Mauling Snarks (Worm) (Complete)

Maybe?
It is possible but unlike with Alabaster, whose entire purpose WAS Resetting even Death, I am not sure that Carlos' will have the same luck.
On the plus side? He survived well beyond Leviathan this time? *Sweats* That's good, no?

Eh. Worse case scenario is Riley gets involved. Since she was capable of making the Slaughterhouse 9000 in Canon, and given Taylor's fugue abilities in addition, I shall hold out hope that our friend isn't lost yet.
 
I think it might be the siberian

Siberian had her body turn into a plant-like being and her brain was superfluous and so her fathers Snark took it on and used it as his projections control interface.

Whereas the Ward retained her human form but gained an aversion to natural fibres and colder temperature And her snark had swapped parts with nearby snarks to fix the holes it had in it's ability to connect properly to the host species and after learning what the host species is supposed to be from BA and Shaper.
 
Eh. Worse case scenario is Riley gets involved. Since she was capable of making the Slaughterhouse 9000 in Canon, and given Taylor's fugue abilities in addition, I shall hold out hope that our friend isn't lost yet.
Also one of Grammes kids under Jakobs care now has a snark specifically to enable others to fugue.
 
And then we discover that Entities and Mass Effect fields are two entirely Incompatible Systems and accidentally a few planets... and solar systems.

Pffft. @CmptrWz and @mp3.1415player are not the same person! Just because both of them troll people all the time and have super-long stories is not enough evidence! ;-P

I think.

I mean, next thing you'll suggest is that @Ack is the same person too! Proof! Most of of the latter's stories aren't as long, just there's a whole lot of them.

Wait.

Now I'm half-convinced of it myself...
 
I really have to agree that Tayor's reaction to Carlos dying seems... very off. If it's shock that's one thing. but if she keeps getting these weird reactions to people she's supposed to be close to dying, then that development would be very concerning.
 
So Carlos is dead, but is there any chance he might come back once his power is back online? Given that powers apparently keep scans of their users and his power more than most has the needed capabilities to heal.
Probably depends on how long he's been dead for, and whether they chilled his body. Based on recent research, and the way people have been revived after many hours with no heart beat, maybe. I think a combination of luck, and whether it suits the story, will rule things.

Please note, if Taylor's been told he's dead then they were likely pretty sure - doesn't mean his power can't pull a Lazarus on him, though. In RL people have 'died' of things like the flu, been put in cool caves (particularly in epidemics), then revived later, and lived a full life.
 
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RIP Carlos... Will his passing get more of a reaction from Taylor once she has time to deal with all this?

Right now, it sorta reads like "Oh well, Carlos died, what else is on the news?", and I don't think that was the intention?

I really have to agree that Tayor's reaction to Carlos dying seems... very off. If it's shock that's one thing. but if she keeps getting these weird reactions to people she's supposed to be close to dying, then that development would be very concerning.

Weighing in on the "Oh, Carlos died. That's sad." reaction: Taylor's brain is more Shard Snark than it is Human at this point and Broadcast Administrator, if not more of the network, is running a Taylor simulation piloting her body. It is not quite that bad in the abstract, she was still there when the network went down for viral purge after all and Helvetia may have done a lot of help out there while doing the shard merge, it has been mentioned several times, often in passing, that due to the physical brain damage caused by the recurring failed second trigger when Trickster kidnapped her that BA had to take drastic measures to save Best Host Taylor.

Part of what this all means is that Taylor is likely to have very muted emotional responses to most things for a variety of reasons with the most likely main reason being that BA is 'suppressing' the more negative reactions so she can just get on with the finding creative solutions to novel problems and providing that prime [Data].
So, really, Taylor not having a very strong reaction to finding out someone she knows died is very in-line with what we've been told so far.

Edit: Added in Helvetia helping out. (Note: helping and not halping as this fandom is fond of using.)
 
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Hmm.

So the question is, are we in Endgame mode? I'm going to make the argument that no, we might not be. (I've tried to read recent CW responses, but don't @ me if I missed something.)

So what we have here is a very slowly progressing "Slice of Life" story in a hyperdramatic setting. While I have no idea how ComptrWz outlines it for himself, I would organize it thusly:

  1. Taylor gets powers (snark-level attention)
    1. Taylor learns about her powers
    2. Life with powers
    3. Getting clever with powers
  2. Taylor becomes an outed badass (Butcher scenario)
    1. Taylor learns about being an outed Badass (and eventually Amy too)
    2. Life as an outed badass
    3. Getting clever with being an outed badass
  3. Taylor gets Jabberwock-level attention
    1. (Taylor learns about Jabberwock-level stuff)
So if the pattern holds, we get 100-140 chapters worth of act 3 - learning, life with, and getting clever with the local Jabberwock infestation. We already see the Abbadon scenario being gently presented as something still out there as a threat, so there's no need to cap things at the meta-story level set by canon. There's been a massive phase change in the setting and the understanding of the setting, and I can't believe that ComptrWz isn't going to spend a seemingly interminable amount of time exploring what our favorite girls are doing all day in the new normal.

Oh, and speaking of Abbadon, that presents the possibility of double-layered thematic repetition:

4. Taylor becomes a Jabberwock-level badass.

Be a hell of a thing if it can scale that far. "Mauling Snarks", indeed.

Or maybe I'm completely misreading, this will get tied up in 40 chapters (it's CW) and then HH:ES will shift into top gear.
 
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:facepalm: ... I would like to point out the following to all the people who seem to believe that Carlos has died...

Other causes were more scattered, but one of the few she recognized mentioned was Carlos. She hadn't heard that he'd died, but the news had picked up on it. Unlike most on the list, he'd been off-duty and originally appeared to be fine. That is, until he had a heart attack a few hours after his powers had shut down. Likely a consequence of some altered biology that hadn't been stable enough without his powers functioning.

Please allow me to briefly rephrase that for folks who don't quite grok contractions.

"She HAD NOT heard that he'd died."

This basically means that she only heard that he had a heart attack. ;)

Now, I suppose it's possible that in some remote, or less fortunate, locations of the world a heart attack would be guaranteed fatal. :(

However Carlos is known to be located in the United States. Even by terrible Earth Bet standards the US is still a mostly First World Country and medical help for things like heart attacks is not very far away. :whistle:

If you don't especially believe me I would like to direct your collective attention to an article from Harvard Medical School about How Heart Attacks Became Less Deadly. :p

EDIT: Ok, before it gets pointed out to me I will admit that the entire paragraph is a bit more ambiguous about his death than my first read through had me thinking. It does seem to imply that he may have died however it can be interpreted either way. I await verification in story or by WOG.
 
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The heart attack is what killed him. As far as Taylor knew, until the news broadcast, Carlos was 100% fine, awake, and walking around. His powers just hadn't come back online yet. She's been rather busy since she first woke up after all, and hadn't had a chance to check in with the other wards yet.
 
Weighing in on the "Oh, Carlos died. That's sad." reaction: Taylor's brain is more Shard Snark than it is Human at this point and Broadcast Administrator, if not more of the network, is running a Taylor simulation piloting her body. It is not quite that bad in the abstract, she was still there when the network went down for viral purge after all....

Part of what this all means is that Taylor is likely to have very muted emotional responses to most things for a variety of reasons with the most likely main reason being that BA is 'suppressing' the more negative reactions so she can just get on with the finding creative solutions to novel problems and providing that prime [Data].
So, really, Taylor not having a very strong reaction to finding out someone she knows died is very in-line with what we've been told so far.

Edit: Added in Helvetia helping out. (Note: helping and not halping as this fandom is fond of using.)

I don't think I'd go quite to that extreme level, but something that comes out in rereading the whole story is that a lot of interactions and reactions are the interactions and the reactions of the snarks. While the whole Taylor Thesis bit was nominally about her proving that hosts affect Snarks as well, it is a subtle way of emphasizing to the reader just how much the snarks drive the human interactions. Vicky nearly kills Taylor - not because she wants to, but because the snark pushes that aggression. Lung is a relatively nice local warlord - but his hyperaggressive snark drives him to extreme combat. Most of New Wave are boring middleburbia but they get urges.

And yeah, Taylor has noted multiple times that BA is manipulating her to keep her on an even keel. That doesn't make her more shard than human, but it does mean that you have to parse her emotional levels with some interpretation.

Also, how well did she really know Carlos? Losing a yearlong(?) classmate sucks, but even in this kinder, gentler worm setting the parahuman death rate has to be pretty high.
 
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From personal experience I can tell you just how much jack shit that counts for.

Exactly. Survival if you have a heart attack depends greatly on how early it can be detected. However it sounds like his heart attack was caused by an adaptation made previously due to an injured heart which only worked when his powers were active. And without that adaptation working, his heart simply couldn't handle the load at all.
 
From personal experience I can tell you just how much jack shit that counts for.

Please note I'm not claiming that nobody ever dies of a heart attack in America. I'm just saying it's survivable and the chances of surviving it are greater being in a major North American city vs being in a Canoe somewhere in the Amazon River Basin. o_O
 
Please note I'm not claiming that nobody ever dies of a heart attack in America. I'm just saying it's survivable and the chances of surviving it are greater being in a major North American city vs being in a Canoe somewhere in the Amazon River Basin. o_O
You're going to need a lot better tech to pull-off a much better chance of survival - would you want to wear 'smart clothes', that talk to your cell/mobile phone, and do their best to help you in a medical emergency?

Definitely a step up from robot trousers...
(no pun intended)
 
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Even minor research shows that entirely dependent on when treatment is sought the survival rate for a heart attack can be as high as 96% or as low as 30%. Carlos however had the problem of his heart was incapable of pumping enough blood due to damage and the power assisted work around being disabled. Even if he had been in a hospital at the time, which he might not have been, and had cardiac specialists on hand at that exact moment... his survival chance was probably very very low.
 
"I suppose that's nice to know. Do I want to know how you're going to get in?"

"Do you honestly expect me to not be able to access it when I have full access security codes available?"

"Okay, yeah, that would make sense."
And also says disturbing things about how Tinkertech works. A bit too on the nose of, say, the Mass Relays for me to be entirely comfortable...
WARNING: This order set will clear all shard permissions, cancel all standing orders, and temporarily suspend all non-essential shard activity before rebuilding all core permission sets from archives. Do not continue if any planetary bodies are reliant on shard intervention for orbital stability.
Ooh boy. That's going to be a lot of "fun." Things are about to get rather pear-shaped...
I'll be honest, if he wasn't already dead and gone then I'd probably have advocated for hunting down Nilbog.
When did he die?!
That none of his counterpart's access codes had been included in the reset, even for emergency use cases, was another clue.
That seems like an oversight. Why would the Enemy not use the codes of the dead Originator, then?
If a member of said species was at all responsible for the enemy action being discovered then a personal visit to thank them would be required.
*opens door*
"You have a *twitch* visitaaaaaaah *thud*."
"This is my life now."
[SALUTATIONS.]
In particular, the only known counter to a Sting-enhanced moon to the center of mass was dodging, and this system had lots of moons and moon-sized objects in its various uninhabited-by-hosts iterations.
Uh, yay?
If he had enough time, he might be able to prepare to test the plans that a particularly clever host had come up with a few cycles back. Sting-enhancing one of the extra stars before launching it at the interloper at ninety-eight percent of the speed of light would be an interesting experiment, at least. If it did work then it would make for a wonderful last-ditch protective measure, one that very few would expect.
WHAT THE UTTER HELL WERE THESE PEOPLE DOING?!
*Screams incoherently and hides behind the nearest brown dwarf*

...Don't tell me the previous one had Cave Johnson in it...
That or it was one of Meep's stories. SYS Admin actually did that, come to think of it...

He's absolutely right that no one would expect it. It might be because it's insane, but no one would expect it.
so a rarely-used protocol had been used to combine all four snarks
Whoever gets that Shard later will be very confused.
{Cease} will also probably be all bent out of shape again, too...
Sadly, that meant adding dealing with the minor damage on the shards that had been on the fringe of the explosion to her list of things to do. Hopefully that would be easily handled during deployment. Of course, she'd also eventually be dealing with all of the damage that the hosts messing with the undeployed shards had done, on top of whatever damage had been done by the crash itself. A little explosion damage was probably minor in comparison.
I have this strange desire to find out that it was actually hilariously effective and takes longer to clean up than some of the theoretically easier things.
In that case, he was really hoping that he had time to set up the stellar launcher. Watching the interloper try and dodge a relativistic star that could redirect itself instantly to another trajectory once would be highly amusing.
Well, he's right...
Taylor suppressed the urge to whistle as she set up her little grenade launcher in the corner of the restaurant. The owners were perfectly happy for her to do so, as on Mondays they only opened for private groups. They also were rigged to be able to literally hose down the main room, so containment foam inside the building wouldn't be a significant problem. Of course, if they were lucky then the grenade wouldn't be needed, but being prepared was a good thing.

"I can't believe that you're setting that thing up," Amy said.

Taylor rolled her eyes. "Why not?"

"Because it'll mean that we don't have to slap down the idiots."

"Which means that we can finish our dinner without significant interruption."

"And if we don't slap them down then people may not realize that we have our powers back."

Taylor nodded. "Exactly."

Amy blinked. "What?"

"With any luck, the next group will be larger."
Ah, that answers my question.
I still can't tell who's the worse influence, though--her or BA.
Things went pear-shaped for the infection when the primary controller node for it was taken out by a subtle command it missed, also taking out its ability to spread to uninfected snarks with stolen high-level codes, but it was still going strong until it was detected and purged."
The Butcher again? Why do I feel as if this may have also somehow been Taylor's fault?
Oddly enough, nobody asked how the grenade had been deployed, not even those being arrested.
I suspect they figured it was best not to ask, for fear that the overly obvious may cause eye damage.
Still, I apologize for the significant invasion of your privacy, as I needed to know what you were actually thinking and not just what you said out loud, as well as for the knockout drug that had settled into the bottom half of your beer. I'll see myself out when I'm done reconfiguring your agent.
Again, this does not necessarily make me feel better about the Troubleshooters...
Although apparently they have quite the sense of humor at our expense.
And that Eidolon is a better man, although I'm not sure it was wise to completely retire. That seems like he's compensating again.
Other causes were more scattered, but one of the few she recognized mentioned was Carlos.
Well, shit.
It was the last, and most recently created, connection profile that was the most interesting, as it was the only one that had a host that had remained remotely human and had retained full mental faculties. Out of curiosity, she dug out the reports for this shard and reviewed them quickly. It didn't take long to spot that the shard had been given 'lessons', with the one semi-valid host connection being made after that point. Also, it had swapped some physical components with other nearby shards to accomplish that much. Apparently Taylor and Amy had been fixing things for longer than they'd originally thought, which was good to know. More so, the girl seemed happy with the changes, so the connection could remain.

Well, deploying this shard would be a lot easier with the one good connection, but fixing the connection profile was next. The current profile wouldn't allow the host to grow properly, among other things, but was potentially useful for a number of things. Step one was restoring the original host configuration, to take effect immediately. Step two was installing the components needed to allow the host to change back and forth between the old and new physical states. Step three was tieing the additional abilities to the altered physical state, since they depended on detection structures not present in the original host configuration.
I think it might be the siberian
...Alexandria, is that you?
 
hmm. If Sibirians human form is reset, but manton's snark has her brain.

Weirdest outcome would Dual body? Sibirian wakes up in her original human body, sans power (responsible snark disconnected), but when manton power activates, her perception splits to occupy that body to? would that be enough for her to trigger again, if she had the capacity to do so?
 
Taylor's brain is more Shard Snark than it is Human at this point and Broadcast Administrator, if not more of the network, is running a Taylor simulation piloting her body.

Where on earth did you get that idea? I don't remember anything at all like that in this story.

...Don't tell me the previous one had Cave Johnson in it...
That or it was one of Meep's stories. SYS Admin actually did that, come to think of it...
Link?
 
That is miss "only synthetic fibers", right? The one that was going to be/was relocated due to temperature concerns?
No plant-sourced materials more than anything else. Leather is perfectly fine, for example.
So Carlos is dead, but is there any chance he might come back once his power is back online? Given that powers apparently keep scans of their users and his power more than most has the needed capabilities to heal.
Sadly, those who die while their powers are offline will not recover.
RIP Carlos... Will his passing get more of a reaction from Taylor once she has time to deal with all this?

Right now, it sorta reads like "Oh well, Carlos died, what else is on the news?", and I don't think that was the intention?
I really have to agree that Tayor's reaction to Carlos dying seems... very off. If it's shock that's one thing. but if she keeps getting these weird reactions to people she's supposed to be close to dying, then that development would be very concerning.
Also, how well did she really know Carlos? Losing a yearlong(?) classmate sucks, but even in this kinder, gentler worm setting the parahuman death rate has to be pretty high.
Carlos was a classmate and coworker for around six months, but she didn't really interact with him much outside of those contexts. Why do people expect her to be close to him?

I'm honestly not that close to people that I've worked with for literally years.
That seems like an oversight. Why would the Enemy not use the codes of the dead Originator, then?
I have no clue what you think is an oversight. "Let's not include the potentially compromised access codes when resetting all permissions due to things having been compromised." is what's happening...
 
Carlos was a classmate and coworker for around six months, but she didn't really interact with him much outside of those contexts. Why do people expect her to be close to him?

From rereading it at least for me, I thought the timeframe was more along the lines of a year to a year and 1/2. And since the work the wards do (even in this lighter version of BB) fits along the lines of a police force or military unit, people in those situations can get real close in 6 months even. but I can see the logic here. thanks for the explanation Wiz.
 
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