Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Gaius Antonius 85 - Unsteady Progress
Gaius Antonius 85 - Unsteady Progress​

Things were never easy in the Qiguai Realm. Even the most fortuitous of encounters required great struggle to pry forth its bounties, and many struggles did not give out rewards commensurate with the danger. In this place, where pockets of space from across the world converged, all manner of anomalies were constantly being born.

Case in point, a bunker built into a mountaintop, filled with wood and iron puppet soldiers deprived of all purpose. Such a thing is awfully prevalent in the Qiguai realm, a dangerous thing stripped of context, falling through the cracks and ending up there.

The whip-blade lashed again and again, ripping through the bodies of the puppets. Balthazar tore deep into their chests, removed their limbs, wrapped them up and slammed them into one another. Very little of it out a soldier down for good. Though nothing special in regards to speed and power, these puppets carried an admirable amount of resilience. All Balthazar could do was slowly wear them down.

The Centurion panted, hard and heavy, parrying aside the bladed arm of a puppet and kicking it away. His boots scuffed against the smooth dark stone floor as he slowly backed away, swiveling his head to keep an eye out for flanking maneuvers.

On the other side of the bunker her spotted Mara, bringing down one soldier after another with ruthless efficiency. She smashed one puppet's head in with the side of her heavy shield, then pushed past it to impale the one behind it. Said puppet didn't stop moving, and so she skewered it several more times until it fell, motionless. As expected, her style was more suited to bringing down such resilient targets than Balthazar's, which was one of fines and precision.

Deeper in, Nikolas took on something more formidable than these simple automatons. A fifteen foot metal beast resembling a spider, it lunged at him with a dozen legs, trying to skewer him again and again in a torrent of metal. Nikolas struck back in turn with his huge blades, carving deep gouges into its armor and massing the much larger enemy blow for blow. He didn't take a single step back, that dependable wall of a man.

"Damn, I can't let you both outdo me like this!" Balthazar chuckled, drawing forth a small jade jar. His whip lashed out, severing the thin leg of a nearby puppet and sending it sprawling, where it caused two others to trip. "Formation Mu!"

At Balthazar's command, the whip crossed over itself again and again, drawing a pattern in the air before him; a simple channeling array. Popping out the cork on the jar in his other hand, he scattered a fine powder of silver dust and beetle carapace, prompting his whip to light up in a brilliant blue. Balthazar jumped and aimed the array downward, and a thick, unbearably cold mist streamed out, blanketing the area below him and freezing the automaton soldiers in place.

The Centurion landed, and behind him, the loud crashing of Nikolas' blades came to an end. He turned to behold inevitability; the spider hacked and smashed to pieces, and the giant looking only a little bit worse for wear. The grizzly work done, Nikolas let his swords clatter to the ground, futility reaching for a spot near the middle of his back.

"Hrm… this is a bit…" Nikolas muttered, fumbling against his own bulk. He grasped awkwardly at the spike embedded in his flesh - the tip of one of the spider's legs, but lacked the leverage to make any progress. "Pardon me, would you mind-"

"I've got you." Mara said miserably, trudging over to her comrade and planting a foot on his backside. With one good pull, she extracted the blade from Nikolas' back, causing him to groan in both pain and relief. He fell to his knees gasping as Mara tossed the leg aside, threw down her shield and spear and began looking around the bunker.

"Four months and still hardly anything." Nikolas grimaced, managing to drag himself upright and sit down on a mound of rubble. "Just some minor trinkets and a few herbs."

He paused for a moment, seemingly second-guessing his own objectively correct statement. "Still faster progress than on the outside though." He concluded with a shrug.

Balthazar rolled his eyes and re-fastened the cork on his jar. Enough left for three more uses of Formation Mu, he idly noted, before placing it in a bandolier with a dozen other small jars.

Something in between a Mekanikos and a frontline soldier, fighters like Balthazar were called 'battlesmiths' by some. Or 'dropouts', if you were to ask a real Mekanikos. By using a variety of methods to create arrays on the fly in battle, they could fill a wide variety of niches. While their hasty creations didn't have as much efficiency and power as more meticulously crafted arrays, it meant they were more adaptable.

"You're allowed to complain, Nikolas. If shit sucks you can just say it sucks." He remarked.

"You do enough complaining for all of us." Nikolas shot back, rubbing as his wound. "Should probably must some medicine on this…"

A telltale rattling caught the pair's attention, as Mara fiddled with a compartment in the corner of the bunker. "I found a hidden compartment!" She called out, keeping her eyes on her work. After a minute or so, she managed to pop the latch open, folding up a section of the floor and reaching inside.

"What have we got this time?" Balthazar asked, trying to find the strength to lift his weary and battered hopes once again.

"Uh, something." Came Mara's voice, muffled by the box she was now sticking her entire upper body into. "Let me just get a hold of this…"

With a gruesome sound of wrenching and sucking, the Centurion pulled forth a mass of fine, thin chains, each one no thicker than a piece of twine. It was hard to make out much detail, dripping as it was with some sort of thick, awful-smelling slime. "I'm gonna be honest, I can't tell what this is."

"Bag it up; we can run an analysis tonight." Called out Nikolas, who was now loudly and forcefully taking apart the spider's armor, looking for anything that could be of use in its innards.

Mara made a face. "I'm not putting this with my stuff. Not until I've cleaned it for like… five years."

—-

It was decided that camp would be made here; their elevated position made them impossible to ambush, and it was better to wait until they were fresh than to face unknown dangers while tired. This, at least, was a much needed bubble of normalcy and control in this otherwise unpredictable dimension.

Nikolas crossed his arms and glowered into the campfire. He'd learned as a boy to not turn his dirty looks upon other people - someone so large needed to take precautions in their body language or risk being seen as a threat by everyone around them. "The Legate's judgment has brought us this far, hasn't it? A Legion at half its maximum in less than a century isn't normal at all."

The fact that it's not normal is what worries me." Balthazar replied, tearing into a piece of salted fish.His face, normally quite pleasant to look at, seemed to grow a bit more sour with each passing day, as the pressure wore on them. "If the Brotherhood ever decides they want more out of life, our logistics will fall apart. And those Revenants; I'm telling you, they'll turn on us one day."

"They can't turn on us." Mara said "Without maintenance, they'll become mindless husks. And the Brotherhood like being slaves, it's a part of their whole… sub-culture, whatever you call it."

"They're not slaves!" Nikolas snapped, a great gust of air billowing from his nose. "They're proud, devoted ascetics. I know a few of them and they're wonderful."

"Devoted is right." Balthazar said with a smirk. "I can't imagine anyone else would want to go into one of those creepy things…" He shuddered a bit. "It's a step too far, is all I'm saying, and I hope that little experiment stops soon."

"You two are so stuck-up and arrogant!" Growled Nikolas. "The Kings are leading us into a better future, and all you have is complaints."

"Well, pardon me if I want to be more than an observer." Mara sighed. "If I'm going to protect my people, I have to go beyond just a Centurion. That means increasing my understanding, which means seeing things as they are."

"Not everyone is ready to settle, man." Balthazar chimed in. "I want to ascend, I want my own Legion."

"I'm not settling…" Nikolas sighed, hanging his head. "But unlike you two, I know to show the proper reverence. We have no right to question how the Legate does things."

The giant got up and stormed off, flinging down a seal which instantly unfolded into a tent. The standard issue Instant Shelter was a bit cramped, and yet again he'd forgotten to have a larger one made, but Nikolas could still fit if he curled up. He got inside immediately, no longer wishing to see his compatriots' faces, but sleep was elusive.

Spoiled kids, both of them. Sometimes Nikolas wished he had been born into peasantry and worked his way up from nothing, so that he could better appreciate his own standing in the world and not risk developing a big head. By Nikolas' own reckoning, there were at least three other Centurions in the Stargazers who deserved to enter the Qiguai Realm alongside their Legate more than he did.

Outside, Mara and Balthazar engaged in hushed, stilted conversation for a few minutes before Mara retired to sleep as well. In truth, none of them really wanted to talk to anyone right now. It was hard to believe that the three of them normally got along so well, and yet were falling into infighting after less than half a year.

Nikolas stared at the unmoving canvas of his tent and heard the popping sound of another Instant Shelter being deployed nearby. Maybe it was inevitable, given the circumstances. Something had happened to Gaius, causing him to disappear and leaving the trio to fend for themselves amidst this deadly place. With no way to leave early and no way of knowing what was going on, they had simply left to wander around on their own, worrying all the while that their future might have gone up in smoke.

It was terrifying, in a way that even the strongest enemy warrior could never be, to think that natural forces could simply swallow a man whole. Even a man as mighty as a King was no exception; Gaius very well could have been crushed to death or flung far away by a random bad interaction with that portal. The Empty King, a paragon who upheld the values of the Clan, one of the greatest talents of an entire generation of heroes, eaten by the world upon the whims of fate.

What were human beings, in the face of such mindless destruction? What was civilization, what was life?

What was Nikolas?

—-

Mara imagined that if the ruined stone building floating in the air before them had a name, it would be something like 'The Forlorn Ziggurat'. But, as far as she knew, it had no name at all; just a piece of architecture that somehow fell through space and time and ended up in this place.

It was large; big enough to fill perhaps a tenth of the Dawn Fortress' entire area. A sprawling network of worn-down rooms and stairwells and sprawling great halls, they were so old that their original purpose couldn't really be sussed out. Not only that, but the place had brought with it some kind of native vine which had grown to enshroud almost the entirety of the place. Entire areas were locked off by plantlife as hard as iron, requiring it to be torn away by hand.

They didn't even know if anything worthwhile could be found here; they had simply decided that they might as well check. And so here they all were, tearing out weeds, not using techniques to clear them faster on the off chance some awful beast would descend upon them from the shadows.

And worst of all, Balthazar was moving his mouth. Sounds were even coming out of it! "The next Trial really is key, or rather, the century after it. I've heard there's a plan brewing." He rambled distractedly as he worked.

"There's always a plan brewing, what's different about this one?" Mara asked, ripping out heaving handfuls of vines one after another.

Balthazar paused for a moment, perhaps wondering how many of his private channels he ought to disclose to his fellow Centurion - most people knew he had them - before settling on 'none'. "I don't know exactly, but it's a much bigger sort of plan. Just trust me; if it goes off, we might be untouched this time."

"Untouched? Seriously?"

Balthazar nodded. "Yeah, entirely. And if that does happen, then we'll continue to be unbothered, for a while at least. More time to build ourselves up and not be cut down. More time to refine those accursed Revenants; even if I hate them, they're a game-changer for the Legion's strength."

"More time for us to reach our full potential too." Mara said quietly. "That old, half-working Technique Palace-"

"That'll never get done and you know it."

"Shut up, yes it will, when we have the money for it!"

Balthazar laughed. "When we have the money for it, the Elders will spend it on something else. Some projects just never get done, and that's one of them."

"Ugh, whatever." Mara scoffed, getting back to work.

Balthazar continued talking, because that was what he always did, even if she didn't want to hear it. "My point is, another century where we aren't attacked and we can build up our strength is exactly what we need. By the time it's over, we'll be ready to take the region."

"You're too ambitious if you think that's enough time to take it." Mara replied, reaching shoulder-deep into the mass of green. "And there's no guarantee the other nations will remain distracted for that long."

"Oh, I think they will, I've heard some interesting rumors down the grapevine. They say the Legate's got a way to bolster the Blood Path nations, to ensure they stay in the fight."

Yet another rumor that sounded too good to be true. Gaius, who was famously quite reticent about the full scope of his abilities, was said to know all manner of secrets, but small and large, and there was no way to tell truth from lies. It didn't help that her sister was Gaius' biggest fan, and bought into all of them. If the Legate continued to get stronger and more ostentatious, Mara worried he would amass some kind of cult.

Hell, he already worked with one cult.

It wasn't right, Mara thought, to be so critical of the people who had given her so many opportunities. And yet it seemed at all times that, with the exception of a few close advisors, the King attracted those predisposed to adulation and blind obedience. To defend something, one needed to know what it needed to be defended from, and that meant knowing how it was weak.

In what ways were Mara weak? That, she knew intimately. She was impulsive when her pride was wounded. There was also a mismatch between where her talents lay and what she wanted to do. She was physically average for a Devil, which made her somewhat weak for a Quintia, who tended to be on the large size. Finally, her resentful tendencies worsened her ability to work together with her peers, should they do anything to provoke a grudge.

In what ways were the Clan weak? Easily pinpointed, in some cases; they were too confident in the superior strength of their blood, for one. They were overly enamored with the brilliance of the Grand Elder and blind to the fact that he too was just a flawed human. Some were sanctimonious, believing the hardship they had historically endured for so long gave them a virtue that all others lacked. Moreover, the series of successes that defined the current era relied upon all other nations not having an incentive to try and destroy them, either through a good opinion or being too busy with other matters.

All things needed to be understood this way, or everything would fall to ruin. Vigilance toward all potential threats, all avenues by which one might be attacked, and all blindspots one might have.

Wrapping her fingers around a pulsating, soft orb, Mara pulled hard. Her progress halted several times as she navigated her hand past one knotted tangle after another, but with steely steadiness, she finally wrenched the payload free. In her hands, she beheld some kind of oblong red organ, and watched as the vines before her rapidly began to wilt.

"Huh, so that's how you do it?" Balthazar remarked. "Damn, that's a lot faster than how we've been going so far."

But she didn't know the entirety of her Legate's weaknesses, because she didn't know the entirety of his strengths. Such secrecy and intrigue only undermined his own Legion's effectiveness, as far as she was concerned. Just what was Gaius Antonius plotting? How many secrets was he hiding from his own people, and for what reasons? She'd ask him face to face when next they met, on the outside. She knew he was alive - something so laughably simple wouldn't take that man's life.

—-

Move. Move. Move.

Matter was an illusion, as was distance. All things existed within and without.

Gaius opened his eyes, briefly emerging from his meditation to behold the space before him. It wasn't quite a void; more like a place in which everything folded inward. When he conjured a light, it curved around back toward him; if Gaius were to reach forward with a ten foot pole, he would touch his own back. Every direction, it all curved back onto him - a true bubble of spacetime, with no beginning or end.

No change, then.

With no reference whatsoever, it was difficult to tell how long he had been in this place, so Gaius had taken that matter into his own hands. By conjuring a construct designed to degrade over the course of 24 hours, he could count the days. He was four months in already, and he didn't want to consider what might happen if he was still here when his year in the Qiguai Realm was up. Did this even count as being in the Qiguai Realm?

And then there was the matter of the hallucination. It had been a while since there was one so vivid, or one so beautiful. A man festooned in colorful flowing robes and bearing an elegantly curving bow upon his back, the figure observed Gaius with curious amusement.

Every curve of that man's body, every strand of his hair, told a story of deadly, perfect strength. The hue of that man's eyes was something endlessly compassionate, yet not sympathetic in the slightest; the unconditional love one might extend to an animal, or to someone with whom one cannot communicate. There was no hate in those eyes; there simply could not be. "Come to me, my enemy." The figure said. His voice dripped smooth and heavy, like honey, like blood, like magma.

How could Gaius refuse? This was no mind control, no compulsive spell, it was merely the response anyone would have. "I can't move. I can't reach you, you should come closer instead. Closer." He muttered, reaching out fruitlessly, as if something as elementary as distance separated him from that divine figure.

The figure spread his arms in welcoming fashion, not responding at all. "Beloved adversary, come to me. I shall pierce your heart with the sweetest reverence."

"I told you I can't…" Gaius lamented, hanging his head and letting a curtain of golden hair fall between him and that unattainable temptation. It was gone, or it was never there, or it remained; all three were possible, and there was no difference, for no more words came from that direction either way.

Now, how to leave? A place like this was not hospitable to a human, that crude thing of three dimensions and simple matter. There was no leverage with which to move, though propulsion might be achieved with techniques… if only his qi would listen to him. It would not respond; without the spark of reality, the flame could not burn, and Gaius was not afforded such luxuries as concrete reality in this space.

In that case, the Dao would bring him deliverance, and reveal to Gaius the path out of this non-space. All it asked of him was that he Seek, with deeper devotion than ever before. The King had attempted this task many times already, but in this space, there was nothing he could do but keep trying. He breathed, though there was no air in this place. He waited, though there was no time. He looked farther and farther out, though there was no light with which to see.

He saw the sharp eyes of his slayer, and the arrow destined to lay him low. He saw two new shadows of the most supple, tender blackness stretching across the land. He felt a surging in his blood, higher and higher. He saw nine nails, forged of truly immutable matter, being pounded into his back.

He saw a man of silver conjuring a pinprick of unfathomable weight; a mouth which consumed infinitely. He saw wings of brass and gold, delivering them forth into the void. He saw a secret betrayal, an act of cruelty from which there could be no redemption, but could not remember what that act was. He saw his body, burned from within and entombed in a place outside time.

It did not matter how much time passed in that place, for it was a place without time, but let us say, for the sake of simplicity, that it was only a moment. In that moment, the world's axis seemed to shift, bringing forth new perspective, new control, new understanding. Imaginary matter bubbled up, like melting wax in reverse coating a small area at the base of Gaius' spine. It spread in thin strips, like rivers carving through the land, reinforcing flesh with strength of idea.

Pale and thin like a membrane around the eye of a toad, this substance nonetheless brought sensation to every patch of skin it covered. Gaius slipped deeper and deeper into a gorgeous, sensual synesthesia, and it all just seemed to make sense. There was a way out of this place; it was beyond his current abilities, but it existed, and he had ways of surpassing his limits. Now he just had to-

One more moment, and that heady feeling slipped from Gaius' fingers. The fragile epidermis, spread across less than half of his body, shattered into something finer than sand or even dust, leaving him exactly the same as he was before. The sensation of grasping such sublime enlightenment and losing it in the same breath might drive some mad, but Gaius was already mad. That feeling, that constant awareness of his own imperfection, was one which he lived with every day.

"Okay. Let's try it again…"

—-

I failed to get any writing done for so many days straight, but I finally got this little thing done. Ah well, not like this is gonna be a short turn anyway; the last two trial turns were quite meaty, and this one might be even moreso.

I wanted to give an update on how these characters are faring in the Qiguai Realm, as well as foreshadowing several different future updates.
 
Qinglong Shu SS3 - The Strange

Qinglong Shu SS3 - The Strange


She was born wrong. That was the first thought that came to the nameless horse, within the frozen caves of…wherever she was. The cave was the cave, as long as it did have food, she shouldn't care. Yet she did care. Where did the cave come from, what greater part was this cave of? She let out a snort, shaking her head as her skull began to ache once more with those weird thoughts. Always those thoughts, conflicting with her nature, of simply walking, eating, sleeping. Complex thoughts, deep thoughts…unnatural thoughts. It only proved that she was born wrong (what the hell was 'prove').

For one, she thought like this. As 'herself'. Sure, other horses like her had the concept of genders, of course they had, one needed to know who was breedable or not. But no, she was thinking of herself as herself. The Nameless One. The Strange One. Not just horse, not just mother, if she ever mated, just…herself. Thinking about more than just eating, breeding and sleeping. She realized it when she tried to 'talk' to her fellows, only to receive nothing in turn. Nothing but simple neighs, containing no deeper meaning than leading the herd to the nearest food or warning each other of predators. A…limited amount of words. Less words than she knew, or rather, less concepts to invent words for.

The biggest difference she felt was that she asked why. She knew that after the water falling from the sky, the yummy grass would come out of the ground. But while others were content to eat, she wondered why that was. Why was water making grass pop out, she wondered as she ate alongside her brethren yet non brethren. Was the cold around them normal? Why were some days colder than others? Why did the light from above go away. She clenched her eyes shut before lowering her head again. It was an endless loop, of wondering, of agonizing, between her instincts and her mind. Screw it, just focus on eating, eating was nice, eating was simple. Thus, she bit off the ground. Grass was yummy. Grass was tasty. Grass had nice texture. What if grass could be yummier. Chewing it slowly, the nameless horse narrowed her eyes, another action that didn't suit a horse. She wondered if grass could be yummier. But that didn't make sense. Grass was grass, one couldn't change it…right? She shook her head, neighing in frustration. There they were again, those weird thoughts, those thoughts that nobody else was thinking, couldn't even comprehend when she 'voiced' them out. She alone was like this…and it felt cold. Colder than the air around her, colder than her own energy.

In the future she would find a word for that state. Loneliness. She alone was like this. She alone was thinking like this, with nobody to share it with. Her fellow horses were just…simpler than her. However, one day, she would figure out a piece of the mystery that was herself, and it only brought up more questions. One day, strange creatures that didn't belong to the caves, that smelled too different, smelled hot and salty and rough appeared. She found a better hiding spot than most, focusing on becoming one with her surroundings, a nice trick she figured out with her intelligence. Then, as she quietly observed, like a predator instead of prey, she saw their mannerisms. The way they talked. Not only that, their mere sight resonated with her soul… and the Strange One was shocked to her core at the realization she reached.

The nameless horse realized she was behaving like a human. Thought like one, felt like one. And yet, she was a horse. It only made her feel more depressed. Hunger disappeared, replaced by apathy. After all… she wasn't meant to exist. One couldn't say that she believed in a higher power, a higher power that seemed to despise her, but she kept her head low, eating the bare minimum to live. Aimlessly as she was plagued by thoughts and emotions not meant for her. Her life would've remained like this, melancholic by the knowledge of being between two worlds, never belonging to the other. Naturally, those with greater Gravity than others would distort the natural course of time.

"Huh. Neat."

Another human. A rather small one. Despite the cold, unlike most others, she was a lot more naked. There was a weird shape on her back, on top of the weird shapes (scales she would later find out). It looked very terrifying, her horse instincts telling her that it was a dangerous creature. The girl with the covered eyes tilted her head, before lifting it up to reveal a right, inhuman eye. The horse took a step back, snorting in aggression, to hide her own fear. How did she not detect that human? She was usually better than this. Yet she was aware that this girl didn't seem to radiate any sort of presence, as if she was actively hiding herself. By all means, the horse should've either attacked or run away. HEsitation meant death out here. Instead however, she was mesmerized by that eye, that just looked at her. Seemingly penetrating her very soul. She was used to being looked at. Dulled looks of disinterest by her fellow horses. Eyes of hunger, of greed by humans. And yet…that one was looking at her differently. The girl whistled and then broke into a soft smile, her eye shining.

Understanding. Wonder. As if the horse wasn't a creature that shouldn't exist.

"Hello there, girl. How ya doin'?" She slowly stretched out a fist and holding it there. The horse's ears twitched before she tilted her head in confusion. Hesitantly, going against her own instincts, she gave into her own curiosity and approached the fist, before sniffing it. The girl giggled. It sounded nice. "Hehe, you're a special one, aren't you?"

Special one. Not strange or wrong. Just…special. Was that what she was? She didn't know what the word meant, but it sounded…fine. The hand retracted, taking away the myriad of smells that the girl radiated. The girl raised her thumb at the horse and gave her a nod.

"Stay safe, okay? Who knows who'd want to go after you. Would be a real shame." She turned her back to the horse and casually waved her hand. "Well, nice meeting you!"

The horse didn't know what urged her to take a step forward. Was it the desire to find something new? To break free from her pre-determined role? No, it wasn't anything deep like this. The horse merely didn't want to be lonely anymore. Didn't want to be alone anymore. So how could she possibly let that girl of Understanding leave just like that? Thus, she stepped after the human. Said human turned around, with a raised eyebrow.

"Hm?" She pointed at herself. "What, interested in silly ol' me?"

The horse neighed in response, nodding. A laugh escaped the human before her hand brushed against the horse gently.

"Your time, your choices."

That day, the horse decided that Qinglong Shu's patting sessions were nice.

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Travelling was nice. The horse had no idea why she never ventured outside. Well, besides her survival instincts. Outside was beautiful. Stars. Night, day. More grass. Other people and their behavior. Humans were more varied than she expected. The stares she would receive made her feel uncomfortable. Thankfully, Shu made them uncomfortable in turn with her dragon eyes, as she called them. The horse wondered why Shu didn't ride her, like many others rid horses. But she was glad for it. Someone on her back didn't sit right with her. Either way, as they travelled through the lands, of the "Icy Caverns" as Shu put it, a pretty lame name all things considered, the horse experienced so many things, it was rather dazzling.

The food…

"Ah, brain, brain, brain, the cold hurts!" Shu glared at the horse. "Why are you fine?!"

She'd die rather than suffer from the cold, the horse snorted out. She had her pride after all.

The interactions with other people. Good…

"Did that horse just do a flip?!"

"Looks lik you got a rival acrobat, haha!"

"Told ya my girl is special!"

Bad…

A loud crack and a whimper. Shu loomed over the thug that approached the horse from behind. She could've defended herself, but it made her fuzzy knowing that Shu would defend her like this.

And the…weird…

"For the last time, I am here to find students, not concubines! Ugh, forget it, I'm outta here!"

A sorrowful cry sounded as Shu left those Yin Icy Maiden cultivators. Adjusting her own robes, Shu rolled her shoulders with disheveled hair.

"Damn, makes me understand why Chang doesn't respect women, this is insane…" Shu let out a snort of amusement before shaking her head. "Not like I can worsen relations anymore than my predecessors did, so whatever, no big loss for me. Pity though, I wanted some ice Qi as reference."

What, the horse wasn't good enough? For shame. Noticing the glare, Shu raised her hands defensively.

"Hey, you'll always be number one, but more students are better."

Horse didn't understand why, but Shu knew best. Not to mention, neck scratches would make her forgive everything.

"Take it from me, buddy, people can be weeeeeird," Shu said, nodding wisely to herself as her hands moved swiftly but with precision, to give the best patting sessions. Then Shu frowned.

"Honestly, you need a name. Can I give you a name? You fine with that?"

A name. An identity. To make her more distinct. It was proof that she was truly different from…everything. Not only that, it meant that Shu would name her. She couldn't nod any faster. Shu hummed in thought at that.

"How about…Gezi? You're white like a dove."

Her eyes became wet. Why? She wasn't sad. Her heart exploded with heat, contrary to her cold Qi. The horse began to rub her head against Shu with all her might, almsot knocking her over as she yelped. Then Shu laughed loudly and began to rub her own head back at her.

"Hahahaha, like that, don't you? Good girl."

Yes, Gezi was good girl. And Shu was best girl.

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Libraries were great, even if in hot place like this. Sand was rough, coarse and got everywhere, but at least the library was safe from itchy stuff.. Learning to read was also great. So much knowledge. Humans were wonderful for actually gathering all that knowledge for others to read. Knowledge was nice. Knowledge was what made her from horse Gezi to Gezi Gezi. It took some convincing to let the large horse actually inside, but it turned out Shu was a big deal. Something about being a part of dicks? Gezi didn't understand why Shu only said the first letter all the time, but she knew that slang at least. Either way, now they were relaxing, Gezi reading over Shu's shoulder as she idly read through the information of 'locations' for them to travel next. Pictures were nice. Scroll smelled nice. Then her eyes caught an image and she froze.

"Spring of Boundary…"

A picture of a wolf diving into a lake. Then out came a human. She read the letters. The rumors, the legends. A way for someone, or rather something, to cross the boundaries of species.

"Pretty dange-whoa there, what's wrong?!"

Shu was about to turn to the next source of information before Gezi let out a strong huff, icy cold radiating out of her. Shu pulled her blindfold up, blinking at Gezi, before her features softened.

"...You want to become human?"

Was it wrong to wish to change herself? No. She wanted to properly talk to Shu. She wanted to give Shu pats too. She wanted to be like Shu, the one who accepted her first, who guided her. Shu chuckled and leaned her head against Gezu's.

"Heh. Knew you were special. Dao of Humanity then? Fits you. Alright then, let's figure out where this place is."

Gezi didn't know what a Dao was, but it made her soul shiver. Humanity. Yes, the thing she wanted the most, to understand the most.

How could she understand humans if she wasn't human herself at least?

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"Gotta be honest, Gezi, this place is giving me the creeps. You can still walk away from this."

Different sort of cave. Ominous. Not sunny and warm like name "Spring" would suggest. Devoid of other beasts, unnatural. Gezi would be lying if she didn't share Shu's worries. Nevertheless, she responded with a heavy stomp, angry at the mere thought of backing off now, after all the time they spent finding the damn place. Deadends all around, liars, people who wanted to take advantage of them. Now that they were here, she wouldn't retreat now.

"Sheesh, a simple pfffff would have been enough."

Gezi wilted a bit under the disapproving look she received, despite the blindfold in the way. They walked through the pathways in silence, observing the glowing moss at the walls, until eventually, Gezi smelt it.

Wet air. Water. But water that was filled with energy, energy that desired to fill up something. Arriving at the lake, it was shining in pure white, an unnatural color for water. And that light was calling to Gezi. She knew it, in her very soul, the one of humanity and of horse.

The lake would do exactly what Gezi wanted it to do. She didn't hesitate at all.

"Here we are. Now, before you-"

The horse leapt down, faster than Shu could react. She felt finger reaching out for one of her legs, but it was too late.

"GEZI!"

Fully submerged, the effects took place immediately. A shock went through her body and her mouth opened up, creating many bubbles. Why? Why was she twitching so much, twisting and turning as her body was burning?....Ah. That was right.

She was in agony right now. Her flesh was being torn asunder, to be remade. Up or down, left or right, it didn't matter as her legs were ripped apart, her head, her heart, everything. Where was she, why was she here, to suffer like this. Her limbs were remade as her mouth was twisted, her back broken over and over again. She tried to move, to reach out, but all was under the control of pain itself, moving her body. No air, no relief, only suffering for…for her…




Who was she…?

"How about…Gezi? You're white like a dove."

Her eyes snapped open, different now, a new way of vision.

Gezi.

She reached out with her front leg, only for it to reveal a hand.

Gezi!

She screamed out under the water, refusing to disappear, to vanish.

GEZI!

A hand grasped her new own and she was pulled up. Never was the air so relieving, cold as it felt. She screamed, a weird noise coming out of her throat. She kicked, punched, with her limbs being in weirder angles than before as something forcefully restrained her. It hurt, this heat that bubbled up from her core, that threatened to burn her. Too hot, why wasn't it colder, it needed to be colder. Or was it too cold, Gezi didn't know!

"Chill, chill, it's me!"

Shu. Safe, savior. Gezi latched onto hre voice immediately.

"Take deep breaths! Focus on the energy inside you and keep it under control!"

She did so. Deep breaths. The rampaging storm inside of her was beaten down, with each breath. Formed into shape, into an orb. How long did it take? She didn't know. All that mattered was…that it worked.

Both of them breathed heavily, exhausted by it all. Gezi idly stretched out her hand. Five fingers. She curled some of them in. Three fingers. Gezi let out weird noises again, giggles maybe. She could hold stuff now! So many things she wanted to grab, soft stuff, hard stuff, all of the stuff! Her joy was short lived when she received a knuckle against her skull, causing her to let out a yelp.

"Damn it, first lesson, preparation is the mother of all success! You can't just jump into this!"

Ah. Shu looked angry. Gezi didn't like Shu being angry. Gezi lowered her head.

"...sry… " That didn't come out right. Gezi frowned and slowly moved her mouth, so flat now compared to her horse mouth from before. "Bleh. Bleh. Blah. Papapa. Mmmmmah."

"Guess it's weird to have your mouth changed like that." Shu giggled before ruffling Gezi's new hair. "Didn't expect that look either. Suits you though."

Gezi tilted her head before staring at the mirror that Shu brought out. Hm, no wonder she felt cold. Her fur was all gone. All that was left was jade white skin. She pulled at her long, long white hair, as if all of her fur was transformed into that. There were some black spots for some reason. Oh well, still mostly white. She played with it a bit before giggling, staring into her own, green eyes. She liked her new look! Not only that, she was still bigger than Shu, in more ways than one, so she could still rest her chin on Shu's head! Yay!

"Now c'mon, baby girl, let's get you dressed up and teach you how to human!"

"Bweeee!"

Gezi raised her hands up and tried to stand up. Only for her to wobble and fall backwards again. Shu caught her before nodding to herself.

"Right, new legs." She took a deep breath. "Up we go!"

That was how Gezi was carried by Shu like a baby, with only a large cover hiding her nakedness. The horse now turned girl nuzzled her face against Shu, feeling utterly content in her new identity.

The reactions of home were funny. Not her old home in the caves, but the village in the rough sandy stuff. She got new clothes, all fancy. Soft to her skin, it felt nice. Black and white colors, good ventilation for her thighs as her robes fluttered. Black shoes good against sand. People called her an Icy Beauty. Gezi liked being callled pretty. It was funny when people acted weird around her, when she acted like Gezi, in wonder and curiosity, as if she was a newborn child despite her big body. Even funnier were their reactions when Gezi finally learned how to move her mouth right for talking.

"I'm Qinglong Gezi, daughter of Qinglong Shu!"

The day when she finally figured out how to say these words, her mother made a very weird choking noise with a funny expression. Though as weird as it was, and worrying, Shu bounced back from it rather quickly.

"Guess I'm a single mom now, hahahaha!"

Then she hugged Gezi.

Hugs were nice, especially since she could hug back now. Even pick Shu up and then finally do something else she always wanted to do.

Throw her mother over a sand hill.

Much laughing happened, which was always nice.

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Turn 15 Missions
Still doing quite badly, so expect very occasional updates from me at best.

Please note anyone engaged in the Turn 15 megacollab regarding the Trials is not eligible for an ordinary Mission.

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Clearing The Path

You open the Contribution Board, and seem perplexed. Not to overstate your own case, but you are a talent, an up and rising person of importance in the Clan. A Golden Devil who stands above the ordinary, and so you are often given preferential access to various tasks of high importance and difficulty. This has been quietly marked as a priority for you, though you cannot see why.

This task is simple enough.

"The Clan needs a great many talents prepared to clear the trade route in the Colossus Footsteps Pass, safeguarding our shipments and assisting to ensure that our precious diplomatic links do not go untouched. If there is any untoward upheaval there, the consequences could be difficult for the Clan economically, especially as we enter the time of the Hundred-Year Trials."

Simple, but the rewards are absurdly high for the risk you would expect from such a task. No, the risk must truly be great. Why? What could come of a Triumph or Disaster here? You don't know, but surely the Clan would not use you poorly.

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Tending the Gardens

This task seems perhaps more your speed. Resources need to be bought, bartered, and even stolen from the Righteous Powers, though assuredly not the latter for Strength Purity. Raids into Demonic-held territory to herb gardens containing valuable seeds, and for the Qi-level talents, a strike into territory lost to the Demonic Altar and now held by bandits, aiming to liberate a small library on herblore. Useless to the Righteous Path and so not retaken, the Clan's herblore is far weaker than that of its rivals, focusing on the few key Spirit Herbs that can survive in the desert.

For the Experts, a large raid ranging south into places held by the Abyssal Invasion, aiming to liberate - or kidnap if necessary - the gardening experts Old Cannibal will have put in place to help support the growth of native talents within his farm-cities, weakening an enemy and allowing the Clan to gain herblore directly without needing to simply learn from books. The stronger the Success here, the more powerful the Secret Gardens the Clan is growing may become.

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Yuan Preparations

While high-level negotiations are left to Kleisthenes, there are many low-level greasing of palms to take place. Disciples will find their way into Yuan lands and negotiate with merchants and innkeepers, with pill-makers and miners. It is no small thing to supply an expedition, and while the Clan can in theory simply use Spirit Stones, in practice is it far more effective to have a local logistics network in-place. Knowing who to deal with, how to deal with them, and the like will enhance the movement of the entire Clan support force

The Experts on the other hand will deal with the Guild of Lightning Eagles, a small sect of Beast Tamers in decline, their quick transport worth less and less with each passing year as the Yuan build up a secondary network of underground transportation. Passing overland is dangerous, but securing the services of the Lightning Eagles will enable quick transport of up to two Legions directly to the frontlines of any Yuan invasion, a potentially crucial service. They require aid in hunting down a great Core-level Thunder Crow, who's bile can be used to enhance their own eagles' growth massively. In return, they will offer their aid in terms of transportation, something sure to be of use when the Yuan Clan is invaded.
 
The Experts on the other hand will deal with the Guild of Lightning Eagles, a small sect of Beast Tamers in decline, their quick transport worth less and less with each passing year as the Yuan build up a secondary network of underground transportation. Passing overland is dangerous, but securing the services of the Lightning Eagles will enable quick transport of up to two Legions directly to the frontlines of any Yuan invasion, a potentially crucial service. They require aid in hunting down a great Core-level Thunder Crow, who's bile can be used to enhance their own eagles' growth massively. In return, they will offer their aid in terms of transportation, something sure to be of use when the Yuan Clan is invaded.
Huh... and I feel like a Triumph here might wind up giving us another client clan. After all, the Yuan might have less and less use for them, but the Golden Devils can still see their value.

Clearing the Path is clearly doing... stuff with the incoming difficulties there. Really, what it buys us is advantage against the devil bees and also legitimacy for taking that territory back for ourselves while still keeping Strength Purity happy.

Honestly...? I almost feel like it might be worth tanking on the Gardens entirely if it would let us max out the other two. Like, watching the Secret Gardens wither and taking associated losses would kind of suck, but....
 
Kakos Alexikeravno will be Clearing the Path. He's got skills with arrays, skills with ghosts, an ability to live off the land to a degree in monster-infested territories, and the kind of attitude that indicates that perhaps it is better than he not interact too directly with righteous path, married to a still-pathetic level of direct combat ability. He'll do better somewhere that he can afford to take time setting up prepared ground. I too will see what I can do about writing him another segment.
 
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Qinglong Shu SS4- The Wind

Qinglong Shu SS4- The Wind

Zhuque Bo gulped as he stood before the gates. The gates that would change his life, dictate the path he would follow from here on out. From here on out, his life as a mortal child would end. No longer would he be a lesser being, hidden from the gaze of heavens. Instead, he would now join the ranks of his parents and the parents before hi-

A hand ruffled his short green hair. making a wild mess out of it. He let out a yelp before glaring up at the culprit. Qinglong Shu raised an eyebrow at him, with a small smirk on her face.

"You monologuing again?"

Bo's first instinct was to deny immediately. But the very act of opening his mouth only caused his relative to smirk at him even more, like an amused cat watching a mouse trying to escape. Thus, despite his youth, he was wise enough to look away as he blushed.

"It's a big moment!"

Shu laughed before ruffling his hair just a bit more.

"No judging. Just getting a bit awkward with the silence and all." Patting his head one last time, she took the lead as she stepped forward. "Let's get you inside."

Entering the premise, he gulped at the sheer amount of children there were in this sandy training estate. Many of them wearing rather fancy outfits. Must have been from some of the older families that belonged to the Golden Devil Clan. Though there were some street rats and other 'commoners' here and there, it was clear on first sight who had a head start on others and who didn't.

Then there was little ol' Bo. With his green hair. If it were only that, he'd be ignored. Unfortunately, he was related to someone rather infamous, someone who could be identified on sight despite 'only' being Qi Condensation herself. Blindfold? Scales? Not many would have such traits to be confused with the up and coming talent of the 501st, Qinglong Shu. Thus, Bo was raised in terms of attention and thus glowing eyes. He gulped before rolling his shoulders, glancing to the side. At the distance, he blinked and pointed towards it.

"Why is there a pit?"

"It's where we put the less…cooperative recruits in." The two of them turned to a bronze skinned man, smiling at them with his beard. "Greetings. I am one of the overseers of this facility, to ensure the future legionnaires are up to par."

"It is an honor." After Shu bowed, she sent the young boy a pointed look. "Bo, don't even think about it, you aren't going to play 'Thug' in there."

"I don't play thug!" Bo shouted, throwing his arms up in the air. It wasn't his fault that people always started things with him and he had to punch their teeth out! As if reading his mind, Shu could only shake her head with pity.

"That just makes it worse."

And what the hell did that mean?! The overseer cleared his throat and turned to Shu, gestured towards the entrance.

"It is a pleasant surprise to have a talent like you visit, but I must ask you to leave now. We are about to begin the procedures."
"Of course." Without warning, Shu wrapped Bo in one last bear hug before letting him down and allowing him to breathe. "Love you, kiddo!"

"Thanks," Bo wheezed out, checking if his ribs were still in place. With a nod, he turned around…only for Shu still being in front of him. He did a double take behind him, only to realize that Shu practically teleported back in front of him for no reason. He tilted his head in complete confusion as she put her hands on her hips, pouting at him."Uhm, why are you-"

"You didn't say it back."

Only the winds carrying the sands filled the silence between them. Then the murmuring happened, with some children giggling at his increasingly red face.

"You serious?!" Bo hissed, yet Shu wouldn't budge, taking a step to the right when he tried to get past by going left.

"Say it back."

At this point, they did side jumps as Bo tried to find an opening, sweating profusely, yet his family member effortlessly mirrored his movements and remained in his path.

"You can't be really doing this right now!"

"I didn't hear it yet."

"Look around you!"

"Still waiting."

"In front of everyone!"

"I can do this all day."

To Bo's horror, he realized that she could in fact do this all day. Old memories of him and other children playing with her, so long that they all passed out. Last he remembered was that she didn't break a sweat. Given that she wasn't a mortal like he was…He was just prolonging his social execution unnecessarily. With a huff, and heaving breath, he rested his hands on his knees before slowly shaking his head.

"Fine!" He coughed and looked away. "...love you too."

Silence. Shu was unmoving. His eyebrow twitched. For fuck's sake, what now?!

"Love you too…?" She trailed off. He blinked before his eyes widened in horror. Oh no. Not that. That would be the final nail in his coffin. He looked up, but his hopes were burned down, for her eyes, blindfold unveiling to reveal mercilessness, were staring down at him. "You didn't finish your sentence."

So that was his first day before saying goodbye to mortality. One last fire of embarrassment. He closed his eyes, mourning his 'street cred', and completely surrendered.

"...Grauntie Shu."

"There you go!" At last, she stepped away. But of course, she wasn't done yet, as she snapped her fingers one last time as she left the premises. "And don't forget to tell me if you get bullied! I'm not above smacking other kids for you!"

With that, the whirlwind of chaos that was his grandaunt vanished from the place, leaving behind only destruction. Bo nodded a few times with an empty look, turning to the overseer.

"...I'm gonna have to punch my way up the social ladder, don't I?"

The man kept his expression calm as he looked over the other candidates and recruits.

"As your superior, I should tell you that we honor discipline and cooperation the most and that internal struggles are frowned upon."
"And as a person…?"

He put a hand on Bo's shoulder.

"Get the stress out while you're young, kid."

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And man, did he get that stress out. Especially when the focus was put on formations. Not that Bo had anything against the formations as a concept themselves but they flat out didn't suit him. Too restrictive, too stationary. It didn't help he didn't exactly find any friends in the years that followed. Acquaintances yet, comrades he could fight alongside. Buuuuut as Grauntie Shu apparently predicted, Bo was excellent at 'playing thug', or as it was commonly known as 'burning bridges'. Maybe there was something about the saying that those of the Zhuque had the worst handle on their temper, even if they didn't have the same depth as the Qinglong.

Sparring sessions were when he was at his most free, and usually at his most pissed. It didn't help that people naturally wanted to start shit with him. Whether they were young masters and mistresses trying to flex their political influence, only to eat dirt, or just aggressive street rats. With the first impression he had thanks to Shu and his own personal temper and green hair, it was common to pick fights and beat the snot out of each other until nobody was left standing.

Rinse, repeat. Now Bo was close to regular 'graduation' so to say. Soon he would be assigned to a legion as a Qi Condensation warrior, to bring glory and honor to the clan. To say he felt a bit aimless was an understatement. Like the wind that brushed against him, the possibilities were so endless, it felt suffocating. Maybe he should ask for advice, but the only one who could give him advice was Grauntie Shu. And the last time he saw her…

A hand frozen in the air, a smile petrified when he spotted her in the distance. Gone was the playful, almost childish woman appearing to be a youthful teenager. Gone was the soft expression she would have as she would read stories to them. Instead, all he saw was a predator stalking the grounds. Eyes utterly devoid of any positive emotion. All that existed was a razorsharp focus of hatred and obsession. She even seemed to drool with hunger, hunger for blood, hunger for victory, hunger for blood. In that moment, he didn't see a family member, but an abomination that would kill anyone standing in her path.


Bo flinched at the memory before shaking his head, clenching his eyes shut before opening them.

Yeah, no. So here he was. Wandering around, with his hands in his pocket-

"Hey, weed head!"

-aaaand getting surrounded by more assholes because that's just what life was. He let out a heavy sigh. Then he put on a wide smile, spreading his arms open at the three bald heads, because for some reason those idiots decided that being bald was cool. Or they were self aware of the amount of kneeling they did before Bo in their matches. One of the two.

"Armentus and stooges! Right, right, it's been so long since your last ass beating! Sorry I forgot all about you!"

The bronze snob twitched at his words. Exhaling slowly, he lowered his head, his blonde hair covering his eyes.

"You know, I had this whole speech planned out, about you learning how to respect your betters and what not." He snarled as he raised his fists, his mooks mimicking the Legionnaire stance. "But thank you for reminding me that courtesy is meaningless on you!"

In response, Bo leaned forward, arms hanging in the air relaxed as he presented his face at them with a scoff.

"Shut the fuck up and eat the dirt by me already."

They all rushed him, Armentus circling around with one of his stooges, while the third one came right at him. Cracking his neck, Bo exhaled, before backflipping out of the way, avoiding their fists like air. Landing lightly on their fists, he swung his right leg forward, kicking some teeth out of his first victim. With a furious shout, they threw him off their hands. Stooge number two roared and tried to grapple him. Bo reached out and exhaled, shifting the mook's center of gravity just a bit. Like a sudden gust hit him, the idiot flipped over. His eyes bulged like a fish before an uppercut smashed him away. Bo chuckled as he rolled his shoulders. Ah, street fighting always suited him better. Made him feel more free, as he dodged and weaved Armentus furious flurry of attacks, untouchable like the wind. Ducking under another swing, he buried his knuckle into Armentus' gut, causing the fool to double over and stumble backwards. Cracking his knuckles, the Zhuque raised an eyebrow at his opponent.

"I expected more since you came at me. Guess the concussion never healed?"

Armentus' face bulged with anger, like an inflating pouch.

"Silence, you cur! Where does your arrogance stem?! Your blood is cursed to be inferior! We all heard what Elder Lang announced to the clan!"

Bo stilled.

'You've grown weaker, Shu.'

Those damned, disrespectful words of a Core Formation Elder. With a growl, Bo's eyes glowed yellow as he raised his right hand, fingers curled like talons aiming at prey.

"You really want to get the shit beaten out of you, huh?!"

Armentus let out a mocking laugh before rushing forward, just as his arm dug into his robes. Then with one swift movement, he pulled something out, as Bo rushed forward as well, intending to claw his face open. A dagger? Bo's eyes widened when he saw a purple mist radiating from it. But before it could even reach him, it vanished. Before either could process what happened to it, a drawl sounded in the area.

"Poison shiv? Wow, kids these days."

In an instance, a suffocating aura forced them to their knees. It was like they were pressed down by a massive palm, by a being far above them. Bo's eyes widened, as from his position he could see who it was. An Azure Dragon. No, the Azure Dragon.

Qinglong Shu raised her blindfold with her thumb just a bit as she looked down on Bo's attacker. Spitting to the side, she let up the pressure, but the glare remained.

"Fuck off."

Not all braincells of Armentus rotted off, as he quickly fled, not even bothering to pick up his mooks. Shu sighed, letting her blindfold cover her eyes again before walking up to Bo. For a while, they just stood there, only the groans of the beaten sounding in the air. Then, Shu smiled, an awkward thing as she pointed at his chest.

"You became a little rascal while I was gone, huh?"

Soon enough, they found some privacy in a nearby tea shop. They both slowly sipped tea, not saying anything. Bo eyed Shu. She didn't change at all. The only difference was the staff holstered on her back, which screamed danger to him. Other than that, she was just the same. If only subdued. A word he'd never use when it came to her. Meanwhile Shu looked at him a lot, carefully going over his body with her eyes. It's been a while since they met after all. Almost too long. With a sigh, she covered her eyes again, shaking her head mirthfully.

"Puberty sure hit you hard. I remember when I could just hug you and throw you over a gate."

She could still do that, he thought dryly. Not that he hated it. Something about soaring through the sky just tickled his fancy. With a shrug, Bo smirked back.

"What can I say, food is good."

"We both know it sucks."

"Heh."

"Haha…"

Silence returned once more. Bo hated this. With a grimace, he wondered when they grew so distance. Were a decade and more enough to sour family ties so easily? Shaking his head, he decided to push through it, through the awkwardness and leaned forward.

"Are you…okay?" He asked, referring to her subdued aura, nothing to her upbeat energy she used to have. Shu blinked before shrugging, almost casually.

"I guess? Better than before."

"Really? After-"

She raised her hand, smiling softly.

"I did get weaker. In spirit at least, in a way. So no need to fight for my honor or something like that."

"I didn't do that," Bo said quickly. Maybe too quickly, as Shu let out a dry snort.

"Sure you didn't."

There it was. The good old teasing. He didn't know he missed this so much. Which made his heart clench in pain, thinking about how he just…didn't meet her again. He had many excuses. The legion training. Her having her own duties, the Secret Realm, the dreaded traitor Ming. But in the end, the fact was a simple one. And thus, Bo lowered his head.

"I'm sorry I avoided you, Grauntie."

Shu sucked in air through her teeth before letting otu a sigh.

"Nah, it's fine. I wasn't exactly…sane at the time."

"At least it's over now." Bo chuckled. "Must be relieving."

"...yeah."

He blinked as he saw her avoiding his eyes, her smile wavering.

"Grauntie?"

"It should be relieving. But…" She slumped down on her seat and closed her eyes. "...I regret killing Ming as I did."

Bo's eyes widened in shock. Before he could ask however, Shu continued on, as she looked up at the ceiling.

"I didn't do it for the family. I didn't do it because it was the right thing to do. If it was for any of those reasons, I'd have killed her the first chance I got. But I didn't." A dry laugh escaped her as she pointed at herself. "I did it for me. My ego."

He lacked context. He had no idea what she went through to actually defeat someone of a higher cultivation than herself, someone who was essentially heavenly incarnate compared to her. How much was the truth she was uttering, and how much was it Shu just being…way too humble for her own sake? Shu didn't hear any of his thoughts or noticed his frown as her voice became a whisper.

"Haha…I'm not meant to spread this around but…" She ran her hand through her hair. "Thanks to some stuff Legatus Myia and her fellows are doing, the two of us don't have to deal with the Trials this time around."

His eyes went wide. The Trials were a horror story, and a grim reality for what they all fought for. With how 'late' Bo started compared to the century turning, he would be at the bottom of the litter. Yet here Shu proclaimed they didn't have to worry about it. Leaning back, he smacked his lips thoughtfully.

"That's…weird. Relieving, but weird."

"That's the right reaction." Shu paused, before a dry laugh escaped her. "Do you know what I thought when I heard that?"

She looked up. Even through the blindfold, he could see the self loathing in her expression.

"How dare they?"

"...What…?"

Shu lowered her gaze once more, as she bit her lip.

"I should've been happy. Glad that we don't have to go through so much suffering and agony. Respect them for their choices. Instead all I felt was anger. Anger that they took away my chance, my moment. My opportunity to show that I am worthy. That I…deserved to be a Golden Devil. That the sacrifices our clans made to get me here weren't a mistake. That I could represent our current generation as I tried my hardest to protect them." She put a hand on her chest. "And yet… here I am. Unable to choose even a mission because I just don't care enough for it, because I would just be a meaningless cog in the machine. Sure, as a whole, what we do is important. But compared to the Trials, where only Qi Condensation can protect Qi Condensation? It's nothing."

Exhaling slowly, Shu looked back up again.

"I'm a bad person, kid. I understand why you stayed away from me."

"Get off your high horse."

Shu blinked at the sudden response.

"'scuse me?"

Bo growled as he leaned forward, his hands clenched into fists.

"What, you believe having bad thoughts made you a bad person? That it's that easy?" He pointed at her with narrowed eyes. "I know who you are. My childhood isn't a lie. People aren't that simple. It just makes you human."

"Didn't you listen to me? I was upset that thousands weren't going to get slaughtered."

Was she always like this? Then again, he supposed she was at her happiest with the family, so he never got to see this side of her. He pitied the poor individuals having to deal with this shit. He flicked her forehead, suppressing the urge to hiss in pain before tapping the table a few times.

"No, you were upset that you didn't get to prove yourself on a stage you prepared all your life for, whether knowingly or not. Then the rug was swept from underneath you." He rolled his eyes. "So you have a self esteem issue. Big deal. Doesn't make you any less of a weirdo grauntie."

Shu just stared at him. Not saying anything. Then slowly, she smiled. It was a genuine one, like from the good old days.

"When did you get so tough?" She asked quietly. Bo knew that mere words weren't enough to dispel the chains that she covered herself with. But if they broke at least some of them, he'd be happy. In response, he tapped at his skull, his hair specifically.

"You try to stay soft with green hair."

"Hehe…" Ruffling his hair, she let out a sigh. "Sorry you had to listen to me babble. Would you believe it was worse?"

"Ouch."

"Perks of traveling. Rediscovering myself. Finding students."

Students, huh? He never took Grauntie as an educational type. And yet…it seemed to fit, now that he thought about it. Not to mention…she was part of a legion, wasn't she? A legion that was rather small. Ergo…He smirked. Well, if that's where the wind carried him, who was he to object?

"...Got room for one more?"

Shu tilted her head before chuckling lightly. He could feel the sparkles radiating from her covered eyes.

"For family? Always." She snapped her fingers before pointing at him. "Besides, you need to meet your new aunt anyway."

New aunt. Which meant a child below Shu's generation. His eyes went down to her belly before back up, shuddering at the mental image. Then he raised an eyebrow at her as he drew a blank.

"... who got pregnant?"

Shu let out a snort, waving her hand dismissively.

"Oh, nobody, I just adopted a horse turned baby girl."

Bo stared at her. What the living fuck was he supposed to say to that?
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Qingglong Shu 34- Bone Bonding

Qingglong Shu 34- Bone Bonding

Feng with her eyes closed and her legs crossed concentrated with her forehead furrowed. She took a deep breath…only to cough violently as sand grains entered her already weak lungs. A gentle hand rubbed her back, causing the swordswoman to weakly smile at her teacher. That smile quickly vanished by a dry snort, causing her to send a death glare at that black haired fuck. Qiao simply glared back, daring her to try something. She reached for her sword that rested on her lap. The Hell Demon shitter did the same with his stupid musket. Before they could even touch their weapons however, a whistle cut through the air.

"Oi, no sparring time yet," Shu announced with a frown, finishing up the back massage for Feng. The two of them looked away with an annoyed huff. At that, a giggle and a sigh respectively sounded in the air.

"Ehehehe, mama scolded you again!"

"Don't sound too happy," Bo said to the tall Gezi. The horse turned girl leaned right and left as she held onto her ankles. The green haired man shook his head in exasperation before giving Feng and Qiao a pointed look. "Seriously, what is up with you two? You've been like this since you arrived here!"

""Not my fault she/he is an asshole!""

Once more the two glared at each other. Oh, as if travelling to the village of Qinglong Shu wasn't enough, she had to meet up with that fucker on the way there. The Divided Mortal Kingdoms weren't that small in size, so how the hell did that even happen?! They lived on the opposite sides of the living grounds for heaven's sake! But nooo, their caravans crossed paths and she had to meet the asshole from the Aurum Tournament again. Naturally, for some reason, his spirit was just as high as hers, which led to finding out that Shu also recruited him as a student. Suffice to say, at first, neither believed the other and clashes were natural. With weapons, with bare hands, over and over, they tried to beat the crap out of each other, to no proper resolution. She should've felt smug, that her weak body managed to create ties over and over with a guy with a literal demon body. But the fact that she didn't win stung way more. This went on, to the peril of the caravan, until they finally reached this humble village. There, they met their fellow students. Bo was strange. Sometimes he felt like he wasn't all there, lost in his own thoughts. But she recognized the brawler as a strong opponent. Not as physically imposing as Qiao could be, if he stopped playing around with his guns, but all the more slippery. Then there was Gezi. It sure was a shock when she transformed into a horse for the first time. She still shuddered when she had to fight that form, her legs more than sufficient to kick someone's head off. Not to mention the cold. She was down with a sickness for a few days due to the clash between desert heat and her eyes. So far, she was still unrefined, but she had a rather scary glint in her eyes every time she saw Feng's sword or Shu's staff.

Anyway, here they were, doing a group mediation to focus on their 'Dao'. Easier said than done. They all knew what it was after all, but everyone knew the Dao usually became relevant at Core Formation stage. Unless they intended to become a monster of talent and reach for the crown that was reserved for the Kings. Someone like Qinglong Shu.

"What does 'at the verge' mean?" Gezi asked, tilting her head with the kind of innocent curiosity only an animal could have. Shu chuckled before looking off into the distance.

"Well, Gezi girl, it means I can almost taste the Dao Purification. Understanding of Understanding is right there, I can feel it."

Feng hummed thoughtfully. Must have been nice, to know what one's Dao was so easily. Apparently Shu knew it since she started being a cultivator, with each step being made to refine it further. Meanwhile Feng herself…wasn't so sure. She knew 'what' she was, but was that her Dao? The others didn't seem any more insightful. Revolution. Wind. Humanity. They were words yet, but none of them had the depth that Shu had when she talked about Understanding.

"So you're trying to get it now with all these mediations?" Qiao asked with a grunt, crossing his arms. Shu smiled teasingly at him.

"You might hate it, but it works." She paused before shrugging nonchalantly. "Though I'm not focusing on that. Mediation only brings you so far at a certain point. It's a foundation, so you gotta build up from there with many more experiences."

It made one wonder what she experienced in those Secret Realm of hers, they all collectively thought with various degrees of apprehension. Feng looked down at the smooth weapon resting on her lap before pointing at it.

"Communicating with the staff again?"

Shu chuckled, a glint in her eyes as she stared down at it like a wolf looking at a fresh slab of meat.

"It's a treasure chest of knowledge and I will crack that one open. Hell, I learn something new everyday. Like words the dragon uses in there." She looked back up, raising her finger. "It's a fascinating language, all things considered. Articles, pronunciation, it's all different."

"Let's hear it then," Bo said, leaning forward. Shu rolled her shoulders before clearing her throat.

"Well, we got Guten Tag, wie geht es euch( Good day, how are you) ?" She said in a neutral tone. Then she let out a growl, mimicking anger. "Then we got something like 'Ich werde deine verdammten Eingeweide rausreißen!'( I will tear out your damn intestines!) " She turned to Feng and cupped her chin. The frail girl blushed when Shu waggled her eyebrows. "You want something more sensual, we got 'Hmmm, was für eine schöne Rose du bist~!( Hmmm, what a beautiful rose you are) '"

Why did that make her heart race?! The moment her teacher removed her hand, Feng wheezed and looked away. She had no idea what she said but it was too smooth! Bad thoughts, bad thoughts! Fortunately Bo came to the rescue, raising his hand with a blank look.

"I understood none of that."

"""Same."""
"Well, that's the whole point with being from a different sea." Shu chuckled before crossing her legs once more. "Anywho, as you'll excuse me, I gotta tease more secrets out of this baddie. See ya!"

Akin to a finger snap, Shu's eyes went blank, as her Qi intermingled with the staff. Awkward silence reigned, at how fast she managed to enter a Zen state like this. Bo cleared his throat awkwardly before clapping his hands together.

"...Guess we're back to mediation."
"Kinda difficult if you have to do it around trash."

Feng shot up to her feet with a snarl, facing Qiao.

"What?!"

The two immediately drew their weapons and jumped at each other. Sword met musket before their foreheads pressed against each other with grinding teeth.

"Oh for fuck's sake! Gezi, help me!"

"On it~!"

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Shu had the feeling she was missing something in the waking world. Eh, probably just Feng and Qiao trying to murder each other again. Nothing new then. Rolling her shoulders in the mental landscape, she focused, eyes half lidded as she exhaled. No time to worry about them, she had shit to perceive. Which was easier said than done, because everything was covered in a frozen mist. She could barely even make out humanoid shades, some rather small, others having sharp ears for some reason. There were some large structures that were different from the usual architecture she was used to, and strangely shaped creatures.

Unfortunately, she couldn't make out any details, so all of that was an exercise in futility. WIth a frustrated groan, she threw her hands up in the air.

"Damn it, I still can't see shit!"

Was this Heaven's censorship or was the connection still bad?! Just as she thought that, she felt the snort from behind her, sending chills down her mental body.

"That's normal, Third Sea brat."

She turned around with a flat look. Ah yes, the resident of this place. Always appearing from behind her, like an asshole.

"Ah yes, a giant shapeless white thingie. Long time no seen," she drawled. The thing, the dragon as a matter of fact, scoffed before resting its head on…the ground or something.

"The censorship of heaven weighs heavy. Your mind is not permitted nor strong enough to handle the strain." She couldn't make out the face, but she knew for a fact that it was filled with pity. "What weak flesh you have."

Easy to say for a whatever level of cultivation Dragon from another sea. It still bothered her pride to be looked down as such, but maybe she should be glad she wasn't dying on the spot just from being looked at.

"Is there anything you can tell me at all?" She asked, crossing her arms.

"There are many things I can tell you. Many things you will forget as well, at best."

At best. Like what, her brain exploding? Shu rolled her eyes and sat down.

"Great."

Nothing was said between the two for a while, until the dragon let out an annoyed growl.

"...Why are you still here?"

"I ain't leaving without at least something." She snapped her fingers at the oversized lizard of unknown form. "Got a name?"

"I keep telling you. You just can't hear it."

Shu blinked before tilting her head.

"Here I thought it'd be weird noises that tear out my eardrums."

"I can do that," it said dryly. Shu huffed, leaning back with a flat look.

"Not an invitation."

"Hmph. There is not much to give you in this prison of mine."

Humming in thought, Shu rested her chin on her palm as she looked up at the dragon.

"What do you look like? Describe it. I wanna know how you differ from an Azure Dragon."

"We don't have unnecessary fur for one. Our scales are more than enough to need such superfluous things."
No fur? Weird. Made it sound like dragons from the whatever sea were rather simplistic in form perhaps.

"My do is fabulous so how dare you." She ran a hand through her hair with a raised eyebrow. "So go on, what do you look like?"

"...Serpentine like body. But unlike you, I have four limbs."

"Isn't that a regular lizard then?"

"Hmph."

"Okay, so white snake lizard thing…I assume the head looks similar?" Shu muttered, trying to imagine a picture in her head.

"Similar enough."

…yeah, not working out at all. Not enough details and she felt like she was going to go crazy if she tried this even further. What else was there to talk about? Trying to talk about culture didn't work and she already learned his language. There was only so much that could get to he-

"Have you ever experienced starvation?"

Shu blinked before glancing up at the dragon with a frown.

"That came out of nowhere."

"You wished to leave with something? Then answer the question."

Was this some weird dragon philosophy thing? Oh well, might as well answer, she thought with a shrug.

"I went hungry a couple of times. Not exactly the richest person."
"So you don't."

Her eyebrow twitched. Great, riddles. Taking a deep breath, she pointed up at the damn thing.

"Okay, so did you experience starvation?"

"Brat…my existence is [Hunger]."

The last word shook the mental scape, sending ripples all around it. Shu shuddered as she felt it shake her very soul. The dragon rose, its shapeless form becoming a bit more distinct ever so slightly. It was still akin to a shadow with no form, but she could see scales. Yellow, piercing eyes. And a maw that seemed to drool as it leaned forward.

"You speak of going hungry. You speak of knowing starvation, but I can easily see the falsehoods you tell yourself, the inability to comprehend."

Its claw rose and pointed at Shu.

"Listen to my words, brat. I am not speaking of the rumbling of a stomach. I am not speaking of the weakness in your body, that comes with the lack of food. Nor do I mean the craving to taste something decent on your tongue."

A loud growl, a guttural, primal noise that echoed.

"I am talking about starvation. Gluttony that threatens to take your senses, your sanity, to get rid of it, to ease it if only by a fraction. Not greed, for you wish to keep something. Not lust, for you desire a new height of emotional satisfaction. Not a want, a desire. Starvation is a need, a must. You cannot help but try to fill the void, that infinite void, over and over again, knowing it'll never be enough, yet striving to fill it nonetheless."

The pressure disappeared and the dragon returned to its lying position. Shu let out a breath she didn't know she was holding.

"That is starvation."

Blinking furiously to gather her wits, she licked her lips before shaking her head.

"...Then no, can't say I ever did."

"Hmph. Because of that, you won't be able to bring out more of my power. What did you say your [Zweig] is? Understanding? Then figure out what starvation means, to me, what I hunger for, and then you'll be able to unlock more of me."

Slowly, ever so slowly, a grin formed on Shu's face. She rose to her feet and slammed her right knuckle into her palm, eyes wide and glowing with determination, with her own hunger.

"Promise a girl with a good time why don't cha. Challenge accepted."

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

TURN 14, OMAKE 3 [JIANG CHRYSANTHOS] Jiang Chrysanthos 15: Current Clan & Personal Status The Golden Devil Clan/Imperial Optimatoi You are the Imperial Optimatoi, a Clan that is a family of shared bloodline. Your cultivators are weaker on average than your peers in the sects but loyalty and...
 
Zeno Angelus - Mooks, not forces of nature

The trials are coming again and none of the bronze could miss the signals. His unit of the 302nd​ were once more bandit hunting and word from the grapevine was his Legate was once more sending out missives like she devoured cultivation aids. His most righteously minded Legate had something planned and considering she had not mentioned any specifics to her Centurions, meant it would be a terrific gambit. Of course, she wasn't the only one with a plan. He would ensure this curiously highly priotisized mission would be done heroically!

A Platoons march can be heard from many Li away, which would be merely terrifying for mortals. For any cultivator enemy, the staccato beat of bronze thundering across the plains between the pass and the receding dunes was like a loud foghorn, declaring the death of any fool. In comparison to mortals these fools knew of the bronze danger approaching them unceasingly. Karmic strands make sure that this declaration be met by a proper challenge. With their fear overwritten, the need to prove their greater might was the only natural response.

It is therefore no surprise, that Zeno's Platoon are now engaged and outnumbered by many a cannibal rebel, trying to prove their worth to the world. The merchant caravan wagons lying forgotten and almost unblemished among the qi exchanged.

Grave bronze is met by fire and blood. The stalwart Legionnaires standing steadfast don't budge as one of many a push by mace and sickle try to wrest blood from their forms. For every nick on bronze armour five cages of raging blood are opened, painting the trodden path crimson. Between lulls of pushes a flashing feather carves a path, creating space for more legionnaires to push their foes towards the small hills surrounding them.

As the mass of beasts in human form lose their attack momentum, more and more being to filter out, running for the hills, long forgotten amongst the struggle these hills shine with a curious light.

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The Collosus Footsteps are an unkind land, where the strong rule and even a Nascent Soul has to think twice before walking around its ranges. Any wound sustained could not be healed swiftly with qi after all. That at least was the leading thought before he became something greater, someone POWERFUL!

Yes, the blood has made him, Da Yi very powerful indeed. With just one snack he rose into Foundation stage and any wounds he may sustain, even through his magnificent physique, are quickly healed applying the sweetest of all revenge. Taking his revenge doesn't even take long, allowing him to traverse the Land for greater feasts. The world was his oyster! Nascent Soul is not far off, he just needs to clear the caravan of all the rabble, which vexes him greatly.

Fools, the lot of them thought they could skimp on their one duty, collecting flesh for feasts! They think him a mere cross-eyed golden goose, too innocent to truly matter. But he, he can see! He sees the push and pull of their inner circle. Their small units among the rabble, desperately grasping for room and he has an answer to their problem of living.

Unclasping a bottle from his belt he chugs, until only liquid balloons him. Of course, the Bronze Devils would not let this challenge go unchallenged and try to stop him, the great Da Yi! Many a spear gets stuck on a miserable cage of raging blood, their slow-moving forms unable to leap beyond his guards as a proper cultivator would! Even a small rabbit without qi can advance faster, leaving only dropping behind as it shivers before his mighty form!"

'Wait' All things slow down for the gang leader as a small rumor he heard whispered by a contact in Yuan comes back to him decades later. This rabbit belongs to-

"Zeno Angelus is the name. Under any other circumstance it would be a pleasure, I am sure." Greets the feckless fool beside me. My mighty rotund form unable to move as I like tries to spray him, to see him melt before he may slice my fate – my fate to be a Nascent Soul- as his own. To no avail. My mouth and ears are already sealed.

With the beat of my heart pounding inside me, winds of ravishing beauty tear me away. As I leave spouts of 500-year-old draconic stomach wine behind me, I cannot help but laugh. Qi empowered wind enhancing the sheer beauty of a meal ready to be digested again as any good connoisseur would like and boy would I like to pick their brains!

With my hands finally freed I take off the obvious seals, uncaring for the flesh exposed. Can't be too careful with these curses after all. Even a remaining drop of qi could spell disaster for even my greatest of plans!

Fastening the lower half of my robes again I truly take up speed, this fools danger already leaving my mind, as the same old hills and cliffs fly under me. I, the great Da Yi cannot help but notice the greatness of my battle prowess, for the sun is already high in the sky again!

Sure, the enemy may have taken little losses, but these were obviously veterans of the plains. What was the name of that City again. Where the Callista girl made her stand? Ah, what does it matter, the number of their Legion was the same. Information about her legion would always sell and I already have a senior in mind. I rub my hands in anticipation as I rush over one of many hills…the sound of battle not getting farther. What?

Standing above the much reduce hill, among the only untouched part of its vegetation. The feckless, blond feast stands strong and just smiles. My enemy takes a spear off the feathery bitch, and they exchange some meaningless words. After that the Fate-Seizer declares his intent.

"[300 Fools Strike Utopia]"

Within the span of seconds numerous spears crash upon me, all from one spot, but how? He is but one fighter? His rabble, its…irrelevant.



I, the great Da Yi know I could move, but what is the point? The greatest of feasts waits beyond this spears tip if I can just grasp it. I-huh, why is stomach open?

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"Hey Alex, what's for dinner?" Zeno asked his wife beside him. Everyone else either beginning to clear out the path or still huddling amongst each other over the tense atmosphere of a battle ended so strangely. Their compatriots already having designated teams for each task, it would not take them long till they could march once more.

"But we ate 5 days ago. How could you already want to eat something?" A quirked eyebrow and small smile, let even the mortals know there was no problem. It was just another strange quirk of these cultivators.

"Well, among the stuff he left behind as he ringed the nearby hills, some recipes actually sound decent."

At that statement Alexandria Angelus could only shake her head at exasperation. "Decent for a mortal perhaps. I will be the judge of that!"

"Oh come on, at least let me-"

"NO." His Platoon answers at once. Knowing full well what sudden inspiration might strike their Captain if his cooking process was not looked over closely.

Clearing her throat for the sound more than any kind of discomfort Xia interjected. Captain Angelus, while not even your wife doubts your cooking skills, I am afraid we can't afford any more cook offs this season, we barely have enough olive oil for the return trip.

Clearly out argued by such terribly reasonable individuals he could only accept this fate. "Fine, but I want all of you tested about wilderness food preparation before we begin another Colossus run!"

A chorus of "Yes, Sir." Was the right sound to bring his spirits up again.
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AN: I have once more gone back into the mines of words and found some small baubles. Till another story post my mine is diminished, but I am hopeful for the discovery of new 'veins'. :)

words: 1366 @no. , @Humbaba

Edit: Since I have time now I can explain why this Omake exists. First of all, Zeno has reached the sixth Pillar and can now be considered a late FE expert, making him closer to a core expert than an aspirant. Therefore this technique reflects his new understanding of his personal dao, making the enemy let all other worries but their dream fall away from their mind. In contrast to the name, 300 spears from different individuals are not required, but simply add to the potency of the technique and since it it sprang from Zenos own understanding he can perform it on his own whenever he wishes with any weapon. A spear is simply preferred for in-universe narrative purposes. Be it mortal or immortal, everyone will prefer to strike a high foe with a spear and this cultural understanding empowers Zenos potency to a potency of BS potential.

If I were to use the "Technique Palace" format, here is how I would rate this technique:

Spirit/Metal technique

Name of Technique: 300 Fools Strike Utopia
Technique creator: Zeno Angelus

300 strikes hit their target, making all worry but their deepest desire fall away. The target can only conceive of receiving this desire at the tip of their spear. Weapons from different individuals are not required, but more individuals and spears among all art users lessen the qi cost of this technique immensely. Like many a technique of the Golden Devils, this art requires coordination and interpersonal understanding rarely seen outside the Clan.

Recommended cultivation stage: Late Foundation Expert (For Leader of Art)

Prerequisite techniques (if any): Leader of the art must have a deep understanding of cultural norms across the third sea.

Successive technique (if any): + UNAVAILABLE +

Difficulty: as Leader[ Alone without knowledge: Impossible; With knowledge, but alone: Increadibly Hard; With FriendsTM: Hard] as Participant: Medium

Clearance: TBD- To be debated
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Another much smaller point. The discerning reader will have noticed I have looked over the technique palace collab while working on this Omake and used [the Spiritual Breadcrumbs Art] as a locator for Zenos TP beside Da Yi. :)

To conclude this explanation, it's an excuse to show off a technique I have workshopped for Zeno and hope to get some insight in how much it fits the universe and Zeno in particular from your perspective, dear reader.
 
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The Yuan Clan
This had been simple.

No, simple was the wrong word for it. It had been necessary. Everything that had happened had followed logically from the first thing, and since she had appeared at Ghostbridge Undercity Yuan Hao had taken less than an hour to see her. From that, she could conclude he was not in closed-door cultivation, but rather still recovering from his wounds.

He didn't even seek to hide it.

He took her into the heart of the Yuan Clan, the Gnawing-Soul Beaver Array, empowered by the tooth of the Spirit Severing Beast that had died in the city. Powerful enough to let him face her even with his wounds, and come out unharmed, even if she were to risk her life. They had flown quickly, and Kleisthenes had known he was leading her into the center of his power. The only place he could feel safe confronting her, which was risky.

Yet they were not enemies, and the risk seemed worth the reward. Whatever he wanted to discuss with her would likely be of the highest import, and trying to kill her would merely risk retribution and likely fail regardless.

"Was it you?"

The question was piercing, and Yuan Hao looked at her searchingly. After a moment, he stopped.

"No, if it was you, why come here? Unless you're bluffing twice over, but you could easily do that with a regular diplomat. You know, but it wasn't you. You've come to take advantage in some sense, though."

She nodded.

"Knowing doesn't mean we will take advantage unduly. We are willing to help, Trial Lord."

Yuan Hao let out a sigh.

"I thought I'd hidden it well. Who told you?"

Her thoughts whirled. Was he speaking of the Demonic Invasion yet to come? No, that didn't make any sense! His injury? Surely that was it, a greater injury than known, or something along those lines.

She spread her hands out and smiled.

"Merely concerned parties, great Trial Lord. Even among the Yuan those who are loyal to you do worry."

He frowned.

"Elder Li, probably. Still, despite the poison I won't let you exort me out of more than a few places in the Man-As-Mountain Array. I have my bottom line."

Kleisthenes smiled. Now she looked, the effect were obvious. Yuan Hao was slower than he should be, seemingly older as well. She had thought it effects from the injuries, but... no, it all made sense now. The invasion from the Demonic Powers was well-thought out. If you could poison and weaken an already wounded Nascent Elder, you had things well in hand. If you could poison and weaken one diplomatically isolated, your victory was close to assured.

She had thought they had known the extent of the Noble Devil Alliance's plans, but they had been deeper than she had expected. Of course, it made sense. Poisoning another Nascent in the Blood Defiance Federation would be cured more easily with more resources to go around - and other Nascents willing to take up their burden while they recuperated. Yuan Hao, the Nascent Elder of the Yuan Clan could not afford to let it be known he needed so much help without sacrificing virtually all of his spots in the newly-ascendent Man-As-Mountain Array as a cost. With the rain of Qi coming from the sky for the moment, it was the best time to raise new seedlings into powerful trees capable of holding up the sky for the Clan, but who could say how long the Qi might last?

Stuck in an impossible place, he had chosen to hide and hope it would not become obvious what had happened to him.

She tried very hard to make the smile seem less predatory, but failed.

"Trial Lord, may I ask about your preparations for the invasion?"

His head jerked towards her.

"Invasion?"

"Yes, the Demonic Path has gathered to destroy you. They have found a way from the lands of the Gao into the lands of the Yuan, and within a year or two will simply invade. My visit here was not to humiliate you or demand things from you in your weakness. Rather, it was to offer the aid of the Golden Devils to repel an invasion I suspect you may not be able to hold off yourself. We do not desire a Noble Devil enemy north of us, and we are happy to assist you by moving troops into defensive positions, as well as offering Nascent aid should it be needed."

He frowned, and thought for a moment.

"I didn't see it, because I didn't know of the passageway. If you're lying to me, you can put troops in my cities, extort me and I may well be doomed. If you're not, though, it's the end of the Yuan Clan."

His frown grew deeper.

"It seems I'm trapped. No matter what happens, the Yuan are taken by one power or another, aren't they?"

Kleisthenes's smile grew wider.

"We can discuss co-operation, Trial Lord. Why, my own Grand Elder is an expert in the ten thousand poisons, and serving him are some of the most talented Core Formation poison mistresses in the Nine Seas. If the Yuan Clan could be taken into the side of the Golden Devils completely, why would we need to weaken you? It would be an expensive affair, yes, but would we not want our new friends and allies to be as strong as possible?"

"And abandon the Righteous Path?"

"What good is a Righteous Path if it only leads to destruction?"

With those words, she left him. An wounded and poisoned dragon was still a dragon, and to humiliate him simply wouldn't do. Still, what she had uncovered today would be a huge boon. The Trial Lord knew he had few options. The Blood Defiance Federation could reinforce him with their Nascent Souls, but at such ruinous cost that the Yuan Clan would be beaten down into nothing. Not out of cruelty, but out of need. The Noble Devil Alliance would simply slaughter the Yuan and turn the mountains into a charnel-house where few lived and only the Man-As-Mountain Array held value.

The relative weakness of the Optimatoi made them a choice of ally that the Yuan would find hard to turn away - unable to dominate them completely, they would be able to retain far more in the way of benefits than they would otherwise.

She was not at all surprised when three days later the Yuan Patriarch called her back to speak further.

[ ] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance pros and cons for the Yuan to accept

[ ] Hold off for now.
 
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[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance

Free Yuan Clan vassal is vastly preferable to having to invade the Yuan Clan. Although the Yuan Elder probably won't agree to come out on offensives with us, getting him to help hold Yuan lands should be doable.
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance

Yo what.
 
What an outrageously ideal turn of events lmao

[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance

Free Yuan Clan vassal is vastly preferable to having to invade the Yuan Clan. Although the Yuan Elder probably won't agree to come out on offensives with us, getting him to help hold Yuan lands should be doable.
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance

Heck - just the increased control over the Man-as-Moutnain array would be worth it. Like, part of the point has been trying to keep those keyholders from glutting themselves too ferociously on secret realms, right?

Did we get absurdly lucky or something?
 
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[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
[X] Begin negotiations to ally and vassalize the Yuan Clan. This will be a mini-vote with Kleisthenes's superb diplomatic rolls giving a small number of free points, but you'll need to balance
 
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