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Edit Jan. 2019: This quest contains coarse language.

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Story 0 (Prologue)

AoMythology

AoM, Destroyer of Worlds
Location
Greece
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Edit Jan. 2019: This quest contains coarse language.

Edit Sept. 2019: because many people overlook it, the Character Sheet

This was inspired by DrTortoise's similar quest on SB, and I'm publishing this with his permission (through a PM exchange). Yes, Rin's mother is an Uzumaki, but there will be no Rinnegan, Wood Style, Hagoromo's powers (for anyone other than Naruto and Sasuke), nor Fuuinjutsu power wank. I initially posted this on SB, and am crossposting here. Quest start!

Your name is Tohsaka Rin, genius magus extraordinaire. Unfortunately, it seems like you've just died. You had just witnessed Berserker's true prowess after that ri- ritual you (hehe) helped Shirou and Saber with. Ahem, moving on! You killed him, only to find out that he had five more lives, and he literally crushed you into paste, you think…? Your memories are a bit fuzzy.

You only remember something like a holy light after that; Saber most likely did something, but it apparently was too late for you. You eventually notice that you feel like you're floating in something warm. You

[]Bask in the feeling
[]Move around a bit, maybe kick something in frustration a few times
[]Think over how you died

Before you even realize what's happening, you're someplace cold. Giant hands are holding you, you can't control your body, and you are panicking despite yourself. You-

[]Shout and cry out
[]Start cursing
[]Do nothing
[]Try to get away
[]Try and let out a fart.
+Why you thought of this option, you aren't certain.

You hear a few voices, but are having a hard time catching what they are saying. What kind of dialect are they using? You are certain it's Japanese, but it's subtly… off.

"Congratulations Uchiha-san, it's a-"

[]Boy
+Significantly higher physical strength and moderately higher reach, eventually
+Chakra reserves go up slightly more easily
+Unfortunately, your previous gender being different will cause you undue stress and confusion

[]Girl
+Significantly higher flexibility, eventually; pain tolerance rises moderately faster
+Chakra Control goes up moderately more easily
+A mildly/moderately sexist society may cause you some social trouble

Your vision clears a bit, but you still can't see very well, nor can you control your body. You are given to a person lying down, and can see strands of red. The person pulls you closer, and you get a glimpse at a woman's face, and eyes whose color is-

[]Black?
[]Brown? Maybe Hazel?
[]Violet?
[]Red?

Another giant, one who sounds like a boy just entering puberty, enters the room (?) and is told something about a sibling being born. He is addressed as-

[]Shisui
[]You couldn't make the name out

You are handed over to the boy and as that happens, the truth dawns on you: you are a baby. You've already been reborn. Oh crap. At least you have your memories for some reason. Your brother (?) is asked to name you, and a moment of dread takes you over before the boy speaks.

He says, "Rin. This child's name will be Uchiha Rin," officiously, and it's all you can do not to laugh at his serious (seriously cute!) act.

You didn't expect to have the same given name as your previous life, though. Either you got very, very lucky (which is insanely rare for you), or something else is afoot.

Index
 
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Story 1 (Origin)
[X]Think over how you died

[X]Start cursing

[X]Girl

[X]Red?

[X]Shisui

You only remember something like a holy light after killing Berserker and dying; Saber most likely did something, but it apparently was too late for you. You eventually notice that you feel like you're floating in something warm. You decide to contemplate how, exactly, you died; something feels off about that.

You consider the moments after Berserker came back to life. You feel yourself shiver at the phantom sensation of being crushed. Then, Shirou used-

Wait, Shirou? Wasn't Saber the one who freed you?

Ca- urn

What? You feel even more confused now. What is it you're hearing and seeing? Didn't you die when Berserker squeezed you? If so, how did you end up here? Are you even dead?

Unlocked the self-imposed mission 'What's in a Memory?'

Ah, you are tired of thinking about that! It's a rather traumatic memory, and fresh in your mind. (No, it isn't that traumatic. You are made of sterner stuff than that!)

Before you even realize what's happening, you're someplace cold. Giant hands are holding you, you can't control your body, and you are panicking despite yourself. You really don't like not being in control of your body; after a bit of time of the sensation, you got so frustrated that you started letting out some vile curse words. In German and English.

Or, at least, you tried. For some reason, you can't control your mouth either! After a while of trying to curse, you hear something that sounds like an infant or small baby crying, but ignore it in favor of continuing your tirade.

You narrowly dodged being considered a possessed baby due to serious luck. This action is also rather in-character, which pleases the QM. Two permanent half-steps in luck (2x (+) = (++)) Congratulations, Luck E -> D-, you now have the luck of the average normal person from your previous universe

Due to taking your first breath, you have unlocked the Traits, Perks and Flaws system.
(Unlocking the Traits system would have happened regardless of the choice made)

Thanks to the disconnect of body and spirit caused by you failing to control your body, Trait 'Shaky Connection - Mild' has been discovered and upgraded to 'Shaky Connection - Moderate'
+This trait means that you sometimes cannot control your body at random moments.
+At higher levels, it might cause narcolepsy or even a coma. At too-low levels, it may lead to you losing memories from your past life.

You hear a few voices, but are having a hard time catching what they are saying. What kind of dialect are they using? You are certain it's Japanese, but it's subtly… off.

"Congratulations Uchiha-san, it's a girl," a voice says, and you want to tell that voice that 'of course I'm a girl, thank you very much'. You keep your mouth shut, though. You're getting suspicious right about now, and have formulated a hypothesis (or three) on what's happening. You dearly hope you are wrong, though, damn it!

Your vision clears a bit, but you still can't see very well, nor can you control your body. You are given to a person lying down, and can see strands of red. The person pulls you closer, and you get a glimpse at a woman's face, and eyes whose color is… Red? Are they a Dead Apostle or something? No, that can't be right.

Your mother's eyes are red; she is very closely related to ??? You gain Trait 'Closely related to (???)'
Gives you the Perk 'Super Natural Sensor'
(+Start with Chakra-Sensor Skill (Genuine), at C+, training gains in the sensory skill are greatly-colossally faster),
the Perk 'Bite me, bite me'
(+Colossally increases the effectiveness of the ???? Part of the Uzumaki clan's heritage.),
the Perk 'My Chains! - Slight-Mild'
(+Slightly-mildly increases the effectiveness of training the ?? Chains)
and the Flaw 'Losing my Light'
(+When/if you get the ?????, using its techniques will blind you faster)
Gained a (+) in the Chakra Control skill, to be applied when you unlock it, due to your relation to ???

Another giant, one who sounds like a boy just entering puberty, enters the room. If it is, in fact, a room. He (?) is told something about a sibling being born. He is addressed as Shisui. Despite yourself, you feel your body shiver; you can tell that this boy is somehow very important, but you can't tell why, exactly, that is so.

You gain Trait 'Shisui's sister'
Gives Perk 'Let's Flicker'
(+A huge bonus to everything related to reflexes and all other aspects of speed
+A mild bonus to training related to the Wind element),
Perk 'They have Mental Interference here, too?'
+A moderate bonus to all Genjutsu and its defense
+A moderate bonus to mind-controlling / suggestion skills
+You were relatively bad at Mental Interference Magecraft, so don't expect miracles
+No, you don't get Koto---
And Perk 'Sister complex ahoy!'
(+Your reputation with Uchiha Shisui starts at D-, goes up Beyond Colossally faster, and goes down greatly more slowly.)

You are handed over to the boy and as that happens, the truth dawns on you: you are a baby. You've already been reborn. Oh crap. At least you have your memories for some reason. Your brother (?) is asked to name you, and a moment of dread takes you over before the boy speaks.

He says, "Rin. This child's name will be Uchiha Rin," officiously, and it's all you can do not to laugh at his serious (seriously cute!) act.

You didn't expect to have the same given name as your previous life, though. Either you got very, very lucky (which is insanely rare for you), or something else is afoot.

You start laughing at the irony, and keep laughing as Shisui is making strange sounds - is he trying to entertain you? You snuggle into him (what? He's warm!) and everything goes dark.

Your reputation with Uchiha Shisui goes up. Rep: Shisui: D- -> C+ rank

You find yourself on a strange platform, seemingly made of glass, and something that looks like a Rune adorning its surface. You look around, and beyond the lit platform, everything is dark. You are back in your body, that of Tohsaka Rin, that is, though you think you are a bit taller than before…? Or maybe you got that impression because you were a baby for a little while.

Speaking of which, was that a dream? Or are you dreaming now? You examine the Rune again, and you somehow know that it means 'Origin', though it doesn't belong to any Runic system you recognize.

Suddenly, there are three podiums in front of you, each holding an item. 'Where did these come from?' You think, a bit spooked.

One holds a sword, and somehow reminds you of Shirou; one holds a replica of the Caduceus, and reminds you of Kirei slightly. The final one is a convincing replica (?) of a particular gem you remember very well - it's the one you used to revive Shirou that one time.

You get closer to the podiums, then

[](Origin) Pick up the sword
+A change in personality
+Front-line combat is easier for you
+No, you won't act like Shirou

[](Origin) Pick up the Caduceus
+A change in personality
+Healing is much easier for you now, including your bloodline traits AND self-healing / a healing factor
+A moderate drop in everything frontline combat-related except dodging; dodging rates go up slightly-mildly

[](Origin) Pick up the gem
+Your personality remains the same
+Colossal bonus against anything considered a Demon or Daemon
+Colossal bonus against anything that was brought to life through or for 'wishes'
+???

[](Origin) Cheat the system
+Seriously reminds you of Archer's personality and combat style
+Front-line combat is easier for you
+Any technique classified as offensive gains a great training bonus
+Any 'support' skill gets a moderate-high malus in combat and a mild one in training, and healing is less effective when used on others
+You gain the Trait 'If you aren't cheating, you're not trying'


After you make your choice, you end up… in a giant crib!? No, it's a normal one, if larger than average. You're just… small. So, it wasn't a dream, after all?

You are not in a hospital anymore, and your eyesight is much improved, as is your motor control. For all you know, months might have passed. Before you know it, you are picked up by a redheaded woman, the one who is probably your mother. She bares her breast, and you squirm in place, knowing what is going to happen.

You-

[](Milk) Drink
[](Milk) Resist

When your mother (?) is finished with trying to feed you, she gently rocks you, but you don't think you can sleep yet.

Once you're back in your crib, you think of how bizarre your life has become. After a bit of contemplation (definitely not brooding!), you decide to-

[](Action) Try to crawl
+Physical stats may go up, too
[](Action) Try to speak
+Mental stats may go up, too
[](Action) Try to find your Circuits
+Has a very low chance of working, but you might unlock meditation or something…?
 
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Character Sheet, Stats
Might as well give you the sheet.

Name: Uchiha Rin
Age: 7 years old, nearly 8
Rank: Academy Student, Honorary Tokubetsu Jounin specializing in all the Elements
Natures: ALL the basic natures (affinities)

Rin is the reincarnation of the genius magus Tohsaka Rin. While her focus had been on research before, her new world's attitude towards combat has left her affected. Call her a tsundere at your own peril. After losing her older brother and her father, as well as her mother being crippled due to brain damage after a brain stroke, Rin's resolve only strengthened rather than faltered.

Stats:
Ninjutsu&Magecraft: B (2/8)
Taijutsu: C-
Genjutsu&Mental Interference: B (2/5)
Strength: D+ (0/4)
Speed: B- (3/6)
Chakra: B- (1/5)
Intelligence: A+++ (8/16)
Dexterity&Flexibility: B (3/7)
Chakra Control: B+ (0/9)
Luck: B (Two full ranks and a (+) temporary, A++)

Reputations:
Uchiha Clan as a whole: S
Uchiha Shisui: EX
Uchiha Suiho: S
Uchiha nee Uzumaki Korin: A++
Uchiha Itachi: B
Uchiha Sasuke: D+
Uchiha Nanako: A
Uzumaki Naruto: A+
Uchiha Fugaku: D-
Yamanaka Ino: C-
Sarutobi Hiruzen: B-
Sarutobi Asuma: D
Hatake Kakashi: B-
Nara Shikaku: D
Kurama Unkai: Neg. D+
Uchiha Haru: S
Hollow (Yakushi Nono): E
Hyuuga Hinata: E+
Jiraiya: C

Skills:
Pain Tolerance: A-
Mind's Eye of the Kagura: A++ (2/5)
Hand-seals: C
Sealing: A++ (0/4)
Academia: B
Ninja History: B-
Wilderness Survival: C
Eye of the Mind (False): D+ (2/3)
Trapping Mastery: A
Stealth: C+
Interception Tide: C-
Anatomy: B
Projectile Throwing: B
Killing Intent: D+
Genjutsu - Kai! : A+ (2/6)
First Aid: A
Reduced Incantations&Hand-seals: A (1/2)
Diplomacy: S+++
Seamless jutsu Fusion: D
Elemental Mastery: Wind: B
Elemental Mastery: Fire: B
Elemental Mastery: Lightning: C+
Elemental Mastery: Water: C+
Elemental Mastery: Earth: C+
Omni-Science: D-
Ninshu: D-
Shape Manipulation: E- (0/2)
Chakra Suppression: E
Space-time Jutsu Affinity: C+
Chakra Reinforcement: D

Jutsu:
Body Flicker jutsu: A++ (1/3)
Kawarimi jutsu: B
Transformation jutsu: D-
Clone jutsu: E+
Water Clone jutsu: C-
Earth Clone jutsu: D+
Great Fireball: A-
Chakra Flow: Housenka Tsumabeni jutsu: F+ (Requires Skill Shape Transformation, a very high Dexterity stat, a high ninjutsu stat, a very high Elemental Mastery: Fire and high Chakra Control to progress much further.)
Hiding in Smoke jutsu: D+
Adamantine Attacking Chains: F-
Clone Great Explosion jutsu: C+
Chakra Flow: Flying Swallow (Wind): D (needs Shape Manipulation at E to progress further)
Flying Swallow (Yin): E- (Makes weapons more difficult to notice/detect. Can turn them invisible, or nearly so.)
Flying Swallow (Lightning): E
Shinkuuha (Vacuum Wave): C-
Doryuuheki (Earth-style Wall) jutsu: D-
Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole: E
Shadow Clone: B+
Tomb of the Living genjutsu: E-
Hell Viewing genjutsu: F
False Surroundings genjutsu: D+
Raiton - Jibashi (Lightning Release - Electromagnetic Murder): E-
Raikiri: G
Chidori: G+
True Magic: Second: D-
Gandr: A++
Finn Shot: B
Structural Analysis: A

Traits:
'Shaky Connection - Moderate'
+This trait means that you sometimes cannot control your body at random moments.
+At higher levels, it might cause narcolepsy or even a coma. At too-low levels, it may lead to you losing memories from your past life.


'Closely related to Karin'
Gives you the Perk 'Super Natural Sensor'
(+Start with Chakra-Sensor Skill (Genuine), at C+, training gains in the sensory skill are greatly-colossally faster),
+Mind's Eye of the Kagura replaces the Sensory skill when ready
the Perk 'Bite me, bite me'
(+Colossally increases the effectiveness of the healing bite Part of the Uzumaki clan's heritage.),
the Perk 'My Chains! - Slight-Mild'
(+Slightly-mildly increases the effectiveness of training the Adamantine Chains)
and the Flaw 'Losing my Light'
(+When/if you get the Mangekyo Sharingan, using its techniques will blind you faster)
Gained a (+) in the Chakra Control skill, to be applied when you unlock it, due to your relation to Karin

(Mind's Eye of the Kagura Skill:
Mind's Eye of the Kagura:
A Chakra sensing technique unique to a very small number of the Uzumaki clan, so rare that it might as well be another bloodline
+Allows for Sensing without molding Chakra; without even having one's Chakra unlocked
+Actively suppressing your Chakra does weaken this skill to non-existence while the suppression is going on
+Allows for near-Byakugan levels of awareness at higher levels (above S)
+Can tell others' Chakra's 'qualities'; can also use to detect lies and fear through small fluctuations in Chakra
(This ability is the closest to Negative Emotions Sensing one can get without being a Bijuu or container)
+The maximum range at the higher levels (S- ~S) can be like a very high-end Byakugan
+Rin's range is lower at the same levels than Karin's, but gives techniques like Karin's lie-sensing and Tobirama's clan recognition much earlier
+At ~EX high, you should be able to reach country-spanning range (~700 Km) like Tobirama and 17-year-old Naruto)

'Shisui's sister'
Gives Perk 'Let's Flicker'
(+A huge bonus to everything related to reflexes and all other aspects of speed
+A mild bonus to training related to the Wind element),
Perk 'They have Mental Interference here, too?'
+A moderate bonus to all Genjutsu and its defense
+An extra moderate bonus to mind-controlling / suggestion skills
+You were relatively bad at Mental Interference Magecraft, so don't expect miracles
+No, you don't get Koto---
And Perk 'Sister complex ahoy!'
(+Your reputation with Uchiha Shisui starts at D-, goes up Beyond Colossally faster, and goes down greatly more slowly.)


'Shisui's truly precious little sister'
Gives Perk 'Let's Flicker (True)'
+Increases everything Speed- and Reflexes- related Beyond Colossally
+The Body Flicker goes up Beyond Colossally faster
+Wind Release-related things improve highly faster
Gives Perk 'Miraculous Mirages (Fake)'
+Your hard cap for Genjutsu stat goes up by four ranks! (A+++ -> S++)
+Genjutsu training is boosted greatly
+All mind-control skills are boosted colossally
+Yin Release training is boosted colossally


'The Bamboo's descendant - moderate-high'
+Gives a great boost to Yin Release and Yang Release
+Gives a high boost to Fire Release and a mild boost to Water Release
+Likely gives you access to the Sharingan Bloodline limit and Adamantine Chains Hiden jutsu
+Gives a slight boost to Genjutsu (moderate if they're ocular ones)
+Gives you a great boost to Fuuinjutsu training
+Gives you a greatly higher level of physical and spiritual energy


The Bamboo's descendant - high-great'
+Gives a great-colossal boost to Yin Release and a great boost to Yang Release
+Gives a great-colossal boost to Fire Release and a mild boost to Water Release
+Likely gives you access to the Sharingan Bloodline limit and Adamantine Chains Hiden jutsu
+Gives a slight boost to Genjutsu (moderate if they're ocular ones)
+Gives you a great boost to Fuuinjutsu training
+Gives you a greatly higher level of physical and a colossally higher level of spiritual energy
Gives Flaw 'Arrogant (Slight-Mild)' (See below)

'Uchiha, Uzumaki and Tohsaka Rin'
Gives Perk 'Exceptional Average One'
+All training related to the seven basic natures is colossally-Beyond Colossally enhanced
+You have an affinity for all the basic elements
+All jutsu based on one of the seven natures become highly more Chakra efficient
Gives you Perk 'Super Genius (True)'
+Theory 'learning' actions gain a Beyond Colossal boost
+Chakra Control goes up greatly more quickly
+A high bonus to ALL training at all ages
+Your bloodline trait(s) gain a great bonus
Gives you memories of your past life
Gives you Flaw 'Justified Arrogance - Mild' -> turned into Justified Arrogance - Moderate due to the above mentioned 'Arrogant' Flaw merging with it.
Gives you Flaw 'Justified Arrogance - Mild'
Gives you Flaw 'It's not in my Nature 2'
+The skill Shape Manipulation goes up on an average/slightly above average pace, regardless of bonuses
+The skill Shape Manipulation goes up moderately-highly faster, but receives no other bonuses (doesn't stack)

Flaw 'Poor impulse control - mild-moderate'
+You will lose the flaw as you grow older, or at least weaken it

Trait 'Facade of a Magus'

Trait 'If you ain't cheating, you aren't trying'
+Increases your eyesight significantly, doujutsu or not
+Gives Skill 'Eye of the Mind (False) starting at E rank
+Ranged combat gains highly in effectiveness, greatly when throwing blades such as kunai
+Throwing swords becomes a viable option (don't try this at home)

Trait 'Devil's Tongue'
+Soft and hard caps on 'Diplomacy' Skill are removed
+Skill 'Diplomacy' goes up moderately faster

Trait 'Naruto's only Family'
+A great-colossal bonus to learning Sealing
+A Sky-high bonus to Reputation with Naruto
+A high bonus to Chakra gain

Trait 'Mini Professor'
+ Grants the Skill 'Seamless jutsu Fusion', starting at D-
+Your ninja-related studies are boosted greatly
+Gain a high boost to all medical ninjutsu training (slug)
+Gain a high boost to Dexterity&Flexibility stat training (snake)
+Gain a high boost to Chakra stat training (toad)
+Gain a great boost to Summoning jutsu and Senjutsu training (Sannin)
+Gain a moderate boost to all Sealing, Ninjutsu stat and Chakra Control stat training (Team Hiruzen)

Trait 'Spring Tide'
+Your Water element training progresses greatly faster
+Your Fire element training progresses slightly-mildly more slowly

Bloodline Limits:
Sharingan (Two plus two tomoe)
Sharingan special ability: Maho no Mangekyo (Magical Kaleidoscope)
(While her Sharingan is active, Time-Space and Dimensional True Magic/Magecraft/jutsu are boosted in power and efficiency Beyond Colossally-Sky-high, but the drawback is that Uzumaki and Senju heritage and grafts don't boost Izanagi and other such jutsu.)

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Name: Uchiha Shisui
Age: 18 at death
Alignment: Lawful Neutral leaning Good

Rin's late older brother, his dedication to both his clan and his village led to Danzo intercepting him when he was about to go to Mikoto and Fugaku and control them with the KotoAmatsukami, leading to Shisui's death. His talent for the ninja arts was beyond compare, but Torune's assassin bugs were his doom.

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S- -> S- -> S+
Taijutsu: S -> S -> S+
Genjutsu: EX moderate -> EX great ->EX Colossal-Beyond Colossal
Strength: B+ -> A-
Speed: EX mild-moderate ->EX moderate-high -> EX great
Chakra: A+++ -> S
Intelligence: S++++ (corrected from S)
Dexterity&Flexibility: S+ -> S+ -> S++
Chakra Control: EX slight -> EX slight-mild -> EX Moderate

Skills:
Shunshin (Body Flicker): S++++
Sealing: A++
Kage Bunshin (Shadow Clone): A+++
Omni-Science: ???
Chakra Sensing: D
Fuuton: Benitsuchi (Wind Release: Scarlet Earth): S+++
Kotoamatsukami: EX
Katon: Gouryuuka (Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire): B+

Traits:
Let's Flicker (True):
+Increases everything Speed and reflexes-related Beyond Colossally
+The Body Flicker goes up Beyond Colossally faster
+Your Wind Affinity allows you to be highly faster at training this element
Miraculous Mirages:
+All genjutsu is boosted Beyond Colossally
+All mind-control skills are boosted Sky-High
+Yin Release is boosted greatly-colossally
Jolly Genius:
+Every ninja-related skill is Highly boosted
+Wind Release is boosted further by Highly
+Fire Release is boosted Moderately

Bloodlines:
Sharingan (Three plus three tomoe)
Mangekyo Sharingan

Sharingan Special Ability: Uzumaki Booster
(Boosts the Mangekyo Sharingan's abilities' power, both straightforward and conceptual. (E.g. KotoAmatsukami becoming all but inescapable.) The drawback is that Uzumaki and Senju heritage and grafts don't boost jutsu such as Izanagi.

This ability cannot be transferred with the eyes, so a transplant will give the recipient the normal KotoAmatsukami)

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Name: Uchiha (?) Tobi (?)
Alignment: Neutral Evil (?)

Bloodlines: Sharingan
Mangekyo Sharingan (?)

Sharingan Special Ability: Bleed-over
(Allows the use of abilities above one's station. (E.g. using one's Mangekyo ability while still possessing only two tomoe in each eye when crushed by a boulder, using a Mangekyo genjutsu with the normal Sharingan against the Kyuubi, your Mangekyo being close to the Eternal Mangekyo in Chakra expenditure and longevity) Drawback: your Sharingan's stages activating is more likely to affect your sanity.

Can partially be transferred with a transplant.)

Name: Uchiha Itachi
Age: 13
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Ninjutsu: A++ -> S-
Taijutsu: A+ -> A++ -> A (nerf: one-armed)
Genjutsu: S+ -> S++
Strength: D -> C -> D- (nerf: one armed)
Speed: A++ -> S-
Chakra: C- -> C
Intelligence: S++++ -> EX Slight
Dexterity&Flexibility: EX Slight -> EX moderate-high -> S++++ (nerf: one-armed)
Chakra Control: A++ -> S-

Rank: Jounin, ANBU Captain
Natures: Fire (affinity), Water, Wind, Yin, Yang

Skills:
Hiraijin (Flying Thunder Formation): D
(With help from the Sandaime and one Shadow Clone of, again, the Sandaime, he can teleport wherever there is a Hiraishin mark)

Sharingan Special Ability:
Squishy Prodigy
(Reduces the Chakra cost of the Sharingan in all its forms; reduces the cost of the Mangekyo's jutsu. The disadvantage is that prolonged use of the Mangekyo strains the body even more than the usual, and the user is prone to getting diseases at that point.

The ability is completely untransferable.)

Age: 6 (For comparisons)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: D-
Taijutsu: C
Genjutsu: B
Strength: E
Speed: D+
Chakra: E+
Intelligence: S-
Dexterity&Flexibility: A
Chakra Control: C+

Natures: Fire (affinity), Yin
Rank: Academy student, soon to graduate

Age: 7 (for comparison's sake)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: C
Taijutsu: C
Genjutsu: B+
Strength: E
Speed: C
Chakra: D-
Intelligence: S
Dexterity&Flexibility: A+
Chakra Control: B-

Rank: Genin
Natures: Fire (affinity), Yin, Water (recently learned from Mikoto)

Age: 21 (in canon)

Ninjutsu: S++
Taijutsu: S-
Genjutsu: EX Slight corrected to EX high
Strength: B+ (Nerfed. Should be A)
Speed: S+++ (nerfed. Should be EX Mild)
Chakra: C (nerfed. Should be B+)
Intelligence: EX moderate (Nara clan head level; not quite Shikamaru or Shikaku, though)
Dexterity&Flexibility: EX high (nerfed. Should be EX BEYOND HUMANITY)
Chakra Control: S+++

Skills:
Presence Concealment: S++++ (nerfed from EX Slight-Mild)
Projectile Throwing: EX great (nerfed. Normally EX colossal-Beyond Colossal)
Kage Bunshin (Shadow Clone): A+
Clone Great Explosion: S
Hand Seals: EX great (nerfed. Normally EX Beyond Colossal

Rank: ANBU Captain (former), S-class Missing-nin
Nature: Fire (Affinity), Yin, Water, Wind, Yang

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Name: Uchiha Sasuke
Age: 8
Alignment: True Neutral (?)

Traits:
True Thunder God:
+Training of the Lightning Element goes up Beyond Colossally-Sky-High faster
+Lightning ninjutsu become colossally more efficient
Speed Demon:
+Speed goes up moderately faster
+Removes the soft AND the hard caps in this stat; Speed caps out at EX: BEYOND HUMANITY

Uchiha Mikoto
Age: 20 (before she retired)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: A++ corrected to S+++
Taijutsu: C+
Genjutsu: EX Slight corrected. EX moderate
Strength: C
Speed: A+++
Chakra: C
Intelligence: S++
Dexterity&Flexibility: S
Chakra Control: S+

Natures: Lightning (affinity), Water, Yin

Sarutobi Shigaru
Age: ~38 (during part 1 of canon), ~34 currently

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S+
Taijutsu: A-
Genjutsu: A+
Strength: B
Speed: S-
Chakra: B-
Intelligence: S
Dexterity&Flexibility: A+
Chakra Control: A+

Sarutobi Asuma
Age: 27 (part 1 of Canon), ~23 currently

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S
Taijutsu: S
Genjutsu: A-
Strength: A
Speed: S-
Chakra: A
Intelligence: S-
Dexterity&Flexibility: B+
Chakra Control: A-

Uzumaki Korin
Age: 46

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S++, S++++ at peak
Taijutsu: A -> C-
Genjutsu: A+++
Strength: D -> E+, C+ at peak
Speed: B- -> E, A+++ at peak
Chakra: S+ -> S-
Intelligence: S+
Dexterity&Flexibility: S- -> D, S++ at peak
Chakra Control: S++, S+++ at peak

Chakra Natures:
Wind (affinity), Water, Earth, Yin, Yang
Some medic-nin capabilities, even without her healing bite
Unfortunately, she didn't inherit the healing bite to anywhere near the extent that Karin and Rin did.
Nor is she as good at using the Adamantine Sealing Chains as her late cousin Kushina

Ninja rank: Jounin (promoted in Uzushio at the age of 16), long since retired

Skills:
Sealing: S+
Fuuton: Benitsuchi (Wind Release: Scarlet Earth): S+++ (An A-ranked Wind ninjutsu which is a very violent way to kill an army; the ground turns red with their blood. Further explanation might get AoMythology reprimanded by the staff.)
Water Release: Whirlpool Wall: S++ (it's like Suijinheki, but it revolves at high speed)
Earth Release: Earth-style Wall: S
Earth Release: Earth Flow Spear: S
Suiton: Teppoudama (Water Release: Water Bullets): A+++

Uchiha Suiho
Age: 45 at death

Stats:
Ninjutsu: A++
Taijutsu: C+
Genjutsu: A++
Strength: C-, B+ at peak
Speed: A, A+ at peak
Chakra: C+
Intelligence: A++
Dexterity&Flexibility: A-, A+ at peak
Chakra Control: A+

Rank: Jounin (promoted in Konoha at the age of 22), retired for a few years
Natures: Fire (affinity), Wind, Yin

Uchiha Kagami
Age: mid or late twenties at death

Stats:
Ninjutsu: EX Slight
Taijutsu: EX Slight-mild
Genjutsu: S++
Strength: A++
Speed: EX Slight-mild
Chakra: S-
Intelligence: S+++
Dexterity&Flexibility: S+++
Chakra Control: EX high

Uchiha Haru
Age: 20
Rank: Chuunin
Alignment: Lawful Neutral?
Chakra natures: Water, Fire, Earth, Yang

Appearance: short-ish brown hair, black eyes, somewhat short

Haru has looked up to Rin ever since Rin avenged her brother's death. Haru has had a hatred (much stronger than Rin's) against mind control and genjutsu since her brother's murder at the hands of Arkidi.

Haru lacks a particular specialization as a ninja other than Water ninjutsu; as in, she is good at everything. She is definitely Jounin level (even her father might have been underestimating her), though she lacks experience with high level missions.

She has been training intensively after her brother's death; also, while her clan head is missing, she's been honing her mind, body and skill for helping lead the clan.

Bloodline:
Sharingan, three and three tomoe (evolved from two and two after her brother and mother's death)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: A++ -> A+++
Taijutsu: B+ -> A
Genjutsu: B+ -> A+ rank nerfed. C-minus -> B rank, though her defense against genjutsu hasn't dropped and is A+
Strength: B+
Speed: B+ -> A-
Chakra: A++ -> A+++
Intelligence: B -> A
Dexterity&Flexibility: B- -> A+
Chakra Control: A+ -> A+++

Skills:
Charisma: C
Projectile Throwing: B -> B+
Water Release: Wild Water Wave: B+ -> A+
Suiton: Suijinheki (Water Release: Water Formation Wall): C -> A-
Seamless water condensation: F- -> D-
(This is the skill that Tobirama is renowned for, though it's far from unique to him - using the moisture in the air for Water ninjutsu. Tobirama, though, can use it for A-ranked ninjutsu with little loss of power, which is an incredible feat. Kisame most likely can use it just as well as Tobirama.)
Katon: Goukakyuu (Fire Release: (Great) Fireball): D+ -> B-
Doton: Doryuuso (Earth Release: Earth Flow Spear): B- -> B
Earth Release: Hiding Like A Mole: A

Name: Uzumaki Naruto
Age: 8
Rank: Academy Student
Alignment: True Neutral leaning Good (?) Neutral Good

Stats:
Ninjutsu: E- -> D
Taijutsu: E+ -> D
Genjutsu: F- ->F
Strength: E+ -> D
Speed: E+ -> D
Chakra: B- -> B -> B+
Intelligence: E+ -> D
Dexterity&Flexibility: D- -> D
Chakra Control: F- -> E-
Luck: B

Skills:
Golden Rule: C+ (raises Luck by five stages and a '+' when gambling)
Stealth: C+ -> B -> A-
Charisma: D
Eye of the Mind (False): D -> C (Naruto has a natural understanding of the flow of battle and acute instincts)
Kanashibari (Temporary Paralysis): F+
Sealing: C- -> B-
Pranking: A+
Ninshu: C+
Shadow Clone jutsu: E-

Traits:
Fuuinjutsu Savant, Uzumaki and ???
+All Sealing training goes Are You Even Human faster because of possessing a brain that operates on a different wavelength than most people twice over

?????
+The Ninshu skill (and all skills related to it) go up Beyond Colossally faster, are Colossally more efficient in Chakra expenditure and are Greatly to Colossally more effective
+Chakra goes up Mildly faster from conception to age 14, Moderately to Highly faster between 14 and 16 and Colossally faster from the age of 16 to 35
+Chakra Control goes up Mildly faster by age 16, Greatly afterwards
+All stats can reach higher because of reduced hard limits
+Your Yang Release and its related skills go up Greatly faster
+Your Yin Release and all skills that fall under it go up Colossally more slowly, except Yin-Yang Release

Uzumaki ??????
+Gives a second Chakra source that ???????
+Increases Chakra growth Greatly
+Depending on your Reputation with Kurama, the Kyuubi no Youko ??, your Chakra Control goes up from Colossally more slowly to Highly faster
+The hard limits to the Chakra stat are loosened significantly

Konoha's Most Surprising Ninja (in training)
+Natural talent goes up by one tier
+Natural lack of talent worsens by two tiers
(If a field is something Naruto is talented in to the point overall bonus is positive, it goes up by a tier, ex. Sealing: Are You Even Human bonus becomes Beyond Humanity. If the overall result is a malus, then it worsens by two tiers; ex. Neg. Mild becomes Neg. High)

Name: Uchiha Yukio
Age: 9
Chakra nature: Fire (inactive Water and Wind Affinity)
Rank: Academy Student

Bloodline(s): Hyouton (Ice Release) (inactive), Sharingan (inactive)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: D-
Taijutsu: E
Genjutsu: F+
Strength: F+~E-
Speed: C-
Chakra: E
Intelligence: B+
Dexterity&Flexibility: A+
Chakra Control: D+
Luck: E+

Skills:
Projectile Throwing: A+
Katon: Goukakyuu (Fire Release: Great Fireball): E-

Name: Orochimaru
Age: 46
Titles: Orochimaru of the Legendary Three (Densetsu no Sannin), The White Snake, 'You monster'
Rank: Jounin (?) (formerly), S-class Missing-nin
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Chakra nature: ALL the basic natures

Currently has his eyes set on obtaining an Uzumaki and a body with the Sharingan. He wouldn't say no to killing two birds with one stone, though.

Stats:
Ninjutsu: EX High
Taijutsu: A
Genjutsu: S++ to S+++
Strength: A
Speed: S+
Chakra: S++ *
Intelligence: EX Are You Even Human
Dexterity&Flexibility: EX Beyond Humanity*
Chakra Control: EX Moderate
Luck: A+

Skills:
Presence Concealment (Stealth & Chakra Suppression's combined superior sibling): EX Are You Even Human to Beyond Humanity (*2)
Shadow Clone, Earth Shadow Clone: A++, A+
Elemental Mastery Wind, Earth, Lightning, Water, Fire: S++++, S+++, S+++, S++, S
Summoning jutsu: S+++
Summoning: Rashoumon, Triple Rashoumon: S+, S++++
Vanishing Facial Copy: EX
Charisma: B- (*3)
Sealing: A++
Orochimaru's Cursed Seal: EX
Fuuton: Daitoppa, Fuuton: Toppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough, Wind Release: (Super) Breakthrough): S++++, S++++
Various other jutsu: E-~S+++

Name: Tsunade
Age: 46-47
Titles: Tsunade of the Legendary Three, Legendary Sucker, Konoha's Slug Princess, most beautiful kunoichi
Rank: Jounin (?), technically retired
Alignment: True Neutral (?)
Natures: Yang, Earth, Water, Lightning, Fire, Yin (?)

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S++++
Taijutsu: S++++
Genjutsu: A
Strength: EX Beyond Colossal
Speed: A+
Chakra: A+++
Intelligence: EX Moderate
Dexterity&Flexibility: B+
Chakra Control: EX Beyond Colossal
Luck: E-

Skills:
Golden Rule: Legendary Sucker: EX (lowers one's luck in games of chance by a full rank and a '-', except for times of personal catastrophe, in which it is raised by four full ranks)
First Aid: EX
Medical Ninjutsu Mastery, Mystical Palm: EX Beyond Colossal, EX Great
Ninshu: C-
Chakra Transfer Technique: B-
Shadow Clone: D
Sealing: A+++
Chakra Burst: A- (A superior version of Chakra Reinforcement. Not quite the equivalent of Mana Burst, but has many similarities)
Various medical ninjutsu and seals

Name: Jiraiya
Age: 46
Titles: Jiraiya of the Legendary Three, Toad Sage, The Village's Madness, Pervy Sage (by Naruto), "You Perv!"
Rank: Jounin (?)
Alignment: Chaotic Good (?)
Natures: Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Yang, Yin

Stats:
Ninjutsu: S++++
Taijutsu: S+++
Genjutsu: C+
Strength: S+
Speed: S++
Chakra: S++++
Intelligence: S+++
Dexterity&Flexibility: A
Chakra Control: A++
Luck: E

Skills:
Presence Concealment (Stealth & Chakra Suppression's combined superior sibling): S++++
Shadow Clone: C+
Summoning jutsu: S++++
Charisma: C
Sealing: A+++~S-
Doton: Yomi Numa (Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld): S++++
Katon: Endan (Fire Release: Flame Bullet): S++++
Rasengan: C
Transparent Escape: B
Eye of the Mind (True): C
Various Seals and stealth jutsu: E~A+++

*His Chakra is well above his Databook entries; that is deliberate, because he has modified himself. His Dex&Flex is also partially because of his body modifications.
*2 Not all skills go above EX - this one does, though
*3 B rank Charisma allows one to become a monarch; A rank Charisma is Hashirama level; A+ is almost mind control. 'B-' rank is still insanely high.
 
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Story 2
You get closer to the three podiums that hold an item each, then… you pick up the gem. You'd like to keep the same Origin -it is about Origin, right?- as you used to have!

Gained Origin 'Sixth Imaginary Factor' ((Head-)Canon))!
+Gives a Colossal bonus against anything considered a Demon or Daemon
+Gives a Colossal bonus against anything that was brought to life through or for 'wishes'
+The Bamboo Wished for more/the ideal children
+CONSIDERED a Demon. Bijuu count. Jinchuuriki partially count too, due to prejudice
+Immunity to Genjutsu born of wishes, resistance to the rest of them
+Your memories are now more firmly entrenched! If they would become permanent at age n, now they'll be permanent at age (n-1)

After you make your choice, you end up… in a giant crib!? No, it's a normal one, if larger than average. You're just… small. So, it wasn't a dream, after all?

You are not in a hospital anymore, and your eyesight is much improved, as is your motor control. For all you know, months might have passed. Before you know it, you are picked up by a redheaded woman, the one who is probably your mother. She bares her breast, and you squirm in place, knowing what is going to happen.

Knowing it's futile, you don't resist, and immediately drink from a nipple, swearing revenge upon whoever turned you into a baby and made you suffer this indignity.

Your reputation with Uchiha Korin has gone up! E->E+

When your mother (?) is finished with trying to feed you, she gently rocks you, but you don't think you can sleep yet.

Once you're back in your crib, you think of how bizarre your life has become. After a bit of contemplation (definitely not brooding!), you decide to try to find your Circuits. Was there any doubt? You would very much like to try to speak or walk -crawl, at least-, but you need to confirm whether you are still capable of Magecraft; you're a Magus first. You aren't going to try to use a spell anyway.

You get into a meditative trance. It's easier than ever, and you blame the fact your control of your body is out of sync. You find… twice; no, thrice as many Circuits. Great! You use your Trigger to switch them on, not able to resist-

Discovered Flaw 'Poor impulse control - moderate-high'
+You are a baby; you can't help yourself, in more than one way
+You will lose the flaw as you grow older, or at least weaken it

…And find out that you can't. You try again, this time concentrating fully on your Trigger- nothing. You try potential alternate Triggers, even though you know it's futile - nothing. Nada. Nichts.

It's not that your Trigger has changed; it's that this body seems not to have the potential to switch its Circuits on.

Discovered Magic Circuits (number = 120). Discovered that you do not possess the ability to switch them on, so they are useless.

Fuck. Fuck~ Fuck! Fuckfuckfuck! Fuuuck!

You suddenly hear a gasp, and see Shisui in front of you. Oh crap - did you say that out loud?

"Mom, Dad! Rin said her first word!" Shisui says, and you want to bury your face in your hands.

And… did you just poop yourself? Just great! Kill… them! Whoever sent you here is going to get a Gandr or two down their throat- no, Finn shots up the ass!

The person you are now certain is your mother, the redheaded, red-eyed woman you were fed by, comes into your room; directly followed by a handsome man with messy black hair and black eyes. The two of them start cooing over you like… well, like you were a baby.

"So, what was her first word?" Your father asks Shisui.

"Eh, I don't remember," Shisui says, faking nonchalance.

"…It was a curse word, wasn't it?" Your father asks, though his voice seems certain.

"Yes," Shisui says, admitting defeat.

"Shisui, did I not tell you to watch your language in front of the baby?" Your mother says.

"Me? It was probably Dad!" Shisui says, indignant.

Your father says, "isn't Korin the one who curses the most?"

Then both males turn to your mother. This looks like it might turn into a serious(ly annoying) argument, so you decide to head it off. You say-

[](Second Word) Mama
[](Second Word) Papa
[](Second Word) Shisui

After that word, everyone turns to you. You point at the aforementioned person, and say the word again and again.

After a lot of crying and kisses to your cheeks (blech!), your family (they are your family, right? Just because you had another one 'before' doesn't mean that you shouldn't enjoy not being an orphan!) leave you to your peace and quiet. Before you know it, you are waking up to your father picking you up.

It seems your family is going somewhere, and taking you with them…? The four of you reach a relatively small wooden house, and your parents take you to meet… an old woman?

The woman says, "so, this is my new grandchild?" And examines you more closely. Then, she says, "why are her eyes blue?!"

Your parents try to explain that babies often start out with blue eyes, but the old woman won't listen, and goes on about 'shameful' and 'a disgrace' and such. You-

[](Talking) Remain silent
[](Talking) Say something
+Probably a curse word
 
Story 3
"Shisui, did I not tell you to watch your language in front of the baby?" Your mother says.

"Me? It was probably Dad!" Shisui says, indignant.

Your father says, "isn't Korin the one who curses the most?"

Then both males turn to your mother. This looks like it might turn into a serious(ly annoying) argument, so you decide to head it off. So, you decide to say 'Mama'. The woman seems a bit distant to you, not as quick to warm up to you as Shisui or even your father.

After that word, everyone turns to you. You point at the aforementioned person, and say the word again and again.

Your reputation with Uchiha Korin went up! E+ -> E+ (halfway to D-)

After a lot of crying and kisses to your cheeks (blech!), your family (they are your family, right? Just because you had another one 'before' doesn't mean that you shouldn't enjoy not being an orphan!) leave you to your peace and quiet. Before you know it, you are waking up to your father picking you up.

It seems your family is going somewhere, and taking you with them…? The four of you reach a relatively small wooden house, and your parents take you to meet… an old woman?

The woman says, "so, this is my new grandchild?" And examines you more closely. Then, she says, "why are her eyes blue?!"

Your parents try to explain that babies often start out with blue eyes, but the old woman won't listen, and go on about 'shameful' and 'a disgrace' and such. You start to say something. There's no way you'll let some boneheaded old woman push you around.

You say, "hag!" Looking at her.

Your parents try to make excuses, but the old woman ignores them. She scrutinizes you, and says, "who did you call what…?"

"You! Hag!" You say, pointing at her, trying to hold back your smirk.

The old woman stays still for a moment, then she starts… laughing? A prolonged, deep belly laugh. When she's finished laughing, she says, "it appears I was mistaken. This child has real Fire in her. That she can understand so much at her age shows she's also a true genius. Yes, she can't be anything other than an Uchiha."

She goes on and on about how you seem to be a lot more Uchiha-like than your brother, and then went into the topic of her late husband, Kagami, who had been a lot like Shisui. You don't tune her out, mainly because she might say something useful, but you don't pay full attention, either.

Your reputation with Uchiha Nanako goes up Sky-high! Negative D -> D rank
Your reputation with the Uchiha clan stays the same!
Your reputation with Uchiha Korin goes down! E+ (halfway to D-) -> E rank
Your mother is starting to get suspicious of you!
You have gained a temporary full rank up in Luck for IC actions! (D- -> C- only for the next time you need Luck)

When you and your family get back home, your father speaks to you alone. He says, "I don't know how much you understand, Rin, but if you do get it, well, please don't curse so much."

"'kay," you say, and the man looks at you for a moment, speechless.

Then, he sighs and says, "I really hope you don't end up as the new Itachi or even Shisui. Damn that Fugaku…."

Your mother, Korin apparently, shouts for 'Suiho', and your father leaves, saying 'Coming, coming….'

Your father's name is 'bubble'? Are all the males in your family named after something formed of water? No, your grandpa's name was 'Kagami', which means 'mirror'. Reflective surfaces? Most likely.

You learned a lot of things today, though. You found out that Shisui is very similar to his (your?) late grandfather, that your grandmother respects boldness more than she does politeness, that there's tension between your father and someone named Fugaku -probably someone important- and-

"Rin, it's feeding time," your mother says, and you secretly blanch.

After you drink your mother's milk (what? It's healthy), she starts rocking you to sleep, but you can tell something is up with her. You-

[](ActionSpeech) Say something
+What?
-[] Write-in?
+Only one/two word votes will be accepted

[](ActionSpeech) Don't do anything

[](ActionSpeech) Write-in?
+Be reasonable, otherwise Rin will be unable/unwilling to manage it (QM will veto it)

After your mother replies, you go to sleep. When you wake up in your crib, you decide to-

(Action2) Pick 2 choices
[](Action2) Try to climb out of the crib
[](Action2) Think on your memories
+There's something… off with your previous life's memories
+May progress Mission "What's in a Memory?"
[](Action2) Improve your speech

A word of QM: there was no way to avoid a bad or relatively bad outcome in the talking to grandma choice. You guys actually picked the least bad option, the one that won't mar our reputation in the Uchiha clan for years to come.
 
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Story 4
"Rin, it's feeding time," your mother says, and you secretly blanch.

After you drink your mother's milk (what? It's healthy), she starts rocking you to sleep, but you can tell something is up with her. You decide to show your appreciation for having a living and healthy mother, so you say, "love Mama," with all your heart.

Korin looks at you and your (probably toothless) grin and sighs a bit. Still, you can tell that whatever troubled her has eased, or at least been left for later. She says, "Love you too, Rin."

Your reputation with Uchiha Korin has gone up! E -> E+

As she leaves, you-

Luck check! You need D- for early activation. You pass!
Chakra Sensory (C+) turns into Mind's Eye of the Kagura (D+)
Mind's Eye of the Kagura:
A Chakra sensing technique unique to a very small number of the Uzumaki clan, so rare that it might as well be another bloodline
+Allows for Sensing without molding Chakra; without even having one's Chakra unlocked
+Actively suppressing your Chakra does weaken this skill to non-existence while the suppression is going on
+Allows for near-Byakugan levels of awareness at higher levels
+Can tell others' Chakra's 'qualities'; can also use to detect lies and fear through small fluctuations in Chakra
(This ability is the closest to Negative Emotions Sensing one can get without being a Bijuu or container)
+The maximum range at the highest levels can be like a high-end Byakugan

…You realize that your mother is still conflicted, but you can't tell how you know. It's like having a new sense, kind of like when you detected Prana in your previous world.

'Shit, it's exactly like that,' you think. It was like you had an extra pair of eyes, then and now.

After your mother replies and you discover some sort of sensory technique, you go to sleep. When you wake up in your crib, you decide to improve on your speech. So, you start doing various simple vocal exercises, as well as repeat various words you have heard.

Can now say simple sentences. Your Intelligence has gone up partway. A- -> A- (1/10 of the way through A rank)

After that, you decide to meditate on your previous life's memories.

You are in the Clock Tower, talking to your master.

"Master Zelretch," you say, "what is it you want me to do now?" Respectfully, though not completely without sass.

The old vampire shakes his head and says, "just rest for now, Rin; you've earned it. When I took you on as apprentice, I did so for your potential and the potential entertainment of the bickering between you and Luviagelita, but you surpassed all my expectations when you recreated the Jewel Sword, even if I know you had serious help."

"…Please don't tell anyone," you say, almost… begging?!

"Of course, of course," Zelretch says dismissively, "I wouldn't want your prospective husband getting too much attention of the wrong kind."

"He's not my-! Never mind - thank you, master Zelretch," you say, grateful.


What- what the hell did you just watch…? You must have been well into your twenties then, maybe even early thirties. This goes far beyond surviving Herakles!

…Weren't you barely seventeen when you died? The seed of doubt enters your mind. If you lost about a decade of memories, how many more years are out of your reach right now? For all you know, you might even be a True Magician already!*

Progressed Mission 'What's in a Memory?': 2/? You have reached the limit so far. Too many memories will overwhelm your infant brain (literally!).

For the next several months, you concentrate on training (pick 2):

[](Train) Physical development
[](Train) Learning to read
+The alphabet of kanji is subtly different here, enough to cause you problems
[](Train) Sensory technique
-[]On your own
-[]Ask someone else
+Who?
--[]Write-in?

You also concentrate the most on socializing (as much as that can happen at your physical age) with (pick 2):

[](Social) Shisui
[](Social) Nanako (Grandma)
[](Social) Suiho (Dad)
[](Social) Korin (Mom)

*Ye of little faith, here's the way Rin will use True Magic. Nobody noticed THIS little loophole. Nobody can GET a True Magic in the Narutoverse. If they have it already, it's different…. >:-D
 
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Story 5
You have been depressed since you found out that your Circuits were unusable, and your family noticed, but fortunately, they didn't confront you.

'How the hell did I end up with unusable Circuits!' You had thought, more than once, angry and sad.

Then, after witnessing a particular memory of yours, a new possibility occurred to you: your Circuits might have been locked not on their own or with Magecraft, but with the use of True Magic - to be exact, the Second Magic. You don't know if it is an accident or if Zelretch intervened, but if it's the latter, you are going to feed the old vampire his spleen!

Hahaha. Hahahahaha! Muahahahaha!

You are busy thinking up horrible tortures for Zelretch when Shisui approaches you. He comments, "that's an evil-sounding laugh you've got there, squirt."

Your laugh cuts off abruptly. You say, "Not squirt!" Stamping your foot and hopefully not looking like you're pouting.

"Easy there," Shisui says with a laugh, "you might break your crib."

You look at Shisui in an imperious way and say, "Shisui-nii, walk!"

Shisui looks at you and says, "you want to go on a walk?"

"No!" You say, "wanna try walking!"

Shisui goes stiff, then laughs a bit. He says, "if you're sure, kiddo. Be careful, okay?"

That's why you love Shisui. He doesn't try to stop your attempts at new things, he simply tells you to be careful and supervises.

Under your brother's watchful eye, you crawl around a bit, then try to get on your feet. You try again and again, but you get tired eventually, and Shisui takes you back to your crib.

"Rest up kiddo. You'll get it tomorrow," Shisui says, but you can barely hear him.

-----

The next day, after getting a change of diapers and being fed, you say, "Mama, put me down."

"Huh? Rin, what's this about?" Your mother says.

"Wanna stand. Wanna walk!" You say.

Your mother stiffens and calls for your father, but after a short conversation, your mother puts you on the floor. You crawl on all fours, then try to get up. You absently note that your stamina has already grown a lot since yesterday, somehow.

After a lot of tries and many failures; even some bruises, you manage to stand on your own. You sway a bit, but stabilize yourself, though your father is there, ready to intervene. You make one step, two… then drop, into Suiho's arms.

You refuse to give up, even though your father tries to dissuade you. Your mother, on the other hand, is less overprotective and more like Shisui, now that she saw you can handle it.

You try again; this time, you've got a handle on your balance… and simply walk, like you've been born on your feet.

Fully discovered Perk 'Super Prodigy (Fake)'
(Due to having an (almost) adult mind AND the learning speed of a child, everything is easier for you)
+Gives a great bonus to ALL training while you are under the age of 9
+Your bloodline trait(s) gain a moderate-high bonus
+A moderate bonus to rep.up to all those whose allegiance is 'Konoha' or 'Uchiha clan'

Your stats have gone up!
Strength F- -> F
Speed: F- -> F
Dexterity&Flexibility: F- -> E-

You have discovered Skill 'Pain Tolerance'!
Pain Tolerance: C rank (higher than some Chuunin)

Shisui, who has come to watch at some point, starts clapping, and your parents join in as well. You see pride in all their eyes, but Suiho also seems… worried?

Rep. Shisui: C+ -> B-
Rep. Suiho: E+ -> D
Rep. Korin: E+ -> D-

You make it a daily routine to walk around, building up your stamina and lower-body strength. Once, your mother comments that you are preparing to be a kunoichi early.

You ask, "what's kunoichi?" Caught by surprise by the somewhat unfamiliar term.

Now it's your mother's turn to look surprised. She says, "wait, you don't know what a shinobi is?"

You shake your head, though you know it's the same kanji as 'ninja' in your original world.

Your mother regales you with tales of legendary warriors who can literally breathe out the elements.

"Like a dragon?" You say, unable to stop yourself. People here have breath weapons?

"…Something like that," your mother says, "sometimes, I forget how young you are, Rin," sighing, but you can tell she no longer feels conflicted about you.

Your mother is no longer suspicious of you!
Rep. Korin: D- -> D

You think of telling her about your sensing ability… but decide to wait a few months before springing that up on her.

A few days later, you decide to get rid of a crippling weakness: you decide to learn how to read in this world. While the spoken dialect is similar enough for you to get it completely very quickly, the written part is significantly different from what you remember in some respects.

So, you take a book from your home's small library and try to read it. An hour or so later, you put it down, or rather throw it on the floor, frustrated. You say, "why is it so hard!" Barely keeping yourself from cursing.

At that point, your father intervenes. He says, "if you wanted to learn how to read, you could have asked for help, you know, Rin."

Then, he sits down with you and helps you trace the kanji and learn their pronunciation. To Suiho's surprise, you learn even more quickly than he expected, as he tells you.

Fully discovered Perk 'Natural Genius'
+Theory 'learning' actions gain a great-colossal boost
+Chakra Control goes up highly more quickly

You eventually ask a question that has you pretty stumped. You tell your father, "Papa, what's Cha-ku-ra?"

He looks at you in a piercing way. He says, "where did you hear that?"

You point at the book in your lap.

Suiho sighs. He says, "I hoped you wouldn't ask such a question until you were at least five." Then, he tells you about the basics of shinobi, or ninja, life.

Unlike your mother's idealized version, your father's words paint a much more bleak picture, though he still hides it behind pretty words. You don't know if ninjas are as prone to human experimentation as Magi, but all the talk of supernatural powers and ruthless mercenaries reminds you of home. It sounds like there's no secrecy for the Moonlit World here, or whatever it's called, though.

When he finishes, he takes a look at your expression and says, "you're even smarter than I thought. You don't fall for pretty words, huh?"

You shrug and say, "so, at what age does the Academy accept students?"

"…Or maybe not," Suiho says.

He doesn't know that you realized the dangers, then decided to become a shinobi anyway.

Your father puts his hands on your shoulders, looks into your eyes and says, "please, promise me you won't enter the Academy early, or graduate too quickly."

"One year early, only," you compromise.

Suiho says, "this isn't a negotiation."

You lift an eyebrow.

"Tch," your father says, exasperated, "you drive a hard bargain. Very well! I'll allow you to go to the Academy one year early, as long as your mother agrees and you still want to then. But no skipping grades or graduating before eleven!"

"Thanks, Papa," you say and hug him.

"…Brat," he says, but you can tell by his tone that he's smiling.

Rep. Suiho: D -> D+

From now on, your exercise routine becomes more intense, though you don't dare try things like push-ups at this age. Your father has spoken of something called 'Taijutsu' and even though your specialty will always be Magecraft, it sounds like close combat is a big deal here.

You eventually ask Shisui what Chakra is, exactly.

He scratches his head and says, "kind of expected this question, though not so soon. What do you know of physical and spiritual energy?"

"Nothing," you say, truthfully.

Shisui goes on to explain about the energy produced in one's cells, the Physical Energy, also known as Yang Chakra (not to be confused with Yang Release Chakra), which rises with exercise and the energy produced by the spirit -though he was not clear on how- called Spiritual Energy, or Yin Chakra, which rises with life experience.

"What's Yang Release and Yin Release Chakra, then?" You say.

Shisui goes on to tell you about the seven Natures of Chakra, the five Elements and the two skewed ratio Natures. He also tells you that you need to train 'Chakra Control' to be able to use Chakra Natures well at all.

"I'll be able to use all Elements," you declare.

Shisui agrees, patronizingly, but he doesn't know yours was a statement of fact, not ambition.

It's even more urgent for you to train physically now, if your Od pool -or Chakra, whatever- rises through exercise. …Wait, did your brother say that life experiences raise your Spiritual Energy?

You say, "nii-chan, what if someone has more Yin Chakra than Yang?" A bit worried.

"Smart question," Shisui says, "the thing is, our clan, the Uchiha clan, is more likely to lean towards Yin. Having a skewed pool of Chakra means that your Chakra runs out according to your weaker energy." He rubs his head, then says, "did I make sense? I sometimes forget you're barely over ten months old."

You give Shisui a thumbs up. Your single tooth glints in the light. (Damn that tooth! You have suffered to get it!)

"Gah!" Shisui says, "Guy flashbacks! Guy flashbacks!"

"Who's Guy, nii-chan?" You say, laughing at your brother's bizarre behavior.

"You really don't want to know," Shisui says, "just don't start wearing green spandex, all right?"

Green spandex?! You shudder.

Shisui nods and says, "yeah, disgusting, right?"

You nod.

Rep. Shisui goes up! B- -> B

-----

You continue your lessons with your father, and manage a level of literacy in less than two months that high school students were expected to be at in your previous world. Your father's feelings were mixed again.

You keep hanging out with Shisui as much as you can; he's a breath of fresh air, since you've never had a brother before, much less an older one.

Rep. Shisui goes up! B -> B (Halfway through B+)

You also spend a lot of time with your mother; you get flashbacks of your previous mother, but the fact they have totally different personalities helps.

Rep. Korin goes up! D -> (1/3 through D+)

The time comes for your first birthday party, yet it still catches you by surprise. You get a lot of presents, but your favorite is-

[]The toy kunai
+Plus one training action for the next year

[]The children's book
+Plus one 'studying' action for the next year

[]The doll
+Plus one Social action for the next year

You also meet the clan head's sons, Itachi and Sasuke. Itachi is a serious and very smart young boy, but you manage to get him out of his shell a bit with your cuteness.

Rep. Itachi goes up! E- -> E+

Itachi apparently is going to graduate and become a Genin in half a year, according to Sasuke.

(Though it went like this: 'Nii-san Genin soon! Nii-san aweshum!' Then Itachi explained.)

Well, Sasuke is well above average in intelligence for a toddler, you'll give him that. But somehow, you can tell Itachi is on a whole other level. It wouldn't surprise you if he talked and maybe walked faster than even you did, and you're mentally seventeen!

Itachi eventually goes to speak to Shisui, and leaves you with Sasuke. You-

[]Tease the kid
[]Don't tease the kid
 
A Father's Concern (Canon Omake)
@AoMythology I am not sorry!

After putting Rin to sleep you head to the kitchen and sigh. She was such a smart child, it was almost scary. Another Genius. The world must hate you.

You love your daughter, but sometimes you wish she wasn't so smart. When she asked what a Shinobi was, you were surprised before remembering her age.

You weren't so surprised when she asked when the Academy accepts students. Your lips quirk upward at that.

She doesn't understand the danger of the Shinobi life. No one really does until they experience it. You could be raised on countless war stories and mission tales that just went wrong and still not be ready.

Still, if there was one good thing that came from your talk, you got her to promise not to graduate before eleven. You know how graduating early can effect a child, all you need to do is look at your son. He was so much more innocent and carefree before graduating. Sure the war might be over now, but the fear of Rin losing that innocence and carefreeness?

You hope it won't happen for many, many long years to come. So you can actually raise this child properly.

You sigh again when you think of Shisui. You messed up there. Constantly going on missions, the rare times you were home you were mostly training him, and how you pressured him into graduating early. Sometimes, you wonder if he resents you for what you did. You know you do. That's why you had Rin in the first place. To try and rectify that mistake.

But it seems you were 'blessed' with another genius. One that seems intent on keeping pace with Itachi. The poor child that, if rumors are to believe, will be graduating at six. That, no matter what, you don't want to happen to Rin.

That, you promise to yourself. Your daughter will grow up as slowly as you can to protect her from the harsh world. So she can make friends and talk about clothes and boys and...

...god you are going to need a drink.
The first Omake for this quest has arrived!
 
Story 6 (Sasuke and Itachi)
[W]The toy kunai
(3 Training options, 2 Social, 2 Studying)
[W]Tease the kid

You can't resist. When you smell blood, you pounce. Sasuke being less than two years old doesn't matter in this case.

You say, "my brother is more awesome than yours," deliberately needling his weak spot.

"No! Nii-san more aweshum!" Sasuke replies back.

Which devolves into childish bickering, but you don't mind.

When Itachi and Shisui return, much to the latter's amusement, it is to find Sasuke trying to bite you. "What's going on here?" Shisui asks, still amused.

Itachi's face is blank, so you can't tell what he's thinking.

Sasuke immediately stops trying to bite you and goes up to Itachi, saying, "nii-san! Rin says her brother more aweshum! But nii-san best brother in da world! Tell her, nii-san!"

Now you can see Itachi's lip twitch upwards. He says, "I don't know. Shisui is a rather awesome brother," mischief dancing in his eyes.

Huh. You didn't think Itachi capable of such a thing.

Sasuke starts pouting at Itachi, looking like a kicked puppy. He also constantly repeats his brother's title.

Itachi bends down a bit… then flicks Sasuke's forehead.

"Ow ow ow. Why, nii-san?" Sasuke says, looking at his brother like the older boy had betrayed him.

"Foolish little brother," Itachi says, "there's no need to get into fights over me. I can defend my… awesomeness myself."

"Okay," says Sasuke, "but didja hav' to flick?"

"Yes," says Itachi, then turns to you. He then says, "thank you for keeping Sasuke company. I might ask mother to arrange a play date later."

"You're welcome, Itachi-san," you say, smiling evilly, "I… wouldn't be opposed."

Itachi seems surprised, most likely at your eloquence, then smiles. He says, "it might do Sasuke some good, to spend time with you."

"Nii-san!" Sasuke says, "don't need no stinkin' witch!"

You can feel your eyebrows twitch. You say, "what did you say, you brat…?"

Sasuke sticks out his tongue, and you realize that you're speaking to a child less than two years old. You feel your cheeks grow hot from embarrassment. Before you say anything, Itachi intervenes and takes Sasuke away.

Itachi Rep: E+ -> D-
Sasuke Social option unlocked!
Sasuke Rep: Remains at E- (=neutral)

-----

For the next year, you train your body. Under your mother's instruction, who used to be a Jounin in Uzushiogakure, you start more strenuous exercises.

You finally tell her about how you can tell who is entering a room and a little about their mood.

"That's a powerful ability," Korin says, "unfortunately, I didn't inherit that from my grandmother; neither did my mother. I AM a Chakra Sensor, but I can't use it without my Chakra. I recommend that you experiment a bit with it - until we've unlocked your Chakra, you probably won't have much control over your Sensing skill."

Three training actions. Speed and Strength gain a full Rank, and Chakra a (++), to be applied later, when your body is ready. Dexterity&Flexibility: E- -> E+

-----

You also spend time with Shisui and your grandmother.

The old woman seems enthusiastic over teaching you theory of the ninja arts and such; she might have only been a Chuunin before she retired to raise your father, but her grasp of Chakra theory and things such as sciences and mathematics is only second to the Sandaime Hokage in Konoha, as the woman boasts - a bit bitterly; it seems she's a little too competitive, or maybe he spurned her love when they were young or something.

You are almost certain that Nanako noticed you were learning a bit too quickly and easily; you also showed proficiency in writing and calligraphy without anyone having taught you. But Nanako didn't seem to care - she simply gave you more difficult 'challenges' to overcome. Some were things you would have had a hard time with even as an adult.

Your grandmother seems a lot more fond of you right now; it might have helped that your eyes have already turned black - the classic Uchiha black, signifying the potential to awaken the Sharingan. On the flip side, you now know what a Sorcery Trait- uh, Bloodline Limit is, as well as some examples!

Oh, you also learned what hand-seals do, and how they are made!

Two 'Theory' Actions! Got the Skill 'Ninja Academics' at B- rank!
Your Intelligence Stat has gone up! A- (1/10) -> A- (4/10)
Nanako Rep. has gone up: D ->C-
Got Skill 'Hand-Seals' at F+

-----

In the meanwhile, Shisui asks you what you want to do together.

You say, "may I watch you train?"

After a bit of hesitation, Shisui takes you to a pier and shows you Goukakyuu no jutsu (Great Fireball technique). He says, "the hand-seals are Snake, Ram, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger. Remember them well, because you will learn this one day."

Hand-Seals Skill goes up! F+ -> E- rank
Flaw 'Impulsive - moderate-high' activates!

"Why not now?" You say, unable to stop yourself.

You should really have known better; Magecraft was not taught until later ages for good reasons, even if the secrecy part of the reasons is moot in this world.

Shisui gives you a lecture on how too-early activation of one's Chakra can be dangerous. Then, he says, "wait, do you even know what hand-seals are?"

"Grandma taught me about hand-seals," you say, then show him a passable rendition of the hand-seals of the Great Fireball jutsu.

"Of course she did," Shisui says, murmuring, "shitty old woman," afterwards.

"Nii-chan!" You say, "do you have to talk like that?!" Incredulous at hearing Shisui curse for the first time.

"So, you heard that, huh? But is there room for you to talk? I've heard that the first thing you did when you met her was call her a hag to her face!" Shisui says, a smirk on his face.

"Nii-chan!" You say, annoyed at having that used against you.

"Okay, okay!" He says, "I won't call the shitty old woman that again, at least in front of you."

"You better!" You say, "even if you're right about her. But at least call her that to her face!"

Shisui snickers.

Shisui Rep. goes up! B (halfway through B+) -> B+ (halfway through A-)

Shisui's birthday comes and goes, and Itachi is there, this time without Sasuke. You don't get to speak with either of them, though, because what seems like the entire clan is around.

You-

[]Mingle with the guests
[]Stick with your father and stay silent

Your own birthday party is a quiet affair; Itachi and Sasuke are not around, and your father wanted a quiet celebration. The next year, though, he will introduce you to the clan officially. You find it ironic that you were born on February third, just like 'before'.

This year, you are going to focus on:

[]Training
+Plus two 'Training' Actions
[]Studying
+Plus two 'Studying' Actions
[]Socializing
+Plus two 'Social' Actions
 
A Mother's Pride (Canon/Semi-canon)
@AoMythology AND IT IS DONE!

You are Uchiha nee Uzumaki Korin. The proud mother of two children and wife of Uchiha Suiho. And currently, gossiping with the other Uchiha wives and shopping. The current topic was your daughter, Rin.

"Korin-San, how has your second little Genius been doing?" Asks Sara-San, Haru-San's wife, with a giggle. She always wanted the newest gossip.

"Oh yes, how is Rin-Chan doing?" Inquired Yui-Chan, wife of Reo-San, a small grin on her face. Like you, she wasn't an Uchiha by blood, so the two of you get along quite well.

"She's doing great." You state with a proud smirk. And it was true, especially in the light of learning that your daughter had inherited a rare sensing ability even in the Uzumaki Clan.

"Oh? You haven't looked so proud since she took her first steps." Replied Sara, obviously trying to get the information out of you. You may as well divulge.

"She recently told me that she can sense others. Without having her Chakra unlocked." I add in the second part quickly before they can interrupt.

"Really? Is that even possible?" Exclaimed Yui, eyes wide. You notice even Sara is surprised, making you smirk. Almost nothing surprises that woman.

"Yep! It's a rare trait in the Uzumaki Clan. Normally it's difficult to direct without Chakra but I'm confident my daughter will be able to figure it out." You boast as you grab a couple fresh tomatoes.

"That's impressive! Hey, you're a sensor, right Korin-San? You planning of teaching your daughter your ways?" Sara asks, an obvious tease, but not an unwarranted one.

"Of course! My family has been great sensors for generations! My son may have missed out on it, but my daughter has enough talent for the both of them!" You boast grinning wide.

"That's a bold claim Korin-Chan." Giggles Yui, a hand obviously hiding a smile.

"Claim? Hah! I am making no claims, it's a promise!" You state filled with determination. You know Rin will be a great sensor and you will help her with it! The two others giggle at you while picking up their own groceries.

After your statement the three of you finish shopping and go to a Dango stand for a small snack.

"So, any progress on any other fronts?" Sara asks smirking. The question makes you think for a moment.

"Well, her grandmother says she's an absolute genius when it comes to understanding theory and reading." You say with a small hum.

"Oh? Anything else?" Yui asks you, looking intently at the tea in her hands.

"Well, she's apparently quite good at Caligraphy as well. May have to bust out the old seal set and start teaching her the Uzumaki specialty. See if she has inherited the talent for it." You say, trying to remember where you put the damned thing.

"How about Shisui? How has he been dealing with a little sister? Still fawning over her?" Sara asks jokingly, mirth shining in her black eyes. You laugh at the question.

"I think it's gotten worse actually." You comment with amusement. You swear with how much he finds over Rin that he loves her more than you and his father. The thought makes you laugh again.

"Really? Those poor boys won't know what hit them when her brother notices them." Sara says jokingly.

"Poor Rin. She'll never get a boyfriend." Yui giggles. The two comments get you to start laughing as well.

"I don't doubt it! But that's only if they survive Rin herself first. Let me tell you, she's going to be a heartbreaker." You reply as your laughter settles down to giggles.

"So has she been trying to imitate her brother at all? I remember when Itachi tried to imitate his father one day and hurt himself." Yui, the sweet angel, asks in concern.

"Not at all. Though he did teach her the handseals to The Goukakyuu no Jutsu." You comment with a chuckle and shake of the head, remembering how upset Suiho was at that. Who knew for someone so worried about her rate of growth wanted to teach her the handseals?

"Really? And she understood it?" Sara asks, curiousity shining in her eyes. You nod in response.

"Rin-Chan really is smart. I almost wish I was that smart when I was her age." Yui giggles with a grin. You shrug in response.

"It's a bit troublesome honestly. Did you know we once lost track of her when she first began walking?" You ask laughing. The little girl had been in her room reading some book. But Shisui and Suiho both were panicking and had no idea where she was until you got home. That had been a funny moment for you, a terrifying event for the boys, and just confusion and smothering for Rin as she tried to reach for her book.

The three of you get up and pay for the bill, having finished your snacks and began to walk back to the Clan compound.

"So, any plans on when you are entering your little genius in the Academy?" Sara inquires curiously. Last time she asked you weren't quite sure, but seeing your daughter now?

"Suiho talked about it for awhile and we agreed to let her enter a year early." You inform them with a proud smile. Your daughter was certainly a source of pride for you of late. You didn't know that you'd give birth to another Genius. But it's certainly something you are proud of.

"A year early? You think she'll be ready for that?" Asks Yui, a bit of tentative. You snort at the question.

"Think? I know! Not only will she enter early, she'll be the top of her class!" You boldly state with absolute certainty, much to the amusement of the others.

The three of you talk for a bit longer before arriving at the compound and going your separate ways. You chuckle as you think of your daughter. Yes, for some unknown reason, even now, you were suspicious of her back then. Now though?

She, next to Shisui is your pride and joy. And you will be happy to watch her blossom into a beautiful, mature woman.

1,026 words! Longest Omake I ever made!
 
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