- Pronouns
- Tuan/Mahakuasa/Abah
So go read/watch something instead of having a story explain it? Or the author of said story? There wasn't even a link to a wiki. I know by not doing so I am missing out, however that also doesn't absolve you by using such things without any regard to people that don't know that half. As a author your job is to make it all come together and work without people having to study up on things.
Or you could try enjoying it by not being lazy and at least look it yourself? Many also would says that as a reader of fanfics, it's your job to at least knows the basic of the said fanfic source. It's not like you can't just Google it. After all, fanfic are usually written by someone who has knowledge of the source, and those who read it are usually presumed to knows it. I know I'm learning about Worm from being open minded and start googling it after reading a fanfic story with Worm crossover with it. And I enjoy it better after having basic knowledge of it, not having to be spoonfed by the Fanfic authors.
Not trolling, and I love how you quote one part of post and respond to that instead of the entire thing. By picking and choosing you loose what I was getting at, so thanks for that. You know "This just seems" means just that, seem and not a actual fact. Grow up and actually do this correctly. No cherry picking to be a dick and get on a high horse like you did here.
Though my apologies if my honest post offends the writer of a rape scene. Truthfully as this seems to upset you we both didn't like that scene equally though in some different ways. I myself am offended that instead of answering questions you go on this mini rant. I now see how you take criticism.
Also rape can happen to males and by you pointing out your a woman means nothing besides you saying "I wrote a rape scene being done to a woman when I am one! Feels!". Oh yes one final thing. I like how a comment that seemingly upset you is the only way you responded to a reader asking serious questions and expressing their opinion. Nice.
Well, you could also being a grown up and learns that being polite doesn't mean just not using swear words. And learns there are many ways people can quote a post in the internet. And you might have a true constructive critics in your post, but for me, with the way you wrote it, honestly your past posts read as nitpicking for faults and exaggerating it, pardon my bahasa.
If that sets the tone for them going forward, which is having an introduction according to you followed by rape, then we shall stop here. I have no temptation to see what horror and tragedies you will inflect on their bodies and minds to give Taylor a push or shake her up in the future. This also says to me you will be doing such things again, as you please for the same reason. I might be wrong, but with how you wrote that there is how I am taking it.
*Shrugs*
It might be better for you not to read this fics further, then. As many of us here who knows both sources has said in the thread (of which you're seemingly too lazy to read, pardon my bahasa again), Nasuverse is more descriptive and realistic towards tragedy than Worm. And those tragedy doesn't need to reasons to happen, as it is in reality. Sometimes, just be in the wrong place in the wrong times is enough, as it happens in this story. Being pretty Japanese twins in a town full of racist and violent gangs? yeah, things will happens.
Now do you see how using the quote function as I did is easier for everyone involved? And it makes reading and understanding things after a time make sense? It also means no one will be going back to edit their post to clean it up or make themselves look better. Still, once again thanks for answering.
You know that you contradict yourself with that edit on your post, right? And again, you might want to learn again how to be more open minded and accept that different people has different style. And maybe learn how to be more polite in writing a reply. This newest post of yours reads to me as you being asshole instead of legitimate critics. Again. It is also easier for everyone involved if everyone is polite.
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