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"...What are you?" He almost whispers, gun shaking in his hand. "What are you?!" He shouts in terror.

"You said it yourself, bud." You shrug, smiling widely, "I'm just the Demon... With a few new tricks, of course."
For some reason this kinda gives me the same vibes as
View: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=oDRnVPlRzag
His gun trembles as he points it at you, then he turns it on hims--
And dude apparently couldn't handle the realization that the target of his ire had gone well beyond the limits of what he believes humans are capable of.
 
turn the gang members into the police for the hostage thing
I'm pretty sure we cannot make the Gang police officers. For one thing, we don't have enough uniforms. :V

On a more serious note, I would recommend rewording this to both avoid confusing the Gang with the Kuma goons and to change "turn [the goons] in" to "hand [the goons] over" or something similar.
 
[X] "Well now I have to heal him, otherwise he'll bleed out or die from the shock."
-[X] "Don't think I'll let you die that easily after what you tried to pull..."
--[X] "And don't think death will let you escape me either..."
---[X] Try to hide your revulsion. You don't think you're gonna get used to that, but you need to keep up appearances for now.
-[X] After everything is over, turn the goons over to the police for the hostage thing, along with their weapons. Then either bring Sayaka back to your grandparent's house or drop in on Homura's group with Sayaka in tow.

Yumi can res. Even if he got that shot off, it wouldn't have been enough.
 
@TremendousMilk3, I've spotted a glaring contradiction;
"Remember me, sweetie?" He keeps the gun pointed at Sayaka as he speaks, "Five years ago, outside of that warehouse?"
6th: Kohaku escapes on her second attempt.
7th: Yumi begins a guerilla war on the various Yakuza clans on Akami Springs.
8th: The Demon Of Akami Springs is born.
Oh, you weren't there for that! So, after you left in our second year of highschool, all of the bullies were taken care of."
This guy claims that Yumi got them arrested five years ago when, per your own statements, Yumi didn't start targeting the Yakuza until after Kohaku left, which was two years ago.
 
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Demon Dog did good here, we should get him something nice. And call the Chief to haul in all these clowns back into jail.
 
Is it weird that I imagined Yumi being voiced by Aoi Yuki there in that bit? (as she voiced Clementine in Overlord of course.)
 
[X] "Well now I have to heal him, otherwise he'll bleed out or die from the shock."
-[X] "Don't think I'll let you die that easily after what you tried to pull..."
--[X] Try to hide your revulsion. You don't think you're gonna get used to that, but you need to keep up appearances for now.
-[X] After everything is over, turn the goons over to the police for the hostage thing, along with their weapons. Then either bring Sayaka back to your grandparent's house or drop in on Homura's group with Sayaka in tow.
 
[X] "Well now I have to heal him, otherwise he'll bleed out or die from the shock."
-[X] "Don't think I'll let you die that easily after what you tried to pull..."
--[X] Try to hide your revulsion. You don't think you're gonna get used to that, but you need to keep up appearances for now.
-[X] After everything is over, turn the goons over to the police for the hostage thing, along with their weapons. Then either bring Sayaka back to your grandparent's house or drop in on Homura's group with Sayaka in tow.
 
Some random guy five miles away, shivering: The Demon is back.
Scheduled vote count started by TremendousMilk3 on May 21, 2025 at 11:31 PM, finished with 13 posts and 4 votes.

  • [X] "Well now I have to heal him, otherwise he'll bleed out or die from the shock."
    -[X] "Don't think I'll let you die that easily after what you tried to pull..."
    --[X] Try to hide your revulsion. You don't think you're gonna get used to that, but you need to keep up appearances for now.
    -[X] After everything is over, turn the goons over to the police for the hostage thing, along with their weapons. Then either bring Sayaka back to your grandparent's house or drop in on Homura's group with Sayaka in tow.
    [X] "Well now I have to heal him, otherwise he'll bleed out or die from the shock."
    -[X] "Don't think I'll let you die that easily after what you tried to pull..."
    --[X] "And don't think death will let you escape me either..."
    ---[X] Try to hide your revulsion. You don't think you're gonna get used to that, but you need to keep up appearances for now.
    -[X] After everything is over, turn the goons over to the police for the hostage thing, along with their weapons. Then either bring Sayaka back to your grandparent's house or drop in on Homura's group with Sayaka in tow.
 
1176: Phoning The Chief New
[X] "If I didn't have to heal you, I wouldn't."

You sigh, shaking your head, "Welp, now I've gotta heal him. Don't want him dying of blood loss or shock before the police get here." You grumble the entire time, but you do heal the man's forearm. After kicking the gun away, of course!

(YUMI: MEDIARAMA)
(EVERYONE WAS HEALED!)

The man stares in awe as his forearm stitches itself back together. He looks up at you as you crouch down.

"What? You don't get to die yet." You snarl as he stares up at you in terror, "After what you pulled, an easy death like that ain't gonna cut it. So, just lay there and don't do anything stupid." You nod in Devil Dog's direction, who puts a boot on the man's back.

"Five years..." He mutters, "Five fucking years...! Just for this?!"

"Yup." You nod, taking your phone out, "Five fucking years. For that." You dial the Chief's number.

It barely even rings before he picks up. "This better be good news." He growls out.

"It is." You step outside, leaving the demons to make sure no one gets back up before they're supposed to, "Well, mostly. I just rescued my friend from some shady characters--?"

"Are they alive?" He asks quickly.

"Beaten, humiliated, and having mental breakdowns, but yeah. They'll live." You answer matter-of-factly, "Just need you to come take 'em to jail. I'll handle Sa-- The hostage." You correct yourself.

The Chief sighs, "...Fuck. I'll get some squad cars out, where are you?"

You tell him where you are, and the street you're on.

"Good, still in our jurisdiction." The Chief grumbles to himself, "Goddamnit, this day just keeps getting worse."

"Did something happen?" You ask before you even think over the words coming out of your mouth.

"Yes." He answers firmly through gritted teeth, his voice staying steady, "Omaya has been shot, Yumi."

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[X] "Do you... want me to come down a fix that? Doesn't matter if he's dead or dying, I've got something for both of those problems!"

Yumi is just straight up the Messiah to normal people at this point.
 
Probably when we revived magical girls once we purified their witches.
That just fulfills the intact body requirement though doesn't it?

Or do we have 3 limitations on our resurrections instead of 2?

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Yeah, from the info Yumi knows Soul only matters for the intact body requirement.
"Their souls were contained and preserved, yeah? Which means that the template for their bodies was also saved, right?"
 
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