I second debacle; I've had some encounters with that guy of my own, and he is... incredibly frustrating to deal with, to say the least. I'd treat anything he says as both meaningless and useless, so don't sweat it.

As for the "better than Rebuild" bit? I... well, I'm a little bit biased-- I actually really like the Rebuilds (at least the first two, and the ideas behind the third). That out of the way, I'd tentatively say yes, it is better-- but in a different direction.

For a different way of describing its worth, I'll say that I like Sovereignty more than I did Nobody Dies. That's probably a fairer way of going about it.
 
As for the "better than Rebuild" bit? I... well, I'm a little bit biased-- I actually really like the Rebuilds (at least the first two, and the ideas behind the third). That out of the way, I'd tentatively say yes, it is better-- but in a different direction.

For a different way of describing its worth, I'll say that I like Sovereignty more than I did Nobody Dies. That's probably a fairer way of going about it.



Oh...wow...thank you. That's really made my day. :)

In return, I must say, Evangelion Regenisis is so far one of my favoured Eva fics.
 
2DEEP4U basically.

"you don't understand NGE the way i understand!"

Hoo boy, here @Lord Sovereign some tentacles, i'm still reading the last chapter because i got sucked on the Quest Blackhole and can't get out of it.
 
Double Post
Shinji interactions with Mana was interesting, but as i haven't played girlfriend of steel i can't give more thought onto it, but i sure imagine that sentiment of your father being cannon fodder to the actual weapon of your military.

Shinji doing a bomb-diving was interesting, which enters his actual character of only doing things for himself when he is truly euphoric, and going into the apathy run when he is feeling down, or threatened or guilty of having fun.

Asuka is being Asuka as always, people can't escape her territoy, and anyone under her territory needs to be euphoric as her or they are spoiling her fun.

Samuel has given the jibes of not being a exhibitionist, which is interesting, because it happens with a lot of military, that they have a personality when using the uniform and another personality out of it.

Misato thinking everything is good is godamn on character, she's so hurt that she don't try to see under other people skins or she will hurt herself.

And you mister, made me think of seal clubbing about the hunting of rogziel, and samuel using the actual club to open it's head open.

Keep the good work!
 
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Chapter 11.3
Here it is. This turned out quite large, some seven and a half thousand words altogether. Hopefully that isn't too much for you!
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1:45 pm, NERV Central, Commander's Office

The four of them stood, plugsuited and backs straight, before NERV's Vice and Supreme Commander. It had only been half an hour before that the four teenagers had been enjoying their swim, only to be roughly called out of the pool by Section 2 agents who'd barged past the security of the place.

Shinji's blood boiled being under the gaze of this man again. They hadn't exchanged a word since the day he arrived and the Seraph war began. Since then, the boy's enmity had only been enhanced through his father's disregard for him, and his lack of care for Rei. He could only imagine how little Gendo Ikari regarded the safety of his subordinates, and that frightened him.

How many of us are, "expendable?"

"I have called you here to serve a purpose. We have identified a blue signature in Mount Asama itself." The Supreme Commander said, a hologram flickering into life on the floor between him and the Pilots, some twenty feet in distance. The hollow image of the volcano, within which resided a bizarre creature, provided dim light for the dismal room.

"Shouldn't be too much trouble. Just destroy the volcano and that'll either kill it or bring it out into the open-" Samuel was saying before Gendo's gaze fixed itself upon him.

"Do not interrupt me." His said so plainly it was threatening.

"Very well, sir." The Imperial acknowledged, hiding amusement.

Oh? What's this? A General who doesn't like other opinions...that won't get you anywhere good, old man.

"I desire this specimen to be recovered alive. There is much we can learn from this situation. One of you will be lowered into the mountain to recover it, whilst the rest remain on standby." Gendo continued. Shinji lost control of his expression and scowled.

"So you want to lower one of us into an active volcano and try to pull out this thing, we aren't even sure is actually hibernating? That's a suicide mission." Father and son looked at each other, neither willing to back down.

I don't want to see any of them die for your science project. Shinji inwardly snarled.

"Oh come on, Third. A-T fields can handle magma, it'll be a walk in the park for me." Asuka said with a cocky grin.

"I presume we have a volunteer for extraction?" Kozo asked, faintly bemused.

"Yes you do. Don't worry, Commander, I won't let you down."

"Soryu-san..." Shinji hissed.

"Can it, dummkopf. I can do this." She glared daggers back at him, crushing any retort, completely ignoring Samuel's look of concern or Rei's inquisitive expression.

To be lowered into magma...to retrieve a live monster...that is not a mission I would like to take. If I die, I can be replaced...but I'd rather it not happen that way.

Gendo did not move, or even nod. He just spoke in his lifeless monotone.

"Satisfactory. Cranes are already in position, you will be deployed immediately."

"Good luck." Kozo added, with much more humanity than his superior could ever manage.

The children all acknowledged this with their own culture's equivalents of "yes, sir" then filed out of the office.
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NERV's lifts lead to everywhere in Tokyo-3 and its surroundings. But for further afield, they would have been in trouble were it not for the confiscation of the "Rapid Homeland Defence System." Over the years, the organization had wisely adapted it for Evangelion deployment to other parts of the country if needs be. However, it would still take a good hour for them to reach their destination.

In that time, most people would talk to one another about the upcoming mission or try to lift the mood. The four Pilots remained quiet however, the time going by agonizingly slowly. The bravado of the western Pilots was not as present as it was in that first engagement with the 8th Seraph. Clearly, to Shinji's slight amusement and relief, the eldritch abominations had knocked a good bit of "reality" into their heads. This, the 9th Seraph, was going to be handled in a far more professional manner.

Nevertheless, Asuka and Samuel looked childishly bored, totally untroubled by what they were about to deal with, whilst Shinji only just managed to control his breathing. Meanwhile, Rei, the infallible rock of serenity in a sea of chaos, had leaned back in her seat with a blank expression.

"
So..." Samuel said, tiring of the silence.

"
What?" Asuka responded.

"
Quite remarkable, all this, isn't it? An underground system that runs from one end of the country to the other...I'd always heard Japanese technology was good but I didn't know they were fine engineers."

"
...you're literally part of an operation involving giant metal monsters being sent to destroy an enemy that can waste cities, all heralding from a city with skyscrapers that can lower themselves into the ground, and an oversized Leopard Underground is what's got your attention?"

"
I don't know...it just reminds one of home a little bit."

"
I think it's impressive too. Which makes it even more of a shame that NERV stole it." Shinji grumbled. This was Japanese engineering, built on Japanese blood, sweat and tears, to protect the Japanese nation. What right did his father have to shove a UN requisition order into Parliament's face and snatch it away?

Oh well. At least he did it after the war was over...it's strange to think. I thought Fukuyama would be it, that I'd never see the like again. Now I'm here, in the front line of a war against demi-god abominations, in a machine that makes me feel pain. Will the universe ever stop making my life a joke?

"
The needs of NERV outweighed those of the Japanese State." Rei put bluntly. Her brother inwardly seethed, but didn't start a disagreement. As a non confrontational person to begin with, he knew he wouldn't change her mind. Not if that had been hammered in by his sperm donor.

"
Right. Because the JSA wouldn't have loaned it to you if you needed it...smells like a bloody power grab." Samuel said with disapproval. Despite not making any sign of agreement, Asuka agreed with that. After all, one who could navigate the court of the Reich and steer well clear of intrigue, was not the worst judge of character.

What a control freak. And to think...if he doesn't deem me "satisfactory"...

The girl suppressed a scowl.

No. I trained for this, for most of my life. I gave up everything to prove I am the best, I am an Eva pilot elite. And the world will see that.

Taking her mind off such things, her mind drifted back to the great balls of New Windsor and Sanssouci she'd attended. The freckled girl had always stood out, gaining looks and sniggers from the other effete nobles who dressed in frilly ball gowns whilst she remained in her beloved yellow sundress. In the end, Asuka had the last laugh, as they'd all swelter under those many layers and have difficulty moving around whilst she remained beautiful and free.

But it wasn't like she hated high society functions. With her sole dance partner, they actually became quite enjoyable. Of course, there was the side effect of everyone thinking she and Samuel where "an item", but it wasn't too much of a fuss.

Hang on...he's not my only dance partner any more, is he?
She cast a quick look at Shinji.

Well...he hasn't stepped on my foot so far.

"
Soryu-san...are you sure about this?" Shinji said with concern. Clearly he was still uneasy over her volunteering for this dangerous mission.

"
Absolutely. Can't pass up an opportunity to show you all who's the best here." She grinned, eliciting a deep sigh from the boy.

"
Alright. But if the tiniest thing goes wrong, or you feel you can't handle it, you bug out. Got that?"

"
Not sure whether or not to be offended or touched, Third. I don't think anyone's ever managed that before." Asuka arrogantly shrugged him off, knowing her boasting was entirely justified in this situation. She had the best Unit, the most training, and the most aptitude for Piloting. Not once did she consider these things anything other than facts.

"
One of the easiest things in the world to do is offend you, Asuka..." Samuel chucked.

"
Shut up, Sam." She growled.

Rei observed the exchange between her colleagues with a strange feeling. Amusement was new to her, but she wasn't troubled by it.

Unit cohesion leaves much to be desired. I fear something may go terribly wrong...but the true question is, why do I find that "entertaining." It is almost like a...train wreck in slow motion. An event so terrible yet one can't look away.

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3:00pm, Mount Asama research station

Misato stood before the facility's main monitor with folded arms. She couldn't get a proper tactical display, but the JSA had been kind enough to provide a drone and vid link with which she could observe the overall operation and movements of her troops. The vid links of the four Evas had been linked into the monitor, with the external cameras of Evangelion Unit 02 being given room as well.

A great deal of information to take in, but the purplehead was a competent soldier. It was not beyond her capability.

Along with the Evas and about fifty other NERV staff, the Sub Commander of Section 3 had been loaned an entire JSA Infantry division, specifically the 40th, two Tank battalions from the 2nd Armoured division, which had been used to fill the holes left by the devastation of the 1st at the hands of Sachiel, and an Orochi class FCV.

Whilst not as impressive as the Susanoos, the battleships of the air fleet, Orochi's were still impressive and well armed for their smaller size of being a hundred metres in length. The term, "flying Destroyer" suited them well.

As the FCV was becoming more commonplace, they were starting to be treated less as super weapons and more as important components of a modern military. Hence the need for air fleets across the world to enlarge and diversify, build ships with more specialized roles. For example, the Orochi was to become the scout and screening vessel of the Japanese Air Fleet, to supplement the jack of all trades Susanoo. And of course, the class of ships being built in secret that few knew of, the Amaterasu class carriers.

Misato was impressed by how quickly her countrymen had adapted to the modern age. Whilst the Empire was more interested in flash and firepower, the Federation in compactness and technological superiority, the Communists in mass production, her people were already building the first dedicated carrier class FCV. Ingenuity and adaptability like that would win Japan dominion over the Pacific.

Pushing such thoughts from her mind, of delightful glee at the wretched Tokuajin being utterly at their mercy, the thirty year old woman focused on the dispositions of her troops.

Unit 02 was already being attached to the vast cranes in place around Asama's crater, and its Pilot was looking impatient and eager to get on with it. The other three were deployed some three miles from the volcano, all equipped with pallet rifles and standing in a line just five hundred metres ahead of the massed regiments and tanks of the JSA. Every single gun was levelled on mount Asama.

Directly above, ready to rain down fire, the HIMS Fuso maintained a stationary yet alert position.

As to be expected of the trained professionals who crewed her.

Let's not lose them like we lost the Tsushima or the 1st Division. Thousands of good lives lost...fucking Seraphim.

The sound of chuckling broke Misato out of her moment of thought.

"What is it, Rits-chan?" She met her friend's mirth with a confused yet genuine smile.

"Sorry...it's just, if we turned back the clocks a few years, Soryu-san would not nearly be so eager to go down there." The faux blonde shook her head at the large image of the huffing redhead.

"Why?"

"Don't you remember? Back then A-T fields weren't quite as powerful so we'd have to provide extra protection."

"Oh...oh! You mean the D-type equipment? And the inflation suit?"

"The very ones."

Both women sniggered at the thought of the proud German girl having to hobble around in that bulbous and cumbersome suit, and her Eva doing the same in that bulbous and cumbersome armour. Back then, there would have been a very real risk of the Pilot suffering serious sympathetic injuries in such an operation as this, or the Eva not being able to stand the environment.

Of course, they'd come a fair way since then. Now their battery life could last half an hour without cables at normal power, fifteen at maximum, and two hours on basic. It truly was amazing how quickly technology progressed, from clunky keyboards and bulky computers in 1999, to the touchscreen freaks of nature that could recognize your fingerprint as an access code.

"Unit 02 is attached and ready to begin deployment, Lieutenant Colonel." Makato reported, having been shipped out here scarcely half an hour ago.

Misato's mirth faded away, her jaw setting itself hard as rock.

Let's do this.

Marching back over to the main monitor, she pushed a glyph which brought up comms with her Pilots.

"We're ready to begin the operation. What about you?"

A series of "affirmatives" satisfied her.

"Good, although I must say, not everyone volunteers to jump head first into a live volcano, Asuka-san." She directed out the redhead, who pouted.

"Seems like a lot of people are wusses." Asuka said dismissively.

"Misato-san, I have a question." Shinji waited patiently for the two to finish what they were saying before speaking. Anything else would have been impolite.

"Shoot, Shinji-kun." The purplhead acknowledged.

"Why is there an FCV above us?"

Misato grimaced, having not entirely filled them in on that yet.

"That...is there to carpet bomb the mountain if anything goes wrong...Commander's orders..."

"Even if I'm inside it?" Asuka said, blatantly annoyed over the issue. As if death was a massive inconvenience for her. The purplehead nodded.

Shinji's mouth opened and closed like a goldfish for a while, as Samuel piped up looking slightly alarmed.

"Th-th-that will be a last resort...surely..." The Imperial stammered.

"I'll be fine, Samuel. Besides, if I'm going to go out...might as well be in style." The German girl relaxed into her seat, accepting the sheer danger of the situation and getting on with it. Misato couldn't be more impressed by these kids, considering what was constantly asked of them.

Yeah, I've got nothing to worry about. They can take care of themselves quite handily.

"A last resort, if it comes to that." She said reassuringly, before barking at her staff.

"Begin the operation!"
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3:15pm, Mount Asama main vent

Asuka put all her effort into the maintenance of her A-T field as she was slowly lowered into the fires of the furious mountain. Whilst the cranes where an annoyance, she was aware she couldn't do it without them. Unlike the battle with the 7th Seraph, she couldn't risk readjusting her field and allow one area to become vulnerable. Evangelion armour was tough, but nothing could survive prolonged exposure to magma without protection.

Nevertheless, the German girl was already feeling droplets of perspiration sliver down the back of her neck, either through heat or concentration. Not at all helped by the tight, heat trapping plug suit. This was not the warmth of her plug, but the humid, burning, unpleasant sort of hotness she'd had to adjust to since she'd arrived in this country.

Asuka surveyed her surroundings, knowing her hud would pick up the enemy long before ordinary eyes would. Bizarre really, considering how her eyes were directly linked to those of the Eva, and therefore enhanced. Even then...in this sea of yellow and red, technology was more of an ally than ever before.

Deathly silence reigned within that confined cockpit, and in Misato's temporary command centre, as the depth of the Eva was being reported routinely by Makoto. It was tense for her, but only because Asuka wanted to get on with this, not at all out of any fear of failure.

I am the best, I can't fail.

"You should be reaching target area in a few seconds. Get ready." Came her commanding officer's order.

Asuka nodded, trying to take her mind off how slick and sweaty her body was feeling. However, as it was so deeply unpleasant, she couldn't. And now the redhead was beginning to smell.

Come on you bastard, show up and don't make any complaints.

"Reaching target depth in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1-"

The redhead braced and prepared to attack, just in case her enemy wasn't sleeping any more. But nothing happened.

She looked around for a few moments, eyebrows furrowing in confusion.

"What?" She said, annoyed and baffled.

"I don't know, Asuka-san. Damn, its moved." Misato growled.

"What now, Lieutenant Colonel?" Makoto asked.

"Continue to lower her. We have to get this thing."

"Misato-san, something isn't right about all this..." Shinji cut in over the comms, his tone nervous and alert.

"Yes...I'm not often in agreement with him, but today I am. Let's not chance this." Samuel added, much to his male Japanese counterpart's surprise.

"Oh for Gott's sake, stop worrying. I've got this under control, keep on going, Misato." Asuka cut them off, indignant at people trying to rob her of rightfully earned glory. Although...it wasn't exactly unwelcome to hear people be concerned about her.

"If...if you're sure..."

"I'm fine, Sam."

The cranes continued to lower her further and further into Mount Asama, the girl becoming slightly impressed by the sheer size of it. She'd seen pictures of volcano structures when she was little, as most children had, but even then Asuka couldn't have fathomed how large it was.

Impression turned to irritation. She didn't like being made to feel small.
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Some miles away from Mount Asama

It was so strange. For him to be sat this far away from actual danger, close to other Evangelions and a massive military formation, yet to feel every bit as anxious as he'd been when facing the 5th Seraph. The enemy which had come closest to killing him stone dead, and...quite nearly...took Rei from him.

In his consortium of nightmares, that one was the worst. Of pulling Unit 00's hatch open, only to find the calcified remnants of his sister, ruined face contorted in a silent scream, the only identifiable trace of her being a strand of blue hair. The first night that particular dream came to him, he'd woken in a cold sweat and vomited. Fortunately that evening, Misato was completely out for the count so he could clear up his mess without drawing attention.

Oh the beatings teacher would give him for getting the carpet dirty.

Shinji forced his hand to clench the control stick, trying to rid it of his pathetic tremors. He took a deep breath, and focused on his, admittedly beautiful, surroundings. Mount Asama looked regal as ever, complementing the clear blue sky. The great forests, as were so common for inner Japan, were dotted all over the flat plains and occasional rolling hills.

That took his attention off horrible things, such as thoughts of the redhead he'd just met being lost to the mountain. It wasn't right she'd been sent by herself against this enemy he knew to be more cunning than anyone else would accept. Of course, he'd probably overestimated their intelligence, as Shinji thought he was wrong on many things, but even then...a tiger was not as smart as a person, but could still deceive.

Speaking of which, his enhanced eyes caught a glimpse of orange and black striped movement some ten miles away. It had slunk back off into the trees, but the Japanese Tiger had been there. Honestly, it defied all belief how well these creatures, once kept in zoos before Second Impact, escaping in the chaos, had adapted. Siberian Tigers they were once called, now having their names changed to suit their habitat. Regretfully Japan's indigenous wildlife hadn't done well out of this, the Serows among them. Perhaps the only native creatures which had not just survived but thrived were the Ussuri Bears of Hokkaido. Saved from Second Impact by the mountains, and shielded from the wars by the sheer isolated nature of the island, the massive hairy monsters had continued to raid unfortunate rubbish bins, and make the occasional unwary cyclist or hiker go missing.

Stupid people...don't know why anyone would want to live in Hokkaido. That place is a frontier if I've ever seen it, and the locals...damn...

The majority of that Island's male population where soldiers of the JSA. Half a million men out of a population of two and a half million. One in five. The Hokkaidan infantry regiments were among the best in the army, and they manned the infamous "Northern Defence Line." Bunker after bunker, fortification after fortification, barbed wire, and mine fields stretched across the near entirety of the Island's northern shore. Whilst not as advanced as Capital Defence Line 1 was, it was still something no foreign force could conceivably break through in a hurry.

Aside from the Seraphim. Fuck those things, if only it weren't for those stupid A-T fields we could bring them down, no problem!

"Um...Shinji?"
Samuel said, his expression looking confused on the vid link, as his eyes squinted.

"
Yes, Meadow-san?" Shinji blinked out of his thoughtful state.

"Unless my eyes deceive me...is that a Tiger?"

"
Yes, it is. Quite impressive, aren't they?"

"Certainly. Blimey, the BBC weren't joking when they said they were thriving here."

"Indeed. Nationwide, numbers are meant to be approximately five hundred and rising."
Rei added, feeling the "lights" of multiple big cats roaming the local area. It was not for nothing inhabitants of the inner prefectures had firearms in abundance these days.

The young albino had found herself analysing everything about her surroundings. She'd never left Tokyo-3 before, aside from going out to greet Meadow and Soryu, even then only seeing the vague outline of mountains in the distance. But here...it was all so clear. The sky, the thin clouds, the birds, the beasts, the forests, the mountains...now she felt something akin to a "connection" to her birthplace.

Though this world may be one of suffering, this view is aesthetically pleasing beyond measure.

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Her hud started flashing. Asuka squinted into the solid wall of redness around her. The outline was vague, intensely vague, but she could see it.

"
Misato, am I seeing-" The freckled girl began before being cut off.

"
The energy signature is right. That's our Seraph, get it." Her superior ordered.

Finally!

A few moments later, Unit 02 had been lowered on top of its target. Asuka had struggled to understand what was before her for a second or two, but pushed past it. The human embryo like creature seemed encased in some sort of amber shell, unmoving and frozen in time.

"
That just makes this easy..." The girl smiled, signalling up above to send down their "cage."

The science of that thing fascinated Asuka. It was a series of iron bars that fit together and formed a hollow cuboid around its prisoner. It would then activate and seal the gaps with walls of energy which emitted an inward electromagnetic pulse. Hypothetically, enough to cripple but not kill the Seraph.

Speaking of which, the monster still wasn't moving. So deep in hibernation, it seemed oblivious to its incoming demise. Not that Asuka was fussed about this, but...it would surely have to notice sometime?

"
This is too easy...Misato, something isn't right down here?" She said, warily.

"
Don't worry, just get the cage attached. It's in hibernation, it can't do anything."

"
What do you mean, "something's not right?"
Samuel cut in, worry etched into his tone.

"
I don't know. This just doesn't feel right at all."

"
What's the Seraph doing?" Shinji asked.

"
Nothing, it's just sitting there..."

"
Misato-san, get her out."

"
Shinji-kun..."
The purplehead chastised.

"
You know this isn't normal Seraph behaviour!"

"
All of you pipe down! Gott, you're giving me a headache-"

The lone eye of the "hibernating" Seraph, swivelled and fixed on her.

"
Oh schiesse."

You are mine, Vooren.


The casing cracked open, shattering the cage, as the embryo transformed into something else entirely. Flattening out, eyes bulging on top of stalks, long fins extending from its rear, the Seraph assumed its attack form. To Asuka, it looked like a giant, fat, Anomalocaris with sharp arms, a creature of the cambrian period.

It had been a long wait down here, but not unenjoyable. The heat of the mountain had been comforting, and yet the Heir's blood had boiled in inaction. The desire to wreak violence and vengeance upon the enemies of his people, the slayers of his kin, was nearly too much. But the thought of hauling one of these creatures back to his Sovereign's throne, was too much to resist.

The Vooren contraption had already pushed away, and was being pulled back up to the surface as fast as it could. Rogziel jettisoned off out of sight, circling his prey with vicious delight. The enemy was afraid, and they had exceptionally good reason to be. Although...he wasn't quite right in that respect.

"Ficking bastard! How dare you try to sneak up on me like that you verdammt coward!" Asuka snarled.

As much as she wished to engage and rip the enemy apart personally, the redhead knew she was in no condition to fight at this moment. Right now, she needed to focus on her A-T field and not let her armour melt.

Still getting pretty hot in here.

Far above and away from the volcano, Misato and her colleagues were already being evacuated to the Fuso via JSAF VTOL. The mere presence of an active and angry Seraph had compromised the entire area. As much as Ritsuko had moaned at the loss of her cage, she'd still left in no less of a hurry than the rest of them.

Misato had already given orders for Asuka to rip herself free of the cranes once she reached the surface, clear the area, and regroup with the other Evas as the FCV would commence bombardment. Until they reached the vessel however, the redhead would be entirely cut off from command. But she could still communicate with the other pilots.
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Damn it, damn it, damn it, damn it!

Shinji was beside himself. Although he didn't know Asuka too well, he still lived with her. And despite how on the nose, temperamental, and rude she could be, he certainly didn't dislike her. And now the girl had been put in mortal danger for his father's curiosity.

Seraphim are not science projects to be studied. They're forces of nature to stop before they kill everything.
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She'd reach the surface soon. She wouldn't have to worry about being melted by the insane temperatures of the volcano's magma, or being murdered by a Seraph in a position which she was helpless. Asuka hated that feeling, to her very core. Hated it enough to forgo the glory of getting a kill and instead get to safety. Besides, if the JSA failed to handle this, and they probably would, the redhead would still get her chance.

Her hud flashed, alert signatures popping up all over it. The vague silhouette of the Seraph appeared in the distance, racing towards her.

Going somewhere?

"Nein...nein, fick aus!" She shrieked, anger seeping into her young tone. Asuka wanted to kill this thing very badly, but she couldn't like this.

"Asuka! What's happening, Asuka!" Panic had taken control of Samuel as he desperately tried to get a response. Though it was comforting to hear the concern, to know she mattered to someone, Asuka didn't respond. If she wanted to stay alive, she had to focus on the here and now.

The Seraph was upon her, mandibles and arms opening up. The redhead roared in defiance before it impacted Unit 02. Rogziel struck with such force that the black Eva was slammed against the inner walls of the mountain. Asuka savagely slammed her head against the metal headrest of her cockpit, stars obscuring her vision.

She expected to feel a tearing sensation, as the Seraph ripped into her now helpless guts. Or the intense burning as it neutralised her A-T field. But that didn't happen, for instead Rogziel enveloped her field with his own, and clamped his mandibles around Unit 02's metal neck.

There will be no escape, Vooren. For your own sake, answer any question the Fist gives you. If not...well...perhaps Arael shall have a bit of fun.

As much as the idea of what his brother could do made him feel ill, Rogziel took no issue with inflicting physical harm on his foes. Not to the extent of Shamshel, who would metaphorically bathe himself in the blood of men, women, and children alike, but still sadistic nonetheless.

He'd pin this devil in place, cut its strings, then drag it back to his father's feet. This would be the first triumph of their ultimately victorious war.

"I can't...I can't..." She was passing out, Asuka knew it. Her link with Unit 02 was so great, she could feel her throat being crushed. Her vision was hazy and her brain was not operating as it should, despite how much she raged against it. The faint to her ears cries of Shinji and Samuel made her wince in a little guilt for putting them through this. Misato had made it all sound so easy...but it seemed the soft eyed idiot was right. The Seraphim were far away from dumb animals. The proof was in the pudding with how they'd acted in her engagements against them, and those before her. Tactical and...intelligent.

Now she'd learn the hard way for underestimating them.

Sorry guys. She started blacking out. An image of a beautiful woman with blonde hair and her eyes laughing floated through her mind, eliciting a smile. And then, a greying middle aged man walking through his beautiful gardens caused the freckled girl to sigh.

Vergib mir, Vater. Her subconscious involuntarily muttered.
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"Oh to hell with it." Shinji hissed, discarding his rifle and urging his control sticks forward. Unit 01 obeyed instantly, thundering towards the mountain at full pelt.

"Where are you going?" Samuel called after him.

"Those cranes are not going to take the weight of an Eva and a Seraph. We've got to get her out the hard way."

"Ah...yes...yes, I think I see what you're getting at. On my way!" Unit 03 dropped his weapon and broke formation, the lighter Evangelion soon catching up with its purple counterpart. Meanwhile, Rei remained where she was, unsure of what to do, or of what Shinji was doing.

She had no orders, and there appeared to be no instant need for her to act without them.

Ikari-kun is not in danger.

"Ayanami-san, report! What the hell's happening!?" Misato appeared on vid link, now aboard the bridge of the Fuso.

"Soryu-san seems unable to escape the enemy. Ikari-kun and Meadow-san are moving to assist." The albino replied, nonchalantly.

"Moving to assist? How are they...oh for fuck's sake...they're going to pull her out themselves. Stupid boys!"

"Lieutenant Colonel? I do not understand."

"Look, just move to support them. They've got a heavy load to pull out so an extra pair of hands will be invaluable. We can't raise Asuka-san, so something must be going very wrong."

"Understood. Following your orders, Lieutenant Colonel."

Rei moved after the other two Evangelions, keeping her pallet rifle in hand.
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Shinji had already reached the mouth of the volcano, wincing inside upon seeing the cranes creak, groan, and bend under the stress of some immense and terrible weight. Some had already broken, and the two remaining ones were at the cusp of snapping.

It's trying pull her down...why is it wasting time on that?

What was up with the enemy of late? The random, vicious, tidal wave like attacks as had been experienced with the first three had stopped. Not that he'd ever doubted there was some sense of intelligence in the creatures, looking into the eyes of the 4th Seraph as it sought to collapse his head had taught him such. But now...this was tactical. Trying to get them at sea, surprise and numbers, and now what could only be described as a trap.

Why does everyone insist on thinking they are dumb animals!? If they are, what does that make us for falling for their tricks half the time?

Samuel was seconds behind him, the Imperial pilot widening his eyes in alarm at seeing the slowly breaking cranes.

"Meadow-san, I need you to take hold of the least damaged crane. Don't let go for anything." Shinji gestured at one of the cranes, the largest one. Still standing strong somehow.

"Are you giving me orders?" On instinct, anger welled up inside the Imperial.

Britain has been talked down to by the world for long enough! No other shall command our destiny than us!

"Just do it." The meek Japanese boy's words became harsh, giving Samuel indication this was not up for debate. Besides, the blonde boy wouldn't have resisted for long. His best and only friend was down there, sod the pride of the Empire.

"Very well. Are you going to help me with this?" The navy blue Eva had firmly grasped the crane and was looking at him with its single cyclopsian eye.

"No. If we pull too hard, the cable might snap...we've got to get that thing off her..." Shinji grimaced, gazing at the bubbling magma.

"You aren't seriously considering-"

"We don't have a choice."

"Look, Shinji, I'm better at controlling my decent in liquid. You're in the stronger Unit so why don't you hold this?"

"And your Unit isn't as robust as mine...do me a favour, Meadow-san."

"No promises, but I'm listening."

"Don't let go."

"As long as you aren't too fat."

Both boys, in that moment, laughed at the simple joke. These two children of very different nations, one of an expansionist Empire, the other of a staunchly defensive military junta, had just engaged in perfectly reasonable discussion. Perhaps...breaking the ice with each other whilst they were at it.

Shinji inhaled deeply, braced himself for the heat, grasped one of the many thick cables, and jumped in. The crane almost went immediately, Samuel having to dig his feet into the ground and feel his muscles strain.

"God, you are fat!"
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Don't let go.

Asuka's eyes flickered. On the cusp of being enveloped by blackness, her vision remained blurry but unfailing. Strength flowed into her body, as if from nowhere. The warmth and comfort of her Eva increased beyond reckoning.

Don't let go.

Her eyesight fully returned, along with awareness. The Seraph was directly in front of her, thinking it had finished containing and ensnaring her. Now, slowly, Asuka could see one of those sharp limbs move upwards to cut the cable upon which she so perilously dangled. A moment, one of utmost opportunity had just been handed to the redhead by lady luck herself, and she would not reject her.

Thank Gott for my subconscious. Never thought hearing voices in my head would be useful.

Had there been time, Asuka may have pondered with some alarm the meaning of this. Voices in one's head were not usually a stellar indication of one's sanity. But after all the freckled girl had been through...it was hardly surprising.

But there was no time.

What do you think? One swift cut or a strand at a time?
Rogziel directed gleefully at his "prize." He was not one for enjoying making people feel helpless, but today, especially for these creatures, he'd indulge his darker side.

And then that big black head thrust forward, slamming into his own with intense velocity. Something cracked and the Heir recoiled in pain and shock. But his mandibles were so firmly clasped around the throat of the enemy, he could not pull away quick enough. In a flash, Asuka had whipped out both her prog knives.

"I'm not dying here, bastard!"
The freckled girl roared, commencing her brief but brutal assault. Being inside the Seraph's A-T field, she was not only protected from the heat, but could assault at will without mercy. Her right blade stabbed downwards into the creature's left eye. Her left blade, slashed away its mandibles, freeing both herself and the Seraph, the latter of which recoiled and span away into the murk screaming. But not before it got a good slash at the cable.

Asuka froze, hearing those chords be cut, and the rest straining and creaking under the weight. Sweat trickled down the back of her neck.

One snap followed another.

Oh...looks like I'm dying here after all. She sighed.

There was a dreadful snap...then a sudden jolt.

No falling sensation, nothing. Slowly, Asuka looked upwards to see a purple hand grasp her cable. Unit 01's white gaze was fixed upon her.

The redhead smiled a small smile.

"
Dummkopf. Can't just go throwing yourself after girls like that."

So close to each other, the Evas could establish a firm connection through radio. Having already done this, Shinji heard that and responded.

"
Just fancied a swim, Soryu-san. Enjoying the hot water?" There was pain in his tone. Unused to this sort of deployment, Shinji wasn't capable of shielding himself from the heat. Asuka felt a pang of guilt over that, but decided to humour him. Besides, Shinji Ikari came off as the sort of person who didn't like being pitied or having his nose wiped. Probably because he didn't enjoy being a burden to anyone.

She could respect that.

"
Can't say I rate it, Shinji. I don't think I'll be coming back here." She relaxed into her seat as she felt herself be pulled upwards.

"
Heh, nothing fazes you, does it?"

"
Not in the slightest, Third. Now pull quicker, it's too hot down here."
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"Bugger me that's heavy." Samuel hissed, feeling his muscles cry out in agony at their unjust abuse. It was a painstakingly slow process, hauling those two up. And the Imperial worried whether or not his grip would slip or his muscles, his well built by British army training doctrine, would give way.

I can't do that. Asuka's down there for Christ's sake!

"
Evangelions are heavy by nature, Meadow-san." A whisp of a voice nearly caused him to let go and jump in surprise. Fortunately, a new pair of hands had grasped the crane.

Unit 00 had arrived, and had now taken position behind him.

"
You took your bloody time!" Samuel yelled.

"
Forgive me. Once I received orders, I moved as swiftly as I could."

"
Well...at least you're here now. I assume you know what's going on?"

"
Ikari-kun has entered the mountain to assist Soryu-san. We are to pull them out through the use of this crane."

"Hmm, not a complete Plank after all...alright, 1, 2, 3, pull!"

With two pairs of hands it was far easier to haul the weight of two Evangelions back to the surface. But even then...it was no easy task.

"
It seems you are correct, Meadow-san." Rei found herself wincing slightly at her muscles pain.

"
Correct at what?" He muttered.

"
This is indeed, heavy."

"
I...ugh...gah...I...well done, Rei, have a bloody cookie..."

"
What is a cookie?"

Samuel's lip quivered.

They don't pay me enough for this shit.
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Far below, the Seraph spiralled uncontrollably for minutes on end. It was well the Fist wasn't connected to him, or else Rogziel's screams of rage and pain would have deafened him. Eventually, forcing past the agony, the Heir stopped his decent and seethed.

Pathetic...insolent...Vooren, filth! I will not humiliated like this, not defeated like this!

There was absolutely no question of retreating back to Vhaayn, even if it was what father wished. He had been bested, he had failed in his mission.

I must die for my mistake...or...

The Seraph looked upwards, to where its enemy would be thinking they'd reached safety. How wrong they were. Rogziel thought for a while longer, then quelled the anger in himself with an idea that brought total satisfaction.

Let this end with these Vooren gazing upon true might. Let them know the true grandeur of the Divine Race. And, like all things...let this end in blood.

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3:35pm, Crater

It took about thirty seconds of pulling, until finally the two Evas were retrieved from the magma. Some of Unit 01's armour was slightly melted, and Unit 02 had crumple marks around its neck. But ultimately, even with Shinji actually feeling as if his skin was smoking, the two were unharmed.

"
Did you get it?" Samuel directed at them.

"
I think so..." Asuka was unsure. The Seraph had looked to be in a whole load of pain and seriously injured. But whether or not it was dead...no, she'd killed it. As was to be expected.

"
Are you hurt?"

"
No. You know what I'm like, nothing keeps me down!"

"
Good to hear that, Asuka-san." A vid link to the Fuso popped up on all the huds of the Units, showing a tired yet relived Misato and the confused command crew of a Japanese FCV.

"
Misato-san. What happened?" Shinji breathed heavily, still wondering as to the true activities of the enemy. Granted he'd actually seen the Seraph, terrifying as it was, attempt to do...something to the redhead.

"
I don't know. Comms were down for whatever happened in the mountain. Asuka-san?"

The young German girl frowned slightly. Unsure herself of what the monster's intentions for her were..

"
I...I..."

The ground started to shake.

"
Lieutenant Colonel, we've picking up massive energy readings in the mountain. It looks like...an eruption..." Maya's voice sounded distant, but her words caught everyone's attention. The officer's of the Fuso had gone a deathly pale as Misato's brown eyes widened.

"
Get out of there, now!" She barked.

The four children didn't wait around. Asuka was already running before she realised Shinji had sliced the cables off her Unit. The military was backing up at full speed, and even then the Evangelions quite simply outstripped them.
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From aboard the Fuso's bridge, Misato watched the carnage unfold with grim control.

"
Spirits..." The Captain of the vessel whispered.

This was not an eruption. This was a volcano being ripped apart from the inside by an immensely more powerful force. Fire and magma was spread across the countryside in an apocalyptic manner. Before the eyes of all present, Mount Asama, a part of the beautiful Japanese landscape, was being obliterated. Turned from a great mountain into a black scar upon the land, by the power of a furious God Prince.

"
What's happening to that blue signature, Rits-chan?" She said urgently. The faux blonde looked up from Maya's barely salvaged laptop grimly.

"
Stronger than it was before."

"
Damn it."
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Mankind's defensive line had already readjusted, falling back a few miles from the hell Asama was unleashing upon earth. Had it been hardened veterans in those tanks and holding those rifles, they'd have observed with cold discipline. But these were men and women of the Tokyo-3 garrison, unseasoned and deeply afraid.

The Evas had assumed their positions, two of them having picked their pallet rifles back up from where they left them in the initial hurry to save Unit 02 and its Pilot. Rei, having held onto her weapon for much of the operation. Now they faced the ruined crater, spitting lava like some sort of demonic puss, prepared for whatever would come out.

But they weren't. No one was.

At first it was only a silhouette. A massive one, just as tall as an Eva. It was pretty much human in appearance. And then, winds of orange lightening began to clear away the debris and smoke, flickering around the figure, what seemed to be a cape fluttering out from the silhouette's back.

Across the silence echoed a new noise, a vicious and sharp one. The noise of a blade being drawn from its scabbard.

"
What in God's name..." Whispered Samuel. He and only he said a word among them, as Shinji, Asuka, and Rei merely looked on. The two normal born humans had widened eyes and gaping mouths, the clone blinked a few times, to ensure what she was seeing wasn't some delusion.

But this was all too real.

What stood there before all the world, was a vast, red eyed, white skinned, white haired human being. Clad in arcane red armour, white cape billowing magnificently, wicked looking blade of obsidian held in hand, this sight stumped all.
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"What...is that?" Misato forced her heart to slow its beat, forced memories of a similar pair of red eyes glaring down on her during the worst day of her life, out of her mind.

"
It's...the blue signature is coming from...it." Maya looked up, eyes wide as saucers. No one else found words to speak, so she was alone.

"
That's the Seraph."
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Though his form was exaggerated in size, this was the true shape of the Divine Species. Of the mightiest warrior race in the history of the Universe.

Rogziel threw his head back and roared in his guttural and harsh tongue, anticipating the coming combat with utter relish.

"Hoag Netzach! Keon Geutol, Keon Ejrod!"

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Well, the cat is out of the bag...for some...

Until next time my dear readers!
 
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Couple of types I forgot to catch, otherwise great.

Too bad original anime was so mixed mess, what from budget limits, what from depressed writer's ideas. In original series, this angel is best to forget from ridiculous suit for Asuka's evangelion and uninteresting fight.

This... promises interesting fight, as well kicking every human character into head to finally start asking questions "just what are those things" and "why do they attack", scrolls and other sources of data on seraphs being re-examined in sight of viewers. This happening in way that viewers can finally learn without having to look for third party materials and scrapped scripts that never made into production phase like in anime, even if you removed all seraph scenes.
 
There will be blood
Oh my, now imagine what i was listening in this scene?

Yep, perfect music for a perfect scene.

Man, he turned into a Seraph all the way, bloody hell.

GIVE ME MOAR, i want MOAR. That insane buildup.
 
What stood there before all the world, was a vast, red eyed, white skinned, white haired human being. Clad in arcane red armour, white cape billowing magnificently, wicked looking blade of obsidian held in hand, this sight stumped all.
...well, that's... Different. Wasn't expecting Rogziel to transform, that's for sure.

I'm looking forward to seeing what's next, though.
 
@Lord Sovereign what is the type of the sword used by Rogziel?

Divine blades are...weird...well, specifically those of Aesylian origin. As their civilization arose in volcanic ashlands, one of their preferred materials was obsidian. Not only did it have the black gleam that so many royals loved, it was also a perfect cutting tool. When combined with the A-T field haxx of the Divine, these were strengthened beyond belief, removing the problem of it shattering. In short, for them it became a substitute for iron.

So picture, a black, slightly serrated, long, evil looking thing with glowing orange runes etched into them. A crude looking straight sword without a cross guard, that actually seems hellish in nature. If you can picture that, you can imagine what a Divine sword looks like.
 
Divine blades are...weird...well, specifically those of Aesylian origin. As their civilization arose in volcanic ashlands, one of their preferred materials was obsidian. Not only did it have the black gleam that so many royals loved, it was also a perfect cutting tool. When combined with the A-T field haxx of the Divine, these were strengthened beyond belief, removing the problem of it shattering. In short, for them it became a substitute for iron.

So picture, a black, slightly serrated, long, evil looking thing with glowing orange runes etched into them. A crude looking straight sword without a cross guard, that actually seems hellish in nature. If you can picture that, you can imagine what a Divine sword looks like.

Well them give a chainsaw to the Evas...

Jokes aside, that thing will do a awesomely nasty damage.
 
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Good news everyone, the Rogziel battle is entering the final stages of editing. Also, I'm trying to be a bit more descriptive henceforth. I've always felt that my prose is serviceable at the very best, bland at the worst. Hence why I'm putting more effort into making it sound nice. For example, I've been tinkering with Sovereignty (it's entirely a side thing, it won't slow down my updating progress) and I have written in an actual description of what Shinji looks like right back in the first chapter (not updating or changing anything currently, just mucking about with my open office documents.) Just to give an example of what I'm trying to do, here is that segment.

Hope you like it!

"The early afternoon rays of sunlight poured through the train's hard plastic windows, casting great shadows across the walls and floors. Within this carriage only one individual sat, eyes closed, head leaning against the headrest, earphones jammed in. The solitude did not bother Shinji Ikari however, he'd grown accustomed to it over the years.

The sixteen year old young man did not look like anything out of the ordinary. His skin was the same as most other Japanese, an unremarkable yellow tan. His face was a thin one, a pointed chin, high cheek bones, thin eyebrows, and small, pointed yet delicately curved nose giving life to the expressions of the socially shy boy. Crowned with a mop of cut short and neat dark brown hair, bangs reaching down to his eyebrows save for a parting in the middle, he was the sort who would blend into a crowd with absolute ease. His clothes were simple yet smart, and expertly ironed. The buttoned up to the collar crimson shirt complemented the immaculately creased dark blue trousers, and the polished black shoes were further evidence of how well he maintained his possessions. His body however was under built and slim, implying a healthy diet but little exercise.

Aside from that, there was truly nothing eye catching about him. Just another lanky looking teenager in the crowd.

But behind those closed eyelids, a medium width between them, resided a pair of cerulean orbs almost as deep as the ocean with feeling, and as sensitive as a baby's skin."
 
Chapter 11.4
The Seraph started walking, his...no, its, foot steps treading purposefully and heavily. Despite being miles away from him, the Eva Pilots could see the bottomless hatred and anger in those alien yet human scarlet eyes, feeling it burn their very essences. And the face which those eyes were set into, one that was thin, gaunt, and pointed, made it seem as if unfathomable rage and brutality was in his very nature.

And no one who made these observations were wrong.

He was every bit as tall as they, 160 metres, maybe even more. The armour the Seraph bore was an intricately crafted set of plates and chain mail, like some coated in blood red hybrid of 15th century European plate armour and dark age Norse Lamellar. There were some hints of a cream tunic or brown leather gloves and boots beneath it all, but near everything was covered in armour and mail. And with that pure white cape billowing out behind him, as if Rogziel's mere presence caused blusters of wind, the enemy of mankind was a most impressive sight. The eerie clanking his advance made echoed across the landscape and through the hearts of all who heard it.

As the fiery ruins of Mount Asama descended from the heavens, Rogziel's A-T field flared when it effortlessly brushed aside great chunks of city destroying debris. The Divine Heir's lip curled into a snarl as he quickened his pace.

Father would doubtlessly chide me for destroying such a fine piece of land...but I care not. My thirst for vengeance must be satiated. They must die.

"All Units, open fire!" Misato barked across every frequency with uncharacteristic fear. Shinji, though vaguely aware of it, had no time to ponder. He was already levelling his rifle and waiting for his foe to come into range.

The rest of Eva squad did the same, aside from Asuka who lacked a pallet rifle to begin with, and could only frown in annoyance at her slightly melted prog knives.

Gott knows how many Marks it will take to get some new ones...Chancellor Mack is going to kill me.

With a roar, the guns of the JSA unleashed their choir of death and destruction, stabbing flame at the enemy. The Fuso backed off as quickly as it could, still unloading a payload of missiles and rail gun accelerated pallet shells. As it was so many times before, everything the soldiers of Japan could throw at this foe so far beyond them, was useless. Whilst it was not unlikely that a Seraph's A-T field could be breached by lasting and excessive firepower, the monstrosities would never give them the time to do so.

Rogziel didn't even seem bemused or playful like previous Seraphim. He was unlike any Shinji had faced before, and that wasn't in terms of appearance. He felt...different. No cockiness, no sadism, just rage.

"This is going to be all or nothing, people. That thing isn't going mess around with us." Shinji relayed hoarsely to his comrades, desperately fighting back his fear.

"What? How do you know that!?" Samuel challenged shrilly, still wrapping his head around what was stalking towards them.

"I don't know...it's just a feeling..."

"Feelings aren't going to help us here, Shinji. We need facts, and I ficking doubt we're getting them!" Asuka interrupted tightly, exasperated and angered with how the day had turned out.

Rei meanwhile, had tilted her head in silent observation. Surprise, shock and...curiosity had filled her being. The living legacy of Yui Ikari felt every bit as fascinated as when she'd first discovered the name of her her hair colour.

Blue.

What are you? And why...why do we look alike?

Undoubtedly a question for the Commander, or for anyone with the knowledge.

Rogziel slowly thrust out his arm, a storm of orange lightning rushing forward. It was a show of power that exceeded even the force of a category five Hurricane, smashing into the A-T fields of the Evangelions, driving them back hundreds of feet. Their fields provided protection for the men and tanks directly behind them, but as for everyone else...

Shinji could only watch in wide eyed horror as thousands of people were flung across the landscape of Japan, steel and flesh being mangled in equal measure. With a simple flick of his wrist, the former successor to the Aesylian throne had slaughtered seven thousand human beings.

For the JSA, it was beyond even the wrath of Sachiel. This was a true Yokai, having taken human form to rip out their souls and devour them.

The young Japanese boy made a split second decision. He flicked open a channel to all frequencies and yelled. "Attention all JSA units, get out of here, now. You can't stop this thing!"

Ritsuko's face popped up on vid link, her green eyes narrowed.

"Pilot Ikari, you do not have authorisation to give that order-"

"No damn it, he's right. All JSA units, follow that command. There's nothing else you can do, get the hell out of here!" Misato cut in, having gotten over her initial shock.

Those eyes...those hellish red eyes...she'd have to think about it later. Granted, Rei had red eyes and they unnerved the purplehead. But these were something else entirely. Something infinitely more angry and powerful.

Thousands of infantry pulled back in an ordered, regimental fashion, columns of armoured vehicles doing the same. Just as it had been at Capital defence line 1, the JSA moved with the discipline and calm of veterans, no matter what force of nature came their way.

"All Eva Units, push forward! Take the bastard head on!" Misato ordered, her tone assertive again.

Eva squad thundered forward. Closing to range rapidly, those who held pallet rifles opened fire. A solid wall of explosive shells slammed into Rogziel's A-T field, obscuring him from view with yellow explosions and smoke. Shinji emptied his rifle, cast it aside, then drew his prog knife. Samuel had done the same with his blade, and Asuka hadn't a rifle to begin with. Rei however kept her weapon, darting around the side of the Seraph and reloading.

From the vast cloud of smoke Rogziel burst forth, roaring in fury as he launched himself at his enemy. His vicious looking blade swished through the air at Shinji's head, causing the Third child to barely block with his knife and field. Whilst it was enough to prevent his head being cut off, a gauntleted fist soon followed and stuck him directly in the face. The Heir's roundhouse punch smashed through his protective shield and connected with the Eva's cheek. It's boy could have sworn he felt and heard a crack.

Unit 01 staggered backwards as the former successor threw himself at Unit 03, not giving Eva squad a second to reform. Sword clanged with sword as the two combatants cancelled out their fields. There was a frantic series of parries and blocks on the part of Samuel, the Seraph using its unfathomable strength it its advantage, savagely hacking away with his blade.

Asuka had moved to flank the eldritch prince and was now charging into his left. The girl produced a horrific grin, snarling in bloodlust.

You are mine, Seraph!

Noticing her, Rogziel forced Samuel's sword down with his own, then thrust out his free hand to grab Unit 02 by the throat. Asuka didn't have time to gasp (let alone react) as she was lifted off he feet and thrown into Unit 03, knocking the British pilot off his feet.

Instead of trying to finish them off, a mistake many of his siblings had made before, Rogziel remained totally aware of his surroundings and swung around, expertly blocking Shinji's strike, who'd regained his senses. The boy grimaced at the feeling of warm blood dripping from his nostrils, but stayed focused.

The Seraph threw him off and came at him again, swinging powerfully, precisely, yet angrily. It wanted him dead, it wanted them all dead.

Shinji had never fought anything which could properly emote before, let alone had the face of person. And that expression of total disdain, of utter, bottomless disgust for him and the race he was a part of, chilled him to the bone.

That obsidian blade crackled with a wicked looking energy, the same sort which A-T fields manifested as. What appeared to be runes where etched into it. Their meaning, Shinji did not understand. But he could guess it wasn't friendly.

Rogziel forced his enemy's guard down, then made a precise slash at Unit 01's throat. Only a wealth of experience spared the boy from feeling his neck artery being opened up as he leaned backwards. Pressing his attack despite missing, the Seraph turned his cut into a thrust, keeping the Knight of NERV on the back foot.

Back peddling, Shinji made another stab in what he saw as a moment of opportunity, a slash that went too wide, but the wrath of Netzach corrected himself with ease. His left hand came from below to grab the purple armoured hand holding the prog knife and squeezed.

The Japanese boy shrieked in pain as he felt his fist be crushed, forcing him to drop the knife. At that moment, as if sensing the trouble he was in, Rei attacked Rogziel in the flank. Not nearly as brashly as Asuka had, but still with anger in her heart. Her eyebrows had narrowed in an uncharacteristic display of rage, the pallet rifle being the conduit for her anger.

Although it wasn't enough to harm the Seraph, it did gain his attention. Rogziel turned his gaze upon the white Evangelion, lip quivering.

"Lih anri set, Vooren. Ifre kraesem." He growled.

Using this momentary distraction, Shinji tore himself free of Seraph's grip and scrambled away for all he was worth. Not to flee, but to gain breathing space. Noticing his foe's escape, Rogziel flung a wall of orange lightening at the boy with a mere flick of his wrist. Unit 01 went tumbling, its pilot banging his head nastily for what was not the first time that day.

The red armoured Divine advanced on Unit 00, blade scraping against the ground.

"Piss off!" Samuel's roar took the Seraph a little by surprise. Not nearly enough to actually be caught off guard, but enough to raise an eyebrow.

Your babbling of obscenities will not save you.

The Imperial Evangelion made a precise thrust, one which Rogziel easily parried. Blades of obsidian and steel continued to clash. The difference between the two's sword play was noticeable for all to see. The Seraph poured in heavy and precise blows, yet was quick to deflect. Samuel on the other hand was lighter on his feet, darting back and forth, more focused on slashing and cutting instead of outright bisection.

Rei had used up yet another clip of ammunition, as she split her attention between staying behind the enemy and reloading. Were she offthat disposition, the albino would have been frustrated. Although the vast, stratospheric bombardment deflecting fields of both the Evas and Seraph had been neutralised, smaller, weaker ones could still be manifested. Enough to block pallet fire at the very least.

Shinji shook his head to force the stars out of his eyes, instinctively flexing his hand to reassure himself nothing was broken. Weaponless, he looked around for his prog knife. Seeing it on the ground, he made to reclaim it but was taken aback by the whistling speed of a black armoured hand snatching the blade up and thundering towards the enemy.

Asuka was furious. This thing had tried to ensnare her, to trick her, deny her glory, and now it dared to try and lay a finger on her only friend in the world? Samuel was taking care of himself, slightly on the back foot but holding his own against the Seraph. The enemy, in a way similar to the redhead, had let his rage get the better of him.

The freckled girl leapt into the air just before she made contact. Asuka didn't care if it noticed or acted against her, she was going to hurt this creature. Badly.

Sensing the danger long before it came, Rogziel threw off Samuel's attack and pivoted to his left, swinging his blade with wrathful precision. In mid air, Unit 02's arm extended with Shinji's prog blade in hand. The Divine Heir was confident his enemy would try to evade the strike out of sheer self preservation, but he underestimated someone with a temper on par with his own.

His blade cut across Unit 02's black chest, liquid gushing forth from the wound, but Rogziel's red eyes widened. He tried to lean back, but the knife cut through his throat in a simple slash.

Asuka hit the ground hard, both her hand and that of Unit 02 clenching her side as she hissed and trembled in agony. It felt as if her intestines would fall out. And in the case of Unit 02...some stringy flesh like thins poked out between the slit in her armour.

She crawled around for a moment, furiously trying to fight off the nausea and the pain, far too stubborn to pass out. But Asuka needn't have worried, for the Seraph was staggering and choking on his own blood. Rei poured in the fire to keep the enemy disoriented, long enough for the squad's true heavy hitter to carry out his assault.

Shinji had watched everything unfold in slow motion, his brain on instinct calculating his next course of action. Unit 03 had backed off and gone to Unit 02's side, to assist his comrade and give the purple Eva no obstruction. The brown haired boy urged his steed forward, taking the strangely looking foe head on, his right arm coiling to throw a punch. Nothing fancy, nothing overly clever, just a brutally straight forward strike to the face.

Rogziel was too weak, too stunned to resist as Shinji closed the gap so quickly and delivered the heaviest blow he could, propelled forth by gargantuan muscles and the instinctive use of an A-T field to maximise damage. There was a sickening crack as the fist made contact with the Seraph's jaw, followed by this mighty individual being flung across the battlefield by the sheer force of it.

Spirits...it's like something out of Dragonball. Shinji involuntarily chuckled at his reference.

His smile soon disappeared though, upon watching Samuel help Asuka to her feet. Whatever was...hanging out of that cut in her stomach caused his own to twist in on itself. But in that moment, his mind clicked at this final conformation.

The Evangelions were not war machines. He wasn't entirely sure what they were...and part of him really didn't want to know. And then he realised how much pain the girl must be in, and chastised himself for not recognizing it sooner.

"Are you okay?" He walked over to them, Rei standing at a slight distance.

"I'm fine." The redhead muttered in a tone that indicated she really wasn't.

"No sympathetic injury thank god. But lower your Pilot Link for heaven's sake!" The Imperial pleaded, as if he were some worried elder brother.

"I'm fine, verdammut-"

"Do as he says, Asuka-san. You won't be of help to anyone in this state." Misato ordered sternly. This was not up for debate.

Asuka bowed her head, and did as she was told. Dropping her link to some fifty percent, the feeling in her stomach becoming a minor niggling sensation. She stood up fully and exhaled deeply.

"Let's finish this."
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The Seraph had been flung into the remnants of the mountain he'd ruined, tumbling over and over himself, landing in a heap. He breathed heavily for a while, spitting out blue blood from his quivering lips.

Bruised and bleeding, Rogziel gritted his teeth and forced himself to his feet. Before eyes that simply couldn't make sense of him, the great gash in his neck slowly sealed itself shut. Narrowing his eyes into hellish red slits, he slowly lifted his left hand, trembling with exertion. As if lifting something unfathomably heavy.

I will crush you...I will crush you...

The ground shook beneath their feet.

"Back up, back up!" Shinji barked on instinct, and not one of his colleagues ignoring him. Cracks and fissures tore their way through the ground, long dormant magma veins flowing upwards along with the Earth which had imprisoned them. Slowly, a huge clump of the landscape, five hundred metres in length, was ripped free from mother Earth's embrace. Then, with slow and ruthless concentration, Rogziel thrust his arm out.

"Mein gott." Asuka whispered. Her heart threatened to rip itself free from her chest, owing to how how hard it beat. Her mouth became as dry as a desert, and her eyes widened into saucers. The same could be said for the rest of Eva squad, aside from Rei of course. Even then...the albino felt a twinge of awe.

The remnants of mount Asama surged towards the four Evangelions at break neck speed, orange lightning crackling around this apocalyptic sight.

On instinct, four voices cried out, panickstricken, "A-T field, max power!" to shield themselves from this onslaught. Their feet were forced into the ground from the sheer force, but none were bowled off their feet. Then, the last bolder to be hurled at them was sliced in half from behind by a furious Rogziel, having used the attack to mask his charge, throwing himself at the children of Eva one last time.

Specifically targeting the purple devil who'd killed so many of his siblings.

Regardless of my fate, death comes for you today, Vooren scum!

Shinji threw his head back and screamed when that blade of obsidian punched through his shoulder, then was silenced by a fist slamming into his face. Rogziel couldn't finish the job off however, he had to twist to beat back Samuel's futile assault. Asuka attempted to flank the Seraph again, but it would not be caught off guard twice. With the mere flick of his wrist, a hurricane of orange energy swept the black Evangelion aside, striking it with such force that its injury was ripped open.

The redhead howled, desperately clutching her side as she went down. Even at 50% link it still hurt beyond imagination. Indeed, it was a testament to her endurance and will that she didn't pass out but instead struggled on, forcing herself back to her feet and limping towards her enemy.

Rei continued to provide supporting fire for the rest of the squad, but there was no realistic chance of bringing the Seraph down. Not with its field up.

"Shinji-kun, Meadow-san, I need you to restrain that thing. Ayanami-san, wait until I give the order to close range and blow it away. We get its field down and we can kill it." Misato declared, having concocted a plan.

"What about me!?" Asuka cried, sudden dread at the idea of being left out floating through her mind.

"...do you mind being a distraction?"

The redhead paused for a moment, her lip twitching slightly, then sighed and nodded.

I'll take what I can get.

"Good, I need you to attack the Seraph head on..."

The Ninth Seraph took stock of his surroundings. Samuel had backed off and was keeping his distance, like the rest of Eva squad. Rogziel's blood boiled at their cowardice, at their refusal to take him head on simply because he was stronger than them. They'd lost, they were always going to lose, so why did they not choose to die with honour?

Because they are Vooren. Honour is an anathema to their filthy usurping kind.

Suddenly, the black one darted towards him. He marvelled slightly at how durable this creature was. Had he landed a blow like that on one of his kind, they'd be on the verge of death. Asuka merely grit her teeth, throwing herself at the Seraph. Her comrades were already moving in on the sides and the clone was preparing to make the kill shot.

The redhead ducked under the swipe of his blade but presented her face for his fist. Stars promptly exploded in her sapphire eyes as that red gauntlet dented Unit 02's helmet. Asuka allowed herself to stumble backwards and topple over, giving the impression of incapacitation.

The Ninth Seraph stormed towards her, raising his blade for the killer strike, his eyes becoming not much more than red slits of hate. Then, so enraptured by his anger, so enthralled by the idea of spilling his enemy's blood, Rogziel uncharacteristically failed to notice the other two Evas.

His sword arm was grasped by Shinji, his other by Samuel. In that moment, the former felt more muscle strain than even what he experienced against the crushing jaws of the 7th Seraph. Both boys knew they were weaker than the Seraph and there was only a matter of seconds before it broke free and slaughtered them.

Rogziel roared with anger, thrashing around to get the two Evas off him. So that he may strike a killing blow on the infernal foe which had eluded him in the volcano. Asuka was already moving back, but not quick enough. The eldritch Prince was far beyond those attempting to restrain him.

Inevitably, the former successor ripped himself free of the purple Eva, swiping it off its feet with the back of his hand. His sword arm free, he made a deep, terrible slicing motion at the young Imperial major.

There was no way to dodge the attack. The blade would connect with Unit 03, split its skull open, and might outright kill the pilot from that neural feedback, incapacitating him at the very best. The Seraph would then be free to finish off Asuka, then overwhelm the remaining Evas. But it was not to be, as Rogziel's enraged expression faded.

The barrel of a pallet rifle filled his vision.

Rei, having darted to close range the moment Asuka went down, putting herself between the redhead and the Seraph, squeezed the trigger, unleashing a long, lasting burst of fire. Every single round, fired point blank, hit their mark. Rogziel, robbed of his A-T field for a few precious moments could only watch and feel as his chest, ribcage, internal organs, and life sphere, were ripped to shreds. Mashed together into a horrendous blue pulp or simply blown away.

From that and his own strength, he ripped himself free of the other Eva. He staggered, confusion and bewilderment overcoming his senses. The Heir felt weak...beyond all measure.

He collapsed to his knees and looked up at his killers, blue blood gushing forth from his chest and his lips. The obsidian blade clattered out of his hands.

The young albino girl walked over to him, raising her weapon to execute him via a round to the head. Even in his dying state however, the wrath of the former successor, and his unquenchable spirit, would not be suppressed.

Rogziel snarled and let off a final blast of concentrated energy with the thrust of his arm. Rei instinctively dodged, but was too close to completely avoid it. The unnatural human hissed in agony as she felt her left arm evaporate. Immediately in her defence, a purple fist slammed into the face of the Seraph, knocking him onto his back.

Shinji stood over his enemy, ready and more than happy to deliver the killing blow.

But something stopped him. That expression...one of struggle, confusion and...fear, touched his soul. The Ninth Seraph, a creature supposedly beyond human comprehension was dying.

And it was afraid.

"Misato-san, what's the stauts of the blue signature?" He murmured. Slowly and cautiously, ready to spring away at a moment's notice, the other Evas approached their fallen foe, still not quite believing what they were seeing.

"Fading fast. It's dying. Well done, Pilots." Misato nodded with tired satisfaction. Unlike those under her command, she didn't see a fellow sentient being in pain and fear, but a dangerous creature that deserved destruction. Perhaps the purplehead just couldn't see the situation or her enemy in any other way.

For that would have called so many things she blindly believed into question...

The four teenagers slowly caught their breath for a while. Shinji turned towards Rei and felt his heart rip itself open at the sight of the ruined, scorched stump that was once Unit 00's right arm.

"Rei, are you alright?" He asked gently, too concerned for honorifics.

"The injury is merely superficial. I am fine, Ikari-kun." Rei was nonchalant, but still grateful for the concern in her own way. The albino did feel something...warm...when he spoke to her like that. As if she was not merely a tool but something important and irreplaceable.

An incorrect assertion...but not unappreciated.

"Jah, jah, don't mind me. It's not like I've got intestines hanging out..." Asuka grumbled, comically yet disgustingly trying to stuff Unit 02's guts back into its stomach.

"Internal organs...christ, that's thrown the whole war machine bollocks out the window-" The Imperial Eva immediately brandished its sword as Rogziel's left arm lashed out. For a moment, it grabbed hold of Unit 01's ankle, eliciting a surprised and characteristically wimpy shriek from Shinji, who jumped back from the touch.

For a moment he felt a surge of energy within himself, raging in his mind as the Heir touched it for what he needed.

Blades and rifles were pointed at Rogziel, but he didn't pay them any mind. The Seraph looked his enemy, the purple devil, dead in the eye. He opened his mouth to speak, blue blood issuing forth from it. But what came out was not a garbled language no one understood.

"You lack what it takes to win this war...Vooren scum." Rogziel spat in fluent Japanese. He was met with silence.

The Divine Heir struggled on for a few more moments, still raging at his fate, at the dying of the light.

I cannot die, I have work to do. I...must...destroy...them...I am afraid. I am afraid. I don't want to go yet...Father, help me.

Rogziel felt no more.

The Evas stood there for a minute straight, no one able to say anything through sheer shock. In the end, it was Misato who'd been blinking in disbelief, that broke this nothingness. Blunt as ever, anything else would have been awkward and she didn't have time for that.

"You know that pool we were at earlier? They've got jacuzzis...we're going to need them."
 
For some reason, this right here feels a lot darker than most of the setting... Some how... in context at least...

Pretty much, they've just had a big terrible battle with a humanoid creature that can talk and appears to be something like a person, thousands of people are dead, the landscape is absolutely devastated, and a fair few of our heroes are in pain and under a bit of stress.

Everyone: We need a fucking bath.
 
Pretty much, they've just had a big terrible battle with a humanoid creature that can talk and appears to be something like a person, thousands of people are dead, the landscape is absolutely devastated, and a fair few of our heroes are in pain and under a bit of stress.

Everyone: We need a fucking bath.

Well, they literally killed a sapient being that is really similar to them, that is a "human". One think is fighting faceless monster that you already depersonalized, another thing is realizing that that monster is actually "human". Even for Samuel one thing is killing thousands of people atop a war machine, they're "statistics", a bunch of "casualties", another totally different thing is looking at someone in the eyes and killing them.

For Asuka the problem will be that again, she can't win without outside help, she doesn't give a damn if it's human or not, the only frame she really works is "friend or foe".

Rei will obey orders and knows what they are.

The blow will come to Shinji, because, one thing was fighting in a "honorable" way against Sachiel, in this fight they dogpilled on a better foe in the most cowardly way.

Yep, everyone needs a shower to clean themselves of their cruelty (Samuel), weakness (Asuka), and treachery (Shinji).

Another thing about the chapter is that you dind't go the shounen type of fights where they extend for a looo~ooong time, specially because the Seraph don't know their enemies so they fight blindly, but that gamble Asuka did won't work again against the other Serarphs if they know their tatics.

Funny thing is, even if they are sending one by one, the sheer amount of information they are getting, will be extremely destructive in the hands of a fucking powerhouse like Zeruel, who will come with nearly all the information possible about his enemies.

Again, really nice chapter, awesome fight and keep it coming.
 
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Chapter 11.5
7:00pm, Uesegi leisure centre

The water was warm, perfectly warm. Air bubbles being pumped through pipes further added to his and the Imperial's comfort, almost sending the latter to sleep.

It had been a long journey back, a long debrief, and it was already getting dark by the time the four children got out of NERV Central. Nevertheless, the pool was commandeered for their use by Misato who felt they'd earned this. She was currently sitting in another jacuuzi, in another room with the female pilots. Which left Shinji and Samuel to relax by themselves.

Shinji had never been alone with the aristocrat before, usually having Asuka or Misato around with him. It was...awkward. Refusing to let that ruin this however, the two had not spoken a word to each other and slumped into the soothing water.

Slowly, he swished his hand through the bubbles, enjoying the feeling of them flowing through his fingertips. Water had always been one of the few places where he felt at peace and this was no exception. He would likely have been asleep himself where it not for those terrible words crashing through his mind like a tsunami.

"You lack the stomach to win this war, Vooren scum."

The Seraph, a being he'd been taught to think of as "beyond his comprehension", had spoken to him in his own tongue fluently and savagely. Then of course, there was the way in which it referred to their current conflict.

War...it called this a war. This isn't just dealing with random freaks of nature, we're facing an enemy that's coordinating. I can see this so...why can't father?

He'd brought this up to the Supreme Commander in his debriefing, for although Shinji was fully aware the man probably cared very little for him, this was too important for a blood feud to get in the way. Whilst Rei hadn't quite backed him up, she had described in detail the behaviour of the Seraph. Asuka and Samuel meanwhile, despite remaining strangely quiet, did add their views occasionally.

And it sounded like they were swaying to his opinion, as he elaborated on how the Seraphim appeared to be changing tactics in response to NERV's victories.

Gendo however, completely ignored him.

"The Seraphim are above and beyond us. We can scarcely grasp their existence, let alone the workings of their minds. As such, understanding them is for now, pointless."

Shinji opened his mouth to respond, but a simple icy glare from his father killed any retort. So he let the issue go, bowed his head, then left that dark office a few minutes later.

Yet...strange defiance still bubbled and boiled within him, like a cauldron filled with simmering discontent.

They can't just be mindless beasts, they can't...

Even Misato seemed to be holding onto the general and accepted notion. Granted she seemed a little more curious about it, but nevertheless felt it was irrelevant.

"They're monsters who want to kill us all, Shinji-kun. We don't need to understand much else about them."

Here and now, Shinji was tempted to ask for the Imperial's opinion on what they had seen this day. As arrogant and pompous as he could be, Samuel was clearly no fool. Surely he'd understand...maybe?

Of course, owing to his nature, the young Japanese boy didn't have the courage to push this. His bravery only found solid ground on the battlefield, it was locked out of social interaction by an impenetrable wall of fear and awkwardness.

"It's been months since I had a bath, let alone this." Samuel happily mused, his expression beatific.

"Really? I can never have enough of them." Shinji replied quietly.

"I don't have anything against them per say, it's just a good deal more convenient and quick to have a shower."

"Umm...showers are...alright, I guess. But it's just hot water raining down on you. With a bath you can actually...sink into it."

"Hmm, perhaps we shall just agree that hot water is universally nice?"

Shinji chuckled slightly at what was almost a peace offer. And considering that neither the Imperial nor himself would budge on this matter, he decided to accept it.

"Yes. Still can't understand those lunatics who have cold showers..." He shuddered at the thought. Samuel, winced.

"Goodness gracious those people are mad. Just...just...why would you do that to yourself?"

"Some kind of masochism perhaps?"

The blonde boy's electric blue orbs snapped open as he sniggered. That shrill laughter was quite infectious, so Shinji soon joined him.

"Yes indeed, Shinji. Cold showers are exceptionally kinky."

"...kinky?" The Japanese boy titled his head. Samuel's mirth faded away, confusion then exasperation crossing his features.

"...is there something I've missed here?"

"Oh god, I am not explaining this to you." The aristocrat rolled his eyes. "Go and talk to you PSHCE teacher about it."

"What's that?"

"Bloody hell...your Sex Ed."

"Oh...oh dear..." Shinji's eyes widened, mortified. He blushed furiously, then dropped his gaze.

"Don't go using words you don't understand, Shinji. Reminds me of one of your damnable cartoons. What was it again...the one where they kept using crucifixes because they thought-" Samuel raised his fingers for air quotes. "-it was cool..."

Shinji let out a sigh at that. As little as he watched television, even he was aware of this particular show's infamy.

"Spirits...that one..."
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Meanwhile, in another jacuuzi in another room, one of NERV's two female pilots and her commanding officer resided in bubbling luxury. Here, in perfect security where they would not be disturbed, the two women had completely stripped off. Rei's absence from there was explained by the strange albino's desire to go swimming. Apparently, "it was too hot."

Asuka loved this, feeling totally and completely free. Though this heat covered her completely, it was not like the sickly, sweating claustrophobia within mount Asama.

What had nearly been her grave.

The redhead paid no mind to that. This was a good time, not something to spend dwelling upon a possible, horrendous death at the hand of an enemy that was far too human looking for her liking. Even now, she was kicking the more scientific and inquisitive part of her mind back into a dark corner.

For this moment, no questioning, no piloting, no competing. Just the relaxation a beautiful Olympian goddess such as herself deserved.

Heh...Olympian goddess...don't kid yourself, freckle face.

One of her eyelids cracked open slightly, a sea of sapphire gazing out. Quietly, it observed a perfectly contented Misato, then flashed downwards to inspect the body to which it belonged. Much to her frustration, Asuka had to fight down a pang of jealously and...something else.

For a moment, her shoulders slumped slightly along with her previously happy yet tired smile. This didn't last long, control was asserted ruthlessly and swiftly.

Pfft, don't know why anyone would want those cow udders. And...that scar. Gott, I've never seen that before.

Directly under Misato's left breast was a large, ugly but long scabbed over scar. Like some sort of slash mark.

Asuka ignored it and closed her eye shut, sliding into the warm water just a bit more. They stayed like this for a few further minutes, until Misato clearly got bored and straightened her back, moving her legs in the water.

And as her former Guardian, she was aware of what Asuka pretending to be asleep looked like.

"Well then, Asuka-chan. How are you settling in?" Misato inquired in her naturally friendly manner.

Sighing, the redhead opened her eyes and forced blue to meet brown. The purplehead wanted a conversation, and the young girl knew she'd get it.

"It's not all horrible I guess. Things are clean, people are polite, food isn't bad, and the countryside is easy on the eyes. But..." A hand instinctively went to fiddle with her mane. "It's so hot. People are so polite they're almost wooden, you don't have any locks on your doors, you're language and kanji is still strange, and I don't really want to talk to any of my classmates..."

"You miss Germany, don't you?"

"No! Of course not." Asuka's snorted, as if the notion was absurd. Raising an eyebrow yet knowing it was hopeless, Misato moved on.

"You've only been here for a few weeks. It took Shinji-kun a while to make friends as well, so don't worry." She smiled reassuringly.

"I'm not looking for friends...I don't need friends." The redhead muttered darkly, looking away from her superior officer. The girl had felt another stab of darkness when she addressed that sneaking suspicion of hers.

It only made sense after all.

"You know about my past...don't you?" Asuka asked, uncharacteristically nervous. Her hand didn't leave her red hair.

"The bits that weren't blacked out, but yes, I know enough." Misato admitted grimly yet as gently as she could.

The redhead lifted her gaze, her lips moving but no sound coming out of them. She would open her mouth, as if to say something, think better of it, close it, then repeat this process again and again.

"You need to put all that behind you now. It'll only get in the way." The purplehead asserted kindly. When it came to a past such as that, one could only move on in her view.

Asuka's expression fell microscopically, then hardened back into being its normal self. Even then, completely unnoticed by Misato, a hint of disappointment weighed those sapphire eyes down.

The rest of that bath was taken in silence.
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Rei did not often feel comfortable. The isolation and "pain of life", as the Commander put it, was often troublesome to deal with. But there could be no rest, not until the Seraphim were defeated. Then and only then could she embrace oblivion and give her children peace.

But here...in the water...she felt soothed.

Swimming length after length, the artificial human did not stop or pause once. It was difficult for her to become exerted or out of breath, owing to her unique origins. So she kept pushing her arms through the water and kicking her feet.

Rei's mind however, was not entirely focused on exercise.

Why do I doubt? The Commander is correct, is always correct. And yet...he seemed so dismissive of what happened today. Of...that...

Those red eyes so like her own flashed in Rei's mind.

The enemy bears similarity to me. Is that not cause for questioning? The Commander has often described the spawn of Adam as mighty yet unintelligent. At least, in the way the children of Lilith understand. And yet...and yet...such anger. Such hate...

She knew little of human interaction, but even Rei recognized that emotion when confronted with it. The albino stopped halfway through her 21st length, resting on the side of the pool. Her inherent inquisitiveness had got the better of her.

What are they?
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"Meadow-san..."

"Yes?"

Shinji paused, mulling over his words in an attempt to find the right ones.

"Well, out with it." Samuel demanded, his eyes sparkling with mild irritation.

"What do you make of them? Our enemy I mean..." The younger boy shifted uncomfortably. "You're not buying the whole monsters beyond our imagination thing any more, are you?"

The Imperial breathed in, slowly but deeply. As if...unsettled by the whole thing.

"No...no I don't. What baffles me is how command is handling this. Just outright ignoring it..." The elder by a month bit his lip. "In truth, I don't know what to think of them. I'm a soldier, I just know that the Empire's enemies must die. But...no threat should be underestimated. Nations have fallen in the past because of such mistakes, Britain shall not."

"At least you believe me." Shinji huffed a little.

"I assure you, Asuka probably thinks something similar. As for Rei...she's a plank, but she's no fool." Samuel added.

"...would you mind not calling her that? Ayanami-chan is actually quite thoughtful, she just doesn't understand how to show it."

"I've yet to see proof of that-"

"Please, Meadow-san."

"Hmph, fine. I'll try and tone it back a little. I hadn't really thought about it because Rei never seemed to take offense."

"As I said. She's not the best as voicing her feelings."

"Really now? She certainly seems to have come capability of doing it around you."

Shinji frowned in confusion, pulling his head back slightly as if he were some frightened owl.

"What, you must have noticed? That clone is ferociously protective of you." The Imperial added, as if this were obvious.

To the brown haired boy, this was a strange notion. It was he who felt protective of her. He who wanted to wrap her up in his arms and shield her from this awful world. Could it be...she wished to do the same for him?

"I...it never occurred to me...Ayanami-chan is dear to me, and I know that's reciprocated a little, but...I didn't think to that extent?" Shinji felt his cheeks warm up.

"Well now you know." Samuel grinned at Shinji's red cheeks. "You have good taste, my friend. She's a pretty girl, quite ethereal, takes care of her health, reasonably well endowed, you really could do worse."

The other boy's eyes turned into saucers as his mouth frantically opened and closed.

Really!? Why, why, why, why, why, fucking why, do people keep thinking this shit!? Rei is not my girlfriend, damn it!

"It...it really isn't like that. Seriously, Meadow-san!" Shinji threw out his arms in exasperation, much to the amusement of the Imperial whose grin only broadened.

"Very well, I shall say nothing, Casanova." He chuckled a little. "You can call me Samuel, you know."

The other blinked for a moment, surprised and taken aback by this. Of course the Brit was aware, or at least had a vague awareness of, honorifics. Even then...this was quite a leap forward in terms of relationship. Was it just cultural blindness on the part of the blonde aristocrat (as Shinji suspected) or...did he actually see him as a friend.

Regardless, he'd asked to be referred to as such, so he did just that.

"Very well, Samuel-san." Shinji nodded. It was Samuel's turn to splutter for although the former's intentions were unquestionably noble, it had come out as "Sameuru-san" due to lingual differences.

"Jesus Christ...Samuel...Samuel, say it with me!"

The Japanese boy did as he was told, but to no avail. The "L" simply wouldn't come.

Samuel slumped into the jacuuzi, utterly defeated.

"Good Lord, it's going to take years to properly civilise you lot." He huffed and puffed, but not with hostility.

For a moment, the younger boy pondered something. With the Imperial's request to be referred to by his first name...what about Asuka? She was calling Shinji by his first name now...did that mean anything? Of course that could be down to gaijin mannerisms, but, perhaps this warranted inquiry. If she wanted to be spoken to in the manner that friends did...he wouldn't decline.

Shinji smiled slightly. Perhaps they weren't really close friends so to speak, but Samuel and Asuka were people he could rely on in battle, and Rei was outright family as far as he was concerned. The four of them had proven they could get the job done thrice now, so he really shouldn't be worrying. The squad wasn't perfect, but it was by no means incompetent, they could do this.

But still, as was his nature...Shinji worried.

That was the most powerful Seraph we've ever faced. It killed thousands of people with a flick of the hand and could easily have murdered any one of us if we hadn't been careful...ugh, it's probably because I'm such a coward, but I can't shake this feeling that we've only touched the tip of the ice burg...Spirits help us.
 
"The Seraphim are above and beyond us. We can scarcely grasp their existence, let alone the workings of their minds. As such, understanding them is for now, pointless."
Most hated phrase. Probably better that we put Cthulhu on operating table and perform autopsy to see how he works, instead of just avoiding him and hoping he will ignore us.
We shall advance and hopefully preserve some of sanity, or fall to stone age if not careful. But not doing anything is very likely bad idea. Curiosity is not always death sentence.

Wasn't there some story of Bluebeard's bride, I think? She got just married and got keys to house. She may go everywhere... except one certain door that was forbidden by husband. Which she opens eventually.

In some endings Curiosity killed a cat. Like if you stick own head into guillotine to see how it works... and anciently pull a level dropping blade.
She found some human bodies in room, accident happens and she killed husband... then it turns out it were just normal dolls.

In still other endings LACK of Curiosity killed a cat. Sticking head into sand and ignoring incoming storm or some other danger, no matter can you or can you not do anything to survive it.
Bodies were actually real dead past wives as man was serial killer. So women gets killed or barely saved in last moment by family or others.

Curiosity Is a Crapshoot - TV Tropes
"Don't go using words you don't understand, Shinji. Reminds me of one of your damnable cartoons. What was it again...the one where they kept using crucifixes because they thought-" Samuel raised his fingers for air quotes. "-it was cool..."

Shinji let out a sigh at that. As little as he watched television, even he was aware of this particular show's infamy.

"Spirits...that one..."
Then Samuel's face twisted into grimace of pure terror, stumbling upon horrible memories created by show.
"Oh gods... I have such a bad feeling about this, but I think we really should check that anime at first opportunity. I hope I am wrong, but if I'm not... Wait a second... Is Rei clone of your mother?"
"Ummm.... yes. How did you finally guess?"
He put hand on head to stop incoming headache. "It was something from show. We are so dead."
 
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How do you know we're talking about Eva? :D
The other scene in mind involving Christian cross and animes... Hmm... that would be Hellsing anime.

Last episodes vampire hunter priest Anderson versus vampire Alucard/Dracula.
Priest puts own bayonets into shape of cross, vampire into inverted cross...
And later priest got transformed, there is scene of him taking cross position with thorny branches behind him.

Any other anime... not much familiarity, guess I am very picky from anime's tendency to weirdness, nonsense, insanity... just because they could for no reason. Small pool of reference.
 
Gendo doing what Gendo does, ie, keep everyone in the dark and advance the plan every time people panic.

Samuel and Shinji bonding is top notch, "blood from battle is thicker than water of the womb"
Samuel misunderstanding the relationship between Shinji and Rei was amusing.

"You know about my past...don't you?" Asuka asked, uncharacteristically nervous. Her hand didn't leave her red hair.

This is new, my vinyl antennae are tingling with deviation from cannon.

Rei starting to doubt things... hehehe... *remember Rei II death and starts crying*

*puts seatbelt*

Oh boy, i'm preparing for a Wild ride.
 
But on the other hand, Misato hadn't raised Rei from its, as she would say, birth in a murky tank of LCL.
Ooh. Racist much, Misato?
"And on that day, a giant naked albino woman will turn us all into orange juice." Eiji beamed gleefully as his comrades broke into sniggering, whilst the technician cast a confused gaze over his shoulder.
Oh God, Eiji, would you please shut the fuck up? Just a suggestion, really.
"Damn right. Three hundred people were in that bunker, and they only pulled out one who was still breathing. A little girl if the news is right..."
Well, shit. I would have said something like "Eh, Yui, watch where you step", but I'm not that insensitive. Only fairly close.

... How exactly did you manage to make Gendo more of a fuckward than he was in canon without completely breaking suspension of disbelief? He should literally burst up in flames or collapse onto himself like a big black ass-hole every waking second!
Give this man a round of applause!

I'll post this and continue reading, because what I've already read warrants a full comment.

Good sir, your skills are wasted on Eva.
... That sounds wrong.
Good sir, you do Eva more justice than it deserves. Oh, that's better.
Also, how many Seraph children are there, exactly? First few chapters muddle it a little bit. How are there seventeen thrones when there are only twelve more opponents according to the scrolls? Will some of them not participate? And why would they go by one if they are sentient?
Maybe I should read to the end before asking questions.
I am in the middle of the Chapter 2, by the way. Good stuff so far, even if I really don't like where all this is going...
"Abandon hope all ye who enter here" seems strangely appropriate to what I feel.
Oh well, no pain no gain. ( I'll stop with the platitudes now. )
 
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