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LokiQuest: Re-Reshape and Retry (CK2)

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KnowledgeKing said:
Some typos/spelling with Elym's name. And math/maths. I'd honestly say Loki's more mature than this, with more proper grammar, but it's still good enough to earn some roll bonuses and be non-canon once Elym's name is fixed.
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Huh
I actually had loki more mature originally and changed it to be more childlike .
Same with the grammar I had assumed when you said they where learning some grammar it had meant primary level grammar

I've fixed the Elym issue (damm you autocorrect) and changed the maths to math (where I'm from it was always maths)
 
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Can we do a learning action to study the fashions and aesthetics and how to better do them?

An intrigue action to investigate and study these covertly as they apply in real life as well as attending all the fashion exhibitions and shows across the nine realms?

A stewardship actio to get a job in the industry and work our way up? Open our own shop?

A martial to incorporate what availible resources we have to protecting our beauty in combat and looking good doing it?
 
Abyssal_light said:
I actually had loki more mature originally and changed it to be more childlike .
Same with the grammar I had assumed when you said they where learning some grammar it had meant it primary level grammar
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Hm...Like he's still a child and a lot of the thoughts aren't out of place just some of the diction and insults.

And grammar, I could see some of his classmates or maybe even Thor writing like that, but Loki's top of the class so it'd actually be really proper.
 
KnowledgeKing said:
Hm...Like he's still a child and a lot of the thoughts aren't out of place just some of the diction and insults.

And grammar, I could see some of his classmates or maybe even Thor writing like that, but Loki's top of the class so it'd actually be really proper.
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I'll spend some time going over it tomorrow making a adjustments and the like (since I underestimated lokis technical writing skills)

Also @KnowledgeKing
What level would you say his technical writing is?
And what did you mean by roll bonuses
 
Sena Kumo said:
@KnowledgeKing is there any Intangibility Magic here?
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Shadows would've been the closest. Maybe Light Magic. Also Astral Projection (kinda) and Shapeshifting can kinda not really do it.

Abyssal_light said:
Also @KnowledgeKing
What level would you say his technical writing is?
And what did you mean by roll bonuses
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He probably writes near an 8th grade level for the American Education system.

You get anywhere from +5 to +10 to any roll (before the roll happens) for a non-canon Omake.

A +15 for a canon Omake.

And cut it in half if you want to wait until the roll is done.
 
[X] Plan: Advancing Voice
-[X] Train: The expectations haven't changed
--[X] With the Trainer specifically, DC 20 Martial
-[X] Make friends during your lessons...and during training! DC 30
-[X] Ask Father if he could help you personally with further tutelage on how to run a kingdom. DC 70
-[X] Pull another prank! You've got the taste for it now!
--[X] On Thor. DC 50
-[X] Learn more about your magic with Mother. DC 25
-[X] Ask the Instructor to be your tutor

We've officially not advanced to phase two of martial training because we were tutored by mother so we can advance if we show off our skills to the trainer.
Then we try to make a friend, we can wait a turn to get a martial instructor but the longer we're friendless the lonelier Loki will be. Mentors do not fill that gap a friend can.

Also making a plan on a phone is very frustrating.
 
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