At some point @shadenight123 is going to have a dreadful moment when Karin finds one of his smutty books.

Then she will hunt down the publisher and through him the author.

The question of course is shall she be a tsuntsun fan shaking him down far an autograph or a vicious crusader against perversion?
 
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You do realize that if he wants to actually publish these stories he pretty much will need approval of the church? Or rather, at least avoid putting anything too heretical there so it doesn't get banished and he looked badly by the religious authorities.

Once you have gathered a fan base and you are no longer under scrutiny, start adding some tiny changes to influence your yet untouched by religion young audience.

I know, hence I added that line right here. Henry publishes said book, priests see it depicts Brimir as a father-like figure, directing the royal heirs to defeat the evil elves and heretics plagueing Halkeginia. They give approval of the book's publising and use it to spread the love of the Founder and get more people to brainwash introduce into the Holy Knights and Priests. Henry waits till his book is spread widely in Halkeginia, his characters are fleshed out to the point that his fans love them to death and then he goes with the aforementioned reveals.

The church can try to mark it as heretical but again how can they prove it exactly? Henry has experience from his previous and current life to twist the words of others to his advantage. Like this for example:

Henry: I should remove Tiffania because she is a half-elf? But doesn't the book of Brimir say that you should cherish those around you and not harm them unless they try first?

Inquisition: She is an elf, an abomination, a heretic.

Henry: In chapter 28, I explained that she was given the Ring of Faith because of her deep love for the Founder and how she was a living saint, helping anyone and everyone, asking for nothing in return.

Inquisition: Still she is...

Henry: A half-elf. And also a half-human, which Brimir specifically says in Chapter 52, verse 23 "Judge those not of their position, but of their character, for a loyal servant can be ten times more useful than a greedy noble".

Something to that effect or even better perhaps. Point is that the church can't win a fight against something that people love very much and Henry's book can become that something.
 
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I hope that Henry turns The Hunchback of Notre-Lord into a musical, at some point. Introduce them to the wonders of Disney, Shade.
Hilariously enough Mulan already half parallels the adventures of Karin-kun.

Man this freedom obsession is getting a bit out there? Like semi-first world style problems?
In all fairness look at who his mother was.
Running away because freedom is obviously in the blood.
 
Now that's just ridiculous, even a Void mage can't replicate Disney magic.

The secret of Disney magic is that we are already living in a musical and just need to relinquish our inhibitions against it.

Humans are naturally inclined to dance and sing along with a beat, and have ingrained rhythmic instincts that allow them to do a well enough job they don't get in each others way.

It's just that a culture of shame and embarrassment at such 'foolishness' has suppressed such natural instincts to only come out at permitted occasions. And with such little reinforcement, humans are not as good at it as they normally would be.
 
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The secret of Disney magic is that we are already living in a musical and just need to relinquish our inhibitions against it.

Humans are naturally inclined to dance and sing along with a beat, and have ingrained rhythmic instincts that allow them to do a well enough job they don't get in each others way.

It's just that a culture of shame and embarrassment at such 'foolishness' has suppressed such natural instincts to only come out at permitted occasions. And with such little reinforcement, humans are not as good at it as they normally would be.
Does this means everyone else also dances with themselves?! Here I was thinking it was only me also Billy Idol.
 
He'll start a deep cover crusade of assassination against members of the church, using his position to wittle away at the upper echelons of the churches power.
 
Using his silken tongue to persuade that there needs to be an all out revolt, by using his literary works to slowly influence and control the favor of the masses? Preposterous I say! Viva La Revolution
 
So here is my interpretation about how Henry altered the Disney story to write The hunchback of Notre-Lord. Let me know if I'm at all close.

The setting takes place in Romalia and Notre-Lord is a chapel dedicated to Brimir.
Quasimodo is a deformed commoner, who is the hero of the story and wants to be accepted for as the humble servant of Brimir he tries to be.
Esmeralda is a dancer from the land of Rub' al Khali, beyond the lands of the elves.
Judge Claude Frollo, it a corrupt Noble who has ignored the teachings of Brimir and the duties of his station to seek after his own desires .
Captain Phoebus is a knight who has been called back from the boarders of the elven land to care for the city.
 
Hilariously enough Mulan already half parallels the adventures of Karin-kun.

In all fairness look at who his mother was.
Running away because freedom is obviously in the blood.
But she was a minor noble badass. She went to the capital to jump a couple dozen ranks in social mobility and bring all kinds of honor to her house yo. Amd I think it was with blessing.
 
Something to that effect or even better perhaps. Point is that the church can't win a fight against something that people love very much and Henry's book can become that something.
Wow. Um, your faith in freedom of expression and the goodness of human nature winning out against a long-established socioeconomic military industrial complex juggernaut with magic backing it up is touching.

...Have you read many of Shadenight's other stories, by any chance? Or the tags on this story?
 
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Wow. Um, your faith in freedom of expression and the goodness of human nature winning out against a long-established socioeconomic military industrial complex juggernaut with magic backing it up is touching.

...Have you read many of Shadenight's other stories, by any chance? Or the tags on this story?
Just publish in Germania, the Brimiric nations can get is as contraband. Just like they do with smut.
 
Wow. Um, your faith in freedom of expression and the goodness of human nature winning out against a long-established socioeconomic military industrial complex juggernaut with magic backing it up is touching.

...Have you read many of Shadenight's other stories, by any chance? Or the tags on this story?

Oh wait, my bad. You must have thought that my entire reasoning was for Henry to spring out some sort of Revolution and the establisment of Democracy via his 'heretical' books.

Well, no. Henry, as I mentioned before, is not targeting neither the priests nor the peasants as his fanbase. It's the very young, very impressionable nobles he wants. The current generation is too indoctrinated to accept his radical ideas about co-existance and so on, but the next generation is the one he can manipulate.

They will starting loving the characters Shade's experienced writing is introducing to them and will accept them despite their faults. They will keep it close to their minds because it's so radically different from the usual tales of dragons and knights. And lastly, they are teenagers. If their parents tell them that this book is heretical and a bad influence, they will ignore them and continue reading them anyways.

And as VortexRyder said, there is also Germania, who will probably embrace this radical and amazing book and laugh at the face of the uptight priests that screech it is heretical and barbaric. Which means that it can be publized there and distributed secretly to bars and taverns, that in turn supply it to the aformentioned young nobles.

And when they eventually grow up and take part in a crusade they might come to think: 'Hey, why am I fighting these guys? What did they do to me? They haven't attacked Halkeginia despite their sheer skill in magic and not insignifant numbers, why should I go kill myself because some guy in robes told me to? What am I even doing here?'

In other words, Henry's objective is not to change the status quo of Halkeginia, which would be very bad (see French Revolution), but to make the young generation of nobles to think the consequences of their actions and to focus more on fixing their world and not throwing themselves at the OP elves with Hax skillz, to take back the so called 'Holy Lands'.

Lastly, I have read many of Shadenight's fics and I noticed a distinct patern on how he solves his problems: he uses his brain!

No last minute powerup, no nakama/friendship superpower, no overpowering attacks with embarassing names (unless he chuuni's for the lolz), just plain logic and knowing which buttons to press.

Like in his Fate fic, he manipulates Saber Lily, who is also powered by one of the most powerful magus that ever lived and is half-homunculus, into turning to Berserker just by pushing her rage button like a kid with a sugar rush. Hell, he actually turns Joanne D' Arc, a Servant so saintly and nice she was chosen as the Ruler class, the referee for the Holy Grail War, into a yandere by sheer accident!

So trust me, if there is one person that can pull this off, then It's Hate (Henry-Shade).
 
And when they eventually grow up and take part in a crusade they might come to think: 'Hey, why am I fighting these guys? What did they do to me? They haven't attacked Halkeginia despite their sheer skill in magic and not insignifant numbers, why should I go kill myself because some guy in robes told me to? What am I even doing here?'
Because Elves are evil. No, that isn't propaganda, their entire culture hates humans. They're jerks. They go over there to kill elves because elves come over here to screw around and drive all of their important magi insane, not that they know the specifics.

There are many, many stories where the elves are sympathetic. This... isn't really one of them, I don't think. Culturally speaking, anyhow.
 
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