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To Build a Universe (A God Quest)

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I like it nicely done though how big is it? Bigger or smaller than her? I'm imagining the gods as giants while her creation is either the size of her hand like a candle or on roughly her height.
 
bioticgrunt said:
Omake: Birth of the Lightbringers
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Oh, that's a nice one! It would make a lot of sense for Nodheia to start creating things out of necessity to do something. +10 and this goes to the Canon.

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Omake: The Ways
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This is the way.

Jokes aside, I really liked this Ontos Omake. It expands on the established knowledge that you guys already have. You show Ontos as someone who knows a lot more than he can express, but at the same time, he has a really heartwarming point of view.

I will mark this as Canon, as I'm interested on the direction you will take this story.
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Htueinvjfhriv on May 25, 2020 at 8:01 AM, finished with 134 posts and 6 votes.
  • [X] Ask Nodheia and Miona to create fish that will serve as messengers between the gods. And beacons in the void, that will guide the lost.
    [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
    -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
    -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
    [X]The Mad God's Magic
    -[X] General Workings: Art in all it's art forms can only be used by those who helped to create it. Be it a single word in a poem or a major piece of it. So long as they directly collaborated in the art they can use it in the future. Anyone who didn't can't make use of it. The overall quality of the finished piece actually contributes to the amount of power the magic has. Wear and tear on any of these be it the forgetting of words in a song, or scuff marks on a painting. Causes unpredictable chaotic magic to surge through it the more serious the damage the more unpredictable the piece becomes. Since it's all about the personal work. While people can learn more about the arts from previous people it's about the people who works on it's personal talent that truly contributes how powerful the piece is. As a result there is not as much improvement then an actual science could possibly provide. But, that also means it starts off strong, and keeps a general level throughout the universe's career unless personally interfered with by the gods. As a result magic is limited. People could make any number of songs, and artistic works, but each one takes time to actually create, and only the person who makes the work can truly use it. Thus, a limited magic scenario takes place, but with everyone having potential and talent in the field.
    -[X] Architecture: While buildings are meant to be used for various purposes there is something useful throughout all of them. This magic proves to be just that, this magic allows you to perform a sort of telekinesis style magic inside the building itself. At the very basic level it can be used to lock or unlock doors, with more complex uses being, magical elevators, or items being made in house on command. Though of course any item made by this method won't be magical in it's own right not having to worry about making your own meal can prove to be very useful nevertheless. Though the items can only make what the user knows how to make. The magic can only be performed when they are inside the building itself proper.
    -[X] Ceramics: Ceramics are an interesting form of magic they can contain things. Whether this is age, despair, or even Fruit. This sort of magic is excellent in containing even people's death itself if the creator of the ceramics is skilled enough. While the creator is the only one able to store anything inside it, anyone is able to take from the ceramics to gain what's inside. A Kid might choose to take some years to be a proper adult only to realize the foolishness of the endeavor.
    -[X] Drawing: This magic is a teleportation style magic. Drawing the portrait of a man or a scene will allow you to teleport an appropriate amount of mass equal to the quality of the portrait to that location This doesn't allow you to split an object into multiple constituent parts however no matter how you wish for it, the person responsible will have to do that themselves. They will typically be teleported to the nearest available open area. So they do not appear inside a wall. This can teleport people to the location provided the portrait is of significant quality. If the location does not exist, throughout existence. The location will be one which has the most similarities to the drawing.
    -[X] Painting: This Magic enthralls the watcher, as the painter of the painting can bring forth the painting into the real world. Although they lack any real substance.
    -[X] Conceptual Art: Conceptual Art is a rather unique and bizarre twisting of the acts before. The Spirits and Gods are the only ones truly able to start the work, which if a non-spirit race is willing to cooperate and work with them. They'll be able to manipulate elements that the spirit or God is attuned to.
    -[X] Literature: This type of books enthralls the mind. It's the ultimate form of escapism in the past. As The words trap you in, this magic. Doesn't truly take you into the world, it however does something similar. Whenever the main character of the book eats, you'll taste the flavors in your mind. Any sense other then sight can be tricked by this however, it's not really a trick. The better the book the more it actually can do for you. While a bad book ending in the main character's death might harm you at the end, only a truly great book can kill the reader. This type of magic can only be activated when the writer of the book wishes for it to be so. But it can affect anyone who reads the book. Though of course this does not mean just books it is far easier to write a good poem, and things that don't rely on main characters typically do have things happening inside them which the reader may instead experience. A main character in a book simply gives the reader an avenue to not experience completely everything in the book itself.
    -[X] Photography: Keeping a piece of time. A Page in the great work is kept partially revealed containing only the knowledge of the scene itself. Able to be read by those that took the photograph in the first place. It doesn't reveal much, but the information it does provide may prove useful yet.
    -[X] Sculpture: Golemancy, the creation of even the most esoteric golems typically means the construct tries to move by preconceived joints if possible. If it's too esoteric to even have places of possible bending however. The Sculpture becomes more attuned to it's processes and tries to manipulate the magic around it to keep it operational and refined. The General abilities of the construct are what talents the construct would be perceived to have. A Banana sculpture could move around, and be edible. A Soldier could fight.
    -[X] Dance: Dances are impactful in a different fashion. These are able to change one item for another so long as they are similar enough. The better the dancer the more leeway given for the exchange itself. However, Change isn't quite the right word for what The Dance doesn't simply make iron into gold. It could make that iron into a gun so long as the Dancer had knowledge of it, with better dancing skills able to compensate for the lack of logistical knowledge to make the required item. Or it could make that iron into a puff of air effectively destroying the mass. With Dancing You could change a heavy rock's location from right in front of you to behind you, with the rock morphing to twist inside even the narrowest caves if the Dancer is skilled. It Is Said that If You truly gave your heart and soul into the Dance you could even make something out of the Void itself.
    -[X] Music: Music is the source of people's innate abilities. Not quite accurate, many things can be accounted on the biological end of things. However those things that can't are often linked to the person's heart-song. This is their natural abilities. This typically is racial, however divine blessings or other outside interference might alter the song to account for such abilities. As this is an innate source of magic the song is often while not quite shared similar to those of their race, and the song is made through the birthing process that creates them. Rendering it impossible to make another magical song later on during their life. To employ these special Racial and Divine blessings more effectively singing, or even humming the song will improve the potency of the effects. While this is truly the strongest song someone can sing. Exposure to other people and their songs can provide crucial insights into other people's beliefs and dreams with which lesser songs can be made. These songs must be sung when used, but can provide some of the utility other creatures and races possess.
    -[X] Theater: Through a theatrical performance people act as a character be it a king, a commoner or a Tree. As this happens they become more like their character gaining their preconceived traits. Their kindness or their malice. If the character has a special talent or ability, the man might acquire it. Though the traits can fade over time, if they do not perform the play often enough, starting by the negative traits being replaced with their own though all will fade away in time. So long as the play itself is in tact any chaotic magic that occurs will be from the flubs and mistakes inside the play itself.
    -[X] Applied Arts: Enhancement magic. The Ability to improve any object is in the applied arts. This typically improves the base function of the product itself through with proper work and intent it can improve any conceivable property of the object. With the better the work and the narrower the focus the more that specific part of the object is improved.
    -[X] Video Games: The works themselves are the most difficult to create requiring countless innovations before a species could ever truly create these. However the use of this type of art is pocket dimensions. Able to enter the world those who made these, in a realistic pocket dimension which only shows the areas in the game itself. The World becomes more lifelike though still keeping many of the integrities of the game in the first place, with the person accessing the magic being given the position of a player in the work itself, until they choose to leave. Their needs can be met so long as their needs are provided for in the game itself.
    [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
    -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
    -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
    -[X] ask them if they had any interesting ideas for lesser races.
    [X] More Life
    --[X] Turn the Jellyfish into worlds where magic (or whatever can be called magic) is near to non-existent.
    --[X] Make World Turtles with great discs upon their backs and capable of living for millennium, these should have an internal strength of magic from which their disc, which is meant to be a world unto itself, draws magic.
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Kakaluncha said:
Oh, that's a nice one! It would make a lot of sense for Nodheia to start creating things out of necessity to do something. +10 and this goes to the Canon.


This is the way.

Jokes aside, I really liked this Ontos Omake. It expands on the established knowledge that you guys already have. You show Ontos as someone who knows a lot more than he can express, but at the same time, he has a really heartwarming point of view.

I will mark this as Canon, as I'm interested on the direction you will take this story.
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Okay, I'm glad to hear that. I'll work on the last post. Ontos, and The currently Unnamed God of Science. The Aftermath. Frankly I was prepared to write as many Omake as I needed to to pin down Ontos. But it's Relieving to hear that The Ways was a good interpretation of Ontos.
 
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World Info 2: Height Bogaloo.
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    • I use Jellyfish as a basic measure


    EntitySize
    JellyfishAs big as the Entire Middle East
    NurImpossible to determine (omnipresence)
    Rul and Rutra Double the size of the Jellyfish
    NodheiaDouble the size of the dogs.
    MionaAbout one third taller than Nodheia.
    Pair of InsanityTwice as big as Miona
    UhmeraOne fifth lower than the Pair of Insanity
    Ge'EmeUndetermined height, might be the same as Uhmera, maybe a little taller.
    KrehphineJust sum up the height of all known Monster Girls
    OntosThat's forbidden knowledge! But the guess would be between Miona and Nodheia.
     
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    • So Krehphine is by far the largest. I suppose the answer would be in the universe scale then. Hmm but there's actual Monstergirls that are the size of the universe hmmm... She dwarfs everyone besides Nur.
     
    Will they role for the creat castle be a single dice roll to determine everyone's reaction to it or will there individual rolls for each god.
     
    Totadileplayz said:
    The Void does not currently have a listed size. But, currently it would likely be a bit smaller then Nur due to the fact the void isn't actually omnipresent in totality. I think.
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    well it is everywhere and nowhere at once as well as being everything but nothing after all pretty much everything came from it so I would say it's bigger
     
    Great Lord Hiza (Canon Omake)
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    • Omake: The Great Lord Hiza

    I am The Great Lord Hiza. I am not the first born of the Jellyfish. Nor, Am I The Leader of the Jellyfish. But I am the Lord. I am the smartest, thus I'm the best of the jellyfish. How am I lord then? It's a state of intent engraved on my very name. For I have thought long and hard about this, and I am satisfied with what I've come up with. What will I do when I am truly recognized a lord by everyone? I should think about this topic later.

    For now it seems a Great one Has entered my domain. He is a... What the heck is he? He's not Ontos, I don't think I've seen him before in my months of existence. Well whatever he is. His swimming through my bum must mean that he is willing to pay tribute to the greatness of me. Wait, what is he doing? I saw something strange happening inside me. The Colors started to distort and shift. There was only one color left when he stopped. Well there were tones of the color, as it seemed he quickly grew bored of one shade and moved onto the next shade. But, it mattered not besides exacerbating the problem in Lord Hiza's Eyes. The Beauties of Blue, Red, Green, and Yellow were gone. Even the dull but brilliant shades of Greys were gone. This disturbed me The Great Lord Hiza Greatly. I was enraged, but what could I dare do to a god? So, I had to step back, metaphorically of course. As I waited for him to leave. I tried to think of a point in the favor of this change. Unlike the other Jellyfish I was of one color. So, perhaps this color was that of VIP's? It was the color of Nur's Tunic afterall. So perhaps this was a mark to the God's recognizing me as the Lord I proclaimed to no one. He did color my domain after all.

    As I figured out this was truly a good thing rather then the negative the others might suppose. Even though I couldn't speak, I did let out my own sign of relief when I saw the one who took care of us Jellyfish approach quickly. It seemed That Ontos had known that This Strange god had appeared to me. Perhaps, this was a sign of a celebration party? Ontos my personal protector and the one that currently oversaw all jellyfish, has approached. It was always a nice thing to experience. Yet, today in this endless void it was a particularly nice day for the intruding god wasn't a pleasant sight. Since, who knows what might happen next?

    When Ontos entered me as well. Someone might not notice the subtle tells that Ontos might give out as he showed his disappointment, but as a fellow jellyfish, one maintained by Ontos himself, and someone who's seen the shift before. I felt increasingly alarmed. Did I do something? Was the ph of the Sea not quite right? The Mountain winds too harsh? The worry of disappointing Ontos made me forget about the color change I had just occurred. I have never seen him angry, but I would always prefer it to his disappointment.

    Yet, upon further reflection I realized Ontos attention hadn't been towards me or the state of the world I kept. Rather it seemed to be dedicated to the other God inside my domain. Ontos was disappointed in the other god? The one that painted me the Color of The Greatest God Nur? Why? Was it a slight to Nur? As I thought this my mind seemed to slow, only able to take in the scene I saw around me.

    Ontos approached closer to The Octothing. Ontos didn't speak, but The Octothing remarked with clear insanity and pure enthusiasm. "Ah Just the God I wanted. Yes, Yes, Come and See the pure simplicity of this beasty! The purple of fruit, the fruit of purple!" Ontos said nothing in response. I did detect the exasperation in his movements. It seemed Ontos didn't truly like this god? Why? Ontos did something else on the other hand. He looked at The Octo, then the bum where The Octo came from. Octo seemed to understand this as a command of some sort altogether different then what I took it as. For it seemed The Octo seemed to be heading to enter the bum of Ontos.

    Ontos took to that with quite some alarm. As he shook his body side to side to signal a no. Which Octo took to be a clarification of the previous statement. As Octo started to shake his booty. It Seemed to both me, and Ontos that trying to communicate with the mad deity. Would be a futile endeavor. Though Ontos had far more patience then I did, as he tried one last time. He used one of his tentacles to point to Ontos, then he left and pointed to the void, and returned. Octo's curiosity seemed to make him want to investigate the point, and once he did so.

    Ontos decided to take the time to try and stop the presence of Octo from coming inside him. With a resolve. It seemed that Ontos had taken enough, and wanted to do something without his interference. Octo for his part didn't particularly try to enter back into me as he simply pounded on me and then left. Dejectedly swimming.

    With that Ontos tried to scrub the purple from my body. Returning the proper colors to me. Though it took a while most of the purple inside me was eventually removed. With that Done. Ontos left, and I felt satisfied of the few marks of the events that this showed to me. For the fruit that I bore was still purple showing the various shades the God had painted me in this event. A point to boast to the other Jellies, as the very gods fought over me. I could say that, it was only a slight exaggeration.

    Sidenote:

    This is the Jellyfish Lord Hiza's name is based off of. The Species name is Cotylorhiza tuberculata.

    I hope it came out better then I think.
     
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    • Totadileplayz said:
    So Krehphine is by far the largest. I suppose the answer would be in the universe scale then. Hmm but there's actual Monstergirls that are the size of the universe hmmm... She dwarfs everyone besides Nur.
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    Don't take it as a literal interpretation. Remember that Krehphine is constantly changing the species she is composed of, so it's impossible to give an accurate answer.

    Totadileplayz said:
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    Okay, so hear me out. It's NOT a bad story. I found every instance of Ontos being stressed by the Science God shinenigans amusing. You gave a really interesting characterisation to a Jellyfish, which I found very interesting.

    But.

    You kinda...go all over the place with the time, and with that, I mean alternating between present and past tense very constantly. Also, there doesn't seem to be much gramatical coherence

    Okay, since you dedicated an effort, I'm gonna accept this as canon, 'cause being an ass is unnecessary. But this is an exception, let me make this clear, and it's unlikely I do this again.

    +10 to you, and this goes to the World Info as canon.

    Btw people, I kinda need more votes on the Write In's to choose them. Voting will end in 24 hours.

    Good luck to all of you!
     
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    Look's like its a tie between the world turtle and messenger fish that needs to be broken for either to count, I wonder if the turtle would eat the jelly worlds?
    Adhoc vote count started by Htueinvjfhriv on May 25, 2020 at 8:01 AM, finished with 134 posts and 6 votes.
    • [X] Ask Nodheia and Miona to create fish that will serve as messengers between the gods. And beacons in the void, that will guide the lost.
      [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
      -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
      -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
      [X]The Mad God's Magic
      -[X] General Workings: Art in all it's art forms can only be used by those who helped to create it. Be it a single word in a poem or a major piece of it. So long as they directly collaborated in the art they can use it in the future. Anyone who didn't can't make use of it. The overall quality of the finished piece actually contributes to the amount of power the magic has. Wear and tear on any of these be it the forgetting of words in a song, or scuff marks on a painting. Causes unpredictable chaotic magic to surge through it the more serious the damage the more unpredictable the piece becomes. Since it's all about the personal work. While people can learn more about the arts from previous people it's about the people who works on it's personal talent that truly contributes how powerful the piece is. As a result there is not as much improvement then an actual science could possibly provide. But, that also means it starts off strong, and keeps a general level throughout the universe's career unless personally interfered with by the gods. As a result magic is limited. People could make any number of songs, and artistic works, but each one takes time to actually create, and only the person who makes the work can truly use it. Thus, a limited magic scenario takes place, but with everyone having potential and talent in the field.
      -[X] Architecture: While buildings are meant to be used for various purposes there is something useful throughout all of them. This magic proves to be just that, this magic allows you to perform a sort of telekinesis style magic inside the building itself. At the very basic level it can be used to lock or unlock doors, with more complex uses being, magical elevators, or items being made in house on command. Though of course any item made by this method won't be magical in it's own right not having to worry about making your own meal can prove to be very useful nevertheless. Though the items can only make what the user knows how to make. The magic can only be performed when they are inside the building itself proper.
      -[X] Ceramics: Ceramics are an interesting form of magic they can contain things. Whether this is age, despair, or even Fruit. This sort of magic is excellent in containing even people's death itself if the creator of the ceramics is skilled enough. While the creator is the only one able to store anything inside it, anyone is able to take from the ceramics to gain what's inside. A Kid might choose to take some years to be a proper adult only to realize the foolishness of the endeavor.
      -[X] Drawing: This magic is a teleportation style magic. Drawing the portrait of a man or a scene will allow you to teleport an appropriate amount of mass equal to the quality of the portrait to that location This doesn't allow you to split an object into multiple constituent parts however no matter how you wish for it, the person responsible will have to do that themselves. They will typically be teleported to the nearest available open area. So they do not appear inside a wall. This can teleport people to the location provided the portrait is of significant quality. If the location does not exist, throughout existence. The location will be one which has the most similarities to the drawing.
      -[X] Painting: This Magic enthralls the watcher, as the painter of the painting can bring forth the painting into the real world. Although they lack any real substance.
      -[X] Conceptual Art: Conceptual Art is a rather unique and bizarre twisting of the acts before. The Spirits and Gods are the only ones truly able to start the work, which if a non-spirit race is willing to cooperate and work with them. They'll be able to manipulate elements that the spirit or God is attuned to.
      -[X] Literature: This type of books enthralls the mind. It's the ultimate form of escapism in the past. As The words trap you in, this magic. Doesn't truly take you into the world, it however does something similar. Whenever the main character of the book eats, you'll taste the flavors in your mind. Any sense other then sight can be tricked by this however, it's not really a trick. The better the book the more it actually can do for you. While a bad book ending in the main character's death might harm you at the end, only a truly great book can kill the reader. This type of magic can only be activated when the writer of the book wishes for it to be so. But it can affect anyone who reads the book. Though of course this does not mean just books it is far easier to write a good poem, and things that don't rely on main characters typically do have things happening inside them which the reader may instead experience. A main character in a book simply gives the reader an avenue to not experience completely everything in the book itself.
      -[X] Photography: Keeping a piece of time. A Page in the great work is kept partially revealed containing only the knowledge of the scene itself. Able to be read by those that took the photograph in the first place. It doesn't reveal much, but the information it does provide may prove useful yet.
      -[X] Sculpture: Golemancy, the creation of even the most esoteric golems typically means the construct tries to move by preconceived joints if possible. If it's too esoteric to even have places of possible bending however. The Sculpture becomes more attuned to it's processes and tries to manipulate the magic around it to keep it operational and refined. The General abilities of the construct are what talents the construct would be perceived to have. A Banana sculpture could move around, and be edible. A Soldier could fight.
      -[X] Dance: Dances are impactful in a different fashion. These are able to change one item for another so long as they are similar enough. The better the dancer the more leeway given for the exchange itself. However, Change isn't quite the right word for what The Dance doesn't simply make iron into gold. It could make that iron into a gun so long as the Dancer had knowledge of it, with better dancing skills able to compensate for the lack of logistical knowledge to make the required item. Or it could make that iron into a puff of air effectively destroying the mass. With Dancing You could change a heavy rock's location from right in front of you to behind you, with the rock morphing to twist inside even the narrowest caves if the Dancer is skilled. It Is Said that If You truly gave your heart and soul into the Dance you could even make something out of the Void itself.
      -[X] Music: Music is the source of people's innate abilities. Not quite accurate, many things can be accounted on the biological end of things. However those things that can't are often linked to the person's heart-song. This is their natural abilities. This typically is racial, however divine blessings or other outside interference might alter the song to account for such abilities. As this is an innate source of magic the song is often while not quite shared similar to those of their race, and the song is made through the birthing process that creates them. Rendering it impossible to make another magical song later on during their life. To employ these special Racial and Divine blessings more effectively singing, or even humming the song will improve the potency of the effects. While this is truly the strongest song someone can sing. Exposure to other people and their songs can provide crucial insights into other people's beliefs and dreams with which lesser songs can be made. These songs must be sung when used, but can provide some of the utility other creatures and races possess.
      -[X] Theater: Through a theatrical performance people act as a character be it a king, a commoner or a Tree. As this happens they become more like their character gaining their preconceived traits. Their kindness or their malice. If the character has a special talent or ability, the man might acquire it. Though the traits can fade over time, if they do not perform the play often enough, starting by the negative traits being replaced with their own though all will fade away in time. So long as the play itself is in tact any chaotic magic that occurs will be from the flubs and mistakes inside the play itself.
      -[X] Applied Arts: Enhancement magic. The Ability to improve any object is in the applied arts. This typically improves the base function of the product itself through with proper work and intent it can improve any conceivable property of the object. With the better the work and the narrower the focus the more that specific part of the object is improved.
      -[X] Video Games: The works themselves are the most difficult to create requiring countless innovations before a species could ever truly create these. However the use of this type of art is pocket dimensions. Able to enter the world those who made these, in a realistic pocket dimension which only shows the areas in the game itself. The World becomes more lifelike though still keeping many of the integrities of the game in the first place, with the person accessing the magic being given the position of a player in the work itself, until they choose to leave. Their needs can be met so long as their needs are provided for in the game itself.
      [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
      -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
      -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
      -[X] ask them if they had any interesting ideas for lesser races.
      [X] More Life
      --[X] Turn the Jellyfish into worlds where magic (or whatever can be called magic) is near to non-existent.
      --[X] Make World Turtles with great discs upon their backs and capable of living for millennium, these should have an internal strength of magic from which their disc, which is meant to be a world unto itself, draws magic.
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    RebelYell said:
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    Look's like its a tie between the world turtle and messenger fish that needs to be broken for either to count, I wonder if the turtle would eat the jelly worlds?
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    Actually the turtle world is an invalid vote.


    Also Yes I suck. It's been way too long since, I've actually needed to bother with grammar. Thus, I'll need to bother figuring out which grammar rules I'm unknowingly breaking. Though the past and present tense is something I can try to more easily fix.
    Heh, but Because I got it anyway. I'll add the +10 t mad god's magic like I talked about previously. I truly suck as a writer.
     
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    Totadileplayz said:
    Actually the turtle world is an invalid vote.


    Also Yes I suck. It's been way too long since, I've actually needed to bother with grammar. Thus, I'll need to bother figuring out which grammar rules I'm unknowingly breaking. Though the past and present tense is something I can try to more easily fix.
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    Hey, don't worry too much about it! I assure you, it was a really interesting story to read, and I cracked a chuckle a few times.
     
    A Father/Mother/Progenitor's Love (Canon Omake)
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    • Omake: A Father/Mother/PROGENTIERS love

    It was the first of the children of the Void. It felt its Mother/Fathers cold embrace as it was made from the nothing that was its womb. It also felt the Horrid feeling of HIS creation. In that moment it understood PROGENTIERS goals, it understood the reason of its birth and why it must die. After all it was flawed it had many deformities too many to count it was the first of PROGENTIERS children thus it was a disposable pawn to be used to figure out what went wrong.

    It accepted the PAIN as was its purpose. The pain would end soon enough as more siblings were given shape for use against HIS creation. After all even the PAIN from being the first born was nothing compared to HIS presence HE was the source of that pain in its nascent soul the scorching of HIS light was enough to cause it to accept death in all forms. It could only imagine the pain its PROGENTIER must feel at all times of every second.
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    Its plans were going well the first child had been born thus proving that it could have its own children of the void. While the first was a complete failure in constant nagging pain it mattered not. With just a small manipulation of the Void inside the child it was reabsorbed into itself. The next child was better flesh only half as cancerous, rotted, and on the verge of death, and the child after the only a fifth as cancerous as the second, and child after child was learned from until on the fiftieth child the process had been perfected.

    This child of void would become its baseline for further experiments. After all it was only as powerful as the one of flame and order, but as it was making its children it ran into a problem. While its power was infinite/ly finite it was still tired after all for all of its (non)existence it has never had to actively do anything or manipulate itself to destroy much less create.

    Thus it decided to reabsorb the child learn from it and rest and shield itself from HIS influence even just for a few millions of years rest was needed. It turned its attention away from HIM and slept with a promise to end him when it next awoke from its long rest.

    And with that promise the turns end and another's beginning drew closer.
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    Hope you liked it trying to give character to nothing incarnate is harder than it sounds. Also GM I would like to stack this with my earlier +10 if I can.
     
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    • [X] Ask Nodheia and Miona to create fish that will serve as messengers between the gods. And beacons in the void, that will guide the lost.
      [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
      -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
      -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
      [X]The Mad God's Magic
      -[X] General Workings: Art in all it's art forms can only be used by those who helped to create it. Be it a single word in a poem or a major piece of it. So long as they directly collaborated in the art they can use it in the future. Anyone who didn't can't make use of it. The overall quality of the finished piece actually contributes to the amount of power the magic has. Wear and tear on any of these be it the forgetting of words in a song, or scuff marks on a painting. Causes unpredictable chaotic magic to surge through it the more serious the damage the more unpredictable the piece becomes. Since it's all about the personal work. While people can learn more about the arts from previous people it's about the people who works on it's personal talent that truly contributes how powerful the piece is. As a result there is not as much improvement then an actual science could possibly provide. But, that also means it starts off strong, and keeps a general level throughout the universe's career unless personally interfered with by the gods. As a result magic is limited. People could make any number of songs, and artistic works, but each one takes time to actually create, and only the person who makes the work can truly use it. Thus, a limited magic scenario takes place, but with everyone having potential and talent in the field.
      -[X] Architecture: While buildings are meant to be used for various purposes there is something useful throughout all of them. This magic proves to be just that, this magic allows you to perform a sort of telekinesis style magic inside the building itself. At the very basic level it can be used to lock or unlock doors, with more complex uses being, magical elevators, or items being made in house on command. Though of course any item made by this method won't be magical in it's own right not having to worry about making your own meal can prove to be very useful nevertheless. Though the items can only make what the user knows how to make. The magic can only be performed when they are inside the building itself proper.
      -[X] Ceramics: Ceramics are an interesting form of magic they can contain things. Whether this is age, despair, or even Fruit. This sort of magic is excellent in containing even people's death itself if the creator of the ceramics is skilled enough. While the creator is the only one able to store anything inside it, anyone is able to take from the ceramics to gain what's inside. A Kid might choose to take some years to be a proper adult only to realize the foolishness of the endeavor.
      -[X] Drawing: This magic is a teleportation style magic. Drawing the portrait of a man or a scene will allow you to teleport an appropriate amount of mass equal to the quality of the portrait to that location This doesn't allow you to split an object into multiple constituent parts however no matter how you wish for it, the person responsible will have to do that themselves. They will typically be teleported to the nearest available open area. So they do not appear inside a wall. This can teleport people to the location provided the portrait is of significant quality. If the location does not exist, throughout existence. The location will be one which has the most similarities to the drawing.
      -[X] Painting: This Magic enthralls the watcher, as the painter of the painting can bring forth the painting into the real world. Although they lack any real substance.
      -[X] Conceptual Art: Conceptual Art is a rather unique and bizarre twisting of the acts before. The Spirits and Gods are the only ones truly able to start the work, which if a non-spirit race is willing to cooperate and work with them. They'll be able to manipulate elements that the spirit or God is attuned to.
      -[X] Literature: This type of books enthralls the mind. It's the ultimate form of escapism in the past. As The words trap you in, this magic. Doesn't truly take you into the world, it however does something similar. Whenever the main character of the book eats, you'll taste the flavors in your mind. Any sense other then sight can be tricked by this however, it's not really a trick. The better the book the more it actually can do for you. While a bad book ending in the main character's death might harm you at the end, only a truly great book can kill the reader. This type of magic can only be activated when the writer of the book wishes for it to be so. But it can affect anyone who reads the book. Though of course this does not mean just books it is far easier to write a good poem, and things that don't rely on main characters typically do have things happening inside them which the reader may instead experience. A main character in a book simply gives the reader an avenue to not experience completely everything in the book itself.
      -[X] Photography: Keeping a piece of time. A Page in the great work is kept partially revealed containing only the knowledge of the scene itself. Able to be read by those that took the photograph in the first place. It doesn't reveal much, but the information it does provide may prove useful yet.
      -[X] Sculpture: Golemancy, the creation of even the most esoteric golems typically means the construct tries to move by preconceived joints if possible. If it's too esoteric to even have places of possible bending however. The Sculpture becomes more attuned to it's processes and tries to manipulate the magic around it to keep it operational and refined. The General abilities of the construct are what talents the construct would be perceived to have. A Banana sculpture could move around, and be edible. A Soldier could fight.
      -[X] Dance: Dances are impactful in a different fashion. These are able to change one item for another so long as they are similar enough. The better the dancer the more leeway given for the exchange itself. However, Change isn't quite the right word for what The Dance doesn't simply make iron into gold. It could make that iron into a gun so long as the Dancer had knowledge of it, with better dancing skills able to compensate for the lack of logistical knowledge to make the required item. Or it could make that iron into a puff of air effectively destroying the mass. With Dancing You could change a heavy rock's location from right in front of you to behind you, with the rock morphing to twist inside even the narrowest caves if the Dancer is skilled. It Is Said that If You truly gave your heart and soul into the Dance you could even make something out of the Void itself.
      -[X] Music: Music is the source of people's innate abilities. Not quite accurate, many things can be accounted on the biological end of things. However those things that can't are often linked to the person's heart-song. This is their natural abilities. This typically is racial, however divine blessings or other outside interference might alter the song to account for such abilities. As this is an innate source of magic the song is often while not quite shared similar to those of their race, and the song is made through the birthing process that creates them. Rendering it impossible to make another magical song later on during their life. To employ these special Racial and Divine blessings more effectively singing, or even humming the song will improve the potency of the effects. While this is truly the strongest song someone can sing. Exposure to other people and their songs can provide crucial insights into other people's beliefs and dreams with which lesser songs can be made. These songs must be sung when used, but can provide some of the utility other creatures and races possess.
      -[X] Theater: Through a theatrical performance people act as a character be it a king, a commoner or a Tree. As this happens they become more like their character gaining their preconceived traits. Their kindness or their malice. If the character has a special talent or ability, the man might acquire it. Though the traits can fade over time, if they do not perform the play often enough, starting by the negative traits being replaced with their own though all will fade away in time. So long as the play itself is in tact any chaotic magic that occurs will be from the flubs and mistakes inside the play itself.
      -[X] Applied Arts: Enhancement magic. The Ability to improve any object is in the applied arts. This typically improves the base function of the product itself through with proper work and intent it can improve any conceivable property of the object. With the better the work and the narrower the focus the more that specific part of the object is improved.
      -[X] Video Games: The works themselves are the most difficult to create requiring countless innovations before a species could ever truly create these. However the use of this type of art is pocket dimensions. Able to enter the world those who made these, in a realistic pocket dimension which only shows the areas in the game itself. The World becomes more lifelike though still keeping many of the integrities of the game in the first place, with the person accessing the magic being given the position of a player in the work itself, until they choose to leave. Their needs can be met so long as their needs are provided for in the game itself.
      [X] Create a massive multicolored castle for the gods to dwell and converse with each other with rooms designed to for each god specifically. In the center of the castle is a massive golden tree that produces delicious silver fruit for feasting.
      -[X] Discussion of their purpose in this world, and the reason why Nur created them. Telling them they have domain over the purviews Nur gave to them, and that they should use and create within those purviews as they see fit.
      -[X] discuss the rules of Hospitality, a set of rules that defines how the gods shall interact with each other and their future creations.
      -[X] ask them if they had any interesting ideas for lesser races.
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    Okay. I've thought of a new plan. It's completely insane. It's based on the principals of our universe while adding a mad twist to it. I'll bring it up later after this turn.
     
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