Before I say anything else- make the joke, you lose ten Fate Points.
Pretty much everything not including Royce and the CCTS is canon, but if you feel like marking out what's canon and what's not, that would be really helpful, thank you!Since you moved Ready: Run to the Sidestory tab, do you want me to more clearly mark which parts aren't canon?
... Shit, I left that in there?
The worst thing is, I'm probably gonna finish the rewrite, and I'm just gonna find it in the stupidest place possible.In regards to the lost Ada omake I feel I should stress that you should always have an online copy incase something like this happens including getting your hard drives wiped/destroyed.
Good taste, Kimi no Na Wa is a goddamn miracle. JJ Abrams is going to fuck it up and that's killing me.the sun blinding you for a moment before the industrial district fades into view.
I'd say Salem would take down two of the four and then get Cream'd. She was in the best shape and the other three were sitting ducks. There's a reason my plan involved Jaune to bait him so Cream to hit him.
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Seriously. Blue and Bracket being all mushy is great. It makes me feel all fuzzy inside. Like I ate a caterpillar or something.
Ok look I will 100% own up to this fuckup here, this is entirely my fault because I tried to do it on mobile, but, uh, the Ada interlude's borked.
In that, it's become the Creme interlude because I wanted to swap them around for the sake of the flow from character to character, I did the same with the Creme interlude except that one didn't seem to stick for some reason, so now I have two Creme interludes, and no copies of the Ada interlude anywhere. Not in google docs, not on my phone's clip tray, it is, nowhere. Apparently, it's the one interlude I finished in a single sitting, so, uh, if someone happens to be keeping an archive of every chapter for personal reading, here's your chance to put that to use.
I'm not even sure how that happened, I distinctly remember swapping them around properly, but apparently not. Great.
Rewriting it probably wouldn't take too long barring personal reasons since the chapter's completely figured out, but if someone feels like saving me three or four hours, that would be great.
Converted, that makes the Transistor 136.078kg. Jaune is at minimum,Strength- B-. Again, 300-pound computer. You can bench. Not five of you, no, but at least two of you.
Dank dreams.
It says that letting it run for a while makes him hurt at the end.
Athletics- C+/A-. Turns out having a supercomputer about the same height as you, that you drag with you everywhere? Very conducive to cardio exercise, and your muscles ain't looking too bad either. You could probably do 5k at a decent clip without breaking much of a sweat if you actually let the Transistor go for a while. As it is, you can still run 5k, but you're gonna hurt at the end.
That's a good point. On that "C+/A-"? You've got me wondering if that last line of "let the Transistor go for a while" either means it's abilities are helping improve him, or he literally drops the Transistor to run that kind of distance at a decent clip. In which case, I'm not sure if the C+ means it's his Cardio while he's holding the Transistor, and the A- is because it helps him, or if the A- is because he's just not holding the heavy object.I thought that meant that running long distance while holding the Transistor was tiring because the sucker's heavy, and being able to run a 5k and still be functional at the end, if heavily winded, with a 300 or so pound supercomputer is pretty darn impressive.
I had read that passage as, letting the Transistor improve his abilities for a while, by keeping some function running. See how it says "C+/A-"? I'm guessing that the last line of "let the Transistor go for a while" either means it's abilities are helping improve him, or he literally drops the Transistor to run that kind of distance at a decent clip. In which case, I'm not sure if the C+ means it's his Cardio while he's holding the Transistor, and the A- is because it helps him, or if the A- is because he's just not holding the heavy object.
Thanks y'all. I'm unsure what would be best right now for Jaune. He's going to Beacon, so would it be best for him to get some money before he attends school, in case his new responsibilities and social life suck up his time? What he needs to build or fix stuff doesn't sound cheap.As I understand it things are something like this:
Unburdened has J-Bro at -A, reaching maximum fitness. This is partly because he's hauling something really heavy around 24/7
Carrying the Transistor, sadly, imposes a hefty debuff on his effective fitness rank because, surprise surprise, that shit's really goddamn heavy.
Ha, so this IS what you meant by "going to sleep". Personally I'd have waited set a trigger to go off during the timeskip, that makes Jaune start thinking about alternate, perfect solutions to the Grimm. After all, perfection is a Process...
I almost want to pick this twice BECAUSE of what'll inevitably happen--either her sidequest starts or his sisters will KNOW he's with a nice faunus girl. And he can't keep his eyes off her... tail. Yes. Tail. (sidenote: Jaune have a thing about faunus? He was watching Velvet pretty closely...)-[] Creme- sure, she seems a little high-strung at times, but she's nice enough, and you think she could do with the company. Your sisters must never know about this. They will find out over your cold, dead body.
Forgot to mention that this is a really nice bit. Jaune's on his way, and he EARNED it. He knows what he's getting into--my only knock on canon!Jaune was that he went in as the Naruto for a new generation. Feels good to see him with his eyes wide open.... You're going to Beacon.
It just... hits you, that you're going to Beacon. Seven years ago, you never would have bet on getting in, but... you did it!
Purely for my personal entertainment: Ruby, Blake.... Torchwick? Cinder's in town, but isn't likely to take a walk... ah wait no, Penny. You even mentioned pages ago you were thinking about working her in early.or bumping into [REDACTED] or [REDACTED] or [HOLY FUCK REDACTED].
Proper swordsmanship is inefficient, the Transistor is heavier than any sword ever created, Jaune'll have to practically create a new style to use it. Telekinesis is what you want if you want to hit things with it. After giving it some durability upgrades.I want to provoke events, and I also am a firm believer in the merits of applied physical violence. Maybe we can work on a Cut() Function and project a hardlight blade around the Transistor later, protect it from things like that armor.
"The true weapon of a modern warrior, the Dragon's Tooth is not a sword in the traditional sense, but a nanotechnologically constructed blade that is dynamically 'forged' on command into a non-eutactic solid. Nanoscale whetting devices insure that the blade is both unbreakable and lethally sharp."
- Deus Ex description
Good questions! It's all about opportunity costs I think. What can Jaune do right now that'll be hard to do later? The answer is MAKIN' MONEY. With codan' a close second.Thanks y'all. I'm unsure what would be best right now for Jaune. He's going to Beacon, so would it be best for him to get some money before he attends school, in case his new responsibilities and social life suck up his time? What he needs to build or fix stuff doesn't sound cheap.
Mmmm nah. If Jaune has to spend time coding it, it isn't worthwhile, because that time could go to unlocking Mask() or the Process. Just train telekinesis to be faster.Oh, here's a good idea for a Utility Function.
Recall(): Enable the Transistor to Jaunt() without you, so it can come back to you.
For when Telekinesis isn't fast enough. What do you think?