Fair, but it's also not a hard cap. And personally, I kinda do want to get 8 badges by the end of the first year at least, sooooo.

The whole quest so far has been, what, a month?

I'm not saying we rush things, but given the current reasons to get strong, and the fact that later gyms are going to require we diversify our roster, I feel like the implication that we go most of the year with our current mons only is unlikely. We can go for a fair bit longer as is, and I would reccomend doing so to make sure we don't divide party EXP up too much, but we're going to pick up at least a few more at some point.
 
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Didn't Leaf recommend we get a fourth pokemon by gym 4? That's probably when we get really punished for 'slacking'. Honestly depending on how Renne feels, we might need a fourth teammate by badge 3 if we continue to rush gyms. We can probably clutch a 2v3 for gym 2 if we get Roland and maybe Drilbur to badge 3 level, but we'll probably need a third battler for actually beating gym 3.

My idea of rushing gyms include getting our third badge in FE2.
 
Btw, when we find a Dreepy for Roland to adopt once he evolves, do we get to name the fella?
 
A full team of six anywhere close to early on is a bad idea for a bunch of reasons, primarily narrative reasons.

For one; the thread's already struggling trying to spend any time with the human characters in the story. Arvis has repeatedly emphasized through the story that Mary's kind of doing a bad job because she's ignoring most of Class VII when it comes to actually making friends; she effectively only spends time with Ostia, Nemona and Erika of her own volition, and otherwise only spends time with people like Elise, Theodora and Atticus when Arvis mandates it via associating those characters with actions the thread wants to take independent of who's with them.

The more Pokemon Mariana has, the more of a problem this will become, because it adds extra characters who need characterization to the roster. Those are characters who effectively always have the potential to be on-screen, and who are a major part of the draw of a Pokemon fanfic to a lot of readers.

This is something that's less of a problem later on when all the characters are firmly established later on. When everyone in Class VII has had their time to shine and we're deep in their respective plots and they're fixed in the reader's mind, it's fine to have a wider cast. But trying to introduce too many Pokemon early on is a really bad idea for this reason.

Second;

The quest is designed to take place over a long period of time; not just one year, but multiple years.

Catching most of the Pokemon for Mary's team too early on means that there's relatively little options for progression later on down the line beyond just developing new moves. Evolution isn't designed to happen months and months and months down the track in the quest's mechanics; it's designed to be something that happens within a couple of months of the capture max.

If captures are spread out over a significant length of time- say, 2-3 years- then there's a relatively steady rate of progression. Mary can capture a fourth Pokemon around month 5 or 6, then a fifth around year's end, then a sixth a few months later or whatever; this gives the fic a constant sense of Mary's continued growth.

Option the last...

It also just makes battle scenes more and more of a headache for Arvis to write?

If Mary has six Pokemon, then the Gym Leader will have to pull out six Pokemon in turn to face her. By the point Mary has six Pokemon, this will mean that every Gym Battle will feature nearly triple the Pokemon that the current battle did. This gym battle was already really fucking long; triple the Pokemon will mean that Arvis will be staring down the barrel of 20k+ word updates for every gym battle around that point. It'll also mean that every battle Mary gets involved in will have to accommodate for the sheer number of Pokemon she has, there'll need to be continual wordcount devoted to Mary training six or more Pokemon up over the course of a year's worth of updates, etc.

It's better to shoot for spreading capturing a full team of six out over a long period. It's just a good narrative choice that will allow Arvis to actually keep writing updates that don't take a month each to write.
 
Factual points. A lot of it most likely goes out the window later on (probably during the FE) but good points non the less. Heres a new topic I just thought, in our incoming "Raid boss" what is going to be our role? Since all of class VII is participating and we really only have a solid idea of the strenghts of our groups mon (+Nemona) I Think.... we should take a less direct role. The name of the game her is damage, were fighting a vastly stronger foe so we need to reach those damage goals as fast as possible, the longer we fight the more likely were getting KO. With Drilbur we can lower the enemies iniative with moves like bulldoze and mud shot, tripping the enemy or blinding it (even if for a few secs) can be the difference between a ko ally or a dodge. Adittionaly, Roland has Will o wisp (lower attack) and infestation DoT moves than can help inmensely in reaching our goals, and Renne.... well if she helps is well "Artillary" keep her far and have her bombard the enemy. This all falls neatly in our "comtrol the battlefield idea". Only downside is if we annoy the enemy to much with stats drop or effects they will probably B line straight for us and thats no bueno, well that and if the enemy is Vigoroth/Slaking havimg Facade, turning status effects into extra power (seriously if the enemy is one of those 2 ill be surprised if he DOESNT have facade). Hopefully the main fighters like Rin and Sunny do enough damage to keep the boss distracted. More aerial or sneaky mons like Argy, Swablu, Sharon and spinarak can also help in out of range harrasment. But all this is speculation and honestly is the best case scenario, this is the first time were fighting as a WHOLE class amd well... as they said: "no plan survives first contact with the enemy" here is hoping we dont crash into each other in the Massive Melee (Mythra).
 
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Fair, but it's also not a hard cap. And personally, I kinda do want to get 8 badges by the end of the first year at least, sooooo.
I mean it literally is a hard cap, just one that gets removed or raised later.

I agree with Tempera though in that there's a half dozen practical reasons to pace ourselves here, both in and out of character. 4 by December/January and 5 by the end of the school year/start of Conference does seem doable, though.
 
If we want ammunition-themed names that starts with R there's always Reload, Round, and Rocket
 
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Dear Arceus, we really are going with this whole gimmick arent we? I am counting the days when someone (or everyone) im Class VII asks Mary if the letter R has some internal psychological meaning to us, and Mary just goes.
Mary: I just find it neat!
 
"No Mariana, you're not allowed to name your Growlithe R-canine" :V
 
In regards to our windfall , considering our guilt towards our community i am wondering if she would try to send some money , or at least usefull items back up to her extended family , considering how the 10k that shr started with was a investment by the full village.
 
In regards to our windfall , considering our guilt towards our community i am wondering if she would try to send some money , or at least usefull items back up to her extended family , considering how the 10k that shr started with was a investment by the full village.
I think they might kill her if she tries.
 
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