Ring-Maker [Worm/Lord of the Rings Alt-Power] [Complete]

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Just to keep everyone posted, I'm probably going to have to slow my update pace to once a week after finishing Sheen. I'm going back to school in a couple weeks. I'm also going to take off an update day at some point to edit the earlier parts of this story. Not sure when.
 
Just to keep everyone posted, I'm probably going to have to slow my update pace to once a week after finishing Sheen. I'm going back to school in a couple weeks. I'm also going to take off an update day at some point to edit the earlier parts of this story. Not sure when.
Amusingly my update schedule is about to do the reverse of yours. Once I get this exam out of the way tomorrow... at 8am... who the fuck decides the times for these exams? I haven't had one later than 10am in the last two years. Good luck with school! You'll need it! *Snickering Kitsune*
 
Interlude 4b: Victoria
Many thanks to @dwood15, @Technetium43, @fabledFreeboota, and @Assembler for betareading.
Many thanks to @MugaSofer for fact checking.


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Vicky sat with her legs crossed, one over the other, idly worrying her lower lip with her teeth as her eyes traversed the pages of her book. It was a textbook—a long, rambling thing for Parahumans 103.

Why am I taking Parahumans 103? she wondered, raising her eyes to the ceiling some two feet away from her face. It's a bit like, I don't know, a tinker taking an engineering course, isn't it?

She slowly turned over in the air so that she was belly-down and held the book in one hand while the other ran through her hair, idly combing out the tangles that came with turning around in midair.

Vicky loved her hair, she really did—thick, luxurious blonde curls that surrounded and framed her face in a bright halo. Almost any other head of hair wouldn't have been able to pull off a tiara, but the gold-on-gold worked better than it had any right to. Nonetheless, thick, curly hair tangled, and slowly rotating in three dimensions was not ideal for maintaining a careful hairstyle.

She closed her eyes tightly and looked back at the book, trying to focus.

It is believed that the particular powers which manifest following a trigger event are tailored to that trigger event in some way. Certain patterns have been observed. In Brutality and Brutes, Dr. Osmond Blake explores a statistical link between brute powers and triggers involving physical injury or…

Vicky blinked once, languidly. It's my fourth time reading that passage, isn't it?

She started laughing. The textbook dropped out of her fingers and landed on her bed, bouncing.

She slowly dropped, picked it up, and tossed it across the room onto her desk, where it landed with a hollow thump. Still laughing, she cut her power and dropped the remaining foot and a half to her bed, landing on her side. The bed creaked under her sudden weight and for a moment she bounced up and down before the mattress settled under her.

She sighed, the mirth fading, and stared up at her ceiling. The light fixture—a plain, round thing with an internal incandescent bulb—showed every faint crack in the plaster in sharp relief.

I should talk to Mom about redoing the paint.

There was a knock on her door. "Come in!" she called, and when it opened she grinned. "Hey, Ames."

One of Amy's brows were raised and she looked Vicky up and down. "I'd ask if you usually go to bed in costume, but I know you don't. What's up?"

Vicky made a 'pfft' sound and looked back up at the ceiling. "A villain's out there rampaging with bombs, and I'm stuck here doing homework." She rolled her eyes. "Mom won't let me go out unless there's a crisis, but if there is a crisis, I don't wanna wait to change. I am gone."

Amy chuckled. "Bored?"

"Suuuuper bored." Vicky glanced over at her sister. "What about you?"

Amy shrugged. "Just reading. Heard you laughing. What was that about?"

"Oh, nothing. I just—" Vicky giggled again. "I was trying to study. Can't do it."

"And that's funny?"

"Once you've read the same sentence four times without getting it, yeah. A little bit."

Amy shrugged and came forward, sitting down at the foot of the bed. She reminded Vicky of a bird, perched on a branch, ready to fly at a moment's notice.

"What were you studying?"

"Parahuman studies. Amy, why am I taking that class?"

Amy chuckled. "Don't ask me. Having second thoughts?"

"So many second thoughts." Vicky turned away from her sister and looked out her bedroom window. She frowned. "Hey, Ames?"

"Yeah?"

"Do you have your phone?"

"Yeah, why?"

Vicky's brow creased. "Can you look up whether that bitch lit the city on fire recently?"

Amy shifted behind her, stood up, and looked out the window too. "Oh," she said succinctly. "Yeah, I'll check."

She started fumbling in her pocket even as Vicky swung her legs over the other side of the bed and stood up, approaching the window and looking out. The fire was bright, orange and red. She couldn't see the flames themselves, of course—it wasn't that close—but the glow cast light against the tall buildings and sent smoke and haze into the sky, glowing.

"Oh, fuck."

"What is it?" Vicky asked quickly.

"…I've got good news and bad news."

"Good news first. I like good news."

"It's not Bakuda."

Vicky's brows rose. "Hey, that is good news."

"It's Lung."

Vicky's brows fell again. "Oh."

"Yeah."

There was a moment's silence.

"Okay!" said Vicky brightly. "Sorry to dash, Ames, but I gotta run!"

"No," said Amy, her voice monotone and deadpan. "You are not rushing off to fight Lung."

"Amy is quite right."

Vicky turned. There was her mother, standing in the doorway, in full costume. The orange crossed blades on the white made Vicky's fingers itch slightly, as they always did. Time for action.

"I just got off the phone with your aunt," she said. "Who was contacted by Director Piggot. The Protectorate has engaged Lung while the Wards attack Über and Leet. Vicky, you and your cousins are going to join the Wards. Your aunt and uncle and I are going to join the Protectorate. Understood?"

"What about Dad?" Amy asked.

Brandish looked away. "He'll be coming with me," she said. "If he comes at all."

Vicky grimaced. "One of his bad days? Surely a little cape fight would make him feel better? Can't he pull himself together for this?"

"That," Amy said, her voice frosty, "is not how depression works, Vicky."

Vicky gritted her teeth and looked back out the window. "So what's the plan?"

"Laserdream and Shielder are coming here now," said Brandish. "Laserdream is in contact with the PRT and will lead you to the Wards. You're to follow her lead, understand?"

"Yes, Mom."

Brandish smiled under her mask. "Good. Good luck, Vicky, and be careful."

Vicky leapt forward with a power-assisted lunge and embraced her mother. "I'll be fine," she said. "I'm invincible. You be careful—you're all squishy."

Brandish laughed and hugged her back. "Go," she ordered. "Your cousins will be on the front porch any minute."

Vicky pulled away from her mother and gave her sister a jaunty wave over her shoulder. "Later, Sis," she said.

Amy waved back. "Go beat up bad guys." Vicky could practically hear the unspoken, but not too badly.

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Vicky reached the warehouse just in time to see a body in a red suit tumbling through the air, shards of broken glass scattering around it. The thickset form slowed on the way down, the glass passing it up as its flight kicked in.

A little thing like flight wasn't going to stop Vicky from seizing this one by the horns, though. She caught Aegis' bulky form halfway down to the ground. He blinked brown eyes at her for a moment.

"Just dropping for a visit?" she asked.

"…You know I can fly, yes?"

Vicky shrugged. "Hey, not every day beefcakes drop out of the sky."

Aegis laughed—a faint, incredulous sound. "Fair enough." He extricated himself from her arms and put a finger to his ear. "Annatar, Glory Girl is on site," he said, picking shards of broken glass out of his costume and flesh.

"Laserdream and Shielder are just behind me," Vicky said.

Aegis nodded. "You heard that?" A pause. "Right. I'll go scout. Call me back if you need me." He removed his finger from his ear. "Vicky, I'm going to go up and see if I can figure out where Bakuda is. Help the others out."

"Will do."

Aegis rose upward like a shot and shrank into the night sky. Vicky watched his shapely legs disappear into the black and then followed him up part of the way, diving into the window he'd broken on his way out.

The room was empty, but the moment she passed the threshold of the window, Vicky could hear running feet heading away down the hallway. Then came a cry and a scuffling, as of two bodies grappling with one another.

She ran through the doorway and quickly sidestepped Kid Win's flying form as he was thrown past her into the wall. Über was running the other way, half-dressed. Comically large goggles were on his face—so large, in fact, that she could see the outsides of the frames even from behind him—but other than that his bulk was wearing only a tight t-shirt and jeans.

You know, he's not half bad looking, she thought as she rose into the air and flew towards him. It's such a shame he's a jackass.

She bowled him over just as he came to a flight of stairs, and with a shout he started to fall, reaching for her to catch himself. His hand caught on her wrist and he blinked up at her.

She grinned at him. "Stop, in the name of the la-ah!" He twisted his wrist in her grip, leveraging his half-fallen position to throw her in midair. She went rolling in the air above the stairway for a couple feet as he slid back up.

She righted herself quickly, but he was already running back down the hallway, in the other direction. "Oh, no you don't!" She dove after him only to overshoot her mark as he slipped into an open doorway.

She didn't bother going back for the door and instead burst through the wooden wall behind him even as Kid Win picked himself back up and rushed to join her. There were more footsteps from the other side, coming up the stairs—the other Wards, hopefully.

Uber was halfway through opening a window when she came in. A smirk spread across her features as she charged.

She struck his back hard, sending him tumbling over the windowsill and falling out of the warehouse. She vaulted after him and flew down. He'd rolled as he landed, coming up standing, and was already running.

She dove and punched him. He didn't try to block; instead, he allowed her to strike him and used the force to push himself forward and around the corner. She sped after him and caught a glimpse of him as he ducked back into the warehouse's front door. The door slammed shut behind him.

She busted through the concrete wall and saw him sprinting towards a table on the side of the room. As she charged him, he picked something up from it and rolled out of her way.

He raised it as she turned back. It was a sword, glowing faintly blue.

"Stay back," he growled, flicking something on the hilt. The glow began to flicker rapidly, so rapidly that Vicky almost couldn't tell the difference.

"Buddy," she said, "I'm invincible."

He brandished the sword. "To impacts, maybe. This thing will deliver several thousand volts to you, about three hundred times a second."

She cocked her head. "…You know I'm invincible to electric shocks too?" although, privately, she was suddenly feeling a lot more cautious. The rapid attacks would get through my barrier.

He blinked. "Wait, really?"

"Yeah."

"Oh." Über looked down at the sword in his hand, then sighed. "If I surrender, can you please not hit me again?"

"Sure."

He tossed the sword back on the table. The blade, still active, sheared cleanly through the wood and stuck about a foot into the concrete below. He blinked at the damage for a moment. "Oops."

Vicky punched him. He was thrown back a couple feet and landed hard on his ass.

"Ow! The fuck, bitch?"

"You deserved it," she said easily, turning towards the stairs. Clockblocker was leading Gallant, Vista, and Shadow Stalker down to her at a jog. Vicky waggled her brows at Gallant, raising one hand to her ear in a 'call me' sign. He gave her a nod, but she couldn't see his face under the helmet.

"Where's Leet?" she asked.

Shadow Stalker pointed at an adjoining doorway where, sure enough, two feet were sticking out of the darker room. "Already taken care of," she said.

At that moment, the warehouse's main door opened, and in stepped Laserdream, Shielder at her heels.

Vicky's elder cousin stalked across the room until she was standing directly in front of her. Her eyes were hard, and she said nothing.

Vicky grinned. "Hey, coz. You missed the fun!"

Laserdream didn't reply, turning instead to Clockblocker. "Where's Aegis?" she asked.

"He and Kid Win have gone on ahead to scout," the Ward replied. "Annatar's on tactical command, from on console." He turned to Shadow Stalker. "Tranquilizers?"

Shadow Stalker nodded and withdrew a crossbow bolt, approaching Über's still seated form. "Nighty night, loser," she said, jabbing it into his neck.

"Fuck you very much," he replied. Then, without further ceremony, he fell back.

"Vicky Dallon."

"Glory Girl when I'm in costume," Vicky told her cousin with a cheeky grin. "Wouldn't want to unmask me to these fine people, would you?"

Clockblocker snickered. Laserdream was unimpressed. "I know your mom told me I was in command," she said. "So when I said, scout ahead and don't engage until I give the word, what part of that did you misunderstand?"

"Über threw Aegis out a window."

"Aegis can fly."

Vicky shrugged.

"New Wave." The voice came from the radio Shadow Stalked had pulled from her belt. It was cool and hard; female, but not especially feminine.

Vicky turned, blinking.

"I'm Annatar," said the person on the other end of the radio. "I've been coordinating this mission. We're not done yet. We need to find Bakuda's hideout and take her out."

"Wait, what?" Laserdream's voice was sharp. "You want to attack a tinker's hideout now, without any of the Protectorate or most of New Wave?"

"Yes." Annatar sounded almost surprised at the question. "She's been blowing up my city. I'm not about to let that continue."

"Have you got a plan?" Vicky cut in.

"Aegis and Kid Win are scouting from the air. I'd appreciate assistance to them. You can all fly."

"What are we looking for?" Vicky asked.

"Movement around the fight with Lung. We're under orders not to interfere with that fight itself, but we know both Oni Lee and Lung are there, so if we can find Bakuda's hideout she should be alone."

"It is a tinker's hideout, though," Clockblocker said.

"Yes," agreed Annatar. "And a much better tinker than Leet. Be careful, everyone. Vista, you're transportation for the ground team. New Wave, are you willing to join Aegis and Kid Win in the air?"

Laserdream was shaking her head. "This is crazy. We were supposed to help you with Über and Leet, not jump into an attack on Bakuda herself."

"Hey," said Vicky, a smirk on her lips. "You wanna head home, you can feel free.I'm sure your mom will understand if you were scared to face the big bad tinker on her own terms."

Laserdream glared at Vicky. "You need to listen when someone else is in charge," she said sharply. "I really don't want to have to tell your mom that you were hurt because you charged in on your own—"

"I'm invincible—"

"—and I also don't want my little brother getting hurt because you were a careless idiot," Laserdream steamrolled over her.

"You will have time for this later." Annatar sounded annoyed. "The Wards are moving out. We're running out of time. Help or don't."

"I'll help," said Vicky immediately.

Laserdream sighed. "I guess we will too," she said. "Let's go. But I'm going to talk to your mom about this, Vicky."

Vicky shrugged. When Laserdream turned away, she threw Gallant a wink, and carefully wiggled her hips a little more than strictly necessary as she followed her cousins out of the warehouse.

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It'll be interesting to actually see Vicky interact with Taylor at Arcadia.

The dynamic between Crystal and Vicky here was an unusual one for fanfics. I think it was interesting. You got Glory Girl's showboating about right, and I thought the overt attention to boys' looks was a good touch to her character. She seems to me to be a challenging character to do well. Done poorly, she's Shadow Stalker with better PR, or the author forgets that she isn't a paragon of good-heartedness.

The truth is tricky, because she IS the popular girl, and she DOES get full of herself and hurt people in her self-righteousness, but she also really does mean well and care about others as long as they've not made her angry. And one of the biggest mistakes people make is writing her such that she gets angry at people over petty things and blows that up to them being a villain. It could happen, certainly, but the canon examples are usually the person actually being a villain and, worse, outright taking Amy hostage or otherwise hurting or threatening to hurt her. For all her flaws, Vicky really does love Amy.

Heck, I think she cares about Amy enough that, if she and Marquis were to meet and for some reason knew nothing about each other besides how they cared for Amy, they'd get along smashingly.
 
This is going to backfire horribly, isn´t it? They´re attacking a bomb Tinker. In her lair no less. Leet already got them good and he´s far more limited in what he can deploy.
 
Sheen 4.4
Many thanks to @dwood15, @Technetium43, @fabledFreeboota, and @Assembler for betareading.
Many thanks to @MugaSofer for fact checking.


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"Aegis," I said as the New Wave heroes left the warehouse, "Laserdream, Shielder, and Glory Girl are coming to join you. Be ready to control Glory Girl; she's being… rowdy."

"As usual," he said with a sigh. He sounded almost as fond as he was exasperated, though. "I'll keep her in line."

"See that you do," I said. "Keep looking." I swapped over to a private channel. "Browbeat, this is Annatar."

"Hey. How's the operation going?"

"Well enough. The others took out Über and Leet without too much trouble. Glory Girl came in and finished the job. Listen, are you anywhere near Dauntless?"

"Kinda? I'm a floor up from him right now. You need something?"

I considered. "First, I need a second opinion," I said. "If I told the Protectorate we were going after Bakuda's base, how likely would they be to play ball?"

"Not at all," said Browbeat instantly. "Partly to protect us, partly to protect their reputations."

"That was my assessment, too," I said. "Shit. Do you think you could just listen in on Dauntless on console, and see if you can figure out anything about where they think Bakuda is?"

"Sure. No promises that it'll turn up anything, though."

"I know. Just try."

"I will. Are you… sure you want to go behind their backs like this?"

"That woman has been blowing up my city for a week. Better to ask forgiveness than permission." I swapped back to my open channel with the other Wards. "Aegis, situation?"

"Still nothing," he said, his gaze scanning the city below. "Since we got New Wave support, I left Kid Win with the captives until the PRT arrives. Rest of us are still scouting up here. Any insight?"

"Not yet," I said. "I've got Browbeat on it. Keep looking. Clockblocker, how are things on the ground?"

"I have a moral objection to running towards the things Lung is setting on fire."

"Suck it up. Where are you?"

"A couple blocks from the fighting. Looking for anybody who isn't running away."

"Sounds about right. Vista, you're keeping the group mobile?"

"Of course."

"Then carry on." I leaned back against my seat and scanned the six screens before me, looking for anything amiss. It was entirely possible we would find nothing at all today; that all this effort would be for nothing. But we have to try.

"Sure you don't want us to help with Lung?"
That was Sophia's voice, breaking the silence.

"Aegis is in command," I said, "but if it were my decision, no. The Protectorate and New Wave can handle that on their own, and someone has to stop Bakuda while the heavy hitters are distracted."

"I agree, for the record," Aegis put in. "None of us really has the training for that kind of fight. We'd get in the way, not because we can't fight, but because we don't train with the Protectorate. We wouldn't be coordinated."

"Fair enough,"
said Sophia.

"Annatar." It was Browbeat. His voice was pitched slightly low, and was a little tense with excitement.

"Yes, Browbeat?"

"I've got something. Dauntless said something about the battle moving west; the heroes are chasing Lung that way."

"Think he's drawing them away from something?"

"I do. It's just a hunch."

"You're the bearer of Ondoya. Your hunches are good. Wards, focus on the area to the east of the fight with Lung."

"Got it," said Aegis, and a moment later, "We've got something. Camouflaged sentry on a balcony."

I looked through his screen—and, sure enough, there was a man carefully hidden, hunched on one balcony in the shadow of another in a several-story apartment complex. His clothes were dark and the gun in his hands was black, making him hard to spot, but he was certainly there.

"Don't let him spot you. Think Glory Girl could manage a silent takedown?"

Aegis relayed the question. The New Wave hero answered, "Silent's not really my style, but yeah, sure. Want me to?"

"Wait on that. Aegis, you and New Wave continue scouting. Vista, you know where this building is?"

"Not really." Vista and the other grounded Wards were huddled just outside the flickering light of a streetlamp. "We're on the intersection of Beach and Wilde."

I nodded to myself. "Aegis, you don't happen to know the address of this building?"

"Not the number. It's on Stafford."

"Right. Vista, it's on the street two blocks north of you, on the far side. Stay out of sight and see if you can identify the building."

"On it."

"Another sentry."
Aegis again. "And on a different floor. They've got the whole building on lockdown."

"I expected as much." I scanned the image of the building on his screen. There were two balconies on each of the building's five floors, one on either side. Other than that, there was an elevator and a penthouse on the roof, and a single main entrance on the ground floor. All of the windows were dark, and many of the curtains and blinds were drawn or lowered. "We should expect every entrance to be booby-trapped."

"Want me to go through a wall again?" Sophia asked.

"No," I replied. "With Über and Leet, I knew the numbers we were dealing with—two low-tier villains. This time, we have at least one high-tier villain and an unknown number of mooks. It's too risky."

"We have sight of the target," reported Clockblocker, and it was true—the four grounded capes were leaning out from behind a corner to see the very building Aegis had pointed out.

I bit my lip. "Vista, can you tunnel your group up to one of the balconies?"

"Just tell me which one."

"Second floor, on the right. There's a guy there, and the curtains are drawn. Clockblocker, you'll need to move quick to freeze him before he sounds the alarm."

"All right, I can see it. Ready when you are."

"Okay. Aegis, you and Glory Girl lead your group in by the roof. Don't take the stairs; they'll be trapped for sure, and a brute rating won't protect you from some of her bombs. Have Glory Girl break the roof in on my mark."

"Got it; on the move."

I took a deep breath. "Vista, on my mark, you give Clockblocker a tunnel, and Aegis, you have Glory Girl give you a route in."

"Ready." Vista.

"Understood." Aegis.

I swallowed. If anyone dies tonight, I don't know if I'll be able to forgive myself. "Mark."

With a gesture, Vista shifted space. Slowly the road in front of them shifted as the warp stretched and coalesced—instead of continuing sidewalk, she and the others were faced with the end of a balcony, and a guy huddled in a corner, a gun held loosely in one hand. He blinked and started up as he saw them, his mouth opening to yell, but Clockblocker got to him first, and he froze mid-motion.

Simultaneously, Glory Girl dove straight into the roof, the plaster and masonry crumbling beneath her. Aegis, Laserdream, and Shielder followed her in and my view of his screen was faced with the surprised image of a single guy with a pistol right before Glory Girl threw him into a wall. He slid down to the floor, out cold.

"Aegis, keep going down, floor by floor," I said. "We'll know when we find her. Clockblocker, move into the building and comb this floor."

"Gallant, you're on point." Clockblocker's voice was firm and level.

Gallant nodded and, after taking a moment to roll his shoulders, burst straight through the glass door, the curtains billowing around him. He dove immediately—fortunate for him, since gunfire immediately sounded around him. He came up already launching blasts from both hands even as Vista stepped in after him and began twisting the air around him, keeping him safe from flying bullets. Sophia phased into shadow and dove for the nearest enemy, while Clockblocker hung back for a moment to give me a view of the room.

Several of the internal walls had been knocked down on the second floor. The whole place reminded me uncomfortably of my own workshop. Wiring covered the floors, linking one contraption and workplace to another in a crisscrossing web of cables. I knew some well—a power hammer, a forge, a traditional anvil, a couple of microforges. Then there were some I recognized but didn't use myself—a chemist's worktable, replete with decanters and vials; a fume hood like the one in Winslow's chemistry labs, and a couple of sealed vats in one corner.

There were eight guys in heavy riot gear, assault rifles in their hands. Bakuda was nowhere to be seen.

Even as the fighting began in earnest, Glory Girl broke through the ceiling of the fourth floor, then the third. I noticed she was taking about a second between each burst, but paid no mind to it; something to ask about later.

Vista gave Clockblocker a short route to a second as Sophia fired bolts at two and then ducked to solidify, allowing the bolts to connect—one managed to dodge, but the other staggered as the tranquilizer bolt solidified already halfway inside his vest, buried in his chest. Gallant's blasts launched at two more guys, both of whom dove out of the way. They avoided the blasts, but were now lying belly-down on the ground.

Two down. Sophia's target was falling and Clockblocker's guy was frozen. Six remained, however.

"Shoot Vista!" I heard one shout, even as Glory Girl broke through the last floor and Aegis dove onto one gunman. "Kill Vista!"

"Not likely,"
hissed Clockblocker, and everything slowed.

I smiled slightly. Silmaya at work.

The men seemed to move in slow motion, raising their guns and pointing at Vista as if they were swimming through molasses. Vista could easily channel the firing arc of each gun away from her now, given the extra time to focus. Meanwhile, Sophia was already teleporting towards the doorway into the stairwell, where one of the guys was currently running, heading downstairs. He was moving backwards, a wild yell on his lips, spraying bullets madly back into the room, quite unaware of the shadow coalescing behind him.

Everyone moved slower under the influence of Dennis' new power, including himself. But only those he considered allies could still think at full speed. To the ABB gunmen, it would appear that the Wards had suddenly achieved inhuman reaction times.

Gallant slowly stood up, already aiming for two more targets. He took his time aiming, and carefully targeted the places they would be when his power reached them, predicting their movements. The blasts emerged from his hands slowly, like pitch dropping from a funnel, and ponderously crossed the room towards their targets.

Meanwhile, Vista had gotten vicious. The five men firing at her found their own bullets returning to them, striking in nonlethal places—and Vista knew the difference between a lethal and a nonlethal target. Legshots carefully avoided arteries and major veins, and each strike was carefully intended to disable rather than to maim.

Aegis took advantage of the extra time to shift his grip in an unexpected hold on the guy and flip him over his own back, tossing the guy over his shoulder like so much chaff.

As soon as each Ward was in position to strike, Clockblocker released his iron grip on time. Gallant's blasts connected, Sophia jabbed her target with a tranquilizer, Vista's assailants fell over with pained cries, and Aegis' foe hit the ground with a muffled thud, followed by a strangled, aborted cry as Aegis kicked him in the head.

There was a moment's silence as everyone recovered, breathing heavily.

"What was that?" I heard Glory Girl ask.

Then Clockblocker fell down, gasping for air.

"Shit," said Aegis. "Clockblocker, are you—"

"I'm fine,"
said Clockblocker harshly. "Just took a lot out of me. I'll be better in a couple of minutes, but we don't have a couple of minutes. Get moving before Bakuda has time to do something about us."

I nodded. "Clockblocker is right," I said. "Wards, move on. Clockblocker, take your time. Great use of the new powers."

"Thanks, Annatar."

"Should someone stay with him?"
That was Vista, looking concerned, but Clockblocker shook his head.

"I'll be fine," he stressed. "Get moving!"

"We didn't comb upstairs,"
said Laserdream firmly. "I'll stay and keep watch for anyone coming from above or outside. Shielder, follow Aegis' lead."

"We don't have time to argue,"
said Aegis. "Move, people. Glory Girl, if we could get a path?"

"You bet,"
said Glory Girl, and punched through the floor again.

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Damn fine use of power there, Clockblocker. ^.^ Time Manipulation is one of the best to have, fuck with it enough and you'll never need another.

Prolly why Khonsu was such a bastard to fight.
 
Well choreographed action. I felt like I was following the action in one of those time frozen camera travel scenes.
 
I do think it strange that Annatar vacillates from giving perfunctory commands on both a strategic and tactical scale - including mission objective definition - to saying "Aegis is in command." At no point does Aegis really seem in command on any level, here.
 
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A Memorial for Sheen 4.5
THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN PULLED. IT WILL BE RERELEASED, ALONGSIDE SHEEN 4.6, ON MONDAY.

Many thanks to Technetium43, frustratedFreeboota, Assembler, and Fenrisulfr for betareading.

Many thanks to MugaSofer for fact checking.

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Aegis led the charge, Shielder close behind him. They were greeted by a veritable hail of lead from a mounted minigun.

This floor, too, had lost a lot of its interior walls. Instead of a workshop, however, this one had a military-looking circular barricade around a central part of the room. Sandbags had been piled around a nailed-together wooden frame, all around a central mounted turret, which was currently firing a steady stream of heavy rounds into Aegis and Shielder. The New Wave hero quickly threw up a forcefield, but Aegis just launched himself forward, heedless of the bullets tearing into his frame.

Twelve men were on the inside of the barricade. One was on the turret, while the others were peeking out from behind the cover of the barricade. A motley assortment of rifles, submachine guns, and shotguns were in their hands.

Aegis threw himself into one wooden wall of the barricade. It splintered before him, and a moment later he was among the enemy. I couldn't make heads or tails of the footage from his camera; he was surrounded by bodies and twisting limbs in a flurry of motion, and his microphone had automatically cut its transmission under the overwhelming sound of gunfire.

Sophia glanced in after him, then opted to stay on the floor above, taking potshots into the melee with her crossbows from a position between Clockblocker and Laserdream. The New Wave Blaster did much the same, blasting at them with lasers. I couldn't blame either, Sophia especially; the room was well lit and almost without cover, save for the enemy barricade. Vista, on the other hand, leapt down after Shielder, ducking into cover behind his forcefield. Gallant and Glory Girl followed after her in quick succession.

"Aegis!" hollered Vista, her clear voice slicing through the cacophony. "Get back!"

Aegis obeyed immediately, taking a single step back which, with Vista's help, delivered him behind the forcefield. Within moments, all of the gunfire was turned back to the group.

Glory Girl made as though to charge, but Gallant put a hand on her shoulder. "Wait," he hissed. His eyes—and his camera—were trained on Vista.

The youngest of my Wards was hunched slightly, her hands held just slightly apart, palms facing one another, as though she was holding a small ball. By the tension visible in the muscles of her arms and back, it was heavy. Her eyes were closed, and her brow was furrowed in intense concentration.

"I can't hold this much longer!" Shielder, sounding panicked.

Calmly, Aegis stepped in front of him. "Fine," he said. "I'll meat-shield it. Not much longer now."

"Not much longer until what?" Glory Girl asked, her voice rising in something like hysteria on the last word.

"This." Vista looked up as she spoke, her fists clenching in a sudden spasm, and stood straight. She made a gesture, as though throwing something at the group of men with her left hand. Histeya glittered like a violet star on her finger.

Vista could shorten or lengthen space at will. It was an incredibly potent power, one which easily deserved its rating of shaker 9. The addition of Histeya had, as with all of the Wards, provided an addition to her powerset. As with each of the others, the addition was conceptual.

Sophia's power allowed her to become one with the shadows. Her new power allowed her to literally be them, and emerge from any shadow she chose.

Clockblocker's power gave him dominion over time. His new power expanded that dominion.

Kid Win's tinkertech now had a greater tendency to beauty and resplendence. Browbeat's control over his own body, formerly restricted to biokinesis, now extended to self-control of a more traditional kind; he'd been banned from playing poker with the rest of us for the foreseeable future. Aegis's ability to survive any wound had improved to include a true healing factor—rather than just refusing to die until slow natural healing could run its course, it would now take him little more than a day to recover from anything short of decapitation.

Vista had always controlled space. Now she also controlled the idea of space—direction.

Including down.

The men were thrust backwards as their conception of gravity shifted suddenly. Instead of beneath their feet, the source of down was suddenly a point in the air about three feet above the minigun turret. The turret itself Vista picked out of the air as it rose—it dropped to her feet with a clang, half of its long belt of bullets still hanging out of her spatial warp.

"Go!" Vista screamed, visibly straining with the effort of holding twelve men in their own personal gravitational pool. Her arm shook where she held it out towards the singularity, and sweat beaded and ran down her brow in rivulets.

My other Wards didn't need to be told twice. As one they dove forward. Sophia phased into shadow and rushed forward like a shade. Aegis charged, leading Glory Girl, Shielder, and Gallant behind him, the latter already firing bursts of debilitating emotion at one target after another.

As Sophia entered the group she solidified, drew two tranquilizer bolts, and buried them into the necks of two men with her hands before reaching for another set. Gallant struck two men with blasts of emotion before even reaching the group and hit two more within moments of arriving. Aegis grabbed one and beat him into unconsciousness with his own rifle, while Glory Girl grabbed two by their heads and knocked them together. Shielder pushed another into the ground with a forcefield, and Laserdream hit him with a laser to be sure.

Then Vista fell over. The singularity failed, and the remaining two gunmen fell to the ground. Of course, Sophia had jabbed both with tranquilizers before they could stand up. Then it was over.

Gallant immediately jogged back to Vista. "Are you all right?"

Vista slowly picked herself up to her hands and knees. Her whole body shook with the very effort of holding herself up. With a heave, she forced herself back into a sitting position. "I'll be… okay," she wheezed. "Haven't held that many targets in a singularity before. Took a lot out of me. Think I'll have to make like Clockblocker."

"Fine," said Aegis. His many wounds were leaking thin streams of blood, but they were already closing, pushing the bullets out of the regenerating flesh. He looked around. "Where's Bakuda?"

"Here." It was Glory Girl, pointing at a trapdoor half hidden under the mounting for the minigun. "I mean, unless we have the wrong building."

"We have the right building," said Aegis. "What could be down there?"

"Storage?" I suggested. "Her workshop was a floor up, but I didn't see any actual bombs."

"Which means we should expect a lot of explosives," said Aegis grimly.

"I'll go first," offered Glory Girl. "I can tank any explosions that come our way."

I tapped into the public radio on Aegis's belt and spoke to her directly. "Can you tank being turned to glass? Or frozen in time? Bakuda's a tinker. Be on guard."

"Well, who'd be better for it than me?" she asked, a faint pout touching her full lips. "Not like anyone else is invincible."

"No, you can take point," I said. "Just… be careful. I want everyone coming home tonight."

"You sound like Mom," she complained.

"Sounds like a smart woman," I said. "Clockblocker, you feeling better?"

"Some," he replied. "Probably don't have another slow in me, but I can freeze people."

"That'll help," I said. "Vista, what about you? How long until you're fit to fight?"

Vista shook her head, breathing heavily. "Not for a while," she wheezed. "I think I'm tapped out, sorry. Stupid. I overextended."

"It'll be okay," Gallant said.

"Think we can handle one fight without you," Glory Girl laughed. "So? We moving?"

I closed my eyes. "Aegis?"

"…Someone will have to stay with Vista."

"Nope." I blinked, and my eyes went to a screen I hadn't looked at in a while. Kid Win was back on his hoverboard, and was gliding through the night towards the rest of the team. "Über and Leet got picked up by the PRT. I can stay with Vista once I'm there."

"Fine," I said. "Aegis, you and Glory Girl are on point. Shielder, you're in the second rank. Be ready to throw up a barrier if anything looks like it might hurt them. Clockblocker, you're the next rank. Laserdream, can you be his mover? He usually works with Vista."

"That's fine."

"All right. Gallant, you're back there with them. Shadow Stalker, you're in the rear. Be ready to jump on any opportunities you spot."

"Will do."

"Okay. Be careful, everyone. I want my explanation to Piggot to involve telling her why we went and took out Bakuda with no casualties, not why one of you is dead. Aegis, whenever you're ready."

Aegis nodded to Glory Girl. With a grin, she shoved aside the wood and metal mounting and knelt to open the trapdoor. As soon as it opened, she leapt backward, rising into the air.

A good thing, too. The bomb attached to the latch lit up in a burst of fire and light. Then again, it looked like a traditional fragmentation grenade, or something similarly concussive. Glory Girl would have been fine.

"Let's get going," said Aegis, and he and Glory Girl led my Wards, and New Wave, into the depths.

The trapdoor opened onto a spiraling stairway, wide enough for two to walk abreast. Aegis and Glory Girl floated ahead of the others, orbiting the central pillar slowly, their bodies tense as coiled springs, ready to leap into action.

But no action came. The stairs led them down some twenty feet into the earth, surrounded by concrete walls, and then they came to a door. Again Glory Girl opened it and leapt back, but this time there was no explosion.

And then the tension broke. The next room was spectacular, in the technical sense—it was a spectacle. They stood on a steel mesh balcony near the ceiling of a room almost forty feet in height, dimly lit by fluorescent lights on the ceiling and along the walls, as well as lamps at intervals on the ground. The whole place was walled in unadorned gray concrete. Tables on the lower level were overflowing with what were unmistakably tinkertech bombs, and the excess was strewn across the floor.

All of this was secondary to the vast contraption which dominated the center of the room. Rising ten or fifteen feet in the air, the hemisphere of metal, partially plated with scavenged steel, was a marvel of circuitry and open wiring. Digital displays poked out from under the mess in several places, and tools were still attached in more than one location along the plating and in the workings.

"Like it?"

My whole force turned to look at the speaker. She was leaning against a motorcycle in black and red, with twin black luggage holsters on the back of the chassis. The dark steel of her gas mask contrasted with the yellow highlights of her costume and with the blood-red tint of her goggles.

Bakuda gestured lazily at the massive device. "It was supposed to be my magnum opus. My great work. A bomb with a payload of almost 80 terajoules—but that wasn't the impressive part. On detonation it'd release an EMP with a wide enough area to knock out electronics across half the eastern United States. Suddenly, Kyushu doesn't look so impressive anymore—and Endbringers aren't so unique."

"Why?" Gallant asked. "Why would you want that?"

Bakuda shrugged. "Partly I just really like explosions. There's not even a philosophy behind that—no bullshit about their cleansing purity or anything. They're just fucking cool. Bang! And you're gone." She chuckled. "Then there's the bit where Lung wanted me to do it. All the other gangs have one major thing on his—money. But money's all electronic these days, and everything you can do with it is also electronic. Take out the electricity, and suddenly none of the other gangs within half the country look anything like as powerful as they were. But the ABB? They're still fine. But you know?" She looked over at the bomb. If I could see her face, I imagined it might look almost fond. "I think the big part was just that I could. I had the power to wreak havoc on a scale that makes Endbringers look like small potatoes. That's reason enough."

"You'd kill tens of thousands of people for a power trip?" Glory Girl asked, her voice pitched less as a question and more as a bewildered exclamation.

"Yeah, basically."

"You really are a cartoon supervillain," said Aegis, shaking his head. "Evil plot without good reasons, and now you're even monologuing."

"Well, yeah," said Bakuda. "Wouldn't you monologue if you could get away with it?"

"You're not getting away with anything," hissed Laserdream.

"See, that's the other reason I was monologuing," said Bakuda. "Had to give her time to arm. Ciao."

She leapt onto the motorcycle and began to move even as one of the fluorescent fixtures in the ceiling cracked and shattered. A translucent sphere, almost like glass, started to expand from the inside.

Aegis just had time to shout "Run!" before it was on him. From the cameras of the Wards behind, I watched in horror as he was swallowed up by the expanding sphere. His camera went dark and he froze as surely as if Clockblocker had struck him.

"Vista, Kid Win, get out of there!" I screamed, but it was too late. Even as Kid Win slung Vista up onto his hoverboard, the bubble rose through the floor and claimed them.

In less than thirty seconds, I was left sitting in shock, staring at eight blank screens.

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Canonically, Bakuda's timestop bombs do not work like this. This fact will be addressed in the next chapter. I didn't fuck up, I promise.
 
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Giant tinker-tech bomb in front of them and they stop to let the villain monologue. I'm not seeing you getting rid of that idiot ball any time soon :facepalm:

I enjoyed the chapter, but that kinda...grates.
"Keep her talking," I hissed immediately. "You don't know what kind of traps she has. Wait for her to run, or make the first move."

"Got it," Aegis whispered, and then spoke aloud. "What is it? Looks like junk."
 
Wait for the Tinker to make the first move. The Tinker. In her workshop. To make the first move.

Okay.

I mean it's nice that you shifted the moment of sheer, mind-numbing idiocy onto Taylor (who has precedence for not really thinking things through here) rather than the Wards, but at this rate this fic is just going to be 'How Taylor Drove Piggot To A Mental Breakdown With Her Poor Decision Making'.
 
Wait for the Tinker to make the first move. The Tinker. In her workshop. To make the first move.

Okay.

I mean it's nice that you shifted the moment of sheer, mind-numbing idiocy onto Taylor (who has precedence for not really thinking things through here) rather than the Wards, but at this rate this fic is just going to be 'How Taylor Drove Piggot To A Mental Breakdown With Her Poor Decision Making'.
As opposed to charging straight at a tinker who's had time to prepare?

I'm all argued out on the Spacebattles thread, unfortunately, so I won't be getting into a deep argument here. I stand by my chapter, but I'm done debating it for today.
 
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