[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…

Hands have unlimited uses and it will not do to be without them.
 
[X] Continue. You've already started down this path, so you may as well keep going. What else can your witchstincts tell you?
 
[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…
 
[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…
 
[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…
 
[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…

Eventually we're also going to want to figure out how to compress down to being human sized if not shaped. SV cannot not do that as a Witch character.

Also, need to figure out if we can still write/talk in mortal. Accidentally-ing a mortal because we speak in eldritch would only be amusing for the first five seconds after all.

Bold of you to assume you can talk at all without a head or mouth.

[x]Continue. You've already started down this path, so you may as well keep going. What else can your witchstincts tell you?

[-] Have that delayed mental crisis about witches possibly retaining their minds now.
-[-] Witchout from the stress
Turning us back into a magical girl :V

This seems like sound logic. I approve.

[X] Free. Your arms, that is- who cares if you can attack without them? You still want your appendages back, dang it. Surely there's something you can do…

Hands have unlimited uses and it will not do to be without them.

Anything has unlimited uses if you think far enough outside of the box! Not having hands just means you're slightly... well, handicapped. ;)

Looks like Ashtaroth's capabilities are a bit different (again). Last time, she couldn't understand the runes, and she couldn't edit her illusions.

Ashtaroth: Retrieve arms from - wait.

...and now I'm realizing I missed out on a prime opportunity to make that reference myself. Darn it. ^^;
 
Anything has unlimited uses if you think far enough outside of the box! Not having hands just means you're slightly... well, handicapped. ;)
Even if we learned to be handycapable, we're going to have to ask someone if they can lend a hand, at which point the sheer groan inducingness of that pun win kill them. And then the Familiar that gets generated from that kill? It'll died too. Becuase that pun is so overused. We'll be responsible for a double death if we can't get handy.
 
[X] Continue. You've already started down this path, so you may as well keep going. What else can your witchstincts tell you?
 
Emergence 5: Cutthroat Corsair
> Exit.

While you'd prefer to have more than a measly two abilities with which to defend yourself, you're unfortunately rather certain that's all you're going to get, so you suppose you'll move on. Specifically, on to leaving, as you'd really quite like to get out of here. While it's only been a few minutes, this blank void is not only getting tiring to look at, but is also kind of unsettling, and while it's true you can now change said blankness to at least appear to be something else, you feel as though that would be rather missing the point. You're not sure if it's even possible for you to outright leave your barrier/labyrinth/dimension/whatever — something to try later, perhaps — but you can surely at least find some other section of this place to settle down in.

You rotate in place, looking for something that could indicate a potential way out. You see nothing of course, because this place has nothing in it to see. Which is itself quite weird — the terms "labyrinth" and "barrier" are usually fairly interchangeable when it comes to this sort of place, but you're pretty sure only the latter applies here, because this has got to be the least labyrinth-like barrier you've ever seen. In fact, it's the literal antithesis of one, what with its complete lack of walls, impediments, or entrances, apparently.

After about 30 seconds of pointless turning, you decide that this doesn't make any sense. You've never seen a barrier without at least two distinct sections to it, so surely there's more to this place than the literal sea of nothingness that currently surrounds you. Or at least, you really hope so. Maybe you can just...

You give yourself a pretend mental poke. Hey, witchstincts? Care to chime in on this?

For a third time over, a stream of foreign information seems to less flow into your mind, so much as make its pre-existing presence known. Oh, wow. Ask and ye shall receive, it seems. Convenient! Now- oooooh...

While you're now conscious of the fact that you can open a portal to your barrier's outer layer simply by willing it, it's another bit of info that really captures your attention. Slowly, you concentrate, reaching outwards with a sense you didn't possess before-

-and abruptly reel back like you've been struck, overwhelmed by the mental influx from the second field of vision you're now aware of, which is in fact less a field, so much as a sphere. Horizontally, vertically, diagonally; from every angle, you have a 360 degree view of your environment — that is, your barrier's environment. Somehow, despite not having physically moved in the slightest, you are now looking at the outside world.

...pity it's so disorienting, and thus not giving you any information you can really make much sense of. This might take a moment.

You struggle to narrow your focus on the outside to something vaguely resembling human vision, managing to do so after a minute or two of effort. As expected, you're still situated in a patch of trees off the side of a road, just outside of Sengeitsu City. Yep, there's the sound blocker you were speared to — you can tell from the blood all over the bottom, and the giant hole that girl's harpoon made in it — and there's...

Whatever you now have in place of blood seems to freeze and boil simultaneously. There's the magical girl who killed you, standing on top of said sound blocker. Her ripped, piratical schoolgirl outfit and short purple hair are blowing around wildly in the wind created by passing cars, but she seems to be too busy angrily snarling at the road for some reason to care. You can't hear what she's saying from in here, but from the expressions she's making, coupled with how she spoke to you before, you highly doubt it's anything pleasant.

As you watch, the girl turns around and jumps down into the grass, still looking extremely irritated. The soul gem on her neck briefly dissolves into violet energy, before re-manifesting in egg form atop the palm of her hand. She holds it up, and it begins to repeatedly flash with light, the rapid speed of the pulses indicating that there's a witch extremely close by.

Oh... that would be you, wouldn't it?

The girl's frown twists itself into a smirk as she begins walking in your general direction, eyes darting back and forth repeatedly.



[-] Wait. You'll let her in, and when she gets here, you intend to pay her back for your death in full.
[-] Run. You're not dying to this girl a second time.
[-] Write in.
[-] Ah... our inspiration...
 
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[X] Run. You're not dying to this girl a second time.
 

Ah, the option that not a single person "voted" for. I'm enjoying the story, more or less (since I've already seen a lot of it before and am waiting to get to the new bits), but the pseudo-quest format seems a little misleading. Surely you'd like people to comment on the story rather than make votes that will just be ignored?

You struggle to narrow your focus on the outside to something vaguely resembling human vision, and eventually manage it, though you find it somewhat difficult to maintain. As expected, you're still situated in a patch of trees just off the side of the highway leading out of Sengeitsu city. Yep, there's the sound blocker you were speared to- you can tell from the blood all over the bottom, and the giant hole that girl's harpoon made in it- and there's...

Hey, so I didn't notice last time around, but where the heck is Ashtaroth's old magical girl body? Shouldn't it still be pinned to the sound blocker, or at least in a pile on the ground?

It was kind of a major plot point in Madoka that turning into a witch leaves a soulless corpse behind, wasn't it?
 
[X] Run. You're not dying to this girl a second time.
- [X] Search for your witchstincts how to move your barrier upwards.
 
Hey, so I didn't notice last time around, but where the heck is Ashtaroth's old magical girl body? Shouldn't it still be pinned to the sound blocker, or at least in a pile on the ground?

It was kind of a major plot point in Madoka that turning into a witch leaves a soulless corpse behind, wasn't it?

Yeah, weird, almost like it was subsumed or something. :V
 
Ah, the option that not a single person "voted" for. I'm enjoying the story, more or less (since I've already seen a lot of it before and am waiting to get to the new bits), but the pseudo-quest format seems a little misleading. Surely you'd like people to comment on the story rather than make votes that will just be ignored?

Sure, absolutely. I'd love comments if you've got them. But again, when I previously attempted to upload this as user fiction/creative writing, I got shunted back over to this board by the moderators. It's right in the title that this isn't really a quest, and it's been repeated multiple times over already, including in the first post. I'm not sure how much more explicit I can be.

Hey, so I didn't notice last time around, but where the heck is Ashtaroth's old magical girl body? Shouldn't it still be pinned to the sound blocker, or at least in a pile on the ground?

It was kind of a major plot point in Madoka that turning into a witch leaves a soulless corpse behind, wasn't it?

Yeah, you're right, it is. Wonder where that went? o_O
 
Sure, absolutely. I'd love comments if you've got them. But again, when I previously attempted to upload this as user fiction/creative writing, I got shunted back over to this board by the moderators. It's right in the title that this isn't really a quest, and it's been repeated multiple times over already, including in the first post. I'm not sure how much more explicit I can be.

I mean, you could just.... not put several options at the end of every story post. I don't quite understand what narrative purpose those are meant to convey.

Are you trying to communicate the various options that Ashtaroth is mulling about taking? But often it doesn't actually seem like she seriously considered any of the options other than the one she ends up taking.

Yeah, you're right, it is. Wonder where that went? o_O

I don't remember if that was ever shown in version one.

You would think that if she had subsumed her old body, it would have given her some kind of ability like all subsequent subsumptions do.
 
[X] Wait. You'll let her in, and when she gets here, you intend to pay her back for your death in full.

Let's kill this bitch. And, well, I rather doubt we'd die. That would be a rather stupidly short quest.

Besides, let's not let her go around and murder other magical girls.
 
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