Harry Potter and the Scabbard of Excalibur [AU]
[X] Hufflepuffs Stick Together - Sorry Ron, Hermione, and Daphne. House loyalty comes first. Accompany his dumb ass lest he gets himself killed by a troll that spawns out of nowhere to swing a giant club around. And besides, you can always study tomorrow. ++Neville, -Your Other Friends,
+Dudley Dursley. "I'm sorry I didn't save you, cuz. I should've saved you."
Neville has been a consistently good ally so far. And it sounds like he might actually get into trouble without backup. I kinda want to see some action too, I'm sure Harry could pass the test.
+Dudley Dursley. "I'm sorry I didn't save you, cuz. I should've saved you."
Neville has been a consistently good ally so far. And it sounds like he might actually get into trouble without backup. I kinda want to see some action too, I'm sure Harry could pass the test.
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Barondoctor
The things I chase come to me.
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
- Pronouns
- He/His/Him
This is misleading; there is no hidden text there as of the time this was posted.
Neville's a good guy and this is a probably harmless means of getting him to discover "hey, remember that time when you didn't listen to me and had to run from that troll?"
When I quote the original post I also see the transparent text.
if you highlight this section their is transpert text
- Location
- California
[X] Hufflepuffs Stick Together
I do not want someone to die, I trust Geist regarding the dungeons, and potentially saving a life and telling Neville to leave once something bad happens and he becomes conflicted is worth missing a study session.
I do not want someone to die, I trust Geist regarding the dungeons, and potentially saving a life and telling Neville to leave once something bad happens and he becomes conflicted is worth missing a study session.
Barondoctor
The things I chase come to me.
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
- Pronouns
- He/His/Him
Huh. It's transparent and doesn't show up when highlighted, only when copy+pasted.
That is a shame, because I have really enjoyed this story but I also find concealed text in votes like this...sufficiently displeasing that I'm going to take my leave. Great story, love how all the characters are developing, neat mechanics and means of leaning and influencing votes that I would have thought would be enough without the transparent "gotcha".
Ghost in a wall
Just a bit spooky
[X] Hufflepuffs Stick Together
You guys are saying things about leaving our friends to rot- but Neville's our friend too? and he's going to a more dangerous place then a study group.
You guys are saying things about leaving our friends to rot- but Neville's our friend too? and he's going to a more dangerous place then a study group.
Birdsie
Sharp Talons Cleave The Worthy
- Location
- Poland
lol
If I unconceal it, will that change your opinion? It was originally going to be plainly written. If an aesthetic difference makes you leave, then... adieu?
Gabbie
That One Writer
- Location
- Italy
- Pronouns
- They/Them
On top of that... The concealed text is useless and inconsequential. Wanna know why a +Dudley is meaningless?
BECAUSE DUDLEY IS FUCKING DEAD. Six feet under. Food for worms. Fertilizer.
It does strongly imply that Neville is in actual danger
Gabbie
That One Writer
- Location
- Italy
- Pronouns
- They/Them
It does strongly that, maybe, perhaps, possibly, we now have magic and we can help those we love.
- Location
- Russia
[X] Study Instead
Birdsie
Sharp Talons Cleave The Worthy
- Location
- Poland
Gabriel's correct in this regard - one of Harry's major - if not defining - childhood events was his presence during the Death Eater vs Aurors fight. And the fulcrum of that event was the fact that he was utterly powerless to protect the ones he loved; a power that he now does possess, and therefore will feel compelled to use in that regard.
- Location
- Somewhere with a Thousand Watchful Eyes
- Pronouns
- They/Them
[X] Hufflepuffs Stick Together
[X] Hufflepuffs Stick Together
[X] Study Instead
at hogwarts? I find that unlikely especially since the other ghost would be like wtf u doing here and he a muggle I think they can't becomes ghost in harry pottter