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So... good resolution with the Sadism God-Parasite, and the ticking clock on the FATED EVENT end of the next (1 or so) jumps, the tiny tiny detail that Adam has been unknowingly starving himself and that the Bastard Benefector is an incoming snack, is like a it goes from possible slight of dread into the downright hilarious instead... :) :) :)

Oracle "Isley sexiness overload" causes cuteness overload

now what i'm really really anxiously antecipating is what will be the next stage: from a shard reincarnation in Worm and world jumping shenanigans, Cultivation Universe as a recursive existence that was seeded again, to a seeding voyage into the void that escalated in a jump chain as a Benefactor and a grudge with a Bastard Benefactor that turns to be a Godly Parasite Puppet...

what will be next in the madhouse? *grin*
 
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The next one? Easy.
A hot blond lady with legs for days will walk in and smooch Sarah and Sarah and Pamely without warning.
... her name? Baby Doll.
 
The fact it's the type of food Adam tends to eat the most of though? Comically bad decision making there, Sadism! The scales are just that different.

I don't think its a scale thing, I think its conflicting natures.

Recall in the Faith Jump, he spent his entire time as an (illegally adorable) entity that ate bad emotions. Was so efficient at it he did it in his sleep even. Faith is one of his major power sources, and his particular brand is cleansing/consuming negative emotion.

And uh, a living personification of sadisim is following him. It's gonna walk up and pick a fight by waving a giant 'eat me!' sign around.
 
Huh. So apparently there might have been a bit of that vengeful karma wave that combined with Adam, to get that predatory mindset. Because honestly, those comments of 'hungry' and 'tasty' there, while also very creepy/disturbing, kind of fit in with what I'd imagine there being in the mentality in the 'anti-BROB' whatever that was.

Also puts forth the idea that 'Sadism' might also be the same kind of being as the bits that got merged into Adam. But if not, there is a bit of irony that being a Benefactor wouldn't have necessarily caused as many issues as the parasite seems to have thought. Barring the idea that 'CYOA' and 'Jumpchain' are two separate 'species', with the parasite only preying on Jumpchain Benefactors. Which, if I'm reading this right, a 'Core'/Jumper might well create the Benefactors, with this parasite then intercepting/infiltrating and destroying it to take the place. Would explain why Sarah might not remember the original benefactor. Also lines up to why Adam got linked to the Warehouse as he did; The warehouse would literally be the Benefactor, rather than it being something due to there being so much damage.

There's also the sad probably confirmation that any pre-Adam Sarah's are pretty much gone forever barring time travel shenanigans which Adam (but not Sarah) are pretty much against. At the likely best, there would be records, something that might end up being obtained when Adam devours the Parasite. Along with maybe the dumped pieces that Adam hadn't gotten to just yet, due to them not being there. To be honest, that's a bit more of a 'upset the parasite even more', with the idea that everything it lost? That it had to give up? Taken, restored, and made better that it could. That, combined with Sarah obtaining what the Parasite 'gave'/took from/denied her, would just be even more glorious of a final moments for it to realize.

I suppose it might be possible to do a 'recreate the damaged' as a 'good as new' sort of situation, but there's probably only so far that Adam or Sarah could take it. Like the destroyed realities? Probably not. Really depends on what all the Parasite ended up doing, especially in areas where Benefactors would be around. It's also not likely to be able to recreate/restore the taken Cores, without maybe pulling a Chrono Trigger style saving thing, and that would be Sarah, without Adam, for obvious reasons. Outside of maybe a 'this is what it looked like in the past'. A solution that has the philosophical problems. But hey, it mirrors some of what is going on here. And it is possible that the Parasite didn't fully destroy all those Cores. Maybe it even kept them, deeming them as 'vital'. If not, then Adam might be able to spot them floating around.

I also somewhat wonder if the other Adams have that same Hunger for parasites. I'd imagine that the reports back from Warehouse Adam might end up causing one of them to start making some support stuff. Even if Warehouse Adam does something like that himself. I can already see the Benefactor/Core 'offspring', where Adam sends out additional Warehouse 'seeds'. And these would likely end up going into more 'dangerous' or 'unstable' areas, since they've got so much more efficient resource management, and thus the cost/benefit ratios are different. Heck, there'll probably be a network of system updates as each new Warehouse Adam will work on different things, see different jumps. And those, likely would end up going after the Parasites. Which, in and of itself might end up getting neat/useful data.

Also makes me wonder if that 'other Warehouse' that Sarah saw was actually a fully working one, and not just a Parasite infected one. And if she even knew that at the time. Because saying that there's a parasite that specifically targets any Warehouse style soul setup would be rather alarming. And well, telling her past self might not even bee seen as that important since Adam himself would notice/get it handled in roughly 1-2 jumps anyways. And alerting him to it anyways would likely have ruined some of what already happened this jump. And well, it's something that Sarah would 100% tell Adam about ASAP and ignore the 'no spoilers' Adam insists on.
 
So... good resolution with the Sadism God-Parasite, and the ticking clock on the FATED EVENT end of the next (1 or so) jumps, the tiny tiny detail that Adam has been unknowingly starving himself and that the Bastard Benefector is an incoming snack, is like a it goes from possible slight of dread into the downright hilarious instead... :) :) :)
Speaking of which....
Am I the only one who has an image of an eldritch abyss filled with teeth and a hand holding a wriggling worm above it?
 
Sadism answers exactly how the fuck a Benefactor managed to be that insanely evil though. The fact this is a God Eater is pretty fucked up to be honest. The fact it's the type of food Adam tends to eat the most of though? Comically bad decision making there, Sadism! The scales are just that different. I guess you could say, Adam specializes in eldritch parasite removal at this point.
Had another funny idea. Research is gonna have a field day with this Parasite. A life form capable of subverting beings of neigh omnipotent power and a growth apparatus that had been tested for unknowable millennia? Yes please!
 
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Horse-hair worm with delusions of grandeur: *incoherent screaming*
Adam: This is one delicious pasta dish.
 
from a shard reincarnation in Worm and world jumping shenanigans, Cultivation Universe as a recursive existence that was seeded again, to a seeding voyage into the void that escalated in a jump chain as a Benefactor and a grudge with a Bastard Benefactor that turns to be a Godly Parasite Puppet...

what will be next in the madhouse? *grin*

My money's on Adam becoming the unstoppable rolling tide of karma that caused the Sadistic Omnipotent Bastard to have to flee for it's existence in part 1.
 
I also somewhat wonder if the other Adams have that same Hunger for parasites
Original Adam did eat the Entities, aka Reality parasites. Though a little indirectly.
MLP Adam ate a lot of magic
Baku Adam ate negative emotions, which probably applies here.
RWBY Adam sorta ate some grim, which are arguably negative emotion parasites on the planet.
Star Wars Adam didn't eat much
Pokemon Adam sorta ate a pokemon that was acting like a parasite.

Cultivator Adam delighted in consuming the Bone Walker thing, which was not only parasitic itself, but used small parasite like things to attack, which Adam also consumed with great relish.

Warehouse Adam is now smelling a Negative Emotion Warehouse Parasite. This is totally his bread and butter : )
 
My money's on Adam becoming the unstoppable rolling tide of karma that caused the Sadistic Omnipotent Bastard to have to flee for it's existence in part 1.

It's been brought up before.

I don't think its likely since that event was described as a collective action rather than a singular entity. Plus Adam hates time travel, a lot. He wouldn't willingly take part in a bootstrapping paradox. Actually I got the impression that if you told him he had the option to fuck with time travel or cease to eixist, he'd still have to think about it.
 
Random stuff and thoughts: Da Plot.
First of all, the road map for the future looks a bit odder than I expected.

It is a side effect due to the nature of the upcoming plot development, but uh... Yeah, didn't see it coming.

SO! A quick summary!

Arc 1: Origin, CYOA with a broken document.
Arc 2: Cultivation, with a broken body.
Arc 3: Jumpchain, with a broken Warehouse.

In addition:
Arc 1 covers the spawn, stabilization, and establishment of Adam Adventure Burns.
Arc 2 examines concepts and the nature of using an idea to grow ideas to act as an operating system.
Arc 3 explores working with a partner and also will become far more clear in the next couple of chapters.

The next bit is going to be a bit off for me, but the more I think about it the more it feels like the way to go.

It is a feature that would benefit Origin, allow exploring media a bit even without being a Warehouse, and yet is going to be a bit more odd than previous elements.

Also, Adam Burns will be the main character for the fourth Arc.

I find it fascinating that sending out a fragment of yourself could lead to all these side paths yet still interlock in such a fashion, even when the journey was very unclear when it started for me.

I would LIKE to say that was all on purpose, and that it didn't somehow magically work out this way...

So I will. It was all planned. Anyone who says otherwise was a doubter. :D

Next Arc feels like it could be fun!
 
I'm not sorry to say I skippdd most of the FF8 bit. It was too outside my wheelhouse.
Glad we're back in a universe where is it vastly harder to kill yourself via time travel paradox... I think.
Also, that parasite/benefactor is gonna get pimpslapped. Or randomly 'sploded.
 
...We already got the reincarnation thing in the cultivation arc so maybe the fragment will make himself a body to go Planeswalking and/or maybe go full Commander on an omniversal fixing road trip? (I personally really hope the second is true because I'd really like to read a Commander Fics written by theaceoffire :whistle:)
 
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Heyo! So, I started reading this fic and I am currently on the mlp world and I have to ask... Does this fic stays this... Kinky? I mean it's funny at times but also fairly ankward other times....
 
Wound up rewatching all the Ghostbusters movies before watching the new one. Felt like it would be a good setting to go to, or to have merged with another that the MC can go to. I mean, it kinda comes across as a collapsing reality with how frequently it is invaded/connected with Ghosts/Gods/Demons. Not sure what setting it could merge well with though.
 
Wound up rewatching all the Ghostbusters movies before watching the new one. Felt like it would be a good setting to go to, or to have merged with another that the MC can go to. I mean, it kinda comes across as a collapsing reality with how frequently it is invaded/connected with Ghosts/Gods/Demons. Not sure what setting it could merge well with though.
Sounds like a place that needs a halping blue bone daddy!
Edit: sounds weirder out loud, but I gotta stand by it.
 
Heyo! So, I started reading this fic...
Welcome!

...and I am currently on the mlp world and I have to ask... Does this fic stays this... Kinky?
I mean, it is a LONG story, and while I don't go to explicit I cover a LOT of odd scenarios.

Some stuff is played silly, some areas have heavy jokes and innuendos and teasing, but nothing nc17 or like that.

I mean it's funny at times but also fairly awkward other times....
...Now that you point it out, it does sound a bit like those awkward teenage years.
 
The *really* awkward stuff will happen if Adam ever runs into a fanfiction setting.
Theres enough generic and specific fanfiction jumps across all drives for some rather silly things to happen.

Imagine Adam deciding on a vaccation and running into Mr. Black! :evil:
 
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