Hmmm
Has Taylor been stated to actually be in this story? Cause if not I'd prefer if she wasn't in this particular story because I want to see QA do her thing without Taylor's intervention, maybe focus on her relationship to Anna instead?
I'm not telling you not to include her, I just feel like she ends up intervening when QA's about to something crazy like build a bomb because she's pissed, I mean she was stopped but not because Taylor locked down shard systems or whatever.
But regardless of that thanks for updating, I'm sure whatever you write will be good.
Edit: is Symbie meant to be Taylor?