So, if Taylor got Life 3, i.e. Bright Shattered Ice, would her Devil Tiger self eventually call itself Bright Shattered Ice, and how would Yozis react to such a name inheritance?
the Yozi's would probably have them run boring and dehumanizing errands for their amusement and what little revenge they can get, witch would push them to go Devil-Tiger.

Awww, but you skipped over the most wonderfully horrid tree in there! The Self Seed charms are just so charmingly squicky, and they're nigh undetectable without essense sight.
They're also sorcerous, which would probably lead to a significant cost increase.

self-seed is one of those things that sounds nice in theory, but is a burden in practice.
yea it gives you a nation, but now you need to 1)run it and 2)keep it from harm.
whilst being a plant.
 
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So, if Taylor got Life 3, i.e. Bright Shattered Ice, would her Devil Tiger self eventually call itself Bright Shattered Ice, and how would Yozis react to such a name inheritance?
Only if Taylor wants to be called Bright Shattered Ice.

It's not a merger or anything, just the occasional flashback of someone else's lfe.
 

Yep. He's the one who had crippling feedback from our Yozi patroness, since it's implied that Salina convinced him to abandon his school by explaining he was providing material assistance to SWLiHN through its regimented and strictly hierarchical organization.


I imagine Taylor is going to want to avoid the Charms that involve eating people, but the Stranger-like effects sound useful especially in combination with the brambles Charm.
Oh, the flower tree is potentially insanely useful.
 
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self-seed is one of those things that sounds nice in theory, but is a burden in practice.
yea it gives you a nation, but now you need to 1)run it and 2)keep it from harm.
whilst being a plant.
Whats this about creating a nation? You need more than one person to be a nation, and I don't see anyone here but me. :tongue:
On a more serious note, I don't see many Metagaos charms being appropriate to Taylor.

Oh, the flower tree is potentially insanely useful.

Insanely useful, yes, but it seems more appropriate to Sophia than Taylor. Actually, I'm pretty sure Sophia would just dive right into the Metagaos charms if she had the chance.
 
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Whats this about creating a nation? You need more than one person to be a nation, and I don't see anyone here but me. :tongue:
On a more serious note, I don't see many Metagaos charms being appropriate to Taylor.



Insanely useful, yes, but it seems more appropriate to Sophia than Taylor. Actually, I'm pretty sure Sophia would just dive right into the Metagaos charms if she had the chance.
The stealth charms are fairly fitting for her. Anyway, I'm off to lunch. I'll start working on 1.9 when I get back. Either 1.9 or 1.10 will be the wrap-up for Arc 1. At the conclusion of the arc, there will be two or three interlude posts, along with voting on the rest of our Background dots, Favored Yozi, charms, Abilities, etc. I will also post up our xp gained...as soon as I figure out what rate Gromweld was using for AS and adapt it to our quest.
 
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Whats this about creating a nation? You need more than one person to be a nation, and I don't see anyone here but me. :tongue:
On a more serious note, I don't see many Metagaos charms being appropriate to Taylor.
LJG gives Taylor infinite jungle, and therefore infinite bugs
BCSS may be useful if we make some kind of meat tree
FTFF is almost invaluable for the socially awkward
PWL and DWE would be useful for tracking criminals through the city
SMI is fairly useful
the whole HPC tree would be useful.
don't immediately write the whole tree off because it's mostly about being the Predator from Predator, being Gluttony from FMA, or having a "I can't believe it's not genestealers" cult.
 
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Ah, miscomunication:
Useful != Apropriate for my side of the discussion.
I agree with the utility of the HPC tree, but not sure they fit Taylor (aside from HPC + SJS, but I'd think the Elloge hiding charm might make more sense for her). That might change as the quest progresses and she goes through character developement.
I may have tipped my hand that I'm hoping for an SWLIHN + Isidoros + Adorjan Taylor with some of my previous posts. :ogles:

Oh, and I thought we weren't getting bug control this time round.
 
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Ah, miscomunication:
Useful != Apropriate for my side of the discussion.
I agree with the utility of the HPC tree, but not sure they fit Taylor (aside from HPC itself, but I'd think the Elloge hiding charm might make more sense for her). That might change as the quest progresses and she goes through character developement.
I may have tipped my hand that I'm hoping for an SWLIHN + Isidoros + Adorjan Taylor with some of my previous posts. :ogles:
I know, cannon Taylor probably wouldn't touch anything except LJG or maybe BCSS with a 40 foot pole, but now that she's kinda buggy and inhuman an Infernal, some of them are more appropriate.
also I just like Metagaos.

also, @Thief of Words, would BCSS work with the sciences or just the arts? because making a prosthetic arm with super strength out of pork loin is a thing that needs to happen.
 
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I will also post up our xp gained...as soon as I figure out what rate Gromweld was using for AS and adapt it to our quest.
The XP gain rate of Alchemical Solutions only works thanks to Gromweld handing out XP like candy for omake and art because he wants people to exercise their creative muscles. The base rate is utterly abysmal but it's made up for by the obscene quantity of work that people churn out. We...don't have that here (at least not yet).
 
Also, for those that may get some wrong impressions- the charms don't force you to do anything. Except for a few specific and clearly labeled ones, they don't force you to do things.
Like, adorjan. Unless you take hateful wretched noise or murder is meat, your mind is exactly the same as before. You just get the ability to go fast, and can use it however you want.
Or swillin, who doesn't alter how you think unless you get cosmic trascendence or the planning stuff.
Or Malfeas, unless you take the impervious primacy mantle or the crowned by fury(well, this one is mostly because you can't turn it off)

You just gain the powers, and can do whatever you want with them in the end.
 
The XP gain rate of Alchemical Solutions only works thanks to Gromweld handing out XP like candy for omake and art because he wants people to exercise their creative muscles. The base rate is utterly abysmal but it's made up for by the obscene quantity of work that people churn out. We...don't have that here (at least not yet).
Had planned to do likewise...but okay.
 
I know, cannon Taylor probably wouldn't touch anything except LJG or maybe BCSS with a 40 foot pole, but now that she's kinda buggy and inhuman an Infernal, some of them are more appropriate.
also I just like Metagaos.

also, @Thief of Words, would BCSS work with the sciences or just the arts?
Revlid's Metagaos is super cool and I've seen it used to great effect (Ravana Quest), but using it pretty much locks Taylor out of any route that isn't hunted-antihero-vigilante or straight-up-villain since his whole combat schtick revolves around, y'know, eating people. The PRT is very PR conscious and would come down like a bag of hammers on any hero or rogue that made a habit of snacking on people's limbs.

That being said, the social charms (which you left out, surprisingly) would actually be a very creative way of handling the economic side of Brockton Bay:
  • Mine By Rights would help with bringing various businesses under our control and since the charm isn't Obvious that means the fear it generates could just be them being humbled by our overwhelming passion for setting Brockton Bay right damn the consequences.
  • Drooling Wallflower Commerce could be used to boost the Dockworkers or any other organization we add to our growing mercantile empire.
  • Go Get It could spur the Merchants towards being productive members of society by making them jealous of our luxurious office and comfy executive-style chair.
    • We could also use it to cause Max Anders of Med Corp to overextend, which would open them up to a hostile takeover.
 
Also had an Omake/ what if planned around BSI!Taylor x Abyssal!Desus.
would it go a little like:
BSI realizes Desus used UMI charms on her> BSI gets mad, tries to kill Desus> new Desus took the compassion flaw, Desus still thinks BSI has a thing for him> Desus's PD fails, BSI kills him> scene ends, Taylor is back in the driver's seat, has blood on her hands and a mangled corpse in front of her, is kinda traumatized.
because that's kinda how I want it to go see it going.

Revlid's Metagaos is super cool and I've seen it used to great effect (Ravana Quest), but using it pretty much locks Taylor out of any route that isn't hunted-antihero-vigilante or straight-up-villain since his whole combat schtick revolves around, y'know, eating people. The PRT is very PR conscious and would come down like a bag of hammers on any hero or rogue that made a habit of snacking on people's limbs.

That being said, the social charms (which you left out, surprisingly) would actually be a very creative way of handling the economic side of Brockton Bay:
  • Mine By Rights would help with bringing various businesses under our control and since the charm isn't Obvious that means the fear it generates could just be them being humbled by our overwhelming passion for setting Brockton Bay right damn the consequences.
  • Drooling Wallflower Commerce could be used to boost the Dockworkers or any other organization we add to our growing mercantile empire.
  • Go Get It could spur the Merchants towards being productive members of society by making them jealous of our luxurious office and comfy executive-style chair.
    • We could also use it to cause Max Anders of Med Corp to overextend, which would open them up to a hostile takeover.
I skiped them because
1) by that point I had been at it for a while, so some of the decision to skip them stems from laziness
2)I never really looked past the corrupt corporate executive/ buy my drugs applications.
3)I don't think Taylor has enough money to throw around to make them useful
 
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would it go a little like:
BSI realizes Desus used UMI charms on her> BSI gets mad, tries to kill Desus> new Desus took the compassion flaw, Desus still thinks BSI has a thing for him> Desus's PD fails, BSI kills him> scene ends, Taylor is back in the driver's seat, has blood on her hands and a mangled corpse in front of her, is kinda traumatized.
because that's kinda how I want it to go see it going.

Not a horrible (enough) idea, but no. There's no kinda about the trauma the version I had in mind would involve, though. Assuming she figured out her circumstances.

I skiped them because
1) by that point I had been at it for a while, so some of the decision to skip them stems from laziness
2)I never really looked past the corrupt corporate executive/ buy my drugs applications.
3)I don't think Taylor has enough money to throw around to make them useful

1) How Metagaoyin of you.
2) There are fun things. Like parrying bullets with your teeth.
3) The key word to this sentence is YET.
 
The XP gain rate of Alchemical Solutions only works thanks to Gromweld handing out XP like candy for omake and art because he wants people to exercise their creative muscles. The base rate is utterly abysmal but it's made up for by the obscene quantity of work that people churn out. We...don't have that here (at least not yet).
Agreed.
Maybe give a certain amount for every update, more for every arc that's finished. Bonuses for goals, or such. Also, maybe bonuses for good write-ins or stunts.
 
[x]Life 4:
-Pros: One of the greatest Experts on Exaltations outside of The Great Maker, Sol Himself, and Lytek. Among Creation's foremost physicians as well.
-Cons: Absolutely terrified of bees.


I just had to!
 
Omake 1a: Emerald Empress Burns the Board Clear
Omake 1a: Non-canon What-if

Part 1: Emerald Empress Burns the Board Clear





Taylor panted, waiting for the itch of the new flesh billowing from her severed arm to settle into its proper shape as her limb grew back into place. Gradually, the hissing sizzle of the acidic ichor which flowed from the wound dribbled to a stop as new skin regrew over returning muscle and sinew. Turning to face the direction of the strike which cut her arm cleanly off, she gritted her teeth. "I know you're over there, Jack! I WILL FIND YOU. SHOW YOURSELF!" As she screamed out the last sentence, emerald embers curled up from her eyes and mouth, as though the inside of her body was a roaring green furnace that had been stoked to a snarling burn. As the fires flowed up from her maw, they curled into the outline of a veridian crown, adorned with a jet eye, whose burning iris was emerald carved into the shape of a flame. On hearing the command, much to his own self-evident surprise, the tall, toned man stepped around a nearby blood-fountain, revealing his position inside the charnel house that had once been a small town's public square.

"Now this is a wonderful twist on things." He offered a mocking bow, his long jacket trailing back as he swept back to a standing position. A knife, the knife, the one she'd taken from Oni Lee on her first night as an Exalt, the one Jack Slash had used to slit her father's throat,
twirled between his fingers, spinning in a deliberate taunt while his other hand rested against his fit, well-toned abs. "I knew when I nominated you that you'd pass the others' tests with flying colors. And it's looking like you've found me, so I suppose that means you pass mine." He begins to sketch another rakish bow, freezing in place as the young woman again screamed out a command.

"SHUT UP AND DROP THE KNIFE!" Startlement twitches into a moment's anger, before his insouciant smirk returns full force, and he cuts her throat clean through, severing tendons in her legs and arms with another four sweeps of the blade he'd hidden in his waistband. The girl before him gasps and gargles through her gore-gushing throat. Jack feels a moment's irritation. He'd gone to such effort to make a perfect mirror of the scene where she'd watched her father die. He'd even intended to use the same knife for a better ironic parallel.
Ah well. Everyone's a critic
, he mused as he stepped forward to whisper in the girl's ear, picking up the intended knife as he went. He kept well back from the poisonous blood/acid/ichor which had sprayed so liberally from her. Bonesaw had had a field day fixing the last time one of the Nine had been sprayed by the stuff. It was, in many ways, worse than Crawler's own acids. Leaning in, he continued to rake new wounds into her, knowing that it took shredding her body before she showed any sign of slowing. "Such a shame Daddy dearest never survived to see this. I think it would've shredded his heart harder than Siberian did after I gave her his corpse, watching what you became. Even more, watching you die. He might even have been glad, seeing the monster I made of you put down." And with that last syllable, he hacked once, twice, three times with the designated blade's extended edge, all-but decapitating the distressing damsel. Dropping the acid-etched edge behind him, he began to saunter away, Now where exactly had Bonesaw and the Siberian gotten to? The Hebert girl would've made a good protege, but he couldn't have someone who undermined his authority over the Nine. Pity, that; her abilities were almost as varied as Eidolon's.


Jack stumbled, catching himself with both hands as the ground buckled beneath him. He looked up to see fissures spreading throughout the small city, glowing with sickly green and bloody red light. Following the trail of cracks, he saw the Hebert girl's mostly-severed neck regrowing itself back into place as she'd dropped to one knee and begun to fall. Catching herself, she stood, that eye-smiting white light she radiated roaring into the ginsu-crab shape it did when she really pushed herself. That clever minx! She was holding out on me. A wicked smile slanted his pretty lips. Then again, I was doing the same. It really is a pity that last new trick means I have to kill her.

Lettering in some hieroglyphic pattern banded about her breasts, as glowing white torcs about her biceps, and about her head in a glorious and radiant crown. Her eyes glowed white and green, burning spotlights of all the hatred the world had ever seen. Drawing a spare knife he sent a slash in at her, only for it to do less than nothing. It was like trying to cut the Siberian. Scowling, he whipped his ace out of his sleeve, the weapon Mannequin had taken from Armsmaster so long ago. Extending its nanothorn edge to carve gaping slashes into the ground and buildings behind her...only to find her uncut, not so much as scratched by the matter-annihilating blade. He felt an icy edge of fear, so long since gone from his life, scrape over his spine in a cold caress.

ooo

As an aside, if we were doing Abyssal!Taylor quest, her title would totally be The Conqueror Worm.

As another aside, having met the man before, I can't help but picture Jack Slash as looking and sounding just like Aurelio Voltaire. It miiight be why I always picture him wearing fabulous shoes, too.
 
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Extending its nanothorn edge to carve gaping slashes into the ground and buildings behind her...only to find her uncut, not so much as scratched by the matter-annihilating blade.

Just so you know, so you don't try to do this in the canon quest, the nanothorn's disintergration ability isn't a property of the blade (it's a property of the cloud surrounding it) and as such Jack can't broadcast it. The extended edge would just be a normal edge, as per word of god.

Not that it matters, it was still a cool non-canon scene, but I figured I should say something.
 
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