[X] Take care of her tutoring session with Bai Xiao Fen, to ensure her time afterward was free.
Because the difference between the value of that mirror and the amount that the sect funds its inner sect disciples indicates that the mirror is exceedingly valuable which necessitates that it is exceedingly rare.Why? Ling Qi is talented, not magically lucky. Other characters having comparable adventures and luck at the same school sounds deeply plausible?
Yes, Sun Shao dotes on Liling, but (even if we presume he doesn't want to also dote on his other descendants) even a clan head is constrained by economics and keeping his vassals, heir, and other descendants competitive with other clans.I mean you keep saying this but Sun Shao nakedly dotes on Liling and as hes the Clan Head...
Again, Ji Rong's higher talent isn't as insurmountable as you imply.[Wen Ai is] one kind of rival LQ can't overcome through spreadsheets and carefully managed cultivation schedules, without the issue of talent making it impossible to reasonably win.
I don't see how a clan losing a major resource (cultivator descendants) would mean that clan has more resources to spare.Plus most of his other would-be heirs are dead in the jungle so it's not like he doesn't have the money to burn. He's in a position similar to Shenhua, in that the limits to how much stuff he gives Liling are mostly self imposed.
Weren't we guided there by a moon quest? And therefore, Ji Rong could be guided to an equivalent by a spirit patron of his own?My original point remains: it's not difficult to believe that Ling Qi's exceedingly rare find amounts to superior resource acquisition that makes up for Ji Rong's higher talent. Additionally, it is my (subjective) opinion that the mirror seems to be so valuable that it must be incredibly rare such that it stretches my suspension of disbelief that Ji Rong also found something similar (not just that another in the outer sect found something similar but that the particular person who did was Ji Rong).
Look, that's not how clans work: Sun Shao gets money from trade and taxes and such, and invests it on various things. His young heirs like Liling are net drains even if they occasionally do something useful, because they consume large amounts of resources to cultivate quickly. Of course, the investment will pay off in the future, but right now she's certainly not sending any money home.I don't see how a clan losing a major resource (cultivator descendants) would mean that clan has more resources to spare.
A comment from Xiulan that she wants one, showing she is still ambitious. Or in a list of several beasts/plants as part of research for a hunting trip to feed Zhengui. Or, even just some extra info when LQ was researching river eel, that all the types lived near the sect.I dont see why that needs any foreshadowing whatsoever. There are obviously a lot of different spirits and spirit beasts around and it isnt like Ling Qi cares all that much for Ji Rong, so we dont really need that much build up for him.
Can I just say how I appreciate the low key threats Xuilan manages to say without even breathing."It would, goodness knows how much money would be lost," Gu Xiulan said, tossing her hair.
"The Luo would survive, but losing the support of the Gu clan's mines and quarries would be unfortunate indeed," Luo Zhong agreed easily. "Is your sister well, Gu Xiulan?"
"Elder Sister Yanmei has been quite busy," Xiulan replied smoothly. "But I believe she is in contact with Father regarding your uncle's suit."
And if Sun Shao can keep up his "Army of baseline third realms" in spite of murderjungle attrition he has the free space to keep on giving Liling whatever she needs to succeed.Yes, Sun Shao dotes on Liling, but (even if we presume he doesn't want to also dote on his other descendants) even a clan head is constrained by economics and keeping his vassals, heir, and other descendants competitive with other clans.
Okay so, I want to apologize. I think I had geared myself up for this fight so much when I decided on his spirit beast that I drove myself into a mental corner before comments even started arising. Due to that, and posting while I was at work and thus being irritated by stupid nonsense there, I ended up acting like a big ol' drama queen for awhile there, despite the fact that as we went along some pretty cogent criticisms came up.
Which brings us back to Ji Rong, the guy is in an awkward spot isn't he. For various reasons like most of my other antagonists he ended up badly underdeveloped in the last thread. This is something I'm working on fixing as I rewrite... but that doesn't help in the sequel which we have now, where people only know the pretty lacking development he got in thread. Indeed, i haven't even gotten to the point where I can expand on my antagonists in the rr update and won't for a few months yet.
So yeah, those are all fair criticisms, and I have to up my game regarding my more antagonistic characters. Hopefully I can do so now that the plot proper has started up. Anywho, sorry guys. I got all bent out of shape over nothing like an idiot there.
Again, Ji Rong's higher talent isn't as insurmountable as you imply.
A perfect opportunity for me, then!
But! But think of the healing power of starting at moon senpai's glorious abs![X] Take care of her tutoring session with Bai Xiao Fen, to ensure her time afterward was free.
[] Seek out Liao Zhu, there were things she wanted to get out of her mind, and she thought her senior brother might have useful insights.
Sorry, moon sempai.