Remove ads

To Build a Universe (A God Quest)

Reader mode
Manperor_32 said:
yea that's good thanks for listening to me. Though trying to imagine in my head some one dancing there heart out And the void farting out some gold has me dying
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
This quest is all about creativity. I'm not perfect no one is, we're not able to encapsulate everything and make anything truly shine alone. I truly believe that this is the perfect quest for one where we can make the write-in's be a group effort one that everyone can be proud of, because everyone contributed to it. I wish there were more people that would give me specific suggestions. But, I'm happy to be of help.
 
Totadileplayz said:
This quest is all about creativity. I'm not perfect no one is, we're not able to encapsulate everything and make anything truly shine alone. I truly believe that this is the perfect quest for one where we can make the write-in's be a group effort one that everyone can be proud of, because everyone contributed to it. I wish there were more people that would give me specific suggestions. But, I'm happy to be of help.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

i agree this is a perfect opportunity for creativity and I don't intend to waste it.

also kakaluncha i want to use my omake bonus on mad gods magic
 
Last edited:
Manperor_32 said:
i agree this is a perfect opportunity for creativity and I don't intend to waste it.

also kakaluncha i want to use my omake bonus on mad gods magic
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

Understood!

Man, I'm really rooting for this proposal to pass the rolls, as it really goes in depth.

Anyway, votes will be over in three days. Remember to either vote or add your Write In (not both obviously), or if you want write an Omakes! Any Canon Omakes that present additions to this Universe will be added to the world Info!

Yeah, that's all. Have a nice day!
 
Kakaluncha said:
Understood!

Man, I'm really rooting for this proposal to pass the rolls, as it really goes in depth.

Anyway, votes will be over in three days. Remember to either vote or add your Write In (not both obviously), or if you want write an Omakes! Any Canon Omakes that present additions to this Universe will be added to the world Info!

Yeah, that's all. Have a nice day!
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

Quick question will my omake be considered canon or non-canon? if either could you threadmark it as side story? I'm planning on continuing the saga either way so it would be helpful.
 
Manperor_32 said:
Quick question will my omake be considered canon or non-canon? if either could you threadmark it as side story? I'm planning on continuing the saga either way so it would be helpful.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

I don't see why it couldn't be canon, to say the truth. I mean, it's itchy in some undescribable way, but I still thought it was a nice addition.

I will add a threadmark. Do you have any specific title in mind that you would like?
 
[] More Life
--[] Turn the Jellyfish into worlds where magic (or whatever can be called magic) is near to non-existent.
--[] Make World Turtles with great discs upon their backs and capable of living for millennium, these should have an internal strength of magic from which their disc, which is meant to be a world unto itself, draws magic.
 
Last edited:
Kakaluncha said:
I don't see why it couldn't be canon, to say the truth. I mean, it's itchy in some undescribable way, but I still thought it was a nice addition.

I will add a threadmark. Do you have any specific title in mind that you would like?
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...

Yea I'm not the best writer but I hope to fix that overtime. As for a title? I guess Plans from the void would be pretty decent or the empty's thousand eyes both could be used
 
Well There is something I could do. I can make 3 omake. the problem of course is there is not enough detail about any of the gods. So I'm likely going to make characterizations that don't clearly fit with the gods. So I'm simply going to call them tales from another world. Not Like They're going to be very good anyway.
 
Last edited:
Marlin said:
[X] More Life
--[X] Turn the Jellyfish into worlds where magic (or whatever can be called magic) is near to non-existent.
--[X] Make World Turtles with great discs upon their backs and capable of living for millennium, these should have an internal strength of magic from which their disc, which is meant to be a world unto itself, draws magic.
Click to expand...
Click to shrink...
you can't vote for your own write-in.
 
Omake: Ontos' self-reflection.

Ontos was one of the few entities that couldn't talk. He liked everyone, but he wasn't one able to communicate by words. Despite that he still had a life in this void. He considered himself lucky as right now with Nur working on who knows what, seeking to bring more into this endless void. He had his purpose, and he was happy to call the other gods his friends, and allies. His life's goal was to maintain and propagate these beautiful creations called Jellyfish. They were filled with strange and fantastic landscapes. Deserts, Mountain Ranges, Oases, and small seas. All of them were great in their own way, and the jellyfish all had their own unique personalities.

Ontos didn't want to choose among all of the great jellyfish that he took care of his favorite. However, he couldn't deny He had named all of them. From Oldest to Youngest there was ????, ???? ????, ????, ?????, and ????????. He couldn't share these names he gave to the jellyfish with others, for he wasn't gifted with speech. However, he still could find a way to express himself. If he didn't give up, he'd eventually find a way to inform the others of their names.

For this Reason Ontos went and kept track of his siblings. He wanted to inform them of their names when the day arrived, The Insanity Twins, and The Canine pair alike. He knew of someone that had spoken the first words, that was far grander then the divine telepathy that he understood the others had possessed before she talked. Ontos hoped that With Miona's help the goddess of void, music, sound, and potential, he could eventually find for the lack of a better word his own voice. The Thoughts of sharing with them all the names of the individual jellyfish excited him, and pushed him onward. Even despite the troubles he was facing.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Is this what an omake is? I'm not quite sure, hopefully I did a good job.
 
Remove ads
A Profound Statement (Canon Omake)
  • Sidestory
    • Omake: A Profound Statement.

    He was the God of Progress, Innovation, Invention and Discovery. The God of Science and the mechanics of the universe. He was the God of Knowledge, and brilliance. He was A God of Insanity before all else. So, when he was created he bounded away without worry. For he was the great. As an Octoelephantpus unlike any other. He simply realized the most profound knowledge throughout the universe. Purple is a fruit. Are there any trees or plants as he spoke? No, The Dogs were too busy entertaining the other, and Ontos was maintaining the planets.

    No, on the other hand such a profound statement came from knowledge he currently possessed. Orange is a fruit was a rather disgustingly simple one. Orange is a word that doesn't have a rhyme. It's a color, and it's a fruit. Purple, is a word that doesn't have a rhyme. It's a color, and thus must be a fruit. That profound statement shook him to his core. For he discovered no one would ever understand the beauty of such a statement. It was however the most important discovery he would ever make in his lifetime. Purple is a fruit. What could it mean? How could he make such great use of the ultimate statement? He simply must find out.

    So he went to one of the Giant Jellyfish. Such bores so plain and boring, he'd need to spice one of these up someday. Make it far more interesting, and went to work. How you might ask did the great god of insanity get inside the jellyfish? Why he swam straight through the bum of it of course, as he swam through the air. He did what could only be the most logical. He dyed everything purple. Lesser Races needed food in time. After all that was a role that Rutra the black was supposed to employ. So any plants that did grow inside here would be purple, and thus a fruit able to be eaten by those lesser races. If they did ever settle inside this jellyfish. Ontos wasn't here, so he simply must show him his great handiwork when he saw him again.

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Purple is a fruit.
     
    Last edited:
  • Sidestory
    • Totadileplayz said:
    Omake: Ontos' self-reflection.
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...

    It's a nice readaptation of what I presented for Ontos. It's wholesome. But I don't think I would count that as a canon omake. But anyway, you got the general idea of how it works. It doesn't add much, but it's still nice work. And I like that you took the time to read the World Info.

    Totadileplayz said:
    Omake: A Profound Statement.
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...

    But this...Now THIS is a fun Omake. It's weird, funny and it made me chuckle. And of course, it would make sense that the Octoelephantpus would choose purple, as it's the color of Nur's tunic.

    A few mistakes would be that it's not a turtle, and some gramatical mistakes, but those are easy to overlook. Anyway, here's your +10, and your canonizment.

    The majority of fruits that are born will be mostly purple, or tonalities of this color.
     
    Last edited:
    Omake:
    Kakaluncha said:
    It's a nice readaptation of what I presented for Ontos. It's wholesome. But I don't think I would count that as an omake. But anyway, you got the general idea of how it works.



    But this...Now THIS is a fun Omake. It's weird, funny and it made me chuckle. And of course, it would make sense that the Octoelephantpus would choose purple, as it's the color of Nur's tunic.

    A few mistakes would be that it's not a turtle, and some gramatical mistakes, but those are easy to overlook. Anyway, here's your +10, and your canonizment.

    The majority of fruits that are born will be mostly purple, or tonalities of this color.
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Of Course. I'm adding it to the magic System. Now I need to make 2 more omake's like the color purple one. So, That will be a bit more difficult, but still doable.
     
    bioticgrunt said:
    @Kakaluncha

    can all the gods manipulate the void, just not at the same level as Nur and (maybe) Mione or are they unable to manipulate the void?
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...

    Yeah, that's a dynamic I was planning on adding next turn. Each God will roll a d50 in order to determine how incredible their creation will be like. Obviously, if you ask them to help you doing something they won't roll that specific roll.

    All Gods are like currently set in the "create" default, but you can choose to change that any time you want.
     
    The Birth of the Lightbringers (Canon Omake)
  • Sidestory
    • Omake: Birth of the Lightbringers

    Nodheia found the void to be utterly boring.

    Nothing existed in the vast and empty void besides herself, her family, and the jellyfish. It was just a lifeless sea of pure blackness that stretched for eternity. This left the First Flame with very little to witness or interact with besides the other creations of Nur. Perhaps one day the jellyfish will grow in enough numbers to populate void or Nur would create things from nothing. However, such a time seemed so far away for Nodheia and she had no desire to sit around waiting for something to happen. Therefore, like her father/creator did before her, Nodheia decided to create to fill the darkness of the void.

    After all, if Nur can create things then why can't Nodheia do the same?

    Initially, she had struggled in her attempts to create something new because unlike Nur and Mione she lacked their skill in manipulating the void. Therefore, she decided to create something from her fire and light rather than from the void. It took all her time and focus along with much trial and error to make her first creation a reality. At first, she started with simple shapes and colors such as large red spheres or small blue squares. But over time she was able to make more and more complex shapes with her powers. Finally, after an entire year of work Nodheia looked upon with pride and joy.

    It was a large humanoid figure composed of light and fire with no distinguishable physical features. It possessed twelve wings which were spread evenly on its arms, legs, and back. Similar to its creator, it could manipulate fire and light but a lesser degree than Nodheia. She called it a Lightbringer for it and its future would bring light, fire, and order to the empty void. She immediately showed of her creation the rest of the family to see their reactions to her contribution to the world.

    A/N: This is the best I could come up with.
     
  • Sidestory
    • The Ways (Canon Omake)
  • Sidestory
    • Omake: The Ways

    Ontos was a silent deity. This wasn't by choice, but rather simply how he was born. He liked to think of himself as a comforting presence. So, he tried to visit the other deities on a regular basis. The Goddess Miona Especially as the Goddess of Sound, Music, and Potential. He hoped She would give him the potential to speak what he had on his mind one day. Though that wasn't on his mind right now. Ontos knew there were likely a couple of other deities truly knowledgeable of how to track the other gods. Rutra, and Ge'Eme. This he didn't find distasteful, he suspected however that the way they tracked and found the other gods wasn't like how he did so.

    He Saw the very identity of the gods inside the void. The void was enveloping and all consuming. It wasn't darkness, it wasn't light. It was truly nothing, and from nothing everything is possible. That was how the other gods could be found. They left a trail in nothingness. Minor though it was he supposed. A small perturbation and a unique signature. With Miona's being the most difficult. She was the most closely linked of the god's of Nur to the void itself. Ontos wouldn't lie, and say that wasn't another reason he tried to be in constant contact with her. He found it unsettling not knowing where one of the gods were. He didn't want to lose anyone. He cared about them all. Though The Quiet music that he heard was comforting in it's own way he supposed.

    As he thought about her, it naturally drifted to the traces of the other Gods. They were truly minor, but they were enough. From Rule's and Rutra's ecstatic barks. Nodheia's shining light. The Subtle insanity of reason, and creativity of the Affectionately called Insanity twins. Uhmera's heartwarming presence. Khrephine's disorderly chaotic energy. Ge'Eme's finality. The jellyfish had their own essence, much like his own though a tad weaker, and they moved far less then he did. They were that of a feeling of home, a feeling of belonging. At least that's how he identified it. Ontos supposed he wouldn't know what the others would think of it, if they could truly detect it like he could.

    Ontos stopped himself. He needed to check on his Jellyfish. The Insanity Twins were completely unpredictable,and it seemed that The God of Science had neared too close to them. He feared what he might discover if he left the jellyfish alone for too long. Ontos Followed the Insanity of Reason left in the void.

    A/N: Frankly speaking. I'm planning on the Scene of Ontos and The God of Science and Insanity's Scene being seen through by a third party, namely the jellyfish. As Such I need to leave it here. Unfortunately, I can only continue this if this Omake is rendered canon. Or Else I'll need to hope that I can nail Down Ontos before I do so. Since canon or not is the metric for a piece being good. I need to wait on the Qm to finish this short saga.
     
    Last edited:
  • Sidestory
    • Reader mode
    You must login or register to reply here.
    Remove ads
    Back
    Top