Life Ore Death - DC Feruchemy [Young Justice]

New Beginnings - part 2
Life Ore Death
* January 28 [Raquel PoV]

Having to juggle school, time with the Team, and fighting crime in Dakota had sorta sucked for the first few weeks, but after it turned out that Team activities could include homework help – Robin was a math whiz, Superboy had history facts out the wazoo, Kid Flash was a life saver in Chem 1, and it felt so awesome that I could edit their English essays in exchange – things got more manageable.

Plus, I was actually being useful. More than as just another teammate, my (belt's) powers and my awesome skills were contributing.

Powers-wise, the belt let me fly, but even better was how the kinetic dampener let me go blow-for-blow with Superboy. Yeah, I still wore body padding and stuff to be safe, but my belt handled all the important punishment from his fists, which was awesome.

Seriously, who else could say they got to judo throw a Kryptonian? Yeah, he was half-human apparently, and he was letting me practice because Black Canary was teaching me some martial arts basics, but it was still totally awesome.

"That's it for our training session today," Black Canary announced after a cool down. "I'll see you all Sunday afternoon."

"Remember that tomorrow's a free day, but we're also having the former Huntress come in to talk about the League of Shadows," Robin added. "So show up, or Artemis will shoot an arrow at you."

"Watch it, birdbrain," the blonde in question rallied back. She turned to the rest of us. "I'm hitting the showers: date tonight."

"Hot date tonight," Kid Flash chimed in.

"Me and M'gann too," Superboy said.

[I'm going to stick around and run through a few more exercises before I unwind a little,] Jericho declared.

I saw my opportunity. "I'm still single, but tonight I'm staying in instead of partying. Think you could pick up where your mentor left off in teaching me some stuff?" I tried not to sound skanky or bat my eyelashes as I said it – I wasn't trying to flirt with him, after all.

Jericho was totally cute, and there was something about that sensitive artist's soul, but I wanted to try getting Aqualad's attention for a little longer before I went after anyone else. Beside, Jericho was still skinny, and I like a guy with more muscle.

[If you don't mind me not talking to you much,] he replied.

I shrugged. "Hey, I'll even write back and forth on a pad instead if it'll help you feel better." 'I really hope he doesn't take that wrong.'

He smiled. [No need for that. What do you want to work on first?]

"How about some sparring, and you can tell me where my weak spots are." ''Cause no doubt I have a lot of them.'

We squared off in the ring as the others filed out, until it was just us and Sphere-the-alien-Super-Cycle.

I started off with a couple jabs just to warm up, and then I tried a roundhouse kick that got dodged real easy-like.

"What, don't tell me you're afraid to hit a girl?" I teased as he stayed on the defensive.

Jericho raised one eyebrow and put his fists down, almost seeming to droop. I immediately felt like an ass.

"Hey, I'm sorry, I forgot about the talk-,"

*WHUMP*

I blinked up at the lights on the ceiling as I waited for the room to stop spinning. Above me, a hologram flashed Rocket: Fail.

I sat up, still dazed, and caught Jericho clicking his tongue at me. He waved a piece of paper in my face, the smug blond pretty-boy.

Lesson 1: Don't let your guard down if the other guy is still fighting. Bad guys play possum sometimes.

"Wow," I muttered, still not quite standing up yet. "Geez, Jericho. You're a lot snarkier than I gave you credit for."

He started scribbling again. It's my pretty face. People always think I'm so innocent. BTW, my friends call me Joey. He waited for me to read it, and scribbled another line: I think I can say we're friends, right?

I grinned in relief, nodded, and let him help me up.

Then I tried to sweep him like Canary showed me, only to get dumped on my ass again.

"Okaaay," I groaned, "match is over and I say you win." He helped me up again. He reached for his pad, but I got my head together faster. "That's what I wanted to talk to you about. The friends thing," I added. "We don't spend a lot of time together so far, so…."

He nodded cheerfully, moved his hands in sign language, and grabbed his pad again. I waited for him to finish.

Team bonding and getting to know each other? I'm in. It was really intimidating being with the others at first, you know?

"I know. I tried to play tough girl, and a fat lot of good that did me," I reflected. 'Though, I was one of the ones okay after our fight with the League… I guess I have less to have nightmares about, unlike the others.' "Everyone is really cool, though. You included."

Thanks. I joined when Renka was still in a coma to start with. They were really good about me not being her half-assed replacement. Artemis helped out a lot with coming to terms with my father and stuff. Sibling issues, too.

'Sibling issues?' "Sibling issues? I remember her sister is that Shadows chick. Cheshire?"

I have a brother. Grant talks shit about maybe following in Dad's footsteps. Mom isn't happy about it. I'm torn between staying more at the Mountain to stay away from the fighting, or being there to keep it from getting worse.

I winced. "My advice? If it's bad enough you want to run, then it's not your job to fix anything. If you need help, we're here, too."

Thanks, he wrote. We expect new teammates in a few weeks, did you hear?

I nodded. "Some of Aqualad's friends from Atlantis, and two of Miss Martian and Superboy's classmates. Though, like, one is a civilian? I was a bit busy, so we weren't around much at the same time when they visited. What are they like?"

Karen has sass. I like her. I think you will too. She's the one who actually wants to be a crime fighter, so M'gann is getting her some training and supervision so she doesn't get herself killed kicking gangsters' butts. No powers.

Wendy is nice, and a bit uncertain about all of this. I think she's mostly swept along by Karen. I haven't heard of her having powers, but I overheard Black Canary and Wonder Woman talking about something in her file, so it sounds like I'll have another member of the Kids of Criminals club pretty soon. I expect she'll hang back at the Mountain with Ferris for Mission Control.

Artemis also hinted about someone she knows in Gotham, but we probably won't meet her until after March is done, she said.

I've been working on a Survival Guide for new teammates. Advice and stuff, but I'm trying to make it funny. Read it over for me?


I grinned. "I'd love to."

We moved over to the sitting room and he went to print off a few pages.

I read it over with a chuckle.

So, You've Decided to Join the Team

"I like the title," was my first response. "Huh. Multiple sub-lists? General and personal behavior? Maybe better names," I advised.

I read some more.

Rules for personal behavior:

In addition to general things about being on the Team, a few of the members might have their personal quirks. To stay safe and unperforated, you should consider these pieces of advice at all times when interacting with them:


  • Robin is a total troll. Recruit him to help with any pranks or he will sabotage them for fun.
    • Don't mess with his belt, his mask, or his sunglasses. Anything else is fair game, but he will get even with you.
  • If you need a break, don't be afraid to ask Aqualad. If you notice that he needs a break, don't hesitate to tell him that you need a break, because he is in denial about his own limits.
  • Kid Flash eats a lot, and if you don't explicitly label any food in the fridge it will be gone in a day or two. Also, slipping laxatives into food as a prank didn't work on him the one time I tried it.
    • If he's flirting with you and you feel uncomfortable, just say, "I feel uncomfortable." He WILL NOT get anything less subtle than that, and Artemis has proven entirely willing to let him troll people on her behalf.
  • Superboy watches static on the television. If you need to tape anything, tell Robin and he can set up a program to do it without you monopolizing the TV, because Superboy has eternal dibs on it. Watching it with him is a good way to bond.
  • If Miss Martian is cooking, ask her how many times she's tried the recipe. Any attempt after the third is probably safe. Everything after the fifth attempt has proven to be pretty good.
    • The same way Superboy has dibs on the TV, Miss M has dibs on kitchen use. She's nice about sharing and letting other people try out ingredients, but it is HER DOMAIN, and trespassing gets you dish duty or worse.
  • If Ferris says she doesn't want to talk about it, drop it. If you don't want to discuss something, say so, and she'll drop it.
    • Her room is off-limits without express permission. Even if the door is open, don't go in unless she's said so. Even if she isn't in there. Don't close the door either. Especially don't mess with her books. Other stuff is okay.
  • Always treat Artemis as though she is pointing an arrow in your general direction. If she's in a good mood, you may assume that the arrow is pointing at a guy trying to sneak up behind you. If she's in a bad mood, treat her like she's aiming at your face, and don't do anything you wouldn't do if she had an actual arrow pointed in your direction.
  • Zatanna is a total card shark.
I finished the page and looked up. "Good start, though I can see why you want a few of them to be more helpful. Nothing for you and me yet?" He shrugged, looking boyish and embarrassed. "Is this about that whole Great Eight thing?" I teased. He smiled back.

I don't actually believe there's anything special about them or whatever, but I think it's hilarious that I can make Kaldur face-palm when I bring it up, so I want to turn this thing into a meme for the Team, you know?

I laughed. "Okay, I get that. I'm so willing to help you out as long as it doesn't get too crazy. If I think of any ideas, I'll let you know."

He shot me a thumbs-up in lieu of writing anything.

"Hey," I said, "I didn't want to ask earlier 'cause I felt like the only one who didn't know, but where's Ferris today? I haven't seen her do much atTeam training outside of taking notes and some arm exercises Robin taught her, but she usually tries to show up."

She went down to Atlantis a few days ago. She's come back using the Zeta 1 or 2 times since, like to take her turn making dinner, and I'm not sure if she sleeps here or there, but mostly she's down in Atlantis talking to them about whatever messed up magic thing she revealed to Savage while she was under control. I don't know much about it, but it really has her worried.

"I guessed." I was gonna say something else, but Joey had a brain blast and started scribbling again, so I waited.

Our supplies includes some re-breathers and depth protection stuff. We have Justice League ID and they know us. Want to go visit?

That perked me right up. "Sweet! I really loved looking around while we were down there for a few hours, yeah. Tomorrow's a free day, right? Wasn't there one time in the old mission files where they stayed a few nights down there? And if we can check out any magic weapons or stuff, I'd really love to get my hands on those things. It's be great for us- eh, what're we called?" 'There's some made up term for it…?'

I'm a meta-human. You use tech, like the Green Lanterns. That puts you at a 2 on the Scale of Abilities.

"Ain't two-," 'Whoops, gotta watch that.' "-out of five a little high?" I asked.

We were already walking down to the supply stores by then, but Joey took a detour to go print something out again. He met me up a minute later and I read the newly revised list of 'how much you rely on a special ability' while he got our stuff together.

Renka's Scale of Superpower Reliance (0-9) . . . [edited by Kid Flash]​
0 = Normal Human abilities, simple and replicable tools, intermediate to advanced training—Green Arrow, Artemis, etc.​
1 = Baseline Human abilities, advanced tools and weapons, abnormal training—Batman, Robin, etc.​
2 = Baseline Human with xeno tech or mystic items—Green Lanterns, Rocket, Atom, etc.​
3 = Human capable of exceeding limitations temporarily or using a specific power—Hourman, Black Canary, Jericho​
4 = Human altered to possess an enhanced ability, or an alien at human baseline + a power or tech—Kid Flash, Hawkwoman, etc.​
5 = Alien with a moderately above human baseline, or a human with inherent skills/abilities beyond baseline—Zatanna, Aquaman​
6 = Abhuman with greatly above human baseline abilities but some human skills, human with encompassing powers—Flash, Icon​
7 = Abhuman with encompassing powers & some human level skills, or nearly ascended human—Superman, Plastic Man, etc.​
8 = Abhuman or altered human with powers and some training to apply them—Wonder Woman, Miss Martian, etc.​
9 = Abhuman entirely reliant on and inherently bound to powers and source—Red Tornado, Captain Marvel, Dr. Fate​

"…Some of these hit me as stretching it, y'know?" I told Joey. He nodded. "By the way, what's an abhuman?" He grabbed the paper.

She uses it for people who are people even though they aren't humans. Robots like Red Tornado, aliens like M'gann, magic beings like Fate. She said "inhuman" was too close to inhumane=monstrous, and non-human sounded wrong too. She and Robin like word games.

"I noticed that," I said, trying to block out how I'd gotten self-conscious about my accent a few days after starting up with everyone. "Makes me almost wince when they butcher the English language. Still, they get some laughs out of it. …How do we wear this?"

Jericho showed me how to do the gear up properly, I set my belt's inertia field for the 'resist crushing depths' trick I'd figured out only two weeks ago as part of training and experiments the Team had put me through, and we headed for the Zeta Tubes.

<Recognized: Rocket, B11. >

<Recognized: Jericho, B10. >

'Guess they still have the room drained because of- Yeah, there it is.' The first time we'd come down here had required Aqualad to clear all the water out for us Team members who still needed to breathe. Now they'd kept the room with the Zeta Tube dry – 'Dry under the ocean, that's still impressive as anything when I think about it.' – because we were coming and going so often.

It was especially because Ferris was coming and going so often; her wheelchair was waiting empty right by the border of the water.

"Here goes-," Joey jumped in ahead of me, smirking wickedly. "-nothing," I finished drably, clicked the re-breather, and followed him in. 'Well, everything seems to be all well and good. Great. I wish the water wasn't so cold, but I can handle that.'

We swam, we ran into guards, we showed our stuff and one recognized us, we got escorted around somewhere….

We got to wait a few minutes until the seal of secrecy was broken on whatever they were doing and half-a-dozen Atlantean people streamed out and away, some giving respectful nods to us.

The respect part felt really good, I'll admit. Working with Icon to save and inspire had started it off, but being with the League? Coming down here to Atlantis, where skin color got almost ignored as a race issue and the king was an admired superhero?

It felt good.

"Rocket, Jericho," Ferris greeted, and that was the thing that- "Is everything well?"

"You're outta your wheelchair!" I babbled, remember that I'd seen it earlier and of course she wasn't in it.

Her legs still didn't move much, but she was floating in the water fine and she swayed over with only her arms doing much to move.

It looked a little silly to see her paddling like that, but she was moving under her own power and I did. Not. Laugh.

"Yes. It's one reason why I'm spending more time down here," Ferris agreed, and she sounded odd, too. "In case you were confused, you're currently under the effects of some spells the Queen Mera cast for our convenience, including translation and easier speaking."

"Oh. Yeah, I probably shoulda- should've wondered about that." I glanced to Joey, but I realized he wasn't in a position to say anything anyway and was just staring at Queen Mera, so, 'Great, I'd better explain it.' "There's no big problem or anything, we just wanted to come down and look around. If that's okay, uh, your majesty," I added quickly.

[That's quite alright, young Rocket. You and your Team are guests of the Crown, and we are indebted to you.]

[They've got spells to do telepathy here,] Joey added, [but Ferris still can't use them safely, so if you could talk to her I have a few things to ask the queen about? You want me to ask anything for you?]

[Uh, just some magic weapons and gear. Maybe tourist spots, if it doesn't sound too weird to ask her.]

[Will do.]

We chatted. It was a little weird.

Part of the way through I had to wonder if I was keeping Ferris busy, or being kept busy.

Then we were going through a few hallways—still in the water, and I could see Ferris just loved that she could swim around like that—until Ferris and Jericho broke off with a guard to check on or go get something, and I wound up alone in a room with a queen.

It easily could've been scary. It wasn't.

It was cool, since she was just totally chill about everything, inviting me to take a seat and give an opinion.

Her being pregnant and totally swelled up – not that I would ever say anything about it – helped out, too.

I looked the room over.

"Is this the nursery?" I realized.

"It is indeed. Were you aware that my husband was raised in the surface world?" she asked.

I shook my head. "Nope. I'm not sure if it's in press releases or whatever, but I don't know much about anyone's identities."

"A healthy respect for privacy is a becoming trait in this age," she complimented, and I squirmed.

'Wonder what she'd have to say if she knew I met Arnus by breaking into his house to burglarize it? …Wait, she's friends with Ferris, and that girl's pretty open about the nasty stuff in her past; Queen Mera might not care.'

"It's a learned respect," I admitted. "I'm… not sure how much you know about me and Icon?" Queen Mera just shook her head. "Right. Well, we actually met 'cause… because I was kind of breaking intohisplacetorobhim," I muttered. She blinked.

"I see. Well, you clearly have turned your life around admirably, to be catching criminals now instead of committing crimes," she said, and Lord I actually felt like she meant it. I practically glowed. "It's rare to find that sort of moral determination at your age."

"Aw, thanks," I said, and I really didn't want to argue, I just… "Ah don't think it's as rare as you think, it's just that a bunch of kids never really get the chance to try. Have you ever heard the phrase, 'had to go to jail to become a criminal'?"

"I had not, but I believe I surmise its meaning. Speaking as someone who has decided sentence lengths and heard appeals for clemency," she said soberly, "it is a very difficult issue."

I wasn't sure how to respond to that.

"Yeah," I said, and when it didn't sound good enough I added, "I'm learning that now… from… the other side of things."

I wasn't really sure if I believed it, but it seemed like the queen did.

"I pray you may be painlessly enlightened," she offered. "Still, I did not wish to speak to you only about grim things. I have a… I hope you will not think it a silly question, but there are very few people I could ask about it. I had not thought to raise it when your Team was here, given the circumstances, and while Ferris is from the surface, she is not an American, and it is a cultural question. May I?"

"Oh. Sure, go ahead," I agreed, wondering what the heck it could be.

"I wish to know about surface-world customs involving babies," she said in all seriousness.

I almost laughed.

Then I had to parse it, and my mind sort of turned it into an uncertain "Ah?"

Queen Mera sighed, which was really weird to think about when I remembered we were underwater.

"My husband," she reminded me, "was raised in the surface world. For the most part, he has adapted to Atlantis and made it his home, but on occasion there are still moments when he can surprise me, or the reverse. Also, I feel… quite fond of the surface and its people now, and I do not want him to have to give up the culture and rituals that made him who he is today. We still celebrate Valentines Day, the two of us, and Christmas, and a few other things. I wish to know about surface rituals so that I may pleasantly surprise him."

"Okay… Um, I know that there are traditional baby showers, where people buy stuff for the mom and dad and the baby to be," I started, thinking back to one I had attended a year ago, "but a big part of that is taking a load off by buying expensive things so the parents won't have to. So, I guess you don't really need that. Christenings? I mean, they're mostly Christian, but name days?"

"Name days?" she asked seriously.

'Right, there was some history book about this… I remember two versions, ugh.' "So, Christenings are where the baby got baptized, for church, but they were… also… where people announced the kid's name? A lot of kids died, uh, crib deaths… Is it bad luck to talk about this?"

"No, I do not believe so. Facing a fear is, in my view, the best way to chase it away from reality," she said seriously. "Please, go on."

"Right, okay. For Christenings it was when they announced the baby's name, and then non-Christian people did it too. A lot of the time, the didn't formally name a baby until the first birthday, because they didn't want to get attached." An odd little piece of law someone had mentioned to me once popped up in my head. "Actually, now that I think of it, usually if you want to change your name or your kid's name you need to go to a judge and stuff, but you can do it without a problem before the kid's a year old. Not sure if that's the same…."

We talked about that stuff some more, we talked about baby showers (including whether they were called showers because of a rain of presents, because Atlantis barely had words for that), we talked about cute onesies and caps with pom-poms and diaper types….

I sort of wished I'd done more babysitting, but I knew enough to get by and I didn't really make much of anything up.

Queen Mera seemed pretty happy by the time Joey and Ferris got back with a pack of stuff, at any rate.
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* January 29 [Overview]

The entire Team was gathered together as Paula Crock rolled into the center of the half-circle. Wally and Artemis stepped up beside her to help her set up the visuals, and then stepped back with a little wave for luck. Paula smiled, nodded, coughed, and then she began.

"The first thing to know about the League of Shadows," she started, pulling up pictures of various operatives and newspaper headlines, "is that the League is not a monolithic entity, nor is it even entirely as devoted to Ra's al Ghul as he proclaims.

"The current League of Shadows can be broken up into three large sub-factions at first glance: the Shadows, the Assassins, and the DEMON organization; the DEMON organization is the one most closely tied to Ra's al Ghul, as he founded it some few centuries ago. His very name is a title—Ra's al Ghul can translate as 'the Head of the Demon,'—and he developed the DEMON organization to be the fangs that protect the head of the demon. The initiates he brings with him as his personal guards are often DEMON members specifically, rather than Shadows.



"Many DEMON members have been trained since birth to obey Ra's. He has an indeterminate number of small towns, compounds, and villages spread throughout Eastern Europe, the Middle East, and the Himalayas where the villagers are raised to revere him as their god, and have been raised to do so for centuries. This branch of the League of Shadows contains the most fanatical of his followers, but they may be either less skilled or less savvy about the modern world, depending on the direction of each one's training.

"The branch we may refer to as the League of Assassins, conversely, is the least loyal to Ra's al Ghul. This sub-group acts less like a cult and more like… You might call it a certification organization for assassins and mercenaries. It is the main way new and willing members join from outside, such as myself and Sportsmaster. They provide training, equipment, some surgical intervention-," She pulled up a picture of Hook. "-and connections to clients. Most of the more prominent mercenaries and assassins, such as Sportsmaster and Deadshot, have spent time with this faction and through them been either certified for clients, or joined the Shadows as a later step.

"As for the Shadows themselves, you could say that they are everything else. There are dozens of smaller pockets of likeminded agents spaced out in various places across the world, and many, many more victims of blackmail and coercion who know that they are involved in something illicit, but could not name the League of Shadows as responsible officially…."
 
Bleh, Sportsmaster and his more-abhorrent-than-I-thought boss. Speaking of... I doubt he is going to duel Renka (solo) again, regardless of his wishes. So I'm curious who will end up taking him out. Perhaps he will fight a member of the League alongside their former protege?
 
Excellent update. I don't think I've ever seen Superman show Lois that he is really Clark Kent-most of the time, it's Clark pulling off his glasses and showing he is Superman. It makes much more sense for him to pull off the mask and show the true Kansas farmboy underneath.
You know, I wasn't even thinking of that, but I really like what you've observed. This may now be my new favorite way for Clark to do the big reveal, in future fictions and headcannons.

Correspondingly, does it make more sense for Bruce to put on the cowl, do you think, or for Batman to pull it off, when it's Reveal time?

Okay, I'm back in.

I was having trouble reading this story for some time, since it felt very much like chapter after chapter of watching a character I really liked being raped (in a fashion). It has made all the chapters since then sit very heavy in my gut. Even though I think the story is still very good, and well written. I just had trouble making myself read it.

But this chapter felt amazing. Renka being herself and interacting via clever dialog with interesting people.
Strong language, but that was the effect I was going for, to be honest. The Light are terrible, awful and disgusting people who want to do just that to everyone in the world, and I feel no shame in hammering that in.

I'm glad I made it hit you hard, and I'm glad to be making things feel better now.

Now that we've seen Ruin is not simply a false positive but also overlaps at least partially with a fragment of Anti-Life Equation, I'm really wondering how Renka's nicrosil feruchemy would interact here. If she stores or taps her mantle as the Sliver of Entropy, will that alter her alignment / attunement with the ALE? Would tapping to enhance hey mantle give her a larger fragment of the ALE than otherwise, or just greater strength with the piece she already possesses?
Most of this is RAFO. I will say that tapping will NOT give her pieces of the ALE that she doesn't already possess; it should effect the energy component but not really the knowledge component of a given piece.

Currently, she's not even sure if nicrosil-minds can interact with her Mantle in that way, since it's so different from what she knows.

Why did they bring these two? Surely they were asked before they got brought to earth right? Are their specialities that relevant/useful?
Answering yes to, "Do you want to meet a prospective possessor of an ALE fragment and help me assess her trustworthiness?" is very different from answering yes to, "Are you willing to stay with this new person and go through unknown tribulations in cooperation with her?"

(Vague spoilers for season 3 below)

I got Abhorsen trilogy vibes from the bandolier of seven magical objects, not sure if that influenced writing the Mother Boxes in this update.
I did enjoy their presence and actual individual personalities, even if it was just a paragraph; I don't think any other adaptation I'm familiar with, canonical or fan fiction, has really done that beyond generic 'good' and 'evil'.
I'm a sucker for characters expanding their repertoire especially with magic or metaphysical attributes, so I look forward to more.
Not sure if any season 3 canon applies to this fic (excluding obvious stuff like Barda) but it could be useful to pick Highfather's brain on the topic of the Light; he might plausibly know something since it does indirectly pertain to Darkseid seeking the Anti-Life Equation.
I do not remember reading anything called the Abhorsen Trilogy, though I'll put it on my list for later.

One of my themes is that ideas of good & evil are too vague and generic to be useful when applied to anything/anyone like people - as opposed to malicious & benign, gentle & forceful, destructive and productive, etc. - so I'm glad it's reaching a good audience.

Season 3 canon does not apply, I'm afraid, although I may still pick and choose from parts of it as appropriate.

Sees two enormous chapters in a row, both in short succession. @Obloquy you realize that you don't get overtime right? :p Blink twice if you're chained to your writing desk.


I just got the impression the the Light was just another Darksied fueled proxy/shadow war rather than him directly working towards achieving the ALE.
I started writing LOD for the NaNoWriMo before I published anything (like, two months in advance), and I have kept up a good build-up of reserve material for when writer's block hits me or life gets in the way.

(Seriously. I'm currently writing a scene in early April of 2011. You'll know it when you see Zatanna manage a 4-line backwards chant that rhymes as part of a divination spell to search for CENSORED.)

Highfather knows that Earth is more important than most proxy wars, but at the same time he's going to take a generally hands-off stance for the same reason he knows that Darkseid will hold back: New Gods trying to noisily screw around on a planet with so many extant pantheons will be getting messy very quickly, and no one wants any of Earth's heavy hitter to take the field without proper preparations.

Is Rita an oc? And I take it Marie will survive for now. Although I do wonder why, I can't remember what happened to Q Bee here.
Nothing especially nagative has happened to Queen Bee here; she simply was persuaded by a co-worker to wait on her revenge for now.

Damn right most suited for. You don't get to say its the only thing if you've kicked Red Arrows ass and crashed an active hostage situation with multiple hostages with that handicap.

Was powerful meant to just be power?

Hey, is it the Century children?
Ferris is as prone to being an unreliable narrator as any and every other character.

Powerful --> power: Fixed!

Not the Century children, no. Beast Boy and at least 1-2 of the others are too young, and the Century Children generally wouldn't need her interference, anyway.

It is almost looks like DC having an strange fascinations with pairing Actors and metamorphic powers... o_O

P.S. ClayFace used to be exactly that in Batman Animated Series.
Why it's almost like there's some running theme between people's civilian backstories / names (Caitlin Snow and Crystal Frost and Victor Frieze all have ice powers) and their costumed themes. Of course, destiny of the Endless does exist, so it could be intentional....

Gonna be honest, while I like the idea of the Anti-/Life Equation as a concept (and the philosophical implications on both being and free will that come with it), I personally dislike the way it's been codified in canon. I'd have preferred it to be more vague, some sort of lovecraftian insight into the nature and processes of reality sort-of-thing. Yes, 'equation' is in the name, but that sort of clashes with the inclusion of things like "love", "hope", and "despair" in the way it's done in canon. In essence the respective equations represent competing universal theories of everything (in a world with gods and magic, no less), and comprehending even parts of them should be so mind-shatteringly complex a task that you basically can't do it without said information fundamentally changing not just who you are as a person, but what position you occupy in the grand scheme of existence.

Like it does in canon. Which is cool.

So codifying it as [emotion] + [subjective concept] • [whatever else] just... really gets my goat. They shouldn't have tried to explain it, not that way. It's why people hate midichlorians.
Each individual piece is shorthand for an incredibly complex/powerful concept, much the same way π stands for a very long, specific, and important number that no one has ever totally measured.

It is entirely possible that Darkseid has that full equation written out somewhere, and it still is of almost no help to him.

It's one thing to say Love is Pain {Love = Pain} but it's another thing entirely to mean it, much less to know, accept, and understand it so thoroughly that you can convince others of its veracity.

About the midichlorians, though, I do have to wonder how they came to exist in every planet, on every species. at least with the ALE it was set down as the formula used by whatever demiurges formed this universe, and so is inherently entwined with everything from the start.

The problem of course, is that in a comic book series, everything is going to be explained, somehow or someway in multiple ways thoughout the series, and people will come up with good and bad ideas to embrace. For decades, the green lanterns had the ridiculous weakness of yellow things, which is eventually is explained as the yellow fear entity being trappped within the core lantern... and for decades the green lanterns (and to some degree yellow) were the only ones out there, now we have entire spectrum of them, which has it's ups and downs.

In general, I like the concept of equations for Life and Anti-Life, but I also like the idea that understanding them is a much more involved process then knowing the equation is a combination of certain ideas.
Multiple conflicting backstories and explanations, as well as inconsistent authors over a singe series. Ugh.

Well, at least it gives us plenty to pick and choose from, and we can work out some wild theories and have fun trying to reasonably square a few circles.

The green Lanterns are weak to Yellow, in LOD, and Parallax is currently trapped in the Green Power Battery, BTW.
 
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About the midichlorians, though, I do have to wonder how they came to exist in every planet, on every species. at least with the ALE it was set down as the formula used by whatever demiurges formed this universe, and so is inherently entwined with everything from the start.
Don't they just feed off of the force energy or something?
force sensitives channel/have more of it, therefore the Midichlorians hang around them more than everyone else?
 
  • Superboy watches static on the television. If you need to tape anything, tell Robin and he can set up a program to do it without you monopolizing the TV, because Superboy has eternal dibs on it. Watching it with him is a good way to bond.
I don't... This must be trolling.
Ferris is as prone to being an unreliable narrator as any and every other character.
I know that but we're not letting her get away with it.
 
I'm wondering if the task Death gave is related to the cartoon Teen Titans, specifically Raven as Trigon's portal. It's the only thing I can think of that's dire enough to maybe involve an Endless, though I'm not sure why it would concern Death, specifically. Not like it really matters to her in the long run right?
 
I'm wondering if the task Death gave is related to the cartoon Teen Titans, specifically Raven as Trigon's portal. It's the only thing I can think of that's dire enough to maybe involve an Endless, though I'm not sure why it would concern Death, specifically. Not like it really matters to her in the long run right?
cause Death is nice, kind, generous, considerate, and caring? She just also happens to be {The End of All}
 
Correspondingly, does it make more sense for Bruce to put on the cowl, do you think, or for Batman to pull it off, when it's Reveal time?


I'd say putting on a metaphorical cowl. Suddenly this drunk, rich playboy whose successes in business comes down to luck more than anything else becomes the most dangerous person in the room. He doesn't strike me as the type to actually say "I am Batman" but to just act and let people come to whatever conclusions they want.
 
Yes but I can't remember any point in canon where she intervened to stop people from dying. As far as she's concerned everyone gets a lifetime - no more, no less
Was she there to stop a death? Considering what Ob said about QB I expect Renka might actually be there for Rita.

It's also worth remembering that the message said that Death normally can't do anything due to rules about pawns.

I expect that the jobs are simply to nudge a few people into place against either DarkSeid or the like. After all DarkSeid getting earth is likely very bad considering it is the 5th (I think) Planet.
 
Yes but I can't remember any point in canon where she intervened to stop people from dying. As far as she's concerned everyone gets a lifetime - no more, no less

She doesn't have to, death is temporary in DC.

Souls reincarnate, afterlives aren't final destinations but pit stops.

In Swamp Thing, Dr Alec Holland reincarnated out of Heaven, to be reborn as a spiritually evolved human.

In Dr Fate, Linda Strauss traveled to the afterlife to resurrect her soulmate, only for it to be pointed out to her how pointless that was.

 
Correspondingly, does it make more sense for Bruce to put on the cowl, do you think, or for Batman to pull it off, when it's Reveal time?
I'd like to see him switch from tipsy dilettante to ice cold strategist and world class fighter then back, unaware he'd been observed.
 
...And "Life Ore Death" continue to serve as a Silvermine (since I have an personal aversion to Gold) of {Neat Things}.

Congratulations, @Obloquy, with "Terataya's Principle of the Ease of Achievement" you started an literal avalanche of actualization in my personal WorldBuildin|NoteMaking :3

But, this was from previous chapter.

For this one, I really like that you have done with Power Classification: 0 to 7 show clear and linear increase in magnitude, while 8 and 9 appear to contain "fringe", for a certain definition, cases...

For inspiration sake, which number you would, personally, assign to Lovecraft?
 
...And "Life Ore Death" continue to serve as a Silvermine (since I have an personal aversion to Gold) of {Neat Things}.

Congratulations, @Obloquy, with "Terataya's Principle of the Ease of Achievement" you started an literal avalanche of actualization in my personal WorldBuildin|NoteMaking :3

But, this was from previous chapter.

For this one, I really like that you have done with Power Classification: 0 to 7 show clear and linear increase in magnitude, while 8 and 9 appear to contain "fringe", for a certain definition, cases...

For inspiration sake, which number you would, personally, assign to Lovecraft?
HP Lovecraft was a sickly child who grew into a fearfully racist man who lacked the constitution for math. He was probably a negative 1.
 
...Hmm... Depending to which composite DC canon one subscribes...

H.P. Lovecraft had firsthand experience with Eldrich Horrors starring in his works.

:3
 
I'd say putting on a metaphorical cowl. Suddenly this drunk, rich playboy whose successes in business comes down to luck more than anything else becomes the most dangerous person in the room. He doesn't strike me as the type to actually say "I am Batman" but to just act and let people come to whatever conclusions they want.

This especially seems plausible if he doesn't know for sure that the person he's talking to knows he's Batman. If someone knows that Bruce Wayne is more than he seems, then there's no point in concealing the fact that he's competent, but if someone, say, thinks that he's using his competence to finance the Batman, then why disillusion them?
 
Honestly? Just as Clark Kent is a secret identity of Superman (as it is works in superheroics)... Batman is a secret identity of Bruce Wayne (an rare and complete opposite of usual trend).

As such, he does not have a need to show or prove that Bruce Wayne, the infamous Gotham billionaire is, in fact, The Batman. With this in mind, he is too pedantic and plan-prone for a slip up...

Apart from Louis Lane, that is - however she cracked his "secret" open :)
 
New Beginnings - part 3
The OCs introduced in this and the next installment originate with @Krazyfan1 and you'll see more of them in another month or three.

Caution: non-graphic depiction of labor and childbirth, so if it squicks you out skip this bit for now.


Life Ore Death
* January 31 [Kid Flash PoV]

<Wallace West, please report to the main office for early dismissal. Wallace West, please report to the main office-, >

'What the heck? I didn't have an early dismissal today… and it's not all that early, there's only a bit more than an hour of school left,' I figured, gathering my stuff together and glancing at the clock. 'It's gotta be Uncle Barry, getting me because Flash needs help.'

'…Glad I'm keeping my grades up, 'cause Mom and Dad are not going to be happy if Kid Flash has interfered with school stuff. Of course, the whole "summer classes" bit helps with that, but it'll suck if I miss my chance to graduate a year early from one missed credit.'

I got to the office at regular speed, barely, greeted Uncle Barry, and we got out of there.

"So what's up?" I asked when we were at a spot to stop and change. "Mirror Master running loose again? Captain Cold show up?"

"Black Manta is attacking Atlantis, Queen Mera has gone into premature labor, and the emergency teleport that'd normally evacuate her to our home isn't safe for pregnant women, according to the guard that showed up."

My stomach dropped. 'Ooooh shit. Okay, so Renka and Kaldur are probably down there already… Along with everyone else from Atlantis and those two classmates of Kaldur's who're joining up in a week. Miss M can shape shift gills and stuff…' "What do I do?"

"Robin says there's a magic item to let you run around underwater like it was air," he summarized for me, "so if we just add a re-breather with a higher oxygen content it should be fine. I'd go myself, except Batman warned me I was too fast, and what's a slipstream up here might flatten buildings I pass by down there, so be careful with your tornadoes, Kid. Think you can do this?"

'Great, remind me how slow I am… but I guess this time it's a good thing.' I held up my hand.

"Kid Flash is on the job, Uncle Barry," I promised. "The bad guy won't know what hit them!"

"Awesome. Go break some Black Manta mooks' legs. …That sounded cooler in my head," he complained, and I laughed.

"Back in a flash, Uncle Barry," I promised. "Or at least in time for dinner." 'I hope.'

<Recognized: Kid Flash, B03. >

"Wally," M'gann called with relief. [Ferris and Aqualad are already in Atlantis, and Robin won't be coming with us on this one, so you've got the most seniority until we get there. I was just getting extra medical equipment if we need it. Do you know much about giving birth?]

I froze. [Wait, I'm in charge? Crudcrudcrudcrud… Okay, I don't know anything about babies except breathing is important because they say to keep breathing, and guys often get sent to… uhh… boil water and rip up clean clothes for bandages? Yeah, I don't know,] I admitted.

[I don't think the queen of Atlantis will need all that stuff,] Conner pointed out.

[Just to be safe, how about I get a clean sheet from the laundry closet?] M'gann volunteered.

[Right, right, you go do that,] I said distractedly. [Um. Okay. Conner, my fellow science guy, do we have any way to find where Ferris and Aqualad are holed up, like tracking their communicators?]

[We can try that, or we can ask Sphere to track down her and Motherbox,] Conner replied. [Here, the water ring.]

I caught it. [Right, this thing won't let me breathe under water though, right? I need a speedster re-breather with higher oxygen-]

[I've got two of them,] Conner answered, holding them up more me to see. [I also grabbed one of the oxygen tanks left over from when Renka was storing into her cadmium-minds. Not sure how much is in it.]

[I'm not sure how we'd tell, and I don't know if we can use it, but it couldn't hurt,] I figured. I remembered something about oxygen toxicity and hyperbaric conditions in water pressure, but we didn't really have time to worry about that when a baby was coming.

[As long as no one hits it with heat vision,] M'gann sent, images of CAUTION: FLAMMABLE flickering through our heads.

[I don't even have heat vision,] Conner complained.

[Sorry, I was thinking about the lasers they use instead of bullets,] Miss M clarified, flying back in with a fold of cloth.

[Is it just us, the 3 of us going down?] I wondered.

[Rocket might be able to handle the pressure, but Icon is busy and we don't have a fast way to reach her. Aqualad and Ferris are already down there, and none of the others can handle the water pressure when we only have the one ring,] Miss M confirmed. [It's just us.]
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* January 31 [Ferris PoV]

"Breathe, Mera," I said seriously, gripping her hand. Her breathing evened out for a little bit as she gripped back hard. I murmured some more calming things for a little while, keeping one eye on the crevasse entry to the cavern, and I took a moment to check her dilation.

"Will it be soon?" the Queen Mera asked grimly, eyeing the cavern entry as well as we heard a momentary burst of fighting.

"Within four hours," I guessed. "You are progressing rapidly." I added, to break the tension, "Many women would be jealous."

'Being entirely under the water affects how she looks in interesting ways,' I noted idly and my mind raced through thinking canals. 'I am used to seeing women in labor become sweat-soaked and bedraggled, so to have her hair still floating is an odd appearance.'

Another part of my mind thought, 'Four hours means we will probably need to cast the translation spell again at least once.'

A different part of my mind worried, 'I really hope we will get reinforcements soon from the team. Kaldur and Garth are holding well with the squad of soldiers, but they cannot hold out forever, even if Tula will provide emergency reinforcements.'

"Done," Tula declared cautiously as she finished drawing the last symbol onto the stone of the cavern floor. "Queen Mera, is this right? I'm worried I got the rho and psi lines interchanged. If I'd known I had four hours," she laughed nervously, "I'd have asked sooner."

"The maximum time should be four hours," I specified clinically. "Less than one hour is possible, albeit unlikely."

"What I can see from here looks correct. I think… If I am not crowning, I think I can come take a closer look," Mera offered.

I pressed her shoulder back onto the flat stone surface serving as our birthing bed/table. Aqualad had created it with his water-bearers and brute strength by tearing off a piece of stone from the cavern wall and slicing through it to make the surface smooth.

"While walking around is one way to help speed and position the baby, I do not know enough to encourage it," I warned.

"I summon… the power of the tempest!" I heard Garth yell from around the corner of the entry crevasse.

"Garth, no," Tula whispered, looking once again torn as she drifted in the direction of the entry. She caught herself and jerked back.

I checked Mera's dilation again, using my finger joints as an improvised ruler.

"If you wish to go to the entry as a precision supported, you may do so and also better guard the entryway," I permitted. "Please remember to use the weapon and conserve your power for emptying the chamber of water."

About 1 in 12 pureblood-graph births suffered from a minor defect/condition where their lungs would not immediately start to process water for oxygen, so all their births were held in rooms emptied of ocean water to be safe.

The Queen Mera's due date was at the earliest supposed to be around Valentines Day; when she had unexpectedly entered labor in the middle of repelling the attack, we had been far from any of the prepared rooms possible to use, or any medical facility in general.

Thus, we had made do with what was available: we fell back to a defensible position in a stable cavern, we made it as clean as possible given the continuing attacks by Black Manta's soldiers, and I – being the only one with any midwifery experience – took over the Queen Mera's medical treatment along with discussing tactical formations with Kaldur.

It would have been better to have a few more guards in here, perhaps, but two of the contingent with us had broken out fighting early on, each claiming the other was a traitor aiming at the Queen Mera's life while she was vulnerable.

We had confiscated their weapons, which now remained in easy reach of the three of us, and I had banished everyone except my one assistant out of sight around the curve of the entry tunnel to be safe.

I had asserted that anyone coming around the curve who was not immediately recognizable and verifiable would be summarily shot for safety reasons; we were dealing with the birth of a kingdom's heir, and I was taking no chances of any unexpected conspiracies.

"I- I should not. My place is here, with you, as the final line of defense," Tula replied after a yearning silence. "It just- I am worried. Garth has already called on his spell-craft more times than ever before, and he must be nearing exhaustion. Kaldur'ahm, too, is at a greater risk," she fretted, fiddling with the handle of her commandeered weapon. "He has less training, and his ranged abilities…."

I inhaled, relishing with interest again how it felt as though I were breathing air on the beach, instead of in the ocean.

"I agree. If he were not so awkward and distracted, I would rather have him here to guard the entry with his melee abilities, and you out there to fight at range with your-," 'Partner, paramour, boyfriend, what's a good word…?' "-partner." I gave my lips a twitch, seeing that Tula had turned to half face me, and offered a bit of a gendered joke: "Boys are so squeamishabout this things, aren't they?"

She laughed, as did Mera, which was more than I had anticipated. I kept my eyes on the entryway all the same.

"Orin is as well, although I have trained him out of some of it," Mera confided, twitching through her contractions. "While I do not mind the privacy, and I have no wish for my students to see me like this, I must admit that Kaldur'ahm's blush was adorable to witness."

"Oh, definitely," Tula tittered. "You know… I was exploring Druhm'ahn Reef with the boys when I suffered the onset of my first monthly. I'm not sure whether they were more horrified before or after I explained what was occurring."

"Mm. If I had to guess," I suggested.

"Tally-ho!" I heard an unknown voice boom outside, accompanied quickly by the crash of boulder, and increase in weapon discharges, and the very satisfying crunch of mechanized armor being smash against stone objects.

I waited for a moment, but I could make out nothing more from the battlefront.

"If I had to guess," I said more slowly, aiming the weapon at the entryway just in case, "I would expect Kaldur to be more horrified beforehand, when he thought you were ill or wounded, and Garth to be more horrified afterward, once you had explained it."

'I hope I said that without sounding judgmental about the implication that Kaldur was more worried for her safety, while Garth was grossed out by her situation. Well, now is not particularly the time, unless she calls me on it and I need to renege.'

"It could be, although Kaldur has an exceptional straight face all the same," Tula agreed. "The world shall never know."

I chuckled, and searched around for another line of conversation to kill time as we waited.

"How well is your surface training progressing?" I inquired. "With the Queen Mera giving birth early-," I glanced to meet her eyes and gave an apologetic squeeze that I was speaking of her instead of to her. "-I expect the timeline for your joining the Team will accelerate."

"It is going quite well. We haven't begun on any martial arts, really, but we are walking running and jumping without issues."

"How long?" Mera interrupted urgent, giving a painful squeeze to me.

I checked her dilation.

"Minimal noticeable change," I summarized. "It will still take some longer time, I think."

"Neptune'sbeard," she grunted. "I must wonder what was the- uh! The pointof my offerings to Ei-! To Eileithyia, if thisis-! Gah!"

Having asked about the small shrine set up in her bedroom, I recognized the name of the goddess of childbirth.

I hoped there would not be penalties for bad-mouthing her, but I decided to put it in appropriate perspective all the same.

"Cowabunga!" the same strong voice as before roared from outside, sounding slightly further away.

I turned and trained my weapon back on the entryway, just in case, and motioned Tula to do the same.

"Think of it like this," I related to Mera conversationally. "You are currently undergoing the-," I cast my mind back. "-the third-fastest delivery I have personally seen, you are not heavily bleeding, and your baby appears to be positioned properly. Be grateful."

"Tell me-! Tell me that," she grunted, "when Orin is here to hold my hand so I can bitch him out about doing thisto me. I want drugs, dammit. My mother must be laughing at me from Erebus for this; I was an early baby born outside of the medical center as well."

"Positioned properly?" Tula asked, distracting us. "Is that…? I mean, I am not as knowledgeable on this subject as would be ideal… I apologize if I missed it, but I have to wonder how you learned. You said you had done this before?" she asked me, eyes on the entryway.

"Many times, for my mother's births of several siblings and other village women at times. I was an active child, and at an early age I was often sent to fetch firewood, water, and clean linens when needed. I learned of the other things involved later on.

"That said, I am far from an expert," I warned her. "This appears to be a simple birth, so I should handle it well enough, I think. If we needed to turn the child for delivery, or unwrap the umbilical cord from xir throat, it would be… troubling. As it is, with medical magic and the Queen Mera's pureblood-graph resilience, I might be able to attempt incision delivery if need be, but I would not want to have to."

"Incision delivery?"

"I believe-! She means a Ceasarean, cutting open my stomach to remove my child by hand," Mera informed Tula.

"People can do that?"Tula asked, aghast.

"Eyes on the entryway!" I rebuked, and she snapped back around. "I do not know how and can only guess at where to cut."

"Alalé!" the boisterous voice as before boomed from very near the end of the tunnel. I yanked my hand from Mera's, swam around her with minimal thought to relishing my freedom of movement now, and positioned my body firmly between hers and the entryway.

Tula and I kept our weapons trained as we heard crashing, smashing, shouting, and energy discharges approach closer.

I briefly wondered whether Kaldur and the others were dead, to have let someone get so far, but I banished the thought. Images of his corpse were not helpful, nor were imaginings of how he would look, alive, if he came upon us once we were slaughtered.

"Warning shot," I announced to Tula, and fired once. "In case of invisibility, if they are sneaking around to ambush us."

"That doesn't sound very sneaky to me," Tula muttered as the havoc heightened out of sight. "I… could set a barrier?"

"If it can be done while conserving your strength," I allowed slowly, and patterns of light traced out along her arms as she chanted.

Before the chant finished, there was one final crash, and a Manta Trooper toppled backwards into the visible area of the entry tunnel. He looked dazed, but he had come here to attack a pregnant woman, and I did not hesitate to shoot him.

I also did not have the best aim, and I missed his vitals all three times, but a shot wrecked his leg and he stopped flailing.

"Eh? Friendly, friendly, let me just get him out of here before he explodes," the cavernous, congenial voice boomed, and its owner stepped around the corner, into view.

'Well, he certainly is not a pureblood-graph nor a soldier under Black Manta,' I assessed of the third most inhuman-appearing Atlantean I had encountered in my time here. 'Still, I will not take any chances.'

"Do not come closer, or I will attack," I instructed firmly. "I think you are friendly, but we will take no chances."

"Eh?" he asked, sounding bemused behind the crustacean-graph carapace covering his form. "Friendly, friendly, I promise you. I won't come closer," he offered, raising his six arms up toward his head. Only four of those arms – one of which held the helmeted head of a second incapacitated Manta Trooper – ended in hands, with the last pair ending in pincers. "…Queen Mera?"

"Yes, and we are- uh! In a bit of a delicate situation here," she grunted. "I am grateful for your aid in this, citizen. If Aqualad is still conscious, please retreat and defer to him in matters of guarding the entrance. I would-!A little privacy, would be appreciated, until my husband can arrive to help me throughthis. How stands the situation?"

"I- uh, your majesty," he fumbled, turning his back on us entirely in his embarrassment.

'I hate to play to gender stereotypes when Earth is so overrun by them, but men,' I thought, not rolling my eyes until it would be safe again. 'They are so squeamish about this stuff. …Not that I can blame them for wanting to respect a woman's privacy, but between her head facing the entryway and the covering draped over her pelvis he is at no risk of seeing anything untoward.'

"Well," he rallied finally, "help should be on the way soon enough. Sephol, my friend you see, he swam off to get help when we saw there were invaders camped out attacking people. We didn't realize it was you, your majesty," he hedged, finally remembering to grab the unrestrained-if-immobile Manta Trooper when one of his four legs kicked the armor awkwardly. "I think he should be bringing help soon enough, though. Everyone outside was alive when I last checked… I- I'll just, go get Aqualad to tell me what to do," he mumbled.

"Thank you for your service citizen. I am honored," the Queen Mera called after him, "to have so brave and noble a defender as you for my protection. The Crown will see you recognized for this," she promised.

He did not respond, but I imagined his blush in my mind's eye as he traveled back to the outside.

"Ugh," Mera hissed after he was out of sight. "Would you-?"

I swam around and checked her dilation again.

"No significant change." 'We need another topic of conversation, if I can decide on one that won't be too distracting from our defenses.'

I cast around mentally, and as had been recently happening again more often, my eyes fell on Mera and I had a momentary image of how vulnerable she was, lying prone with her neck exposed, and how easy it would be-

"Mera, what's the worst injury you've received in your life?" I asked, since it was frustratingly where my mind had gone.

'I don't even want her dead for any reason, or anything! I just… Ugh, and I thought it was bad when I kept eyeing Artemis's back….'

"That's a- urk! Odd question," Mera gasped. I eyed her face again, and had another moment of disorientation when she still wasn't bedraggled with sweat, before a drifting current against my skin reminded me where we were.

"Talking you through the contractions is one of the few ways I can think of to help," I explained bluntly. "Talk to me, please."

So she did. The Queen Mera spoke of her past battles for a while, her introduction to the King Orin, her acclimation to royalty, and-

Tula and the Queen Mera gave a start and jolted around at the same time, in the same direction.

"Ferris, I believe your friends are here," she announced, and I turned my attention to the outside.
 
Brilliant!

I like all the small touches...
Meras appearance not being that changed due to being underwater, which Ferris finds a bit distracting due to her history of land based births.
the small shrine thats set up, because if you know magic and gods are real, of course you'll have something set up for important things like this.
The little info we got on the pureblood grafts, meaning that they have plans for if the baby can't automatically breathe underwater.

and i like that the OC's showing up.

keep up the great work as always!
 
I note Ferris is having a serious intrusive thoughts problem. Would probably be worth bringing up if she sees a therapist; it's not an unknown phenomenon IRL.
 
Ahahaha.... I may or may not have been expecting something like the Brave & Bold version of Aquaman from that OC's dialogue before we saw him.
 
I wish I was proving you wrong Renka but this chapter is aaawkwaarrd.
Renka is an unreliable narrator, especially on things like appropriateness.

I'm wondering if the task Death gave is related to the cartoon Teen Titans, specifically Raven as Trigon's portal. It's the only thing I can think of that's dire enough to maybe involve an Endless, though I'm not sure why it would concern Death, specifically. Not like it really matters to her in the long run right?
Not specifically the cartoon Teen Titans, and the rest of that assumption depends heavily on how long a given "run" is going to be

Yes but I can't remember any point in canon where she intervened to stop people from dying. As far as she's concerned everyone gets a lifetime - no more, no less
There was one time where she came to collect a little kid in Death: the Time of your Life and Alvie's mother, Hazel, could see her because she had previously met "Didi" during Death's one day per century as a mortal. Hazel begged and pleaded for Alvie to live, offering her life instead, and Death agreed that she'd let Alvie stay, but the next time he came to her realm, someone else would have to go with Death in his place, if not him.

It's a good story showing DC's ease of magic when there are beings of that power involved, and it sounds like a nice backstory to an angsty hero - he's immortal as long as he can keep convincing people to die in his place, and he doesn't need to consent for them to agree to it.

Was she there to stop a death? Considering what Ob said about QB I expect Renka might actually be there for Rita.

It's also worth remembering that the message said that Death normally can't do anything due to rules about pawns.

I expect that the jobs are simply to nudge a few people into place against either DarkSeid or the like. After all DarkSeid getting earth is likely very bad considering it is the 5th (I think) Planet.
I think the term you're thinking of is "5th World" the same way Apokolips (and New Genesis?) is the 4th World and, presumably, Asgard or whatever was the "3rd World," since Kirby originally intended the New Gods to be the next generation after Ragnarok killed off Marvel's Thor, etc. That does make me wonder if Oa counts as the "1st World" or something, though.

All I will say for now is that Ferris technically missed her window of opportunity and "failed" to help out Garfield's situation as requested, so she won't be getting paid for that part. Still, that's only 1 down, with 4 more to go.

Brilliant!

I like all the small touches...
Meras appearance not being that changed due to being underwater, which Ferris finds a bit distracting due to her history of land based births.
the small shrine thats set up, because if you know magic and gods are real, of course you'll have something set up for important things like this.
The little info we got on the pureblood grafts, meaning that they have plans for if the baby can't automatically breathe underwater.

and i like that the OC's showing up.

keep up the great work as always!
Glad. They'll be briefly here again, and then it'll be closer to summer when I get more involved with them, but I wanted them to show up and be introduced.

...And "Life Ore Death" continue to serve as a Silvermine (since I have an personal aversion to Gold) of {Neat Things}.

Congratulations, @Obloquy, with "Terataya's Principle of the Ease of Achievement" you started an literal avalanche of actualization in my personal WorldBuildin|NoteMaking :3

But, this was from previous chapter.

For this one, I really like that you have done with Power Classification: 0 to 7 show clear and linear increase in magnitude, while 8 and 9 appear to contain "fringe", for a certain definition, cases...

For inspiration sake, which number you would, personally, assign to Lovecraft?
Lovecraft the OC New Shoggoth would qualify somewhere in the 7, 8, 9 range definitely. I'd say she's probably 8 because her inherent powers (Shoggoth biology) are inseparable from her existence, but she still also has/needs the biological knowledge to control them effectively.

Apart from Louis Lane, that is - however she cracked his "secret" open :)
You can assume it was functionally the same as happened in Superman: the Animated Series. This was really early in Batman's career, like the second or third year, back when he was (in Young Justice) only 22 or 23, so he can be forgiven for lacking the situational awareness and redundancies we've come to expect from him in later years, I think.
 
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