Which Lili is your favourite?

  • Angry Lili

    Votes: 13 8.2%
  • Bully Lili

    Votes: 25 15.7%
  • Benevolent Lili

    Votes: 29 18.2%
  • Commander Lili

    Votes: 24 15.1%
  • Big Sis Lili

    Votes: 49 30.8%
  • Shy Lili

    Votes: 18 11.3%
  • Smug Lili

    Votes: 58 36.5%
  • Sadist Lili

    Votes: 29 18.2%
  • Professional Lili

    Votes: 26 16.4%
  • Villainess Lili

    Votes: 37 23.3%
  • Suave Lili

    Votes: 28 17.6%

  • Total voters
    159
And Rock Lee did have a point that Lili was going too far.
Honestly, I completely disagree. Lee was doing what Lee does in canon, shoving himself into a situation he has no knowledge of or right to intrude on, at least partially because he likes Sakura. He was practically ignoring the very reasonable and accurate explanation being given to him, refusing to even consider it because Sakura was getting her ass handed to her.

He might have had at least one leg to stand on, if not for the fact that Sakura blatantly flaunted the rules of the engagement by trying to blow her opponent to pieces. Even after she was soundly defeated, instead of admitting it and actually listening to what she was being told she continued to act like an obstinate brat. She literally got pissy because Lili called Sasuke middling at something, and still tried to fight and talk back while being held by the throat. She could have stopped it at literally any time just by admitting defeat, but instead she was too focused on "this bitch insulted me and more importantly Sasuke-kun, I need to teach her a lesson", outright ignoring the fact that she knew she was completely and utterly outclassed.

All that said, Naruto probably will at least talk to Lili about it, but while she was definitely harsh, she wasn't in the wrong. Certainly not enough to need to be "punched into a better person". It also bears reminding that Kakashi was watching the entire time, and would have stepped in if she had really gone too far, as shown by him breaking it up when Sasuke opens his idiot mouth and almost gets himself killed.
 
He ends up giving me one of his silly grins. "Yeah, definitely. Hey, once I start going on missions and stuff...we can go on a date or something, yeah?"

"Hm. Probably not. It wouldn't work out."

He blinks. "Eh?"

"I'll explain it one day. I promise."


Rather sure if you ever get around to that, you'll end up on a date with a cute blond naruko...


Editing: edited this so I don't double post. But holy shit chapter 20 was the lamest thing I have ever read. And don't you dare try to pass that off as edgey that was hot topic level's of fake shit bad. I have no problems with the killing, as anyone attacking a ninja group have it coming. Or even her going on a slaughter-fest or wracking up a kill count. But the lines, just Ewwww your a much better writer than that.

It's like you decided what's the cheesiest lame lines I can pack into this bit, Starting with hinita and right into that fight. They stopped acting like you normally had them and started like they reading lines with no acting skill.
 
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I think this is the part where if anyone says I've bent things a bit too much, I won't disagree. As far as Sakura is concerned, there was definitely panic and big brain plays involved, and adrenaline going. She also screwed up the trap placement so.

But holy shit chapter 20 was the lamest thing I have ever read.
Bold claim :V
But sure, I'll take that commentary into account like everything else. Thanks.
 
Revisions
Scarlet Justice - ep. 26
"Revisions"
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I walk home, feeling bitter and upset.

"..."

I really hate to admit it, even a little...but there was something to what Lee said. I was frustrated, and I was using the fight as a bit of an excuse to pay Sakura back. But it wasn't just for fun...I was honestly trying to get her to learn something.

It all turned into a mess.

As I reach the stairs leading up to my apartment, I see that Hina is sitting at the bottom. She's staring out into the world, thinking of something. I know that she's been focused on training lately...

"Oh, Lili. I was...waiting for you."

"Hina. Is everything okay?" I ask.

"I'm fine. I just...wanted to see you. Um...do you think we could go somewhere together? For a while?"

"..." I'm not too sure. I feel tired and like I don't want to do much. But...I want to be there for her, even if I'm not at my best. This time, a compromise should work. "Come upstairs with me."

"Ah...?"

"Come on," I say, taking her hand in mine. We go up the stairs and I unlock the front door before opening it. The lights were off just now, so that means we're alone. "Luna isn't home yet, which means Midori-nee isn't here either. We have the place to ourselves for now."

"Oh...okay."

"Want something to eat? Some milk?"

"Milk is fine..."

I nod and grab a cold bottle from the fridge, along with a packet of sweet biscuits just in case. "Sorry. I'm going to take a shower...you'll be okay while I'm gone, right?"

"Y-yeah. Take your time..."

"Okay, thank you." I head to the bathroom, get undressed quickly, and turn on the water. It's ice cold to start, but refreshing all the way through. I needed this, more than I realized. I simply stand where I am and let the water fall over me for a while, before starting to wash thoroughly. Some of the stress from earlier is disappearing, and I feel much better as I turn off the faucet. After making sure my clothing is put away, I put on a bathrobe and head out to check on Hina.

The biscuits are on the table, but the milk is gone...I see that the door to my room is open. Heading in, I see Hina with the milk bottle in her hands, staring at the bookshelf that consumes the far wall of my room.

"That's where I keep all of my stuff," I say, making her jump a bit. "Don't mind me."

"You didn't seem yourself earlier," I hear her say from behind me. I rub moisturizer into my skin and sort through my underwear drawer before finding what I wanted.

"I had a fight with Sakura earlier. It didn't go well."

"Didn't...go well?" she asks, confused. I see her head turn towards me before she pulls it back, blushing. "Did you...lose to her?"

"I beat her soundly. It's just that some child named Rock Lee wanted to play as a knight, and then Sasuke was there...I feel like I tried to do the right thing, only to have everything tumble down again. It felt like I was back at the Academy."

"I'm sorry..."

"Thank you, Hina. I'm simply tired today...but please, don't take it the wrong way. Whatever you need, I'm here for you," I say as I finish getting dressed. A light shirt and bottoms will work for the evening. I have no plans to head out after this.

"Yes. I'm thankful for that, Lili...um, why did you two fight? She's not...on our level, I mean."

"I know. It was her request. Everything that happened was really her fault, from bringing people along that didn't need to be there, to being stubborn and obstinate, to...just a lot of things."

"I see...I'm sorry again that it didn't go so well. I don't think Sakura is a bad person, either..."

"I feel the same," I say as I stand beside her. "But that doesn't mean I have to like her."

"It doesn't, no. What I see with her...I think, based on her relationship with Ino, she's the type of person that will get sucked in. To more easily cope, I mean. The type of person who thinks that if they work hard enough and apply knowledge, they can fix a situation...or a person." Hina takes a sip of her milk. "It's noble, I think...that sort of thing. Certainly better than being cowardly like I was."

"Her family clearly treated her better," I point out.

"Yes, but...still. It's something good in her, but it's also a weakness. Rather than...the type of person who has enough will to pour our love freely, like you and your elder sister can...she will use herself as a means of healing. It presents a danger if...if that person ends up using her until there's nothing left."

"Referring to Sasuke, then."

She nods. "Yes. I don't think he is purposely hurting her. From the last mission, he looks different. But he is also fearful...somewhat of you. It's tragic, I think. This sort of thing that is nobody's fault, but still hurts so badly. And even if it isn't anyone's fault to start with, this harmful cycle is continuing because he wills it. I...won't abandon you out of compassion for someone else," she says as she looks at me. "I love you too much for that. And you have given me too much for that."

"Thank you, Hina. I love you, too."

We give each other a smile before she returns her attention to the bookshelf. "It's really big, Lili. There are...sections, I can see. Is that right?"

"Yes. Furthest right is where I keep my manga collections. Left of that are the videogames. Left of that is the light novels, and the left of that is the section with long form novels. I have non-fiction in its own section next to it, and then all of the academic material and shinobi stuff."

"That's the biggest section. You really do take it seriously..."

"There's an art to the things I like to do, and much to read so that I can properly experiment."

"Ah." Her eyes fall on a small section furthest left. It's locked and has a door over it. "What's...over there? Furthest left?"

"That's secret," I say. "There are...things inappropriate for little girls in there."

"I-is it...lewd?"

"Not necessarily, though that might be part of it. Secret...personal things," I say quietly. "Dark things. Things I want to keep hidden away for a while, even from my loved ones." I run a hand through my hair. "Not even Luna knows what's inside, and she hasn't asked."

"I...I see. I understand, Lili. I'm sorry if I was too pushy."

"No, no...it's fine, Hina. You were curious. It's natural to want to know. Perhaps one day, I'll show you everything in there..."

"I can wait until then."

"Good." I smirk. "Besides, all the lewd stuff is in plain sight anyways."

"A-ah?" Hina fumbles her bottle a bit and I laugh softly. "Lili...you really are, sometimes..." She frowns and pouts at me a bit. "I don't really understand it. You're a bit..."

"What? Perverted?"

"Maybe that's not the exact word I want to use..."

I shrug and steal a sip of her milk. "My stepmother flaunts her body all the time, and she's probably sleeping with the help. Luna is in a relationship with Midori-nee, and they both have pretty great bodies. I don't know. It seems inevitable that I'll get worse from here on, with those sorts of influences."

"That doesn't have to be the case...I think."

"I think it's too late for me." I pat Hina on the head. "You can remain pure, though. I just hope I'm not too much for you to deal with."

She smiles. "Well, it's...a little racy at times, but I don't mind. I'll always love you for who you are, Lili."

"I'm happy to hear that. So...you wanted us to go out earlier, and I decided to pull you up here instead. What did you want to do, Hina?"

"I really wanted to talk...more than anything. And ask something of you."

I take a seat on my bed and motion for her to follow. She sits next to me and takes a breath in.

"So, what is it you need?" I ask.

"I...I know that you have your own things to take care of. But I was...wondering if you would...h-help me with training."

"Help?" I make a face. "Hina...your specialty is taijutsu, and you make use of a bloodline limit. Not only do I not have a Byakugan, taijutsu is one of my weakest areas. No matter how bad you think you might be, I'm worse."

She looks at me with surprise. "Weakest? But...you move so gracefully and you're so quick, and..."

"I offset that weakness with my speed and chakra control, yes. Which is something that Sakura also did well earlier today. Otherwise...I'm not very good in a straight fight. If we went head to head with taijutsu, you could beat me as you are now."

"I don't..." She shakes her head. "E-even if that is true...I...want you by my side..."

"Listen, I don't think I would be much help-"

"I just think...I think that if you were nearby, I would have some extra confidence!" she suddenly says. "Ah...I meant...I just meant that..." She hangs her head. "Sorry. I..."

I wonder what it is I'm doing. I said that I would help her, didn't I? I said that I would listen, and...did I suddenly lose confidence after things slipped out of my hands earlier today?

I need to focus. Believe in myself, like I said I would. Maybe I'm not good enough to help directly with taijutsu, but I can still do something. I can still help my sister grow. It will cut into the time I have to learn the chakra mode...but Hina has shown me resolve. With that, and such a cute face, how can I possibly turn her away? No, I'm going to find a way. I can be honest with her, and do it for sure.

"Hina, I'm sorry. I don't think I can help you all the way with your training."

"I see...y-you're probably busy with something important..."

I nod. "I'm learning a new jutsu. I'll have to do it on my own, and it'll be tough."

Hina puts her hand on top of mine and nods. "Please...do your best, Lili. I'll be thinking of you."

"Don't talk like that. I'm not abandoning you, Hina. We're going to work together, and help you grow. Just like you wanted. I've been watching you the past few weeks, and I know that your family has left you to work on your own. So we're going to start a new journey together. Encouraging one another as sisters."

"Yes...that sounds wonderful," she says with a smile. "We...we can start with exercise. Together in the mornings before we meet with Kurenai-sensei and Shino. Would...that work?"

"I'm used to getting up early by now. That would be fine."

"Good...that much will make me happy. As long as I can spend time with you, I can work hard. I want to make you proud."

"Your specialized training will be more effective without me," I say. "For that, you need to look inside of yourself. But...Midori-nee taught me a bunch of things that I do on my own already. We can train your footwork. It connects to what you've learned as a Hyuuga and should help. Also, extra things to do with flexibility, and..."

We spend a while talking about possibilities. Hina talks to me about her fighting style and I adjust each idea I get for her sake. The beginnings of a training schedule are in place.

"Anything else that you can think of is fine with me. Lili, thank you."

"It's no trouble. We can start tomorrow. Let's do laps across the village."

"Yes. I'll be ready, then." She smiles and gives my hand a squeeze. I smile and squeeze right back.

---

The next morning is where it all begins.

Hina's stamina is a bit on the lower side. I don't get much out of the run this time, but she's encouraged to go further with my presence. The time at the Academy comes back to me, with our first partnership. That run through the obstacle course which turned into our friendship.

I really do need to stop coming down on myself. I can be useful to her, just like this. I always have been. Now it's time to help her grow, and become strong like I am. Midori didn't just love me, she trained me and helped shape me. It's my turn to do the same.

Kurenai moves around the D-Rank missions that we're still doing so that they're occurring daily, and are more spread out. This means that we have something every day of the week, but that's far from bad because it leaves more time to train as a result. I can work on the chakra mode every day before taking time off.

"Routine and endurance," Kurenai says before each mission. A test, meant to make us stronger. Managing time and resources, growing as people.

Shino's bug constructs are improving. He seems friendlier now that we've spent so much time together. Definitely taking more pride in the team.

We finish working on substitutions during the week, and he takes time out to talk to me.

"Hinata is growing a bit, I noticed."

"Oh?"

"She seems to be finding herself. Improving, I would say."

"She is," I say to him. "Please watch over her...she does push herself too far sometimes. Her desire is to escape her family's shadow."

"I see. That's...a strong want." He focuses on me. "You're working on your own technique in the meantime."

"I am. Unfortunately, I can't show you the results just yet."

He nods and adjusts his glasses. "Understood. For the sake of my comrades, I'll have to evolve as well..."

I smile and take a sip of water. Shino's a funny sort of guy, but reliable. I'm glad he's with us.

Weeks start to pass. Kurenai throws wrenches into the routine to keep our minds active. I continue running with Hina in the mornings, and she is becoming stronger with each passing way. When she exhales, there is weight on her breaths. She can keep pace as I increase my speed a bit each week. We share a sort of serenity during our runs, where it seems like there's nobody else in the world around us. Our stretches improve her flexibility, too.

All of that hard work has made her first attacking step much faster than before. And to a Hyuuga, that's quite a big deal. Kurenai says as much during our observations, where Hina practices her Gentle Fist forms.

"That's really fast. Even for their clan."

"Really, now."

"Neji is...definitely an outlier, especially for a Branch House kid. A real genius like you. Hinata has really changed." She smiles at me. "Lift your head a little, okay? You've done a better job than even I could."

"Kurenai. Don't fill my head with nonsense."

"Oh, shut up."

"Your training is important, too." I watch Hina move gracefully across the field, breathing in and out in time with her attacks. "She's determined on all fronts. I might be a good motivator, but I'm not the best teacher."

"You don't need to be. You just need to be Lili right now. The rest will come later."

"And if it doesn't?" I ask.

She shrugs. "You'll be like Kakashi. That's a compliment, by the way."

I think of him and his orange book. Well...she's not wrong to call it a compliment. If I can grow up with that level of restraint, I'll be happy.

"Thank you, Kurenai."

"Yeah. Lili...I'm here if you need anything. On and off the field. Life isn't easy, and I know how much a good adult can change your world."

"That's true. I'll be sure to reach out, nee-san."

"...yeah."

Hina completes her drills, and bows towards the three of us. We clap for her, and she gives us a beautiful smile.

Something that I will always fight for.

---

"Lilith."

It's today while shopping for for frozen treats that I hear her call to me. Today is an off day for Team Eight, and it's warm out. I want to have a day out with Luna and treat her a little bit, as I usually do. She's surprised me in the same way, though our schedules don't always line up properly. It's still nice to do with the limited time that we get.

"Sakura." She's wearing her regular outfit, which means it must have been a work day for her and the others.

"I wanted to talk."

"About?"

"The other day. What you said. What I said."

I move away from the frozen dessert section and into a more open area, then gesture for her to speak. I might as well entertain her attempt at conversation.

"I didn't want Lee to interrupt. I didn't want any of what happened to happen."

"But you created the conditions. Right?"

"...I did. I want to apologize for that. But at the same time...at the same time, you really went too far. Sasuke...Sasuke risked his life for us when we went to Wave Country. I thought...I really thought he died. And Naruto did, too. I don't think of them as bad people, especially Naruto. I just..."

"Slow down. Gather your thoughts," I instruct. She nods and takes some more time to think.

"Sorry."

"It's fine. Continue," I say patiently.

"Sasuke...you should give him another chance. Try to be nicer to him...please, hear me out when I say this."

"You have the floor," I say. "Continue."

"He's not...the person you think he is. He's not violent or bad or anything like that, he's just...alone. And scared, just a bit. Like I said before, he really did his best at all times to protect us. That's why I got so mad when you bad mouthed him, and said all of those things about him. Maybe I'm not as good as you, and maybe I am weak, but Sasuke...he deserves better. I thought that you knowing that might...change some things."

"..." I look at Sakura, processing what's she said. It's all sincere, but...nonsense to me. I don't care. I don't feel anything. Sasuke being hurt, almost dying...experiencing what I did, and still choosing to act that way the other day. That makes it even worse. Why would she...?

She's the type of person to get...sucked in.

Hina's words come back to me. I think I understand...this is how she's expressing her love. Trying to fix someone wounded with the strength of her support. Figuring that this is the best she can do, even if that might not truly be the case. Kakashi has been looking at this, too. It's a hard web to untangle. I feel sorry for her.

I don't feel anything other than that.

"What does he say about this?"

"Huh...?"

"Sasuke. What has he told you about our relationship?" I ask.

"..." She looks towards the ground. "He's...he hasn't..."

"You don't need to say anything. I understand. Let me...tell you what I said to him, the day I rejected his fake apology." I reach past her and open the door, grabbing a bucket of ice cream. "I told him that the only way he could pay me penance is by spilling his blood at my feet. Do you understand why I said something like that?"

"It..." She gathers herself and raises her head. "It was...an accident."

I stare at her for a moment, making her wonder what I'm actually feeling. With a finger, I push the freezer door closed, and glance at the label to make sure I have the right product.

"Yes. Of course it was. Take care, Sakura."

"Lilith-"

"I really should be going. And you should go too. Please understand," I say clearly. "Until the next, Sakura."

She nods and backs down, then turns and walks away. I head to the counter, pay for my ice cream, and head home.

"..."

I wonder how Naruto is doing. He should appreciate these sorts of outings...I'll make more time for him on my schedule.
 
Ascend
Scarlet Justice - ep. 27
"Ascend"
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As time passes, I feel my speed rising.

I can string together seals a bit faster for all of my jutsu. My ability in dealing with illusions has improved. And of course, I have better movement speed. These all happen to be areas affected by the chakra mode that I'm training for, so my regular training is especially fruitful recently. There's less time spent resting and I can leave Hinata to her own work at least some of the time. Because of that, I can work a bit harder on the new technique. It's working out well.

Some more downtime, and I decide to pay someone I know a visit. It's been a long while...

I reach the Academy complex and walk towards the schoolhouse. Like a trip through my memories, almost.

"I guess you wanted to relive those old days, then."

"I might have," I say to the man in front of me. "It's good to see you again, Iruka-sensei."

"Same to you."

"Can you spare a moment for a former student?"

"Always," he says with a smile. "Drinks are on me."

"Appreciated."

We sit together in the cafeteria. He has his coffee, and I have a cool bottle of milk. There's nobody else in at the moment, which makes for a relaxing sort of atmosphere.

"Sorry that I wasn't there when you got back from your first mission."

"It's alright," I say to him from across the table.

"How have you been doing otherwise?"

"Very well. Hina and Shino are great teammates, and Kurenai has been taking very good care of us. A proper schedule and everything, enough time for us to train and rest. She's taking her work seriously, while not being as uptight as expected."

"Asuma has been showing her the ropes, I think. They've been good friends for a while. And we used to talk about promotions and possibly becoming instructors. Kurenai has always been good about work, level-headed, and really steady when push comes to shove. Of course," he says with a smile, "having a genius on her team would be relaxing, you know?"

"I see."

We sit in silence for a few moments. It's possible we're thinking of the same thing, so...I should get on with it.

"I...you're probably aware of the reports from my first outing," I say.

"I had a read, yeah."

"You must have wanted better for me, Iruka-sensei."

"I don't know if that's-"

"It wasn't something noble. We should get that out of the way quickly. It wasn't...just a simple response to danger. It wasn't something good. I accept all of that, and the person I am." I look into his eyes. "I really did enjoy myself."

He nods. "We have different ways of dealing with life on the battlefield. Lord Hokage must have said as much to you."

"He did."

"We all want the ideal for our students. To be strong and skilled, yet at the same time friendly and compassionate. Beacons of light for the village. The Fourth was like that. A person you could firmly call good, who was also firmly on our side. Beloved by all. That's why his death hit so hard, and why so much fury was turned towards Naruto, who became the Nine-Tails' container. One of those things that isn't anyone's fault to start, but spirals out of control. As a community, we should have done better by him from the start. And...the same goes for me."

"You lost...people."

"My parents. They died protecting me in the attack."

Those are heavy scars. It explains a lot...and it explains why I feel this way about him. Naruto became someone he was willing to give his life for. That ideal warrior. He doesn't seem to realize that he's one of them. Perhaps because he's not as strong in battle, but he has the resilience part down, at the least.

"I know the truth, Iruka-sensei."

"The truth?" He blinks.

"Is your back okay? From the Fuma shuriken."

"..." He takes a sip of coffee and sighs. "My back is perfectly fine by now. He told you everything that happened."

"He told me everything that happened. And he told me what he was."

"You accepted him."

"Yes. All of him."

He chuckles lightly. "As you would, Lilith. Without a second thought."

"And you accept me, don't you?"

"I do. I talked to the Hokage, and he...made mention of your attitude towards the whole thing. I was looking for things...detachment, indifference...little sorts of indicators that pop up through the years as an educator. Things that might say this or that person isn't coping well with the stress. I didn't get any of that, so...I left it in Kurenai's hands. Seeing you now just confirms all of it. It's uh..." He smiles nervously. "A little bit scary, though. One of those sorts of, uh, apex predators, in the form of a little girl. I'm guessing your sister and Miss Daidouji...I mean, Luna. They're okay with this?"

"They are."

"Hm. That makes sense, too. The world of the elites has that sort of...animal kingdom thing going on. You know, with the flashy colours and signalling and all that."

"...hm." Thinking about it, it does put a spin on my stepmother's style of dress. Asserting dominance, perhaps? Interesting. She seems to get more complex by the day, that woman. "A compelling argument, sensei."

"Right? But...well, listen. I don't think any less of you, or see you as any...no, that's not entirely true. You are different now."

"How so?" I ask.

"Well...I would say you're very much a woman now. Not legally, of course. But you're all grown up, Lilith. That much is visible."

"That's quite a thing to say, sensei. A woman, now. What does that mean for us?" I ask playfully.

"Nothing that extreme, to be clear."

"Hmph." I pout at him. "So much for that."

"I don't want to know what 'that' is either," he mumbles, taking another sip of coffee. "Though, if you want the mature experience...I guess we can start small."

"What do you propose?"

"Adults call each other by name, right? I wouldn't say we're equals, what with you being so much stronger than me...but it's a good way to start off."

"That means you'll call me Lili from now on."

He smiles. "Right. Lili it is."

"I might still call you sensei from time to time...but Iruka sounds good as well. And since we've reached the moment where we're no longer master and student...where we're just two people, together in the world..."

I place my hands on the table and look up at him.

"This is something entirely serious, Iruka."

He nods and gives me his attention. "Please, go ahead."

"Thank you for everything you've given me. Your guidance, and your kindness. The understanding and gentle nature you showed me, over and over. And for seeing me as a woman, here and now. I will surely protect this village, and all of your dreams."

I smile for him. I hope it's as beautiful as he has been to me.

"Thank you, Iruka. I love you."

---

Time continues to move.

---

Kurenai and I work in one of the village's many weight rooms, all tended to properly with the amount of people that pass through them. It's the same as the mansion back home - the help did work out regularly, for some reason. Perhaps Emi had something to do with it...

"I guess this was a good thing in the end," Kurenai says from beside me. She's spotting as I use the leg press this time.

"What was?" I ask.

"Getting out-hustled by a twelve year old girl. Keeps you humble," she laughs. "Not often I feel like going all out, especially on off days." She wipes at her face with a towel.

"I see. There's never been a sense of competition in these things," I say to her. "Just focus on completing any objectives set."

"A marathon instead of a race."

"Not even that. A light evening run to clear my head."

"A little haughty, no?"

"A little. But it is my way."

"It's no wonder you're this strong."

I grunt before settling into the last set of my repetitions. "You're not a believer in being born talented and rising from there, as many greats did?"

"From one girl to another? Bullshit. That's never the whole story. I can name plenty of people who were born in the so called lower clans, or just clanless outright that rose up the ranks. Faster than people who have been groomed their whole lives, even. Only thing genetics determine is how high your ceiling is, and even that's not something conclusive."

"Lifting your limits, then?"

"Asuma and I were talking about it the other day. It's possible, at least I think so. But you can start off talented and then just squander it, pretty easily too. Then there are kids like you, who come from outside of every shinobi circle and blow all the boys and girls steeped in tradition away. You have to wonder. How many people with even half the stuff you have are out there, just tilling fields or making soup, something like that?"

"I assume you try not to think about it too much." I stop and Kurenai locks the machine in place while I exit. After catching my breath, I find the rack with clean towels and a provided spray bottle.

"Yeah, I don't. It's a little overwhelming at times. For me, at least."

I nod as I disinfect the work area. "We are not designed to worry about everything under heaven and earth."

"Yeah. But a few things here and there, at least."

"We change our worlds, and then our world together."

Kurenai ruminates on that as I wipe my face with a clean towel.

"There's a little cafe nearby, out of the way. The chicken is good," I say to her.

"Feeling like steak today." She rubs her stomach.

"I see. The usual place, then. After our showers."

"Good. See you out front when you're done."

I nod and rest on one of the benches nearby, sipping on water. Today was good.

Still much to do, but it will be done in time.

---

"It's been about a month since I gave you the scroll. Any progress?"

I meet Kakashi at the usual place, which is the training ground where he and his children work. Apparently their teamwork hasn't increased as expected after the Wave Country mission; they're cohesive when they need to be, but have reverted to some of their usual bickering and antics. Individually, they are all improving...some more than others.

Kakashi and I have been doing checks every so often to monitor my progress. Last week, we didn't get to meet. That was coincidentally the same week I made the biggest strides.

Well. I'm ready to show off a little. I roll my neck from side to side and let out a breath. "Shall I show you, Kakashi?"

"That would be nice, yes." He turns another page of his book.

"Oh, Lili! What's going on? How come you're talking with Kakashi-sensei?" Naruto asks as he enters my view.

"I thought you were going with Sasuke and Sakura to eat," Kakashi says.

"Eh...they both blew me off again. They're getting kind of close for some reason...it's weird, ya know? Normally Sasuke would tell her she's annoying and just walk off all surly-like. These days, they just...I dunno, whatever. Kakashi-sensei, you're supposed to be teaching me a technique, and I know you have time now! It's been more than a month!"

"You're not ready. Ask me later," he says while continuing to read.

"Aw! You always say that!"

"And there's a reason for it. Actually..." He closes his book and looks at me, lifting up his headband. The Sharingan in his left eye is already active. Or...ah, I see. It doesn't turn off, does it...

"Eh? Kakashi-sensei, what's-"

"You want to see a cool technique, right?"

"Uh, yeah! Yeah, I do!"

"Good. Then shut up for a moment and watch." He gestures towards me. "Let's see it, Lili."

"As you wish."

"Lili?"

"Be still, Naruto. Watch me work," I say gently to him. He nods and takes a spot beside Kakashi.

I hold my arms at my sides and clench my fists. The chakra flows through me, filling me with warmth. I can feel myself vibrating slightly. This is my control. I have it down...so there's no need to delay things.

And I shift.

A quick twitch of my muscles makes the chakra burst outwards from my body, surrounding it in a blue-white shroud that flows upwards. Arcs of lightning jump across my body and flare up from the chakra shroud itself. I feel...like I'm control of the world around me. I feel good.

"You managed to do it. That's...seriously impressive," Kakashi says.

"W-whoa." Naruto can't find his words.

"..." It wasn't enough to just reach this point. It would never be enough, anyways. "The daughter of heaven saw fit to love me, as someone closer to her than one born with the same blood. And so, I allow you to bear witness to the strength she has gifted to me."

"Lili...?"

I remember now, clearly. I was born Lilith.

But my mother called me...always called me...Lili.

"A flower of heaven." I can hear her voice, even now.

"Hold on," Kakashi says as my chakra builds. "You can't mean..."

I grit my teeth and focus further. I can feel my body being flooded with energy, making my weight shift and my vision blur for a moment. The hair on my skin is standing upright, the arcs of lightning are brightening and lengthening. Energy is rippling outwards to the point of pushing away the grass at my feet.

And then the excess energy explodes outwards, in a shower of lightning and sparks, before settling down around me. Another level...another step closer to the place where I belong.

Kakashi looks at me with awe before gathering himself. "Naruto. I want you to throw a few shuriken from where you're standing."

"Eh?"

"Aim high, too."

"What?! Kakashi-sensei, if I throw from that close, I'll-!"

"Listen. It's perfectly safe. Just do as I say, alright?"

Naruto looks to me, and I give him a reassuring nod. He nods back and takes three shuriken out of his pouch. This form is...actually a bit difficult to hold at the moment, but with time it won't be a problem.

"Here I...go!"

He throws the weapons at me...from this distance, I normally wouldn't be able to dodge, and blocking would be extremely difficult, even if I could react in time. Even if Naruto's throwing speed isn't the fastest, this is deadly territory for most shinobi.

And yet.

Everything is...so slow as I focus. I can dodge easily, and I watch as the shuriken fly by. I can count the points on them leisurely, even as my energy burns away. Letting them fly away would be a waste, though...

"Hm."

I focus further and swipe the shuriken out of the air. One, two, three. They're in my hand and I feel like I've had enough of the chakra mode for today. I have it shut off and the world returns to normal as I stop.

"How...but...the...it's weapon...buh...fast." Naruto waves his arms in the air. "Fast! How! So fast, how did you move so fast?"

"Ah...alright." I hand Naruto his shuriken back and pat him on the shoulder. "So. How did it look, Kakashi?"

"Well..." He rubs his chin. "A bit more work on it would do the trick."

"Work?! More work?! What are you talking about! Kakashi-sensei, didn't you see the way she-"

"Naruto. Relax a moment," I say to him. "Kakashi is right...it does need some more work. I can go further and improve the second stage. And...if I increase my stamina more, that will make things even easier."

"You...can go faster? Than that?" he asks in awe.

"I can. That was just pure foot speed...if I were to use a body flicker in that state, then...mm. Things for later, I suppose. Thank you for supervising my progress, Kakashi. You've been a great help."

He lowers his headband and opens his book again. "I didn't do much of anything aside from give you the scroll. This was all your power, Lili. But see me again if you ever want to learn that other jutsu one day."

"I'll consider it. Perhaps with this in hand...mm. I'll see you boys in a while."

"Nice girl. I guess I understand why you have a crush on her, Naruto," Kakashi says as I leave.

"I...I mean she's...we're...ah, shaddap!"

---

Ino and I run into each other later in the week, after another routine D-Rank mission in the village. She has something on her mind, so we find a tree nearby and climb into it to sit.

"It's about Sakura. I'm sort of worried about her."

"Did something happen?" I wonder if it's about our meeting the other day.

"It's not about you, if you're wondering. Though...it kind of connects to how she handled it." Ino tilts her head back. "She and Sasuke are getting close."

"Jealousy?"

"You'd think. I mean, that's what I assumed myself off the bat." She pulls her head back into position. "But it's not. It's genuine worry, and I dunno where exactly it's coming from. I just have the feeling that they're...not in a good place, and are sort of pushing each other forward in an unhealthy way. You know what I mean?"

"Hina was theorizing on that the other day."

"Hinata? Huh. Well, she's no dummy, but...yeah, that's some insight from her. It was about...um, Sakura sort of trying to fill the gaps in Sasuke's heart, or something like that?"

"Yes. Using herself as a method of healing."

"Right. I'm...worried about things like that. Sasuke is a lot. I mean, he's handsome and junk, but the deeper I look, the more comes up. I don't want Sakura to hurt herself. As opposed to Sasuke hurting her, I mean. He cares a lot, but he's still just a...scared kid at the end of the day."

"So I've heard."

"It's hard to believe from your end...which is why I'm confused there, too. Why does he...go after you like that? You never spent that much time together at the Academy, you never hurt him from all we've seen, so...is it some kind of trigger, or a psychosis? I wish I knew. It's hard to do all of this analysis without making excuses over and over..."

"I suppose. Ino...I have my own bias, too."

"I know. I can't just make that pain go away. I just wish we could start, you know? Untangle all of those webs. Geez, I'm sorry. This is depressing."

"It's what friends are for. Though...it must be tough like this."

Ino laughs. "Two mutual friends who hate each other? That's easy mode, sweetie. You don't need to worry about me getting torn between loyalties...life finds a way, and so do I," she says with a wink.

"Shrewd, aren't we?"

"And that's what makes me so lovable."

"You would say that." I pause. "Ino..."

"If I do need anything, I'll let you know. Seriously. I just...wanted to vent. I hope things will be okay on their own."

"I understand."

"Well...I'm gonna meet up at the shop with my dad. Come by for some flowers one of these days, yeah?"

"I'll be sure to."

"Holding you to it," she says as she drops out of the tree gracefully, blowing me a kiss as soon as she lands. I watch her leave for a moment before turning my attention to the afternoon sky.

"..."

Time. It's supposed to be a great healer...but I realize some things will need more than just that.

Today is a splendid day though, and there's no need to work myself up.

Luna is making my favourite for a late lunch: grilled salmon, and spicy curly fries. I can't wait.
 
Lighting Chakara Mode, get! This is going to make the chunin exams interesing.
"Good lord, Lili, what is that?"
"Uh, Lightning Release Chakra Mode, sensei."
"Lightning Release Chakra Mode, at this rank, in this age group, in this part of the country, localized entirely within these Chuunin Selection Exams?"
"Yes."
"...may I see it?"
"...yes."
 
How good Lili is with it at this point? And for how long she can use it?
B-Rank technique so decent overall. Not Raikage levels obviously but she's like...12. So nothing to be ashamed of.

As for how long, maybe a minute at stage 1 and 10 seconds at stage 2 in a neutral environment. She doesn't have the reserves of the other known users, and I just extrapolated with the expectation that all of the high speed movement options in the series require massive chakra reserves to use for extended periods.
 
Above Charity
Scarlet Justice - ep. 28
"Above Charity"
---

Another day. Another easy C-Rank mission, escorting a small caravan to a town in the nearby countryside. Nothing like the excitement of my first mission, but...it's not exactly disappointing, either. I get the chance to bond with my team. Kurenai tells us about her younger days, doing roughly the same missions, partaking in Leaf tradition, and trying her best to balance being a young girl with being a kunoichi.

With the mission being easy enough, it means we make it back with plenty of time to spare. Kurenai tells us something after we leave the mission desk.

"Asuma suggested a joint lunch with our teams. Just to get familiar and unwind a bit. If you guys decide not to come, then that's okay too. No pressure."

She means that, but it might be bad form not to show up. I think about it while soaking in the bath.

Comrades and friends. What did they really mean to me? Could I possibly get close with more people, especially those in my year? The 'ice queen' reputation has spread far and wide by now. Although...it reminds me that our team has already been together for a few months. But it feels like much, much longer than that. Hina is growing up more with each day, and I train with her in response to her wish for strength. Kurenai has definitely taken on the role of big sister in our group, teaching us and nurturing us at the same time. She looks after us as a group and individually whenever she can. And Shino is much easier to read than when we first met. He still has that way of talking and expressing himself that would be a bother to others, but we're all over that now. As long as we can communicate with him, it's fine.

There are obviously things to improve along the way, but this feels good. It feels right.

"Solidarity..." I get out of the bath and clean up, then head to the kitchen for a refreshing glass of milk. The clock tells me there's still plenty of time in the day, and Luna is at her dance classes. She has been slimming nicely, and a touch lighter on her feet, I notice...

I suppose I should show my face at the gathering. There's no harm in it, and supporting my team is well worth the effort. I decide to go with a very casual look; a shirt with 'hime' written on the front in Western script, and a pair of jogging pants. It's not a special occasion from what I've been told, so...this should be more than fine. I finish freshening up, put my armband on, shuffle into a pair of comfy slippers, make sure the doors and windows are locked, check for my pouch with money and essentials, and then clear the apartment stairs with a light jump. Okay, good to go.

I walk down to the restaurant where we're supposed to meet - the barbeque place that Kurenai took us as a reward for our performance during team building. It's called Yakiniku Q and is frequented by Asuma and Team Ten; they go here after missions and to celebrate special events. Shino has arrived ahead of me, waiting at the front. He spots me and nods.

"Kobayashi. So you decided to come."

"I didn't have anything else I was going to do," I say with a shrug.

"Maybe reading one of those novels you like so much?"

"Maybe."

"Did you complete it?"

"Yes, I did. But I'm not going to show it to you here," I reply. "Perhaps some time this week during training."

"I look forward to it. In order to be an effective teammate, I need to be able to measure and compare our levels of skill. Why? Because it's then easier to make ourselves compatible on the battlefield, and achieve greater success."

"Oh? Sizing me up, then."

"Well..." He pushes up his glasses. "Who knows?"

I smile. Definitely stubborn, this boy. Well, it's fine. A little competition fosters growth, after all. Hina and Kurenai come in next, with our sensei wearing a silk blouse and jeans in place of her normal wear. She sure knows how to dress.

"..."

"What?" she asks me.

"Nothing," I respond. "You look really nice."

"Thank you, Lili."

"I'm sure Asuma will appreciate it, too."

She scoffs and rolls her eyes. "I knew it. Listen, we're not dating as I've told you a thousand times before. We're just good friends and I wanted to be relaxed for this outing."

"Uh-huh," I say lazily. "Well, since we're all here...shall we head inside?"

"Yeah. Everyone else is already waiting."

We step inside and have a look at the interior. Certainly spacious, with plenty of tables and chairs, as well as more open areas so that people can rest on the floor if they like. This is also one of those places that has us grill the meat at our tables...the food is quite excellent, and it's good to come back here after the first time. Asuma waves to us with his team behind him.

"Good that you guys made it. The booths usually seat six at a time, and we're a big group. Maybe we can get a long table?" he suggests.

"Sure, that works," Kurenai says. "Lead on." Asuma nods and we all follow him to once of the longer tables, with cushions placed on the floor where we're supposed to sit. The table has two charcoal burners embedded in it, with pairs of tongs nearby for cooking our meals.

"Already ordered up, so the food will be arriving soon. Go ahead and have your seats," Asuma says. Kurenai predictably takes a spot beside Asuma, the guy she surely isn't dating at all. Yeah, right.

I don't commit to any place right away, and let everything fill up before taking the empty space in front of me. It's near the end of the table, with Shino on my right and Shikamaru on my left. To the left of him is Choji, who is impatiently waiting for the food to arrive. The boy does love his nourishment, from what I know. I'm in a decent mood right now, so I suppose I should introduce myself politely to Shikamaru. Not my first impression, but hopefully a good one. We have yet to talk formally and-

"Ah, this kind of thing...gathering with a bunch of stiff people on my day off. Honestly, what a pain in the ass."

"..." So this is all he knows. I see. "Oi, Ino. This guy's your teammate? This loser?"

"Yeah, I know. Annoying."

I drop all pretenses, since this is how he seems to want it. "Men-do-ku-sai, men-do-ku-sai, yah-yah-yah. It's always the same for you. Everything is mendokusai. Class is mendokusai. Training is mendokusai. You're beyond annoying. You're the worst."

"See-"

"Hey. Why not shut up for a moment instead of complaining. You see? It's so called men like you that drive women into each others' arms," I say with an icy tone. "Let me guess what you were going to say...that women like me are troublesome. Good, it's much better that way. It means we're out of reach of slackers like you."

"Why is your tongue so sharp?" he complains. "This is supposed to be a bonding event."

"Shut up. Who was the one saying that all of this was a pain in the ass and a waste of time?" I shoot back. "Learn your place."

"..." He's quiet after that, letting out a sigh.

Asuma and Kurenai are enjoying themselves, which is nice to see. Shino is being quiet as always and keeping to himself completely. Ino has given up trying to carry conversation with him and has turned to Hinata. They're hitting it off, but that's expected after spending some time together in the Academy for flower arranging.

"Someone anti-social like you...why would you come out to this kind of thing?"

I'm tempted to ignore Shikamaru, but I also figure it won't hurt to talk. At the least, bouncing back so quickly from my earlier verbal thrashing is a welcome surprise. He's laid out on his side now, propping his head up with one hand.

"I'm not anti-social," I say as I lean back on my hands. "I'm selective in who I speak to."

"Yeah, well. A lot of people think you're an icy bitch. I can see why they think that."

"Hmph. It seems better that they think of me that way," I reply. "I don't care for most people. It's always been that way."

"I realize you're not actually a bad person. Just a vicious woman."

"Yes. Your compliment is noted."

"You're really troublesome to talk to."

"Yes, I know." I pause a beat. "May I ask a question of you? Or would a reply consume too much of your remaining energy?" I ask.

"Did you really have to add that in?"

"Yes."

He grumbles before letting out a breath. "Fine. What is it..."

"Why do you not put effort into anything that you do?" I ask him.

"..." He's annoyed at the question. I don't care how he feels, frankly. "I'm not sure what you're trying to get at."

"The only person in our graduating class with worse grades than you was Naruto. He's a natural-born meathead." But he's definitely lovable. Quite stupid sometimes, but very lovable. "Your father is the Jounin Commander. What's your excuse?" I ask firmly. "Don't tell me it's bad parenting, either."

He winces before answering. "School just isn't my thing."

"Yes, I suppose. It must be hard finishing tests if you sleep through most of them."

"..."

"You could stand to be more responsible. I don't know if you're also secretly a genius, but you can do much better either way. And for the sake of your team, you should become more competent."

"..." He sighs in his usual manner.

"But I'm not really here to lecture you. And I don't claim to understand you, either."

"Why say something like that?" he asks.

"We come from inverted worlds. You, born into a world of shinobi that you would rather escape for a life of leisure. Myself, born into a world of leisure that I've escaped to take on a shinobi's life."

He raises a brow. "So...you're not going to bail at the next opportunity."

"Why would I? I made promises to loved ones. I'm going to become a jounin one day soon."

"You're really insane, you know that?" he says. "You're rich. You're a noble. You can spend your days in the countryside, you can do whatever you want."

"None of that means anything to me. Before this place...I only had myself to rely on. I was alone, and tired of life. Here, I get to feel the warmth of loved ones and comrades...it feels a lot like lying in the sun. I just want to feel that sort of warmth forever. Experiencing pain and loss, making bonds and even losing them one day...those are all better than never living at all. Than never getting the chance to...be someone."

"..."

"I know it doesn't make sense to you."

"No...no, it makes perfect sense," he says. I give him a surprised look. "It's definitely a pain in the ass, but it makes sense. Those sorts of feelings...it's no wonder you got so strong. And you've helped Hinata grow a lot as well."

"So you noticed after all."

Shikamaru makes a face. "Yeah. My eyes are sharper than I'd like...it means I have the responsibility of looking out for danger when I can. That really is a drag." The way he talks is more annoying than Shino at points, but I can clearly understand what he's saying.

Though he thinks of himself as a coward, he cares deeply for his teammates. He cares about a lot of things, and when push comes to shove, he would jump into action. Those strange quirks and his laziness don't change who he is as a person. I suppose...this is the true value of getting to know people. Discovering the goodness inside of them.

"You're not as bad as I thought," he says, bringing me out of my thoughts. "Actually, you're not bad at all." A smirk. "Just a huge bitch, honestly."

"Sincerely, this time...I appreciate your praise, Shikamaru."

He shrugs and gives me a lazy smile. "Yeah. I guess."

"Finally...food's here!" Choji yells. The plates are set down on the table, with our large companion practically salivating.

"Ah, that's the only thing he really gets excited for," Shikamaru mumbles. There's a faint smile on his face as he says that.

"You would know...what it's like to pick up a fallen friend," I say to him.

"They always said he was too fa-...I mean, plump, to do much of anything. Called him stupid and all kinds of names. But he ate those chips that Mom kept putting in my lunch, even after I asked her nicely not to. Choji is a reliable guy, so I want to keep supporting him no matter what. I know that Hinata feels the same about you. Well, actually...it has to be a stronger bond between the two of you. She's been abused since she was small..."

"Yes."

"And it resonates with you because of what you must have gone through. It's more than words between you, I guess."

I laugh softly. So he saw all of that at a glance...full of surprises, this one. He's grown on me already. "You slacker. You'd better put that brain of yours to use the next time that I see you."

"Ugh. You're gonna kick my ass if I don't, aren't you?"

"Yes. I'll have Ino arrange for it." I pick up my tongs and decide what I want to cook first.

"Shit...you really are a pain in the ass, Kobayashi."

"Yes. Naturally," I say.

He shakes his head and picks up a piece of meat with his tongs, putting it on the grill nearby.

The rest of lunch goes well. Our food is excellent yet again, conversation is decent, if a bit stilted at times, and there are no fights over food or anything else. Team Ten seems reliable on the whole. The latest Ino-Shika-Cho trio...I wonder if Asuma training them was the luck of the draw, or it was by design as the Third Hokage's son. Anything is possible.

Shino disappears like the wind - social outings don't seem to be his thing. Kurenai follows Asuma and Team Ten down the road. And I decide to walk Hina home today.

"It was nice today, wasn't it?" I ask her.

"Yes. Though...I didn't expect you to talk to Shikamaru so much."

"He has some interesting insights...the problem is that he needs a lot of motivation, or to just be tricked into doing something of importance. Somehow he'll survive, despite being such a slacker."

Hina giggles. "You do seem to bring out the best in people, Lili."

"Somewhat...I guess more comrades are nice."

"They always are." We reach the gates of the Hyuuga compound. "I'll see you soon, Lili."

"Of course, Hina. Please take care."

We share a hug before Hina approaches the gate and is escorted inside. The Hyuuga posted outside give me their usual dirty looks.

I show my appreciation for their kindness by flipping them off once Hina is out of sight. My blood starts to heat up slightly, thinking of her worthless father and what he might be doing to her. But...there's no point in giving into anger right now.

I'll deal with them in time.

---

Today features another visit from Midori. With Luna's appetite satisfied for the night, she sleeps soundly in her room, mumbling lewd things through her dreams. We leave her to her sleep and cuddle up on the couch together after dinner. I always love times like this, and there are never enough of them. I wish that Midori could stay here all the time, but she has business in her world that's very important. It seems to be heavy at times, and draining...sometimes she falls asleep in Luna's arms soon after her arrival, and we found out she's gone for days without rest.

I want to protect her like she protects me. One day...I will.

"Midori-nee? Can I ask a question?"

"Yes, my love. Anything you want." She holds me close and strokes my hair gently, just as she always does. I always feel like melting away in her warmth...sometimes I do fall asleep like this, and she doesn't do a thing to disturb me.

"I...it's a difficult question..."

"Please. Tell me what it is," she says soothingly.

"What are you afraid of, Midori-nee? What scares you the most?"

"Hurting."

"Hurting...? Do you mean pain?" I ask.

"No. Pain to me is...different. All of us can deal with pain, I think, but hurting...hurting is something else. When I hurt, it...paralyzes me. Makes me completely useless. Hurting is the thing I fear the most." I feel her squeeze me a bit tighter. "I do many things to avoid hurt. I change the feeling into anger, and deliver retribution. Or sadness, that turns to resolve. Compassion, that turns into determination."

"Why do you not like to hurt, Midori-nee?"

"Because...I blame myself for a lot of things. If I had been able to overcome it all earlier, I feel like...things would have been better."

"I..." I feel badly now. "I'm sorry..."

"No. Don't apologize, Lili. I said that I would answer you. I promised."

"You're right. I just wanted to know," I say quietly.

"...there were two beautiful beacons of light, long ago. When I was abandoned to the winds, by a family that has lost all of their faces in my memories, those two gave me hope. A reason to continue to exist. They taught me how beautiful humans could be, and I learned how to look into the soul itself because of what they instilled in me."

"Please...who were they?"

"Imperfect, loving humans. My uncle and auntie...Hayate and Ari. Both fragile, hard-working and joyful people. They protected me. They raised me. And they...gave everything for me. It was because of that hurt, that paralysis that I could only watch them disappear. And even though...it was what they wanted. Keeping me safe from harm. I still curse myself because of it."

I know that feeling. That sort of hurt, from being there and still being useless, unable to do a thing as someone so precious to me slipped from my grasp.

"Did they have a wish for you?" I ask.

"Yes. To never go back to the person I once was...and to become a beautiful, shining empress."

"You're making their dream come true." I lift my head slightly to look into her golden eyes. "You are a beautiful daughter of heaven, who has blessed me with love and strength, Midori-nee. You're a person to be proud of."

Sometimes...even those who shine brightly need reassurance and comfort. Her smile is beautiful and warm, and I'm glad that I can be there for her as I am. I want to keep growing, so that one day...

...she will never have to hurt like that again.
 
I think 86,000 words is enough of a lead in.
It's time for the Main Event™.
 
Say My Name!
Scarlet Justice - ep. 29
"Say My Name!"
[Chuunin Exams: Prologue]
---

A few days have passed since the lunch outing. Hina and I add another to our exercise group.

"Running this early is a good idea. I don't know why I didn't think of it," Kurenai says. We're doing our daily criss-crossing of the Leaf, which started as part of our experimental runs in the early days. The local support gave Hina a bit of confidence, and people have expressed to me that they find it inspiring to see a member of the Hyuuga Main House working hard every day. They don't get out much or mix with what they like to call the rabble. Logically, it makes sense. Socially, it's stupid. Personally, it's what I expect from a clan filled to the brim with savages who pose as human beings.

"It's too bad that...Shino couldn't come with us," Hina says as we run. "It would be nice to have us all together..."

"You're too concerned about that idiot," I say. "If he wants to stay home until the official time, then let him. A good child, but clearly a hassle when it comes to anything social."

"Still..."

I sigh as we continue moving through the Leaf. It's just past dawn by now and we pass other regular runners who greet us as usual. Something...has been bothering me, though. I've taken note of people who aren't from around here, specifically from other villages. If it's not their clothing that makes them stand out, it's their reactions to the weather. Some seem to find even this day far too cold, which says a lot.

"Sensei...there are a lot of foreigners in lately, no?" I ask Kurenai.

"Something like that. Seems like an event is coming up soon...I'll ask Lord Hokage about it later, since I'm not sure what it's about either."

"I wonder...what it could be?" Hinata asks. "This time of year has a lot going on, I think..."

I shrug. "Who knows. Hopefully it's not a bother for us."

I see Kurenai glance upwards briefly, before returning her focus to the road ahead. I wonder if she's expecting something after all...maybe. I don't want to worry about it.

"Let's speed up a bit, ladies."

I take the lead and accelerate, feeling them fall in line behind me. The colours of the Hidden Leaf start to blend in the sun's light.

---

"Ah...w-wow..."

"So this is your power, Kobayashi."

I show off the first stage of my chakra mode today. Kurenai has left us to train on her own, citing a sudden errand she needed to run. Now that I've had plenty of practice, it's much easier settling into this form. The second stage will be reserved for emergencies, but...with time, that too will change.

"I wish...I had that kind of talent," Hina says. She straightens up a moment later. "But I can work on my own craft..."

"You're doing well, Hinata," Shino assures her. "Because not all of us can be geniuses like Kobayashi here."

"Thank you, I appreciate hearing that. Um...Shino? I wanted to ask a question."

"Of course. What do you require of me?"

"I wanted to know why you always call Lili by her family name. Is it...something you do as a custom? In the Aburame Clan?"

"Nothing like that. I simply do it because...it's cooler that way. Having a teammate that you call by their family name exudes prestige and mystery. It makes our team look a lot cooler."

"Mm...I see..."

"Boys are complicated like that," I say as I release the jutsu. "So don't worry about it, Hina. Although...I guess according to that metric, it means I have a masculine aura?"

"Correct," Shino replies confidently.

I give him a wearied look. "You really can't read women, Shino."

"Perhaps." You're not supposed to admit to that. "But I can read you and Hinata well enough. You don't mind those kinds of labels as much as Hinata and Kurenai-sensei do. Image isn't something terribly important in the eyes of the world to you, Kobayashi."

"..." He's not wrong, at least. And I admit that being called by my last name in that stoic kind of voice does add cool points. Hm. Maybe boys aren't terribly hard to understand after all. "I guess I'm fine with that."

"Right." He pushes his glasses up. "And I've been thinking for a while...you should also have a nickname. Something to be feared."

"Something like that...does Lili need one?" Hina asks.

"Yes. It increases the power and range of her aura. Something like...the Red Tornado of the Hidden Leaf, for example."

"I-Is that really that powerful?" She already seems like she's believing it, so most likely.

"Who knows. Maybe you can try it out while introducing me, Shino." I think on it for a moment.

"Alright. I'll find the proper opening."

"Is that really okay, Lili?" Hina asks me.

"It's fine. We'll work something out," I say with a lazy wave. Well, now I have to figure out a super cool name or else Shino will do it for me. And his sense of aesthetic is nothing compared to mine, so I have to make it in time...I'll consult with Luna and Midori as soon as I get home later today.

This is a matter of extreme importance.

"Oh, you're still here." Kurenai has returned, with paperwork, apparently.

"You're still running errands," I say to her.

"Almost done. This is one of my last stops, and these are for you."

She hands us a piece of paper each. These are...

"We just had a meeting regarding the Chuunin Selection Exams. I know it's early, and it might seem like a bit much...but you've all progressed nicely and made many great strides so far. As a result, I've nominated all three of you for these examinations. If you choose to decline, they take place twice a year. So...you can back out, if you want. Room 301 in the Academy, 4 pm tomorrow. That's the deadline for you to hand those papers in."

"You're sure about this?" Shino asks.

"Yeah, I am." She gives us all a sunny smile. "I believe in each one of you. Don't forget that. Well, I've got a bit more work before I can turn in. Make sure you're ready for tomorrow, and remember...it's all up to you now. I'll be seeing you."

She disappears in a cloud of smoke.

"Dramatic exits at this hour," I mumble. "Hmph."

I'm terribly excited right now, though I don't let it show on my face. The place where legacies begin: The Chuunin Exams.

Finally...it's time to get started!

---

The day shifted as soon as we left the training field. It became unbearably hot for some reason, and hasn't cooled down much since. I thank the heavens for this wealth of ours, because it allows us to bless ourselves with the wonders of central air.

It's still hot, though. I take a shower as soon as I come in, and Luna is dressed lightly for the day. Midori is visiting again, and she's laid herself out on the couch in her underwear. Her fan waves back and forth in one hand. I wear a light shirt and shorts on account of the heat.

"Ah. So the examinations are happening this soon...very interesting," she says.

"We had an important discussion earlier. I need a cool name. Shino will ruin it if I don't find one first."

"Oh, we can't have that. Hmm...need to think of something."

"I have ideas," Luna says as she wipes down the kitchen table. "Something flashy...how about...hm. What about Crimson Flash?"

"Something with snakes in it," Midori says. "Bloody Fang."

"Red Devil, maybe."

"Blood Serpent."

"Flame Tyrant!"

"Sanguine Sidewinder!"

"Maroon Marauder!"

"Carmine Cobra! Luna, what the hell?"

"What? What's wrong?"

"Your naming sense is horrific!"

"Horrific? Me? What are you talking about with...Blood Serpent? What even is that?!"

"Maroon Marauder? Are you drunk at this time of day, or what?"

"I was just saying the first thing that came to mind!" Luna yells.

"Maybe you shouldn't next time," Midori says.

A huff. "Well, excuse me. What should I come up with next, something you'd like, right? Why not Deathstroke the Terminator? Is that edgy enough for you?"

"You've got a mouth on you-"

"Don't get smart with me-"

The two of them can really get into it over the silliest things. It isn't a serious argument - it never is with them, far as I know - but I'd like to settle it soon. Something cool...flashy, yet not too much so. Something that's definitely a bit scary, and adds to the power of my aura. An intense feeling that builds each time it's uttered by people in this world and the next.

I want them all to say my name. And I want them to tremble as they do it.

Midori wants...something with snakes.

Luna wants...something with colour.

They're two parts of me. Important pieces that I want to carry with me always. I want to honour them as well.

Midori sees me as...a predator. Someone dangerous in the most beautiful way. Striking and withdrawing in an instant, before my prey can react in time.

Luna sees me as...a princess. A girl with a head of beautiful scarlet hair, that should be cherished and protected. Someone who deserves to be waited on until the end of her days.

I understand who I am now...so it's time. The world will soon know my terror.

"This is my time...to show everyone what I'm made of."

Luna and Midori stop their bickering to look at me. I cross my arms and stand tall.

"I will lead my comrades through with my strength. For those who believe in me, and for those who have supported me, I will become fury itself. My name is Lili Kobayashi...the Hidden Leaf's Scarlet Viper!"

They both clap happily.

"What a powerful debut! It's perfect!" Midori says.

"You look amazing! So cool!" Luna says.

I allow myself a smile and toss my hair back dramatically. Yes, that did sound cool, didn't it? Mission accomplished.

"So you're going to sign the form, right?" Midori asks me.

"Yes. Of course I was going to do that," I say. I really was...I mean, eventually.

"It should be a foregone conclusion, you passing the exams, but Kurenai did say you don't have to do this right away. You're still young, you know."

"Trying to discourage me?" I ask as I sign the form properly.

"Goodness, no. I'm just thinking out loud...hopefully your teammates don't have similar thoughts. It would be bad if they did."

"Hmph. I wonder who you think I am, Midori-nee. If there's a problem, then all I have to do is show my face to them, and calm their hearts. We fight this fight together, or not at all."

"Ha, well said." Midori points her fan towards the door. "Then show them your strength, Lili. Onward!"

"Onward!" I call back. I head through the door and to my next destination.

The Aburame District is familiar enough to me, and I find Shino's home from memory. Modest in size, yet with an interesting look. It's isolated, and surrounded by trees. An ideal spot for the Leaf's premier bug-using clan.

Shino is outside, and there's a man with him who looks a lot like him, save for the moustache. His glasses are also different, and seem quite expensive despite the simple look to them. Interesting. The two spot me, and I wave as I approach.

"Shino, is that your teammate?" the older man asks.

"Yes, Father. Shall I introduce you, comrade?"

"No need," I say with a wave of my hand. "I'm the Scarlet Viper of the Hidden Leaf," I say confidently. "Lilith Kobayashi. But Lili is also fine."

"So you're Kobayashi," he says. "Interesting aura..."

Yes. There's no doubt that this is Shino's father.

"I am Shibi Aburame, the current head of the Hidden Leaf's Aburame Clan."

"It's an honour meeting you, sir." I shake his hand without hesitation.

"You have good eyes, too. So what brings you here, Kobayashi?"

"I came to reassure my comrade of my participation in the Chuunin Exams. My paper is already signed."

"You don't need to worry about that. I have things to prove as well," Shino says.

"Then I will see you at 3 pm tomorrow."

"Of course."

"Good. I'm going to check on Hina. Shino, Master Aburame...until the next."

"Kobayashi."

"Yes?"

Shino gives me a thumbs up. "It's a good name." I see Shibi nod in approval behind him.

I return the gesture before taking off.

---

I arrive in front of the Hyuuga estate and wait for Hinata to come out. The guards give me dismissive looks as I stand in front of them with my arms folded. As said before, I will deal with their arrogance in time.

Hinata emerges wearing a pure white robe, trailed by several members of her family. They seem displeased at the sight of me.

"Lili..."

"Hina. I've come to check on you..."

"I know. I...was thinking about whether or not I should take the exams this time. I wasn't sure if I was ready. But...standing here, looking at you...I know what I have to do."

She produces the form, and I can see her signature on the bottom. I smile.

"Together...we can do anything. That's why no matter what happens, I'll follow you. To the end of the world, to the many hells and back again if need be. I will follow you, forever and always, Lili."

"Hina...thank you."

"I should be thanking you. You're the one who gave me life again. My precious family."

"I promise we'll make it through to the end. Count on me."

"I will."

"3 pm tomorrow. Shino will be there with us. We'll prove ourselves as Team Eight!" I shout.

"Yes!"

"See you then, Hina!"

I wave before taking off again. The stage is now set...all I have to do is make a few more preparations.

Upon my arrival home, I smell steak. And my favourite curly fries, now in a spicy hot flavour. Luna can't handle it, but she thought I would be able to.

They're great. Delicious. A new dimension of heat and flavour.

"It must be because you were born a western child...I can't handle that sort of heat," Luna says.

"So you've assembled your team," Midori says to me at the table. "Well done. The first hurdle is cleared. Now you simply have to take on all challengers, but that won't be a problem, will it?"

"It won't be, Midori-nee."

"Do your best...and no matter what happens, I will always be proud of you, Lili."

"The same for me," Luna says. "Be strong, and come home to us as a proud kunoichi. We'll be waiting."

"Thank you both." I give them a grin. "This Scarlet Viper won't let you down."

---

It's 3 pm.

I arrive at the Academy building as planned. Shino and Hinata are already waiting for me.

Time to take the lead. For honour and glory.

"Shall we go?" I ask.

"Yeah," Shino replies.

"I'm ready," Hina says.

"Okay. As soon as we get inside, we can..." I trail off as I notice something ahead. It's...a box. With eye holes.

"It seems there's an obstacle in front of us," Shino says.

"Ah? You're right. Looks tough, too...maybe I should use a technique to get rid of it..." I have a few snakes poke out of my sleeves.

"W-wait!" Confirming my suspicions, the box rises up to reveal three idiot kids inside. One with goggles, another with glasses and yet another stupid bowl cut, and the last is a girl with her hair tied upwards into twintails.

What even is...

"Devil-nee-san! What's your plot this time, huh?" the goggle-head asks.

"Hm? Devil sister...what's with that title?"

"You're trying to tempt Naruto-nii, aren't ya? I know you are!"

"Tempt? Naruto?"

"Yeah! We saw you with him at the ramen shop! Don't you know he already has a woman?!"

I sigh. Hina isn't taking it well, either, what with her crushing on him. "We're just friends, idiot. I could care...I mean, it's no business of mine who he dates. I'm not interested in guys."

"Not...interested?" He looks confused.

"Not interested. You'll find out what that means when you're older. Let's go, team."

"Wait! Devil Sis!"

"What..."

He stands proudly and points towards me. "Remember the name! I'm Naruto-nii's rival and future Hokage, Konohamaru Sarutobi!"

I raise a brow. This kid is the Third's grandson? Well, I'm sure he would forgive me if I gave him a few bruises for his idiocy...but that's good to know. Interesting, too. Might as well give him something for his trouble.

"My name is Lilith Kobayashi, the Scarlet Viper of the Leaf. I'll be sure to remember you, Konohamaru Sarutobi."

"Y-yeah!"

"We really should get going," Shino says.

"Plenty of time. No need to worry," I reply. I give Konohamaru one more glance before moving ahead.

Spirited little child...and Naruto's apprentice, apparently. With the same amount of meat to brain ratio. Which means he's probably learned that transformation art too. Annoying.

"..."

But then, it's nice to see the next generation already being nurtured. Hopefully Naruto's better traits rub off on him.

We enter the building on the bottom floor. Some teams are still milling about.

"Alright, Hina."

"Yes." She activates her Byakugan without a sound and scans the area. "There are...a lot of people on the second floor for some reason. I think there's a genjutsu there...the third floor where we need to go is mostly clear. I think we should...avoid trouble..."

"On the other hand, we can scout a good deal of our competition," Shino points out. "Information is king."

"Um...it's up to Lili, as our leader."

I close my eyes and think. Hina has a good point in that we could avoid problems, but Shino brings up an equally strong point in that we can gain information about our possible foes. We still have forty five minutes before the deadline.

No...I know what I want to do. Have a little fun at someone else's expense.

I turn to Hina and grin, making her sigh in response. She knows my answer just from that.

"Time to stir up some trouble on the second floor~"

"P-please don't do anything too dangerous..."

"We should be fine, Hinata. After all...the most bloodthirsty person in the examination is probably in our group," Shino says.

"Oh? Is that how people see me?" I ask.

"Somewhat."

I shrug. "Well, I guess it fits. Let's head up while we still have time to waste."

And so, up the stairs we go.

The game is afoot.
 
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Rule of Cool
Scarlet Justice - ep. 30
"Rule of Cool"
[Chuunin Exams: Prologue 2]
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As we head to the second floor, I notice there's something off immediately. I taste the air around me to make sure. There are two men posted in front of room 301, bullying anyone who comes close to them.

"You should turn back while you can. This test is no place for weaklings."

"Tch." I would recognize that tone anywhere...unfortunately. "Why don't you step aside, and get rid of that genjutsu while you're at it." Sasuke.

"That's right. We saw through it as soon as we came here. This is the second floor, and that's room 201 behind you," Sakura follows.

"Yup!" Naruto chimes in. He has no clue what's actually happening.

I could feel their chakra from my own scan...the ones in front of the now revealed to be fake door don't feel like genin at all. They've cleverly transformed in order to weed out the weak-willed participants. That's why everyone is up here, for the most part...but with Team Seven uncovering the deception, everyone seems more confident.

Pretty boring. They didn't have to blurt everything out, but I wouldn't expect much else from a couple of arrogant brats. Naruto excluded, obviously. Kakashi sent them on their way here too, then...bold move. Let's see if it pays off.

"I thought I smelled fear. So you've arrived...Lady Hinata."

A voice dripping with self-importance calls to our group. I turn my head to look at the boy with pure white eyes...ones that look the same as Hina's, but only on the surface. I can feel it bleeding out from him.

Murderous intent.

Hina lowers her head at the sight of him. I understand immediately...perhaps not physically, but he's abused her psychologically for a long time. Him, along with everyone else in that wretched clan. I don't know if I can forgive them for that. Perhaps I really shouldn't. I'll decide in time.

"Brother Neji..." Even her tone is deferent. It's like...she's transformed back into the person she was when we first met. I can't take much more of this...watching this happen again.

"Is this your group, then?" Neji asks. "I never thought I would see so many rookies appear at once, but I suppose your instructors had something silly to prove. It's too bad...you don't stand a chance. There's a reason we waited a year before participating," he says. "Why would you do something so silly, Lady Hinata? Surely you know your importance to the clan? To Lord Hiashi?"

"I...simply wanted to...prove myself," she says shakily.

"How? By coming here and dying?"

Hina stiffens.

"Don't be so silly, Lady Hinata. You understand the situation," he says with a sardonic smile. "There's still time for you to-"

"No. I can't." She raises her head, and I can see the fire from before return. "I know you worry, Brother Neji. But...I can't this time. And I won't." She grabs my hand and meshes her fingers with mine. I can feel her calming down. "This battle isn't just my own. I have to fight with those I care for...my comrades. I don't want to run away any longer."

"Your foolishness will only get you hurt, Lady Hinata," Neji responds. Clearly unamused that his tactics are failing.

"It's better that I feel pain...than nothing at all. These bonds are worth that much and more."

I squeeze her hand and smile. "The Hinata you knew once before...is on the verge of disappearing," I say.

"And who might you be?"

"Shouldn't you introduce yourself first?" I reply. "I'm not sure that's any way to treat a lady."

"Is that what you think?"

"She might be a ruthless bitch, but she has a point about etiquette," Sasuke says as he interrupts. "Neji Hyuuga, right? The previous year's number one rookie."

"And you must be Sasuke Uchiha. Second in this year's class...no?" Neji replies with a smirk. Sasuke growls, his eyes narrowing.

"Wonder what number one looks like," a girl nearby says. Her brown hair is tied into twin buns, and she wears a unique looking blouse. Beside her is Rock Lee. So this is his team...a year older, and containing at least two strong people. Both taijutsu specialists.

"Ah...it's the villain!" Lee shouts, pointing at me.

"Villain?"

"Yes, Tenten! The villain who attacked the fair Sakura! The one who I was telling you about earlier!"

"This shorty?" Tenten says with a smug smirk. "I can't believe any of that, sorry."

"You'd better believe it, ya know?" Naruto shouts back. "She's the one who flattened Sasuke in sparring! And she's our class number one by a mile!"

"She is an elite without peer," Shino continues. "The strongest member of Team Eight, and the future of our village. Top rookie of this year's graduating class, and an extraordinary red-haired talent from a far away land, tearing her prey apart with bloodied fangs hardened in intense battle. She is the Hidden Leaf's Scarlet Viper...Lilith Kobayashi."

Well done, Shino. Absolutely beautiful.

"Scarlet...Viper?" Neji murmurs.

"W-what a terrifying name," Lee says, recoiling.

"Whoa...that's super cool!" Naruto shouts.

"So it seems you've aligned yourself with a pair of idiots, then...a shame, Lady Hinata. You deserve better."

"They are not idiots. And they're the best teammates I could ever ask for. I will stand by them," Hina says firmly. "Without exception, Brother Neji."

"..." Neji turns on his heel, walking away. Tenten follows him, and Lee seems to have disappeared.

"I'll be sure to crush you when I'm done with that scarlet bitch," Sasuke says to Neji.

"Prepare yourself. I'll show you why Hyuuga is the strongest clan in the Leaf, once and for all." Neji continues walking, and Sasuke chooses to turn his focus on me. His Sharingan seem to glow in the light, and I feel my blood stirring. 'That' side is becoming restless.

Hina squeezes my hand tightly...I get the message and force myself to calm down. For her, at least.

"There's no need to stir things up this early, Sasuke. She isn't worth it," Sakura says.

"I'm sorry, but you don't get to say things like that," I say to her. "Not after I already beat you like a rag doll."

"Tch...!"

"Know your place, Sakura. And as for you," I say as I turn back to Sasuke, "when you're 'done' with me, you said? That's funny...you don't have enough stamina to handle me no matter what you do."

"What?"

"You heard me, boy. I'll run you ragged and make you beg for me to stop. Why don't you quit being moody and focus on what matters, like passing this exam. Right now...you're not worth my time. None of you are."

I face my friend and stare him down.

"Not even you, Naruto."

He gives me a cocky smirk in return. "Heh. We'll see about that. Things have changed a lot since our last fight, ya know. I've got a whole new bag of tricks, Lili..."

"I'm sure. We can see just how much you've changed..."

"Yeah..."

I like this. The look in his eyes, determined and defiant. Healthy competition. He wants to beat me as badly...no, maybe more than Sasuke does. I'm excited for that...the possibility of going to head to head with him in battle. And I'm sure he is, too.

But now isn't the time, sadly.

"Hina. Shino. Let's move. We have somewhere to be," I order.

"Yes."

"Understood."

I give Naruto one last look before shoving my way past Sakura and towards the wide hallway. The stairs to the third floor are just ahead.

"Halt!"

"?" I look up to see Lee, already standing on the third floor. He jumps down in an instant and lands in front of our group.

"So...not only are you a villain, you are the number one rookie?" he asks.

"Yes. What about it?" I reply.

"I did want to test my skills against Uchiha first, but...your villainy and reputation have piqued my interest. While we have time, I would like to challenge you!"

Now? What the hell.

"We have company," Shino says. I look to see that Sasuke and the others are watching. Dammit.

"I am the Leaf's Handsome Devil, Rock Lee!"

"Yeah, we've met. Lilith Kobayashi." This guy is seriously annoying. And...did he just change his title from the last time? How many does he...actually, I don't really care.

"Please, allow me to test my skills against you."

My cynicism is on full blast.

He's either genuinely curious, trying to force my hand, or some mix of both. Entirely possible with his single-track mind.

"Yeah! Lili can blow thick-brows away with that technique!" Naruto yells suddenly.

"Hm?" Lee's eyes widen with curiosity.

Seriously. I love him, but that boy is a damned idiot at the worst times. Well, now what. Do I oblige the meathead in front of me, or just decline and stay out of trouble?

There's a correct answer. I'm agitated, and a fight would get me loose again. Maybe...hm.

"Lili...I think you should keep that hidden," Hinata says quietly.

"I agree," Shino says, backing her up.

My teammates have my back, as always. I'll follow their advice.

"You two are right," I say to them. "I'll save my power for the exam proper."

"Thank goodness," Hina says.

"A wise move. Showing your fangs too early might be to your detriment," Shino follows.

"Aside from that...I'm tired. I'm not interested in more challenges from nobodies and sore losers who end up beaten down anyways. Rock Lee...if you want to fight me, you'll have to get in line with everyone else."

"..." He seems disappointed. Good. Idiot.

"Almost twenty minutes remaining. We'll go." I walk past Lee and hear commotion a moment later. Seems like he's chosen to deal with Sasuke instead, like he wanted. We ascend the stairs, and I hear what is definitely a Naruto yelp before a loud crash. Hinata winces.

And then shortly after that, there's another loud impact...a kick, I assume. I shift one eye to the side so I can see what's happening.

"..."

Sasuke is floating in the air, with Lee at his back.

Lee's power has drastically increased, as I can feel it in the air. I wonder what kind of technique he's using...it's clearly some type of taijutsu, since he can't do much else.

"Hina. Can you see it?" I ask her.

"It's...the Inner Gates..."

No wonder. Being able to open those along with that taijutsu would make him a force to be reckoned with. But...I can figure him out, just like everyone else. He isn't the biggest problem, especially not right now.

I tune out the noise coming from downstairs and we reach the real room 301 at last. Fifteen minutes to spare, nice and early. As I like it.

"We made it without incident," Shino comments.

"Barely," I say. Naruto is getting strangled for a while once this is over. Someone then suddenly appears in a cloud of smoke. This scent...one in her rotation that I recognize quickly. "So, did our nee-san come to see us off?"

"You're annoying, you know that?" Kurenai responds as the smoke clears. But yes, your sensei did come to see you off. And to see if you passed the real test."

"Test?" Hina asks. "Aren't we...already on our way to it?"

"Yes and no. That whole thing about the exam being your choice wasn't the whole truth. If only one or two of you showed up, I would have to send you home. The Chuunin Exams have to be taken as a three-person unit no matter what, just as I nominated you. A good leader organizes their team and also makes sure they're prepared for their missions. Not just physically, but mentally and emotionally. Lili going to each of you is proof of that preparation. She also didn't pressure you into joining. She simply demonstrated her resolve, and the two of you followed because of your trust in her."

"So...the option to back out wasn't really an option. We had to want to come together as a team in order for this to work."

"That's right, Shino."

"Hmph. What a stupid test," I declare, putting my arms around Shino and Hina's shoulders. "Even if it meant waiting another six months, I would follow these two anywhere. And you of course, Kurenai." I give her a wink.

"You're too cocky."

"Hmph."

"But seeing that confidence, in yourself and your teammates...it makes me happy, too." Kurenai steps forward and places a hand on Hina's shoulder. "You've come such a long way, Hinata. I'm proud. Please remember...no matter the outcome, we will always be here for you. Shino, Lili, and I...we'll never toss you away, or be ashamed of you."

"I understand, sensei. Thank you...you've given me so much hope. I won't let you down..."

Kurenai nods and turns to Shino. "Shino. All you have to do is be yourself. Sometimes being uncool is part of teamwork, and I know you can handle being out of the spotlight for a while. Look after your comrades, as you always do."

"Yes, sensei. I will be vigilant."

She nods and then turns to me. There's an intense look in her eyes.

"Lili...I have just one request. If anyone should bring harm to your comrades...please erase them without prejudice. No matter who they might be."

I know what it is she wants.

I will embrace my true self. Just as she has asked.

"Orders received, sensei."

"Thank you. I'm proud of you all for coming this far, and happy to know that I'm...well, I guess I'm like your big sister after all, as much as I try to be a serious adult."

"The Kurenai we've known...and the Kurenai we will know. They're the same, and they're both beloved. For you...we'll give our all," I say.

"Thank you."

"But there's something else. Isn't there?" I say accusingly.

"Ah..." The look on her face says it all.

"You made a bet involving us."

"Mm...w-well. Kakashi and Asuma each promised me a year's supply of liquor if I ended up with more chuunin students than them at the end of the exams..."

"And if you lose?" I ask.

"I...um..." She presses her fingers together. "Asuma wants me in a maid outfit every other day of the week for three months. And Kakashi...he wants me to read the entirely of Icha-Icha Tactics...out loud. In public."

"I don't understand the true nature of this punishment, but...it seems like we have to become chuunin now," Shino says.

"Unnecessary pressure? Sensei, how awful of you," I tease. "Mm...I would suggest asking Luna for outfits, but she's a bit bigger in some areas..."

"We h-have to succeed...Kurenai-sensei can't be subjected to such...l-l-lewd things!" Hina says with determination, even as she blushes deeply.

"Listen...don't worry about me too much, yeah? Haha. Like I said, just do your best. Okay?"

"We will, Kurenai. Luna and Midori-nee will be having tea today, and they would love some extra company. You should drop by."

"I'll do that. Team Eight...good luck." She smiles and disappears in a cloud of smoke.

"The stakes have been raised. Sensei loves her drink...let's get this done for her," Shino says.

"Fine by me. I was going to aim for the top anyways," I say. "Hina, ready?"

"Y-yeah!"

"Okay. Let's rock." I push open the doors and walk forward.

The room is filled with all kinds of people. People who don't look like the ideal shinobi, people who are flashy, people who are clearly out of their league, all sorts that would be labelled weirdos and freaks. There are young and even older people, from many different villages. Everyone's gathered near the back of this large room, and it's getting restless. There's frequent intimidation. And...

...and this discount killing intent is the most boring thing I've ever experienced. Are any of these people, these posturing punks, actual killers? Perhaps a few...but they're keeping to themselves as I assumed they would. Midori did say as much, that the real killers never talk about killing or present themselves as violent...they attack without warning, and leave without a sound.

Yes. True artisans.

Naruto has made it up, from the sounds of it, and yells something that I don't quite make out. The entire room seems to be focused on him now.

Well, that's just how he is. Ever confident, and ever optimistic. Hina's confidence is boosted a bit more, I notice. I understand why she's so smitten by him, now especially.

I can sense a few interesting characters scattered around. Some weird looking guys brooding on top of the desks, from some village called the Hidden Sound. I don't know much about that place, but I get a strange feeling. There's a boy with red hair, close in colour to mine, with a large gourd on his back. He's standing with a blonde girl - who has fantastic looking legs - and another boy with a black hood and something wrapped in bandage on the floor beside him. They're a team from what I recognize as the Hidden Sand. There's another person from the Leaf that I don't quite recognize, wearing glasses. He's fiddling with cards, or...something. Naruto's team is here, of course. Ino and her team - which explains what Neji was muttering about earlier regarding the amount of rookies. All nine of us, huh. Well, we can see what comes of that. Neji's team is assembled. And then other idiots I don't care for.

But there's something curious...that's Kiba Inuzuka, isn't it? I haven't seen him in a long while. He's with two people that I don't recognize either...that makes ten of us from the graduating class. Hm. This should be quite the experience...

"Team Nine is an unknown to us," Shino says. "Perhaps we should greet them."

"Not a bad idea. I'm curious as well. Follow me," I say as I walk into the hostile crowd. We cut through easily, thanks to some strategic use of my murderous aura, and end up in proximity of Kiba's team.

Kiba himself hasn't changed much, if at all. Akamaru is camped inside his jacket, looking like a dog usually does. Happy to be with his friend, and a good child from what I remember.

The next person of note is quite easy on the eyes. A girl with chocolate brown skin and featureless hazel eyes. Her hair is white, and neatly combed into two puffy clouds that sit on both sides of her head. She has a spiked collar around her neck, which matches neatly with the rest of her unique outfit: stockings made out of netting, a black dress with zippers all over it, and shredded, fingerless gloves that extend past her elbows. And it's all topped with a splash of pink lipstick.

The last member is sitting against the wall nearby. He has short black hair that looks like it's held in place by some invisible force, making it shoot straight backwards horizontally in the form of hard spikes. On top of his head is a large crow. He wears long cargo shorts with what seems to be a chain mail body suit underneath, and a white vest on top of it all. His gloves are jet black and look to be thick and heavy. As he stands, I can see that he is quite tall, and fairly muscular.

"Hey, you guys made it!" Kiba says as he notices us.

"We did," Shino says. These two got along decently at the Academy, so I can understand why Shino wanted to see how he was doing. "So this is your team?"

"Yeah! These two trend towards the quieter side, but they're good people," he says with a grin. "We've got enough in common. The lady over here is Erika Kotowari."

"..." She pauses a while, and I can only assume she's looking at me with the same interest I gave her a moment earlier. "It's nice to meet you all," she says in a cool tone. Very businesslike...almost mechanical. She seems to be a precise sort of person.

"Cool. And the big guy over here..."

"Phantom the Dark."

"..." I realize he's entirely serious. "It's good to meet you, then."

"Dark is fine as well..."

"His name is Koichi Nagano," Erika says smoothly. "Phantom the Dark is his alias. We have respected his desires and refer to him as such, except in cases where his legal name is needed for legal or administrative purposes."

Koichi...or Dark, sighs. "Rika, that's not very nice of you."

"You have continually failed to respect my agency."

"Rika is nice. It's aesthetically pleasing."

"I am not pleased by it. Aesthetically or otherwise."

Phantom the Dark...it's taking all I have not to cringe outwardly. What a loser.

Kiba, Erika, and...Dark, then. Fine.

"Who's the character on your head?" I ask, referring to the crow on...Dark's...head. He seems to be patiently observing the world around him.

"Oh, that's Eddie. We're connected by a dark ritual that gives us both overwhelming power once we-"

"Ninja crow," Kiba and Erika say at the same time.

"Right, understood. Good luck to you," I say, wanting to get away from this weirdo as soon as possible.

"Yeah, we'll see ya later! Try not to choke too much on our dust when we take off into the next round!" Kiba says as he and his group leave. "Yahoo!"

"Kiba hasn't changed at all," Shino notes. "Though that's good in its own way, I suppose."

That sounds agreeable.

Time winds down to about a minute before things are set to begin. The Sound shinobi are suddenly on the move, trying to stir up trouble. I sigh and make sure we're out of range of their foolishness.

And it's then that I hear it.

"Settle down, you trash! Take your seats!"

Well. Here we go.
 
As for how long, maybe a minute at stage 1

Well that's a long ass time for a fight in RL
"Perhaps." You're not supposed to admit to that. "But I can ready you and Hinata well enough. You don't mind those kinds of labels as much as Hinata and Kurenai-sensei do. Image isn't something terribly important in the eyes of the world to you, Kobayashi."

I do think you mean Read, instead of reading
"I will lead my comrades through with my strength. For those who believe in me, and for those who have supported me, I will become fury itself. My name is Lili Kobayashi...the Hidden Leaf's Scarlet Viper!"

The Chunni levels are getting too high

"I...um..." She presses her fingers together. "Asuma wants me in a maid outfit every other day of the week for three months. And Kakashi...he wants me to read the entirely of Icha-Icha Tactics...out loud. In public."

Asuma's is the least bad result especially since he apparently didn't say for how long.

While reading porn out loud in public well her reputation would probably be rock bottom and I can imagine how embarrassing it would be for her if her students were listening.

"Phantom the Dark."

"..." I realize he's entirely serious. "It's good to meet you, then."

"Dark is fine as well..."

Nooooo he went too far into chunni so instead of being cool its lame.
 
Thanks a lot of the chapter and the story.

Love how the MC presence instills real changes to the plot, even with the AU tag, and I am looking forward to see how all the characters personalities keep developing, including the scary Sasuke/Sakura co-dependence, that is going to crash/explode so hard that is not amusing at all.

And considering the Alternate Timeline, I really hope to see Lilith learn to take a snake form from Midori, if Orochimaru could do it even in Canon there is no reason for the "Sneks" not to teach her their native transformation technique. Also, cute smol red speedy snek Lilith would be awesome.

About the recent chapter, I honestly love Kiba teammates, they look interesting, and hope we get to see them a little more from now on, and I really want to see Phantom the Dark keep commenting about Lilith or others with more of his "titles", can totally see him call her Speed of Sound Sonic if she goes Super Saiyan.

And I appreciate the length of time it took to reach the Chunin Exams, their development as characters and events that took place make the exams much more important, but if there is one thing I really hope doesn't happen, is the "obligatory" Orochimaru interrupt, I always found kind of annoying that every story, either using Team 7 or another, make the characters (OC/SI, etc) encounter Orochimaru for some reason.

The fact that you completely bypassed the Wave Mission is awesome and a miracle in itself, and the fact that Lilith, Hinata and Shino are pretty much the perfect team to go for a 30 minutes win in the Forest of Death make it kind of contrived for either to encounter any canon event, and knowing Lilith and her team, even if she/them wanted to help Naruto, he would not accept it that easily, and she is kind of blatant on how much she hates Sasuke, trauma is a scary thing, and his actions haven't helped his case in any way.

Oh, and it is nice how you take a character in the "Elite" Rank of Minato, Itachi and Kakashi, and take their progression in a reasonable speed and direction for the setting, since either of those Geniuses had a similar level of skill as Lilith in their preferred fields of study even at her age, and seeing that Itachi could kill all the Uchiha at 13-14, I can totally picture Lilith capable of a similar feat if she masters her "Super Saiyan Mode" and becomes more proficient on the "Sneks" teachings, its weird that Hiruzen would consider ANBU for her, seeing the tragedy of Itachi, she would indeed develop exponentially faster, but the risks are there with plenty of examples (Kakashi, Orochimaru, Itachi).

It is also nice how contrasting it is for a character like Itachi that arguably started with the same "gifts" as Lilith but with a completely different mentality that in the end was way worse than Lilith and much less sane.

And it is interesting how long it took for Lilith to start her development into Ninjutsu in a "full time" capacity, after all based on the Tags she does have the "All the Lasers / Pew Pew" Bloodline of Water+Lightning, which kinda makes sense even in Canon considering the Uzumaki (or any Redhead) had a pretty long list of powerful Bloodlines, seeing Mei for example. Looking forward to the Chunin Exams progression, its arguably one of the biggest power jumps in Canon Naruto for all characters, other than all the bullshit "Reincarnated, Son of Aliens, Bijuu, Eyes of God" Powerups of later, but that only applies to Narto/Jesus and Sauce/Judas, Senjutsu on the other hand its more relatable because technically everyone could develop it, no cheats or unique bloodlines for it, shame it wasn't used more for other characters in the series.

Thanks again for the story and fast updates, good luck ^.^
 
Dark was definitely a bit much, but the way he instantly broke character when his team played straightmen made it easily more comedic than cringeworthy.

As for Lili, it wasn't chuuni at all, they were literally having a conversation about what her moniker should be. Instead, it was a defining character moment, with her using the speech as a reaffirmation of her resolve during this important turning point in her legend.

That being said, even if it had been a little chuuni, she's 12-13 and this is Naruto. Chuuni may as well be par for the course.~
 
The Great Beyond
Scarlet Justice - ep. 31
"The Great Beyond"
[Chuunin Exams: First Round]
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It's a roar that rips through the area. Nobody dares to challenge the source of the voice, coming from the main entrance to the room.

A man in black, sinister looking with a black bandanna and deep scars on his face. He's flanked by numerous shinobi wearing the same type of grey uniforms. There are two signals I can recall from earlier...they must have been the ones scaring off the weaklings earlier. But the feeling I get from the man in black...it's very strong. Powerful...in a captivating way.

"You Hidden Sound idiots over there. I'll tell you and everyone this, one time: you don't get to fight unless I say so. I'm the law around here, got it?"

Everyone remains silent. He smirks.

"That's what I thought. Thanks for waiting...my name is Ibiki Morino, the examiner for the first test of this Chuunin Selection Exam. If you're interested in a quick exit, go ahead and piss me off. Let's get the test started. Don't worry about where you're sitting right now, first off. My assistants are going to happily pass along numbered tiles to you. Once you're all in your seats, we'll hand out the exam papers."

"P-p-p-papers?!" Naruto screams. "Paper TEST?!"

Oh, right. He's awful at those...bad luck for him. However, I suspect that there's more to this test than high scores. Let's see how it pans out...there are multiple parts to this experience, after all.

I get my number and settle into my seat. Ah, wonderful. A spot in the middle, right up front and close to the action. Tile 50.

Hm. Amusing.

I flick my tongue at the air briefly. Hinata is a ways ahead, meaning she got a lower number...about two rows, and to my right. Shino is three rows behind me, to my left. Our positions are locked in for the rest of this test. There's a young man in glasses directly right of me, and he seems to be in his twenties, maybe. A fair bit older than me, at any rate. To my direct left, there's a child who I can guess is only a year older than me at best, if not in the same year. He seems nervous...hiding it badly, but nervous all the same.

The 'elite chuunin' that are part of Ibiki's crew hand us our papers face down. They tell us to wait for instructions. Ibiki stands at attention until the very last sheet is placed, and then he begins writing on the blackboard at the front of the room.

"I'll explain the rules to you once. No questions, just pay attention," he says.

Sakura opens her fat mouth anyways. I record everything that Ibiki says, and the rules are thus.

Each participant starts with ten points in hand. The points system works by deduction. Each wrong answer takes a point away from our score of ten. A perfect score means that we keep all of our points, so we would have ten of them at the end.

Next, it's a points rush. This means teams are competing to see who's left with the highest score out of 30 at the end, or the combined score of each three person group.

And then, the most important rule as stated by Ibiki. The chuunin acting as officers will be seated on both sides of the room, watching for infractions. Cheating or anything similar will result in a permanent two point reduction if caught. This means that in the case of a perfect test, if you're caught cheating once the highest score you can get is eight points out of ten. We can cheat four times within this system, in theory. The fifth will leave us with a score of zero no matter what, and at that point we will be asked to leave the exams entirely.

But of course, this life isn't our own.

Losing all of our points or scoring zero will eject us from the exam, whichever applies first. But this is a team exam. If one of us scores zero, then everyone on the team will be forced to leave. In other words, we are only as strong as our weakest link. One person falling apart means that we're all done for. No matter how good you are, or how much potential you might have.

Naruto is some distance ahead, and I can see him clutching at his head in despair. He's definitely feeling the heat now.

"Make sure that you hold your heads high, and finish the test as proud shinobi," Ibiki says. "The exam will last one hour, no sooner and no longer than that. We start in sixty seconds. Good luck to all of you."

I let the information simmer, and then realize more than a few things. Cheating wouldn't be allowed according to the rules and would be immediately punished. But this is a wide open, spacious test room where anything can happen. Uchiha and especially Hyuuga wouldn't be allowed to take a test in a room like this under normal circumstances. It's far too easy for them to cheat by taking someone's answers with their doujutsu.

And with that, I understand the plot.

"Alright...begin!"

Five chances to cheat before being disqualified. Special ability and mystic eye users in a cut-throat examination scenario. Not just visual arts. Communication with animals. Special chakra signals. Secret jutsu. The list goes on. I flip the paper over, and all my thoughts are confirmed.

These are not questions genin children are meant to answer.

We have to cheat to win.

Now...considering all of that. It isn't an absolute, at least in my case. I've experienced a few of these sorts of questions before, thanks to a sheltered, elite upbringing. So that comes out to at least seven points easily, on my own. But this is a team effort, and I have to reduce the risk of Shino and Hinata failing. Already, I can sense the transmissions of chakra...those who understand are starting to move.

I casually run a hand through my hair. There it is...

"Good."

The small bug crawls into the safety of my sleeve and rests on my wrist. Shino is now accounted for, so now I would like to take care of Hina as soon as possible. She has yet to move...it hasn't clicked for her yet, it seems, but we will have a wealth of time before the exam ends.

The final question...is a dizzying one. We have to wait until forty five minutes pass before it's even asked, since it's not actually on the test paper itself. Is this another trap of sorts?

"Ugh..."

Oh. I had forgotten about the two people near me in the midst of my thoughts. The one on the right is answering questions confidently, as I assumed he would once the test was revealed. I can use him to funnel answers to Shino, perhaps. The one on the left isn't having a great time. I see him glance over at me once or twice. Suspicious, but I don't think he has anything that can bother me. And if he does...well, I don't know what the rules are regarding self-defense here. Best to think on it a bit more.

I pick up my pen and start to leisurely answer questions. And of course, I will show all of my work. It's only right. No need to rush anything...I will wait until Hinata starts to move before doing anything else.

Although...I really am curious about-

...

...

...

...is...someone here? Inside of my head? It's a strange feeling, like I'm floating right now.

"Hello?" I call out.

'She' is restless. There's...another chakra in here. But that doesn't make any sense, does it?

I can't move my body well. I can see outside, but it's like looking through a window. Paralysis? No...it's not that I'm frozen. It's...'resistance'. Something is pushing against my consciousness.

What...why is this so difficult? What's with her body?

That voice...so that's what this is.

Ne...is that you, Ino?

Ah? No wonder I'm having difficulty, you're still awake in here! And...and there was another you I passed by. She kept trying to bully me and was saying...d-dirty things!


Oh, I see. Yes, that was my S half.


Your what? Lili, what do you even...n-never mind. It might be too much for young girls. But...yeah, you caught me. I guess you know what I meant to do.

I do, yes. Oh, could you get that loose strand of hair for me?

Yep, one second.

I feel Ino move my arm, brushing back my hair for me.

Is that good?

Perfect. Thank you.

No problem. Sooo...you haven't written much of anything yet. How come?

I'm waiting for the promised time. Our team is going to synchronize soon.

I hear her sigh.

Oh. Well, that's bad luck for me, then. This jutsu takes up some energy.

I see.

Hmm...well, she's technically competition. But I do find her lovely, so...I think it should be fine, at least this once.

I can give you a bit of service, Ino.


Yeah? How so?


Do you see the young man next to me? He's pacing himself, but he's cleanly and confidently answering each question. At this rate, he'll be done soon. If you enter him the next time you use your technique, you should have a very easy time.

You're...helping me? Why?

I'm feeling very confident, and...well, that's what friends do, don't they?


Lili...I'll be sure to pay you back. I don't know how, but I will. Thank you...

Of course. Good luck, my dear Ino. And you can come back in to visit any time that you like~

Eh...I'll have to give that one some thought...you're seriously wild...


I find myself fully awake and back in control of my consciousness. What a unique experience. Another useful bit of information for the future.

Oh, it's time. Hinata's chakra is moving, and so is her pen. Ino is starting her technique again, so I steal a glance at the man beside me, and...out he goes. Good work, Ino. I stand up and let Shino's insect move ahead to Hinata.

"Bathroom, please~"

A pair of handcuffs are secured around my wrists. The men's and women's rooms are predictably in opposite directions. I'm led to my stall where I close the door behind me and unbuckle my belt. Right...those just in case kits on the inside of my cargo shorts, in small hidden pockets. Lessons from kunoichi classes led me to making small capsules for the emergencies we so frequently talked about.

As for the exam...I made sure to write Ino's name lightly at the top of my exam sheet, inside of a sentence of course, so that it isn't easily gleaned. Shino should have picked up on that and acted accordingly. I have my own system of communicating which I've whipped up, so we can test it once I get back...

A loud thumping interrupts my thoughts. "Hey. Don't take all day in there," my woman escort says.

"You have more than enough manpower in there. Should be no need for you to rush me," I reply.

"Sorry that I don't like waiting for dumb brats on the toilet all day."

I roll my eyes before pulling up my tights and shorts, and buckling my belt again. I wash my hands and dry them with paper towel...she's watching me carefully to make sure that I don't take any extra. There's no problem there, since I already have some tissue paper stashed underneath my waistband. Just in case.

"Are we okay now? Or does the pretty princess want to make sure I'm not cheating extra hard?" I ask mockingly.

"You've got some nerve, you little bitch."

"I've got it in spades, you old bat."

She snorts before pulling me roughly by the arm, back towards the exam hall. I get back to my seat and she unlocks my handcuffs. "Don't worry too much. I'll make sure to pass so that I never have to see your wrinkled face again," I say with a cruel smile.

She makes a face before shaking her head at me, smiling. "Got some balls on you, kiddo. Make sure you don't fuck it up."

I nod to acknowledge her before sitting down, rubbing my wrists a bit and then picking up my pen. A kunai then flies across the room and accurately pins down a paper in someone's hands nearby.

"Number 45, you fail. Take your teammates and get the hell out. Number 78 and 33, greet your shitty teammate at the door," the officer yells.

At this point, several teams have already screwed up and gotten themselves kicked out. Such is the nature of these things.

"Mm." I feel something enter my hair. So...Shino has already moved. I write a few phrases on the back of my sheet as planned, then let the bug settle on my desk. It stops for a moment on a few of them, allowing me to put some pieces together as it settles in my palm again.

From this I can gather that Hinata is either finishing or almost finished. Her chakra is indicating the latter. Shino is saying from this that he's finished as well. That makes me the last one, and there's still time. Alright, then we can make this count. I send the insect back after indicating I need the answers to 5 and 8. Those are the only fuzzy ones left...after that, I can relax.

Out of the corner of my eye, I notice movement on my left. It's just a flash, but I notice the kunai in that boy's hand. If he...

My eyes fly open and I get a good look at him. There are explosive tags attached to the kunai, a bundle of them. He has it held on the seat so that nobody can see it other than us. He's shaking, sweat running down his face as he stares at me with bloodshot eyes.

"I won't...again. I won't go back. Give them to me...the answers. Please."

He can't be this desperate. Can he? But...but I don't know. I don't know what's going through his head. Ino...she's too far and I can't call to her. Hina is also too far and she can't do much. Shino can't do anything without outing himself and getting caught for cheating. I can't get up and go to the bathroom again so soon.

He was waiting for this. This bastard.

Whether or not he fails as a result isn't the problem...if he goes through with it, for whatever reason, everyone in the area will die or be horribly maimed as a result. Including me. Hinata and Shino won't be able to continue. Worse than that...everyone...I...I can't die here. I can't. Hasn't anyone noticed? I don't know how many strikes he has, or I could just do something to get him kicked out right away.

I have to...calm down.

"P-please...it's too much..."

"What...do you mean?" I ask. "Why are you doing this?"

"If I fail...again...my family...just give me what I want."

I keep my head pointed towards the front. I'm shaking. Kill...I should kill him right now. Take his life. But if I do that, then Team Eight...everything we worked for will disappear. What can I do? What should I do? I feel scared...I feel...

Oh.

If I had...done better. If I hadn't been so afraid, so hurt...then I...

Midori. I can her her voice, filled with pain. I can feel her sorrow. Her regret. I think of her, crying for me. I think of Luna, broken and empty inside after I disappear. A vigil with Hina wailing uncontrollably. With Shino unable to move. With Kurenai blaming herself, despairing. Naruto giving into fury. Iruka, feeling helpless. My heart aches so much that I can't stand it. I can't accept that kind of future. I can't leave this world.

He is for real. He wants to succeed, to save his family, to make something of himself. And he will go this far to do it. He would light those tags, and nothing would be able to save us. I can't wait fifteen more minutes for the final question. I don't even think I can wait fifteen more seconds at this point. I can't ignore him. I can't run away.

Be proud shinobi!

Ibiki's voice rings through my ears. Pride. I will use that to move forward.

Just as Hina declared...I will not run away. Never again.

"A person with nothing to lose is said to be the most dangerous type of being," I say to him quietly.

"..."

"But I am not a normal person. That was your first mistake. And it will be your very last."

I strike. I grab his wrist and squeeze until I feel it break, making him bite his lip to stifle the scream that would have come out. The kunai drops from his hand and into one of mine, which I slowly use to put into one of the pockets of my shorts.

My hand is still around his wrist, and he's about to break from the pain and terror.

Then I will send him straight over the edge. My switch is flipped on.

"Was this what you wanted?" I whisper. "Tell me...was this is it? The thing you risked your life for? The thing you shed tears for?"

"I...please..."

I pull him close to me, close enough that I can speak into his ear, so that I can drill my hatred into his brain. I can feel him trembling. I can smell his fear. "You crossed me. You made me think bad things. You made me hurt. You made me despair. You did the most unforgivable thing. You tried to take from me. You will never take from me. My loved ones, my family, my life. You sinned against me, and I will make you suffer for it, you fucking trash."

"No...p-please...I just..."

"Struggle and suffer. I will find you, and then I will devour you. And I will enjoy every single moment...boy."

I lick his cheek before roughly shoving him off, leaving him to clutch his shattered wrist as he sobs. None of the officials has moved an inch. It would have been well worth the loss of points if they did, but I'm not complaining.

I secretly want him to pass. Just so that I can find him, and end him myself.

It takes a while...but I can calm down, finally. I let the visions fade away, and settle down to focus on the rest of my test. Ten minutes to go. Hina makes a signal in the distance that I take as a sign things are well, and I sign back so that she can see with her Byakugan. Shino sends back a message with his bugs using our hastily formed system, and we check our answers with each other.

The ten minutes are long and tense. Fantasies about killing the trash beside me start to creep into my head, and it takes some effort to shove them down. That hunger is faint, but present. I know what I have to do...I will take care of it, soon enough.

"Alright, it's time for the tenth question," Ibiki announces. He positions himself at the front of the room again. "There are some extra rules for this question, so pay attention. First...you have to decide whether you want to take it or not."

The blonde girl from the Sand speaks up. I wish I could have been next to her...what a treat. "What if we choose not to?" she asks.

"Then your points are automatically reduced to zero, and you fail along with your teammates. Simple," Ibiki responds. From the scattered reactions, the choice is obvious.

Beware the shuriken's shadow.


Iruka repeated it alot. And he made a point of doing it before certain tests. There's more to come with this question, then.

"And now, the other rule. If you choose to take up the tenth question, and you answer incorrectly..."

The air is being sucked away from the room as we wait.

"You will lose the right to take the Chuunin Selection Exam...for as long as you live."

And there it is. The shuriken hiding in its partner's shadow.

"Now, there's a way out, since I'm such a generous guy," he says with a sarcastic smile. "If you so choose, you can forfeit. Quit the exam right here, right now, and you can take it freely again next year. Maybe you won't draw me the next time in the first round. Maybe the last question will be different, or there won't be one like this again. Who knows. But of course, you remember...if you quit, your teammates have to go home with you. Your choice. If you want to back out, raise your hand. The officers will confirm your numbers and you can leave as a group."

Ibiki leans back against the front desk, hands in the pockets of his coat.

"Now...let's begin. We're answering the tenth and final question."

Immediately, people start to crack. They file out with their teams, three by three. I hear apologies and cries of disappointment. The trash next to me obviously isn't going anywhere unless his teammates do, and they must know of his desperation.

So...the answer to the question. First...taking it up. And next...we-

I heard a loud thud ahead of me suddenly.

"Don't underestimate me! I'm not gonna run away! Even if I end up a genin forever...even if my path is closed off...I'll become Hokage some other way! I'll make it to my dream, no matter what! I promise you that!" Naruto yells.

Ibiki stands up again and takes his hands out of his pockets. "This is your last chance to back off," he warns Naruto. "I'll ask one more time...you sure you want to do this?"

"I don't ever go back on my word. That's my shinobi way!"

And with that, the room is galvanized into action. The dark atmosphere from earlier is gone, replaced with confidence. No more quitting. No more running. Naruto has lifted every spirit in the room...and so, nobody will turn back now.

Not that it was ever an option for us. "Hina! Shino! Did you receive that idiot's message?" I call out.

"Easily. We move ever forward," Shino calls back.

"Through the flames, and every obstacle in our path. We persevere," Hina calls out.

"Don't underestimate us, either," I say to the room. "This is the strength of the magnificent Team Eight. And more than that...it's the strength of Leaf shinobi!"

"Yeah!" Naruto yells in approval.

Ibiki sighs. "Well, I guess nobody else is moving. Then, to all you still remaining..."

Again, it feels like the air is being sucked away as everyone tenses up, and Ibiki...

...smiles.

"Congratulations! You've passed the first test!"

"Eh...ehhhhhh?!" As always, Naruto is the picture of confusion. But I have a feeling that I know what's going on.

"Heh. You could say there never was something truly called question ten...the last two questions you were just asked were the essence of it, in any case."

The first nine questions were as I suspected: a test for information gathering. The questions were all far beyond genin level thinking, and so cheating was not only the best, but the preferred option. And the trick was indeed to do so without getting caught - the explanation for all the chances and a decreasing point system. Some chuunin were also planted with the correct answers. To my right is number 51, the gentleman who I directed Ino to. He is one of those plants.

He extends his hand towards me, and I shake willingly.

"Congratulations. Good work as well."

"Thank you."

"May I have the weapon?"

I nod and hand him the kunai with the explosive notes attached. He seems awestruck before pushing up his glasses.

"Seriously impressive work. But...I could feel your murderous intent chill my bones. What do you want to do? The next round...offers an opportunity."

I lick my lips. The hunger is slowly building. "I want him...for myself."

"Understood. I'll report to Ibiki, but you should be able to get what you want."

"Thank you."

I watch as Ibiki removes his head covering...I can see why it's in place. His head is dotted with screw holes, and there are burns and scars all over...evidence of horrific torture. The price of intelligence in the shinobi world. Torture is far from a joke. The purpose of this test is to separate the wheat from the chaff...those who could cheat properly, and those who could not for the sake of their comrades for the first section.

And for the second, the true reason for the test. It connects cleanly with the very first test that Kurenai and all the other instructors gave their children to determine who even entered this room.

"If you become chuunin and get assigned dangerous missions for the village, do you think you get to pick and choose which ones you go on? Do you think you get to run away whenever you want?" Ibiki asks as he puts his bandana back on. "The ability to be courageous...to suffer hardships...to lead no matter what the situation. Those are the things needed to be a chuunin. The captain of a team! Anyone who chooses to walk away from a chance out of fear, who hope for a next time...any trash who makes those kinds of choices isn't fit to become a chuunin!" He yells. "Or a shinobi, period! That's how I see it. And that was what the last question determined. Your courage and your will. Leading a team isn't just about how many flashy techniques you can learn...it takes more. Much more!" He claps his gloved hands once. "But you here who have answered the tenth question correctly, by choosing not to run...your futures are bright, and you'll be able to overcome whatever comes your way."

He smirks and looks over the room one more time. "With all that said, the first test is now finished. Good luck, all of you!"

"Hell yeah!" Naruto yells.

Something then bursts through the nearby window, and a strange figure appears with a black banner unfurled behind them.

"There's no time to rest on your heels! Don't get cocky! Anko Mitarashi, examiner for the second test! Let's go!"

A woman with purple hair, bound into a fan-like ponytail. She has on a trench coat, and a mesh bodysuit with a skirt over it. I get a strange feeling from her, but not the same as the one from Ibiki...and as her eyes lock with mine for a moment, I understand.

She has a contract, too.

"Eh? Ibiki...how many of them?"

"Seventy-eight this year."

"Seventy-eight?! What the hell...your test was too damn easy this year! Whatever. I'll just slash the numbers down, then...all you runts follow me, and I'll explain everything once we reach the new venue. No time to lose!" Anko gives me another glance before leaving.

"Number 50...before you head out, a word? Won't keep you from the next round's fun," Ibiki says to me.

"Yes, sir." I head to the front of the room and stand in front of him. He kneels down to meet me.

"You okay?"

"Yes. I'm fine, sir."

"You're sure now...I'm not here to judge."

"I...thought about it," I admit. "I thought about dying. That it would be over for me, right then and there. I was thinking that it was so...unfair."

"That's a fair feeling. If I was your age...and in that situation. I wouldn't know what to do. I'm sure it's happened before, and people have given in just to avoid getting hurt. What you did was dangerous...and very brave. I assure that it wasn't a test on my part, or some sort of prank. That guy was really ready to risk it all for the sake of a test. Desperation doesn't excuse any of it." He clenches a fist. "Not everyone who deserves to fail does, unfortunately. I can't forgive that kind of trash."

He's...far more than just a tough man. "Thank you."

"It's nothing. We talk a lot about being proud shinobi, and about killing our emotions and feelings, about being strong and unbreakable. But we're human on the inside. We have hopes, and dreams, needs and fears. You know that...that's how you could do what you did."

"Ibiki-sensei. Thank you again. I'll remember your concern."

He nods and smiles. "Think about joining Intelligence, kiddo. We could use someone with your strength of character one day."

"I'll consider it. But I really do want to travel the world, and find a wife first."

"Heh. A man's romance, eh? Considering what I've heard about you, it makes sense. Alright, get going before Anko drives herself up a wall. Oh, and one more thing."

"Yes, sir?"

"Watch out for that joker, Uzumaki." He rubs his head, amused. "I didn't believe it when I saw, but..."

"Let me guess. He didn't answer a single question."

"Yeah."

I smile at him as I leave. "That's definitely Naruto."

As I head out after Anko's group, I hear the sound of hearty laughter. Ibiki is...a very good person. I'm glad to have met him this day.

And now...I'm on my way to the next stage, after proving my courage. This Scarlet Viper will show her fangs in time.
 
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