Wheel of Time Omake
- Location
- San Francisco Bay Area, California, USA
Omake: Unraveling
I was reading The Cycle of Deicide, and I was a bit inspired by the idea that Wheel of Time is a little like Scadrial if Preservation had a total victory. Without Ruin, nothing ever really changes. Renka, as a shard of Ruin, could do a lot to shove the pattern off of it's course. I wrote a little omake of Renka showing up in the middle of the Seanchan Empire in The Wheel of Time. I figure she is going to be trouble in an empire run by slavery and control via torture collars. This is a little snippet where she is sneaking into the palace, when she comes across Semirhage torturing the Empress to death and intervenes.
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The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and pass, leaving memories that become legend. Legend fades to myth, and even myth is long forgotten when the Age that gave it birth comes again. In one Age, called the Third Age by some, an Age yet to come, An Age long pasT, a wind rose in the Mountains of Mist. The wind was NOT the beginning. There are neither bnnings _or ENDINGS to the rnng of the Wheel of Time. But it w-s-- It was the winds that weathered, the storms that broke, the timeless waves running slowly, slowly, slowly, to a stop as the sun and the planet cooled to nothing.
...Must not all things, even worlds, someday end?
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Fortuona Athaem Devi Paendrag, Daughter of the Nine Moons, Heir to the Crystal Throne, Hope of Seanchan, by Luthair and The Light, protector of the realms and territories.
Your servant in all things Suroth Sabelle Meldarath High Lady of Asinbayar and Barsabba.
I write Your Imperial Highness with grave and tragic tidings…
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Derain was having a terrible day. He was in The Empress's bedchamber, which was currently occupied by two dead women. Finding the soe'feia, Anath Dorje, dead and mutilated would be a nightmare on any other day. She was So'jhin to the Daughter of the Nine Moons, and had recently returned to Seandar bearing news of the campaign in the Old Empire. Her death, so soon after that of the previous Truthsayer, would cause upheaval, and many of the Deathwatch would die after such a failure; and yet, it was the other body that drew his focus. Laid upon the bed was the Empress Radhanan herself.
Even in death, her features were twisted into a rictus of pain and terror. Her body was laid out as though sleeping, relaxed and loose, but her face showed that her death had not been easy. Deep crimson pools had formed on her dark cheeks where blood had run from her staring eyes, and the white pillow beneath her braided head was stained where blood had flowed from her ears.
A cleared throat brought his attention to his right.
"Report, Lieutenant."
The officer bowed low, before beginning.
"It appears that The Empress died first. There are signs of torture, but not of a struggle, suggesting that Her Majesty was restrained. There are no signs of rope being used, nor marks on the wrists or ankles, suggesting that there was a damane used in the commision of the act.
"The soe'feia died some two hours later, and in a very different manner. She appears to have fought her attacker, and signs point to her use of Power in her defense, as shown by the razor-thin cuts and scorch marks on the walls. I can only conclude that she was somehow a secret uncollared damane."
Derain hissed through his teeth in shock. Taking a cautious step away from the body of the former seer.
"Damane!?"
"Yes, General. We have no idea how she was able to slip through our detection and get into a position so close to The Blood, but I fear she may have been an enemy agent. It is unclear if she was responsible for Her Majesty's death, or if her mysterious attacker was. There is some evidence that the attacker was making a statement."
"This just gets worse and worse Lieutenant. What makes you say that?"
"This sir." He said pointing to a trail of dirt on the floor.
On second sight, it wasn't dirt, but rather dark ash, forming a strange symbol.
"It seems that a tin wedge was driven into the forehead, followed shortly by an iron nail into the heart. For an unknown reason, this did not kill her immediately."
"What?"
"Just so sir. From what our investigating Sul'Dam tell us, she went still at that point, and the attacker continued to mutilate the body for some time before she died.
In addition to the two pieces of metal left in the corpse, there were several more wounds matching these two but for the nails having been taken back out, and none of these nails were found on site except for this one."
The Lieutenant pointed to a burned part of the room. A puddle of greenish metal with brass highlights seemed to have burned through the floor and settled in a small hole.
"They tell me that this was another nail, this one aluminum with a bit of copper mixed in. It was driven into the top of the skull, then removed and melted down. There was no source for the heat, so there must have been another damane here.
"Finally, one nail was stabbed into each finger, and one into each palm, before being removed."
"Well, Lieutenant, let's not pretend we don't know who this was. We've both seen that symbol before, when the watch arrives to find broken Sul'dam and missing damane or da'covale, a'dam lying next to the mark of ash. They are beginning to call it Unraveler, for the way it unmakes the a'dams and leaves powerless remnants behind."
"Yes sir. I hear that someone finally heard it speak, just before it fled the scene of another one.
"A guard yelled out to it, 'We have you now! You're done!'
"It said, 'Nothing is truly complete until the day it is finally destroyed.' And disappeared into the fog."
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Renka has gone a bit off the deep end even before she stole channeling and knowledge from a Forsaken. She also removed Semirhage's connection to the dark one with duralumin hemalurgy, and then melted the hemalurgic spike into slag.
I was reading The Cycle of Deicide, and I was a bit inspired by the idea that Wheel of Time is a little like Scadrial if Preservation had a total victory. Without Ruin, nothing ever really changes. Renka, as a shard of Ruin, could do a lot to shove the pattern off of it's course. I wrote a little omake of Renka showing up in the middle of the Seanchan Empire in The Wheel of Time. I figure she is going to be trouble in an empire run by slavery and control via torture collars. This is a little snippet where she is sneaking into the palace, when she comes across Semirhage torturing the Empress to death and intervenes.
-=-=-=-=-
The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and pass, leaving memories that become legend. Legend fades to myth, and even myth is long forgotten when the Age that gave it birth comes again. In one Age, called the Third Age by some, an Age yet to come, An Age long pasT, a wind rose in the Mountains of Mist. The wind was NOT the beginning. There are neither bnnings _or ENDINGS to the rnng of the Wheel of Time. But it w-s-- It was the winds that weathered, the storms that broke, the timeless waves running slowly, slowly, slowly, to a stop as the sun and the planet cooled to nothing.
...Must not all things, even worlds, someday end?
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Fortuona Athaem Devi Paendrag, Daughter of the Nine Moons, Heir to the Crystal Throne, Hope of Seanchan, by Luthair and The Light, protector of the realms and territories.
Your servant in all things Suroth Sabelle Meldarath High Lady of Asinbayar and Barsabba.
I write Your Imperial Highness with grave and tragic tidings…
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Derain was having a terrible day. He was in The Empress's bedchamber, which was currently occupied by two dead women. Finding the soe'feia, Anath Dorje, dead and mutilated would be a nightmare on any other day. She was So'jhin to the Daughter of the Nine Moons, and had recently returned to Seandar bearing news of the campaign in the Old Empire. Her death, so soon after that of the previous Truthsayer, would cause upheaval, and many of the Deathwatch would die after such a failure; and yet, it was the other body that drew his focus. Laid upon the bed was the Empress Radhanan herself.
Even in death, her features were twisted into a rictus of pain and terror. Her body was laid out as though sleeping, relaxed and loose, but her face showed that her death had not been easy. Deep crimson pools had formed on her dark cheeks where blood had run from her staring eyes, and the white pillow beneath her braided head was stained where blood had flowed from her ears.
A cleared throat brought his attention to his right.
"Report, Lieutenant."
The officer bowed low, before beginning.
"It appears that The Empress died first. There are signs of torture, but not of a struggle, suggesting that Her Majesty was restrained. There are no signs of rope being used, nor marks on the wrists or ankles, suggesting that there was a damane used in the commision of the act.
"The soe'feia died some two hours later, and in a very different manner. She appears to have fought her attacker, and signs point to her use of Power in her defense, as shown by the razor-thin cuts and scorch marks on the walls. I can only conclude that she was somehow a secret uncollared damane."
Derain hissed through his teeth in shock. Taking a cautious step away from the body of the former seer.
"Damane!?"
"Yes, General. We have no idea how she was able to slip through our detection and get into a position so close to The Blood, but I fear she may have been an enemy agent. It is unclear if she was responsible for Her Majesty's death, or if her mysterious attacker was. There is some evidence that the attacker was making a statement."
"This just gets worse and worse Lieutenant. What makes you say that?"
"This sir." He said pointing to a trail of dirt on the floor.
On second sight, it wasn't dirt, but rather dark ash, forming a strange symbol.

"It seems that a tin wedge was driven into the forehead, followed shortly by an iron nail into the heart. For an unknown reason, this did not kill her immediately."
"What?"
"Just so sir. From what our investigating Sul'Dam tell us, she went still at that point, and the attacker continued to mutilate the body for some time before she died.
In addition to the two pieces of metal left in the corpse, there were several more wounds matching these two but for the nails having been taken back out, and none of these nails were found on site except for this one."
The Lieutenant pointed to a burned part of the room. A puddle of greenish metal with brass highlights seemed to have burned through the floor and settled in a small hole.
"They tell me that this was another nail, this one aluminum with a bit of copper mixed in. It was driven into the top of the skull, then removed and melted down. There was no source for the heat, so there must have been another damane here.
"Finally, one nail was stabbed into each finger, and one into each palm, before being removed."
"Well, Lieutenant, let's not pretend we don't know who this was. We've both seen that symbol before, when the watch arrives to find broken Sul'dam and missing damane or da'covale, a'dam lying next to the mark of ash. They are beginning to call it Unraveler, for the way it unmakes the a'dams and leaves powerless remnants behind."
"Yes sir. I hear that someone finally heard it speak, just before it fled the scene of another one.
"A guard yelled out to it, 'We have you now! You're done!'
"It said, 'Nothing is truly complete until the day it is finally destroyed.' And disappeared into the fog."
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Renka has gone a bit off the deep end even before she stole channeling and knowledge from a Forsaken. She also removed Semirhage's connection to the dark one with duralumin hemalurgy, and then melted the hemalurgic spike into slag.
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