In the Shadow of the Old Pueblo-Tucson ISOTed to the Bronze Age

Story: Orestes I


Orestes, Son of Agamemnon had been sixteen years of age when he saw the lights appear in the east. After the initial panic, Orestes and his father payed little mind to the strange lights. After all the lights appeared in the lands of the Arzawa and Orestes and his father never sailed further east than Wilusa. Then came the news of savages, rampaging monsters wearing the skin of men who burned entire cities to the ground with powerful magics. Orestes dismissed such tales at first, as the son of a merchant he'd heard absurd tales all his life. Orestes maintained his disbelief until he and his father saw the burnt husk of Wilusa, occupied by tanned strangers in odd clothing. They never docked at port, fleeing all the way back to Athens. There Orestes and Agamemnon remained as the strangers expanded ever outwards. Claiming Knossos, Menelaion, and even Pylos. Refugees poured into Athens, bringing with them more tales of the horrors these "Americans" as they called themselves had inflicted upon them, this time Orestes believed them. Those days it seemed like the world was ending, that these Americans would devour everything in their path until there was nothing left. Orestes wanted to flee but his father insisted there was no point, you can't outrun a storm. Then came the day both new would come, the Americans had come Athens.

The men who arrived in Athens were the strangest Orestes had ever seen. They were covered in tattoos, some bearing so many tattoos that one could barely see their skin. Most of the Tattoos were similar, some kind of ritual to mark their group. Most wore leather studded with metals that Orestes had never seen before. Orestes and his father watched with mute horror as the Americans marched to palace. To his surprise though, they were...civil. After the King surrendered to them they treated him well. For a while it seemed as though little would change as the Americans set up in Athens, largely focused on making their strange weapons. They did little to interact with those outside of the king's palace and what little interaction Orestes had with them led him to believe that these people where far better than the ones who conquered Wilusa and Knossos. Most could barely speak his language but those who did were relatively polite, though they often spoke of strange things, focusing on purity of the blood and using nonsensical terms like Aryan. But they promised to build Athens into a mighty kingdom that would dominate the land, and for a time Orestes believed them.

Not long after a man named Alexander came to his father, asking to hire Orestes for his ship. His father didn't object and Orestes saw little reason to disagree, at first. At first it was just transporting cargo, he may have not understood what the cargo was but transporting things was a simple enough task. Soon however cargo gave way to passengers. "Hired workers" Alexander insisted. Soon it became clear that many of these workers were their against their will, tied up with metal chains. Orestes objected, he was a merchant, slavery was for farmers and Kings, he wanted nothing to do with it. Alexander however laughed off his objections, making it clear that Orestes had as much choice to be there as the workers. He tired to escape, only to realize Alexander was a port that Orestes had never seen before, filled with hundreds of other Americans. Years passed, Orestes hadn't seen Athens or his father once since he left. Alexander made sure he was never on the ship when he returned to Athens. Instead he spent those years ferrying things, people, even animals from port to port. In that time Orestes saw how the Americans had transformed everything they touched, ports empty of everyone he had known, replaced with new figures. Sometimes the Americans replaced or changed almost everything, from the buildings to idols. Orestes had long since given up hope of escape, Alexander may not have been a particularly cruel master but he was a careful one. Making sure Orestes never had a chance to escape anywhere remotely familiar. Until the day of the storm.
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December 26th, 18 AE.
The Coast of Crete


Orestes spat up sea water as he struggled against the waves, rain lashing at his face. chunks of wood surrounded him as he treaded water. Somewhere behind him was what was left of Alexander's ship, Sif, smashed against the rocks. Another wave struck Orestes, pushing him below the waves, spinning in the water. He struggled for a long time, eventually forcing himself above the waves, painfully gasping for air. Finally he found his way onto the sand, pulling himself onto the shore through the scattered remains of the Sif's cargo. He was soaked to the bone, his body battered and bleeding, his eyes burned from the salt water, but he was alive.

Orestes looked for a moment before spotting Alexander laying on the ground, trying to get up. Orestes started to move to help him before freezing. His mind filling with rebellious ideas he had thought beaten out of him. Alexander was wounded, defenseless, and there was rope not far from him. He didn't know Crete well, Knossos traders were a proud lot, but he knew he would never get this opportunity again. He rushed along the beach, nearly blinded by ocean spray, until he came upon Alexander. Without saying a word he grabbed the rope and wrapped it around Alexander's neck and then pulled as tight as he could. Alexander struggled, and for a moment Orestes thought the large man would overpower him but then he went slack, gurgling as he fell to the sand.

Orestes collapsed, his mind awash with overwhelming emotions. Relief mixing with fear, rage and even regret. He had spent years with the man, he hated him but they had shared countless meals together, even laughed together. To be so easily free of him felt so unreal, like this was all just a dream playing out in his mind. He sat there on the beach near Alexander's lifeless body, so stunned he barely noticed when the green cloaked soldiers arrived.
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The rain only got worse as Orestes was dragged through the streets of Knossos. By the time they arrived at the palace he was soaked, shivering from the cold. The soldiers, with their green outfits and bronze helmets, shoved him into a small empty room and left him there for a long while. The only sounds where the rain, thunder, and his own teeth chattering. Different guards came to get him, he thought they would kill him but instead them lead him deeper into the palace, where the old style started to be replaced by something new. The artwork along the walls a blend of the old style of Knossos and something he couldn't identify, the traditional elements of bulls and fish mixed with depictions of warrior women and mighty grey ships that spit fire. The rooms were bigger and taller than any he had seen in his limited contact with Knossos. His father had only rarely traveled to Knossos, it's merchants were a proud lot who found the presence of anyone else on the sea to be almost insulting. But even he could tell how drastically this King had changed the palace. Eventually they came to a massive set bronze doors flanked by two guards armed with black guns, above the door was a painting of a woman clad in armor, a trident in her right hand, her head covered by an ornate helmet that hid everything save for piercing eyes that seemed to glare at him. The guards opened the door, and escorted him into the throne room.

The throne room resembled a long hall, lined with red pillars. At the end of it sat three chairs, each occupied. The right one was occupied by an American woman dressed in some forest colored outfit that showed signs of having numerous repairs, the left one was occupied be a girl maybe 15 years of age, her features largely American but the dark hair and tan skin made it clear she had at least some local blood. She wore jeans like he'd seen on many Americans but her shirt was clearly the upper half of a noble woman's outfit, with rich gold and light blue. Then there was the King herself. Orestes was rather stunned by the sight of her, this was the woman who conquered the palaces of Krete in only a few moons and forged them into a singular kingdom. And yet she looked so small, so average and meek. She lacked the muscles of either of the women besides her, were it not for her blonde hair she would look like any matron in Athens. Only two things really stood out about her. First was her outfit. Every American Orestes had ever seen clung to their old style as best they could, keeping their cloths for as long as they could and doing their best to make any new clothes they made resemble their old ones as much as they could. Not this woman, she proudly wore an ornate crown atop her head and her outfit resembled that of her priestess, though decorated with rich purple fabric. The second thing was her eyes, she had a very measured look about her as she looked at Orestes, sizing him up like a merchant might do when inspecting an oxhide of copper.

The soaked body of Alexander lay on the floor next to him, laying on a canvas with two wooden poles running it's length. Orestes did his best to avoid staring at the body as he knelt before the king.

"You stand before Anax Rachel, Conqueror of Knossos, Founder of the Minoan Kingdom, Lord of the Aegean Sea, Chosen of Aphrodite Areia." One of the guards announced in a booming voice.

"So why did we bring them here? We have judges for a reason you know." The King asked in a quiet voice, only the barest hint of an accent in her words. Another few years and she might sound like a native of the city.

"Both the murderer and his victim are not citizens of the island, indeed we believe they were smugglers. The judges weren't sure how to handle this case." A guard explained

"The accused and the victim." Anax Rachel corrected "But this is an interesting situation."

She stared at Orestes intensely

"Tell me, how do you feel about the crime you've been accused of?"

Orestes heisted for a moment, considering his options. The guards saw him, it was his word against theirs and there was no way she would trust the word of an outside. Maybe the truth would grant him some measure of mercy.

"I killed him, I killed Alexander." He said in English.

A few of the guards muttered by the King's face was almost mask like as she looked at him.

"And why did you do that?" She asked

"Because he enslaved me." Orestes admitted "Forced me to serve him for years as he smuggled weapons, food, even men across the sea."

A look of disgust appeared on the American woman to the right of the King.

"My guards tell me you had barely survived pulling yourself out of the ocean when you strangled him." The Anax noted "It takes a lot of hatred to do that while half drowned. I'm not inclined to assume the the best of the character of a Neo-Nazi. So let's say for arguments sake I believe you. What was your ship doing on my island?"

Orestes was nearly struck dumb. Americans, even if they disagreed with each other, tended to present a united front when one of their own was threatened. With the Anax however it was clear that she probably would have killed him on sight had she had the chance.

"I...We where here to drop off goods from Tucson, in exchange we would get guns which we where to ship to Troy." Orestes explained nervously

The King laughed, the sound filling Orestes with fear.

"Well, isn't that almost fitting." She said with a shake of her head. "Tell me, do you know who was supplying you with guns."

"Alexander rarely told me the names of who we did business with and he kept this job very secret." Orestes said apologetically

Rachel scowled "Well, that's annoying. No matter, no matter. A slaver and smuggler is dead, which is hardly a crime in my book. I do want to talk to you some more but later, for now."

She turned to one of the guards.

"Nikostratos, arrange for our unexpected guest to have a place to stay for the night." She finished

The guard nodded and walked off.

Orestes was nearly speechless, he had walked in expecting to be killed only to end up a guest of the king.

"Thank you, my lord." Orestes said hesitantly "You are very kind."

"Hardly." The King replied "But thanks. I look forward to speaking to again, soon."
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So this one is a bit different as I'm not quite done with Haynes and I'm not actually headed back to Greece in terms of looking at the nations anytime soon. Orestes is to provide a different perspective on the various nations and also look at some the issues their dealing with closer to 'present day'.
 
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Slavery on fishing boats is a particular problem with OTL human trafficking. Makes sense you'd see maritime slaves here.
 
Welp.
I was kinda hoping it would keep on going with the "cultured muscled bikers that are also Nazis", but hopefully we'll get to see more POV's from Athens and that not all are rotten apples.

I kinda find the bit with Orestes objecting to slave trade strange. Slavery was very deeply ingrained in ancient Greek culture, to a point where some 90% of a whole regions populace could be slaves.
Since he is a merchant, he'd trade humans from time to time even as a necessity for lack of goods of comparable worth or coin.
 
Welp.
I was kinda hoping it would keep on going with the "cultured muscled bikers that are also Nazis", but hopefully we'll get to see more POV's from Athens and that not all are rotten apples.
The Nazi Bikers I've seen around Tucson really wouldn't fit that vibe. One of their groups is literally called the hatef**kers only without the censoring.

I kinda find the bit with Orestes objecting to slave trade strange. Slavery was very deeply ingrained in ancient Greek culture, to a point where some 90% of a whole regions populace could be slaves.
Since he is a merchant, he'd trade humans from time to time even as a necessity for lack of goods of comparable worth or coin.
Ehh most of what I read paints Slavery as not a particularly huge part of Bronze Age Greece, it was there for both the Minoans and the Myceneans but the Myceaneans largely focused on domestic slaves and slaves 'bound to the gods'. If this was classical Greece than yeah the guy would not have issue with slavery. Even now his issue is less objection to slavery and more a desire to not be involved in the trade.
 
Slavery in the Ancient World was also a lot different from chattel slavery of the kind Neo-Nazis would be more familiar with and are more likely to fetishize/replicate.
 
Story: Orestes II

December 30th, 18 AE.
Knossos, Capital of the Minoan Kingdom


Freedom brought with it many things, piece of mind was not one of them. In the days since his meeting with the king, Orestes found himself constantly expecting this farce to end. Someone coming to avenge Alexander, the King either enslaving him or killing him. There had to be a consequence for his actions, there was no way freedom was so easy, not after all this time. And yet, three nights had passed and he was still free to walk the streets. Perhaps it was a test of some kind, the girl-king waiting to see if he tried to make a run with it or contact one of the men Alexander traded with. If that is what she wanted she must have been very disappointed by now because for the most part he spent most of his first days of freedom wandering the streets of Knossos.

They had let him stay at the home of smiths working for the court, but the smith was American, more so than the King. And after years dealing with Alexander he did not feel comfortable being near his kind. So he took to wandering when he wasn't sleeping. Using the small pile of coins the King had provided him as "compensation" for his slavery to barter for food and clothing. The guards did not protest his movement but he could feel their eyes on him most of the time.

Knossos was strange, as were it's people. First there was their name, the Minoans. When did they start calling themselves that? Before the Americans arrived they always identified themselves by their palace-lord, or as people of The Island. Because no island held anywhere near as much power or influence as this one. Now the people he spoke to, particularly the younger ones, freely identified themselves by the name their King had given for the whole island. Then there was the city itself, like almost every city occupied by the Americans it was changing. He may not have known this city before they arrived, but his father always told him the people of the island had little in the way of weapons, they didn't need them. Those days were long passed. The city still lacked true defensive walls for now but numerous towers lined it's edge. With larger ones being built near the docks. Within the city itself he had seen a number of rather square sparsely decorated buildings with smaller towers coming off of them, all of them manned by a least a few of the Queen's green clad warriors. Guns had become just as important to this island as trade had. It reminded him of home, even if it was off in many ways. This number of warriors out on the streets would signal they were preparing for siege or a raid, in times like that the streets of his home would have been nearly empty. And yet people here paid the warriors little mind, treating them as just another part of life.

The warriors were far from the only strange things in Knossos. Very little of the city was American and yet he heard English everywhere. The young spoke it more than they did their old tongue but even the old men generally had picked up a few words and phrases. There were so few American faces around and yet it felt like they were everywhere. What off put Orestes the most though was how the city behaved at night. He had long ago come to terms with how oddly the Americans treated night, doing their best to fight it so the could get a few more hours out of the day. But Knossos seemed to have a second life during the night. The main streets lit by electric lights of all shapes and sizes, stalls selling cooked food and other treats lining the paths as people traveled to open air theaters were people watched plays or even one of those moving pictures Alexander liked to talk about.

Orestes was in one of those theaters, sitting in the back close to the man projecting the show. From here the picture was distant but he could still make it out. The sound however was quite clear, if he didn't know better he would swear the characters were right next to him. The tale was some strange work of fantasy, involving massive grey ships that sailed through an endless black sea, men fighting each other with swords seemingly made out of light itself. In truth Orestes was paying little attention to the performance itself, instead his mind lingering on conversations he had with Alexander over the years. How Alexander had mentioned they couldn't replace much of what they had. How long would this last? How long until the lights went out and the projector broke? How long would it take the girl-king to replace them?

He was taken out of his thoughts by a nudge to his shoulder. he looked up to see a emerald warrior staring down at him from the steps.

"The King wants to speak with you." He said softly

"Of course." Orestes replied, preparing for the worst.
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Unlike last time he didn't meet the King in her throne room. Instead he was lead to a small private patio that overlooked some of the city, the street lights forming patterns in the darkness. The King was sitting on a chair, glass of wine in hand. Whereas before she had done her best to project calm strength despite her small frame, here she seemed far more uncertain, her eyes filled with doubt and regrets.

"The way I see it you have four options going forward." The King said, her eyes focused on the city, the doubt disappearing with each word "The first is your sneak back home and hope the Nazis either don't notice you or don't care about what happened to the man who enslaved you, maybe you get lucky but more than likely you're going to get killed, probably horrifically. Second is I send you back with the supplies and aid needed to overthrow the Nazis. More than likely you fail horribly but on the off chance you're successful, odds are you're either going to get conquered by another power or an expedition, or you're be so indebted to me that I'll basically own your city-state. Third you flee here and try to make some sort of life for yourself. You might be able to but there's not a lot of opportunity for a Mycenaean man out their these days, particularly when your skills are largely ship based and most of the shipping is controlled by me. Fourth, you work for me, help me track down the smugglers and slavers who put you in this position and you could build a very comfortable life here. Get yourself a nice home; find a wife, husband, whatever your preference."

She turned towards him, staring at him intensely

"Why would you offer that?" Orestes was confused. "Alexander did his best to keep me out of the specifics of who he dealt with. I don't think I would be of much help"

"But you do know the routes though. More importantly you know what was carried along those routes. Who needs what resource, who needed slaves, and so on and so forth." The King observed.

That was a point he hadn't considered. Alexander had plenty of one off trades and deals, but there were a number of regular visits as well. He was familiar with the routes, what was carried on them, even who else traveled those routes to an extent. There were plenty of Alexander's kind who traveled those routes, without them how would Athens reach Tucson? If the King knew where to find them she could strangle these Nazis.

Did he want that? He certainly bore no love for the men currently holding Athens but would aiding her help his people? Would it help anyone besides the Minoans and himself? Did that even matter at this point? With Alexander's death the odds of him returning home felt even more remote. And even if he could, would he even recognize it? At the same time though, while they had enslaved him, they had treated his people decently for the most part. Would another group do the same?

"You're asking me to go against my own people, my family." Orestes said, mustering his courage.

"I'm asking you to help me ensure the Nazis controlling your family don't last long. And trust me you don't want them too. You're probably far from the only one they've enslaved and more to the point, you really really don't want people thinking of Athens as the Nazi City-State. Because the moment people start lumping you in with that biker trash is the moment they're going to stop worrying about liberating your kind and start planning on punishing them for being connected to Neo-Nazis."

Liberate. He'd heard that term only a few times and every time it felt like some sort of a joke.

"When has anyone concerned themselves with liberating my kind?" He asked

The King suddenly looked sullen, as if she struck be realization. She then drank heavily from her cup.

"Sorry, forgot where I was for a moment." She said wearily "But the point remains, you help me and I can make sure the people who enslaved you suffer ten fold for what they did to you. I can't give you back the years you lost but I can make the years you have left comfortable."

Part of him wanted to spit in her face; she was just another conqueror using him to further her own power. And yet she had a point, he wanted revenge for what Alexander and his kind had done to him, and returning home felt impossible at this point. His father always told him to look for the best deal he could get. Was he going to get a better off then this one?

"What would you have me do?" He asked

The King smiled broadly, her eyes alive with hunger.
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Next update will be a nation update. I just wanted to expand a bit more on this.
 
Does Knossos have the highest living standard in the world right now? Electric Streetlights, available movie theaters, it seems like all the rest of the world has less, being less stable or more vulnerable and thus putting more into defense.
 
Does Knossos have the highest living standard in the world right now? Electric Streetlights, available movie theaters, it seems like all the rest of the world has less, being less stable or more vulnerable and thus putting more into defense.
When your land isn't constantly ravaged by hungry genocidal groups or just modern vikings, you tend to be the destination of choice for people with skill who know they'd be welcome.

While the small amounts of electricity are definitely not an immediate sign of wealth, the savings everyone makes on not burning wood, or labour needed to collect it must be immense.
Then there is Egypt that received refugees before the main push arrived- that might be a surprisingly advanced state now.
 
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Does Knossos have the highest living standard in the world right now? Electric Streetlights, available movie theaters, it seems like all the rest of the world has less, being less stable or more vulnerable and thus putting more into defense.
I'm not sure if they're the highest standard of living but they're certainly in the top three. It helps that Wilson basically just found the richest kids around and realized they were almost entirely defenseless before anyone else did. Which made pulling off a combo of William the Conqueror and William Walker a lot easier so there was less conflict involved then there was for other regions like Greece. That and maintaining a decent grip on trade allowed Knossos to keep the wealth flowing in for the most part. And the theaters are relatively simple it's just a projector hooked up to a DVD player with some speakers, all powered by a generator of some kind. And I should make clear the lights are very ad hoc for the most part.
 
Hittite Empire (Part 1)


"Poor Hittites, so far from god, so close to us."
-Overheard on the Streets of Hattusa

"The Hittite Empire is dead. It's corpse is just too stubborn to admit it."
-Consul Sophia Maddox

The Hittite Empire has survived plagues, civil wars, the Sanford Expedition and even the loss of the core of their homeland. Though their survival is a narrow thing, beset by dangers both internal and external. An empire that should be at the beginning of it's rise to power has spent over a decade just trying to stay intact. It's king desperately trying to hold his Kingdom together in the face of both American and Assyrian pressure. Many outsiders predict the empire won't last another ten years and even the King's most loyal advisers grow more doubtful by the day. But the king remains hopeful, they've survived so far haven't they?

After the Expedition
Faced with the loss of Hattusa and the core region of the Hittite Empire and facing pressure from many of his nobles and families members, the New King of the Hittite Empire pushed south. Despite assumptions by both Sanford and Maddox, the Hitties did not yet control the Mediterranean coast when the Expedition arrived, having influence over a number of tribes in the region and a rivalry with the Semitic Kingdom of Yamhad. Had the event not occurred, King Labrana's grandson would conquer most of Yamhad only for the Hittites to lose most of it after his assassination, the Kingdom finally being conquered around 1500 BCE. Tudhaliya I would be forced to complete that conquest far sooner in this reality. The Hittite invasion of Yamhad was in many ways an act of desperation, something not too dissimilar from the early conquests of the Survivors of Tucson. Tudhaliya knew he needed the Yamhad's land if his Empire was to survive, he simply didn't control enough land to support the army he had left. For perhaps the only time, luck would be on the Hittite King's side. He found Yamhad distracted, recovering from the plague that had spread through the Hittite Empire, it's army divided between watching the coast for Americans and watching the east for Assyrians. He also had access to the very thing that had brought his empire low. Guns. Only a few, no more than a dozen or so modern rifles and maybe twice that many post-Event ones with very limited ammo supplies. The guns had come from a number of sources, stolen from Expedition camps, recovered from bodies, purchased off of former members of the Expedition. No one among the Hittites yet understood the technology and chemistry behind either the guns or the ammunition, but Tudhaliya did understand how powerful the weapons could be in terms of both killing power and psychological warfare.

Tudhaliya unleashed his army on Yamhad knowing that defeat would mean certain death for both himself and his empire. The result was a short but brutal war that saw the Yamhad conquered entirely. Tudhaliya relocated his capital to the Yamhad capital of Halab, known to uptimers as Aleppo. Tudhaliya quickly began working to consolidate his new Empire but soon found himself facing a more familiar foe, the Assyrians.

As the Assyrians poured over the border, it seemed as though everything Tudhaliya had gained would be lost just as quickly. He didn't have the guns or the manpower to fight off the hosts of the Viceroy of Assyria. Each day the armies advanced closer and close to Halab, then they stopped, then they withdrew, retreating almost as quickly as they appeared. Emissaries eventually arrived and demanded most of the lands east of Halab and tribute in the form of riches and uptimer tech. Tudhaliya was incredibly confused but agreed. It would take some months for the Hittite King and his court to figure out why the Assyrians had so quickly broken off their assault. The plagues that had ravaged both the Hittites and Yamhad had now crossed the border into Assyria. Worse for the Assyrians, it had mutated, becoming far more infectious than the original pre-Event disease the Tucsonians had accidentally introduced. Rumors began to circulate around the Empire that the skies above the Assyrian were black with smoke as the Assyrians had to burn their dead in mass pits. Regardless of the validity of these rumors, the King knew his position was far from secure. The Assyrians would be back, as would the Americans. And he would not survive either of them unless he modernized his empire. He need American arms and knowledge to survive against them. And unfortunately for Tudhaliya, numerous Americans understood that all too well and were more than willing to take advantage of his desperation.
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Short but I was afraid I would delete and rewrite this again so I'm forcing myself to post it.
 
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Worse for the Assyrians, it had mutated, becoming far more infectious than the original pre-Event disease the Tucsonians had accidentally introduced.
Someone's playing PlagueInc: Ancestros expansion pack :lol:
Quick! To Madagascar Cyprus before they close their port!

Rumors began to circulate around the Empire that the skies above the Assyrian were black with smoke as the Assyrians had to burn their dead in mass pits.
IRL Assyria (and Babylonia) were heavy importers of wood, with the recent disruptions in trade and massive use for funerals both nations might find themselves in a strained economic situation.
And while the Hittite emperor does not realize it yet, his opponents might not have a chance to come back for decades, even if he chooses to ignore their demands.

And unfortunately for Tudhaliya, numerous Americans understood that all too well and were more than willing to take advantage of his desperation.
Giving a noble title to a foreigner ,and maybe marrying him to some pretty faces to tie him with the empire seems like a cheep price given the international situation.
 
Hittite Empire (Part 2)


Teachers and Conquerors.
Defense proved to be a rather paradoxical situation for the Hittites, as to defend against another American attack they needed American help, and yet the King knew said help could not be trusted. He had heard tales of the conquest of Knossos, and that combined with his own experiences in the Sanford invasion had left him convinced that these Americans were almost all bent on conquest and domination, more so than any sane power at least. And yet, he needed them. What Uptime tech they had grabbed proved impossible to reproduce or even make a crude copy of, no priest or merchant could figure out how to make Black Powder. Attempts were made to buy the powder and other materials and technology from American states near Tucson proved difficult as the Hitties lacked much in the way of a fleet, most of Yamhad's merchants had fled during the invasion. Additionally most uptimer states refused to sell anything related to firearms to the downtime Hittites. The Minoans sold them a limited quantity of weapons and powder, all post-Event of course, enough to equip the royal guard but little more than that. When the merchants came back from Knossos, bringing tales with them of what it's American Anax had done to the city and it's people, the King realized it was more than just guns he needed. He need to drag his country into an entire new age in terms of technology and knowledge, and he lacked all but the faintest idea how to begin.

Only two years after the Assyrian invasion faltered, the King received reports of a strange boat arriving at a fishing village not far from the Capital. Riders send to investigate the rumors came back with two Uptime women. Sisters named Eli and Sidrah Lyons. To the King's shock and suspicion the sisters had come willing, eager to meet the King. The sisters had fled from New Washington in a Pre-Event boat after Eli was accused of murdering her ex-husband, the two had come to hoping to both escape retribution and secure a decent life for themselves. The two explained trough a translator they had no knowledge how to forge or even how to make black powder, much to the King's disappointment, but they did have knowledge of other things. Eli was a former medical student and managed to bring with her a number of her old textbooks and medical journals. Sidrah's offer was simpler, she was going to teach the King, his court, the merchants and as many other people as she could. The price for their aid was simple. Land, wealth, servants to maintain both and titles to ensure none of that would be taken away. As Sidrah made her offer she played to the King's fears, saying that her former countrymen would keep invading as long as they saw the Hittites as primitives, the upper class learning to write and speak English would not only begin to dispel this image among other Americans, it would also reduce the Hittites need for American aid to modernize their country. After all there were plenty of books on smiting and gun-making, why depend on American gunsmith when you can train one of your own to do the same task. The King was interested but nervous about their offer, disease still held his empire in it's grip and even basic medical training would go a long way's towards resolving the crisis, and not needing an American to translate their many books for him would be major boon. But he also realized accepting their deal would not be a popular move. Few Hittites bore any love for Americans and making Americans part of the nobility would seem like he was opening the way for an invasion. More than that, healing was a job reserved for priesthood, Eli's teachings would anger a lot of the more conservative voices in his court. Never the less the King realized their aid was too valuable to turn down and accepted Sidrah's deal. Giving them abandoned estates not far from palace. Immediately he had both of them getting to work, having Eli train some of the more open minded priests while Sidrah began to teach him how to read the English language.

While Sidrah's efforts proved relatively fruitful, within months she and the king were speaking to each other almost exclusively in English. Eli found herself repeated hampered by a lack of supplies and equipment.She quickly found herself largely committed to teaching the basics of medicine and science, teaching the priests about germ theory and the importance of the scientific method, along with basics such as washing one's hands in clean water and sterilizing equipment. These basics did help fight the plague though, saving hundreds of lives in the process. Never the less her teachings angered many within the Priesthood.

The sisters were not the only uptimers to enter the Empire in those days, a man by the name of Keenan Shaw had also sailed to the Hittite Empire around the same time along with a small circle of friends. Unlike the sisters, Shaw's group would keep their presence hidden from the King for some time. Shaw was a former police officer, having bounced around a number of departments across Arizona and California before his violent behavior and drug use became too much to ignore and he was finally fired. Shaw had been approached by Rachel Wilson and tried to recruit him to him in her conquest of Crete, he refused thinking she had no chance of pulling it off. When news of the conquest of Knossos reached the mainland he began to get ideas.

He made contact with a noble family that oversaw the village of Sam'al. Together the two worked out a deal. The nobles would provide Shaw protection as he imported more weapons and had his brother set up a forge, using Shaw's weapons and the forces loyal to the nobles they would stage a coup against the King, Shaw's weapons giving them the needed edge if thing escalated into full scale conflict. Together they would overthrow the current king and have Shaw take over, with Shaw marrying one of the noble's daughters to act as his consort. This plot was largely one of desperation on the nobility's part, as they feared another Expedition and believed that an American King would protect them, as nations like the Consulate and Hattusa would now view them as an equal instead of just inferiors.

Shaw would remain hidden for months, slowly smuggling in more weapons as his brother began to produce muskets and even a few mortars. It soon looked like everything would be ready and soon he'd bee marching to Aleppo. Then he made a mistake, he contacted Eli Lyons. Having gotten wind of the Lyons sisters, Shaw believed they would naturally be more inclined to work for another former Tucsonian. While Eli had become very frustrated with the Hittite nobility and how they treated her and her sister, particularly the priesthood which had made more than one attempt to have her removed from the Empire. She never the less immediately informed the King of Shaw's plans. The King acted quickly, sending an Assassin to kill Shaw and some of his entourage. in the middle of the night. While chaos gripped Sam'al, the king moved soldiers into the city, quickly surrounding both the forge and the palace. The nobles were flayed alive for their treason. The guns seized and moved to the royal armory as the king sent his most learned men to study the forge.

Unfortunately for the the Hittites, Shaw would hardly be the last Would-be-King to visit their shores.
 
I love it.

Been waiting on sympathetic Americans getting word out to the downtimers.
Although, tbh, the ones who would be most interested in any kind of intervention would be more coldy-cynical and exploitive in the first place.

I'd like to keep my optimism though.
 
I love it.

Been waiting on sympathetic Americans getting word out to the downtimers.
Although, tbh, the ones who would be most interested in any kind of intervention would be more coldy-cynical and exploitive in the first place.

I'd like to keep my optimism though.
I want to make it clear that people haven't turned into a bunch of sneering imperialists, some of them anyway. Eli didn't betray the Hittites because she considered doing such a thing loathsome, and also she didn't think Shaw could win.
 
I want to make it clear that people haven't turned into a bunch of sneering imperialists, some of them anyway. Eli didn't betray the Hittites because she considered doing such a thing loathsome, and also she didn't think Shaw could win.
Eli just pops out to me though.
That's not to say I don't like the characters like Wanax of the Minoans for her ambition and smoother integration. She's my favorite so far but the king of the Hati is appeals to me like any underdog would. I'd say he might be 2nd fav.
 
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