Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Man this makes Qi so goddamn annoying it's hilarious. You first have to find her, then you have to hit her, then when you finally hit her it's blocked by a very potent living dress, then when you finally get past all the defenses that way and land what should be a killing blow she fully reforms from whatever pile of mush you made her brimming with energy and you have to start all over again. I love it.
 
To be honest I think this technique is kinda broken, especially the qi recovery part. I can understand spending qi to tank damage for ourselves and for allies. But then that qi being auto-filled makes no sense to me. Maybe I am mistaken, but shouldn't qi come from somewhere?
It's a dream based technique, so I assume the extra Qi comes drawn from the liminal just like our boost moves like joyous toast and lunatic crescendo did the same. The liminal seems like an excellent place to draw from as long as you have a potent enough narrative to do so.
 
It's a dream based technique, so I assume the extra Qi comes drawn from the liminal just like our boost moves like joyous toast and lunatic crescendo did the same. The liminal seems like an excellent place to draw from as long as you have a potent enough narrative to do so.
Thousand Ring Fortress also had (a much much more limited and gradual) qi regen as part of it, so part of it presumably is drawing on ambient wood qi, for a broad enough definition of 'ambient'
 
The blast died before it could echo beyond the sinking bowl in the earth. It rustled not a single hair or dislodged a single leaf. Ling Qi felt it as impact, countless impacts like standing under a rain of hailstones.

Compared to the General's flame, it was nothing.
LQ has seen Sovereigns fight and be a part of it most stuff looks lacking in comparison.

G6
Type: Anti-Finisher
Duration: Stunt

From the least of seeds and scraps, the whole grove might regrow in time, so long as a single mote of life remains, you will allow no wound of body nor spirit to stop or slow you. For the duration of the stunt, you cannot be killed or reduced to zero qi by any non-shen effect.

After the stunt you will immediately regenerate all wounds and qi loss suffered during the course of the stunt.

Usable once per scene.
Yin, Wood, Dream
Keywords:
Persistence, Growth, Community
Antithesis: Stagnation, Solitude, Impermanence
Art Type: Armor

Passive Effects:
+2 to Primary Armor Trait
1 auto progress to qi growth Project

Distant Paradise Resilience: G5
Type: Armor, Support
Duration: Scene

You tap into the resolve which joins you to your allies and the memories of roots everlasting, of life that persists through all wrath and ruin. Shrouding your allies in light and weaving roots. While active you take all damage which would harm shrouded allies through their own defenses up to G5 as qi loss. This does not prevent on damage effects from coming into effect on targets. They do not come into effect on you.

Your own defense techniques do not reduce this. You may not lose qi greater than an individual target's total cultivation plus one from any individual instance. (Protecting an individual R1 cultivator you take a maximum of R2 potency damage as qi loss.) You may choose to include or exclude individuals in this effect.

Ruin Scattered Rebirth: G6
Type: Anti-Finisher
Duration: Stunt

From the least of seeds and scraps, the whole grove might regrow in time, so long as a single mote of life remains, you will allow no wound of body nor spirit to stop or slow you. For the duration of the stunt, you cannot be killed or reduced to zero qi by any non-shen effect.

After the stunt you will immediately regenerate all wounds and qi loss suffered during the course of the stunt.

Usable once per scene.
It feels like both techniques are inspired by Kohatu and the insights she provided LQ. They're also really bullshit and make LQ even harder to kill.

Switch Elements from Lake and Darkness to Wood and Dream
Switch Keywords completely: (Reflections, Stillness, Void) to (Persistence, Growth, Community)
Switch antithesis keywords completely: (Motion, Energy, Clarity) to (Stagnation, Solitude, Impermanence)
+1 primary armor trait -> +2
gain +1 qi autoprogress (i think we have 3 from other sources at the moment, so a sizable boost)
Removed opportunity for "Impertubable Soul" trait
Thanks for the analysis. The concepts fit LQ a lot better now which is really important. The boost to the armor trait is nice, sucks to loose the Impertubable Soul trait chance but hopefully LQ will get the chance to get something just as great.

To be honest I think this technique is kinda broken, especially the qi recovery part. I can understand spending qi to tank damage for ourselves and for allies. But then that qi being auto-filled makes no sense to me. Maybe I am mistaken, but shouldn't qi come from somewhere?

Second thing is that within the 3rd realm this technique basically makes minor realm advantage pointless. It is basically shen vs no shen now. Whereas before it was made abundantly clear that a peak third realm outclasses LQ. How does that realm advantage play out when this technique is used?

Mostly I am worried about the system getting unbalanced and the fight scenes devolving into standard xianxia protagonist BS and asspulls.
I don't think that'll be a problem. From the discord:

Here comes the paintrain.
It's some really insane bullshit and LQ is really impressive for a Third Realm cultivator to the point where I agree you pretty much need to have shen to take her. But thing is other people are also bullshit and will have ways of getting to her.

[X] Legacy of the Broken Pillar
 
[X] Primordial Boreal Bastion

Because I like the word play on thousand ring fortress, and the alteration , while Treasure of the Broken Pillar sounds boring and doesn't speak to me in terms of the words used.
 
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Yeah, the whole pillar thing doesn't even make sense. People are obsessed with it for background lore reasons, but LQ doesn't care and it was a footnote to Kohatu's actual lessons.

And "treasure" also doesn't really have much connection to anything here.
 
Yeah, I don't really understand why "Broken Pillar" has to be there. It has weight to it, but it's also not personal enough for Ling Qi.
 
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It is pretty hamfisted and uninspiring as well as being completely unconnected with Ling Qi and Turtle Son in any way other than a footnote in a lesson. That and having an art with Broken in its name just feels unfortunate.
 
[X] Evergreen Succession

Apparently, the life cycle of a forest is called a succession and it seems fairly in line with LQ's thoughts on forest groves. The whole tree thing might just be the metaphor for [PERSIST] but the metaphor is how LQ is perceiving the idea so I think it makes sense to reference the life cycle of trees somehow. Especially since the end stage of the life cycle is the death of the old growth to make way for the new growth which ties into her concept on winter doing away with the old so that the new may grow come spring.

Edit: For those who prefer an inside joke that only makes sense in English, Evergreen Succession -> ES -> Emerald Seas. The art now references the Emerald Seas and its cycle of dynasties as well. Burn away the old and rotten to make way for the new and young. Let's say that also references Cai Shenhua burning away the Hui's corruption so that the Emerald Seas may grow anew, and the Emerald Sea's new ascendent position.
 
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Enduring Green's Overgrowth

Just felt like throwing ideas on the table. I like EGO abbreviation since it feels willpower related.
 
She nodded quietly, rested a hand on top of his head. "But I think we can both promise to make anything which tries to separate us suffer miserably and long for it, Little Brother."

I'm a little confused by this. Long for what? Death? More suffering? It's very unclear.
 
[X] Evergreen Succession
[X] Roots of Paradise

Seems cool, I like it.
Continuing on with the jokes...
[X] Dreams of Spring
 
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[X] Roots of Paradise

Symbolism is that the foundations of a paradise should be like this. Deep, wide roots and seeds, that it may return time and again no matter what disaster befalls, and when the surface is renewed, so long as seeds and roots survive there will be paradise once again.

And also the simply reference that Roots refer to your history. The roots of your lineage and origins. The art inspired by Zhengui's ancestral roots, fallen pillar reborn as what would be Kohatu, fallen and reborn once again as Zhengui. Each time different forms and nature, but all a paradise and wonder

Honestly somewhat surprised this is a Yin art.
Taking a blow and standing back up is the epitome of Yin though?
 
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