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theaceoffire said:
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Huh, the Darkness place with Jackie was at an earlier time period than this one. Pringles didn't exist yet. Go figure.
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later time period than this one. Alice was born in 1856 according to wiki
theaceoffire said:
Agents move frantically
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moved?
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intellectual diffencent
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intellectually deficient? Edit: you might have missed deficient when editing idk
 
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Huh. I think this is the first time I've felt this level of revulsion while reading a piece of fiction, while at the same time applauding that same piece of fiction.
It feels like the villains are getting just the amount of screentime they need to get fleshed out while also getting the minimum amount of screentime, if you know what I mean? I really don't want to see them more then I need to. You're doing good job.
 
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Especially since Wonderland's Darkness was infesting most of London now. And starting to spread further and further into England in general. And infusing into all these children that were so carefully being tended to at the moment.
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Hmmmm, Champions of the DarkLight maybe (the weird faction that is the Shadow Ofadam and the Heart/Light) well anyway, they shall be a part of Wonderland.
 
I had never played the game. I knew pitiful amounts of lore. I went to read the wiki of the MostDeliciousSnack 'Good Doctor'. Jesus fucking Christ, do I regret it.

Now, I want to see the dude soul get fucking cheese grated into oblivion until the only thing that motherfucker can feel is Pain.
 
TheScrub said:
I had never played the game. I knew pitiful amounts of lore. I went to read the wiki of the MostDeliciousSnack 'Good Doctor'. Jesus fucking Christ, do I regret it.

Now, I want to see the dude soul get fucking cheese grated into oblivion until the only thing that motherfucker can feel is Pain.
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Good news! His soul is being sand papered away by hundreds of hungry eel mouths until it's consumed in it's entirety, to be dissolved over a thousand years in the sarlac pit Shadow ofAdam's stomach.
 
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I had never played the game. I knew pitiful amounts of lore. I went to read the wiki of the MostDeliciousSnack 'Good Doctor'. Jesus fucking Christ, do I regret it.

Now, I want to see the dude soul get fucking cheese grated into oblivion until the only thing that motherfucker can feel is Pain.
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Oh, he doesn't feel at all. After all, you need skin to feel, flesh to carry it along, and bones to guide it all to the brain. Unfortunately for him, his heart is black enough for Shadow to turn him into an object lesson in calling the Dark upon your head like an idiot.
 
Wonderland is coming to tooown ~
Or was it bringing down the House? 🤔

Either way, nice update and a big yay for Darkness for Everyone ~
 
Oh be wary london town
The Children of the shadow are gathering
They will see your fetid dreams and turn them to blooming nightmares
 
Hmmmm wonder if theres going to be a lot more guests/vanderes raised frome the children of londen being imbude vhite darklight whitch allows them to come and go through the wonderland and if mr cat will be hawing a lot of new paws to use in the material world to fetch/colect stuf to ad to the wonderland
 
Got the game, am in the middle of playing, I really buy into the fact that Alice is a god Ascendant and that Wonderland is her divine realm. So it infecting london? well! that's just her influence growing not her madness!
 
The Faction of DarkLight​
Leaders: Shadow Ofadam (The Devourer of Darkness, Guardian of the Heart/Light) and The Heart/Light (The Light in all's heart)

Sub-Leaders: Alice (Wonderlandian, Princess of Wonderland)

Territories: Wonderland, The Lands Infested with Wonder (Currently only London)

Admins: Cheshire Cat (Wonderlandian, The Vague Speaker, The Smiling Trickster)

Members: The Children of London (Wonder Londoner)

Possible Members?: Orihime Inoue.

Cultures: Wonderlandian (Inhabitant of Wonderland), Wonder Londoner (A Londoner infested with Wonder)
 
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A big part of the charm the story from the two games had was you were never sure if Alice actually had some kind of super power from being driven kinda insane. It's implied she does considering she manages to escape and doesn't get killed in the streets of London and at the end she uses her blade from wonderland to kill the doctor. Really wish the game had a bloody epilogue.

So question this always focus on the aspect of the, whatever he is, that has the research power that isn't currently the case right?
 
Just hope the Fanfiction dot net mods do not try and censor or otherwise crackdown on your posted stories. They can be pretty random and hypocritical sometimes. Seen several VERY good stories just deleted, without any warning or contact made with the Author, literally YEARS after they had been posted and popular on the site. Like, one of my favorite stories had been on there for a decade, then they removed the entire story out of nowhere, which sucked cuz the author did not have it posted/saved elsewhere. 112 chapters and over two million words.
That's why, while I still enjoy reading Fanfiction, If I find a story there I like, I ask the author if they've posted elsewhere, usually recommending less sensitive/impulsive/pc-police mod sites like Questionably Questing.
 
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To be honest, I'm not quite enjoying this arc quite as much as I enjoyed the first 3 arcs. Probably because of the lack of actual dialogue going on. I hope this arc ends soonish.
 
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