I'm going to be super cheeky right now, and try to argue that Rose has already won. Unknowingly, she's hit Control's spirit ban.

Control has been abandoned by its faithful followers. The Man in White is alone, betrayed by its protege, let down by human weakness. It's more vulnerable than it's ever been before, because its narrative is uncoiling. Control is institutional power, not personal power...

... and now it is alone. It has no institution. It has no underlings. And it's up against a mage with a super strong Primordial Avatar, who's got a personal theme as the gardener pruning back an overgrown garden.



[X] Write-In: Fright: Control is a paper tiger. That's the dark secret at its heart. Control never had power on its own - it acted through the Union. Back in the day it was made up of mortal men and women - masters of magic and technomancy - who could give as good as they got. But they're gone. There is only Control now. And Control has just been willingly abandoned by its only servant in this room. This wilful abandonment by Yinzheng has hit Control's spirit ban. It is a government without a nation; a king without subjects; a general without an army. Fear and intimidation is its only option, while it tries desperately to call for help.

Rose laughs, taking a step closer. It's a surprisingly joyous note. "Reina was born in the year of our lord, 1210. The Albeigensian Crusade started just the year before, with hidden blades striking down many of their mystical masters and adepts. I wonder if that's a coincidence? So did she. I've seen her memories, and she sometimes wondered if her angel Gabriel had been with a Cathar before he came to her."

"You accept your heresy?" the Man in White asks scornfully.

"The Order of Reason began as heretics. The Union convulses every fifty years as its internal contradictions become too big to manage." Rose still smiles, flashing fangs. "Heretics are how our ideological genepool avoids stagnation. The only kind of life that is perfectly static is dead."

"You use the words we coined as a magic spell." Contempt roils off the Man in White, almost tangible. "Speaking of biology as if it explains..."

"I'm a Progenitor," Rose says. "That's what we do."

Glass breaks underfoot as she advances. Around her, all the broken screens on the machinery flash to light. Ten symbols flicker over broken screens, orbiting around the central emblem of the Technocratic Union. They're the insignia of the nine Chairs of the Invisible College and the Empty Chair, the chair of the Aleph. Plasma arcs from screen to screen, painting the sullied chamber in actinic bright light.

The air shimmers and warps. Things from outside are pushing against the walls of the world. They're trying to get into the little bubble of order and sanity men call Earth. But this is the worst possible place for such an incursion. This is a Technocratic construct. The old gods were forced out beyond the Gauntlet by the actions of the Order of Reason. These new gods, born of the hubris of the Technocratic Union, fair no better.

The mutilated flesh in the tanks twitches and convulses. It was made to hold the form of a limb of Control, and even ruined, it can still be of some use. "You are a fool, Reina," says a severed head, voice bubbling from a ruined throat.

"You think this can stop us?" croaks another corpse, split diagonally. Ruined eyes gouged out by the rage of Piero still track her as she advances. "We cannot die."

"We are natural law. We are the falling apple and the rainbow cast from the prism."

"We are the invisible hand and we are the market."

"We are the dreams of the stars."

"We are mankind. Mankind is us."

"You dare not strike us down. All will be chaos if we are not there to be the guiding hand."

"We are order. We are time. We are."

"Reina!"

"I'm not Reina," Rose says, and her voice sounds like Thorn's. It echoes in this space, gaining a timbre and pitch that it shouldn't have had. "I think she's gone. The man who killed her is dead and so she has realised what you never did. The cycle must turn. The old must step aside so that the young can grow old in their place - or else be cut down. She knew her time was up. You refused that. You are no god, Control. You are a cancer. You are mutated cells, growing and feeding on your host until in time the whole of existence dies under your bulk. And you won't stop. You can't stop. Because your apotheosis is your screaming fear of apoptosis."

She has nearly reached the Man in White, and all his words, all his tricks, all his contempt for human weakness in his dread-long life mean nothing.

"We are the Union!" he screams in her face, and she ignites in a pyre.

The fire does not burn her. It embraces her, and the white heat burns a clear violet. It surrounds her. It wraps her like burning wings and blazes upon her brow like a tiara.

"You have been abandoned," Rose says, wreathed in violet light, and she sounds sad. "Your last follower walked away. What is the Man without his institution? What is a general without an army? What is a king without a nation?"

She raises her blade, and the edge gleams like a scythe. The air smells of summer days and freshly mowed hay.

"Before creation; destruction," she says softly. "We burn the fields before we sow next year's harvest."
 
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This is a highly augmented genius; whichever he picks is going to be the optimal choice. If we vote Fight, it means he's less damaged by Piero than he would be if we pick Flight and more (justifiably) confident of victory, which means taking him down will be harder.

If we vote Fight it don't need to mean that Control is less damaged. Even under assumption of optimal choice not influenced by Controls fucked up spirit nature, if risk/reward matrix is sufficient to justify taking the riskier option (this is - the payoff of fighting is more immediate and bigger), he might still decide to go for it.


I think that Control would be far more inclined to pull the Dr Manhattan here "I am disapponited in you, Rose. I am very dissapointed.. The world's moe-est vampire poses no more threat to me than does its moe-est termite"

[X] Fight: The Man in White is confident that he can destroy this apostate. And if he does, he can strip the codes to defeat the enemy jamming out of her corpse.
 
You cheeky bitch, @EarthScorpion. Harvest themes? An aura of purple light? A violet flame burning on her brow?

Apparently Rose is tapping her latent Siderealness (or possibly Hotaru Tomoe; the platonic ideal of the deadly moeblob who Rose resonates especially well with, given that she is fighting a self-proclaimed god in a mad scientist's laboratory in Japan).

And because Thorn - as a cleansing Primordial avatar - may actually literally hug her for this, you have fully won me over.

[X] Write-in: Fright
 
Apparently Rose is tapping her latent Siderealness (or possibly Hotaru Tomoe; the platonic ideal of the deadly moeblob who Rose resonates especially well with, given that she is fighting a self-proclaimed god in a mad scientist's laboratory in Japan).

Melody: "I sense a great disturbance in the force."

Melody: *topples over, drooling and also squeeing faintly*

Hannah: "Mel? Mel! Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel!"

Melody: "... so... awesome... I know the real life Hotaru."
 
[X] Write-In: Fright

This is why we fight, so it is fitting that this is how we fight. Rose has walked a long and hard road to accept everything of what and who she is, and that forging has made her into a finer blade for humanity than even the best efforts of EXEMPLAR III could. This is something the Rose of the beginning could not have done, the moeblob failed-lab-project discount-vampire girl we first met. This is a woman who has grown up, and has a family, a team, and a cause, and is facing down a ex-man who abandoned all of that.
 
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So I really like how this choice plays into how Control shedding their humanity is a point of vulnerability and serves as a culmination to Rose's character arc all in one, but we shouldn't expect that this will necessarily be easier than the other options. It just means that the challenges are going to be coming from a different direction. By choosing this write-in, we're deciding that Control itself is no longer a direct threat here, and that probably means that we can expect Ms Clock to take up the slack as we move into the endgame.
 
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So I really like how this choice plays into how Control shedding their humanity is a point of vulnerability and serves as a culmination to Rose's character arc all in one, but we shouldn't expect that this will necessarily be easier than the other options. It just means that the challenges are going to be coming from a different direction. By choosing this write-in, we're deciding that Control itself is no longer a direct threat here, and that probably means that we can expect Ms Clock to take up the slack as we move into the endgame.
So... it means that the Man in White, here and now, is no longer a playing piece (assuming it works). Ms Clock has been offscreen for a while, but has her own issues, what with people like Bastion sniffing around after her and her slowly losing her best subordinates. If she's going to top this one as a threat, it's going to take a major power-up of some sort. She's got the wrong paradigm for doing Deeply Unwise Rituals well, and the Man in White plan was already pretty much the ultimate for that. The mechamurderkitty is still out there, but I feel like it lacks the importance that it would need to be the final boss. It's a threat to life and limb, but it's limited in scope. The game has gone beyond it.

In some ways, I feel like the Fright answer is saying that maybe this *was* the climax of the quest. It was certainly climactic enough. The final question of whether humanity turns back to its old gods or forges its new path has been largely answered. You get maybe one more brittle last-ditch attempt out of Clock to salvage something by cobbling together what she has left, which gets taken out by a far more limited team, not because it's a non-serious threat, but because "mobilize the Union" would just be overkill. Maybe it's a team-up between Jamelia, Harlan, and the Tyrants, as Bastion sends in his own people to clean up his own mess (with Jamelia acting primarily as support caster and native guide). Maybe they bring Yinzheng along for the ride. She might fit in well as a Tyrant. That finally lets us cue the very personal showdown at the end between Jamelia (who's alone because she's trying to turn an enemy, and that's how she works best) and Clock (who's alone because she has nothing left).
 
In some ways, I feel like the Fright answer is saying that maybe this *was* the climax of the quest. It was certainly climactic enough. The final question of whether humanity turns back to its old gods or forges its new path has been largely answered. You get maybe one more brittle last-ditch attempt out of Clock to salvage something by cobbling together what she has left, which gets taken out by a far more limited team, not because it's a non-serious threat, but because "mobilize the Union" would just be overkill. Maybe it's a team-up between Jamelia, Harlan, and the Tyrants, as Bastion sends in his own people to clean up his own mess (with Jamelia acting primarily as support caster and native guide). Maybe they bring Yinzheng along for the ride. She might fit in well as a Tyrant. That finally lets us cue the very personal showdown at the end between Jamelia (who's alone because she's trying to turn an enemy, and that's how she works best) and Clock (who's alone because she has nothing left).
I...actually quite like the idea of this being the proper "climax" of the quest in terms of huge scope things. The Finale will be something more personal, and tied to Jamelia, instead of the wider themes. Clock's Gods have failed. What about the one left behind?
 
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I hope it's not forcing the conclusion of this quest, although Rose being the one who deals the blow is certainly satisfying. Would anything Jamelia is doing right now compare to this?

If we go with this, how close is Rose to enlightenment 6? Because yeah, it sure looks like she understands it bone deep to pull this off.
And, does her ruleslawyering (Reina's memories, invoking the Invisible College and Panopticon haha) make that the Technocratic consensus is now hostile to Control?
Rose = MVP.

e: Honestly, there are still a lot of things to do. Even if this blunts Threat Null, we still have to get the Union working together. That werewolf mission was very satisfying in seeing different conventions working together to create awesome.
 
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[X] Write-in: Fright

Once, there was a maiden…
…who was born, and told her mom, "I know how I'm gonna die.
"It's gonna hurt bad,
and I ain't coming back.
"…I could avoid it, but I won't.
"'cause one day, death'd come to me and say, 'Baby, don't you know?'
"'There's always an ending.'"
 
Fight, Flight or Fright. How appropriate for the 3rd option in the sequence to also be the 3rd option that can be taken.

[X] Write-in: Fright
 
Once, there was a maiden…
…who was born, and told her mom, "I know how I'm gonna die.
"It's gonna hurt bad,
and I ain't coming back.
"…I could avoid it, but I won't.
"'cause one day, death'd come to me and say, 'Baby, don't you know?'
"'There's always an ending.'"
Wow. Sid nature rising to the surface indeed. That verse does have a nice tie here.
 
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Rose Ashford, Experimental Progenitor Bioweapon. Keeping the trend of "discarded but nevertheless incredibly useful killing machines with minimal subtlety", you have Rose. Well, 'minimal subtlety' would be a lie. She looks normal. If it wasn't for her pale skin, fangs, and too-red lips. Okay, she looks normal... for a vampire. You have a file on her that says that she was a Progenitor experiment into integration of hemophagic tissue into combat operatives, and that the baseline chassis is Project RECOIL material-organically distributed diamondoid bones, carbon nanotube mesh armor, enhanced physical capability. She seems to have a sunny personality from what you've actually read of her psych report, except when she occasionally (it's rare trust me, we'll have the bugs fixed eventually) flips out and tries to murder everyone. Oh yeah, and there were ethical issues with the project at some point. Skill-wise? She's good with knives, fast, tough, and lethal, and is okay at subterfuge and infiltration. She's not a very powerful mage but she does provide one of your two sources of Dimensional Science support.

Remember way back then? She's certainly come a long way. Time for Panopticon Quest to slay another god?
 
So... it means that the Man in White, here and now, is no longer a playing piece (assuming it works). Ms Clock has been offscreen for a while, but has her own issues, what with people like Bastion sniffing around after her and her slowly losing her best subordinates. If she's going to top this one as a threat, it's going to take a major power-up of some sort. She's got the wrong paradigm for doing Deeply Unwise Rituals well, and the Man in White plan was already pretty much the ultimate for that. The mechamurderkitty is still out there, but I feel like it lacks the importance that it would need to be the final boss. It's a threat to life and limb, but it's limited in scope. The game has gone beyond it.

In some ways, I feel like the Fright answer is saying that maybe this *was* the climax of the quest. It was certainly climactic enough. The final question of whether humanity turns back to its old gods or forges its new path has been largely answered. You get maybe one more brittle last-ditch attempt out of Clock to salvage something by cobbling together what she has left, which gets taken out by a far more limited team, not because it's a non-serious threat, but because "mobilize the Union" would just be overkill. Maybe it's a team-up between Jamelia, Harlan, and the Tyrants, as Bastion sends in his own people to clean up his own mess (with Jamelia acting primarily as support caster and native guide). Maybe they bring Yinzheng along for the ride. She might fit in well as a Tyrant. That finally lets us cue the very personal showdown at the end between Jamelia (who's alone because she's trying to turn an enemy, and that's how she works best) and Clock (who's alone because she has nothing left).
Alternately, this was their last plan that worked within the scope and paradigm of the Technocratic Union (make high-tech bodies for evil space ghosts to pilot). This was a plan with a long buildup, working quietly in the background for who knows how long.

Plan B is going to be a lot more rushed and blatant. Remember that one of the secrets of Panopticon is that they have a faction of loyal opposition, Reality Deviants who practice sanctioned reality deviancy for the sake of the ideals of the Union. Clock may try to restart her own branch of this, getting a bunch of RDs through brainwashing high intensity recruitment to brute force an intrusion of the Gauntlet. Alternately, you could tie in the Rogue Council and North Korea somehow, such as Clock hijacking a Nork ritual to bring through their own evil space ghosts.
 
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