Space Ninja Summer Camp ( Warframe/Worm )

Taylor should've just knocked Saint unconscious. Can't kill him, but she can give him a good wack on the head. Who knows, if Saint happens to have a few memory problems, no one needs to know that it was Taylor's fault. For all anyone knows, he could've knocked his head against the floor too hard while ranting.

True, but with Danny and Alan being on the link, I think she wants to try and doing things properly rather than give Saint a chance to get off on a police brutality charge. Not to mention that given how annoying he was, I doubt Taylor would stop at breaking his jaw.

Plus, I think Taylor took some grim satisfaction at watching Saint's entire world come crumbling down. And his ranting was somewhat helpful in covering for Dragon. Just ten seconds listening to him would have everyone writing him off as just a brain fried Student who watched The Terminator series one too many times.

Well.... someone watched Black Panther.

Not yet, but I used the idea previously posted.

So, if that was your idea, thanks!

I was the one who made the suggestion. And yeah, I could see Shuri as a Tenno with little change to her character.
 
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"Yeah, Primed warframes are better than the more generic variants. Usually more armor and some other tweaks." I sighed with resignation, "and as to why I didn't know, well, it just feels like I'm in here and that this is my body, even though I now know it's not. It wasn't until I 'woke' up that I realized the truth." I said, as I barely mentioned how I found out what Ordis meant when he called me "Operator".

Hold on. Why didn't Taylor know about the Somatic Link? The rest of the Tenno were in the Reservoir on Lua and when they first woke up, they automatically connected to a stored Warframe and thought that was their body. But Taylor knew from the start. Surely she remembered getting into the Somatic Link the first time after she was infected/infused with the technocyte virus?
 
Ya.. Tayno wouldn't have been parts of the dream stuff. Tho im sure she helped others deal with the after effects.

All so you might be thinking on her regeneration wrong. Stoping Cells from degrading doesn't prevent a body from reaching maturity. It just means there's no down hill. Taylor might have had some more years of growing before most of her body is replaced by the void engery.
 
Ya.. Tayno wouldn't have been parts of the dream stuff. Tho im sure she helped others deal with the after effects.

All so you might be thinking on her regeneration wrong. Stoping Cells from degrading doesn't prevent a body from reaching maturity. It just means there's no down hill. Taylor might have had some more years of growing before most of her body is replaced by the void engery.
Maybe it's 'sorta-temporally-locked-kinda-not-locked' Void fuckery that's keeping her body in a sort of pseudo stasis but still capable of action?

By Pseudo stasis I mean it will do its best to revert to the original uninjured and young state of the tenno?
 
Decreasing the zoom level brought the Moon into the display and completely decreasing the zoom showed the entire solar system and the planets currently location in their orbit around the Sun. Unlike the Origin System, it did not show the current locations of my clan's dojo, the Kuva Fortress, the Orokin Derelict, the Void or any of the relay stations I was familiar with because logically, those did not exist in this universe.

Mars did have something though...

...A small note denoting a series of buried structures. With an unfamiliar signature emanating from Pluto's moon Charon...


I've been playing too much Mass Effect :D
 
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Just looked at the new chapter again. Taylor is now onto the entitirs.

Also, who thinks Cauldron and the Quills would be an epic team up?
 
:o UNHOLY FKING FKER FK'A'FK OF A FK ON A FKCYCLE! THIS 'FIC CHAPTER IS AS LONG AS A BOOK CHAPTER OR A SHORT 'FIC ARC!

Also I know it's completely In Character and apart of the Story but I still want to punch Danny from him wanting to try as hard as possible to put Taylor in danger by not only dragging her real body back to the Sh!thole that is Bet but to the Sh!thole of the Sh!thole called Brockton Bay.
He finds out Taylor is safely as far away from Earth as possible that not even the Endbringers could potentially reach her? Try to get her to bring her real body into range where everything on Earth can kill her just to make himself feel better! Again, I know it's In Character that he keeps sounding like he only keeps Taylor around to make himself feel better but I can still feel the need to get him traumatized by the self destructive goal of putting that which he desires into harm's way just because, in his limited view, that's somehow making them safe because it makes him feel better.
 
I am uncomfortable with your portrayal of Taylor. She behaves like a 10-years old ball-of-stupid playing around with her advanced weapons and not even trying to understand what is happening around her (or, more simply put, a 10-years old). It is even more disturbing when you reminds us that she is actually 30-years old and regarded as an authority figure by her clan ...

So I want to ask if that is the Warframe background. Is it part of the scenario that the players are completely locked as children ?
 
I am uncomfortable with your portrayal of Taylor. She behaves like a 10-years old ball-of-stupid playing around with her advanced weapons and not even trying to understand what is happening around her (or, more simply put, a 10-years old). It is even more disturbing when you reminds us that she is actually 30-years old and regarded as an authority figure by her clan ...

So I want to ask if that is the Warframe background. Is it part of the scenario that the players are completely locked as children ?

Hmmm, while the short answer is yes, the why takes a bit longer to explain.

Except that i am on my phone. Hopefully, someone else can do it.
 
I am uncomfortable with your portrayal of Taylor. She behaves like a 10-years old ball-of-stupid ..<snip>. Is it part of the scenario that the players are completely locked as children ?

"Tenno" was probably not accidental.

Edit: Could even think of them as space "lost boys".
 
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I am uncomfortable with your portrayal of Taylor. She behaves like a 10-years old ball-of-stupid playing around with her advanced weapons and not even trying to understand what is happening around her (or, more simply put, a 10-years old). It is even more disturbing when you reminds us that she is actually 30-years old and regarded as an authority figure by her clan ...

So I want to ask if that is the Warframe background. Is it part of the scenario that the players are completely locked as children ?


"Tenno" was probably not accidental.

Edit: Could even think of them as space "lost boys".

Pretty much as everyone had said. Here is the more detailed explnation:

The Tenno, the player character and your fellow space ninjas are in fact children. During the Orokin Empire era a colony ship, the Zariman Ten-Zero was lost in the Void. After prolonged exposure to the otherworldy nature of the Void, the adults all went insane sabotoging systems and hunting down other survivors. But the children were changed, gaining powers while retaining their minds. Eventually they were forced to defend theselves against their insane parents with lethal force.

When they were found by the Orokin, they originally though about executing the survivors. But prehaps the one decent one, Margullis, found an alternative. Between use of a new technology known as Transferrence and installing memory blocks to repress the events of the Zariman Ten-Zero, the newly dubbed Tenno can control their powers by entering into a dream state and projecting their minds into a surrogate, namely a Technocyte golum that would become the basis of the Warframes.

I can include more, namely the Old War, the Tenno Revolt and the full nature of the Second Dream, but thoses are best experienced in game.
 
I'm not entirely happy with the map description. It's far too heavy on game mechanics.

Maybe describe it as lacking active mission alerts, space traffic, intelligence reports and markers for strategic locations. Because the Tenno wouldn't be limited by locations on the map. But those locations are generally enemy strongpoints that need to get smacked around a bit.

Similarly, there isn't one Orokin Derelict. There are many of them. Change it to 'known Orokin Derelicts' and it works.

The Void is better described as a separate panel. It's not some weird ass cloud on the left side of the map. It's another dimension and the nodes are known and accessible Orokin Towers.


Others already mentioned the issues with the somatic link. Taylor would know that the Warframe is remotely operated. When she first met her clan you had one of them use transference to talk face to face to a scared Taylor. Just have Taylor appear a bit later after all of that happened.
 
So, what about Canary?
Since I am not a lawyer and don't watch lawyer shows on TV, she will probably be handled off-screen by Uncle Alan when he volunteers to represent her pro-bono.

Dragon will probably help by disabling and not letting her jailers use the collar/gag she was forced to develop.

I did read a fanfic awhile ago where Quinn Cale (or whoever Skitter's lawyer was) where he took over Canary's case. The scene where he went in to speak with his client was pretty good.

Hold on. Why didn't Taylor know about the Somatic Link? The rest of the Tenno were in the Reservoir on Lua and when they first woke up, they automatically connected to a stored Warframe and thought that was their body. But Taylor knew from the start. Surely she remembered getting into the Somatic Link the first time after she was infected/infused with the technocyte virus?
It sounds like I will need to write a flashback, but my thoughts on it are this:
When she was rescued and taken from the Void, like the Tenno children, her powers began to become unstable and Taylor was in some pain.
Lotus asked to have her brought to her.
Lotus "treated" Taylor by infecting her with the t-cyte virus ( I know canon is kinda vague on this, but I'm going to assume that the Tenno have the technocyte virus in them )
The treatment caused Taylor more pain and she was floating in and out of consciousness.
Taylor kind of remembers being placed into a Somatic Link chamber/chair, but it's hazy.
Becca volunteer her old Mag warframe for Taylor to use.
When Taylor regained consciousness, she was operating the Mag warframe and was led to believe that she was inside the warframe and needed to stay inside as a safety measure.
It took her a few years to learn about Transcendence and then Transference. In game it's MR3, I think, which I'm kind of thinking is close to the number of years it would take Taylor to advance in her Tenno training.

So, kind of like canon Tenno, but with a twist since she wasn't woken from centuries of cryosleep by Cpt Vor and didn't remember who she was.

Ya.. Tayno wouldn't have been parts of the dream stuff. Tho im sure she helped others deal with the after effects.

All so you might be thinking on her regeneration wrong. Stoping Cells from degrading doesn't prevent a body from reaching maturity. It just means there's no down hill. Taylor might have had some more years of growing before most of her body is replaced by the void engery.
I'm going more on how the Tenno currently appear in game and using that as my reasoning for why they ( and Taylor ) have not aged in all the years, decades, centuries.

Science, Orokin magic and/or t-cyte virus trickery, take your pick?
 
So I want to ask if that is the Warframe background. Is it part of the scenario that the players are completely locked as children ?

Since several people have answered this already I will be brief. I have been wanting an excuse to post these links anyway...

Here are two links to some Warframe Lore playlists. I am particularly fond of the first one. I strongly recommend it. Obviously these links come with a major spoiler warning for the lore and background for Warframe. Also while older and far from complete, they are a good basic intro for the background of the setting.

My personal favorite:D
Pre-Awakening History and Lore Guide

This one is nice too.
Warframe (Story)
 
Since I am not a lawyer and don't watch lawyer shows on TV, she will probably be handled off-screen by Uncle Alan when he volunteers to represent her pro-bono.

Dragon will probably help by disabling and not letting her jailers use the collar/gag she was forced to develop.

I did read a fanfic awhile ago where Quinn Cale (or whoever Skitter's lawyer was) where he took over Canary's case. The scene where he went in to speak with his client was pretty good.


It sounds like I will need to write a flashback, but my thoughts on it are this:
When she was rescued and taken from the Void, like the Tenno children, her powers began to become unstable and Taylor was in some pain.
Lotus asked to have her brought to her.
Lotus "treated" Taylor by infecting her with the t-cyte virus ( I know canon is kinda vague on this, but I'm going to assume that the Tenno have the technocyte virus in them )
The treatment caused Taylor more pain and she was floating in and out of consciousness.
Taylor kind of remembers being placed into a Somatic Link chamber/chair, but it's hazy.
Becca volunteer her old Mag warframe for Taylor to use.
When Taylor regained consciousness, she was operating the Mag warframe and was led to believe that she was inside the warframe and needed to stay inside as a safety measure.
It took her a few years to learn about Transcendence and then Transference. In game it's MR3, I think, which I'm kind of thinking is close to the number of years it would take Taylor to advance in her Tenno training.

So, kind of like canon Tenno, but with a twist since she wasn't woken from centuries of cryosleep by Cpt Vor and didn't remember who she was.


I'm going more on how the Tenno currently appear in game and using that as my reasoning for why they ( and Taylor ) have not aged in all the years, decades, centuries.

Science, Orokin magic and/or t-cyte virus trickery, take your pick?
Maybe it's 'sorta-temporally-locked-kinda-not-locked' Void fuckery that's keeping her body in a sort of pseudo stasis but still capable of action?

By Pseudo stasis I mean it will do its best to revert to the original uninjured and young state of the tenno?
See above but include technocyte for more fuckery and insurance of long term survival.

Not to mention orokin tech made folks live a long ass amount of centuries.
 
I am starting to doubt I just read 16k words. They just went by so fast...

I am kind of hoping that Taylor decides to stay by the end of the month. Maybe she'll find... Llllllllovve?
 
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