Metastable

Well it's good to see Worm paced at a decent rate rather one shit after the next. As for Dragon & Taylor programing thing i'm mostly wondering if Everyone's response to their creation (because what else would happen) is going as amusing as i hope it will be.
 
Danny has no good options for determining what is the safest course of action for Taylor. He certainly can't leave Lisa with Coil. Morality of saving Lisa aside, Lisa knows about Taylor, and that makes it imperative to get Lisa away from Coil.

All of that is assuming that Lisa is telling anything resembling the truth. This is the world where Nice Guy makes the news for visiting a place and having pleasant conversations with the inhabitants of a building while horribly killing them, and none of the victims notice how horrible it is while he's doing that to them.

I have to say my favorite part of this fic is the non-first-person perspective we have on Danny and the constant stress that Taylor's Tinkering is putting on him. On one hand he's reconnecting with Taylor more, on the other hand he is also far more stressed about her and because of her. So overall excellent writing of that relationship.
 
Continuing Professional Development (Semi-Canon)
There was a pause, and then dad replied, "Taylor, I'm glad to say I've not run a gang before.

"Don't be so hard on yourself Dad, I'm sure you could do it!"

"...Thanks?"

"I mean, look at what a great job you do with the Dockworkers."

"The Dockworkers Union is not a gang!"

"Right, you're just a group of like-minded individuals working together for your mutual protection and safety... and monetary benefit. Definitely not a gang."
 
3.2 Work Release Programs
3.2 Work Release Programs
Monday, and back to the daily grind. Regrettably, Amy spotted me as we left our shared class. We were headed to lunch, but she spotted me before I could escape the classroom into the mass of people in the hallway.

"Hey Taylor, wait a minute."

I waited, turning to look at her.

"Vicky was looking for you."

"OK", come on Amy, just leave me alone, I haven't done anything to you.

"Well, are you going to be eating in the cafeteria today?"

"I, uh, need to go to the library, to get some books." Real smooth there, Taylor. I want to go to the library way more than I want to go to the cafeteria right now and I don't even believe me.

"Whatever then."

Amy clearly thinks I'm stupid, but she leaves.

Yeah, the library is out now. I don't know any places to hide in Arcadia yet, well aside from the bathrooms. I really don't want them or Sophia to start harassing me. It gradually escalated with Emma and Sophia freshman year, and I really want to avoid something like that starting here.

Do I hide, or do I pretend like nothing is wrong? Either way, this evening dad's going to find out. I guess it was advice from Lacey or something, but awkwardness hadn't been a deterrent from him getting to the bottom of bad things going on in my life. It sort of helps, I guess, but still it is unpleasant to go through.

Hmm, Sophia would tell Vicky I hid occasionally in bathrooms at Winslow. I'll eat outside again. It's not as if they couldn't find me regardless, but at least it's nice out.

Eventually, I finish lunch and start reading.

Vicky drops down in front of me, startling me out my book. She, uh, is actually pretty scary doing that. I sort of cringe, and put my stuff away. It's easier to steal a backpack than random stuff, but much easier than both is knocking whatever I'm holding out of my hands and stepping on it.

"Hey, why are you avoiding me? We were getting along last week, and I wanted to keep talking."

There's no good answer to that question. Vicky is being pretty seriously scary here. I imagine she could kick me in half if she wanted to. There's videos of her shoving around cars and stuff. Why did I come outside? Everything about her is terrifying. I mumble out "I just want to be left alone."

"Come on, who wants that? We're chill, hang out with us."

"I'd uh rather not, you were kind of mean."

"What!? I Am Not Mean!"

I'm going to die. Vicky is going to kill me.

"What is wrong with you! I've been nothing but nice to you, and came over to be friends and-"

And at that point, Vicky is terrifying enough that I lose control of my bladder.

I don't hear what she says as she notices and trails off. She reacts first. "Shit."

The moment broken, I run away, clutching my backpack.

Well, life is horrifying and humiliating.

Once I'm away from her, I slow down and catch my breath. I guess I can either walk home like this, or, actually, I guess I have to tell Mrs Green first.

I'm grateful to anybody listening that her classroom is close.

"Taylor, are you-" she notices, and sighs. "Well child, stuff like this has happened before. So, would it work for you to shower first and wear some spare gym shorts? Then we'll sort this out."

It's almost comforting that she has a default plan. I nod, not really feeling up to talking.

"OK, hold on a minute."

She picks up her phone and calls the PE teacher, and asks him to bring some girl's shorts from the extra supplies for gym.

"Taylor, you can either change in here by yourself, with me outside the door keeping it shut, or go down to the gym and shower first. If you change here, you can still go shower and change again. Do you have extra clothes?"

"I'll change here, shower, and then change into my gym clothes I have here."

"Sounds like a plan then. Now, if you're up to it, I'd like to know what happened. If not, you can get cleaned up first, but I do need to eventually get an explanation about what happened."

"Well, Sophia has been leaving me alone, but she's friends with Vicky, who came by last week at lunch. She and Amy and Claire were sort of nice, but also made fun of me some too, about some cape stuff. It wasn't a big deal, but I wanted to avoid them for a bit, so I've been eating lunch outside, and today Vicky came by and was angry, well, at least she was upset that I'd been avoiding her, and then she got downright terrifying and threatening, and I got scared enough that, well, here I am."

"OK, so if that's what happened, you're likely in the clear. However, I am not the person who gets to hear the other side of things though or make that final decision. I need to call the principal now. Please just wait. I'm sure a change of clothes will be here soon."

I nod, and just stand there, being miserable, and Mrs Green calls Principal Edgeworth.

"Michael, hi, this is Lottie. There's been an incident between Victoria Dallon and Taylor Hebert. There was no blood or fighting, but it was very unpleasant for Taylor. I'm getting- oh, Taylor's change of clothes is here. I'll call you back."

She waves to somebody behind me. I didn't hear the gym teacher, but he's walking up to us. He's quiet for a big guy and has the extra clothes.

He brought shorts and warm-up pants. Mrs Green makes him help her close the window blinds and then ushers him out, and tells me to come out of the room when I'm changed.

I'm quickly done, and exit with my damp pants. Mrs Green says to go to the principal's office after I've showed. I won't be called over the intercom, but I am supposed to not waste time.

While I'm showering, I hear the intercom, "Claire Davis, and Victoria and Amy Dallon, please come to the Principal's office." I try to hurry and I get there maybe ten minutes later.

The three girls are sitting outside, but I don't look at them enough to even guess at what they're thinking.

The secretary sends us inside, and after shutting the door, Principal Edgeworth starts talking once all four of us are seated.

"Students, there has been a series events that brought you all here. I'm going to start with what I know, and then I'll be asking questions of each of you. None of you are to interrupt each other. If you think you have something crucial to add or that a statement is inaccurate or false, you will still wait your turn to explain. During lunch today, Taylor approached Mrs Green for help. Taylor had urinated in her pants, and very much wanted to get cleaned up. She told Mrs Green that this happened because Victoria scared her badly while they were talking. Taylor, during lunch today, did Victoria touch you at any point in time?"

"No, sir."

"Taylor, did Victoria make any explicit threats to your person? She could be intimidating, but please differentiate between her being scary, and her making an explicit threat to hurt you."

"Uh, she didn't make any explicit threats."

"If any of you have anything to add to just the physical aspects of what happened during lunch today, raise your hand."

None of us did.

"OK, so, since there was no physical assault or threats, we can continue without immediately bringing in your parents. All of your parents will be informed regardless though. This past Wednesday, during lunch, were any of you seated together at any point in time?"

I nod my head, and hear Vicky say yes.

"If any of you felt uncomfortable at any point that day while interacting with any other person in this room, raise your hand."

I raise mine a bit.

"Taylor, what parts were uncomfortable?"

"They, uh, came and sat with me and wanted to talk, which was fine, but we got to talking about capes, and they started laughing at me for not knowing something about Narwhal. It wasn't a big deal, but I wanted to avoid them, cause I-"

"Just a moment Taylor, I want to understand this a piece at a time. Do any of you disagree that Narwhal, the cape, was the last topic of conversation any of you has with Taylor that day?"

They nod, and Vicky starts to speak, but Mr Edgeworth cuts her off.

"Ms Dallon, you will be permitted every reasonable chance to explain your side of things. I fully acknowledge that there is a chance that perhaps Taylor misinterpreted some or most of this situation, but you will not convince me by speaking out of turn."

Vicky nods, and looks a bit sullen. This takes longer than the Winslow stuff does.

"Claire, who first brought up the name Narwhal, during this conversation?"

"Uh, Taylor did."

"Taylor, why did you bring up Narwhal?"

"Well, Vicky asked me to guess who the favorite heroes were of the the of them. I guessed Vicky for herself, and Narwhal for Amy. I uh left before guessing for Claire."

"Raise your hand if you disagree with these events as described."

We don't. This is kind of slow, but still way better than the girls getting to talk over me.

"Victoria, why was Narwhal funny as a suggestion?"

"It wasn't because of Taylor, but every guy likes Narwhal because she's naked-"

"What?!" I can't help but interrupt.

Principal Edgeworth politely adds to me, "Taylor, you must also wait your turn to talk."

I nod, but am mostly confused.

Victoria continues. "Yeah, Narwhal creates force fields, and doesn't wear clothes, she just wears opaque force fields, according to rumor anyway, and I thought Taylor was suggesting that Amy should try to hook up with Narwhal, because before we had mentioned that I had, uh, set Amy, up on some dates that didn't go so well."

"Do any of you have anything to add, or found Narwhal funny for a different reason"

We shake our heads. I don't know if I believe them or not, but I guess if Narwhal really is a sort of naked hero, it would be kind of funny.

"Taylor, were you surprised that these three sat with you that day?"

"Yeah, I mean, we've never talked, and they are friends with Sophia, and usually sit with her group."

Vicky sends an intensely inquisitive look at me, but backs off when she notices Mr Edgeworth watching her.

"Have any of you talked to Taylor prior to that lunch? If not, why did you want to sit at her table? Raise your hands if you want to talk."

Vicky gets picked over Claire

"I've met pretty much everyone, I figured I hadn't met Taylor and I'd introduce myself and some of my friends. We were just trying to be nice."

Principal Edgeworth responds to that with a rather dry tone. "Victoria, I'm rather skeptical that you are acquainted with the entire school population. Do you wish argue my skepticism, or perhaps did you have another reason that you would like to add?"

Vicky starts to talk, but pauses, like she's unwilling to say something. Maybe something like 'Sophia said Taylor was easy mess with'. Not that I didn't just justfy that comment outside.

"Claire, would you like to add anything as to Victoria's interest in meeting Taylor, or perhaps you own reasons?"

Claire shakes her head.

"Amy, same question."

Amy also shakes her head. Huh, Amy hasn't actually said much of anything.

"Alright, I'm going to move on for the moment. Victoria, how did you find Taylor outside today?"

"I went looking for her, I wanted to know why she wasn't in the cafeteria the past couple of days, I was trying to be friendly."

"Amy, do you have anything to add this?"

"Uh, I have class with Taylor before lunch, I told her Vicky was looking for her."

"Amy, did Taylor suggest where she could meet Victoria or tell you where she would be eating lunch?"

"Taylor said she'd be in the library."

"Taylor, were you trying to avoid them?"

"Yes, I mean, I can see how maybe what I said at lunch was funny now, if that's true about Narwhal, but I didn't know that, and if they were going to bully me about it, well I just wanted to be left alone."

Mr Edgeworth smiles. "Well, even if it was relevant, we're going to leave unresolved the details of Narwhal's costume. Victoria, why didn't you respect Taylor's desire to be left alone?"

"I didn't know she wanted to be left alone. I really thought she liked having us join her, and I didn't believe she'd want to avoid us, so I went looking for her."

"Taylor, did Victoria appear angry with you?"

Vicky raises her hand, looking sheepish.

"Victoria, after Taylor answers my question, you may talk next." He pointedly looks at me.

"Uh, kind of, she flew down and that made me jump and, and she was scary, and did get really angry when I said that she'd been mean to me."

"Alright Victoria, you wished to add something."

"Well, I might not have controlled my aura very well, because I was upset, and if Taylor was already afraid, well I guess might have made it a lot worse. I didn't mean to, but I could see it happening. I, uh, wasn't paying enough attention."

"Taylor, did you know Victoria has an emotion affecting aura?"

Oh, that makes a lot of sense, I mean, she had gotten pretty unreasonably terrifying for being called 'mean'. She'd been upset, but ripping people in half wasn't something she did. She was a hero. Even if a scary one.

Principal Edgeworth is still watching me.

"Uh, no, I mean Victoria, uh well, Glory Girl, is like Alexandria, I thought it was, uh, Gallant that had the emotion affecting powers."

"They both do. That is however, beyond the scope of why you all are missing class and are here. Do any of you, and especially you Taylor, disagree that what happened today is the issue that needs to be addressed?"

We shake our heads.

"Well then, Claire and Amy, in the future, just because you may be having fun, doesn't mean that the people you're with feel the same. You will not be officially punished for last week, just a warning to be more careful of others feelings. Perhaps, in the future, you and Taylor may be friends since you do appear have not intended to make her uncomfortable. On the other hand, perhaps not, as there are many students at Arcadia. Be mindful of the feelings of others. You two are dismissed. See Mrs Reynolds outside for passes to class."

After those two leave, it's just the three of us.

"Victoria, what is worse, to hurt somebody intentionally, or because you don't care what you're doing to them?"

Vicky looking sullen, and shrugs.

"Young lady, that wasn't a rhetorical question. Your actions were deeply upsetting to a fellow student, and led to physical repercussions for her. You will be assigned 3 detentions and will be required to meet with me and your parents at a date to be arranged. You are dismissed. You as well are to get a pass from Mrs Reynolds."

Vicky leaves, and I'm ready to go too.

"Taylor, Mrs Green tells me you are a rather quiet student. Would you agree?"

"Yeah, I just want to get through things and be left alone."

"Despite my admittedly outside perspective on your history, I am unsurprised. However, I do encourage you to try and find some friends amongst your fellow students. There isn't a 'best' time in your life, except perhaps in retrospect. If those three had been less careless, they might have been potential friends. Not everybody is a reflection of their acquaintances after all. I do not think they meant their actions poorly. Regardless, I expect they've burned any goodwill you might have for them. Do try and forgive them though for the parts of their behavior that were simply poorly thought out, rather than malicious."

I shrug and grunt out an OK. I'm not sure if he's seriously suggesting I be friends with them now, but I guess if they actually leave me alone, I can forgive them screwing up being friendly. Eventually anyway, as I doubt I'll be forgiving Vicky for a while.

"Well, I expect you won't wish to stay in school for the remainder of the day. Is your father generally able to take calls at work?"

"Yes, but I can make my own way home. I'd fine."

"Well, I've got my own regulations that I've got to follow, so please bear with me. If your father is available, I'll put him on speakerphone."

The conversation is as awkward as I expect. Dad is willing to come get me, but I convince him that I'm fine getting home on my own and that I'll call when I get there.

The highlight of the day is tinkering. Not that there's been anything to compete with it since breakfast this morning.

I've placed sensors on the steps of the house, so I can stop when dad gets home but don't have to worry about the time. Down in my secret basement lair, I'm again trying to get some better electrical function out of my tech. Currently, I think I can build a strength amplifying suit in about four days. The suit will immediately begin decaying, but will last at 90% effectiveness for about 8 hours. I'll be able to recycle the suit, but it'll still take the same amount of time to remake. If I could get more metals like in my squiggles, it would be able to survive the chem treatments to reenergize the polymers, but until then, it's like a really big turtle unit, in the shape of a suit of muscles. Also, no radio, because no electricity, or compatible computers. Actually the lack of electronics is really hard. If Tattletale goes for the testing plan, I guess we'll have to get ourselves burner phones. On the other hand, power suits that last less than a day are really poor theft targets. Maybe I could do ion based metabolic packets, as a charge carrier for a single direction reaction chamber?

I lose myself in my work until dad gets home.

While making dinner, dad asks questions until he understands what happened. I'm not happy about it, but I guess kids are stupid, even high schoolers, and I am just tired of it. Dad eventually agrees to shift the conversation away from my humiliating school day, and we continue to discuss what to do about Tattletale. He's finally come around to the idea of sponsoring her, especially since she is already an active cape, and my first gen power armor will be rather terrible. His only stipulation is that I can track her if she steals stuff from me.

I guess I can drug her food with a polymer that is released slowly from the body. Anywhere she goes, my units with be able to find if it connects to the sewers or storm drains. Of course, I can trace the trail of the suit's decaying polymers anywhere from that point, but I'd have to do it in person.

Tattletale did provide a list of all the Bay capes, and Glory Girl does have an emotion affecting aura, so, that's something for her being honest and knowledgeable. Dad and I put our heads together and start hashing out how we want this goods and services exchange to work with Tattletale.

The next day, I sit in the lunchroom and immediately regret it. A red haired boy sits down across from me.

He starts talking while I'm still considering him. "Hey, I'm got some friends, but they're kind of dumb sometimes. I'm not going to bother you, but they asked me to give you an apology. I suggested grovelling, but they didn't go for it."

He's cheerful and happy, like it's no big deal to him. My response of "OK" dampens his enthusiasm.

He gets back up from my table. "Yeah, well, they're sorry, and I hope you enjoy your lunch. Goodbye."

"Goodbye"

I missed his name. I don't even feel bad as he goes away.

What is with that group? It's like they took turns talking to me. Huh, maybe Sophia got warned off by Edgeworth, but she subtly lied to her group, just implying that I was like her, and maybe they'd like to be friends with me? That's not entirely unreasonable. Sophia is more, uh, punchy, as a bully, but maybe she tried to emulate Emma.

Actually, I have an idea to improve my elastic polymers, I'll just draw... Oh, right my stupid blunt nib pens. Fine, I guess I can wait until I get home and avoid any chance of somebody catching me tinkering.

I get through the day, get home, get through my homework, make dinner, and tell my dad about my day over dinner. I pack some of the leftovers for Tattletale. Dad mostly gets her stuff that can be eaten cold, but we had salad, and that can get packed as well pretty reasonably.

Tattletale sent a Polaroid as we requested. I put some shampoo in her next package, because I don't hate her. This package also contains my offer for her to do some heroing, testing my power armor. I'll call anything with goes over the limbs armor, and if it has a cockpit, then it'll be a mech. I think I could build a mech. Polymers are lightweight enough, and Tattletale looks small enough that I eventually could make it work. I'd need more metal, but the ion metabolic chambers might scale well. To make tools, I'll work out how to launch spikes or something. Oh, Tattletale's suit will need degradation catalysts, so it will break down quickly if she runs off with it.

The next couple weeks pass quickly for me. I'm left alone again at school, thankfully. Tattletale agreed to test my equipment for me. It works reasonably well. One of the first things I built, a sound recorder, she uses to narrate how well the stuff works. I finally admitted she can't have the internet because I can't make wires to carry the signal, or a computer for her to access the connection. She admitted she'd had her laptop and phone, sort of as a faint hope that it'd be useful, but their batteries had run down.

She's been helping my units harvest material from the next selected boat wreck. Her work is a great help. Mostly in the form of her using her brain for moving and collecting stuff. She says the power suit is working well. We've tentatively agreed that she'll start off hitting the Merchants. She'll take whatever she can in cash, and run. We'll split the cash.

I won't show her my full map of the Bay, but I've been sending updated paper maps of where there are unusual concentrations of chemical by products from making drugs, or drugs themselves. Tattletale says that none of them are likely safe houses though. Even the Merchants try to limit the amount of drugs that might lead back to their lairs. The areas with a lot of blood though likely are associated with fighting matches that Hookwolf arranges.

I'm still unwilling to meet with Tattletale, but next week is the protective tests using the new version of the armor. Those will be on the beach, in the boat graveyard. The dozen or so boats that got driven up onto the beach at the edge of the docks.

The next version of the suit will be armor plated, an organic iron carbon foam ranging from half an inch thick down to just an eighth. It's lighter than it looks, but it looks awesome. Tattletale is getting a grey theme, because I haven't figured how to bind the color pigments properly. Color was a low priority objective anyway. Aside from blunt punches, Tattletale would get a few weapons. The first 'weapon' was just the palms of the suit's hands. They had the resource absorption enzymes and reactants. If Tattletale wanted to really slowly give somebody a chemical burn, that would do it. It's intended function though was to eat through a doorknob or something, though that was also slow. The first real weapon was the spike launcher, on the right forearm. It launched spikes. It had four rounds, each in their own barrel. The left forearm had a tethered grapple hook, that could be launched as a bludgeon. Or, it could be launched to help climb things, because it was a grapple hook. The mechanism couldn't lift the suit, not even without Tattletale in it, but it would at least ratchet, stopping her from falling, and letting her more easily climb walls.

I was very excited, the suit had all sorts of recording mechanisms, and could break into pieces for easier transport.

Tattletale would get the suit on Monday, go test it that evening, and then it would break down into small enough pieces to get shipped back to me. I'd analyze the results and maybe be able to turn it around from another test run on Friday. Assuming all goes well, the week after, Tattletale gets to raid a Merchant storehouse and get a hot meal. She's gotten really insistent on that. I'll call a place of her choice beforehand, place an order for takeout, she'll pick up, pay, and eat on a rooftop. Then hit the merchants, get the loot, and get more hot food if she wants. I really ought to make her a chemical stove or something. I can't supply the electricity, or deal with the fumes from burning something in my underwater lair. Tattletale had gotten an actual toilet and shower though. The nice thing about polymers is they're easy work with. Once I had gotten confident enough to not accidentally kill her in the process, I had expanded the underwater lair with the extras. Anyway, only a couple more days until the weekend, and then soon, testing.
 
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too bad this is only Semi-Canon, this situation would have made things extremely awkward later down the line. kind weird no one mentioned the bullying comment Taylor made.
 
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The way Taylor reacts to Vicky and Amy makes a lot more sense then all those fanfics where she instantly becomes best friends with them and all the wards, after all she is still very traumatized from the Winslow experience.
 
I'm kinda dizzy from how reasonable that principal was.
Well, keep in mind, this is Edgeworth, not Blackwell.

Arcadia is a school that has the student's parents, the Youth Guard, and the PRT overseeing it. If Edgeworth isn't a good person, he can fake it well enough that he could be elected to prominent public office.

Edgeworth is a good person, I'm fine just WOG sharing that. Most principals I've met have been former teachers that wanted to keep the school running as well as they could.

Edgeworth is paying an incredible amount of attention to what he says and how he says it in this conversation. His first meeting with Taylor was when she and her father demonstrated their resolve to solve their own problems when the system failed them. Currently, Edgeworth is part of that system. He is very aware that he might be being recorded right now.

He's basically on his best behavior. If this didn't involve a pair of heroes, who are two kids under his care, and a girl he sympathizes with, also under his care and one that illegally recorded somebody in nearly exactly his situation abusing power over her, he might have been quite a bit more lax. He still would've gotten to the bottom of things, but with a lot less formalism.

too bad this is only Semi-Canon, this situation would have made things extremely awkward later down the line. kind weird no one mentioned the bullying comment Taylor made.
Do you mean this bit
"Yes, I mean, I can see how maybe what I said at lunch was funny now, if that's true about Narwhal, but I didn't know that, and if they were going to bully me about it, well I just wanted to be left alone."
Perhaps this is unclear, but it's Taylor acknowledging that maybe they weren't bullying her, but that's what it looked like at the time. She's saying 'now, now that it's explained to me, I can accept that maybe they were laughing at Amy, not me, but at the time, that's not what it looked like.'

As for the omake, Taylor still has a fairly black and white view of the heroes and villains.
Heroes -> Good People
Heroes -> No Gangs
Villains -> Bad People
Villains -> Have Gangs

Dad -> Good People -> (subconsciously) No Gangs

It wouldn't occur to Taylor at that point that a 'gang' is something heroes could have. It's a good omake to proceed this chapter, as this chapter is the first step in breaking down Taylor's trust in cape heroes. Primarily being able to trust the heroes to always be good and sensible people. An unrealistic expectation, but Taylor is a teenager.
The way Taylor reacts to Vicky and Amy makes a lot more sense then all those fanfics where she instantly becomes best friends with them and all the wards, after all she is still very traumatized from the Winslow experience.
Taylor does look adoringly up at the heroes. If Vicky hadn't been hanging around with Sophia, that conversation might have gone rather differently. Then again, that would be assuming Vicky does know everybody in the school and would introduce herself to somebody new.

I don't generally fault fanfics for making Taylor want to be friends with Vicky and Amy, I usually fault them for awkwardly contrived interactions to make such friendships possible. I'd imagine that Vicky and Amy get hit up for friendship several times a week, it's unbelievable that Taylor instantly makes friends with them, because that would mean that either Taylor is the mary sue of instigating friendship, or that Vicky and Amy have an ever growing army of best friends.

That would be a funny snippet.
Vicky: "New Wave, I'm leaving the team. It's time to forge new ground for me, as the leader of Vicky's Army of Super Devoted Friends. Even as we speak, my army of best friends, each member of which I know by name, is kidnapping all the gang members they can find so I can turn them to good with the Power of Friendship. I'll always speak well of New Wave, but it's time for me to start up my own army- I mean my own team."

Amy: "Ditto, except with less talking, because I'm the adorably quiet one."
 
This did make a lot of sense but I too am surprised that more wasn't made of Taylor's bullying comment. Remember, Vicki is impulsive, not stupid. Although Vicki might ask someone else privately...

Still, Taylor not making any friends due to her PTSD breaks my heart.
 
This did make a lot of sense but I too am surprised that more wasn't made of Taylor's bullying comment. Remember, Vicki is impulsive, not stupid. Although Vicki might ask someone else privately...

The bully comment, the mention of Sophia, the fact that this girl literally pissed herself and ran away out of fear of being bullied… I'm looking forward to whatever the follow-up will be to this. Victoria does not strike me as the kind of girl to let things like this go.
 
The bully comment, the mention of Sophia, the fact that this girl literally pissed herself and ran away out of fear of being bullied… I'm looking forward to whatever the follow-up will be to this. Victoria does not strike me as the kind of girl to let things like this go.
Alternatively she cuts her losses and ignores the weird girl who dramatically overreacts to everything.
 
You only update every Friday? Also the omake was hilarious.
Ah well, the first arc, I released a chapter every day, for the second onwards I've been posting one update a week.

This did make a lot of sense but I too am surprised that more wasn't made of Taylor's bullying comment. Remember, Vicki is impulsive, not stupid. Although Vicki might ask someone else privately...
The bully comment, the mention of Sophia, the fact that this girl literally pissed herself and ran away out of fear of being bullied… I'm looking forward to whatever the follow-up will be to this. Victoria does not strike me as the kind of girl to let things like this go.
Alternatively she cuts her losses and ignores the weird girl who dramatically overreacts to everything.
More information is coming. I will suggest keeping in mind that for what's been shown, here are the only two quotes that Vicky and Amy heard and are able to use to guess about what's going on.
"Yeah, I mean, we've never talked, and they are friends with Sophia, and usually sit with her group."
"Yes, I mean, I can see how maybe what I said at lunch was funny now, if that's true about Narwhal, but I didn't know that, and if they were going to bully me about it, well I just wanted to be left alone."
While text doesn't carry the tone that spoken language does, it would still be difficult to interpret more that just a degree of dislike from Taylor towards Sophia in the first quote.

For the second, I will say that use of the word 'bully' conveys only a tiny fraction of the emotional content that Taylor has experienced. Up to this point, it's not been presented in story that Vicky and the others are aware of Taylor's history of being bullied. They may not be. Somebody would have had to tell them, afterall. Would Sophia? If the PRT knew, would they spread it around?


Still, Taylor not making any friends due to her PTSD breaks my heart.
Yeah, Taylor has a rough time with kids her age. Things get better for her, somewhat, eventually. Becoming a parahuman implicitly means also being a broken person.

In some ways, Emma was a terrible person for Taylor even before the betrayal. From 9th grade onwards, Taylor has had basically no positive peer social interactions. Prior to that though, Emma was Taylor's social anchor, and that's assuming Taylor even had any other friends. Emma has generally seemed to me to be a rather socially demanding person.

Taylor is years out of date on how to interact with people at her actual age, and this is during a period of rapid maturing taking place around her. At best, Taylor is stuck at an 8th grade social level, and everybody she meets is in the middle of 10th or higher.
 
I quite like the slow build, though I'm now looking forward to the real start of the action.

It is also interesting that not much happened in BB since she started. Unreliable narrator is a thing, but I hope we would have been told if Leviathan stopped by.
 
It is also interesting that not much happened in BB since she started. Unreliable narrator is a thing, but I hope we would have been told if Leviathan stopped by.

At the start of the story, Taylor applied to Arcadia at the end of the school year, then went through the summer before starting there.

Since the canon Locker was in January, and Leviathan in May, this is all either after that, or else the canon timeline hasn't started yet. ;-)

(Well, either that or Danny's paranoia has successfully derailed canon so much that there's no reason for Leviathan to come to BB in the first place...)
 
At the start of the story, Taylor applied to Arcadia at the end of the school year, then went through the summer before starting there.

Since the canon Locker was in January, and Leviathan in May, this is all either after that, or else the canon timeline hasn't started yet. ;-)

(Well, either that or Danny's paranoia has successfully derailed canon so much that there's no reason for Leviathan to come to BB in the first place...)
Ok, important clarifications

Right now:
  • Taylor is a sophomore. Worm Canon starts later.
  • The Undersiders have not robbed the Ruby Dreams casino.
  • For reasons not yet explained in story, Sophia now attends Arcadia.
  • Taylor triggered during her freshman year, rather than in Worm canon where she triggered in her sophmore year.
  • Lisa hasn't figured out Coil's power yet.
The role of Canon in this story:
The train has elected to go in a different direction, but the rails are still present.

(Yes, I've used this pic before. I like this pic.)

I quite like the slow build, though I'm now looking forward to the real start of the action.
Oh.

Well, I don't want to be discouraging, but there isn't going to be a 'real start of the action' in the future of this story. There's a fight next chapter, and there are cape fights, battles and surprises, but there isn't a comparable event to 'fight the rage dragon and then join a cape team' set of chapters, like there was in canon.

I like my story, I think it's got a couple interesting ideas, but it's also the first 25k, the first 10k, and possibly the first 5k words I've written as part of a story I started (As an aside, I wrote ch 19, 20, & 21 of I, Goa'uld, which is a spastic cracky comedy, and my chapters add up to 6k words.) All that being said, this story is going to be an inelegant read. In my own opinion, my writing had improved, but refinement isn't necessarily a stylistic change. So, no hard feelings if this isn't anybody's thing. I'm just telling you so you don't have overly optimistic expectations.

It is also interesting that not much happened in BB since she started. Unreliable narrator is a thing, but I hope we would have been told if Leviathan stopped by.
The first person perspective was much harder to write than I expected, and it never feels natural to have a character go on an exposition speech in their internal dialogue. Internal rants work fine, but those aren't particularly expository.

Perspective is critical in this story. I would encourage a reader to assume that every perspective presented is moderately to heavily biased.

Taylor herself is extremely limited in her view. She's obsessed with her tinkering, has a father actively encouraging her to ignore anything related to being an active capes in the city, and neither of them have experience in superhuman vigilantism.

If I recall correctly, the next interlude is from Lisa's perspective. I hope you'll find it interesting in how differently Danny expected imprisoning Lisa to work and what actually happened to Lisa.

There's been stuff happening off screen. Coil has been almost literally tearing his hair out while trying to find Lisa, as an example. I try to allude to such things in story, but until Taylor starts being more active her problems will mainly be personal and social.
I'd have to check my notes, but I think the first real fight Taylor gets into is with Mush.

And yes, none of the characters are introverted or silly enough to just not comment on Leviathan attacking the city. That hasn't happened yet. Brockton Bay has not had an Endbringer attack.
 
Can Taylor give Lisa a plastic operation? Her power literally is plastics, lol, tho they're not the same thing, but of all people Coil has the power to find out who's in that suit and then he'll know whatever they know, so it's good that it's not Taylor there. Maybe Coil could find out it's not-Lisa and then never bother checking again, though Lisa will most likely flunk the being tortured to death test again so he'll know that the tinker is another person.

I don't want for all this paranoia to amount to nothing in the end!

Oh, and good story! Wish there was more, but if wishes were fishes Lisa would be sick and tired of them.
 
The plastic in plastic surgery is not referring to the material but to the concept of plasticity, the ability of a substance to hold a shape after being changed. Plastic surgeons primarily use grafts to achieve their ends; and without knowledge of how to perform basic surgery, Taylor would be unable to use any implants she created.
 
3.3 Interlude 3: Tattletale
3.3 Interlude 3: Tattletale
Freedom looked blue. Because I was underwater, testing a Tinker powersuit. I could swim, stretching my literal and metapho-

"FISH! Come here my fishy friend. I shall name you Edward, Edward the Epic!"

I giggle myself silly. Getting excited over a fish is silly. So what if it's the first living multicellular organism I had been able to see in weeks.

I lunge at at the fish screaming "Sushi!" when I realize I could eat it, but Edward the Epic easily dodges my grasp.

"Curse your slippery ways. I shall return! More powerful than you can possibly imagine."

The squiggle, had spent the past 4 hours in raw sewage, and was cleaned prior to presenting itself to me, waited for me to catch back up.

"False squid, how much longer until we get there?"

"Answer me!"

It didn't. I didn't have anybody to talk to. 3 weeks, 2 days, 6 hours since I last talked to anyone. I was fine though. Not confident in that assessment, possibly beginning to lose grip on reality.

Harvest metals for the plastic Tinker. Not logical acquisition of materials for a plastic Tinker.

The rusting decrepit hull of some boat lay in front of me. 10,000 ton capacity, loss of vessel ruined dreams. It was likely owned by a small shipping company that collapsed with the loss of it.

I didn't care. I pretend to not believe in dreams.

"I don't care." Inability to grasp reality is a symptom of insanity.

"I don't care!" I clamped down hard on my power to make it stop.

The oxygen remaining was approximately 5.5 hours according the status bar on my arm. Plenty of time to direct the turtle units and help chop up some more of the boat. High likelihood of an additional two hours as a safety measure, as oxygen deprivation would induce complacency or paranoia, depending on mood.

I'd be sure to leave with plenty of time. Death would be painless and unnoticed.

A few hours of work wouldn't kill me. Complacency over current situation possibly due to oxygen deprivation.

The only bad habit I had picked up from the past couple weeks was talking to myself, and of course, if things got really bad, I could always ask to be turned over to the PRT. Would be killed by Coil immediately.

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I make it back to my little bungalow with two and a half hours to spare.

The air tastes the same. So, I was almost certainly fine. Possibly asphyxia occurring due to failure of atmospheric regulator and experiencing carbon dioxide poisoning.

"Time to see what the food fairies brought me today." Leftovers.

Leftovers are in the tinkertech tupperware. Cold pasta salad, a bottle of water, a bottle of milk, and more cereal. Food container traveled through open water, cleaned by robots that traveled through raw sewage.

Manual labor made me too hungry to care. I am revolted.

Anyway, there was always the chance I could earn enough trust to take the powersuit and go out in disguise to get some hot food, or at least better tasting food. Tinker doesn't have sufficient funds to feed you over the long term, Tinker is poor. Tinker has alternative means to secure materials for tinkering. Tinker is-

That's enough of that.

Restricting my power to areas of interest was a losing proposition when there was nothing of interest.

"I'm bored. I should see if there are new books for me." There are no new books that I'll like, as the Tinker doesn't understand my taste in literature.

Since that's not going to happen, I resume eating, and turn the heat up. Turning the heat up to maximum will allow suicide by exercise induced exhaustion within 45 minutes.

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"Somewhere over the rainbow bluebirds fly
And the dream that you dare to,
Oh why, oh why can't I?
Well I see trees of green and red roses too,
I'll watch them bloom for me and you
And I think to myself
What a wonderful world
Well I see skies of blue
And I see clouds of white
And the brightness of day
I like the dark
And I think to myself
What a wonderful world"

Outsideness! Freedom to express myself in song to the world! I prance about on top of a low roof, reveling in the ability to move more than 15 feet in any direction without also being under water.

Somebody makes noise below me, in response to my singing. May it be a dastardly villain, cunning heroine, or nervous civilian? Homeless drug addict.

I run to the edge of the roof, leapt off, kick off the far wall, and fail to stick the landing, rolling to a stop in front of a homeless man.

I cheerfully greet him, as he's the first person I've seen in weeks, "Hi!"

He hesitantly responds back, "Hello." He thinks I may be a drug induced hallucination.

"I need some money, and a fight. Do you know where the Merchants hang out?"

"Uh, everywhere." He is hungover. He can't direct me to where he buys drugs, much less guess at a safehouse location.

He tried to help though, so I reward him with a winning smile, although the facemask is incapable of expression, and run outside of the alley to continue my search and freedom. Four hours until I need to return to the water to swim back to my cell.

The Merchants sell crappy drugs anywhere they can, but they mainly hold territory around the docks and the trainyard. Places nobody wants. Well aside from the dockworkers union desperately pretending they're economically relevant. Tinker considers himself associated with dockworkers.

"Shut Up!" I know that already. Tinker would prefer tests to occur near the water, out of concern for you.

"Ok, where are some Merchants?" I ask myself. I don't know.

The Tinker is monitoring you as a type of test.

I wander around this part of the city for a couple hours, using my power to pick out dealers, and slowly building up an idea of where the local drug supply safehouse might be hidden.

With a solid hour and a half before I need to head back to the water, I find a safehouse. I wait and watch a dealer enter and then leave, my power confirming that he resupplied himself with drugs.

Now, for the glorious and movie quality debut of my powersuit testing in live combat. Also, weapons, and by weapons I mean lefty and righty.

I didn't have weapons yet. I was going to have to punch and kick people around.

No guard outside the door, so this is security by obscurity. Not enough drugs or people present to make it worthwhile to try and hold off even just the cops and it risks somebody noticing.

I wait a moment and use my power a bit further. Probably two or three people inside, all armed, but their purpose is to ensure a lack of betrayal rather than to defend against an external attack. They'll all be in the room with the drugs and money.

Excellent, time to get some money.

I circle around the single building, keeping out of sight. Two doors, a bunch of windows, about half boarded up. 3 out of 8 are boarded up, the 2nd and 3rd are boarded up because that is where the money room is with the guards.

It's a shitty building, I can kick through the door, then beat each of the gang members unconscious. The most important thing is speed, both in terms of not getting hurt and getting out of there with the loot. Probable fastest response time is 3 minutes, assuming Protectorate or Merchant capes in the area, but likely much longer due to lack of loot in the building.

Door frame is sufficiently rotten that I can kick the door open. On the other hand, I'm bored.

Window it is.

I back up, then sprint across the street and jump through the window, tumbling into a crash against the wall.

The yelling starts as I push myself into a sitting position. A door next to me gets pulled open and throw a punch into a knee. Male, early thirties, naturally healing will not restore knee function.

The now screaming man falls down in front of me. Yelling comes from behind him. One other guard. Excellent.

I poke my head around the corner, duck, and jerk my head back as gunshots, three, ring out. Likely a revolver.

Hmm… I waggle the edge of the powersuit pass the door frame, above the first guy who's progressed to whimpering and clutching his ruined knee.

Numerous more bangs. Then a click.

Party time!

I hop up, smash a small globe of homemade pepper spray on the first guy, which starts him screaming again, then dash around the corner, shouting encouragement. "Whoo! Go me!"

Early twenties, doesn't clean his revolver often enough. My tackle drags us both to the floor, and I frenetically punch him until he stops moving.

I'm in a hallway. Room on the right has the money and drugs.

"Loot! Plunder! Filthy Lucre!"
 
SWEET BABY MOTHER OF JESUS! TAYLOR LEFT A HUMAN ALONE FOR 3 WEEKS WITHOUT ANY OUTSIDE CONTACT! THAT ALMOST AS BAD AS TO WHAT THE TERRIBLE TRIO DID TO HER!
Understandable in terms of security, but still, three weeks that's torture!
Oh looks a new chapter!
 
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