"If I show my power people will try to use me" to whatever degree of mixture.

Yeah, this bit can become very complicated.

You see, let's say that you're half as powerful as the average human. In many places people will still try to "use you". As an abused slave. That sucks.

Now, if you're, say, 10X as powerful as the average human, you may still be "used", but people are much more likely to actually pay you, try to avoid pissing you off, etc...

If you're as strong as the strongest fighter in the average nation, you're going to be outright courted, on average. But here on up you might have to worry about politics where they're specifically trying to kill you.

At 10x and up, you're probably looking at extensive bribes to get you to come work for them, along with sometimes some pretty elaborate control schemes.

I mean, we see it here where they rescue QA and promptly drafted her into the military, planning to use her for combat operations. She was never really asked, now was she? In the other fic, we see that they're planning to use her to help harvest the dungeon, an extremely dangerous task, and because she's seen as powerful, and having extreme potential, lots of gods want her.
 
I added polls to this thread and INW for whether people believe each one belongs in the Worm subforum or not. Please note that the Worm subforum is not inherently worse than the main subforum; you can exclude Worm stories while in Main with an aggregate setting, but you can also exclude all other stories by going to the Worm subforum.
Honestly never used the subforums, I just view threads from the main creative writing forum page.
Watched threads FTW.
Now, if you're, say, 10X as powerful as the average human, you may still be "used", but people are much more likely to actually pay you, try to avoid pissing you off, etc...
Nah, they are more likely to trick you instead.
 
Nah, they are more likely to trick you instead.
Trick, blackmail, guilt, peer pressure, or outright force via threat of punitative legal action.

And while, yes, you might get plenty of pay or luxuries, what you lose in the equation of freedom of personal action. Having the power but concealing it, on the other hand, leaves your choices your own.
 
Especially since IIRC Darkest Dungeon implies that the Ancestor's voice is something that 'your' (the inheritor's) mind hears directly, bypassing the ears entirely, and none of the rest of the party hear anything as the inheritor slowly goes insane.

Ever since I read this I've been looking for something and I found it. This is a look at how much having a voice over affects the gameplay in DD and why (also explain why it would be stupig if used in places like Skyrim)
 
Truly they say "if you can not defeat something then lead it".

Reminded me of this:


(those are scent organs though)
What the crap, scent organs are retractable, how in the shit do those fit inside its abdomen!? They're bigger than it is!

What the hell kind of moth is that?

Yeah, this bit can become very complicated.

You see, let's say that you're half as powerful as the average human. In many places people will still try to "use you". As an abused slave. That sucks.

Now, if you're, say, 10X as powerful as the average human, you may still be "used", but people are much more likely to actually pay you, try to avoid pissing you off, etc...

If you're as strong as the strongest fighter in the average nation, you're going to be outright courted, on average. But here on up you might have to worry about politics where they're specifically trying to kill you.

At 10x and up, you're probably looking at extensive bribes to get you to come work for them, along with sometimes some pretty elaborate control schemes.

I mean, we see it here where they rescue QA and promptly drafted her into the military, planning to use her for combat operations. She was never really asked, now was she? In the other fic, we see that they're planning to use her to help harvest the dungeon, an extremely dangerous task, and because she's seen as powerful, and having extreme potential, lots of gods want her.
People will always try to use you; that's what relationships are. Personal power\ability\notoriety\etc merely dictates to what kind of scale you will be used, and the odds of whether the people trying to use you will be willing to allow you to use them in return without you needing to fight them for it.

The only way to avoid being used by other people is to avoid other people and go full hermit, which is a lot harder than it sounds, because humans are social creatures.
 
What the crap, scent organs are retractable, how in the shit do those fit inside its abdomen!? They're bigger than it is!
They're like those party noisemakers, they inflate with air pressure. There was a nature documentary I saw on YouTube somewhere (but probably BBC affiliated) where someone was squeezing a moth's abdomen (probably a freshly dead one?) and making them pop out, along with footage of a live one flying along and doing it.
 
I just realized that QA still has the shape changing powers.

How will that be explained once/if it comes out?

I mean given that wounds do not transfer between forms, it is "clearly" not a Transformation. So who are people going to rationalize it?
 
How will that be explained once/if it comes out?

I mean given that wounds do not transfer between forms, it is "clearly" not a Transformation. So who are people going to rationalize it
Not exactly, there is no logical reason she shouldn't be capable of shifting damage away, if she turned into a dragon and got tail damage, it wouldn't have a way to pass, she is reconstructing her body from scratch.

My guess is that they would think Symbie is doing something similar to shards' breaker states, she takes Queen's mind and let's it survive in some other way, let's say a sub dimension that can compute, or even in her own systems, while reconstructing Queen's body to a certain form which she let Queen pilot.
 
I just realized that QA still has the shape changing powers.

How will that be explained once/if it comes out?

I mean given that wounds do not transfer between forms, it is "clearly" not a Transformation. So who are people going to rationalize it?
Clearly she's tossing her whole body in storage and replacing it with a much cooler and fancier flying dragonicorn body.
 
Clearly she's tossing her whole body in storage and replacing it with a much cooler and fancier flying dragonicorn body.
"How could you just ditch your original body like that!?"

"But the posts on the forums available from my connection suggested that you should always be yourself until you could be a Dragon? I am now myself as a Dragon... was this not a goal?"

"... I'm leaving this to the therapist, though I think they'll need a bigger couch..."
 
People will always try to use you; that's what relationships are. Personal power\ability\notoriety\etc merely dictates to what kind of scale you will be used, and the odds of whether the people trying to use you will be willing to allow you to use them in return without you needing to fight them for it.

The only way to avoid being used by other people is to avoid other people and go full hermit, which is a lot harder than it sounds, because humans are social creatures.
Aside: This psychological theory is one of several, and its attempts to explain altruism aren't well supported. Many supporters also have a tendency to use more negative/pessimistic language than the theory itself calls for, possibly due to certain philosophies. It's meant to be approximately "if the benefits of a social relationship outweigh the costs, then relations will continue." Again, though, it has trouble explaining altruism. EDIT: Unless you intended to state a philosophy as fact; I'd hope not.

I was going to suggest dragons then, but I realized that the arcology was Perth rather than Pern.
I made that exact same mistake when I started writing chapter 2-3ish. I had to review the spelling of Dragons of Pern to see if I was remembering it wrong (I was).


Clearly she's tossing her whole body in storage and replacing it with a much cooler and fancier flying dragonicorn body.
This is actually accurate. It's just not Valkyrie storage. :p
 
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I absolutely adore the idea of Ancestor!Taylor. It's hilarious. The Ancestor is always savage and his lines are so memorable I sometimes mutter them under my nose when doing something completely unrelated to playing DD. Can I please ask for more :oops:?
 
Alright, so I put a few sentences together and with the thought of 'what would make this sensible and incredibly horrific' and this came out. I have no excuses and it is poorly edited.

TW: Gore, violence, cannibalism, child abuse

Cultists and Cores

The mission was described as a quick in and out intelligence gathering. UNOMI wanted a brief look up close, in order to better task the investigators who would be following their flight. Part of the briefness was STRANET uncertainty as to how long they'd have an Antagonist free window to explore the hidden complex beneath the survival bunker. The only warning UNOMI gave was that the contents were 'likely to be disturbing'.

Disturbing, thought Sarah-Louise Galloway, was a massive understatement. A thought opened up the complete file they were given, including the list of topics the EOOUI had searched. It wasn't that Sarah-Louise needed to refresh her memory. She'd been a Valk long enough that pages written reports were read and memorized faster than she could speak a sentence. But after the hell that rested in the complex Sarah-Louise wanted to make sure that it wasn't her fault. That she wasn't to blame for the nightmares that Cara, her exploration partner, and her were doomed with.

The words were innocuous. 'Post-impact cults.' 'Valkyrie pilot enhancements.' How stupid had she been, to read these and assume an Antagonist cult had gotten it's hands on Valkyrie compatible girls for human experimenting? Sarah-Louise remembers having a flash of thought, wondering if the cultists had wanted to sync with Antagonists. Before the thought had disguised her. Now, she wished that was what they found.

"Any luck?" Dani asked, tone bored from the outside overwatch position she and her two flight mates had stayed in during the hour Sarah-Louise and Cara had explored.

Sarah-Louise sent an affirmative. She couldn't see Dani's expression, not from thousands of feet below her, but they'd worked together on a flight for so long she didn't need to. Dani knew that Sarah-Louise liked talking. That she'd chosen not to meant something. Dani flipped over to a private text channel.

"What's wrong S.L.?"

"Not Antagonist cult."

"What do you mean, it wasn't a cult?"

"Cult. Not Antagonist."

"Like, an old religion thing? Weird."


Sarah-Louise sent a denial beep. "Valkyrie."

"Uh, yeah, we already knew they had a Valk. Shit, unless, did you find another?"


Another denial beep. "Valkyrie cult."

Dani paused. A cult dedicated to Valkyries? Like a bunch of fans? That didn't sound so bad. Sarah-Louise sent a tight beam stream containing a video and without hesitation Dani played it. It was shaky footage of an older man, grey hair a messy tangle, as he triumphantly held up a cracked Valkyrie core. His voice was deep and confident, at odds with the wild look in his eyes.

"-will save us and we shall look upon the face of God with Fear and Awe! All hail the Core!"

The crowd roared in response, "All Hail!"

"From the Core we Come and to the Core we Leave." The name shouted before turning towards the overlooked girl beside him and thrusting the broken Valkyrie Core at her. The girl hesitated and in a painfully slow flash of light sync with the core and extended her frame. If it could be called a frame. Dani had never seen one so underdeveloped or biological. "Let Blood follow Blood!"

The crowd parted as a struggling man was brought forward. The struggling man was bound and gagged, his face bloody and beaten. Dani ran a sound parser, allowing her to determine the muffled noises he grunted as a repeated string of 'no, please, don't.'

It was the same sound parser that allowed her to clear up and enhance what the old man said when he rested a heavy hand on the Valkyrie's shoulder. "Don't make Taylor endure more lessons, Sabine."

The Valkyrie, clad in a red frame that moved with an odd liquidity, walked up to the struggling man.

"From your sins be cleansed. With your body we nourish the Holy Core. May She Awaken!"

The crowd roared again, jostling for position and nearly obscuring the movement of the Valkyrie as her frame grew tentacles and latched onto the struggling man. The repeated chant of "May She Awaken" wasn't loud enough to drown out the crunch of breaking bones and terrified screams as the Valkyrie's frame ate the prisoner.

Dani felt bile rise in her throat. That Valkyrie had just eaten a person. A living, breathing person.

"My god, that- that- Why would a Valkyrie do that?"

The response was immediate, another flash of communication carrying an encrypted video file. Dani paused for a full second, debating if she actually wanted to open it. In the end curiosity and duty guided her hand.

This time the video was clearly from a security camera. The room showed bare concrete, only a small drain in the floor to break the monotony. The same grey haired man was present, his hair less grey and more groomed then before. In front of him stood two clean faced little girls in over large adult shirts.

"Your parents have given you to us so that we may guide you towards Awakening." The man smiled gently, eyes greedy. "A great opportunity for you and for us. You see, we have a God in the bunker. She's sleeping now."

"When she getting up?" Lisped the smaller girl, a riot of dark hair streaming down her back.

The man chuckled and placed a hand on the smaller girl's head. "Well, we've been having trouble getting her to Awaken. We were hoping your sister could help us out."

The littler girl scoffed. "Symbie do anyfang."

The man smiled, white teeth flashing predatorily at the taller girl. "Let us hope so." He ran his hand down the smaller girl's hair, a possessive movement that caused the taller girl to tense. "Let us all hope so."

The video ended with a series of medical notes. The tone was clinical and concise. The picture stomach turning. Dani didn't force herself to read it all, couldn't have. Luckily she didn't have to in order to understand what it meant.

Sabine refused order to... Punishment administered to Taylor was... Expected recovery time...

It was the most recent ones and the oldest that were most horrifying. The oldest because of how young the little girl was. The recent because of how damaging and how carelessly they were described.

Dani's hands clenched in futile rage. They'd hurt the Valkyrie's little sister so that she'd obey. Systematically, knowingly, repeatedly. Hell, they'd intentionally given the little sister brain damage because the Valkyrie refused to enslave and eat a human convoy. Dani was aware that she knew their names, both the Valkyrie's and the little sister. She couldn't bare to humanize them. She already felt too much of their pain, knowing how lucky she was that their story was not hers.

"Tell me all those fuckers are dead."

This video was a series of clips taken from security cameras. The red framed Valkyrie may not have been much against a Type, but she waded through the cultists like they were water balloons. Dani didn't know whether to be disgusted or proud when the Valkyrie consumed every cultist she came across. The last clip was the longest. It was a scene from the very place Sarah-Louise was standing, caught by the bunker door security camera. The red framed Valkyrie paused upon exit, standing there without movement for nearly ten minutes before speaking. "Yes Symbie, the sky is pretty."
 
Anna must never see that video. She'd track that bunker down and Wave Motion Gun it right down to the Earth's core just to be sure.
 
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