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You know at this rate I fully expect Adam to at some point declare in front of several Multiversal spanning sects that he doesn't care about "something as worthless as power".
You know the Literal God figures that have spent millennia desperatly searching for even the slightest hint of power?
 
He said thats where it is on normal cultivators, which Adam isn't. He also refers to it as the seven paths and Qi sea which sounds like they are separate

No..?
Adam had seven routes... one for each limb, one to his head, one in his torso... and one that was tied to his heart, the conceptual core.

His thoughts were thrown into disarray further as his OTHER six meridian routes connected to his Qi Sea.

The deep, bottomless Sea... now had six other deep pits being carved in around it.

Like connected lakes... though they grew deeper and deeper, wider and longer.

One acted like a ring, surrounding the Qi Sea itself. This was his chest route, and it acted like a moat... he could FEEL it acting like a spiritual barrier, the first to defend his inner energies."
He has a Qi sea in his heart alright the other seven are Qi lakes that connect to it. Your mixing up the name of the technique with what the technique does.
 
Was anyone still within him as he broke through? I know he was going to make sure that nothing odd happened to that spot again... I can't help but think something may have got supercharged somewhere in there.

So just how many Spirit Beasts are running the heck away now? Anything that can remotely sense him may be fleeing the area in all directions. Though with Adam, that's just common sense.

I can't help but wonder if those kids will be future leaders or founders of their own sects. They'll return having broken through at least two bumps and with vastly improved foundational cultivation techniques.

I'm wondering what the details of the deal actually were. Folks have been married off for much less. I'm not sure if wars will have been due to what he has handed out, but alliances and very long term sworn friendship until they repay the debt would be a minimum for some.

The Burning Sage is just starting his legend. I can't wait for it to seep into those kids heads that he and his guards were running the heck away as fast as they could and were utterly terrified of something. I can see many private oaths sworn then. They and their future families might own him a debt, but they will never, ever, ever remotely consider going where that group was terrified of.
 
Gods! This story is hilariously amazing! Great work! It's making my Laugh out Loud moments more frequent that I think people around me at that time think I've gone nuts!
 
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I can already picture Rockette when he reaches past the 9th order, she's going to be a cute chibi magical girl, she will wave her wand and everything will be alright...:D

On another note, Adam is F****** OP, I LOVE IT!!!! Keep it up! 👍
 
stories of Seventh Order children of only 13 years old or so creating a kingdom?
Given how bullshit the protagonist is. Even considering that is ?one year? of cultivation. I would say most of these guys are the high realm minions or avatars. And the rest are children with super monster talents, super spirit, got a kingdom of resources bleed on them and that some shenanigan/karma that even some protagonist would call bullshit^^. Or combinations of those.

Anyway I like the breakthrough scene, not only show a awesome 'ki sea' compare to some novels, but also show what can become 'what happen when the sun scene'. He is not the Sun (yet). But I don't see anyone trying to correct him of his 'stealthy breakthrough'. So yeah I expect in the far future a 'Unconquered Sun is in stealth mode' scene where the plane is trying to understand what apocalypse is happening and is just the MC taking his time looking at the data before leaving the 'stealth mode'.

Also I hope the MC use his other inner selfs to do SCIENCE, doing experiments and helping doing their part in research and development. one of the 200+ had show that they can act a little bit different from one another^^. So yeah create a particle of conceptual iron and shot it in the layer 20 to 40 or something like that.

That could be really funny with he doing a actual stealth research/lab work and the outside world would only know when he truly do a massive mistake (or success).

this post is getting too big (sorry about that). So to finish. Ouch those kids. It even worse because is entire plane doing that and untold number of mortals dying for that. Those super model in appearance beings truly suffer to reach their peaks (in general).
Well the MC is here^^. I expect changes in this plane. Even only from him consuming bad energy and purify causing a plane wide change at some point^^ (it already pass country size long ago in my mind).
 
Again, bringing up these concerns to the others in his group? They just... showed how much he didn't understand normal cultivators.
Poisoning yourself? That was the basis of cultivation.

Glass houses Mr. drinks acidic tea for fun.

Sister Quan nodded. "The guard will ALSO call for intervention if the children get Adam excited to try something." She sighed. "That's what I'm MOST worried about. I still remember wanting to have a wings when I was a kid... would I have been smart enough to NOT ask for a set if a guy like Brother Adam had wondered along?"

Sister Dian blinked. Hadn't she wanted to be a unicorn as a child? Or at least to have a cool horn?

wings (x)
Horn(s) (x)
signs of the apocal- I mean, significant signs of Adam stealing yo girl.
well not in the trash fetish way more in the, from your universe/reality/conceptual plane of existence way
 
Those comments on the cultivation methods plus critical analysis... It's like Adam is a teacher marking essays.

-angry red cross- "This scarlet-crane-technique doesn't even do what you say it does, 0 marks! Review Designing Cultivation Techniques 401, page 2043, and re-submit your assignment. "


Also, I have a feeling that Foundation Restoration companion cultivation technique is going to end up being one of those heaven defying treasures.
 
I think the only 'wives' that he has are Simmy and Sammy. Narwhal and CD (Cyber Dragon) are both dating him but also want to be wed soon IIRC while Twilight and Nightmare Moon are dating each other but have left the 'herd' so to speak. They're still friends with Adam and his harem, but less than intimate lovers I believe.
 
So just how many Spirit Beasts are running the heck away now? Anything that can remotely sense him may be fleeing the area in all directions. Though with Adam, that's just common sense.
Because of the Formation that Adam made, the spirit beasts might be coming closer, since the big scary animal disappeared. Clearly, it died, and they can steal some of its latent power by eating it. Adam sealed all energies leaving or entering the area, then flooded himself with his stockpiled energy to advance in rank. Not even the Guards and the Sister, who are literally right outside the tent, can sense Adam right now, and do not yet know that he advanced in rank.
I know that this is a Xianxia staple, but maybe you should remove this bit, or rephrase it as "more radiant" or something like that.
Why? It is quite clear. "Fair" skin is skin that is free of blemishes, and is generally paler. The Chinese and Japanese saw/see pale, blemish-free skin as attractie.
 
You know, I personally feel that his research is going to point out a few critical clues that he has already noticed as most of the reason for why his advancement was the way it was and just WHY the size of his internal reserve is like a massive hydrosphere rather than the expected Qi sea. The size and likely ease for each order depends on the foundation as the most critical thing and while you can substitute raw power for skill/hard work, well, he already knows one of the critical aspects from the data he has ripped out.

Doing it the proper and stable way likely takes time and effort and most cultivation methods are slapdash and crude things that ignore stability because it will take too long and so each advancement requires a lot of power to do the repairs and upgrades and likely does an inferior job, and with some of the bottlenecks being critical areas that need more power because of the extensive changes. And because most cultivation methods only measure in how long it would take instead of how effective it would be in the long term....

Essentially, if you would not mind the comparison, most cultivation methods use jenga blocks and increasing amounts of duct tape, glue and braces with bits of actual construction material being thrown in occasionally and then having a fluid/compressed gas pumped into the structure and hoping it holds even as you keep jamming more things in and layering more duct tape to hold it together.

Adam on the other hand uses proper and actually effective materials and gear to make his system that is made to purpose and for resiliency. Sure, it does not have all the extra bits to make it all fancy... but while the other one stalls and randomly explodes/bursts/turns into an element, his will raise the metaphorical eyebrow and keep on going because it was made to last.



Also, regarding some things from the last entry as well, and coming over to this one... Adam is pretty much an Old Testament style angel. For do they not say 'Do not be afraid!' Angels are eldritch. Angels are commonly seen as good (even if they have a higher level of understanding that might not mesh up with our perspective) and angels are most importantly, messengers and soldiers of the divine.

For the hand of Righteousness has been raised, and unto the righteous and just it holds healing and life, a support for their labors and a balm for their souls. Unto the wicked and cruel it holds the sword Judgement, to render unto them the fate they have earned and sown.
 
Why? It is quite clear. "Fair" skin is skin that is free of blemishes, and is generally paler. The Chinese and Japanese saw/see pale, blemish-free skin as attractie.

I'm sorry, but it's not quite that clear cut. First of all, fair generally does refer to whiter skin (when used in context of skin), and second, in Xianxia, the way fair is used is always in association with white, which leaves no wiggle room about what it may mean.
 
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