Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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... Well, he did literally boil the oceans and drank most of them as soup, that's pretty apocalyptic for everything living in and around it.
On the other hand, infinite sea monsters are still out there, ready and waiting to murder anyone who dares go too far from shore.

Now, admittedly, them surviving the Soupocalypse makes sense using my own headcanon where the sea-beasts' insane spiritual power is due to Qi-bioamplification (IE, the local oceanic ecosystem is predicated on little critters that parasitize the Turtle Child, thus metabolizing its own divine Qi and putting it into the food chain when the parasites get et by the next rung up, until by the time you reach the apex predators of the region they're all ridiculously OP thanks to having this unfathomably rich cultivation base), since then it's a mix of "they were all Spirit Severing and thus gave no fucks" and "the little weaklings hid inside the less tasty bits of the Turtle Child's body"...

I am still questioning where you're getting this model of things from, though. Wait, is the idea that the map of the Third Sea is actually the turtle corpse equivalent of those paper cut-out things from school, where it's a weird Tetris snake that you can fold into a cube?
 
So... what chunk of land were the Golden Devils sitting on as of the time that Soup Chef did his thing? Where had they been driven back to at that point?

At the time of the Soup Chief (which at 20000 years ago is recent history compared to the slow fall of of Sea-conquering Army) we were holed up in the mountains where the Bitter Blacksmith sect currently squat, which were much richer lands then. We also had holdings/vassals in the plains and desert, but not many. Around 3000-5000 years ago, a coalition of all the Righteous powers led by the Sabre Palace kicked us out of the mountains, and would have wiped out the Clan if the final legacy of our last Spirit Severing elder had no triggered and wiped out everyone in the Colossal Footstep Path, allowing the survivng reminants of the Clan to flee to the desert.
 
Qi draining sands get worse the closer to the ocean you get, same as how they get worse beyond Jingshen, hence we have an effective border there. Don't think it's as bad as the deep desert, but it's why the coastal desert isn't populated.
 
It's truly a bizarre thing. The oceans to the south teems with Qi, yet not a scrap of it finds its way into the desert. Rather, it curls around the desert, the Qi from the south eventually settling in the plains.
I wonder, is that the case for all the desert of the continent? Not just the one in this region, but in all the regions?

If so, that's interesting. As it implies that, what? That the Qi heads to the 'head' of the turtle rather than the desert bottom?

Or is it that there are regional barriers along the south coast for all the desert regions, and these barriers happen to do this to all the Qi that would come in from the sea. Thus in effect still accomplishing the same thing of redirecting all the Qi to the north instead of the desert south.
 
Year 240 End - Council Meeting
Manuel stood before his Council, spear in hand. A terrible price, but the power was immense. The Stone Spear was imbued with some sort of Law. It could not be dodged - when he struck at an enemy they were hit, though it could be blocked. Likewise it blocked anything he aimed to block, though he had to be conscious of the attack. He had slain two Nascent cultivators with it, and perhaps more would follow. He had discovered that it consumed those it slew, removing much wealth from victory, but still. With it - and with the work of many juniors - they had won a victory unprecedented.

He smiled, twirling the spear in his hand. It did not leave his side these days - having it stolen and used by another would be a disaster of unimaginable consequences. He carried it everywhere, and held onto it always. Awkward in some circumstances, but losing the power Jin Muyi had bought with his life to avoid awkwardness was unthinkable.

They were in possession of all of the desert. Their population swelled, and the natural growth of cultivators over the last twenty years had been tremendous! The Clan had done well. More wealth, more tariffs, more cultivators. More power, more Nascent power. Two Nascent Souls, and a Stone Spear. Where he once feared the Jingshen, now they were no more.

The Council were all busy as could be imagined. Paperwork was ferried in and out by Foundation Experts, each one a trained bureaucrat, all of them wearing peculiar headdresses with pink mohawks atop them. In the last few decades, the headdresses had grown more elaborate, the mohawks having differing colours dyed into varied strands of hair. Manuel had learned they came to represent various accomplishments among his bureaucracy - the most competent bureaucrats who had solved the thorniest issues wore the most colourful ones, and wearing the incorrect one was punishable by isolation and contempt from one's peers.

There are basically four main Mechanics in this quest.

(1) Choices. Your Clan Council will ask you to make a call on something. Mostly they won't do this - they're competent enough to handle things on their own, but sometimes they will. You'll see 0-2 of these per turn, on average. They're usually pretty straight-up binary choices.

(2) Focuses. You choose in general what the Clan should focus on for the next 20 years. Building up for war? Training new disciples? Carving more arrays? More trade? Focuses don't prevent you from doing everything else, it's more 'here's the one thing we should really get done'. Focuses are mainly mediated by the Clan's various skill levels and specialities.

(3) Actions. What the two Nascent Souls of the Clan do. Usually mediated by skills, but often by Cultivation level - especially when it comes to combat. You can always Write In Actions. In fact, writing in more complex and well-thought out Actions will positively increase your chances of success. There are two of these - bear in mind Manuel is going to better than Kleisthenes at almost everything, so these two actions are not of equal worth.

(4) Purchases. What wealth the Clan has, and what your Council want you to spend it on. They'll usually come to you with the thing they want most. No micromanagement, just 'here is the big-ticket item I want'. These will often (but not always) persist between turns. Purchases is expressed in terms of Number of Purchases available. You can save them for future turns, or spend them all now. Bear in mind loans are usually impossible - the Clan cannot run deficit spending!

All voting is Plan Voting. Make a Plan if you want, or just vote on someone else's! You can vote on as many Plans as you like! Approval Voting, baby!

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There is a 32 hour voting moriatorum! I'll post a threadmark when the vote opens!

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Manuel had returned to the Dawn Fortress after his victory. Yao Zhihao had finally completed her grand sculpture of what appeared to be a scaled-up model of his testicles. He hadn't realised at first, thinking they were some generic testicular statue giving thanks to the ballsiness of the Clan. He'd only thought to check after the third time he'd seen the sculpture, after which he'd beaten her with a stick for nearly an hour while she giggled uncontrollably. It hadn't hurt her, of course, and for an awkward moment he thought she believed he was reciprocating her earlier advances, before she flew off to go hunt and eat some massive beast. She was a mystery to him, sometimes.

Roughly five times the height of a man, she had bolted them to the ground and refused to let him move them. He'd ended up weaving in several illusions so it showed a proud statue of a Clan cultivator mightily fighting off enemies. He had no idea how she'd peeked, which worried him more than he let on. In the coming years she'd need to make a decision about her next move, though perhaps that was what they were here for today.

He was surrounded by thousand-year old arrays in a room with more paperwork than space, the over-hundred-year old tables they'd brought back to the main Council chambers starting to fade in power. They'd brought new ones in, prizes from the Jingshen conquest. The first six they'd brought it had been beautiful, carved from raw Spirit Stone, and it wasn't until Manuel sought the secrets from them that he'd realised they'd been used almost exclusively for sex. He had sold those off, and replaced them with equally beautiful ones looted from Old Jingshen's upper quarters. The looting of the Underworld Spirit Palace was still ongoing - there were a lot of traps, and many areas where Jingshen scions held out behind minor fortresses of their own within the main one.

He had no idea why they still resisted, but breaking open a thousand minor doors was a poor use of his time. Let Clan cultivators fight the battles and take the loot.

It was of course paramount that he spent his time more effectively, cloaking the model Yao had built. After all, the dignity of the Grand Elder was important for the Clan's morale!

"Report."

Manuel's voice was quiet, heard only by his Council. As it left his lips, a billowing shape of shadows rose and surrounded them, spinning and expanding as it painted itself onto the walls, seeping into the floor and the ceiling. The shadows now began to dance, figures of the Clan long-dead pirouetting and jumping around the walls, leaping in and out of shadow and catching tiny flickers of Qi, making the room impenetrable.

First was Casia Zimisce, a Great Circle Core Formation cultivator. Rail-thin and severe-faced, she looked as though she had perpetually swallowed a lemon. Her intimidating posture and expression aside, once she spoke one wouldn't pay attention to them, as she set everyone around her at ease. Casia was Stratopedarches, or in more common terms, the Elder of Administration. To her fell the duties of managing mines, herbs, cities, camps - all manner of resources flowed through her hands. In the last twenty years she had largely been focused on the flow of supplies to the Jingshen war, and the flow of Spirit Stones to the Great Battlefield.

"Archegetes. In terms of wealth things have gone reasonably well. We have fifteen million Spirit stavraton saved from our regular incomes - the Jingshen wealth looted I suspect we will need to talk about separately. For the first time in living history we have a vast excess of wealth. I have spent some of the excess Jingshen wealth ensuring the former built-in inefficiencies from our economic recovery a hundred years ago can be overcome - the others have all spent some of the excess wealth on immediately needed projects, but the majority of it is left to you to decide upon."

She smiled up at him, though it looked more like a grimace. Casia was a wonderful woman, but her facial expressions only ever spoke of anger and frustration, no matter how happy she was.

"To be honest, I have little enough to present outside of that. Things are going quite well. We are wealthy, powerful, and largely unthreatened in the given moment."

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Second was Kleisthenes Sarantapechos, an Early Nascent Soul Elder. Dead Euphrosyne's twin sister, though less talented in cultivation. She cultivated a rare Yang attribute technique, and went by a male name, and had previously worn a male body to aid in her cultivation. For her, if she had not cultivated her Yang technique - she never would have risen into Core Formation. Such a thing was uncommon among your Clan, but not unknown. With the gift of Heaven's Shadow she rose into Nascent Soul, become ever-more severe in looks. Her face was sharp, now, and her eyebrows had grown curiously thicker over the last few decades. Perhaps another woman would've returned to the beauty she had apparently been, but Kleisthenes maintained broad shoulders and large muscles, and had refused to give up a single inch of height, though her lips had become less pursed and strained.

She is the Hetaireiarches, or in common terms, the Elder of Diplomacy. To her fell the duties of managing external powers and other Nascent Souls. She often complained about her lack of talent, and she and Manuel were friends again. Their shared Nascent power left them as close confidants once more, and they often spent time training together or merely talking. A friendship that had once nearly fallen apart was whole once more.

"Archegetes. The Blood Wrath that descended on the Region was a true disaster for the Righteous Path. The head of the Ma Clan was driven to madness, and has reclaimed the title of Ma Emperor, returning to their Blood Path roots. He betrayed the Gemstone Justice Sect, slaying and consuming his ally in the mists. Upon waking he knew there would be no forgiveness, and exterminated the rest of the Gemstone Justice Sect's core defenses, having seized their controls from the former Nascent Three City Orphan of Gemstone Justice. Old Fish slew Eagle Lord of the Yu Clan, and tried to return to the Righteous Path, only to be badly wounded by the Wei Princess. Old Cannibal somehow led him into consuming many of his own people as well in his despair and madness, and bound him to his cause. They then pushed north into Joyful Blacksmith and Divine Saber Palace territory, occupying all of the former two Clans, and roughly half of both territories mentioned."

Her voice was like water running down a stream, like chimes in the wind, light and fair and free. He wondered if it had been her original voice before she began to cultivate. Since she had reached Nascent Soul it pulsed, demanding attention, each word one seemingly given up to the world to despoil.

"The Righteous Path has had some mysterious fragments fall from the sky to various juniors, who have leapt into power in impossible timeframes. One junior from the Strength Purity Sect reached the 10th Heavenstage in under a decade, and now stands in the 11th. They have also banded together under the aptly-named Blood Defiance Federation, a group that shares contribution points, missions, disciplinary matters, and so on. Strength Purity, Bear Enslavement, Joyful Blacksmith, Seven Divine Saber Palace, and Great Mountain Bell have all united into one. Divine Tunist, Great Drunkard, the Yuan and Qiguai Clans, as well as the Sorrowful Blacksmith Sect have not, though this is perhaps due to their own troubles preventing them sending cries for help more than unwillingness to do so. Estimates are.. difficult to make, but the deaths from the Bloodmist Rage are perhaps between twenty and thirty million mortals. Some Righteous powers lost as many as a tenth of their cultivators, gaining perhaps another tenth as rebels."

She shook her head ruefully.

"In the mountains, the Qiguai and Yuan Clans are met with massive Blood Path rebellions, even among their Core Formation powers from the Mists. Without Nascent power they will be put down, but I do not think it will be soon. Decades of fighting, at the very least. Likewise, the Sorrowful Blacksmith Sect saw their Early Nascent Elder, Hammer The Anvil Ten Thousand Times Righteously consume almost two-thirds of their Core Formation Elders, rise into Mid Nascent Soul, and raise a rebellion against the Blacksmiths. For now, the Blacksmiths hold the pass, but this situation wavers every day.

She sighed.

"Strength Purity have offered us favorable terms on Spirit Stones, as well as men. They are willing to pay in more.. esoteric items than we ordinarily could acquire from the Righteous Path to send what we can as soon as we can, though we'll need to figure this out quickly."

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Third was Xie Xinya, a Great Circle Core Formation Elder. She is beautiful, long black hair framing an oval face. Her lips glossy and eyes rouged, she was certainly the cultivator on the Council who cared most about her appearance. Since her ascension into the Great Circle she had grown more alluring, and had offered to marry Manuel no less than six times, and two of those offers had come after he had obtained the Spear. She grew more beautiful with each passing year, somehow, an effect Manuel found peculiar. He had raised it with Kleisthenes - despite being unattracted to women, she reported the same thing. She was supernaturally beautiful to those around her - Manuel now found her truly arousing, which was odd in and of itself. This was true for anyone who spent extended periods of time around her, and who was not in her family. Notably, after investigating the effect further it only worked on those Xinya was trying to impress or looked up to. Other councillors were less effected than the two Nascent Souls, which was useful to know in and of itself.

He'd discussed the matter with Xinya, and confirmed she wasn't doing it deliberately. It was some peculiarity specific to her, where those related to her obeyed her and grew stronger, and those she thought might be useful spouses started to desire her. Apparently the effect worked romantically only if she was unmarried, and had to some degree all her life. Manuel had considered marrying her off for that alone, but considered it was worth Kleisthenes while to learn to deflect long-term esoteric mental attacks.

Spiritual Jades proven she looked exactly the same physically, and indeed, she had aged a small amount despite all the above. She is the Parakoimomenos, or in common terms, the Elder of Intrigue. Previously Manuel held her position. To her falls the duties of espionage, sabotage, and assassination.

"Archegetes. I was restrained as you know by fellow elders as I attempted to kill and consume my own family. I am intensely grateful this was done, but my spy networks are in chaos. So many dead, so many turned... within the Clan almost one in fifty cultivators turned to the Blood Path, and had to be slain. Very few rose as rebels, thankfully, and we managed to keep ourselves in good order."

Fourth came Destasia Duca, an Early Core Formation Elder. She is Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou, or in simpler terms, the Master of Disciples. She picks out good seeds, gives training and assistance, and manages the core of the Clan Contribution Board for Qi Condensation and Foundation Building disciples in times of peace. She is flighty, friendly, and happy, and is well-known for her eyes she can use to befuddle or poison her enemies with, as well as her... unique approach to both life and cultivation.

"Archegetes!!!!!!!!", she yelled.

"Legionnaires doing well. Plenty of money. Boring, boring, boring. Boring."

She chuckled.

"Yes, I have them boring new wells across the Jingshen lands for training. Good practice for mining."

Manuel frowned at her.

"This is definitely for training purposes? You're not using corvee labour for your own.. experiments?"

She shook her head.

"Training them myself was too boring, and finding new Spirit Stone veins seems to be a matter of just digging right now. Getting them into infrastructure projects will be helpful because they all need to know how to do stuff as well as fight stuff."

"And your projects? Anything of interest?"

"Well... yes. Yes. Yesssss..."

She cackled, and went silent.

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Lastly was Sheng Yu a Mid Core Formation Elder. He is Protostrator, leader of your armies. The Golden Victory Captain, the Sorrow of the Jingshen, the Conquerer of the East. Many names he earned in the last few decades, and while his command of the Legions is still somewhat lacking defensively, offensively they are second to none.

He speaks, a high-pitched voice with a peculiar waver to it. Almost like a tea kettle - the sort of man that was no doubt mocked by other mortals before he became a cultivator.

"Archegetes. I have largely focused my efforts on organising those Legions that can perform offensively. My ability to conduct a defensive war is low, and has still largely been left to individual Legates, though I am building up my competency there and could conduct one at need. I have ten Legions prepared for a proper offensive at almost any time, totalling ninety-six thousand Qi Condensation cultivators, nine hundred and ninety-six Foundation experts, and ten Legates. Bringing new Legions into this arrangement is taking time, and we should expect a large loss of capability in the Legions, mainly due to cohesion loss while this organisational change takes place. I estimate now the war is over and I can focus on this transition, three Legions will be made offensively operational every two decades. Within two centuries we should have as much offensive capability as we desire."

He smiles wanly.

"The Jingshen have collapsed, though there is much to be decided there."

Manuel frowns thoughtfully...

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The Clan currently has 3 Purchases worth of wealth. There will be an additional vote for the Jingshen territories and wealth as well.

The Clan will gain 3 Purchases next turn.
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What should the Clan focus on? (Outside of the war, which is of course your primary focus)

[ ] Building Bridges (Write-in target) - You should make more allies. Choose a target on the map and aim to have their relations with you increased. Give gifts, exchange assistance, aim for strategic marriages.

[ ] Intrigue (Write-in target) - You should learn about another clan entirely. Spend Spirit Stones like water in the plains and find out everything you can. Strengths. Weaknesses, places to strike, rebels, and so on and so forth.

[ ] Raiding (Write-in target) - Better to weaken an enemy. Send teams of cultivators to go raid an enemy for resources and to kill them where possible. Minor conflicts, with minor rewards. At best, you can seize minor territorial gains. This will worsen your relations, of course. Gains between 0-3 Purchases. May seize territory in extreme cases. Loses Cultivators - around 5,000 Qi Condensation cultivators, 50 Foundation Establishment cultivators, and potentially 1 Core Formation Elder.

[ ] War (Write-in target) - Simply invade. Strike with all your might and seize territory. Kill cultivators. Requires your personal attention to prevent Nascent Souls simply obliterating your forces. Uses your personal Action for the turn. War will open a set of new sub-turns.

[ ] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. This earns you one purchase.

[ ] Training Soldiers - Raising Disciples to higher Realms is all well and good, but training them to be perfect members of Formations is better. Ensure your Clan is trained and ready for war. Your readiness to go to war will increase significantly, though this fades over time.

[ ] Fortifying (Write-in territory, ally or vassal) - Spend Clan manpower and soldiers to build new fortifications against outside enemies. New Arrays, help train new cultivators in lesser Formations to defend their lands, and so on. Will also strengthen a vassal or ally if chosen, and increase relations with them. Increases defenses in the chosen territory, ally, or vassal.

[ ] Write-in
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Nascent Soul actions have been upped to two!

Please format votes like so:

[x] Training Soldiers
[x] Manuel - Hunt an Enemy (Altar Lord)
[x] Kleisthenes - Economic Activity


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What will Manuel do?

[ ] Hunt An Enemy (Write-In) - Why not? Hunt down enemies, see if you can kill someone. Usually used against an opposing Nascent Soul. Potentially very dangerous.

[ ] Weaken An Enemy (Write-In Faction) - Choose a faction, and use your Nascent Soul strength to simply sneak in and do damage. A little underhanded and shameful, but what do you care for the views of the Righteous Path? Potentially dangerous.

[ ] Assist A Faction (Write-in Faction) - Use your personal strength to assist an ally of some kind. Potentially dangerous - especially dangerous if both Nascents leave Clan territory.

[ ] Economic Activity - Carve arrays, scribe useful cultivation techniques onto scrolls, hunt down useful opportunities that might be dangerous to a Core Formation Elder. Make some money for the Clan. This earns you one purchase.

[ ] Lecturing - You can simply lecture your many juniors on cultivation. Spend your time helping them grow, using less resources and ensuring better growth for the Clan.

[ ] Write-in

What will Kleisthenes do?

[ ] Hunt An Enemy (Write-In) - Why not? Hunt down enemies, see if you can kill someone. Usually used against an opposing Nascent Soul. Potentially very dangerous.

[ ] Weaken An Enemy (Write-In Faction) - Choose a faction, and use your Nascent Soul strength to simply sneak in and do damage. A little underhanded and shameful, but what do you care for the views of the Righteous Path? Potentially dangerous.

[ ] Assist A Faction (Write-in Faction) - Use your personal strength to assist an ally of some kind. Potentially dangerous.

[ ] Economic Activity - Carve arrays, scribe useful cultivation techniques onto scrolls, hunt down useful opportunities that might be dangerous to a Core Formation Elder. Make some money for the Clan. This earns you one purchase.

[ ] Tend to Diplomacy - Kleisthenes will spend all her spare time working on her general diplomatic outreaches. This will apply a considerable bonus to any diplomatic actions this turn, as well as any diplomatic rolls that crop up naturally.

[ ] Write-in

Purchases:

We have 3 Purchases available. Any Economic actions can be spent this turn, and unspent Purchases carry over to new turns.

Casia Zimisce
wants to...

[ ] The Underworld Devil Fortress (Major Purchase - costs 3 Purchases)

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Archegetes, refortifying and rebuilding the Spirit Palace into a Clan centre would be of tremendous worth. It would offer us a second major base of operations, a huge increase in training speed for new cultivators, and would offer us a fallback position if we were ever to lose our centre of power."

Kleisthenes Sarantapechos wants to...

[ ] Send Spirit Stones to the Blacksmiths (1 Purchase)

"Archegetes, I know it is a great deal of money, but the Sorrowful Blacksmiths are suffering a great deal. If they lose the pass, we will need to invade to keep it open. Sending them wealth will mean they will be able to fight far more effectively against their Blood Path rebellion."

Xie Xinya wants to...

[ ] The Strength Purity Diplomatic Expedition (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases)

"Archegetes, let me send a massive expedition of array-builders and the like to the Strength Purity Sect. Among them will be my finest spies, taking notes on everything they have, their strength, their desires, their sub-sects... It will offer us a great deal of insight into our erstwhile allies, and win us some goodwill to boot."

Destasia Duca wants to...

[ ] Assault Gravity Itself (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases)

"So when I looked at the Spear, I figured something out. It can hit ANYTHING. Anything! So I duplicated its effect and figured out how to assault physical laws. Not the big crazy ones, but the little ones like gravity or combustion. Laws reinforce themselves over time, of course, but it's pretty easy to strike at gravity itself and weaken the law for a good few centuries in a few places. We could strike at the Law in channels along the Clan's main trade routes. This wouldn't actually stop gravity from working, or even weaken it for mortals, but it turns out most large-scale flying arts counteract the intrinsic Law of Gravity rather than just exerting energy to go up. It'd make transporting cultivators via flight far faster and easier - a few Soup Sect airships and we'd gain massive strategic mobility! Also, can you imagine how mad it'd make Heaven?"

Sheng Yu wants to...

[ ] Raise Two Scorpion Legions (1 Purchase)

"Archegetes, we have a tremendous number of scorpion cavalry, and Legions that are difficult to transport. More Scorpion Cavalry have proven to be effective, useful, and quick. We can raise two new legions and improve our offensive capabilites somewhat for the wars to come."
 
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The Jingshen Territories
This is part of the above voting moriatorum. There will be a third vote about Jingshen wealth - these all come together into one plan!

This, Manuel thought, was much simpler.

He sat with Kleisthenes, and they sketched plan after plan.

After some time, there were only three that made sense.

[ ] Complete Control

The Jingshen would take the Blood of Bronze, or be exiled to the Great Battlefield. Those that remained would be Clan in truth, subject to all its decrees. Not many would accept in truth, and so the strength of the Jingshen would be lost to them. However, all the wealth of the mines would be theirs, and the new cultivators who arose would be loyal and strong, true Golden Devils, not mere vassals. A weakness for now, a strength for later.

[ ] The Four Families

The families that remained would be allowed to control their lands - perhaps thirty percent of Jingshen mining as it stood. They would pay tribute and be Clan vassals, but it would be doubtful if they were ever truly loyal. The mines would be more operational, and the lands would be worked more effectively quickly. The Clan would also gain a fairly large force of vassals from the get-go. However, much of the new gains would be lost, and the murmur of rebellion would take a long time to die out.

[ ] The Underworld Bandit Camp

Lady Yao sought to return to the Great Battlefield and gain vengeance on those who killed her brotherhood. Nonetheless, she could be given lands here - the greater part of them - specifically the Underworld Spirit Palace. Leaving those lands in her hands would allow her to create a new power capable of supporting an entire Nascent herself, though she would be a vassal of the Clan. Much of the wealth would still flow through Clan lands, though less than would otherwise. Still, the Clan would gain a vassal Nascent Soul, though bandits might not be the best neighbour...
 
The Spoils of War
The Jingshen had had Spirit Stones unimaginable.

Well, they were imaginable.

There had, Sheng Yu felt, just been a great many. Almost a hundred and twenty-five million stavraton in worth, even after much had been seized and spent on various passion projects by the Elders. He was simply awaiting Old Gold's decision on how to spend them...

[ ] Store the Wealth (25 Purchases)

One view was simply to sit on it until it was needed. Boring, but useful. Or... there were a few major purchases he'd been thinking about... No doubt the others had as well.

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[ ] The Completed Technique Palace (15 Purchases)

It turned out that what was needed to complete it had come to Strength Purity. It wasn't that useful for them, given the remaining parts didn't work, but hey. Techniques to improve their Core Formation and Foundation Building Experts was no small matter. With that, their cultivators would be on par with others in the midst of battle even if they were not in formation.

[ ] The Blood of Silver (20 Purchases)

With the Ascension Blood in hand, Destasia's attempts to purify blood have yielded much of interest. With enough wealth, she has outlined a plan to upgrade the Ascension Blood permanently, imbuing almost every new Clan cultivator with greater potential. New Core Formation Elders have a one in four chance of gaining the ancient Blood of Silver, allowing them to punch four small realms above where they ordinarily would - and their chance for a breakthrough into Nascent Soul is tripled. A Core Formation Elder with the Blood of Silver rising into Nascent Soul would immediately fight at Mid Nascent Strength. Such is the strength of our ancestors.

[ ] The Spear and Shield of Bronze (10 Purchases)

An ancient spear and shield sit within Sorrowful Blacksmith territory, locked inside an ancient array that would take impossible power to enter. Yet with things as they are, Kleisthenes believes she can negotiate an entry for a little Nascent aid. These ancient arms are forged from Gravebronze from a Spirit Severing cultivator, and would raise Kleisthenes' strength to the very peak of Early Nascent Soul.

[ ] The Heart-Realm (20 Purchases)

A portal has been found in Jingshen lands, and Manuel delved its secrets most handily. It leads to a Secret Realm, seemingly located in the dead heart of the Turtle Child itself. Opening it would be immensely costly, yet would yield many benefits - especially to the Clan's most talented cultivators. It would only be able to push cultivators up to Core Formation through, unfortunately. Nascents bore too much metaphysical weight for such a portal to move them.

[ ] Nascent Treasures (5 Purchases)

With the corruption of the Jingshen treasures, as well as the far greater requirements of the Clan to break through, there are only enough treasures for a single cultivator to break through in sixty years. Purchasing a few other useful Tribulation Treasures would allow this time to be brought down to zero, and a new Nascent to be raised at will.

[ ] The Spirit Railway Cannons (10 Purchases)

The Jingshen built massive Spirit Cannons capable of decimating us. They failed because they needed to face Clan Nascent strength, but against anything less they might well have been invulnerable. Putting them atop massive mobile firing platforms would allow us to deploy them in battle, reducing enemy strongholds to dust with ease.

[ ] The Millennium Oasis Formation (5 Purchases)

An improvement on a junior's work. With the Qi descending from the sky, even in the desert, being able to control its flows and use it to recover is more crucial than ever. The cost of improving the formation would be massive, but it has been proven it would merely be a matter of resources and time. With said resources spent, the former Century Oasis Formation would become the Millennium Oasis Formation, a formation usable by the Clan to keep its forces operational with less use of Spirit Stones, thereby increasing the number of Qi Condensation cultivators it can support by approximately 10%, and Foundation ones by approximately 5% - this bonus would be proportionate as the Clan grew, to boot.
 
Fire fire everywhere and not a drop of water to be seen. Shit old Cannibal is really racking up the gains. I don't think we want the Sorrowful Blacksmiths to collapse because we can't hold against Old Cannibal as yet. I absolutely want Yao
 
Feel free to make plans! Voting won't open for some time, however, so don't vote for them.

Once it's over I'll create a new threadmark announcing the opening of the vote and remove this.
 
Alright. I want the secret realm (this is solely selfish so i can have a chance of actually getting to emperor's so disregard if needed), and the millennium oasis formation is mandatory. (RIP Ferenike.)
 
Hmmmm i wonder if we can occupy the pass through the mountains and do a soft annex on it claiming security is paramount and supplying the battlefield is key and claim that the blacksmiths can use there manpower elsewhere.
 
Heart realm or technique palace are tempting but... Blood of Silver, man. When are we going to get a chance like this to restore the Old Blood without Heaven fucking us up?
 
Edit: I've settled on a simple plan of action, stealing from others. Credit to Alectai and TehChron for pretty much all of it.

[ ] Tremendous Power Tomorrow with Mercenaries
-[ ] Increasing Wealth
-[ ] Kleisthenes - Tend to Specific Diplomacy
(Sorrowful Blacksmiths are offered support from Manuel and Yao in eliminating their Blood Path Rebel in exchange for access and/or treasures. You have some exiles needing relocation as well)
-[ ] Manuel - Hunt an Enemy (Sorrowful Blacksmiths Blood Path Nascent)
-[ ] The Underworld Devil Fortress (Major Purchase - costs 3 Purchases)
-[ ] Assault Gravity Itself (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases)
-[ ] Complete Control
(Return the favor - just as the Storks sheltered in your lands, guide the exodus of the unyielding Jingshen to mutual advantage by assisting in finding a patron for them for goodwill and perhaps wealth)
-[ ] The Blood of Silver (20 Purchases)
-[ ] The Millennium Oasis Formation (5 Purchases)

As indecisive as always here's the alternate focusing on immediate Nascent strength by grabbing two of them in one turn. Out immediate concerns are the next Trials and the Abyssal Devil Invasion. Trials are dealt with by the Technique Palace and so we should look at making sure Old Cannibal doesn't get another Nascent by securing the Sorrowful Blacksmiths

[ ] Power Now
-[ ] Building Bridges (Sorrowful Blacksmiths)
-[ ] Kleisthenes - Tend to Diplomacy (Sorrowful Blacksmiths)
-[ ] Manuel - Assist a Faction (Sorrowful Blacksmiths, Headhunting)

-[ ] The Strength Purity Diplomatic Expedition (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases)
-[ ] Assault Gravity Itself (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases)
-[ ] The Underworld Bandit Camp
-[ ] The Completed Technique Palace (15 Purchases)
-[ ] Nascent Treasures (5 Purchases)
-[ ] The Millennium Oasis Formation (5 Purchases)
 
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... Phew.

So, I see three viable options with our Mega Prize.

All of these include the Millennium Oasis Formation, because that's both too good for us, and I want to get Ferenike's efforts face, even if they're not playing with us anymore. So I won't list them. Here's how I see our options.

A) Technique Palace + Nascent Treasures
Advantage: We get Casia right now, our Foundation Establishment and Core Formation mooks are now the match of every other faction even in 1v1, which is a big deal in the warfare that will be endemic in the Great Era. Also has benefits in the Trials because our cultivators are harder to kill even when caught solo.
Flaws: All advantages are temporary in the grand scheme of things. The Technique Palace is a specific object and an Early Nascent is fodder in this day and age. The Great Era is going to mean we've got a generation of superheroes incubating, and while our Good Seeds won't fall far behind, it's still a mess.
Best taken in conjunction with Vassalizing the Jingshen, as Casia can sit on their grumbling and give magical Peace vibes to everyone to get the benefits without much of the costs.

B) Blood of Silver
Advantage: Strengthens our core, fundamental asset, effectively ensuring that there's a 25% chance that every new Core we get magically gets the equivilant of 24 Impact--and a hell of a lot more than that if they then reach Nascent Soul. This is a power that will stay with the Clan forever--even if we have to flee again because the escalation spiral becomes too great. It just means there's a 25% chance that every Golden Devil who hits Core becomes a complete fucking monster--and we've got a lot of Cores about to start coming out of the pipeline.
Flaws: Power tomorrow is not power today. This also doesn't do anything for our Good Seeds directly, because Good Seed-ness trumps even the Blood of Silver. Our position right now is pretty good in terms of having time to cook, but it's not perfect, as we still have the Trials imposing constant attrition.
Best taken in conjunction with Assimilating the Jingshen, as we want as many Clan Cultivators as we can to roll the dice as much as possible.

C) The Heart-Realm
Advantage: Another Secret Realm we can access, which based on what Occi's said so far, is "Slightly more difficult than Qiguai/Yuan, but with better rewards on the top end." Considering that it's literally a gate to the Heart of the Turtle-Child, there's an excellent chance that there's some serious Deep Lore to be found here, and potentially some top tier shinies. This is putting our faith in the Good Seeds to find a solution through the darkest of nights for us.
Flaws: Do we really need another Secret Realm? I mean, some of us certainlly could, those of us with ambitions who have cleared out their quota and still desire more rolls. Also, this doesn't do much to help our baseline forces either--it's absolutely gambling that a Good Seed hits the rocket engines and can into space before we actually need greater power.
Doesn't especially synergize with any of the Jingshen Dispositions.
 
Ok heres a shot at two plans.

-[ ]Digesting the gains and showing face
-[ ] Focus Write-In: incorporating and developing the Jingshen lands (bring infrastructure people and fortification online and stomping out rebels)
-[ ] Manuel - Assist Faction Blacksmiths
-[ ] Kleisthenes - Tend to Diplomacy
-[ ] Purchase - The Underworld Devil Fortress (Major Purchase - costs 3 Purchases)
-[ ] Jingshen wealth - Complete Control
-[ ] Jingshen wealth - The Blood of Silver (20 Purchases) ; Nascent Treasures (5 Purchases)

-[ ] Aggressive Diplomacy
-[ ] Focus Write-in - Occupy the mountain pass under the pretense of security and safety of Trade
-[ ] Manuel - Assist Faction Blacksmiths
-[ ] Kleisthenes - Tend to Diplomacy
-[ ] Purchase - The Strength Purity Diplomatic Expedition (Major Purchase - costs 2 Purchases) ; Send Spirit Stones to the Blacksmiths (1 Purchase)
-[ ] Jingshen wealth - Complete Control
-[ ] Jingshen wealth - The Blood of Silver (20 Purchases) ; Nascent Treasures (5 Purchases)


The first plan focuses on consolidating our gains and showing some assistance to the Righteous Path's letting us digest the gains and bring the region up to speed by generally focussing on it hopefully getting it incorporated faster than it auto doing it.

The second focuses on much more aggressive moves and tries to offset them by more diplomatic overtures with our actions to justify what we are doing as well as gaining the trade lane and hopefully increasing our wealth as well. Also if the Blacksmiths do end up falling then we have the area already secured and dug in.

Both keep Kleisthenes ready to react to issues and focus on diplomatic stuff that will definitely crop up over the turn.
Also incorporating the lands in our control is the best path moving forward for clan wealth and growth long term. The purchases also focus on us getting more Nascent Souls up now and in the future as that is our biggest issue right now. I do not think offering up the lands to get a Nascent Soul with Lady Yao is worth it when we can purchase one with the spoils from the war. We should just send our ally on their way to cause havoc on the Great Battlefield. I think she is more useful as a free-roaming agent.
 
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One thing to note on the Blood of Silver, is that it would give us a long term answer to this bit.
"The Righteous Path has had some mysterious fragments fall from the sky to various juniors, who have leapt into power in impossible timeframes. One junior from the Strength Purity Sect reached the 10th Heavenstage in under a decade, and now stands in the 11th.
The boosts to righteous path juniors is something I think we can expect to either continue, or worse, maintain it's boost to a select few, grooming them into righteous path monsters. the Blood of Silver will ensure we have the junior potential pool to at least keep up with whatever other shenanigans the righteous path gets boosted with. All in the long term of course, which doesn't quite help us in the now.
 
Gaius Antonius 73 - The Day of Fate, Part 2: Prophecies and Finish Lines
Gaius Antonius Omake #73 - The Day of Fate, Part 2: Prophecies and Finish Lines

A thin, elegantly curved eyebrow arched derisively, punctuated a deeply unimpressed face. "That's it?"

A grotesque green and black centipede the side of a human leg lunged at Gaius, who scoffed and launched a snapping front kick, blowing the bug's head off. Several more centipedes, creeping around under rocks and in crevices, cautiously eyed The Seeker. Apparently they thought they were stealthy.

Gaius swept his senses over the opposition thoroughly, as they prepared to strike from countless angles. A few dozen insectoid Spirit Beasts, physically a bit larger and stronger than the ones in the first chamber. Twenty-six in the First Heavenstage, six in the Second. They probably backed up their numbers with a paralytic venom, to take down larger prey with more advanced cultivation with pack hunting tactics. He supposed that, for a fresh-faced Legionnaire, this could be threatening.

Gaius breathed deeply, extruding tiny flowering branches from his skin all over his body. With a sharp exhale, he bathed the chamber in a spherical blast of soul power, instantly killing every living thing more complex than an amoeba.

The chamber hosting the fourth challenge of Gaius' journey was decidedly more colorful than the last three, with vibrant green moss, mushrooms in various sickly shades of brown, yellow and red, and even a few scrawny trees, feasting on the dim light of the False Sun Crystals up above. Several dead centipedes which had been clinging to the ceiling fell to the ground with heavy thuds, and one of the trees fell as its roots gave way, all strength gone from them.

He wasn't sure what he'd been expecting. On one hand, Gaius knew that he should be grateful to have such little difficulty starting out, since each floor would inevitably be more intense than the last. On the other, it felt a bit like he was stealing, getting such great resources with negligible exertion.

Striding to the center of the chamber, Gaius came upon a raised dais with a large chalice in the center. The contents, a dark red liquid that smelled like iron, were easy to guess at. "That's the reward?" Gaius asked with a deeply skeptical look. "Drinking that would be Blood Path, wouldn't it?"

Hesitantly, Gaius brushed his fingers against the cup. It was made of blown green glass, dyed the color of oxidized bronze, just barely transparent enough to see the liquid inside. Sculpted onto the surface was a relief of an ancient hero - he couldn't recall which one - conquering his enemies with a scepter of fire.

"But then, it's set aside specifically to reward us, isn't it?" Gaius mused, picking up the chalice and swirling the contents around. Slowly, he unsheathed his dagger and dipped the tip into the cup, then cast a detection technique. Nothing fancy, just a handy skill he'd picked up from Lipita for discovering shapeshifters. Vibrations travelled down the blade, into the blood, and then back up and into Gaius' hand. The frequency was much lower - if it wasn't the same as the one he'd transmitted, and thus not the same species as him.

"Damnit, if it's not human blood, don't make it look so macabre." The Seeker sighed, raising the glass to his lips. "Bottoms up, and the Devil laughs." With a few eye-watering gulps, Gaius downed the thick, sticky, pungent liquid, swallowing about half before he had to take a break, coughing and retching. Collapsing against the wall, Gaius carefully placed the chalice down beside him and began to cycle.

As expected, it was extremely potent. The Mid-Grade spirit stones Gaius had grown accustomed to paled in comparison to whatever the hell shed this. Given there were seemingly no other ingredients beyond the blood itself, and the blood itself wasn't even that fresh, it had to be a Nascent Soul of some kind. Realizing this, Gaius grinned and forced down another gulp, feeling as his body's qi saturation grew denser and denser. "Nascent blood? Never had a Nascent anything. What a treat…"

Closer, closer, ever closer. Gaius' body felt tighter and tighter as his qi packed in more densely. Cycling grew slower, and a dull ache rang out across his whole body. A sheepskin filled to bursting with wine, he poured in yet more, feeling more alive than ever with each passing moment. Scylla, too, took in more energy, siphoning a portion of Gaius' own gains. Where it went, Gaius still had no idea; her cultivation base remained frozen at the Twelfth still, and the qi she cycled was instead drawn endlessly into her Beast Core, where it was locked away beyond even Gaius' senses.

The blood didn't go down as easily as the Carrion Bat cores, and so Gaius had no choice but to sit there and cycle for hours after hour, Scylla doing the same in her tank. Before the pair knew it, another two days had passed. No need to be hasty - those who went in behind Gaius would never cross paths with him, even if they went past him. These caves were not something so pedestrian as a single linear path. Overlapping, impossible spaces compressed a colossal anthill-like structure, vast enough to dwarf any metropolis, into what seemed like one path. Gaius' Floor 4 was unlike the Floor 4 any other entrant in the current wave would pass through, and the same would go for every other floor he saw.

As Gaius digested the blood, the Cloud Caves provided. As if this place was not willing to drive away an entrant through hunger or thirst, moss grew wherever Gaius sat, and spring-water collected in puddles. Even insects, mice and other tiny animals, freshly killed, would pile up in corners as The Seeker slept. None of it was appetizing, but it all went down just fine, and gave him all the nutrition needed to keep going. This peculiarity was something Gaius knew about going in: he had packed only fifty ration tins, using them not to keep himself alive but to mark his progress. With each completed floor, he ate one tin, and in doing so he counted his conquests.

But soon, with the newly gained qi settled in his body, Gaius knew it was time to continue, and descended to the next floor.

——

If the fourth floor had been a disappointment, then the fifth, as Gaius would soon discover, would wildly blow his expectations away.

Descending into the new chamber, Gaius came upon a long corridor, some ten feet wide and one hundred feet long. Relatively small, perhaps meant for a singular combat encounter. More of those cylindrical totems jutted from the floor in neat rows, and the dark stone was otherwise unadorned, aside from moss and False Sun Crystals all over the walls. Midway through the corridor stood a single obstacle: a tall, thick oak with a knot in the shape of a human face in the center. The droop of the eyes and mouth and the thick lines in the bark around the eyes gave the impression of an old man, and the voice which followed only reinforced that idea.

"The challenger arrives! Step forward, so that I may know the one who stands before the scales of destiny today." The tree said in a booming, gravelly voice, branches shaking with every word.

Gaius eyed this strange Floor Guardian warily, casting his gaze this way and that. It wasn't long before he spotted the shredded corpses of several Deep scattered around the tree's base, which only made him more confused.

Undeterred, the ent continued to announce itself in pretentious fashion. "I am the Well-Wisher, he who dwells in places of power. Come forth, young man, and test your mettle. He who passes my test shall be the Inheritor!"

Gaius tilted his head quizzically, thoroughly unimpressed. "Awfully self-important for the fifth Floor Guardian, aren't ya?"

"Floor Guardian?" the Well-Wisher sneered with disdain. "I obliterated those wretches, who you see around me, for daring to bring forth force of arms against their better. I come to this accursed place of my own accord. There shall soon be a great awakening, and I must find the Inheritor."

Probably bullshit, thought Gaius. Still, things here were off enough that he could not completely dismiss the ent's claims. "So, this 'Inheritor', what gave you the idea they'd be in here?" He asked, balancing an equal amount of skepticism and curiosity so as to not anger the mysterious being.

The ent scowled and let out a booming, wordless scoff, yet this gesture of minor frustration carried enough force to nearly fling Gaius into the wall. Gritting his teeth and digging his feet into the ground, Gaius skidding back nearly ten feet before regaining his balance.

"Fool; did you not listen? I dwell in places of power - physical space means nothing. I have been in the Cloud Caves, and on the peak of Turtlebone Mountain, and the Yuan Secret Realm, and at the base of Kind Zhao's Anvil. I grow upon the head of the Elder Dragon named Seven Cresting Shadows, and my leaves are flung by the eternal storms which lash the coast of Lesser Xing! I do not know who shall claim the prize I hold, or where they dwell, only that the time is near."

Okay, now that was interesting, Gaius thought. Nothing on the fifth floor should have had enough power to force him so far back, and certainly not so easily. It would take at least a Foundation level beast to do so, and for it to be so effortless… the tree was a Five-Pillar at bare minimum, and Gaius' complete inability to even sense its cultivation base suggested it could be much higher.

In conclusion: even if the ent was lying, which it might not be, it was completely inappropriate for it to be the fifth Floor Guardian. Time to brown-nose a little bit, then. Gaius pressed his fists together and bowed deeply, as deep as the barrel on his back would allow, and affixed a look of solemn respect onto his face. "Honorable Well-Wisher, forgive my lack of faith. I was only confused that you would consider me, a Qi Condensation, for your test."

"It has to be Qi Condensation." Well-Wisher clarified as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. "Only a raw and unformed being can take up the mantle of Inheritor. Now, step forward and take the test."

"Thank you for this opportunity. If you so firmly insist, I will." Said Gaius, walking up to the ent, until a furrow suddenly appeared in the ground in front of his feet, some twenty feet out. He stopped, thoroughly shocked; he hadn't even felt a thing coming. Either that technique, or ability, or whatever it was, had been too fast to even detect, or, more frighteningly, it had been completely hidden from even The Seeker's senses.

"It is simple; touch me. This field cannot be crossed by a Qi Condensation; it grows denser that closer you get, until it grows far beyond what even a Thirteenth Heavenstage's body and soul can breach. Do the impossible - if you cannot even manage that, then you are not the Inheritor."

The instructions delivered, the Well-Wisher breathed in deeply, then began to vibrate. The air around the ancient tree resonated, the very air seeming to solidify and thicken before Gaius. The stone below their feet began to crack bit by bit, and Gaius' teeth started to hurt as they were forced to grind against one another.

Gaius' qi lit up like a bonfire within him as he layered half a dozen body arts atop one another, making himself into a moving fortress. "Just walking? Alright, I can do that…"

Five steps in, and Gaius was starting to eat his words. The endless shaking made his guts feel as if they were being churned like butter, like he was going to melt into goop. Given the length of his stride, thirteen steps in total would be enough to cross this distance. The sixth and seventh steps were completed, and then Gaius' ears began to ring.

The pain was indescribable. Not in the sense of being unimaginably painful - Gaius had been in all manner of various agonies in his years - but in the sense of being a whole new kind of pain. He was literally being shaken apart, as if this damned tree were trying to separate every cell in his body from every other cell. Eight steps, nine steps.

Blood began exiting Gaius' body through every exit it could find. Nose, eyes, ears, all produced a steady drip of red. The Seeker tensed all of his muscles to the limit, struggling to not be thrown off his feet. The vibrations, previously directionless, now radiated out from the Well-Wisher in waves, seeking to push away whatever came neat. The ent's face was mostly impassive, but held the slightest glimmer of interest, now that Gaius had come so far. Gaius made the tenth step.

The ringing and shaking redoubled, and the pain sunk all the way down to his bones. Despite his best efforts, Gaius simply couldn't get any farther. Three steps from the tree was the limit of his body and qi's endurance. He gritted his teeth, activating several more body and soul arts at once, and took another agonizing step.

His hand was only three feet away now just two more steps! Grasping fingers writhed desperately, vainly hoping to brush up against their goal. There had to be a secret, he thought. Some way for a Qi Condensation to reach this damn thing. After all, out of all Qi Condensation, how many could have even reached as close as Gaius had? There was no way it could be a matter of brute force!

Finally, Gaius' body gave in. His feet slipped just a little bit, and he was bodily flung backwards, bouncing and tumbling across the ground from the sheer force of the tree's repulsive field. When he came skidding to a stop, he was almost all the way back at the entrance.

Ow. Now that was a shield, beyond anything Gaius could hope to create, as he was now. Rather than let the demoralizing failure sweep him up, he pondered how anyone was even supposed to beat that test. Three times more strength and four times more qi density; by Gaius' estimation, that was how much stronger he would have had to be to pass.

What a load of horseshit. No one in their right mind would put a test like that before a Qi Condensation. No, he hadn't come up short; it had definitely been a lie all along.

"Urgh, you gotta be shittin' me…" Gaius groaned, lying motionless and staring up at the ceiling above. "Qi Condensation can't break that. You're insane, Well-Wisher."

The ent gave a mighty harrumph, smothering The Seeker in another gust of air. "How crude. You hold respect when you hope to win, and once that hope is dashed you take it away."

"Oh what do I care?" Gaius sighed, sitting up and rubbing at a quickly-forming lump on the back of his head. "You bait me into your prank with stories of a legend, then make me face an impossible test. You're not holding an ancient secret, you're just a Floor Guardian from farther down, here to bully me."

"You do not believe because you do not carry the requisite capacity - for an ordinary one, that was as far as any could hope to get. In any case, you fail." The bearded face concluded scornfully. "It seems you cannot be the Inheritor, but your strength and will are commendable nonetheless. Take this consolation prize and begone!" As if to punctuate the declaration, the tree's face opened its mouth wide, and a bright white light shone from within, bathing Gaius in the glow. Immediately, his thoughts grew sharper, his muscles felt more responsive than they had in years, and his meridians practically sang in joy, so full of energy and health as they now were.

The light faded, and Gaius got back to his feet, practically a new man. He stared at his hands, turning them end over end and marvelling at the suppleness of his skin. He ran his fingers through his hair, sighing with joy at the lush, bouncy feeling it had regained. All the damage from years of negative psychic buildup had washed away, leaving Gaius feeling healthier than ever before.

"You seem in high spirits. That is good." Well-Wisher said, nodding his approval. "Better to take solace in what you have achieved, than to curse your own weakness. Not everyone gets to see me, you know; I only test the most exceptional talents. Now go!" The tree concluded, pointing to the exit with one of its branches.

"Yeah, yeah, laugh it up old man." Gaius snorted with a dismissive wave of his hand, but nonetheless did as the tree said, muttering as he descended. "…bet you I could kick this Inheritor's ass, fucking judgemental shrub…"

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The sixth floor was surprisingly small. A grove of trees about a hundred feet across was all that stood between Gaius and the exit, by which some sort of carving marked the ground. Whatever it was, Gaius couldn't make it out through the trees, which he supposed housed his enemy.

Steadying his breathing, The Seeker crept into the little grove, casting his senses out for any sudden noises, strange smells or sources of killing intent. It didn't take long before he was alerted by a violent shaking of boughs.

An ape, green-eyed and white-furred, snarled at Gaius from above, jumping from one tree to another as it slowly circled him. It was nearly six feet of powerfully corded muscle and ferocity, raring to bring the full extent of its might against anyone who stood in its way. Gaius cast out his senses, but found no other spiritually-endowed organisms, moving or otherwise. "Single combat, then?" He asked the ape with a smirk, cracking his knuckles. "One powerful enemy, guarding the prize."

Like a coil being undone, the ape launched itself at Gaius, clawing at him with bloody-minded ferocity. Undeterred, Gaius held his hand up to greet the beast's, and locked their fingers together. Screeching rabidly, the ape swung a fist unerringly toward this impudent human's head - only for its fist to be caught as well.

"The Sixth Heavenstage is the gateway to greatness." Gaius continued, pitching forward and squeezing both hands with all his might. "At the Sixth, you've surpassed what most so-called Immortals will ever achieve. You must be proud!"

As if to shut up this haughty challenger, the ape pushed back, planting its feet and opening its closed fist to lock fingers with Gaius' other hand. It was an even match; the ape's cultivation may have been far below Gaius', but pound-for-pound, humans have the least baseline strength of any Great Ape by far, especially grip strength. For what seemed like an eternity, the two remained locked in that test of strength, muscles tensed at the edge of their limits. "You're not a Spirit Beast either, I can't sense a beast core in you. You attained this power on your own, by eating the weak. How you got from the forest to the desert I couldn't say, but you're definitely strong."

Little by little, the balance shifted. The bronze in Gaius' muscles and bones grew denser, his heart rate climbed to an unnatural speed, and a golden light began to glow from beneath his skin. The ape's knees begin to buckle as its grip faltered and its arms shook. Unwilling to admit defeat, the floor guardian surged forward, mouth opening wide to bite out a chunk of Gaius' neck.

"But here's the thing!" Gaius exclaimed, grip growing even more powerful. The phalanges of the ape's hands broke in half, forcing the ape to its knees. Immediately, roars became whimpers, and it tried to pull away. "Humans have these things called techniques. Even a Ninth Heavenstage could out-muscle you with Body Arts. You should stick to bullying Sixes, but instead you got in my way!"

With that, Gaius let go, and the beast immediately backed away, standing upright and cradling its broken hands. Before it could attempt anything else, Gaius drew his new dagger and flung it. The Celestial Bronze passed through the beast's chest like it was made of butter, then blasted straight through two more trees and embedded into a fourth down to the hilt. The ape collapsed, dead.

A moment of silence passed, as Gaius contemplated his work, then sighed. "...too much?" Within her tank, Scylla burbled, thoroughly unimpressed with her partner, prompting Gaius' eyebrow to twitch. "Look, I'm anxious. I wanted to bully something now, while I don't have to be serious!" With a lazy wave of his hand, Gaius pulled the dagger back and began to clean it. "You're so fussy about everything; it's not like he's gonna tell his friends about it now. More importantly..."

The Seeker walked to the end of the chember, where a blood red array was carved into the ground. Kneeling down, he pressed his palm to it, prompting a larger series of scripts to light up in a complex geometric pattern some fifty feet across. The dead ape began to shrivel, turning into an emaciated husk as its blood and soul was ripped out and siphoned into the array, making it glow brighter and fully activate.

Wait. Was this it? Was this enough to make it, right now? Gaius checked the qi content of the array, then his own condition. Given the current amount of compression, the tipping point was very close indeed. With the huge bounty stored here... "This will do it. This will do it, won't it!?" He laughed. How could he not laugh, having arrived after so many years. Gaius' loud, booming, piercing laughter bounced off the cave's walls over and over, and tears rolled endlessly down his face. "Thirteenth! Thirteenth! The mythical Thirteenth Heavenstage is mine!"

Quickly, so as to not waste a single iota of the energy contained within the array, Gaius set Scylla's barrel down and entered a meditative position. The trance came to him easily, despite the giddy feeling in his belly, thanks to the experience taught by endless repetition and practice.

This would be the last time Gaius ever performed Qi Condensation-style cultivation, and that thought made him feel strangely melancholy. Each Great Realm cycled differently, of course, because the mechanics of their advancement were different. All of them absorbed and compressed qi within their bodies, but toward a different purpose. Thus, any Sect worth its salt had different cycling techniques for the different Great Realms. Gaius would be performing a different method in the future, one which his instincts would have to adapt to. This cycling trance would be his last time with the method he had used since he was a boy. Resolving to savor the experience, The Seeker got to work.

The remaining distance to the Thirteenth Heavenstage came easily. With only a little bit of his body not fully saturated, the qi entering his system rushed easily into that spot, hardly needing any direction at all. For over three days, his body remained motionless, growing maddeningly closer to that beautiful goal.

Just as Gaius began to wonder if he had done something wrong, if he was being held up by a bottleneck unthinkably close to the end, he crossed the threshold. It was more violent, more extreme than any crossing since the First Heavenstage. The Tenth was also comparable, but where that surge of energy had wracked Gaius' body, this wracked his entire being. Muscles spasmed until they nearly tore, individual hairs grew out, then fell out, what felt like every meal he'd ever eaten was vomited up, and sweat poured endlessly from every inch of his skin.

The impurities were not expelled in concentrated form, because the remaining amount was just so trace. For hour after hour, Gaius' body expelled every ounce of liquid, and he greedily drank down the water provided by the cave no matter how bitter it tasted. He quaked, stomach clenching, steam rising from his pores, brain alight with thought and reflex in ways it never had been before.

But slowly, bit by bit, Gaius regained control over his body. When he stood again, splashing his naked body to clean it as well as these caves could allow, he marvelled at just how light he felt. This was the strength of the Thirteenth? Gaius threw some experimental punches, and they came out quicker than any he'd ever thrown before. The way he moved, it was as if he weighed only one hundred pounds!

"I want to break through…" Gaius muttered, looking down at his hands as if he'd never seen them before. At just the mere mention of breakthrough, tiny sparks of lightning crackled around a few of his fingers, warning him of the extreme retribution he could bring down at any moment. "I wanna break through I wanna break through I wanna break through…" The muttering grew faster and more frantic, as the glee of what Gaius had done filled him up. Now screaming in triumph, he raised both fists high above his head as if he were lifting a championship belt. "I can break through at any time I want! I made it! Scylla, Mother, Father, Maria, Zeno, Amaranth, I MADE IIIIIIIT!"

A flash of white became a flash of many colors, and Scylla's evolved form whacked him upside the head with her tail. "Get ahold of yourself or you'll summon the lightning! Don't lose your mind, we have seven more floors!"

Gaius took a deep breath, reaching out to pat Scylla's big, scaly side. "That's right. Seven more. Sorry, I got a little too excited. Just seven more."

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Damn, this is going slower than I thought it would. That's six floors down... out of forty. This will be quite the undertaking, but that's what I get for wanting to make every floor feel unique and not just skip through a bunch of them. For this one, I wanted the highlight to be "Gaius stumbles upon a stage in someone else's Hero's Journey." For every Chosen One, there's a hundred promising folks who don't make the cut, and I wanted to poke fun at that notion.

The Well-Wisher is bearing a Heavenly Treasure, and has the ability to grow through any sufficiently large patch of soil in the Third Sea, through spatial magic. He can't literally be everywhere at once, though he can monitor quite a few locations at a time. As the old ent says, he's creeping around in 'places of power' searching for a Qi Condensation who can pass his test, since he can sense the Great Era coming. Basically, he's a living MacGuffin that a new Good Seed could use as their Cool Thing if they want, or maybe Occi will use him in someone's fate text. If no one claims his bounty soon, I'll give it to an NPC.

As for the other two floors, nothing too insane happens aside from Gaius finally reaching the Thirteenth Heavenstage, which he's understandably giddy about. Can't wait to play around with that for the short time he's there. Just seven more...
 
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Complete control is best bet, we get money and loyal Clan members, the Righteous Path gets more troops that they need immediately, everyone wins except Bloodpath, but they have it coming.
 
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