Good sir, your skills are wasted on Eva.
... That sounds wrong.
Good sir, you do Eva more justice than it deserves. Oh, that's better.
Also, how many Seraph children are there, exactly? First few chapters muddle it a little bit. How are there seventeen thrones when there are only twelve more opponents according to the scrolls? Will some of them not participate? And why would they go by one if they are sentient?
Maybe I should read to the end before asking questions.
I am in the middle of the Chapter 2, by the way. Good stuff so far, even if I really don't like where all this is going...
"Abandon hope all ye who enter here" seems strangely appropriate to what I feel.
Oh well, no pain no gain. ( I'll stop with the platitudes now. )

Welcome aboard! Always nice to have another reader. I hope I shall continue to entertain you.

And your location says "Russia." Soon enough, you'll realise the motherland has a part to play in all this...
 
And your location says "Russia." Soon enough, you'll realise the motherland has a part to play in all this...
Put explosives into Evas of other countries then activate them while saying:
"From Russia with love! :cool:"

Something like that? ... Might even be hero by pure accident by destroying Evas after killing last seraph, but moment before Instrumentality plan start... but doubt that.
Though there is question if pilots from other countries would try to be faster in sabotage of enemies.
 
Welcome aboard! Always nice to have another reader. I hope I shall continue to entertain you.

And your location says "Russia." Soon enough, you'll realise the motherland has a part to play in all this...
How many times do I have to tell you people that no one in Russia says "Motherland" or "comrade" or "Red October, let the blood flow to the hymn of Revolution!" Huh?
:p
Well, then I probably should read faster, don't I?
 
How many times do I have to tell you people that no one in Russia says "Motherland" or "comrade" or "Red October, let the blood flow to the hymn of Revolution!" Huh?
:p
Well, then I probably should read faster, don't I?

Certainly not in our world. But this Russia has gone back to Communism's "loving embrace" and has seen fit to wrap much of eastern Europe and Alaska in a...ha ha...loving...ha ha hah...blanket of equality...(Lord Sovereign literally falls of the sofa laughing)
 
That's the guy, stupid Shinji!
Hahaha, I laughed so hard about that. She's started even earlier than in canon, hasn't she? Poor Shinji.
..well that didn't take long.
High five, Turing! Asuka's mad at Shinji, all right with the world! ( it's actually a quote from a fanfic, can't place which one. Maybe the one that was both Peggy Sue and Post 3I? Another Try or something like that. )
Did I just...make friends with someone?
His bewilderment really sells it.
"I was sure I was safe that day, how the hell did it happen?"
(Frankly, I am doing nearly chapter-by-chapter reviewy thing because I've recently found out how to multiquote as much as reading your fic feels more like reading a novel than... well, a fic )

Finished Chapter 3.
Misato, get off your high horse, I say!:lol
Ten days in and you expect Shinji to behave like a soldier and unquestioningly follow orders after you all had collectively guilt-tripped him by a wounded clone of his deceased mother ( that you don't even call "she" ) into piloting a giant monstrosity straight out of Dr. Freud's nightmares. ( or his wet dreams. Has anyone ever done a psychological evaluation of the good doctor himself? )
Alcoholism and making fun over a sixteen year's old manhood, an act so childish it shouldn't survive an impact with reality anywhere outside the grade school, ( dramatic exaggeration here, move along ) both don't really help your case.o_O

Oh, and before people start gathering a crusade to Purge teh Heresy, I'm talking about Sovereign!Misato, not Canon!Misato. ( Susano, God rest your soul. Haha, sorry, just got in the mood. ;) )
She's a good person, don't misunderstand me, especially considering other people around her.
Gendo, you asshooooooooooooole! The bar isn't set very high, admittedly.
Ritsuko, on the other hand, is actually likable! How weird is that.
 
I can't even begin with how delighted I am to see people enjoy my shit. And yes, I have a thing with my writing, go big or go home. And I was aiming for something "novel like" with Sovereignty. It seems I have succeeded. :)

Yeah, god bless Susano. SV would not be the same without him.
 
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He stepped away, as if they were a cursed demonic chalice, long suppressed anger bubbling and boiling within him again. He could picture the cold blue staring down at him, with either apathy or disdain, as the voice which haunted his dreams commanded Rei to get in Unit 01 all those weeks ago, echoed throughout his memory.
Fuck. "Daddy issues" doesn't even begin to cover it.
No, no, no, no, she is a clone of mother. You cannot find her attractive.
Fuckity fuck. "Mommy issues" doesn't quite cut it, either.
Hmm. While I'm at it, how about some proof-reading? ( Irregular af, sadly )
( or it means something entirely different from what I think ;) )
Her first attempt to open it ended in failure, as the searing heat caused her to snarl in pain. But Ritsuko, never being one for giving up, grit her teeth, curled her fingers around the latch and pulled hard.
"Gasp!" :o
So that's what happened to her hands!
For that moment alone, Sovereign!Ritsuko, you gain my undying respect. Even dumping Gendo Ikari is ( slightly ) less heroic than this.
... Though she hasn't gotten over him, has she?
Cold as ice and uncaring as the Universe.
Hey! That's not nice! Apologize to the Universe, now!
Seriously though, while the Universe isn't a nice place, neither it's actively malicious. Like certain someone...
So he hates the clone of his wife, even if he has to use her. ( Um, why does he need Yui's clone, again? In canon, it seems any clone with Angel DNA would suffice. Hmmm. )
Boo-fucking-hoo! "I created ( what I consider ) an abomination and I don't like it!"
Grow up. Oh wait, you can't!:p
"And on top of that...they're creepy together aren't they?" Misato added.
Oh shush, you racist Misato!
Shinji's trying not to freak out over the thought of his father molesting the clone of his mother, something no one who wants to stay sane should experience.
To Gendo's small credit, he doesn't seem to think about it at all, but I've been burned about drawing assumptions before finishing reading up to date before. Maybe it says more about Shinji being a sixteen year old teenager than Gendo being Gendo, for once.
TV Series and Rebuild are separate continuities, unless the theory that Rebuild being basically a Peggy Sue is accurate.
It's Peggy Sue?! How do you fuck up even more than the first time around? Kaworuuuuuuu! You stupid fish!
No, I'm not losing control. I'll wait for orders...
And that's where it horribly backfires. Egads.
Orders are important, just... not when you have to make split-second decisions on the field when the Operation Control wouldn't even have time to react. X-COM doesn't count, obviously. :p

Military sci-fi, the bane of free will, morality, basic decency and Geneva convention. Eh.
Right then. Finished Chapter 4, started chapter five before noticing, but I think I'll turn in for six hours or so. Really good stuff. What am I gonna do after I finish this?
... Probably stalk the "All Strypgia's fault" tag again, what else.
Raiseth out.
 
He was still fearful of what duty had outlined for him, and Shinji reckoned he'd always be afraid of it. But Misato, NERV, humanity, and the strange girl that confounded him so, needed him to do it. Or else everything died.
No pressure, Shinji-kun!
The abomination Rei Ayanami is to have its heretical filth erased from the face of God's Earth. It must no be allowed to mar our passage. Kill on sight.
What's with you people and clones? Damned purists...



Yeah, that about sums it up. Three demigods, each billions years old, slain by a boy who can't even legally drink alcohol for four more years. Gaze upon, ye mighty, and despair.

Sergeant Yukimura lowered his them
... I am not sure what you wanted to say here, sorry.

Finished Chapter 5.
So there is a shadow cabal ( not SEELE ) of world rulers arranging things behind the scenes. Gives me Orwellian vibes, it does.:D
Well, let's see how that works out for them...
 
... I am not sure what you wanted to say here, sorry.

Fixed, it was meant to be something about him lowering his binoculars.

Finished Chapter 5.
So there is a shadow cabal ( not SEELE ) of world rulers arranging things behind the scenes. Gives me Orwellian vibes, it does.:D
Well, let's see how that works out for them...

GAAFT (Global Allied Armed Forces Treaty) is no shadow cabal. They are a public presence formed out of convenience and necessity for the Seraphim war, and also symbolise that perhaps the war mongering ways of the past are done. Granted, they are effectively a board of dictators or slightly authoritarian leaders thinking about pushing out a possible threat, but when this threat is Gendo fucking Ikari...
 
Fixed, it was meant to be something about him lowering his binoculars
Ah. I see that now.
GAAFT (Global Allied Armed Forces Treaty) is no shadow cabal. They are a public presence formed out of convenience and necessity for the Seraphim war, and also symbolise that perhaps the war mongering ways of the past are done. Granted, they are effectively a board of dictators or slightly authoritarian leaders thinking about pushing out a possible threat, but when this threat is Gendo fucking Ikari...
... You need all you can get, and then some, I agree.
So not really like 1984 at all, I see. They'll get at ripping each others' throats the second there would be no more Seraphims, won't they? If SEELE doesn't manage to Tang everybody first, that is.
 
... You need all you can get, and then some, I agree.
So not really like 1984 at all, I see. They'll get at ripping each others' throats the second there would be no more Seraphims, won't they? If SEELE doesn't manage to Tang everybody first, that is.

We'll cross that bridge when we get there. That is, if the Seraphim would so kindly permit...
 
Say, have you read Lost Fleet? Because if it's just a coincidence, I will be sad. :cry:
"Things to do with Ayanami-san I presume? Well as long as you take protection everything will be fine." The two students had to stifle their sniggers when their classmate's face turned redder than the eyes of an enraged Seraph.
Ugh, the cringe is real, the cringe is real!
That's probably just me being angry with him. Father isn't a pleasant man but he's not...evil...that's just ridiculous...
Oh, you poor, naive, stupid Shinji...
It had taken great effort to convince her to put something more than "butter" in a sandwich. Even then they were limited, as he'd discovered she was vegetarian. Something to do with "the bond I have with every living creature."
But plants are living things, too! How could you, (Rei)Lilith!:o
All right, sorry, don't want it to devolve into an argument about Real Life Vegetarianism. Besides, I have no issue with it, so why do I even?..
Ah yes, to get a rise out of people.

Oh, by the way. There seems to be world-spanning plot to get Asuka and Shinji together. How in God's name does that work? Just bring two teenagers together and hope for the best? Not a bad idea, but what if: Shinji was gay; Asuka was a lesbian; Rei decided she was a lesbian? There are also two more otherwise unengaged people with them...

"Section 2 have reported that Ayanami-san is spending a great deal of time with your son. Should any action be taken?" Kozo inquired.
Kozo, Kozo, Kozo... You're even more of a Gendo's hand puppet than in the original.

Grammar Nazi strikes again! ("Vague 80th Batman sound effect in the background")
Then, it faded, when the memory
never find boyfriends

The whole section is somewhat grammatically unsound. It does not diminish the General's backstory, but you'd want to look at that at your later convenience, I think.

A lack of trench coat telling all.
Wha?
The Emperor in Britain
Maybe of Britain? I'm not sure. Also, Yamato-san seems like a decent fellow.
This of course was on the subject of the monumental cultural changes the General had brought about since accumulating power. As Japan's population was already in decline, even before Second Impact, a birth increase was needed. To achieve this, she'd ordered enhanced sex education in schools, smashing the ice on this awkward matter, slashing work shifts to eight hours a day, creating a national "dating", as the westerners put it, organization, and offering financial encouragement for couples to have babies.
Well, well, well. I approve. :lol
Again, not sure.
remembering how he had to
he found he enjoyed it
I hate pronouns, too, but that doesn't mean you get to murder them in cold blood, Sovereign.;)
Not out of anything personal of course
Again, wha? ( I hope my criticism doesn't dishearten you. If it does, then man up, you pussy! You are the best and I want the world to know it! Now get back in the field and murder all these mistakes... If you want to, of course. How is my Misato impression so far? )

Sam and Asuka, hmm. My triangle sense is tingling.

Gah, finished Chapter 6.
 
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not to mention she was nobility
"Maybe...what about the other..." The red head was saying, before both of them took one look at the boy hunched over and vomiting up his breakfast, and in unison said "no."
Haha, double the characters, double the humiliation. You just can't catch a break, Shinji.
, without to.
Yes Admiral...I know how to speak English very well.
Sick burn, Misato!
"You threw him into combat without any preparation? I thought NERV was filled to the brim with secretive and unpleasant swine, but I never thought you were in the habit of dropping puppies into blenders." He shook his head slightly with a chuckle, causing her to crush a grimace.
Despite being a condescending dick, he actually has a very, very good point.
not that he doesn't seem like an unpleasant chap
How many negatives are in this sentence, again?

Asuka is nice...er...ish. Somewhat.
Still, she's Asuka, so you don't have to worry about that.
No Langley, huh? America is unpopular as hell in this verse, isn't it?
I get it, the damned autocorrect. You have nothing but my sympathies on the matter.
Fick." A Lieutenant muttered under his breath, his commander massaging his eyebrows.

Hmm?

"What? Those awful things, god no. If I'm going to die I'll do it in my uniform and with my dignity thank you very much."
Hahaha, Samuel, how can you be so right and such a dick at the same time? Are you the Internet?
The Admiral who had never lost a battle, who
You know, maybe I misinterpret? Is it a British thing to mangle "who" derivatives? If so, then I apologize.
"If you want to live through this Barbarian, then you better just deal with it."
Right back at you, Misato!:cool:

Then that shivering cold within his soul suddenly became a rush of titanic power, strength bubbling and coursing through the two children's veins.
Whichever the universe, one constant remains: KYOKO WANTS GRANDBABIES. :lol
while I can't comment on the Chinese equivalent, the least I can do is to correct this slight upon Russian language. The word you were looking for is "Ogon`", or "Fire".

The fight scene is awesome. Certainly better than the first crazy idea Misato had. Take that, canon!:p
Shame father hasn't shown up once...
Daddy issues are bread and water of Evangelion.


And this all is capped by transfer students. The horror!
A really good chapter, Sovereign...-san.
"Laughs evilly".
 
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while I can't comment on the Chinese equivalent, the least I can do is to correct this slight upon Russian language. The word you were looking for is "Ogon`", or "Fire".

The fight scene is awesome. Certainly better than the first crazy idea Misato had. Take that, canon!:p

Even without an Evangelion in the field, Mother Russia just can't help but come to save the day with some surprise Communism.
 
"...an awkward person."
Now that's an understatement if I'd ever seen one.
the one person he'd listen to,
One, two, three: damn you, autocorrect!
she even comprehended

... Goddamn it, Shinji. I almost can't wait for when you start BSOD'ing so that the two insufferable Westerners finally shut up.

It was the standard NERV male design, with the top section being dyed navy blue, legs black, hands white, and piped in gold. From what he'd seen of them, it did seem to be quite an Imperial colour scheme. The A-10 headset wasn't that bad to look at either, being white with blue piping. But even then, Samuel had nearly thrown his dolls out of the pram, decrying them as "bloody cat ears."
Why do I think pimp suit when I read this?
"Scheisse!" She roared, giving the Imperial Eva a kick.
Really, Asuka, kicking a corpse? Really?
Right, here we are again. Another battle between the children of Eva and Lord Netzach. 6876 words all for your pleasure, and any of my readers who are at all familiar with Dark Souls, may get a titchy bit of PTSD at some point...
"Shudders to the sound of imaginary instrumental orchestra ripping his soul apart, while he Links the Fire. The orchestra in question being one of the songs by miracleofsound."
Daaaaaw. Nine chapters in, and she finally calls him "brother". Even if just in her head.
instead of where.

I suppose we have no other choice...team building...SEELE will not take this lightly. I need to get Ikari back here to smooth things over with them.
SEELE is like an evil anti-dating service, bent on ascension of mankind through breaking people up and generally making their lives miserable.
Were he not so irritated
Again, were. Damned autocorrector, we will see who triumphs at the end of the day!

Have those two Yokai under the same roof as me? In my home? I think I'd go mad...
Oh, shiiiiiii.....
Bidding his friends goodbye and escorting Rei back to her apartment, Shinji found himself standing at the entrance of the complex he called home, taking a deep breath of humid air before going in. Punching in the pass code, the electric door slid open, and he walked in.
...iiiiiiiiiiiii...
"Well guten nachtmittag, Shinji."
...iiiiit!
sought, maybe?
"Don't worry, chum. It took me a few years to get her to start saying thank you, every now and again. I think I'm getting close to please now-"
He's definitely lying, I just know it.

Sword Art Online? Why, just why, Sovereign? Are you a psyker? Do you hate me?
... Yes I was fourteen and dumb! And then I was seventeen and dumb, but that's beside the point.
"So Supreme Commander Ikari puts his Pilots in gimp suits. How much money do we give NERV again?" Eiji Fukui chimed in.
Eh, I was mistaken by one letter. It's a gimp suit, not a pimp suit, good point, Eiji.
Purple one was easier to handle
Perhaps?
Why do I feel that these words mean "Little Fuck"?

Finished Chapter 9, if anyone's counting. LordSovereign, the fight was beautifully done, perhaps the most of them all showing that Seraphim are people, just like us. ( well, they can grow to the size of kaiju and use the "light of souls", so not exactly, but you get my point. )
However. In the future, you may want to break chapters down even more. I understand fully that what I say next may be considered Heresy, but I feel you need to write in smaller chunks and pay more attention to them. As a bonus, it'd make it much easier for people to read and comment on them. Well, that's just my opinion, don't be overly concerned with it.

Gonna go sleep for a while. Good evening.
 
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Actually I think it was openly stated of similarity being even closer in some way?
.I think we have one immortal human with same ability of shapeshifting?.
Is that about DNA? Gorillas share 98 percent with us.
Shimps share 99.
If you're about Chapter 8, I concede to your point. Sovereign showed us, the readers, that Seraphim are very similar to us.
I was speaking about the protagonists, though. If even only two of them actually pay attention to it...
 
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I was thinking Seele leader and his abilities. Should have seen it in chapter 5.6, if you are at chapter 8.

(edit) I Mentioned it in invisi text, in post you quoted.

Other wise I like that seraphs aren't just stupid, dumb animals appearing out of thin air, no reason ever being given.... like original anime...
The Grand Master of SEELE exhaled deeply through his biologically thirty-eight year old nose, closing his red eyes.

None save for the higher ranking members of SEELE had seen him in his natural state, of an unearthly individual whose skin was as white as porcelain, and whose combed, short, and unnaturally grey hair, added further strangeness. It was a mark of being touched by divinity though, in his eyes. By the grace of God he had been granted power unimagined by mortal men, and life everlasting.

A life he'd continued to live since that day in Megiddo over eight hundred years ago.

Craning his neck so as to click his bones back into place, the features of the United Nations puppet master began to change.

His hair darkened into black, his eyes took on a brown colour, and his skin became a more natural pale tinge. This was what he presented to the world, a grand trick he'd taught himself many years ago. As he knew people were not all that comfortable around something they found strange, and therefore were less easy to manipulate. The only exception to this rule was Gendo Ikari, Kasch mused. It confounded him how that man, with so many things clearly wrong about him, managed to ensnare hundreds to his will.
The fate of destruction is the joy of rebirth!
Hmm Makes me now think of dumb reapers from Mass effect... Or corrupted phoenix story.
"What do you make of the deliverer?"

"He is very much as the scrolls have predicted. He struggles to understand those around him, and has no love for himself. The life he has lived, has almost broken him." Gendo's spine tingled in slight satisfaction at the memory of the utter betrayal and despair in the boy in question's cerulean.
You know... am just going to look bored, while going trough TV tropes or other place for "Fate worse then death" that might be tried on Geno. Actually why not try several if not mutually exclusive, while at that.
 
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Fuck it; I don't have to go anywhere tomorrow, might as well stay for a while.
Oh, and VoidSpirit: my reasoning still applies! :p
... Maybe I need to edit my comment to make myself clearer. I'll get to that...
In a while.
Stupid Shinji, I don't need his help! I don't need anyone's help!
Except maybe the shrink's...
I'm not even trying to mock you, Asuka. Therapy is supposedly a thing.
Shinji-kun, we need to have a talk about "standing up for yourself".
Yeaaaaaaah. When? Ten chapters in, Misato! Hurry up or the fic will have ended by the time!:rofl:

when compared to the faux blondes
That's a bit awkward-sounding. Maybe just Ritsuko's? She doesn't bite if you use her first name... much.
The results were interesting
Nothing interesting, move along, citizen.
If one were to age her
Or was? Hmm.
Involuntarily, and for the first time in her life, Rei found her insides squirming. Never before had her body reacted in such a way, and she quickly had to mask her surprise at it, before immediately crushing such disloyal and ungrateful feelings.
Well, fuck. And there go my last shreds of respect for Gendo. Plummeting down, burning up and laughing really, really loudly about my stupidity. Sorry, Shinji, you were right.
... Wonder how much of a Gendo will be left when he finds out...
most powerful computers were large and blocky.
Finishing his quintessential Japanese drink, Sazo reached into his coat's pockets and pulled out a memory stick.
Damn. I forgot to ask. You have this fic on SB and Ffn, don't you? Do you revise it after posting it here but before updating it there? Or maybe you already have beta readers. What am I doing with my life?!
... Nothing someone hasn't done before, I guess.
Yeah, can't do anything about it without posting. And that's long ways to go.
Neatly ordered in a manner which each building took up a side,
:confused:
... I fell asleep, didn't I? Fascist regimes always made me sleepy.
a spelling mistake.

Finished Chapter 10. One more chapter and then I'm in for the Long Wait. Can't say I'm sorry, though.
 
Got to thank you, Soryu-san. Business is booming because of you.
Why do I smell murder in the air?
Probably just my imagination.
The two boys looked up to see Samuel glowering down on them.
... Or not. Be glad Asuka didn't find out. "Ass shove" as a concept has been invented for exactly those kinds of moments.
"Guten morgen, boys. What are you doing?" Asuka snarled, lip and eye twitching.
Gotta really finish reading first before starting to comment. But it makes things more amusing.
Her life would have basically been over were it not for the JSAF pension.
Oh honestly, I shouldn't worry about it. My Pilots are tough, they can handle those sorts of things themselves. I need to focus on the Seraphim.
Yeah, no. Look at how well that worked in canon, Misato.
And by "well" I mean End of Evangelion.
Misato gave a slightly sympathetic look at Rei, then moved off as well, beckoning for the remaining two children to follow.
Oh, she's warming up to Rei! How cute.
Flashbacks to the Eva, flashbacks to everyone!
Oh, Inferno! His legend shines like a blazing star, a dragon standing atop the mountain of corpses, burned to the ashes by butthurt and ragefeels. Really funny fellow. And a good conversationalist.
Also. I have never asked anyone, but is writing with grammatical mistakes a thing? Like, a postmodernist crying out against the tyranny of structured language? Maybe vying for the ultimate freedom of speech, no matter how nonsensical and removed from the actual human speech it is?
The needs of NERV outweighed those of the Japanese State." Rei put bluntly. Her brother inwardly seethed, but didn't start a disagreement .
an argument, maybe? It's very a mollifying experience to try and correct a native English speaker. Especially, British English, I don't know jack about it.

I do it out of love... and because I have nothing better to do at the moment.
Whilst the cranes were an annoyance
Just... three... more... parts... You... will not... win!
The majority of that Island's male population were soldiers of the JSA.
Autocorrect!:mad:

"Hoag Netzach! Keon Geutol, Keon Ejrod!"
And here we go. Dead Sea Scrolls are now slightly less valuable than toilet paper.


"Fading fast. It's dying. Well done, Pilots." Misato nodded with tired satisfaction. Unlike those under her command, she didn't see a fellow sentient being in pain and fear, but a dangerous creature that deserved destruction. Perhaps the purplehead just couldn't see the situation or her enemy in any other way.
Susano would have loved this.

"Goodness gracious those people are mad. Just...just...why would you do that to yourself?"
Ah, bonding over mutual hatred of humans taking cold showers. This is Evangelion, this is not even the strangest thing to happen in the last fifteen minutes.
"Don't go using words you don't understand, Shinji. Reminds me of one of your damnable cartoons. What was it again...the one where they kept using crucifixes because they thought-" Samuel raised his fingers for air quotes. "-it was cool..."
Whoa, whoa, whoa, Sovereign. Calm down, look at you signature, deep breaths, deep breaths...
your language and kanji is still strange, and I don't really want to talk to any of my classmates..."

"You need to put all that behind you now. It'll only get in the way." The purplehead asserted kindly. When it came to a past such as that, one could only move on in her view.
Or better yet, try out alcohol! Really soothes your mind.;)
As I said. She's not the best at voicing her feelings."
She certainly seems to have come capability of doing it around you.
?
Really!? Why, why, why, why, why, fucking why, do people keep thinking this shit!? Rei is not my girlfriend, damn it!
Shinji is a stronger person than me. If people continuously insinuated about me having a romantic relationship with my sister, I'd break and scream from the tallest tower I could find in the vicinity something like: "You sick fuckers! She is my sister! Japaaaaaaaan!"
EDIT: To reiterate, I am, ( at least, hoping to God ) not starting an argument about romantic relationships between members of family, i.e. incest. I'm simply a very strong believer of a traditional outlook on love, that a person should not mix different kinds of love together, especially romantic and familial. And yes, in my opinion, love between siblings and love between spouses are two completely different things. Sovereign!Shinji and Sovereign!Rei consider themselves just that: siblings. It's not only a choice based on their genetic connection, but also a constant conscious effort on both sides they maintain, kinda like what real-life siblings should do if they don't want to become estranged. No, I don't want to discuss triads, I guess it's fine if all the participants have romantic feelings to each other, and I certainly do enjoy reading about it, though I do wonder how much of this enjoyment comes from the effectively doubled amount of Waffness, and how much from my libido. Ugh, went back to try and clarify one silly post before anyone took offense, and finished writing a small essay on my feelings on love. The only question that remains is, why?
the tip of the iceberg...Spirits help us.
??!




Yay! Finished! Yet my existential void not filled in the slightest! Why is that? Because Evangelion, suckers!
Haha, great chapter, Sovereign.
Though I can't understand why people would disregard that Seraphim are obviously sentient. They spoke, in fluent Japanese, and that language is a linguistic equivalent of a trainwreck waiting to happen.
Oh well, specists are one of the frequent landmarks in military sci-fi genre, so I shouldn't be surprised.

Oh, and a fight was excellently done. Should I expect something straight out of Dark Souls when the Evas clash with your namesake, LordSovereign? Because that's what I'm now expecting!
"Weight of responsibility crashes and condenses LordSovereign into a jar of tasty paste. Mmm, paste."

Anyway, bookmarked and waiting for more!
.........................
And waiting... and waiting... and...
 
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Unfortunately...I think you'll find a few of my "spelling mistakes" come from my British view of the English language. Honestly, it's not our fault the bloody Americans decided to get it wrong all the time...
 
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