Who was the better QM?

  • Astra Myst

    Votes: 23 19.2%
  • SVS

    Votes: 97 80.8%

  • Total voters
    120
May I also suggest adding to check on our soul gem? I don't know if it was mentioned how costly making arrows are, but Homura at least has used timestop a fair amount.

Things have been fairly narrative-focused so far, but starting with the new thread I'll be rolling out some changes, and one of those things will be that we need to start checking our Soul Gem and that there will be associated mana costs for performing certain actions, like timestop or Projection or keeping Archer afloat in battle.

There's that too, although I didn't think it would affect him to that degree.

More power to the players then.

Archer knows the kind of crazy fucks that mages can be. Why wouldn't he be that level of concerned if one of you tells him it's something worth being paranoid about?
 
Day 16 Chapter 18
[X] Check on your soul gem. Use a grief seed if necessary.
[X] Check in
-[X] on Madoka telepathically
-[X] on Hitomi via text, asking how the party went after she had to leave
[X] Thanks to Archer's worries earlier about people from the Moonlit World possibly paying attention to such a public labyrinth, take this time to get Archer better acquainted with her Timestop ability; ask him if his shroud can come undone in a way to tie them together and then Timestop their way out of the labyrinth and a ways away from it.
I had to chop the last part of the vote off because labyrinths fall apart upon the destruction of the witch, so there wouldn't be any time for us to plan and make a sneaky exit.



You check your Soul Gem as the technicolour labyrinth dissolves around you, returning the world to its rightful hues. It's grown fairly dark after your usage of timestop against the witch, and you judge the use of a Grief Seed to be necessary. While you would prefer to hold the already-contaminated Seed you've been using for awhile, using a fresh one so that you won't have to come into contact with the Incubator by disposing of your used Seed, that option presently strikes you as being nonviable. The Seed is quite volatile already, and holding it for much longer brings with it the risk of allowing a new witch to be hatched.

With a sigh, you hold the already-contaminated Seed against your Soul Gem, watching as the murky black corruption seeps from the already full Seed like sweat. You toss it aside and listen for the sickening sound of the Incubator as it greedily devours the grief-laden Seed.

"I do not know why you insisted on holding this Grief Seed for as long as you did, Akemi Homura. In not much time at all, it would have hatched and given birth to a new witch. You are most fortunate that I was-"

"Be quiet," you say to the white nuisance. You hear no more from the Incubator as it slinks away into the shadows.

"This has been quite the productive day for you, hasn't it?" Archer remarks, as the both of you change out of your battle costumes and back into your regular day clothes. "You joined your very first club, got to celebrate a friend's birthday, made friends with a mass murderer, helped take down a witch, and told that little white shit off."

"Mikuni Oriko is not my friend, Archer. In fact, I cannot even call her an ally at this point, because I do not know how well she can work with Tomoe-san and Kyouko."

"Aw, don't let her catch you saying that. It might hurt her feelings." You can hear the snicker that Archer just barely fails to suppress.

"I'm no stranger to your snide remarks by now, but you've been unusually mean today." Your comment earns you an eye from Archer. You ignore it and press on. "I'm aware that you dislike Mikuni Oriko, but I'm having a hard time doubting that you could dislike her more than I do. Tell me what's bothering you."

Archer spares no expense in delivering his response. "It's probably her face."

You shake your head, not willing to waste any more time being concerned if Archer isn't willing to reciprocate. Besides, you have more important people to check in on. "Madoka, how is everything going?"

"Homura-chan? Is everything alright? I know I shouldn't be worried, but... You always seem to check up on me after something really scary happens."

"It's nothing too serious. I found a witch that had set up their lair a bit too close to the residential quarter for comfort. I've dealt with them, but I just wanted to make sure that you were safe."

"A witch? ... That's right; that's what you said happens when someone like you... I hope they went peacefully."


Obscured behind a thick cloud of smoke and flame, you were unable to see the witch's dying moments, but with how fast Archer's projectile had been going, "It was instantaneous. I'm sure they didn't feel a thing."

"... That's good."

"But you're alright?"

"Hm, I'm doing just fine."

"Then I'll let you get back to whatever you had been doing. Good night, Madoka."

"Good night, Homura-chan."


Madoka and Sayaka each seem well enough adjusted to the idea of letting you into their heads, but you aren't sure whether the same will hold true for Hitomi. Instead, you'll text her.

<Homura: How did everything go after I left?>

<Hitomi: Everything was just fine, Akemi-san, thank you for asking. Actually, Madoka-san and Sayaka-san left shortly after you did, though I cannot say that I blame them.>

<Homura: They did do rather poorly on Monday's English quiz.>

<Hitomi: I feel really bad for Madoka-san. I know she really tried her best. Perhaps instead of taking her out on Sunday, you could spend the day helping her with her studies? Not that I am trying to impose on you, that is, but I know she would appreciate your help.>

<Homura: I will see what I can do if I am able, but I was actually hoping to schedule some exercises with Tomoe-san that day, and had no plans to take Madoka out at all.>

<Hitomi: Is it about your afterschool activities?>

<Homura: Yes.>

<Hitomi: Then I shall leave you to your privacy and not ask any further.>

<Homura: At any rate, I am glad to hear that everything went well. Again, I am sorry for having to leave early.>

<Hitomi: it is quite alright, Akemi-san. I understand.>

<Homura: Thank you Hitomi. Take care.>


"It must be hard for your friends," Archer remarks as you put your phone away. "Not knowing if you're just spacing out or if you're conducting some important magical girl business. I'll bet they appreciate it when you message them by phone and not by telepathy." Maybe it shouldn't surprise you, but you've been at this for so long and had so few conversations with non-puella magi, that the seemingly mundane act of using a cell phone to communicate rather than using telepathy strikes you as odd, just as odd as Mikuni Oriko found your telepathy to be when all she had previously used was her phone.

With your phone still out, you check the time. It's a little after ten. You still have schoolwork to complete, and tomorrow is a school day. Even after refreshing your Soul Gem, you feel that this is all you can manage for the night. But you've made progress. You're making progress. You can't understate how important that is. And tomorrow will be another day.

 
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Day 17 and the new thread will come within the next day or two, possibly - but hopefully very unlikely - Wednesday at the latest. Until then, I ask that everyone fill out the following vote.

On a scale of 1 - 10, how do you think Homura feels about:
[ ] Madoka
[ ] Sayaka
[ ] Hitomi
[ ] Mami
[ ] Kyouko
[ ] Oriko
[ ] Kirika

A brief explanation of your reasoning would be appreciated, but is not a requirement. It's more helpful to me to know why you think that way, but I really only need the ratings themselves. If you want to earn bonus points, you can also tell me what you think those characters feel about Homura.
 
So, before I start, I think I should note that I consider 6 (maybe etching into 7) to be 'friendly'. Now, let this person who's knowledge of PMMM is literally all second-hand from stuff like PMAS, the first 1/40 of Noir quest (which I will continue reading someday), and, uhh, probably some other things give opinions :thonk:

[∞ - 1] Madoka (10 if you're a spoilsport)
The honor of infinity goes to Kirika -> Oriko :V
[M: She just hopes Homura is okay...]

[7] Sayaka
I feel Homura felt some pity for Sayaka even before this timeline, and now, she has become an almost unavoidable part of her life.
[S: They disagree on some things, sometimes fundamentally so, but she has become a part of Sayaka's life. Healed Kyousuke, grateful. Good friend.]

[6] Hitomi
While a unintentional detriment to Homura in previous timelines, here she has proven to be just fine. It was also stated in Homura POV early in this quest that Homura has come to care/consider Hitomi/Sayaka as friends.
[H: They may not know each other too well, but Homura has grown into Hitomi's social circle. Another friend. Also played cupid for the love triangle.]

[5] Mami
I'm not sure how to describe this. Ehh, I think some resentment pre-this timeline to Mami for trying to get Madoka and Sayaka to be magical girls, but now, I think the relationship is more stable.
[M: Fellow Magical Girl. Company. Saved her life?]

[4.5/4] Kyouko
I don't think Homura has had too much real interaction with Kyouko? Ehh.
[K: Annoying know-it-all, which from Kyouko, means she's neutral towards Homura, which is better than she thinks of the majority of the people she meets.]

[2/2.5] Oriko (could be vaguely just a bit higher?)
Oh hell yeah, Homura doesn't trust her. But she is willing to accept her (somewhat forced) help and give a stick of some kind, which is a big step up from 'kill on sight'.
[O: ... yeah, I got nothing. Oriko is difficult to read.]

[2/2.5] Kirika
Kirika's goals are often Oriko's goals, and Homura trust Oriko as far as she can toss a grenade, which in this case may be a bad example.
[K: She hurt Oriko.]
 
Ah, and the prophetic seventeenth day commences. I do wonder what coming threat SVS has planned for the cast between now and Walpurgisnaught if not an Apocrypha (perhaps intervention from the Moonlit World was more accurate than previously anticipated?). Anyways, WanderingTwix did an amazing job giving numbers to Homura's opinions of the rest of the cast, and their thoughts on Homura, but I'll give it a shot as well if only to increase the number of votes for this.

[102​] Madoka
-The reasons for this is quite obvious, given Homura's fervent nature in saving (and later taking control over her life in Rebellion) Madoka.
--"H-Homura-chan is just trying her best to live with what's been done to her. I really like her but I don't like how she has to risk her life for me so much even though I don't feel like I deserve it. I just want her to be safe!"

[7] Sayaka
-She's much in the same boat as Madoka, but over the course of dozens of timelines Homura has forgotten this tidbit due to Sayaka antagonizing her timeline after timeline. She's realized now that it was her own actions that led to such a poor relationship with Sayaka in the past timelines, and now that things have turned out as they had she's managed to befriend her with Sayaka even defending her in arguments when the situation arises. They're on their way to becoming good friends if the trend persists and Homura loosens up a little.
--"Homura's cool, in the mysterious kind of way, and she helps me protect Madoka from the dangers of the world and I really appreciate that. I feel a bit mixed about her healing Kyousuke and her part in getting Kyousuke and Hitomi together and I hate that I do, but I'm putting it behind me now as I know it was the right thing to do. I really hate that she has to live with what that rat did to her, but at the same time I can't help but feel jealous of Homura being able to protect us, and I feel that if push comes to shove I'll do what I need to to protect my friends, consequences be damned! I also totally support her and Madoka hooking up, as their stoic and shy dynamic is adorable and it makes for good teasing fuel for Madoka."

(Onto the first X.5 vote, which signifies a transitory period between two ratings due to recent events in the quest)
[6.5] Hitomi
-She finds Hitomi pleasant to talk to and polite, and she helps stabilize conversations she in with Sayaka and Madoka which she appreciates, despite the occasional teasing she gets from her. Hitomi's recent endevours to overcome her inherited uneasiness with same-sex relationships has endeared Homura to Hitomi a bit more.
--"Ah, well Homura is quite polite, cool-headed, well mannered, and intelligent and I suppose I look up to her somewhat as someone I want to grow up to be like. She really helped me gather up the courage to work with Sayaka and confess to Kyousuke, and I'm really grateful for that. I am still a bit uncomfortable with her relationship with Madoka, but I know that that's what my parents rubbed off on me and not actually how I rationally feel. I'm going to endevour to support their relationship in the future, and I just know they'll be really happy together."

[6] Mami
-Not negative as she avoided letting Mami try and recruit Madoka and Sayaka into Kyuubey's schemes, even if unintentionally. Their relationship is mostly professional, and with Mami accepting some harsh realities and her aid in protecting Madoka from danger, she feels that they're at the bare minimum friends, if not particularly close at the moment.
--"... Well, I can't say that Homura-san's actions was the most positive thing to occur in my life, but she helped me through some harsh realities and for that I'm thankful. I-I just can't believe some of the stuff she's led me to discovering, but I've had to to help my new friends, of which I consider her to be one of despite all that's happened. She really should think more of her future though, as being as active of a Magical Girl as she has been can't be very healthy for her and I'm afraid it might hurt her relationship with Madoka in the long run."

[5] Kyouko
-She doesn't speak much with Kyoko, but that's fine. Kyoko, despite her reluctance in helping them, as been a real help in her battle against Oriko's bloc, and it helps that through Kyoko that she get Sayaka back for all the teasing she's been subject to with her relationship with Madoka. Not quite friends yet, but decent acquaintances and good allies for now.
--"You talkin' 'bout broody? Well, s'long as she keeps sendin' Red to me with food we'll be just fine. I guess her and pinkie are dating or somethin', and that's fine, though they get along really well in a weird way."

[2.5] Oriko
-One of the many banes of her existence, though its somewhat lessening a bit, if only to put her just under Kyuubey and Kirika. Oriko's messed up in some way and Homura usually prefers offing them before they can pose a threat to Madoka. Her unusual amount of cooperation is unsettling and her reasons for pursuing her goals makes sense in a really twisted sort of way.
--"Akemi-san both agitates me and ingratiates me. She got me to really look at my powers of precognition and aided me in looking at its flaws, and told me to use it more like their Caster uses his precognition--as a tool. ... I don't blame her for protecting the person I saw who would become the end of everything, and I never had, as I would do the same thing for my beloved, but it inevitably left me with the thought that everything I gave into following my power's knowledge was all for nought. How else will I ever justify killing so many innocent people, without tearing myself apart? If only to continue pursuing the safety of this world and my beloved, I'll devote my resources to aiding Akemi's group's endevours for now, and hope that they defy fate as they had done so against me on so many occasions."

[2] Kirika
-A psychopathic murderer that is deeply in love with Oriko; Homura really doesn't like her. Homura sees her as a rabid dog on a leash, barely controlled by Oriko to prevent her from rampaging. It's very ironic to Homura that she summoned a Berserker, as she has no doubt that if Kirika were to be a Servant she would also be in such a class container.
--"She hurt Oriko, that bitch! If not for Oriko stopping me, I would've killed her the last time I saw her, if only to avenge the person I love!"
 
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The 17th day is upon us, I wonder what surprises lay in store for our heroes. I'm betting more of a marked up presence of the moonlit side of things like Enetious mentioned but not up to a full scale intervention, not yet at least.

If our luck holds only the Church shows up as intermediaries/advisors via Caren and no one else, but this is mashed up Nasuverse and PMMM so...

Also, as requested:

[102​] Madoka: not only is she Homura's love interest, she's reciprocating that love. This timeline seems to be the closest the two has ever gotten.

[7] Sayaka: Past timelines saw her witch out and put out of her misery again and again to the point that Homura abandons her in most timelines and Sayaka treats her with distrust. Not this one, thanks to the efforts made on her behalf, Sayaka goes out of her way to speak on her behalf and stop her from making immoral choices.

[6] Hitomi: Friends, not close friends but good friends nontheless due to her knowing about Kyubei's wild ride and her helping Homura out.

[6] Mami: They're close, but maintain more of a professional relationship than those of close friends, did not stop Homura from offering life saving encouragement when it was needed.

[5] Kyouko: Mere acquaintances but good allies thanks to the efforts of Archer and has cooking.

[2] Oriko: A mass murdering precog turned geis prisoner, Homura keeps her at a healthy distance but is surprisingly on speaking terms with an enemy usually hell bent on killing Madoka if only to save the world. Only kept alive by Sayaka's mercy and a need to have more allies to fight Witch Wattaburger.

[1] Kirika: Not at all close to Homura due to the fanatical loyalty to Oriko and a willingness to spill blood. Thankfully kept in check by geis, again due to Sayaka's mercy and a need for more bodies against Whataburger. She thinks Homura is more similar to herself than the former would dare admit.
 
I'm really liking the input from you guys, great job. I've been on the busy side of things so I haven't had the time to get everything together to start the new thread yet.

That being said, I need to ask you guys a favour- I need pictures, pictures of Spiderman megucas. Specifically, I need full-colour solo images of each of our eight girls. School uniforms and full-body are preferable, but magical girl costumes are acceptable if the character is currently a puella magi.
If you can't find anything of Oriko or Kirika that fits the above, that's perfectly fine. I can make due for the two of them, but good single images of the other six have thus far mostly eluded me.

In return for your assistance, I'll be offering a reward- I'll reveal one piece of information about my plans for part 2 for each girl I get a picture of.
 

@SVS Found you some images, and you're right in that its certainly a huge pain to find full body shots of them.
Imgur Album is /a/gftubDP
 
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