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Libra's Lament, a Magical Girl Quest [Complete]

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Naron said:
While that is true... crying for the sake of softening up your big sister might do a number on the girl's feelings.




Like any other warning I gave so far, you will only receive it once.
The twins will do things that go against their nature when you vote for it. But, depending on what it is and what it does, it may not be good for them.







I do not have much knowledge about this franchise, sorry.
But praising the sun will happen... at some point.
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What I showed you is him at one of his WEAKEST points.

...and the enemy that easily took down the Main Character ran away in FEAR.
 
[X] Save it.

[X] Admit it
-[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.

Then we will do this, because it is basically that what i meant, but with better wording. Because it would be in their nature and because our big sister will know if we lie and so on.
 
DarkKing98 said:
Escanor's power raises hour by hour with the sun. At high noon for one minute he reaches his peak power and becomes the invincible incarnation of power itself.

It is called, The One.
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This is not in existence right now... and probably will not be.
I do not think it would work particularly well, anyway.
 
Naron said:
Like any other warning I gave so far, you will only receive it once.
The twins will do things that go against their nature when you vote for it. But, depending on what it is and what it does, it may not be good for them.
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If your only going to give a warning once could you collect them on the front page.
 
Naron said:
Hm... that would make it easier for you to check, yes...
And knowing SV, people will have forgotten about it in a week or two; so I just need to give it an inconspicious name and wait :drevil:
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well it would make it easier for me to check, which is kind of important given that was the first warning I remember seeing in thread.
 
[X] Save it.

[X] Admit it
-[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.
 
kitsune9 said:
well it would make it easier for me to check, which is kind of important given that was the first warning I remember seeing in thread.
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Implemented under Mechanics.

I... I just went through the thread and realised it is the first warning you got.
The other times I used my QM-green was confirmations on data, not warnings.

Uhh... look, a distraction!

*runs off*
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Aug 31, 2017 at 4:54 PM, finished with 717 posts and 11 votes.
  • [X] Save it
    [X] Admit it
    -[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.
    [X] Look completely confused and ask her why she thinks that. As much as your stomach feels like lead from dread, you'd like to know what gave it away.
    -[X] Don't actually confirm it until you hear her reasoning.
    --[X] If it's well reasoned enough, confess. If she hated you or wanted you gone, the military would already be on your asses.
    [X] Look around, make sure you're alone with her and ask her to keep it a secret. Then tell her.
    [X] "What? Why do you..."
    -[X] Realize Eva is shivering, tense and staring wide-eyed at big sis
    -[X] Realize you can't talk past the lump in your throat and that you're already crying
    --[X] At least it was Big Sis and not someone else who found out. She'll make it quick, right?
    [X] You try to keep the shock off your face, but know you've failed. You glance over to see that Eva has gone white with fear
    -[X] "h-how? What gave us away? Oh god, you're not going to...k-kill us, are you?"
    [X] Look completely confused and ask her why she thinks that. As much as your stomach feels like lead from dread, you'd like to know what gave it away.
    -[X] Don't actually confirm it until you hear her reasoning.
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[X] Look completely confused and ask her why she thinks that. As much as your stomach feels like lead from dread, you'd like to know what gave it away.
-[X] Don't actually confirm it until you hear her reasoning.

I don't really like admitting it outright. Children will deny a transgression even when the culprit is obvious, and this one is a matter of life and death.
 
[X] Admit it
-[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.
 
Well then, I guess I can close the votes.
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Sep 2, 2017 at 2:56 AM, finished with 718 posts and 11 votes.
  • [X] Save it
    [X] Admit it
    -[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.
    [X] Look completely confused and ask her why she thinks that. As much as your stomach feels like lead from dread, you'd like to know what gave it away.
    -[X] Don't actually confirm it until you hear her reasoning.
    --[X] If it's well reasoned enough, confess. If she hated you or wanted you gone, the military would already be on your asses.
    [X] Look around, make sure you're alone with her and ask her to keep it a secret. Then tell her.
    [X] "What? Why do you..."
    -[X] Realize Eva is shivering, tense and staring wide-eyed at big sis
    -[X] Realize you can't talk past the lump in your throat and that you're already crying
    --[X] At least it was Big Sis and not someone else who found out. She'll make it quick, right?
    [X] You try to keep the shock off your face, but know you've failed. You glance over to see that Eva has gone white with fear
    -[X] "h-how? What gave us away? Oh god, you're not going to...k-kill us, are you?"
    [X] Look completely confused and ask her why she thinks that. As much as your stomach feels like lead from dread, you'd like to know what gave it away.
    -[X] Don't actually confirm it until you hear her reasoning.
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    • [X] Admit it
    -[X] We've never been able to lie to big sis; but if big sis thought we were bad. She would have brought soldiers with her.

    Your body grows cold in an instant.

    She knows.

    But... but you can not lie to big sis... even when it will be really, really bad... but if it was, she would have brought soldiers, right?

    "...yes..."
    Eva whispers your response, shivering and shaking and pale... and then you feel your big sister's arms squeeze you both a little tighter, bringing you a little closer. "I see."

    She looks at you both for a moment and pauses for some reason... is she thinking about what to do with you? You can not run away with how you are...

    Oh please, please don't bring us to them...

    You can feel the fear from your sister and are no better yourself; your vision blurs under tears as the silence continues... and then she just squeezes you again. "It's fine. No one knows and I won't tell."

    Huh?

    It takes a moment to take in what she just said... but you stop and look up at her with hope growing; your heart stops being heavy and hurting and... and big sister smiles at you both. "You're safe with me."

    "R-Really? You... you don't hate us?"
    You have trouble speaking and your voice almost breaks and you still can not believe what you just heard, but... big sister just nods and pulls you so close you both can rest your heads at her chest. "Never. No matter what happens, I will never, ever hate you."

    Thank god...

    You scrunch up and hug her with all your strength, then just cry into her chest in relief.
    You are safe! You... you can live!

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    "How do you know? Did someone see us?"

    It is the first thing Eva asks after you stopped crying; your big sister left you where you were, nestled against her while she holds you... but now she lets go a bit so you can look at her again. There is a weak smile on her face while her hands slide higher to stroke your hair.

    "No, no one reported Magical Girls. And I didn't know."

    Huh... huh? How does that work.

    She presses a little stronger for a moment; that tells you to just stay quiet while big sister explains, so you do.

    "You did a good job in hiding what happened... but there was a small detail that destroyed your work. Eva, you got that cut in your side, right?"

    Your sister nods shily, her swollen eyes never leaving Bianca's face. "Your shirt had none, but it should have. Mother noticed that one and became suspicious."

    Oh. But... from just that?

    As if she read the question from your face, big sister smiles and shakes her head. "No, she was not sure at all. As I said, you did well in hiding... but mother is mother, she could tell there was something going on."

    Urgh... you really forgot that part? But...
    "Are you telling Mommy?"

    Now you get the calm look she gave Eva before... and another rub over your head. "I just said I won't tell anyone. Unless you want her to know, I will not. In fact, I will tell her there is nothing; she brought me in because we both know you won't lie to me."

    So... it was a trap all along? And your mother called Bianca over to make sure they found the truth?
    ...ugh, how mean.

    "But... but you said you didn't know..."
    "I didn't", she interrupts Eva with a mean smirk. "But I can tell when you lie to me, so I would have known no matter which answer you gave me."

    So... it was a trick. Your big sister bluffed you!
    But before you can start pouting, her look becomes nicer. "This kind of secret... is not something you would come out about, and that is good. You did not tell anyone, did you?"

    You both shake your head.
    "Would you have told me?"
    You think for a moment, then shake your heads again. You were far too afraid...
    "So I had to come and ask... I'm sorry for scaring you like that."

    The arms around you squeeze again and you just hug your big sister tightly. "It's fine... everything is okay, so we forgive you."

    Eva nods into Bianca's chest, agreeing to what you said. She just hugs you tight again, then sighs and continues while looking at the ceiling. "But... in all honesty, you could tell mother as well. She won't hate you for it, either. We all know awakening magic is not something one can control."

    "How do you know she doesn't hate us?" "Are you a Magical Girl?"
    You speak at the same time, then look at each other while your big sister goes over what you just said. Then she looks at you with a shake of her head. "No, I'm no Magical Girl."

    After saying that, she turns to Eva and rubs her head gently. "Mother... after she noticed that your shirt was still whole when it should not be, she cut it up herself, then sewed it back together. Just like I do, she will love you no matter what."

    Huh... so your sudden thought was wrong after all.

    But this is weird... and nice and good and... a lot of things. You look up at Bianca. "But... Mommy hates Magical Girls... are you sure?"

    You heard her crying and swearing before, when she thought you were not around...

    She stays quiet for a while and you just go back to leaning against her while she thinks. Eva does the same and you can listen in on big sister's calm heartbeat.

    "This... is complicated. I'm not sure if what mother feels can be called hatred, but it's not far off. And I can't tell for sure if it is still what she told me with how I live far away. Mother is not fond of magic, or Magical Girls, in any way... but she wouldn't want people killed for something they have no control over."

    Her voice sounds a little weird with you having an ear at her chest, a little vibrating... but the words are clear nonetheless.

    "Most of all, though..."
    A pair of arms squeezes you tight once more. "Most of all, you two are her babies. She does not hate you and never will."

    Oh.

    No more words are said after that; you just hug your big sister happily. You feel much better now, after she accepted what you are.
    She is so warm...

    It is Wednesday, where your mother goes to buy groceries after getting off work. You have some time to spend with just the three of you.
    What do you do for the rest of the day?

    [] Play with big sister

    [] Cuddle with big sister

    [] Once your mother is back...
    -[] help with lunch
    -[] Write-in

    [] Spend your evening...
    -[] Playing with big sister
    -[] Watching TV together
    -[] Write-in

    [] Write-in


    [] EXP Plan
    -[] Write-in what to buy
    -[] Save it

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    +5xp Can Not Lie to Big Sis
    +10xp Not in Trouble

    EXP gained: 15 + 15 = 30
    Total EXP: 106

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    A shorter update this time, but that might be better for this one in particular.
    The next one will take up the rest of the day, so vote accordingly.
     
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    • [X] Play with big sister
    -[X] Ask about her work.
    -[X] Ask if she wants to see your magic.
    [X] Once your Mother is back...
    -[X] Confess to being magical Girls
    --[X] Then offer to make lunch yourselves so she can take her time in taking it in
    [X] Spend your evening...
    -[X] Playing with big sister
     
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    [X] Play with big sister
    -[X] Ask if she wants to see our magic

    [X] Once your Mother is back...
    -[X] Confess to being magical Girls
    --[X] Then offer to make lunch yourselves so she can take her time in taking it in

    [X] Spend your evening...
    -[X] Explaining what you know of your magic
     
    Naron said:
    So... it was a trap all along? And your mother called Bianca over to make sure they found the truth?
    ...ugh, how mean.
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    Super mean!

    Still though I can't believe we over looked the shirt, well I did anyway, but on the Bright side this means at least their family deserves a little more credit then we've been giving them.

    And hey otherwise we did a good job hiding it, so congratulations us.

    So I'd guess the next move is to tell mom? With big sis's reassurance it's probably Better to find out now then later.

    [X] Play with big sister
    -[X] Ask about her work.
    -[X] Ask if she wants to see your magic. (within the basement) (no fire, that is enough if we explain it)
    [X] Once your mother is back...
    -[X] help with lunch
    [X] Spend your evening...
    -[X] Playing with big sister

    [X] Exp-plan
    - [X] Buy Lunar Blessing
     
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    MilitaryAaa said:
    Super mean!

    Still though I can't believe we over looked the shirt, well I did anyway, but on the Bright side this means at least their family deserves a little more credit then we've been giving them.

    And hey otherwise we did a good job hiding it, so congratulations us.

    So I'd guess the next move is to tell mom? With big sis's reassurance it's probably Better to find out now then later.
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    Funnily enough, my plan would have called out her bluff without lying.

    At least that's how I think I worded it at least.

    Anyways, yeah, we should do that as soon as possible.
     
    [X] Play with big sister
    -[X] Ask about her work.
    -[X] Ask if she wants to see your magic.
    [X] Once your mother is back...
    -[X] help with lunch
    [X] Spend your evening...
    -[X] Playing with big sister

    ... Why were we even still wearing that shirt? It should have had blood on it. And if it didn't, that meant it was cleaned and shouldn't have had the hole in it.

    Also, still don't want to tell mom. Just... we all know, but no one is acknowledging it, which means things don't have to change.
     
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