Who was the better QM?

  • Astra Myst

    Votes: 23 19.2%
  • SVS

    Votes: 97 80.8%

  • Total voters
    120
Thank You
"Ya know, ya really didn't have ta go outta yer way just ta pick me up," Kyouko says, sprawling her broken leg out on the empty train seat. "I could'a just taken th' train by myself. Kinda like what I'm doing now, but with less Blueberry."

"You know, most people would say 'thank you' when someone goes out of their way to be nice to them," Sayaka replies, refusing to look Kyouko in the eyes as she speaks. "But I guess good manners are lost on you."

"Hey! I can be plenty good-manner'd when I wanna be!"

"Then you should want to be nice to the person who went out of their way for you!"

"Would you two settle down!" barks the elderly gentleman several seats away. "Sort out your damned relationship problems on your own, but leave us decent folk out of it!" Well, that old man was quick to shut Sayaka and Kyouko up, and neither dared to say another word until the train had arrived at the stop nearest to Homura's apartment.

Despite her earlier protests, Kyouko was still struggling to walk by herself, and had left Sayaka thoroughly confused by her complete refusal to bring crutches. Five minutes ago, Sayaka had been perfectly content to let Kyouko struggle on her own, but seeing her actually struggling brought a change of heart to the bluenette. "Here," she said, wrapping her arm around Kyouko's shoulder, letting the shorter girl lean against her for support "Let me help you."

"I told ya, Blueberry, I'll be fine."

"Well then, think of this as me paying you back for yesterday."

Kyouko turned her head, giving Sayaka the strangest look. "'Scuse me, but I think I'd remember seein' yer ugly mug yesterday."

"It's okay, you don't have to lie," Sayaka said, which only served to deepen the look of confusion on Kyouko's face. "I was able to put it together on my own. I know about Homura and Mami-san, and from there, it was easy enough to figure that you had to be like them. You probably broke your leg fighting to protect me yesterday, so... Thank you. I know we didn't get along very well last time, but... Well, I appreciate that you were still willing to stick your neck out for dumb old me."

Kyouko continued to stare at Sayaka, and for a moment, the bluenette was positive that she had guessed wrong, until "Well, I guess that cat's outta th' bag. Ya got me, Blueberry."

"So..." The pair had reached Homura's apartment, but Sayaka found herself hesitating at the doorbell. "Homura... She said that you think I'm attractive. Is she just pulling my leg, or..."

"Nope, Spooky's one-hundred per cent tellin' th' truth."

A role formerly confined to Homura and Madoka, now it was Sayaka's turn to become the red cabbage. "But... Why? You do know I'm a girl, right? Just because I keep my hair short doesn't mean I'm a boy."

"Well duh, 'course I know yer a girl. But ya don't seem ta have a problem with Spooky an' Pinkie bein' gay. So why's it different with me?"

"Because..." Sayaka's words sputtered in her mouth, and she struggled to regain her tongue's grasp on her language. "Because you're the first girl that's ever been attracted to me, and I don't really know how I feel about that. And, I guess I don't understand why, either. Like, if we got along better, maybe I'd be able to see it, but..."

"Listen, Blueberry-" Kyouko's expression was dead serious when her reply came. "I don't gotta like ya ta realize that you've got a nice figure an' a face that's easy on th' eyes. Whether or not we get along, it ain't got nuthin' ta do with me findin' ya attractive."

Sayaka said no more after that. She didn't have anything to say. After all, she was straight, wasn't she?

So why did she find Kyouko attractive?
 
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[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka about recent Tatsuya shenanigans, anything interesting she did in either of her clubs (Gardening & Crafts), and inquire about her interest in Art class and if she's drawn anything good lately.
-[X] to Sayaka & Kyoko about how they seem to get along rather well when they're gossiping about others, and joke about how they seem to be a good match for one another (opposites attract and whatnot).
-[X] to everyone else; welcome them and seat them. Thank Archer for the food.
-[X] to Archer telepathically, if he could make some hot chocolate to go with dessert once dinner is complete.
[X] What does your dinner conversation look like?
-[X] Homura and Madoka are amicably chatting in-between eating while sitting next to each other. Hitomi is chatting a bit with Sayaka, asks Kyoko about the things she likes, talks to Mami about her school life and her interests, and is bemused by Sayaka and Kyoko's antics. Mami is noticeably happier due to befriending everyone and sharing a meal with Kyoko again, talking with Hitomi with a passing conversation or two with Kyoko (and probably Sayaka as a result). Kyoko and Sayaka are forced to sit next to each other despite arriving before the others because Hitomi or Mami took Sayaka's seat when she got up to help adjust Kyoko in her seat due to her broken leg. Kyoko and Sayaka make a big deal out of it despite neither of them minding much. Sayaka hesitantly tries to ask Kyoko about her interests, and they both worship Archer's food together jokingly (but partially serious). At some point Mami asks Archer if he could eat with them at the table, with both Hitomi and Homura silently nodding in agreement. If Archer decides to eat with everyone, everyone but Homura will bombard Archer with questions about himself, such as his interests, his background, how he had gotten so good at cooking, etc., due to his mysterious nature.

Broke out the big guns for the small talk this vote (searched Madoka's wiki page and found a 100 question survey by her), as we can only ask about music and generic things only so much. The hot chocolate is for Madoka's pleasure.
 
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Broke out the big guns for the small talk this vote (searched Madoka's wiki page and found a 100 question survey by her), as we can only ask about music and generic things only so much. The hot chocolate is for Madoka's pleasure.

Pretty sure that calling them "big guns" is an understatement when they're putting the Bismarck's 15 inchers to shame. You really like when I crank out a 3k+ word post, don't you?
 
Of course. Just like dakka, there is no such thing as too much good quests. On another note, I'll be offline from tomorrow. Our ISP has a few problems, and we'll change. It shouldn't take more than a week or so, but I'll be unavailable to vote until then.

[X] Enetious
 
[X] Enetious
[X] Afterwards, possible discussion about Oriko and co. and if/ how to interact with them from now on, plans for dealing with Murderloli, and what to prep for Walpurgisnacht.
 
Oh SVS, just remembered, but once this day is over I assume you'll be making a new thread for Confringentur for the second part of the story since we've made our way to Day 15/45? Hopefully that'll mean obtaining more of a viewer-base and reminding older viewers that this story is still a thing. :)
 
Oh SVS, just remembered, but once this day is over I assume you'll be making a new thread for Confringentur for the second part of the story since we've made our way to Day 15/45? Hopefully that'll mean obtaining more of a viewer-base and reminding older viewers that this story is still a thing. :)

The original plan was to have Day 16 be the start of Part 2. However, upon reviewing the actual calendar dates I decided that Day 17 makes the better start as that's the start of April, meaning that April can be neatly divided in half for Parts 2 and 3.

So after this, we'll have one more day before things get started up again, then on 1 April it's on to a new part in a new thread.
 
Broke out the big guns for the small talk this vote (searched Madoka's wiki page and found a 100 question survey by her), as we can only ask about music and generic things only so much. The hot chocolate is for Madoka's pleasure.

I really don't like that I have to do this, but I need for you to trim the conversation votes down to about half of what they are presently. There's too much going on in too many directions and I'm having a lot of trouble making them all flow effectively into one another. I don't particularly feel like I can pull this off in a manner that I can be satisfied with, and I'd rather give you guys something smaller that I know I'll be satisfied with, than give you some rambling, 6k+ monstrosity that I despise for having written, and which is probably of lower quality than the smaller one.

Hell, if you want, you can even revisit the half I didn't get to when it's time to vote on the next post. I just really do not think I can pull this off in a single post.
 
[X] Talk
-[X] to Madoka about her interest in Art class and if she's drawn anything good lately.
-[X] to Sayaka & Kyoko about how they seem to get along rather well when they're gossiping about others, and joke about how they seem to be a good match for one another (opposites attract and whatnot).
-[X] to everyone else; welcome them and seat them. Thank Archer for the food.
-[X] to Archer telepathically, if he could make some hot chocolate to go with dessert once dinner is complete.
[X] What does your dinner conversation look like?
-[X] Homura and Madoka are amicably chatting in-between eating while sitting next to each other. Hitomi is chatting a bit with Sayaka, and is bemused by Sayaka and Kyoko's antics. Mami is noticeably happier due to befriending everyone and sharing a meal with Kyoko again. Kyoko and Sayaka are forced to sit next to each other despite arriving before the others because Hitomi or Mami took Sayaka's seat when she got up to help adjust Kyoko in her seat due to her broken leg. Kyoko and Sayaka make a big deal out of it despite neither of them minding much. Sayaka hesitantly tries to ask Kyoko about her interests, and they both worship Archer's food together jokingly (but partially serious). At some point Mami asks Archer if he could eat with them at the table, with both Hitomi and Homura silently nodding in agreement. If Archer decides to eat with everyone, everyone but Homura will bombard Archer with questions about himself, such as his interests, his background, how he had gotten so good at cooking, etc., due to his mysterious nature.

@SVS How about this? This'll be mainly
  • A short conversation with Madoka
  • The usual joke about Sayaka + Kyoko, a reason they're sitting together, and the usual food worship
  • Thanking Archer and inviting him to eat with them and a few questions before he quells them
  • You can just footnote the conversations Hitomi & Mami are having
  • And a footnote about Madoka appreciating hot chocolate with dessert
Quite honestly didn't mean for you to actually write about everything I put in detail, thought you would footnote a good chunk of it due to it not being of any importance or of much meaning (aside from the comedy bits). Ignore how long the post is in relation to the bullet points, I added a bit more detail to the mundane things and for clarification on others at the time x.x
 
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Well, getting to chop out the Hitomi parts should save me a decent chunk of time and effort. I probably won't be able to get to anything today, but I'll let you know whether it's made things more manageable on my end or not.

I think I've been spoiling you guys way too much recently, and whether or not the new above is more manageable, come February I simply won't have the time to be cranking out 2+k for you guys every other day. So, once we move into February, I'm going to have to ask that we keep our votes confined to what can realistically be delivered in under 2k.



This is completely unrelated to my above point, but I didn't want to double post, so I'm putting it here.

Incubator:
Red eyes
White fut
Almost certainly uses the Third Magic to create Soul Gems.

Justeaze Lizrich von Einzbern:
Red eyes
White hair
Capable of using the Third Magic as the core of the Grail.

Red eyes, pigmentless keratin fiber, Third Magic. What's the connection? Actually, while I'm at it, the whole of the Einzberns seem eerily Incubator-esque, with their endless identical homunculus bodies and their Sorcery Trait, "Wish-Granting – Spellcasting without possessing the knowledge of the spell itself. They skip the thaumaturgical process altogether and recreate miracles just through the use of magical energy but they are still bound to the limitations of the Magic Circuits."

In a meta sense, I have to imagine than Butcher, who is a close friend of Nasu, knew exactly what he was doing when he created the Incubator; but in an in-setting sense I can only wonder whether the Einzberns got their start from a little girl wishing to grant miracles like Kyubey could.
 
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@SVS

Eh, I see the white hair and red eyes as more as a sort of general relation of all artificial life in this shared universe, and it does make a certain amount of sense that a homonculus (or Kyubey bodies) would actively pursue and be granted a field of True Magic that involves the manipulation and creation of souls, for a Homonculus wishes to be human, and Kyubey wishes to use a unique effect of the Third Magic to beat entropy to ensure its own existence. So I can only theorize that since Kyubey hasn't figured out a cure for entropy, that they don't have a soul since that's what a Third Magic user needs in order to generate an infinite amount of mana/energy.

Kyubey is probably trying to figure out a way to apply their ability in the Third Magic on beings that actually possess a soul in order to beat entropy since they themselves lack a soul. Its probably why Magical Girls are able to have their wishes granted and gain such power, as they're tapping into the Third True Magic to an extent, however its definitely an experiment in progress considering how it essentially corrupts their soul to use the energy that is not inherently theirs and it results in reality warping crazed entities. Maybe the Third Magic just wasn't made to be used in such a manner?
 
Kyubey is probably trying to figure out a way to apply their ability in the Third Magic on beings that actually possess a soul in order to beat entropy since they themselves lack a soul. Its probably why Magical Girls are able to have their wishes granted and gain such power, as they're tapping into the Third True Magic to an extent, however its definitely an experiment in progress considering how it essentially corrupts their soul to use the energy that is not inherently theirs and it results in reality warping crazed entities. Maybe the Third Magic just wasn't made to be used in such a manner?

I think it would be possible to use the Third Magic to the Incubator's intended goal, but that the Incubators are thinking on far too small a scale. I think, in order for it to work, it would have to be applied on the scale that Amakusa Shirou was trying to achieve in Apocrypha.

However,
A: I don't believe that the Incubators are capable of granting universal materialization of all souls; given that they work on a system that's predicated on potential, return on investment, and the reliability of the system's continued expansion it seems to be something out of the reach of their current capabilities.
B: I don't get the impression that the Incubators actually understand what their system really is. They know what their system does and what it's capable of of, but they don't understand the specific Magic they're tapping into or why it works the way that it does, leading them to be unable to conceptualize a way to improve it.
 
Day 15 Chapter 5
[X] Enetious



You open the door to the sight of Sayaka, her arm wrapped around Kyouko's shoulders as Kyouko leans on her for support. Just as you step aside to allow them entrance, the sky gives a terrible roar, and a furious downpour falls only seconds after the pair make their entrance. Was it supposed to rain this afternoon?

"Whew, that was a close one." You trade places with Sayaka so that she can take her shoes off without having to worry about supporting Kyouko. "Didn't think it was going to rain today."

Once Sayaka has removed her shoes, she helps Kyouko with her own shoes. You don't notice as Kyouko's face flushes, and you don't hear her when she mumbles "Hey, uh... Thanks. Fer comin' ta help me, I mean." But you do notice as the pair make their way into your living room. It wouldn't do to have someone falling down on your watch.

As the three of you enter the living room, things have remained largely unchanged since you left to help Archer in the kitchen. Hitomi is helping Madoka work through what appears to be geometry homework, while Tomoe-san works at her own studies, occasionally pausing to help when Madoka or Hitomi have trouble with something. But, as you expected it would, all of that changes once Sayaka and Kyouko arrive.

"Sayaka-chan! Kyouko-chan!" Madoka excitedly chirps the pair's names, as pink, green, and yellow scatter to make room for the injured red. Sayaka helps Kyouko onto one of your couches, and the second she goes to fetch an ottoman to prop up Kyouko's broken leg, Tomoe-san's arms are around the redhead.

"Hey! Geddof me will ya!" Kyouko shouts, but despite fuming under Tomoe-san's embrace, she never actually does anything to force the blonde to remove herself. You suspect the pair are having their own internal conversation, but you choose not to pry in their secrets.

"Dinner should be ready in, say, ten minutes," Archer says, poking his head out of the kitchen. "But I've got some rice balls ready to go if anyone is hungry now."

Kyouko looks at Sayaka, giving her the fakest pair of puppy-dog eyes you've ever seen on a person. Sayaka rolls her eyes "Fine, I'll get you some," but goes into the kitchen to grab the tray of rice balls anyway. When she returns, setting the tray down on the table, she says "Make sure to save some for the rest of us, okay?"

"Yeah, yeah, whatever," Kyouko responds, grabbing for the rice ball closest to her. This earns her a sour look from Sayaka, who responds by aggressively grabbing the rice ball farthest from the one Kyouko grabbed. The pair lock eyes across the small circular table, fighting one another in a duel to see who can eat their rice ball the most aggressively. Hitomi tries to suppress a chuckle at their actions, and despite wanting your hardest to ignore the pair, you can't help but comment.

"You two might act this way, but you're both getting along much better than either of you want to admit, aren't you?" Their joint chorus of "No we're not!" only leaves Hitomi working even harder to suppress her laughter.

But you ignore all that, to focus on the one person who matters to you most. "So Madoka, what have you been up to lately?"

"Well, I'm waiting for April, because that's when both of my clubs start up again, but other than that, there hasn't really been much to talk about."

"What clubs are you a member of?" Gardening and Crafts, you knew the answer a hundred timelines ago, but Madoka still deserves to hear you asking her in this timeline.

"I'm a member of the Gardening Club and the Crafts Club. What about you, Homura-chan? Were you thinking of joining any clubs? There's still a little time left if you want to join any."

[ ] "I hadn't really given any thought to joining a club. I suppose I might enjoy giving the Archery Club a try if they're still accepting members."
[ ] "I hadn't really given any thought to joining a club. But if they're still accepting members, I suppose I could try one of the clubs you're in."

Madoka smiles warmly at your response. "Well, I'm sure that no matter what club Homura-chan decides to join, she'll really enjoy it."

Sayaka nudges Madoka with her elbow, and says to her "So, Madoka, when are you going to tell Homura about what happened in art class?"

Madoka becomes the red cabbage, and Hitomi gives Sayaka an exasperated glare as Madoka says "Sayaka-chan! No! That's too embarrassing! I can't tell Homura-chan about that!"

"Too late!" Kyouko proclaims, nearly falling over in her seat as she wraps an arm around Madoka's shoulder. "Come on Pinky, fess up! I'm sure Spooky over there'd love ta hear yer embarrassing story!" Fortunately, your glare immediately causes Kyouko to back off. "Fine, fine, hands off the merch, got it."

"It's okay, Madoka," you say, giving the scarlet-faced girl a warm smile. "You don't have to tell me anything that you don't want to." Although, if you were to be honest with yourself, you are rather curious as to what happened that would have made Madoka so ashamed to tell you.

"No..." Madoka bites her lip as she goes for her school bag, pulling out her drawing notebook and clutching it to her chest protectively. "Do you know the girl who sits behind and to the left of you? I've always thought she was really good at drawing, so when the teacher told us that today was a free-drawing period, I looked over to see if maybe I could get some inspiration from what she was drawing, but I... When I saw what she was drawing, I... I got really mad."

"Well?" Kyouko stares at Madoka "What was she drawing that had ya so upset?" Hitomi gives Kyouko a dirty look.

"She... She was drawing herself, and Homura-chan... And you two were... Kissing. I got really jealous when I saw her drawing you like that." Well, that confirms your suspicions. You'll have to have a chat with her some time soon. "So... I drew this." Handling as though it were the most precious thing in the world to her, Madoka opens up her notebook, flipping to the appropriate page to show you what she's drawn.

It's you.

There's nothing particularly noteworthy about it from a technical standpoint, but knowing that this drawing was born from a very special place in Madoka's heart makes the ordinary seem extraordinary. It's clear that Madoka went to great length to capture as much of the emotion in the lines of your face as best as she could. It's strange, though, that the drawing's smile seems less melancholy than any smile you can remember showing to Madoka.

"She's very beautiful," you say, handing the notebook back to a blushing Madoka. "I'm sure that whoever she is, she would be flattered to know that you've captured her likeness so well."

It should be nearing ten minutes now from when Archer announced dinner, when, right on schedule "Alright girls, dinner's ready!" Archer enters the living room balancing three plates of rice, vegetables, and assorted meat cutlets, which he places down on the table. "I'll be back with the other three. But save some room, because I've got salads and teriyaki burgers coming next, and after that is dessert."

Tomoe-san excuses herself as Archer brings out the remaining three plates, but shortly after she leaves "Blueberry, ya mind helpin' me adjust my seat?" Reluctantly, Sayaka agrees, and as she helps Kyouko get settled into her seat better you, Madoka, and Hitomi all gather around the table to take your plates. Only when Tomoe-san returns and takes the seat to Madoka's right does Sayaka realize that the only seat remaining is the one between Hitomi and Kyouko.

"Yeah, does anyone wanna switch with me?" Kyouko asks, as she and Sayaka realize that their only recourse is to sit together.

"You want to move, now? After I just helped you adjust your seat?"

"What, like you wanna sit next ta me any more than I wanna sit next ta you?"

"Of course I don't want to sit next to you! But if you wanted to move, you should have said so before all the other seats were taken!"

"Well, maybe I wouldn't have ta move if there was another place not next ta me that ya could sit!"

Hitomi clears her throat, saying to the both of them "I could slide over next to Sakura-san, and Sayaka-san could sit where I was, if that would make things better."

Kyouko rolls her eyes, and Sayaka takes her seat all the same. "Just... Let's just eat, okay? It's not like this is some fancy event where the seating matters." Hitomi smiles as the pair come to an amicable solution.



"... And that's when I realized that I had been playing in the wrong key the entire time."

Sayaka's smile is a melancholy one as she and Hitomi talk amongst themselves, the topic somehow invariably always managing to return to the matter of Kamijou Kyousuke. "And he never corrected you at all?"

Hitomi shakes her head. "Not once. The whole time I thought he was the one who sounded off, but that was just because he didn't want to make me feel bad."

"Geez, how'd you manage that one, Hitomi? Aren't you, like, really good at piano?"

Hitomi's face reddens, and you can almost see her desire to withdraw inside her own skin to escape her post-embarrassment embarrassment. "Well... I suppose I must have simply choked. It was the first time we had tried playing a duet as a couple, and I really wanted to impress him... Oh, I'll never be able to face him after this."

You can only imagine how Sayaka must feel, listening to Hitomi talk about her budding relationship with Kamijou Kyousuke, the relationship Sayaka wishes she could have, but she puts on a smile all the same and gives Hitomi a friendly hug. "We all make mistakes sometimes, Hitomi; I'm sure he understands."

You don't particularly care about Hitomi's relationship troubles so long as they do not constitute a threat or a potential avenue for either Madoka or Sayaka to contract, but with the current seating arrangement seeing you across the table from her, you give her a polite smile when she looks your way, before going back to your conversation with Madoka, who is sandwiched between you and Tomoe-san. Tomoe-san seems much happier than she has been in recent times, as she tries - though ultimately persists in failing - to ask Kyouko about what she's been up to in the years since their parting.

But Kyouko, try as Tomoe-san might, keeps refusing to answer. And it's getting on someone's nerves; but that someone isn't Tomoe-san. "Hey, you've been awful quiet lately." Sayaka, sandwiched between Hitomi and Kyouko, leans over to her redheaded seat-mate, and makes her own attempt to pry the words from Kyouko's mouth. But Kyouko is silent, save for the obnoxious and intentionally loud sound of her chewing on her teriyaki burger.

"Come on, there must be something we can get you to talk about." Still nothing. "Got any interests or hobbies? Boyfriend? Girlfriend? Where do you go to school? Anything?"

Kyouko rolls her eyes, spitting out her answer. "I like eatin' an' playin' games at th' arcade; never dated nobody, but I'm gayer than a rainbow an' I got lip time with a girl ta prove it; an' I don't go ta school 'cuz I ain't got time."

"You don't go to school?" Sayaka asks, getting her response from Kyouko in the form of a nod of her head. "So, do you have a job then? Aren't you a little young to be working?"

"Ain't no age restriction on beatin' losers like yerself at th' dance machine. Gotta make money ta eat some way. An' speaking'a which, Spooky, you tell Redman that this is th' best damn burger I've ever had."

Now that is a statement Sayaka can agree with. "You said it," she responds, taking the final bite out of her own burger. "I could eat Mister Archer's cooking all day."

"Indeed," Tomoe-san chimes in. "I don't know why he never seems to eat himself. He's so diligent about making sure that we're all fed, but I wish he'd think about himself once in awhile."

Across the table from you, Hitomi nods, and you find yourself agreeing with Tomoe-san. You aren't exactly sure that Archer needs to eat, but giving him the chance to partake in his own creations is a fair enough suggestion. "Archer, would you like to sit down and eat with us?" "And also, while I don't mean to be demanding, would you prepare some hot chocolate to go with dessert?"

"Well, I suppose it wouldn't hurt to be sociable for a little while," Archer replies, pulling up a seat that sees him squeezed between yourself and Hitomi. A poor choice on his part, as the second he's settled in, all the rest of the table bombards him with questions.

"Where did you learn to cook?" "What was your childhood like?" "What else are you good at besides cooking?" "Have you ever loved anyone?" "Can I hire ya ta cook full-time?"

But fortunately, Archer appears to take it all in good stride, responding to each question in turn with "Girls, please, one at a time. I know you're all excited, and I'm happy to answer your questions; but please, one at a time."

At your insistence, you nudge Madoka into action, and fortunately the others get the hint to back off and allow her to be the first one to ask. "Well, Archer-san, I'm curious to hear about your childhood. What was it like?"

Archer sighs, and his eyes get this sort of glassy look to them as he reminisces. "Well... To be honest, the first six or seven years of my life are just... Completely blank. I don't remember the faces of my parents, or where I lived, or if I had any friends or favourite toys. The first memories I have are of a raging fire that swept through the city, and the face of the man who saved me."

You can clearly see the face of the man who had saved your servant. A sharp, strong jaw covered in light stubble. Darkened eyes, cold like steel, carrying with them sadness beyond measure. Shaggy, roughly-cut black hair, with bangs that fell more over his right eye than his left. He's wearing a dark suit, and even through Archer's memories, you can feel the callouses on his hands, callouses that have since become familiar to you since you started using guns to fight. And for a name...

"... Kiritsugu didn't have to do anything else for me after that day. He could have gone home, and left me to be sent off to the orphanage with all the other children who survived the fire that night. But, for as much as he had saved me, I think I also saved him. When we first met, he... He had been grieving the loss of someone precious to him, and finding me, being able to save me, I think that was some small form of catharsis for him. He was... A complicated man, but he tried to be a good father to me all the same."

Kiritsugu, the dark-clad foster father of your servant Archer... But that does little to aid you in your quest to uncover Archer's identity, and you're doubtful that he'll accidentally spill the beans tonight. So for now you'll listen to him as he answers the questioning of your friends, quietly and patiently biding your time.

[ ] Wat do?
 
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I really don't like how abruptly I had to end that, but I honestly couldn't think of anything else to say. Two days of scratching my head trying to figure out how the hell to parse the vote into something coherent and writeable, Saturday off because I had real-life concerns going on, and yesterday and today spend actually putting keys to post and typing everything out.

Astra Myst, you might want to give this one what for on account of how long it's been since my last real update.

And to the rest of you, I kindly implore that you give me more manageable votes in the future. I'm only one man, and while I enjoy writing, I'm not always going to enjoy writing a short story for every post. I was really spoiling you guys over the holidays and for the past two weeks, but you shouldn't expect that kind of quantity from here on out. My schedule is going to be changing come February, and when that happens I'd prefer to be able to give you guys quality over quantity.
 
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[X] "I hadn't really given any thought to joining a club. I suppose I might enjoy giving the Archery Club a try if they're still accepting members."

[X] (Archer) Answer any safe questions truthfully while bending the truth with questions such as his past job experience. Serve dessert and hot chocolate.
[X] Ask if anyone wants to watch a movie while enjoying dessert. Use her technologically advanced room as a movie room for tonight. Cuddle with Madoka.
-[X] After the movie, ask everyone on their opinions on what they should do with Oriko and Kirika, now that they're bound by a Geis. Suggest that at least she and Mami meet up with them to discuss plans against Walpurgisnaught, against Assassin, and what exactly Oriko saw with her precognition that caused her to escalate so horrifically.
--[X] Say her goodbyes to everyone; offer to lend an umbrella to those that need it if its still raining. If Madoka wishes to spend the night, allow it, otherwise don't bring it up. Spend the rest of the afternoon practicing her Projection Magecraft while Archer hunts a witch or two, before turning into bed.

@SVS Once more, I apologize for the rather monstrosity of a vote I created, though if its any consolation you did a great job on writing out this vote! I'll definitely try to tone down my own votes a bit when it comes to these "Wat do?" ones in the future. I think its a thing for me personally that whenever there's an incredibly open-ended vote as such, I tend to go into detail that tends to enlarge whatever I'm voting on, and it didn't really help that I wanted the side characters of PMMM to have their personalities expressed more due to a lot of other fics tending to gloss over characters like Hitomi and others. It kinda made the vote into what it originally was, which I agree was rather bloated.

As for the rest of the vote, I'll be editing this post probably later tonight or tomorrow, either finishing it off myself or going with someone else's vote, if there are any by the time I get back to this.

EDIT: Added vote.
EDIT2: Forgot about Oriko & Kirika; added to the vote.
 
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and it didn't really help that I wanted the side characters of PMMM to have their personalities expressed more due to a lot of other fics tending to gloss over characters like Hitomi and others. It kinda made the vote into what it originally was, which I agree was rather bloated.

That's entirely understandable. I wish I could do more with Hitomi and not just leave her on the sidelines, but she's not a meguca and can't join in the magic, and she's ultimately not important to Homura's end goal as long as she's not getting in the way. And she's got this nasty habit of only really appearing when Homura is already surrounded by more important characters. So I really don't know what to do with her, but I also don't want to just let her fade into the background either.

If anyone has any ideas of what I might be able to do with her, outside of "become meguca and summon Saber", I'm all ears.
 
That's entirely understandable. I wish I could do more with Hitomi and not just leave her on the sidelines, but she's not a meguca and can't join in the magic, and she's ultimately not important to Homura's end goal as long as she's not getting in the way. And she's got this nasty habit of only really appearing when Homura is already surrounded by more important characters. So I really don't know what to do with her, but I also don't want to just let her fade into the background either.

If anyone has any ideas of what I might be able to do with her, outside of "become meguca and summon Saber", I'm all ears.

Well, a couple of things I can think of off the top of my head is her being targeted by some foe like Madoka and Sayaka have been in the past, or maybe having her doing her own investigations in the background of things like local disappearances for witches, or following the news of Assassin's victims and somehow finding out some idea of where she may strike next. All so she can help her friends and not feel useless.
 
Well, a couple of things I can think of off the top of my head is her being targeted by some foe like Madoka and Sayaka have been in the past, or maybe having her doing her own investigations in the background of things like local disappearances for witches, or following the news of Assassin's victims and somehow finding out some idea of where she may strike next. All so she can help her friends and not feel useless.

Shizuki Hitomi: Magical Mystery Super Sleuth!
 
@SVS Before I make a vote, are we voting for the continuation of the feast, activities later in the day, or a combination thereof?
 
@SVS Before I make a vote, are we voting for the continuation of the feast, activities later in the day, or a combination thereof?

Yeah, I really didn't make any of that clear, did I? Pretty much everyone is done eating dinner, so assume that we're moving on to dessert, and we're trying to decide what's to be done after eating. For this, we really only need to be concerned with what Homura and Archer are doing and not everybody else.

Edit: We now also have a proper ending the the post!
 
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[X] "I hadn't really given any thought to joining a club. I suppose I might enjoy giving the Archery Club a try if they're still accepting members."

[X] (Archer) Answer any safe questions truthfully while bending the truth with questions such as his past job experience. Serve dessert and hot chocolate.
[X] While you would like to have a day purely to relax after recent events, it would be best to address the elephant in the room while everyone is gathered in one place. Bring up (at a time that isn't in-appropriate) what to do about Oriko and Kirika.
[X] Say her goodbyes to everyone; offer to lend an umbrella to those that need it if its still raining. If Madoka wishes to spend the night, allow it, otherwise don't bring it up. Spend the rest of the afternoon practicing her Projection Magecraft while Archer hunts a witch or two, before turning into bed.
 
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