Alright, what weapon should Akemi have?

  • Let her keep the gun!

    Votes: 9 33.3%
  • Give her a sword!

    Votes: 10 37.0%
  • More Magic!

    Votes: 6 22.2%
  • Hand to Hand!

    Votes: 2 7.4%

  • Total voters
    27
  • Poll closed .
My brain was going we have technology origins and basic magic powers, why isn't there a evil magic origin for magic.

So I got that blast out of my though process.
 
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JESUS!!! Why couldn't our abusive ex-parents sell us to like, a nice elderly couple? Or at the very least some regular gangsters. Because I feel like selling us to assassins is going over multiple very unnecessary hurdles for very little reward.
Unfortunately, Umbra, while not having absurd control over the government thanks to a partnership with SHOCKER (you guys didn't pick that disaster) is still interested in soldiers. From anywhere they can get them. Also, those aren't normal assassins.

And that is all I will be saying for now,
 
[X] Plan: keep on fighting M.A.D Guardian
-[X] The Last Guardian and judge of the ancient driver
-[X] the last Act of the one who desperately saved who was without doubt the biggest monster I have ever met
-[X] Sweet and Bitter
- [X] (2) Sentient Powers
-[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
- [X] Known Reputation
-[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
-[X] M.A.D.Z
 
[X] Redemption of a Wilted Roze
-[X] Cult Escapee
-[X] Fusion
-[X] Harmony of Mythic Power
-[X] (2) Sentient Powers
-[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
-[X] Known Reputation
-[X] (-1) Weak Armor
-[X] Mystical Ace - ROZE

Having a weakness that's repairable is thematic, and as a bonus gets us a decent chance at a new friend out of our counter part.
 
Elemental Magic
DRIVER ON.
GLYPH GO.
HEAT, THANK YOU.

Not sure about this, but I think this is supposed to be inspired by Kamen Rider Wizard (if the reference comes from the implementation of the power, since Kamen Rider Wizard had his forms centered around elements). Otherwise, the call used for Elemental Magic seems somewhat reminiscent of Kamen Rider Fourze.
 
[X] Plan: Time to Duel!
-[X] Ex-Assassin
-[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
-[X] Duel Manifestation
-[X] (2) Sentient Powers
-[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
-[X] Known Reputation
-[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
-[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE

Flaw from Known Reputation and Deficiency In Social makes this plan look interesting to me.
 
Flaw from Known Reputation and Deficiency In Social makes this plan look interesting to me.

Deficiency in Social meshes badly with the fact that Duel Manifestation is a summon build, which needs good Social to be able to make good use of its summons. Time to Duel! (Social Version) is a better pick for a plan that has Duel Manifestation in it.
 
While I do feel the need to lean into our inspiration, I feel like Duel Manifestation is a bit too far. I'm willing to take a trait and Flaw to shore up either Mental, Social or Technical to make Zweithund more attractive.
So which specialisation would people prefer?
 
So which specialisation would people prefer?

From my perspective, your plan is quite fine as it is, since it's covering all stats in one way or another (your power choice does compensate for the apparent lack of increase to Physical, since it gives us Bo2 in most combat scenarios, but Martial Arts was picked last vote as one of our hobbies, so I feel like we are fine on the Physical front even if we pick Ex-Assassin as our origin), so while we might not be specialized in something, we are going to be at least decent in all skills, which would give us flexibility. I think the plans with Duel Manifestation are picking a bit more steam than your since not only is it perceived as matching the character that was made, but people are more interested in having a power they can experiment with. Fighter Jets by comparison would be perceived as quite simplistic, since it's a very straightforward buff to our combat abilities in most cases.
Anyway, if you want to make any modifications to your plan, I don't think Social should be treated as a dump stat. The only other reccomendation I can make is that Extraordinary Synchronicity is quite popular, so you might be able to win some more votes for your plan by including that Perk if you decide to take a Flaw.
 
@Sonic0815 @The Zog @ThatGuyWithIdeas I've edited my plan. The idea is that Rei was a super soldier for the air force branch of Umbra who got knocked out of her shaky brainwashing by a senior rider (Reye) and now Rei is the only one who can maintain her own suits and it's making her consider going to college for engineering.
 
[X] plan: lackey machine flower makes friends, enimies, and magitech
[X] Former Umbra Soldier
[X] Magitech Combination
GEAR, GO!

GLYPH, SET!
TRUE MATCH!
[X] (2) Insider To The Societies
[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
[X] Known Reputation
[X] (-1) Weak Armor
[X] Mashin Azalea
 
Android Tech
Humanity Confirmed. DNARise!
Ready? Go!

Again, not sure if my hypothesis here is correct, but this seems inspired by Kamen Rider Fourze (which had a somewhat similar ability in its capacity of equipping aditional weapons on his limbs). No clue as for the references behind Emotional Magic and Steampunk Tech (I could use some help there), and I'd also like someone with a better grasp of Kamen Rider to double-check both this guess and my earlier guess about Elemental Magic being inspired by Kamen Rider Wizard (QM hasn't said anything about that guess being correct or not, he just gave the post a like).
 
Again, not sure if my hypothesis here is correct, but this seems inspired by Kamen Rider Fourze (which had a somewhat similar ability in its capacity of equipping aditional weapons on his limbs). No clue as for the references behind Emotional Magic and Steampunk Tech (I could use some help there), and I'd also like someone with a better grasp of Kamen Rider to double-check both this guess and my earlier guess about Elemental Magic being inspired by Kamen Rider Wizard (QM hasn't said anything about that guess being correct or not, he just gave the post a like).
Alright, only a few hours until the vote ends, so I'll reveal the references between every single theme.

Elemental Magic
Kamen rider Wizard inspired. The reason is because of the four powers, and also because of the last part.


In KR Wizard, the driver says "(X) Please", because please is one of the magic words. Guess what else is one of those.

Emotional Magic
The chant doesn't mean anything here: it's the way the powers are contained.

Those Glyphs seem to be contained best when they're grafted onto a lock.

Locks are also heavily used in Kamen Rider Gaim.

Steampunk Tech

There is no reference here.

Android Tech

Humanity Confirmed. DNARise!

Kamen Rider Zero-One heavily used the words "Progrise", "Shotrise", and "Forcerise" in its transformation sequences.

Magitech Combo

It's Kamen Rider Build. Best Match!

Chapter coming out soon.
 
Vote closed
Scheduled vote count started by MrKermie on Jun 15, 2024 at 11:16 AM, finished with 55 posts and 20 votes.

  • [X] Plan: Time to Duel! (Social Version)
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
    -[X] Duel Manifestation
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE
    [X] Plan Robo Rider
    -[X] Genetic Experiments
    -[X] Cyborg Auguments
    -[X] Emotional Magic
    -[X] (1) Specialty In… (Physical)
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Known Reputation
    -[X] Mashin Azalea
    [X] Plan: Time to Duel!
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
    -[X] Duel Manifestation
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Known Reputation
    -[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
    -[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE
    [X] Plan: Strike from the skies
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Cyborg Auguments
    -[X] Fighter Jets
    -[X] (2) Insider To The Societies
    -[X] (1) Specialty In Technical
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] (-1) Deficiency In Magical
    -[X] (-1) Weak Armor
    -[X] Flash Striker 02: Zweithund
    [X] Plan: Glyphic Rider
    -[X] Former Umbra Soldier
    -[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
    -[X] Elemental Magic
    -[X] (1) Specialty In… (Magical)
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Walking Tech Bane
    -[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
    -[X] (-1) Weak Armor
    -[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE
    [X] Plan: Spider Rider
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
    -[X] Arachne
    -[X] (1) Specialty In… Social
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] STRIKER 008 - Arachnid
    [X] Plan Something More than a Beatstick
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Genetically Engineered Solutions (Weapons)
    -[X] Steampunk Tech
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE
    [X] Plan: The Duel part of 'Duel Monster'
    -[X] Ex-Assassin
    -[X] Chosen By The Glyphs
    -[X] Duel Manifestation
    -[X] (1) Specialty In Technical
    -[X] (1) Specialty In… (Physical)
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Known Reputation
    -[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
    -[X] STRIKER 002 - ROZE
    [X] Plan: keep on fighting M.A.D Guardian
    -[X] The Last Guardian and judge of the ancient driver
    -[X] the last Act of the one who desperately saved who was without doubt the biggest monster I have ever met
    -[X] Sweet and Bitter
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Known Reputation
    -[X] (-1) Deficiency In Social
    -[X] M.A.D.Z
    [X] Redemption of a Wilted Roze
    -[X] Cult Escapee
    -[X] Fusion
    -[X] Harmony of Mythic Power
    -[X] (2) Sentient Powers
    -[X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    -[X] Known Reputation
    -[X] (-1) Weak Armor
    -[X] Mystical Ace - ROZE
    [X] plan: lackey machine flower makes friends, enimies, and magitech
    [X] Former Umbra Soldier
    [X] Magitech Combination
    [X] (2) Insider To The Societies
    [X] (1) Extraordinary Synchronicity
    [X] Known Reputation
    [X] (-1) Weak Armor
    [X] Mashin Azalea
 
Base Stats: All 7.

+Martial Arts Hobby:+5 To Phys

+Ex-Assasin: +10 to Non Phys stats.
+Gain Weapon: M1 Silenced Pistol

Final Base Stats:
Physical:12
Social: 17
Mental: 17
Technical: 17
Magical: 17

Character sheet updates soon,
 
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Base Stats: All 7.

+Martial Arts Hobby:+5 To Phys

+Ex-Assasin: +10 to Non Phys stats.
+Gain Weapon: M1 Silenced Pistol

Final Base Stats:
Physical:12
Social: 17
Mental: 17
Technical: 17
Magical: 17

Character sheet updates soon,
Kind of funny that the Ex-Assassin's lowest base stat is the one most associated with killing.
 
Character Generation 0.4: THE LOVERS (REVERSED)
Alright, ok… so that's what you are. Rei, just keep floating there while I grab my notebook.



So, you're still here. Geez, I'm glad that it looks like you'll be gone soon from how much you've faded, otherwise we'd be in big trouble,

Oh, don't ask why you need to get out of here soon. I've got some really bad bosses, and let's leave it at that.

Either way, wanna see this cool thing— person? Apparently, you're supposed to meet them soon. Isn't that interesting?



Ah. Though I've got some bad news. They've gotten into some bad situations, and might need your help. No, they don't need someone dead.

I'll explain as we go. Follow me, Noble.

Character Generation Points: 2
(Gain more by taking flaws!)



Personality:
As you can see, they're very…

[ ] …Curious and Inquisitive.
[ ] …Brave and Bold.
[ ] …Shy and Reclusive.
[ ] …Kind and Caring.
[ ] …Something else. (Write-in, two adjectives max)



Gender:
And they're going to be a Magical warrior. Specifically, a Magical…

[ ] Boy
[ ] Girl
[ ] (Write-in anything else)



Name:
Their name is…

[ ] Ren Akiyama
[ ] Akira Tori
[ ] Himena Aoi
[ ] Reye Akaba
[ ] No, they're called… (Write-in.)



Appearance:
And they look like…

[ ] (write in) You know the drill: send a small description and a picture.


Relationship:
Now, one more question, do you know them? Don't worry, I won't erase your memories. That's my coworker's job.

[ ] (1) Old Friends
Back in your past they were, well, not inseparable from you, but they were a good friend. For some reason or another, they drifted away from you, and you never thought you'd see them again,

Of course, that's going to change in your near future, considering you'll both be trying your best to be heroes.


[(Positive) Relationship with your counterpart, and relationship level 2 with them. This will serve to get through multiple obstacles in the early game.]

[ ] (0) Who?

Erm… you don't know this person? Ok, let me just write down a few things…

[No special bonuses.]

[ ] (-1) Rivals on Sight

You and them just don't mix, it seems. Just looking at you is like seeing oil and water shoved into a barrel together. Yikes.

[(Negative) Relationship with your counterpart. You'll be fighting your Counterpart. And if you're not fighting, they'll be trying to steal your kills for their own reasons.]

[ ] No, we're… (Write-In)


Make sure to @ the QM, so that I can decide the point cost and effects.


Past:
Ok. Now we get to the difficult part.

Whatever your relationship was with them, ignore it.

Because their past was… it was difficult.


[ ] Loner
Have you heard of the NEET? They take all their stuff, and they get away from school. They hole up in their rooms, dive into their fantasy worlds, since the real one could never be kind to them. They live off of the scraps that their parents worked so hard for.

And eventually, they die. Alone, uncared for. Rotting.

Your counterpart is on the road to become one of these people. And if it wasn't for their destiny to be a hero… I have no doubt that they wanted to die on that road.


[HUGE debuff to social, and your counterpart will be distant from you for a good while no matter what relationship you pick.]

[ ] Fellow Weapon

You met so many people as an assassin. So many good people, and bad. Of all of them, your Counterpart always seemed to stand out the most. Same age as you, same business as well.

You only saw them a few times. But whenever you saw their face, it felt like looking into a mirror.


[Gives your Counterpart the same training that you did, and also their own gun. They will also be chased by the same organization(s) you are. If they are Old Friends or similar, you two will connect easier. However, if you two are Rivals or worse, well…]

[ ] Always Left Behind

Don't you know? The worst part about this world being filled with heroes is that normal people feel unwanted. Unremarkable. Those normal people want so hard to be like them, even if it's impossible.

People like them always want to chase that light of heroism. Not knowing it's just the fires of an incinerator…


[Your Counterpart will not be the most "street smart", and they will be trying to act like a regular Magical Girl/Boy. This is a mistake.]

[ ] (Write In)

Subject to QM Veto.

(You might have noticed that there is no good option here.)

(There was no happiness in the past for either of you. The only way up is forward.)



Wish
So. That's bad. You were gritting your teeth while seeing that. I can tell, Rei. Their past was so bad that they saw fit to do something drastic.

They made a wish. Signed a contract. Signed a contract with something far, far beyond their power. Even mine. With the power of that contract, they wished for…


[ ] Their wish was… (Write-in. Subject to QM Veto, but this has very few limits. Must be something PERSONAL.)


Perks:
Alright, almost done. Their strengths are…

[ ] (2) Master of (Tech/Magic)

Even though they are outsiders in most places, there is one place where your counterpart shines as a rising prodigy. It is…

[Buffs to Technical/Magical. Narrative buffs as well, with them knowing people from the Tech/Magical community.]

[ ] (2) Aid From A Friend

Now, everything will be against you two. You've figured that out by now. But I can even the odds a bit. It'll cost me a bit personally, but I've already gotten used to that.

See, have you ever heard of this funny thing called Incarnation?

[Your narrator for the past few updates, Mr. REDACTED will be attempting to help out your counterpart. His powers and memories will be limited, and while he'll recognize you on sight, you won't.]

[He will still have decent knowledge of what's above and below you in the strength hierarchy, and he'll also give you deadlines and goals to work towards.]

[ ] (1) Specialty In… (Social/Physical/Mental)


Now, we've already established how fucked this person's life is. But they do have some good points, such as…

(Cannot be combined with the flaw that debuffs the same stat.)

[+10 to chosen stat. This will have narrative effects in your Counterpart]

[ ] (1) Hero Otaku


It seems that people will always seem to know way too much about the things they love. Thankfully, it's a good thing in this case.

[Your counterpart knows a lot about Magical Girl and Kamen Rider culture, and will help a lot with searching for either Society.]


Flaws:

And last of all, here are their weaknesses.

[ ] (-1) Deficiency In (Social/Physical/Technical/Magical/Mental)

They are your partner, so they are strong, smart, brave… but as you know, people aren't perfect.

[-15 to chosen stat. This will have narrative effects in your Counterpart.]

[ ] (-1) A Personal Debt

Back when they were just a high school student, they got in some trouble. They managed to get a favor from the Yakuza and some others to get out of jail, but that favor still needs to be repaid.

[Certain criminal factions, that may or may not be connected to Umbra, will be forcing your Counterpart to do certain… unpleasant things in order to stay alive.]

[ ] (-1) Unending Grief

Sometime in your past, they lost someone near and dear to their heart. That grief has never truly left their soul. It is etched into their mind, acceptance just a bit out of reach.

[Minor debuff to Social. Becomes a major debuff when attempting actions that involve getting over grief or going against resulting unhealthy habits.]

[Changes to ??? (Derealization) if a certain Wish is taken.]

[ ] (-1) Phlebotinum Incontinence


For some reason, their patron has made it so that for them, their powers came with a learning curve. I won't blame them, your counterpart— it's that bastard's fault.

[Increased Crit Failure threshold. Gaining new powers will take longer.]


I see. That's the person who you're connected to.



Very well then.

Wake up Rei. It's about time for you to be a hero.

Good luck out there to the both of you.


Author's Note:

Final part of character creation. After this, it's right into the story.

Happy voting!

Plan Template:
[ ] Cool Plan Name!
-[ ] Personality
-[ ] Gender
-[ ] Name
-[ ] Appearance
-[ ] Relationship
-[ ] Past
-[ ] Wish
-[ ] Perks
-[ ] Flaws
 
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