
- Acquire allies so you and your master stand a better chance of defeating Lancer, Berserker, and Assassin
 
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[X] Tell Archer about your dream

We should be able to trust Archer at least that much by now.

EDIT: Second part
[X] Talk to Madoka over breakfast
-[X] Subtly ask Madoka if she'd like to ask her anything in particular about her that she doesn't already know, or continue their interrupted dialogue from their date.
--[X] If she agrees first have Archer quickly scout out the immediate vicinity of the apartment as Kyuubey may be nearby. Then answer any question truthfully to the best of her ability.
--[X] If Madoka refuses or wants to get to know Homura in their day-to-day interactions, nod understandingly and get ready for classes with Madoka.
 
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There's a second part to that vote prompt, by the way; the stuff under the "And, do you" part. Got something for that as well?
I know. I want to vote to talk to Madoka because that's what Homura'd do, but I can't find a subject to talk about with her. I'll add a second part if I can come up with one or (more likely) someone else comes up with one.
 
[X] Tell Archer about your dream
[X] Talk to Madoka over breakfast
-[X] Subtly ask Madoka if she'd like to ask her anything in particular about her that she doesn't already know, or continue their interrupted dialogue from their date.
--[X] If she agrees first have Archer quickly scout out the immediate vicinity of the apartment as Kyuubey may be nearby. Then answer any question truthfully to the best of her ability.
--[X] If Madoka refuses or wants to get to know Homura in their day-to-day interactions, nod understandingly and get ready for classes with Madoka.

As good of a dialogue as any, I guess, since they both kinda shrugged off the topic of Madoka regaining memories of past timelines. May or may not blow up in our faces ¯\_(ツ)_/¯.
 
[X] Tell Archer about your dream
[X] Talk to Madoka over breakfast
-[X] Subtly ask Madoka if she'd like to ask her anything in particular about her that she doesn't already know, or continue their interrupted dialogue from their date.
--[X] If she agrees first have Archer quickly scout out the immediate vicinity of the apartment as Kyuubey may be nearby. Then answer any question truthfully to the best of her ability.
--[X] If Madoka refuses or wants to get to know Homura in their day-to-day interactions, nod understandingly and get ready for classes with Madoka.
 
Day 13 Chapter 2
[X] Tell Archer about your dream
[X] Talk to Madoka over breakfast
-[X] Subtly ask Madoka if she'd like to ask her anything in particular about her that she doesn't already know, or continue their interrupted dialogue from their date.
--[X] If she agrees first have Archer quickly scout out the immediate vicinity of the apartment as Kyuubey may be nearby. Then answer any question truthfully to the best of her ability.
--[X] If Madoka refuses or wants to get to know Homura in their day-to-day interactions, nod understandingly and get ready for classes with Madoka.



"Right," you say to Archer. He returns to the kitchen, while you make your way back to your bedroom where, hopefully, Madoka is still sleeping, undisturbed by your dream.

Unfortunately, any chance of Madoka remaining asleep is dashed when you see the state you left your room in. Your door is hanging loosely from its frame, with one of its hinges completely busted. You must have run through it in your haste to escape the blue spearman, and failed to notice the very real pain in your shoulder, confusing it for the imaginary pain you felt in the dream as you ran through a glass doorway and crunched your shoulder on the ground as you fell. In addition, your room looks like it was hit by a typhoon; everything is a mess, and you can only imagine how terribly you must have been flailing about as you tried to escape a death that was only imaginary.

And there, sitting on your bed with the blanket wrapped around her and looking completely terrified, is Madoka. As soon as she sees you with her tear-filled eyes, she leaps up and wraps her arms around you. "Homura-chan!" She cries, burying her head into your shoulder. "I was so scared! You were screaming and slamming into everything, and then you just took off running!"

You lean your head against her own, gently wrapping your arms around her in return. "Shh, it's okay Madoka; everything is okay. I was just sleepwalking through a bad dream, that's all."

You stay there for awhile, comforting Madoka as she cries for you, until the scent of food and Archer's call of "Homura! Madoka! Breakfast is ready!" cause you to leave your room for better pastures. Seeing its current state, you're dreading having to clean up your room later in the day.

You and Madoka sit down as Archer serves up his traditional western-style breakfast fare. As you eat, your thoughts turn once again to the images in your dream. Archer must have taken notice of your musings, as the first thing he says when he sits down is "Something on your mind?"

You nod, responding "I was thinking about my dream again."

Madoka scoots her chair just a little bit closer to yours at the mention of your dream, no doubt to ready herself should she feel the need arise to comfort you, and Archer again prompts the question "Do you want to talk about it?"

You nod. "I was lying down... I think I was on the floor, and my chest hurt, but it wasn't like the pain I've felt before when my heart gave out. It... It felt like I had been stabbed. Then a man in blue phased through the ceiling and started attacking me with a spear. I was barely able to dodge his attacks, and as soon as I had an opening, I ran as fast as I could, but it wasn't long before he had me cornered. I... I thought I was going to die, but then I was saved by a blonde woman wearing a blue dress... Then I woke up, and you were standing over me in the same exact position that she had been."

Archer is silent, but you can just barely see a tremble in his hand, clenching at his fork just a little bit tighter, and when he says "Maybe it's best if we have this conversation later. You and Madoka should finish eating soon if you want to make it to school on time." you know that he knows something he's not telling you. You'll press him for information later, but he does make a good point. You and Madoka should get moving if you don't want to be late.



"Do you always have strange dreams like that, Homura-chan?" Madoka asks, as the two of you walk along the path to school. You'll have to give Kaname Junko some sort of thank-you present for driving Madoka's school bag and uniform to your apartment, otherwise the two of you would definitely have been late.

"No, not always," you reply. "Most of the time, my dreams are... Relatively normal, I suppose you would say. A few nightmares, here and there-" always "-but generally my dreams aren't worth remarking on. It's only been recently that I've started having dreams like that. I'm not entirely sure why, or even what any of them mean. But it's nothing you should concern yourself with, Madoka."

Madoka is silent, staring at the ground as she contemplates your words. "I'm sorry, I know you're just worried about me. I shouldn't have brushed aside your concerns like that. If you'd like, I'll be more than happy to make it up to you. "Madoka face brightens, but she still looks at you with some confusion, so you clarify "You can ask me anything you'd like to know about me, and I'll answer it."

Madoka thinks for a moment, and her voice goes soft as she says "I know you said you don't like talking about... About it, but what's it like? Is it scary?"

Any question but that. The more you talk about it to her, the more it will be a thought in her head; and the more she thinks about it, the more likely it is that she actually will contract... Still, you promised that you would answer her question, and if nothing else you owe it to Madoka to be truthful with her. You take a few moments to look around, making sure that the Incubator is nowhere to be seen. When you are sure that the coast is clear, you say "Yes. It's very scary. But, it's not dying that scares me the most; it's making a mistake."

"Mistakes are... Very costly, in my line of work, and I couldn't tell you how many times I've seen someone so much better than myself... Fail, because they made a mistake. And, what scares me the most is that the people I care about will be the ones that have to suffer from my mistakes."

You feel the warmth of Madoka's hand as she squeezes your own, and she turns to you, saying "Don't worry, Homura-chan. I believe in you. I know you wouldn't ever let down the people you care about."

If only that were true.

Sayaka and Hitomi are already waiting as you and Madoka approach the big intersection before the bridge. Sayaka is waving enthusiastically, shouting "Hey Madoka! Homura! Good morning!" while Hitomi is giving a much less enthusiastic but still no less heartfelt wave. Seeing them, and seeing how close Madoka has grown to you in this timeline, you have to wonder; will you have the strength to try again when you inevitably fail this time?

Do you
[ ] Talk
-[ ] to Madoka
-[ ] to Sayaka
-[ ] to Hitomi
--[ ] about what? (write-in)
[ ] Don't talk, but instead
-[ ] ping Tomoe-san and
--[ ] talk about what? (write-in)
-[ ] ping Archer and
--[ ] talk about what? (write-in)
[ ] Other (write-in)
?



This perhaps went a little different from how I imagine you all were thinking it would. Archer rushed us out of the apartment, and so I had to move the dialogue to the walk to school instead of keeping it in the apartment.
 
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[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
-[X] to Sayaka
-[X] to Hitomi
--[X] About their thoughts on Kyoko, and when Sayaka inevitably insults or says bad things about her, ask her specifically for one thing she does like about her. If asked why Homura chose this line of dialogue, say she was worried for her since she's a girl that lives on her lonesome without many friends. Joke to Madoka telepathically that Kyoko & Sayaka have explosive chemistry for one another.
[X] Ping Tomoe-san and
-[X] Ask her if she wishes to reveal her nature as a Magical Girl to Madoka, Sayaka, & Hitomi, considering they're fine with Homura's status as one. If she doesn't know that they know of Homura's status, tell her. It would help lower suspicions of their extracurricular activities when coordinating against Mikuni's group.

Look at me, master of Homura's small talk /s. Anyways, added this dialogue to try to stabilize the KyokoSayaka bridge a bit, and wasn't sure what for Homura to talk about other than nothing at all.

EDIT: Kyoko no longer noted to be a magical girl. Added a DM to Mami.
 
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[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
-[X] to Sayaka
-[X] to Hitomi
--[X] About their thoughts on Kyoko, and when Sayaka inevitably insults or says bad things about her, ask her specifically for one thing she does like about her. If asked why Homura chose this line of dialogue, say she was worried for her since she's a girl that lives on her lonesome without many friends. Joke to Madoka telepathically that Kyoko & Sayaka have explosive chemistry for one another.
[X] Ping Tomoe-san and
-[X] Ask her if she wishes to reveal her nature as a Magical Girl to Madoka, Sayaka, & Hitomi, considering they're fine with Homura's status as one. If she doesn't know that they know of Homura's status, tell her. It would help lower suspicions of their extracurricular activities when coordinating against Mikuni's group.
 
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Sayaka and Hitomi still don't know that Mami is a magical girl, so while I like the general premise of the vote, I'm wondering if we really want to let them know that Kyouko is one so soon after meeting her. What are your guy's thoughts? Agree? Disagree? Have a reason why or why not? I'd love to hear it.
 
Sayaka and Hitomi still don't know that Mami is a magical girl, so while I like the general premise of the vote, I'm wondering if we really want to let them know that Kyouko is one so soon after meeting her. What are your guy's thoughts? Agree? Disagree? Have a reason why or why not? I'd love to hear it.

... That is a very good point and I wish I recalled that tibit when I wrote the vote. Changed to no longer label Kyoko a magical girl, and going to add a Mami convo.
 
Madoka is silent, staring at the ground as she contemplates your words. "I'm sorry, I know you're just worried about me. I shouldn't have brushed aside your concerns like like. If you'd like, I'll be more than happy to make it up to you. "Madoka face brightens, but she still looks at you with some confusion, so you clarify "You can ask me anything you'd like to know about me, and I'll answer it."
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[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
-[X] to Sayaka
-[X] to Hitomi
--[X] About their thoughts on Kyoko, and when Sayaka inevitably insults or says bad things about her, ask her specifically for one thing she does like about her. If asked why Homura chose this line of dialogue, say she was worried for her since she's a girl that lives on her lonesome without many friends. Joke to Madoka telepathically that Kyoko & Sayaka have explosive chemistry for one another.
[X] Ping Tomoe-san and
-[X] Ask her if she wishes to reveal her nature as a Magical Girl to Madoka, Sayaka, & Hitomi, considering they're fine with Homura's status as one. If she doesn't know that they know of Homura's status, tell her. It would help lower suspicions of their extracurricular activities when coordinating against Mikuni's group.
 
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
-[X] to Sayaka
-[X] to Hitomi
--[X] About their thoughts on Kyoko, and when Sayaka inevitably insults or says bad things about her, ask her specifically for one thing she does like about her. If asked why Homura chose this line of dialogue, say she was worried for her since she's a girl that lives on her lonesome without many friends. Joke to Madoka telepathically that Kyoko & Sayaka have explosive chemistry for one another.
[X] Ping Tomoe-san and
-[X] Ask her if she wishes to reveal her nature as a Magical Girl to Madoka, Sayaka, & Hitomi, considering they're fine with Homura's status as one. If she doesn't know that they know of Homura's status, tell her. It would help lower suspicions of their extracurricular activities when coordinating against Mikuni's group.
 
Day 13 Chapter 3
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka
-[X] to Sayaka
-[X] to Hitomi
--[X] About their thoughts on Kyoko, and when Sayaka inevitably insults or says bad things about her, ask her specifically for one thing she does like about her. If asked why Homura chose this line of dialogue, say she was worried for her since she's a girl that lives on her lonesome without many friends. Joke to Madoka telepathically that Kyoko & Sayaka have explosive chemistry for one another.
[X] Ping Tomoe-san and
-[X] Ask her if she wishes to reveal her nature as a Magical Girl to Madoka, Sayaka, & Hitomi, considering they're fine with Homura's status as one. If she doesn't know that they know of Homura's status, tell her. It would help lower suspicions of their extracurricular activities when coordinating against Mikuni's group.



You and Madoka return the waves Sayaka and Hitomi are giving, and two and two join together as the four of you walk to school. Madoka eagerly chats with her friends, while you remain content to listen in on their conversation. They talk of small things, things that would be otherwise unimportant to you were it not Madoka talking, and you are satisfied just listening to the sound of her voice. But when their conversation turns to yesterday, you find that you do have something which you wish to say.

"What did all of you think of Sakura Kyouko?" Stares from Madoka, Sayaka, and Hitomi surround you.

Madoka speaks first, awkwardly fidgeting as she says "Well... I want to believe that there's a good person inside of her, but... I don't really know. There were times when she was really fun to be around, but there were also times that she seemed really mean." Madoka casts a sidelong glance at Sayaka's chin, and to the deep purple shiner that even makeup can't completely hide. "But, I'm willing to give her the benefit of the doubt. She seems like she's lonely, and I think that if she had some friends she wouldn't be so mean."

"Madoka-san makes some very good points about her," Hitomi adds. "My thoughts on her are... Conflicting, to say the least, but personally, I think it's too early to pass judgement on her one way or another. Certainly, at least some of her aggression towards Sayaka-san was warranted."

"Yeah, that was my bad," says Sayaka, staring at the ground with a guilty expression. "Honestly, I don't know what came over me. It's just... Yeah, she can be cool when she's not being mean, but like, outside of a few moments here and there, mean was pretty much all she was being. Maybe if she toned it down like, a dozen notches or something, I could be friends with her, but until then..."

"But, there was at least one thing you found enjoyable about her, yes?"

"I mean, yeah. That girl can dance, and if she weren't such a huge jerk I'd love to have her teach me her techniques." Sayaka's face turns as red as the hair of the girl she's describing, and once she's checked that no one but the four of you are around, she loudly whispers "And don't tell Kyousuke, but... She's kinda hot. Like, if she were a guy, I'd... I'd be interested."

"Their... Explosive, chemistry would certainly make for an entertaining relationship drama," you telepathically say to Madoka, forcing her to stifle her giggling lest Sayaka or Hitomi ask what she found so funny.

"But like, why do you care? Do you have some kinda stake in her or something?"

"I suppose you could say that I'm worried about her. She lives by herself and, short of her failed friendship with Tomoe-san, she doesn't have anyone else in her life."

Sayaka rolls her eyes, muttering under her breath something that sounds suspiciously like "Gee, I wonder why," but you continue. "I've been where she is; I know what it's like to be isolated from others and to put up walls in order to cope with the isolation. I also know that it took having people willing to reach out and support me to break me out of those walls."

And, while your mind is on the subject of the support you have received from your friends, you come to think of someone else you know who has greatly benefited from their support. "Tomoe-san, I have a very important question I need to ask you."

"Hm? What is it you need to ask me, Akemi-san?"

"I was wondering whether you wish to continue hiding your nature as a puella magi from Madoka, Sayaka, and Hitomi."

"... Had you asked me that question last week, I would have jumped at the chance to share my station with them. But, knowing what I know now, I feel that it would be an unjust imposition of something horrible upon them."

"While you make a valid point, Tomoe-san, I'm afraid I have not been entirely honest with you in this regard. Last week, despite my best efforts to the contrary, they were exposed to the reality of what I am, and despite knowing the truth behind the puella magi system are no less accepting of me. I will not force you to tell them if you are uncomfortable, but know that if you choose to, they will still accept you."

"... I see... Thank you, Akemi-san, but I am afraid I still need some time to think about this."


You come back to reality as you cross the threshold and step onto school grounds. It seems that, since your earlier statement, neither Madoka, Sayaka, nor Hitomi have said anything more on the topic of Sakura Kyouko.

Do you
[ ] Try to pay attention in class
-[ ] But fail, and ping
--[ ] Archer, to continue your earlier conversation about your dream
--[ ] Tomoe-san, to ask how she's feeling after having spent the day with Kyouko
--[ ] Kyouko, to ask for her opinion on your friends
--[ ] Kure Kirika, to give her and Mikuni Oriko one last chance to surrender and cooperate
[ ] Skip to lunch
-[ ] And sit with your friends
--[ ] where you'll talk to them about (write-in)
--[ ] where you'll listen in and only speak up when spoken to
[ ] Skip to the end of the day
[ ] Change perspectives to Archer
-[ ] And what is Archer up to today? (write-in)
[ ] Other (write-in)
?
 
[X] Hey Archer, perhaps you should just tell her your identity, would help alleviate concerns Homura's having about the dreams, Gilgamesh almost certainly knows of your identity already, and very little harm could come of Homura knowing about it.

[X] Try to pay attention in class
-[X] But fail, and ping
--[X] Tomoe-san, to ask how she's feeling after having spent the day with Kyouko. Also ask if she'd been having strange dreams and if she knows the meaning of them.
--[X] Kyouko, to ask for her opinion on your friends
--[X] Archer, to continue your earlier conversation about your dream
[X] Change perspectives to Archer
-[X] He's a bit shaken up to be reminded of the horrors and grief he's had to endure in not only his own Grail War, but other iterations as well. Ponders over the fact that he'd gotten too used to Rin never questioning him about such memories and beating himself up over forgetting about the dream cycle after telling his master about his forgotten identity. He briefly considers telling Homura the truth of his identity.

Thanks for the prompts SVS :D
 
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