Update 4
Baughn
Healing-type writer
- Location
- Dublin
You get up, walking slowly towards the kitchen. The light's out, but that's not unusual. You turn your flashlight on, gently opening the door.
Milk. Bread. Butter. Bacon.
Your sister loves bread, especially peanut-butter and jelly sandwiches. In fact...
You look at the bread, spotting a hint of blue in the otherwise faded pink coloring of the bread. You put it back, taking out the milk instead. That's gone bad long ago. You close the door, sighing.
You hear sobs from the other room.
You run inside, finding your sister curled up in bed. She's sobbing quietly, but you know her well enough to hear even the quietest whimpers. You sit down next to her, wrapping your arms around her.
"What's wrong?" you ask.
"I thought you were gone," she whimpers. "I woke up and you were gone and I thought you left without saying goodbye..."
This is crazy. She's acting... well, strange is an understatement. Just half a day ago she was acting like you were some sort of criminal, and now...
Now, she's acting like your best friend again. Which you are, of course, but...
She's acting very strange.
You hear a thump from downstairs.
"What was that?" Rose asks.
"I heard someone use the refrigerator earlier," you say. "Wasn't that you?"
"No."
You linger in silence for a moment, before the refrigerator once more. Clunk. Clunk clunk. The noise is getting louder, closer. You feel your heartbeat rise.
"What's going on?" Rose asks.
"Stay here," you tell her.
You creep towards the staircase, peering down. The door to the kitchen is open. You slowly move downwards, keeping your eyes on the room. You see the fridge, its door standing open. You breathe out in relief, before you notice the floor.
Somehow, the stone tile floor has become cracked and broken. It's dry and parched, as if someone has been neglecting to water the floor for months. The fridge stands unmoving in the corner, a cobweb stretching out to it from the doorway. You stare at it in confusion, before the light bulb pops out of the socket and falls against the wall, shattering. You find yourself surrounded by darkness.
"What did you do to my floor?" a voice hisses from the kitchen.
You whirl around, finding a hideous creature standing before you. It's skeletal, practically skin and bone, its face a sunken mess of wrinkles. Its eyes are hollow, its nose little more than two slits. It wears a tattered, blood-stained apron. The creature brandishes a knife, its handle shaped like a human skull, the blade stained with blood.
"I came home and found you in my house," the creature hisses. "Who the hell are you?"
This can't be happening. This is a nightmare. Any moment now you'll wake up and laugh at how real this illusion was.
"I asked you a question," the creature says, it's voice deadly serious. "Who. The hell. Are you?"
This is no illusion. This is real. This is really happening.
"You're not real," you say, trying to keep calm. "You're not real. I'm dreaming. I'm going to wake up in a second."
"A lot of people used that line," the creature says. "Never works. Now, tell me who you are!"
= = =
I didn't get through all the votes this time, but I felt you should probably get a chance for some input at this point.
This event actually illustrates a crucial point: Barring concerted effort, ideally in the form of pins, the genre will drift over time as it tries to take its cues solely from the last few hundred words of text. I'm pretty sure we're now well into 'horror', so have fun with that.
The next update will be tomorrow.
Milk. Bread. Butter. Bacon.
Your sister loves bread, especially peanut-butter and jelly sandwiches. In fact...
You look at the bread, spotting a hint of blue in the otherwise faded pink coloring of the bread. You put it back, taking out the milk instead. That's gone bad long ago. You close the door, sighing.
You hear sobs from the other room.
You run inside, finding your sister curled up in bed. She's sobbing quietly, but you know her well enough to hear even the quietest whimpers. You sit down next to her, wrapping your arms around her.
"What's wrong?" you ask.
"I thought you were gone," she whimpers. "I woke up and you were gone and I thought you left without saying goodbye..."
This is crazy. She's acting... well, strange is an understatement. Just half a day ago she was acting like you were some sort of criminal, and now...
Now, she's acting like your best friend again. Which you are, of course, but...
She's acting very strange.
You hear a thump from downstairs.
"What was that?" Rose asks.
"I heard someone use the refrigerator earlier," you say. "Wasn't that you?"
"No."
You linger in silence for a moment, before the refrigerator once more. Clunk. Clunk clunk. The noise is getting louder, closer. You feel your heartbeat rise.
"What's going on?" Rose asks.
"Stay here," you tell her.
You creep towards the staircase, peering down. The door to the kitchen is open. You slowly move downwards, keeping your eyes on the room. You see the fridge, its door standing open. You breathe out in relief, before you notice the floor.
Somehow, the stone tile floor has become cracked and broken. It's dry and parched, as if someone has been neglecting to water the floor for months. The fridge stands unmoving in the corner, a cobweb stretching out to it from the doorway. You stare at it in confusion, before the light bulb pops out of the socket and falls against the wall, shattering. You find yourself surrounded by darkness.
"What did you do to my floor?" a voice hisses from the kitchen.
You whirl around, finding a hideous creature standing before you. It's skeletal, practically skin and bone, its face a sunken mess of wrinkles. Its eyes are hollow, its nose little more than two slits. It wears a tattered, blood-stained apron. The creature brandishes a knife, its handle shaped like a human skull, the blade stained with blood.
"I came home and found you in my house," the creature hisses. "Who the hell are you?"
This can't be happening. This is a nightmare. Any moment now you'll wake up and laugh at how real this illusion was.
"I asked you a question," the creature says, it's voice deadly serious. "Who. The hell. Are you?"
This is no illusion. This is real. This is really happening.
"You're not real," you say, trying to keep calm. "You're not real. I'm dreaming. I'm going to wake up in a second."
"A lot of people used that line," the creature says. "Never works. Now, tell me who you are!"
= = =
I didn't get through all the votes this time, but I felt you should probably get a chance for some input at this point.
This event actually illustrates a crucial point: Barring concerted effort, ideally in the form of pins, the genre will drift over time as it tries to take its cues solely from the last few hundred words of text. I'm pretty sure we're now well into 'horror', so have fun with that.
The next update will be tomorrow.
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