Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Konstantinos Papadopoulos 1 - Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - Job Review - Soulsteel Forge Assistant
Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - Job Review - Soulsteel Forge Assistant

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Recommended job - Priority - The Soulsteel forges require assistance to handle the influx of material from the Blood Cannibal War. Current wages are 5 points an hour, minimum 10-hour shifts at once. Safety not guaranteed. See more details? Declined

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So, my dear readers, anyone who has used a Contribution Point Board in the last week will have seen the recommendation for the Soulsteel Forge Assistant job. As avowed followers of my Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - An Economic Analysis of Tasks in the Dawn Fortress - Eukleios, 6531 (cost 5 CP) series will know, it's points/hour value is well above most standard Dawn Fortress jobs. However, it requires a heavy time commitment away from drilling and cultivating, and the ominous warning about safety has left many wanting to know more about the risks - I've been repeatedly asked if it will be included in next months index, and if I know more. So, my loyal readers, I have undertaken this task myself to give a full and accurate review on it for you!

The first thing to know is that if you have yet to shed your squeamishness about blood, this is not the job for you. Soulsteel is forged from the blood of our enemies - it's a poor copy of our famed Gravebronze. And for those who haven't read my Konstantinos's gossip collection - News from the Blood Cannibal War (cost 3 CP), a recent great victory has left the clan swimming in Blood Cannibal blood for soulsteel production. (more details in the linked article!). Part of your duties is simply manual labour - the blood has been shipped to us in small Qi-Preserving Vials, and the first stage of any shift is painstaking emptying thousands of the things into large vats, then washing out and recapping the lot (points will be deducted for breakages, clumsy cultivators be warned). But if this is all the work involved, it would not pay so well.

If that all goes well, the next step it to feed and monitor the Ghost-Purification-Arrays. You probably need about 10 cheme of Qi Storage for this, so this isn't a suitable job until you've been cultivating for about a year - but you know your limits best. The main thing about this is that it is Boring. Only a tiny amount of Qi is needed to feed the arrays, but you have to power it in a constant flow. You will just be standing there, watching a bubbling pool of blood, for 6 hours as you constantly sustain a Qi flow. Good practice if you need it, but if you get distracted and ruin a batch with improper Qi flows, there goes your payment for the shift.

And there are plenty of distractions. You may wonder what these Ghost-Purification-Arrays are being used on blood - not exactly where you'd expect the to be deployed. But Qi-blood for Soulsteel needs to be purified before the forging process can begin, because otherwise we risk the ghosts of the clans enemies being infused into our soulsteel weapons and armour. The problem that these ghosts have to go somewhere and while you power the arrays the ghosts of dead blood cannibals are slowly stripped from their blood. This is about as unpleasant experience as it sounds - the shrieks of blood cannibal ghosts are not pleasant things to listen to as they are separated from their blood (The ghosts themselves are captured by separate arrays in the roof, but that's not our concern right now)

While this is unpleasant stuff, is it not yet dangerous. There is a risk, however, that one of the blood cannibals whose blood you're processing has some kind of blood-consuming art, and will be able to start rebuilding their body in the vats. You are, thankfully, not expected to deal with such a risk at 1st Heavenstage - there is a nearby alarm to activate and call down the Legate if you spot this happening, but I personally don't want to find out if the Legate's response time is faster than the cannibals. There was quite a few nervous moments when watching the churning blood while powering the Ghost-Purification-Array when pulling the alarm was considered, but thankfully this was not needed. During the shift there was what was presumably such a alarm in a nearby foundry hall, but whether that lead to any causalities is unknown.

Still, once that stage was done it was a simple matter of moving the finished vats to another section of the Foundry - presumably where they infuse the blood into soulsteel - and collecting the pay on the way out. Payment was prompt, and the Legate in charge did not seem overly inclined to find deductions to my pay. Depending on your temperament and patience it could be a profitable source of Contribution points, but I'd not put this in the Tier-one jobs category - given that it's not suitable for everyone but otherwise worthwhile, I'm classing it as Tier-two. Expect a listing in next months Economic Analysis, if the job remains that long.

If you've enjoyed this review and found it informative, please check out my other material, such as Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - Job Review - Mess Hall Cook (Cost 2 CP) or Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - Job Review - Tall Wheat Fields Auditor (Cost 3 CP) For a full overview of tasks available to the 1st Heavenstage, you can also checkout Konstantinos's Guide to the Dawn Fortress - An Economic Analysis of Tasks in the Dawn Fortress - Eukleios, 6531 (cost 5 CP)

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Thank you for your use of the Contribution Points Board. Please note basic training is in twelve hours, fourty-three minutes. Missing training or being late comes with a commensurate penalty. You are presently twenty minutes from the training site. Given your most recent rest was 1 hour ago, there is a recommended job for you to do - Priority - The Soulsteel forges require assistance to handle the influx of material from the Blood Cannibal War. Current wages are 5 points an hour, minimum 10-hour shifts at once. Safety not guaranteed. Accept?

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The shift supervisor has been informed. Please report to Foundry hall 17 in thirty-six minutes. You are twenty-seven minutes from Foundry Hall 17, so it is recommended you leave now.

Tagging @ReaderOfFate @Humbaba - can I get a LST please?
 
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Aurelius Mancinus
Fate: Aurelius has had the poorest luck, still recovering, still weak. Unable to break through a single Heavenstage, his peers heap scorn upon him.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 1st Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 22 (+1)
Health: Wounded --> Lightly Wounded
I saw this and wondered how a 1st stage survived this long unable to break through?
Also a lot of dead this turn so far
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 28 - [Turn 6] [Journey to Qiguai 1: Departures]
So last omake I said that I was going to come back to this later, but I got inspired and decided to do it now. First part of Antonius' journey through Qiguai and his eventual fate there. Also, threadmark please!

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 28
[Turn 6]
[Journey to Qiguai 1: Departures]

Viewpoint: Corvina Taurus

While the ambience of Pleuron was never quiet, it always had a different feel during the day. As the waycastle woke and it's residents began to attend to their lives, the qi in the air was filled with a feeling of activity. To most, it was barely remarkable but to Corvina, who was attuned to these things it was filled with meaning.

It called to the bronze within her and urged her to join the metaphorical march of legion boots. It would be so easy to get lost in the rhythm of the city, just attend to her duties and forget about any worries that she might have.

But she couldn't today.

That irritated her.

She tried to ignore the feeling as she instead focused on their journey to the Qiguai Secret Realm. In her mind's eye, it seemed like a treacherous path over a bottomless chasm with the lure of gold on the other side. A single mis-step and they would fall to their deaths but if they could traverse it successfully…

She shook her head, trying to keep herself from being lost in the future. Instead she took a moment to look at what was in front of her.

The snail-back caravan that would carry them through the first part of their journey. Owned by an enterprising legionnaire, it would start from Pleuron to travel deeper into clan territory and then turn towards the Shimmering Soup Sect's territories.

Once there, they could utilise the tickets that Yahwen had to take a spot on one of the Airships heading over the Yuan Mountains and it would take them all the way to the Qiguai Clan Doorway.

There were a few places she could see where they would run into issues. This was only the second pass for this particular caravan and they could encounter a difficulty on the road. The tickets that Yahwen had were won through a competition and it was entirely likely that the original owners might make trouble.

Corvina had left most of these preparations to Antonius and Xiao Yingzi. She had her own preparations and it had also served to give her a sense of how both Antonius and Xiao Yingzi operated, though more so the latter than the former.

They were both talented, but incredibly young. Antonius was incredibly powerful and capable enough, but he lacked the polish that one in his level of cultivation would usually have. That couldn't be helped with his age.

But it was Xiao Yingzi who had surprised her. She took in instructions like a sponge and always sought to exceed expectations. When Corvina had mentioned her concerns to the girl, she had answered with several fall-back plans. Antonius had spared no effort on the preparation of course, but Xiao Yingzi's nature perhaps lent itself well to things of this nature. Every eventuality had been prepared for as much as it could be.

They had also taken enough time to train together, so they were familiar enough with each other that they wouldn't get in each other's way. They had done everything that they conceivably could and quite frankly, she felt like the odds were in their favor.

Still, she couldn't shake this feeling of irritation.

She spared a moment to glance at her companions. Xao Yingzi was studying the remnants of the Muyi Tree while her shadow stretched out like a trunk. Yahwen and Antonius were both lost in thought as they waited for the caravan to finish it's final preparations.

She sighed to herself.

She hadn't missed this part of being a Seer. It was exhilarating to have that constant sense of doom that followed their clan to be finally lifted after the trials but the Secret Realm brought out a similar feeling.

All she could do was prepare and hope that she was ready.

She closed her eyes, not for the first time since morning and focused on her storage rings. A mental vault opened in her mind and she could peruse everything that the rings contained. Slowly, she began to go over everything that she had prepared.

She had medicines of various types. Weapons should any of theirs be lost or broken. She had countermeasures for all of the known creatures they could encounter and spare tents, water, food and other things of that type in case they faced more environmental danger. If all else failed, an abundance of spirit stones would ensure that they had the power to face any danger.

She had divination equipment and protective arrays to guard them if they camped anywhere or simply needed to fight in prepared ground. Lots of bronze to make sure that she could always make use of her family arts. She took a breath and turned her mind from the ring and turned instead to her own self.

Her armor had just been refurbished and she had prepared new weapons. Her sword was there in case she got into melee and she had a bronze string running across her body in order to increase her durability however slightly while serving as a weapon in a pinch. She also had a bow if she needed to fight from range and it would help her deliver bronze arrows compatible with her family arts.

She was prepared. So well prepared. But she knew from experience that it was always the one thing she missed that was needed.

That irritated her so much.


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Viewpoint: Yahwen

She had been on the road for as long as she could remember. From the moment she left her home to journey the lands, she had wandered - never staying in any place longer than she had to. The roads across the Mortal Kingdoms were the closest things she had to home. It was the thing that she felt she had known the best after her swordsmanship.

So why was it that when she was returning to the road, it suddenly felt so very alien to her?

Her right hand reached to her belt, where it grasped only empty air. She tightened her fist and slowly brought it back to her side. After a moment's thought, she summoned her staff to her side. Something to hold on to made her feel better.

It was funny how the object most associated with her travels was what helped her relax. The bronze-capped bamboo staff was once a walking stick she won in the first duel she fought once she left her home. It was her instructor - a foundation establishment elder she defeated in a duel of skill.

It was a time when she was so sure of herself, despite having seen nothing of the world. She had set out in the hopes of creating her own personal style. Mantras were important, her once-teachers had said and so were themes. She decided to pick the first thing she found interesting in her journey.

It was the distant drifting clouds.

Be the cloud that drifts over all untouched. Her younger self had devised. She sighed at the sheer arrogance of a girl in the first heavenstage considering herself untouchable. The mantra had helped her steel her mind as she made her way over through the Divided Kingdoms.

Her mantras were supposed to center her but they didn't work now, they hadn't since she had put away her sword. She knew herself enough now to realise that it wasn't the clouds that had centred her, but the familiar weight of the steel in her hand that gave her comfort.

She had thought that she had gotten over her dependence but now that she was leaving the familiar surroundings of Pleuron, her hands itched once more to grasp steel.

She took a moment to adjust her grip on her staff.

Her single-minded devotion had nearly gotten her killed. She would have starved by the side of the road if not for the kindness of a stranger who fed her and brought her to the Golden Devil Clan.

A home really was a strange thing.

Pleuron was never meant to be one. It was just a place to stay while her rescuer performed the duties that he was hired by the clan to do.

She was never really welcome. Pleuron was always hostile to outsiders and that was before it was broken by invaders. But they were a fair folk and once she was granted the rights of an auxiliary, they were happy to give her fair pay for her work.

She'd gotten a place to live, steady food and she'd even made some friends.

When was the last time she had friends?

She hadn't achieved anything here. She hadn't touched her sword, she had barely cultivated and the next realm was further than ever. By now, she had planned to have been in foundation establishment yet that part of her that pushed her forward was almost quiet there.

She was… strangely enough… content.

Now that she travelled to the Qiguai Great Realm, she couldn't help but wonder what was the point. She abandoned swordsmanship already. Her chance at greatness. She had originally hoped to find something new there… but she was already happy.

So… what was the point?

As her hands itched, she wondered why she would want to go through all of that again instead of just turning back, heading to her room and getting some sleep?

Her eyes fell upon the friends that she had made here. Antonius - young and driven to save his dying family. Xiao Yingzi - so eager to prove herself and even willing to die trying. Corvina Taurus - so easily annoyed but still willing to stick by you.

Really, it was because they were leaving and she wasn't sure how much Pleuron would be home if they weren't there to lighten her day. If her home was hitting the roads, she might as well accompany it.

Besides, she couldn't very well leave them to fend for themselves, could she?


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Viewpoint: Xiao Yingzi

Once there lived a hero of their clan. They had no family save a spirit beast who was their only companion. They were a loyal legionnaire who had even sacrificed their emotions in order to better serve the clan. They had even gone so far as to sacrifice their very life in order to grant a miracle for the ideal they served.

This was the story of Xiao Yi, one of the fallen heroes of the clan. In front of Pleuron stood the Muyi Tree. - the remains of the hero Xiao Yi who had guarded the waycastle from its enemies with seven duels in seven days. Then he had sacrificed himself to create a tree that continued to guard the entrance to the waycastle even now.

Of course, it was no longer here. Barely years ago, it ripped itself from the ground in order to protect a member of the clan who was threatened and though it called itself Jin Muyi, the rumours thereafter and the presence of Qing Yun, Xiao Yi's companion proved that the tree was the hero reborn.

Now all that remained of his presence were the cracks on the earth where he had ripped himself out. Once there were also the vines and the roots that had been left behind but they had been long since removed by enterprising legionnaires.

As she stared at the remains of the tree and waited for the caravan to be ready, Xiao Yingzi wondered what she should think of the man and his story. He had unknowingly influenced her life so strongly. There were so many connections and parallels between them.

She had seen his defence of Pleuron as a mortal and it was entirely possible that if he had let the gates fall, then she wouldn't be alive today to be of any use to the clan. Her entire operation was almost certainly inspired by his own condition, perhaps the Elder of Disciples testing whether his emotionlessness was what allowed his feats.

They also both had spirit beat companions, though hers was far more spiritual than his. They had both given up their emotions in service to the clan. They were both orphans who had chosen the clan as their new family. Even their names of all things were strangely similar.

She glanced at her shadow which had stretched towards the sun in defiance of convention. As if to mirror her own thoughts, it stretched thick like a trunk with it's end splitting into several branches. Every moment, it would deform in the light before shifting into a new variation of branches.

Much like her shadow was only able to mimic the shape, she was also different from the clan's hero. Different especially in one crucial aspect. Where she was weak, Jin Muyi was strong. Strong enough to guard her home for seven days against so many enemies and then to live to tell about it. Strong enough to make a difference. Strong enough to be irreplaceable.

In Qiguai, she could seek that same strength. The power to defend the clan and to prove herself a success like no other. She knew what kind of service she wanted to give the clan and finally, she was on the road to gain the power to give it.

She glanced at her seniors - all individuals who had greatly aided her journey so far, all individuals with incredible power and she gripped her spear tight in anticipation. She could do it. With them, she could truly do it.

She would show Elder Destacia that she was a success.


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Viewpoint: Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora

What is best in life?

Antonius had read those words before in the journals of a man he'd never actually met. His grandfather was someone who lived a hundred years ago, having passed away in the last trails but his words were still passed down in his family.

His grandfather's answer had been "Food to fill the stomach, mead to fill the heart and friends to fill the soul."

Antonius wasn't sure if that was the same answer as he would give. For one thing, he wasn't much of a drinker though he did want to try really drinking himself out one day. But he could certainly appreciate it's wisdom.

After all, weren't some of the best moments of his life spent trying out new food with his new-found friends? Well, one of them at least. Yahwen would appreciate new food as much as he could but Corvina preferred tried and tested flavors while Xiao Yingzi didn't particularly care.

He took a moment to glance at them, all busy with their own thoughts and preparations. He couldn't help but smile at how obvious they were.

Xiao Yingzi amusingly was hyping herself up while staring at the remains of the Muyi tree. Corvina was fretting as she always did when she wasn't distracted and Yahwen was just clearing her head as she sometimes needed to.

He was looking forward to introducing them to his parents once he got back.

As had become a habit, his hand went to the silver necklace under his armor. It had a silver scale that was the last weapon and keepsake that Yixuan Shan the Silver-finned pipefish had left him. Right next to it was a broken arrow-head made of jade that belonged to his mother and a simple bronze circle that belonged to his father.
Neither were as useful as the scale. The arrowhead was a piece of his mother's art. It required training from birth but he'd only started seriously training after he had begun cultivating. The bronze circle was just a medal that his father's legion gave out to those that performed well in some manner or the other.

But it helped center him.

It was like a piece of his parents was with him on his journey.

As their caravan called for them to board, Antonius glanced at his friends all with their own hopes and worries. Whatever happened, the Qiguai Secret Realm would change their life forever.

Of course, they would have to get there first.
 
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Xiuying Ten Jiang 15 - Cutting in the Secret Realm
Xiuying Ten Jiang 15 - Cutting in the Secret Realm

A month had passed since Xiuying had found, cooked, and eaten the Thousand-Year Spirit Wheat, jumping from the third heaven stage to the ninth in a single day. It had been difficult for Xiuying to adjust to her newfound power. Her strength had increased by more than five-fold and the small pond of qi within her had erupted into a large lake. She also felt much lighter in body and her movements were much quicker than before.

Unfortunately, the drawback of suddenly breaking through multiple small realms all at once was clear as Xiuying soon found that her control over her body had deteriorated greatly. Though the strength brought about by her now more powerful cultivation was substantial, Sword Law relied much more on skill than overt power and without proper control over her strength, Xiuying's combat capabilities were hampered greatly.

However, an unexpected boon to her predicament soon revealed itself when her master's gift, Meti's Sword Manual, began revealing more of its secrets in response to her reaching ninth heavenstage. New techniques, cultivation manuals for body, mind, and even the soul started appearing in the Sword Manual though most of them were beyond her current understanding. Lucky for Xiuying, there was even a training guide to help cultivators control sudden and unexpected gains in strength.

For several weeks, Xiuying threw herself into regaining proper control over her body. A lot of it consisted of a combination of physical conditioning, dexterity training, and zen meditation for some reason. Her meals were tripled in size to keep up with the tempering that her body was undergoing. She had broken enough utensils and dishes to make several piles as tall as her body. Her body and mind were pushed to the limits. She even started on the first minor exercise of the first path from something called the Twenty Five Purities Path, some kind of cultivation method for tempering the soul or something.

It was a rough month.

After having properly adapted to the power of the ninth heavenstage, Xiuying continued to pursue the other rumours that she had received when she was selling noodles. Though she did not find a bounty equal to that of the Thousand-year Spirit Wheat, Xiuying did find many herbs and roots that were useful for many pills and thus useful for payment when it was time to leave the Secret Realm. As the deadline approached, Xiuying decided to return to the encampment. Though there were still rumours and places to check out, they were too far away or simply too troublesome to follow up on.

Along the way back to the encampment, however, Xiuying found something rather peculiar. The path she was taking was one of the more used routes that many took when travelling to the encampment. As such, there were always a dozen or so fellow travellers that were headed in the same general direction. However, no one seemed to notice the presence of what appeared to be a floating metal fragment suspended in midair right in the middle of the road.

No-one except Xiuying.

Xiuying was confused. What was this mysterious object only she seemed to be able to sense?

Curiosity getting the better of her, Xiuying moved closer to the strange object. Once she was close enough, Xiuying frowned when she recognised the object to be a broken-off tip of what was likely a sword. However, before Xiuying could wonder about why and how a sword fragment was floating on its own that only she could see, it suddenly flew straight towards her and entered her head. For a moment, Xiuying thought she'd been killed before realising that she was still alive. A metal fragment from a sword had not pierced her head and ended her life.

Instead, Xiuying could feel some strange energy enter her upper dantian. The moment the energy entered her dantian, Xiuying was assaulted by strange vague memories and thoughts that did not belong to her, and yet they felt all so familiar.

Assuming the lotus position, Xiuying focused on properly absorbing whatever that strange energy was and integrating it into her dantian. As the energy fused with her upper dantian, the foreign memories as well as knowledge became more clear.

"I understand Master. This one has been straying from the path of Sword Law." Xiuying now understood what had happened. Thanks to obtaining treasures that only a noodle chef could truly appreciate, Xiuying had become less devoted to her pursuit of the beautiful cut that she had strived to one day replicate and surpass. Instead of sharpening her own skill in cutting, Xiuying had gone off that path to seek out better noodles. Though she had maintained her level of swordsmanship, her blade of want that was the essence of Sword Law had lost some of the sharpness it once had.

No doubt her master must have sensed this deviation from the path of Sword Law and thus sent forth a fragment of sword intent, a manifestation of his own devotion towards the principal art of cutting, to her location to guide her once more. Though fragmented, the memories that her master had bestowed upon her were those of many moments where the first precept of Sword Law, "There is no such thing as a sword" rang true.

A scarred swordsman who had lost their arms, turning defeat into victory by cutting their opponent in two with a single petal of a cherry blossom clenched between their teeth.

A man who had mastered a sword-style that used no sword, destroying the masterpieces of a legendary swordsmith in honour of the one they loved.

A vagrant who carried with him a collection of legendary swords of all kinds and yet fought with only a wooden painted stick and his own life on the line.

A fat swordswoman cutting down an angel and everything behind it with a sword that had a broken blade but nonetheless had a very long cutting edge.

So many memories and swordsman that her master had once bore witness to and in many cases had fought against filled her mind before blurring together until only the essence of the lesson that her master sought to teach her remained.

Getting up from where she had been sitting, Xiuying turned her eyes to a tree by the road. All thoughts receded from Xiuying as her body was suffused with her will. Instead of drawing her sword though, Xiuying brought forth her desire to cut to the fore. Without a single movement, without uttering a single sound, Xiuying's blade of want was made manifest for but a single moment.

The tree branch she'd been focused on fell to the ground, cut cleanly from the tree it had grown from.

The moment Xiuying's mind returned, she gasped for air as she fell to her knees, sweat pouring profusely from her scalp.

To cut with no sword is not an easy feat to achieve, even among other sword cultivators. To cut with but one's intent, especially without the use of qi, was something that should have been beyond all but the greatest swordmasters.

With her master's guidance, however, Xiuying had succeeded in cutting without a blade save for one of want. Doing so, however, had mentally exhausted Xiuying greatly. At her current level of comprehension, it was not something she could do on the fly or sparingly. Still, Xiuying's path had been reaffirmed. The path she sought out was not that of noodles but of cutting.

Xiuying would need to get back to raising her cutting skills up to scratch as well as continue comprehending the eighteen precepts of Sword Law but right now, Xiuying was happy that her master, despite their distance, was still looking out for her.

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"Achoo!"

"Bless you, Jiang"

"Thank you, Xiaolu"

"Are you feeling well my friend?"

"I'm alright...Someone must be talking about me behind my back."

"Hmm, considering that the other night at your family reunion you had gotten dead drunk and was throwing out sword intent all over the place, I wouldn't be surprised if some unsavoury character affected by your sword intent was, excuse my language, talking shit about you."

"Urgh, don't remind me. And you don't have to worry about anything. My sword intent is useless to everyone except fellow Sword Law practitioners and I know for a fact that my seniors are nowhere near here. My Sword intent will just dissipate eventually and no-one will be the wiser."

"Your sister Xex was at the reunion. And your Sword Intent can still cut regardless of whether someone can make use of it or not."

"Ah crap...Okay so Xex might have accidentally opened some rift in time and space and my sword intent ended up somewhere weird. Not my problem...It is Future Jiang's problem."

"How irresponsible...is what I want to say but you are right. Bet one such as yourself must remember that karma may come unexpectedly."

"Eh, what's the worst that could happen?"

"..."

"...Shit."

"Jiang you idiot. You know full well that challenging the heavens like that will bring down misfortune upon you...and me by extension!"

"...I'm not here!"

"...Jiang, you are not your father."
 
Adhoc vote count started by TheCount on Mar 25, 2021 at 9:50 AM, finished with 87 posts and 31 votes.

Just for the sake of clarity as a lot of omake came while the vote is still ongoing.
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 29 - [Journey to Qiguai 2: The Journey Begins]
Not completely sure if this works, but it's late and the more I write the more it grows. It's already divided into two mitosis-style. I need to post it before it grows anymore.

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 29
[Turn 6]
[Journey to Qiguai 2: The Journey Begins]


After the recent trials, the clan's administration was gutted and many of the centurions were left picking up the pieces of their fallen legates. Many also took the opportunity to bring their own unique spins on the niches required by the clan and the result of one of those was the Snail-Back Caravan.

Meant to be a better alternative to walking to Mogui City, the caravans were drawn by a walk of Marathon Snails. As the name implied, the giant snails could maintain their speed for months at a time unlike what the mortal creatures would imply, they were incredibly fast - capable of matching the pace of an average cultivator in the ninth heavenstage.

For clan cultivators who were slowed by the Blood of Bronze, the snails could travel both faster and longer. They could be easily guided by the leading alpha who was bonded to the centurion in charge of this endeavour, making it fairly ideal for the journey.

Of course, it was the caravan's first trip along such a long route and it would head out of direct clan controlled territory. That was probably why they had chosen to make the trip to Mogui City at this particular time. With many heading to Qiguai, they would have many powerful cultivators willing to lend a hand in case of danger.

Antonius had already taken a look at the wagon assigned to him and the snail who's back it was built on. He'd been assured by the junior guiding him that the room would be steady regardless of terrain (barring steep inclines) and he wouldn't have to pay any mind to the creature but he still couldn't help but keep an eye on it as it… mostly stood there not doing anything worth mentioning.

After a few moments of watching the creature carefully, he decided to go bother one of the others. He didn't really need to unpack or anything given their spatial rings but he knew that the others still preferred to set up their own space.

Corvina had probably already begun securing the place and setting up whatever she needed for divination. Xiao Yingzi also required a particular ambiance for her own cultivation art and he wouldn't be surprised if she had set up traps of her own when she had taken Corvina as something of a role-model in that regard.

He had no intention of stumbling upon anything either of them had come up with, so both of them were out. So in the end, Yahwen was the only one left. Knowing her, she was putting up all the things she had collected in her time in the clan. A lot of the stuff she found was something only she found interesting, but she had a few gems.

Her wagon was right behind him on the caravan train and was basically the same as his. They were designed so that it was hard to sense what was going on inside and he still wasn't sure if it worked the other way around so he knocked to let her know that he was there.

"Antonius. Come on in." Yahwen sounded distracted as he entered and the first thing he saw after entering was her bent over on the floor, scribbling something with chalk on the ground. When she didn't react to him immediately, he let her work instead looking at the room around him.

She certainly claimed it as her own, he thought to himself with a smile. The room was rather small as rooms went but it was still big enough for a single cultivator to live comfortably in but hers was already feeling constrained.

It was basically filled with junk that she had taken out for whatever reason. The desk was filled with a stack of the instant noodles he had once recommended to her and just next to them he saw a container she had bought off an array student that purified water.

She'd been buying a lot of things from the array experts rebuilding Pleuron's defences but most of them were less than useful - like the torch that was lying on Yahwen's bed. When lit, it burned with a black light that supposedly revealed hidden things but so far it was just a normal, if strangely colored light.

The only clear space was where Yahwen was working and Antonius bent down to get a closer look at what she was doing. "You do realise that you were probably ripped off for like half of this stuff," He commented once he was on her level.

"Weren't you the one who introduced me to arrays?" She idly asked, without looking up from her work. Antonius looked closer to see her drawing a large circle with some odd symbols along its circumference.

"I just shared noodles with a fellow noodle lover," He replied with a smile. "I blame Corvina for introducing you to array makers. She's a seer so she knew exactly what she was doing."

She paused in her efforts and looked up at him with a frown. "Can you think of any way to blame Xiao Yingzi?"

Antonius thought for a second and shook his head. "No, actually. Nothing plausible."

"Huh," She considered it for a second more before returning to her work.

Antonius studied her circle for a few seconds before finally realised he had no idea what he was looking at. "Some kind of array?" He finally asked.

"Kinda. It's a dueling circle for matches where you can go out of bounds.," She replied, still working. "Mostly sumo but also some forms of blade duels like quick-draw."

"What's sumo?"

"Basically two men trying to push each other out of a circle. It started as an axe clan thing but the dragons really loved it and made it super-formal."

"Oh we have something like that for wrestling." He crossed his legs to get more comfortable and then turned back to her. "So why are you making that in here?"

She didn't answer right away, instead taking the time to add a few final touches to the ring before turning to him and sitting across him. "Take a look at this." She reached out to some of the things on her bed and handed him a top.

"What does this do?" He turned it around a few times before giving it a spin. It spun pretty fast, but that was more to do with his strength than any virtue of the top itself.

She gave him an annoyed look before picking it up and putting it on her palm. "Like this," She replied, holding her hands up and Antonius looked at it curiously.

At first nothing happened and then he noticed Yahwen channelling a small amount of qi from her palm. The top jumped to a point and slowly began to spin staying in her palm and moving in a deliberate eight.

"How are you controlling that?" Antonius asked curiously. He extended his hand towards hers and then looked at her expectantly.

"Sure, here." Her hand didn't even twitch as the top jumped from her palm to his. It landed with a soft impact before quickly running out of power. He copied Yahwen and channeled his qi outwards from his palm and sure enough, it began to spin again.

It spun as it drank from the qi radiating from his body but refused to move from its initial position. All he got from it was a tickling sensation. How did she control it? As soon as the thought came to his mind, the top jumped from his hand before smashing into the wall.

He looked to Yahwen in confusion and noted her smirk. "What was that?"

"You have to think at it," She replied, grinning as she retrieved the top. "You know how you do that intent thing in battle? Kinda like that."

He raised an eyebrow and took it again. This time he deliberately focused on how he wanted the top to move and sure enough it formed a triangle in his palm. He willed it to stop and almost immediately, it froze and fell to the side.

"That's interesting enough." He agreed, handing it back to her. "Why the circle then? Are you trying to test how it would last in purely ambient qi?"

She blinks and turns to him with a startling lack of comprehension. "What?"

"You know, like… this is the desert... " He raised his hands to illustrate before he realised he couldn't think of how to illustrate this. "My first thought was how it would function in the plains which already have their own ambient qi. I thought you were testing that."

She shook her head.

"Right. So what were you thinking of?"

She gave him a grin and with a flourish she held up her hands, both having a top spinning on them. "I had an idea for a game we could play." She answered and paused.

"What game did you want to play?" He prodded with a smile.

The tops jumping from her hand as he asked and she turned to him with deliberate flair. As the tops clashed in the air, she answered. "Sumo Top!"

He raised his eyebrow as one of the tops spinning away in his direction. "I have no idea what that means," He replied honestly, as he caught the top and let it ground out it's speed in his hardened palm.

She gave him a look of childish dismay.

"Tops, dueling circle, first top to get thrown outside loses?" He guessed after a moment's thought.

"Yes, that." She said, pointing at him with the chalk to emphasize her point. "We'll be doing that but with tops! Sumo Top!"

"Sumo Top." Antonius repeated as he studied the top in his hands. "So we'd be channeling qi into the tops and trying to push the other person's top out. Would having more qi translate into more power?"

"Nah, the tops have a top speed." She paused here for a moment and he gave her a slight smile. "A mortal could probably reach it. Not really an effort for us."

"So it'd be a game of control and strategy then." Antonius mused. Yahwen's eyes widened as she realised that. "So have you tried the circle out? "

"Nah, I'm doing it from memory." She replied, looking at the ring with a frown. "I still need to figure out how to make it work."

"Maybe ask Corvina?"

As if in response, there was a knock on the door and he felt the presence of two familiar auras right outside. Yahwen grinned. "I'll do that."

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"I win. Again."

Corvina's voice came from above them, having claimed the bed as a prize during one of the several games they had played. The ring array had been replaced with one of legion design and several candles had been placed around it in order to prevent Xiao Yingzi's shadow from interfering.

"Why do you always win?" Yahwen complained from the opposite side of the circle. At some point, she had decided to lie upside down, with her legs leaning on the wall and her head resting on crossed hands. "We've played several times and you just keep winning."

Corvina just gave her a smug smile. "Who knows? It's not like I'm a seer with a speciality in reading and manipulating intent. That would be absurd."

Yahwen stuck her tongue out in response.

"You know, that makes sense." Antonius commented as he looked between the top in his hand and Corvina's top still spinning in the ring. "You basically react to external qi like the tops, right?"

"Yeah, I can be pretty sensitive to those." She agreed, giving him a cautious look.

"So you can basically get drunk on qi?" Yahwen asked with a grin.

"Of course not," Corvina scoffed.

"Definitely." Antonius answered, grinning back. Corvina turned to him with a scowl. "You should have seen her this one time. She was basically zen and couldn't stop smiling."

"Really?" In second, Corvina was sitting upright and looking at him with interest. "What happened?"

"So this was right after the trials-"

"Antonius, you do understand we share an apartment, yes?" Corvina voice cut in, smooth as silk. He glanced at her and grinned at the flat look she was giving him. Yahwen looked between them with interest while Xiao Yingzi stared between all three of them with a frown.

"Yes, what about it?" He said, smirking at her. She deflated as she realised he was deliberately annoying her.

"Just checking." She replied, this time with a sweet smile. "How about we play another game then? Somewhere one of you guys can win, yeah?"

Antonius smiled back, but let it go. "Sure, why not? What do you think?" He asked, turning to Xiao Yingzi.

Yahwen slumped as she realised the story wasn't being told and everyone turned to Xiao Yingzi, who froze at the sudden attention. Even her shadow retreated from it's attempt at breaching the sumo ring and retreated under her. "We could play cards?" She answered after a moment.

That caused the rest of the group to pause. "Do we have cards?" Antonius asked out loud, turning to Yahwen who would be the most likely one of them to collect useless useful stuff.

"Hey, don't look at me." She points at Corvina. "Isn't she the one who actually has the most stuff?"

"My things are actually useful," Corvina replied automatically but her eyes were distant, her attention on her spatial ring's inventory. Then she finally looked back at them. "I don't think I have any playing cards, but!" She held up a finger. "I do have cards for divination if you're up for a reading."

"Ooh." Yahwen shuffled away from Antonius and moved towards her. "Do me first."

Corvina ignored her and instead focused on Xiao Yingzi. "Well?"

"Oi."

Xiao Yingzi turned to Corvina with a thoughtful expression. "Will this be an accurate prediction, Sister Corvina?"

"Oi."

Corvina shrugged and summoned a deck of cards in her hand. "Probably not. I never really use them and reading the future is unreliable as it is."

"I see," Xiao Yingzi replied, dismayed as the seer began shuffling her hand. "Knowing the future would have been useful."

"Oiiii."

Corvina flinched and turned to Yahwen with an accusing look. "You poked me."

"No, I didn't." Yahwen replied, holding up her hands as an expression of innocence.

"With your qi." She clarified with a glare.

"Can you prove it?"

"Well… no." Corvina frowned and looked at her for a moment.

"Now you're doing your aura-thing on me." Yahwen noted with a smirk. She leaned back. "It's not going to bother me, you know."

Antonius looked between them and laughed. "Aren't you two supposed to be the older and wiser ones?" Corvina turned her glare on him and Yahwen stuck her tongue out at him. "Shall we return to the reading? I'm curious about mine too."

"Yes, why not?" Corvina replied with a huff. "But I'm reading Xiao Yingzi's first."

"Sure," He agreed with a grin and Xiao Yingzi shuffled forward to get a look at her cards.

"You don't need me to sit in front of her or channel qi or something?" Yahwen asked Corvina curiously as she began her reading.

"I could do that," Corvina agreed with a smirk before settling in even more comfortably on the bed. "But that would mean getting out of bed."

Yahwen just shrugged in response and craned her neck to try and get a better look at the cards being dealt. "What'd she get?"

Corvina held up palm to tell her to wait as she placed the last card on the bed. Then she took a second to read the result before frowning. "I'm… not sure. Hold on."

Corvina summoned a book from her storage ring and began to page through it cautiously. Xiao Yingzi stood up and walked behind Corvina to take a look while Antonius leaned in close. Yahwen frowned as she found the sight of the reading cut off from her.

After a moment, the seer turned towards Xiao Yingzi. "Dog shit luck." She read out loud, her fingers tracing the words in the book.

"What does that mean?" Xiao Yingzi asked her with a frown.

"It sounds terrible." Antonius added, leaning closer to read the entry for himself.

"Lemme see." Yahwen said, pushing him aside and finally getting a look at the book.

Corvina shook her head. "It's complicated. Sort of an eye of the storm situation. Worse everyone else's luck, the better her luck becomes. More or less."

"That sounds weird," Antonius replied, shoving Yahwen back. "Doesn't that basically mean that her fate is left to chance?"

"Everyone's fate is left to chance technically," Corvina replied and then she turned to Xiao Yingzi with interest. "It does mean that some force is taking an active interest, even if that interest is a strange one."

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "I will keep that in mind for the future. Thank you for the reading, Senior Sister."

"Do mine now." Antonius cut in, easily ignoring Yahwen's attempt to push him now that he was prepared. "I'm curious to see how mine goes."

"Sure." She said and dealt the first card. Her forehead creased as she placed the second one and then she turned to look at the book again. When she placed the third card, her expression turned incredulous.

"Is something wrong?" Yahwen asked, cutting in from next to Xiao Yingzi where they had both made enough space for each other.

"Wait," Corvina replied, frowning. "I need to confirm this."

All three of them watched as she placed two more cards and then looked at the book again, before sighing and turning towards Antonius. "So what's the verdict?" He asked, leaning towards the book out of curiosity.

"See these cards?" She said, pointing at the first two cards on the bed. "They are the same as these." She pointed to the illustrations of the same cards in her book. At his look of confusion, she elaborated. "They are basically jokers. You don't really use them in a reading but the possibility exists that they can be shuffled in the deck to allow for particularly extreme fates."

"So either terrible or amazing then?" Yahwen said, leaning over to look at the book.

"Definitely amazing!" She exclaimed cheerfully, turning to Yahwen so quickly the latter flinched back. "I was worried when I saw the first joker, but the second pushed it to incredible territory. Stupendous territory."

Antonius grinned. "I'm pretty lucky then?"

He jerked back his head when she whirled on him. "Lucky? Do you have any idea how rare this is? This is the stuff you see for protagonists in stories. If you weren't - y'know" She raised her hand to indicate her skin."I'd almost say you were favored by heaven. This much good fortune doesn't come by so easily!"

"Really?" He asked, heart feeling strangely lighter. Then he shook his head. "Let's not let it get to our heads. Like you said Corvina, cards are unreliable and even if they weren't, no future is inevitable."

Corvina looks at him and slowly nods. "You're right. I shouldn't get carried away." She turns around and moves to get out of the bed. "I think I need a break. I'll be heading back to mine."

Antonius nodded and got up. "Then I'll be going too. The day was pretty tiring."

Xiao Yingzi looked between them and then nodded, getting up as well. "May I borrow that book, Senior Sister?"

Corvina nodded at her and smiled, moving to leave the room as Yahwen caught her by her sleeve. "Wait! What about my reading?"

Corvina considered Yahwen for a moment and slowly pulled her sleeve from her grasp.

"Future is hazy, ask again later."

Then before anyone could react, she rushed out the door.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 30 - [Turn 6] - [Snail Tales 1: The Pit Scorpion]
Wanted a break from writing character pieces. This is mostly just what I felt might be fun to write.

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 30
[Turn 6]
[Snail Tales 1: The Pit Scorpion]

The sun - burning so hot, it would dry out a corpse in hours and burn the mind through the eyelids if it was directly seen. The wind - so strong, blowing without resistance through the desert with strength enough to lift a man into heaven. Finally the sands, pulled along into an ever-shifting ocean of ditches and dunes.

It was all so dreary.

The only thing out of place was the sand ascending in the distance, not from some sand-storm but the dust of the desert kicked up through the tread of the caravan snails. Antonius paused to gauge the distance - at least an hour away. Even if they passed him by, he was sure he would be able to catch up.

But, he thought as he took in the scenery. What was the point?

An endless ecosystem spiraled out in front of him. Cacti reach into the depths of the earth to leech power from spirit stones buried underneath. Beasts fed upon the cacti and in turn were fed upon by their predators. It was a monotonous cycle only broken by the rare cactus that fed upon an unsuspecting beast or the scavengers eating from a desiccated corpse.

If Yahwen had decided to accompany him today, perhaps he might have been entertained by showing her all the wonders of the desert. If Xiao Yingzi could keep up with him, he might have enjoyed just teasing his junior and getting her unique view of the environment. Hell, he might have happily carried her or Corvina but the former was busy and latter would rather not suffer the indignity.

The caravans were great for what they were, but he needed to get out once in a while and get some time to himself. But all there was to see outside of it was just the desert. He'd been hoping to spot something interesting but this patch of the desert had far too much desert. Antonius grew up in the desert. He didn't need to see more of it.

This unrelenting familiarity was probably the only reason he noticed the poison-dripping stinger lashing out at him. It cracked through the air like a whip, far faster than he could have dodged if he wasn't expecting it. As it was, he could spend a fleeting moment in admiration of its motion before he moved out of its reach.

As he leapt back, he focused on the rest of its body and tried to figure out the exact nature of the creature that just attacked him. Barely a presence, but that was hardly unique. Almost every successful ambush predator had learnt to suppress their qi. Strength and speed comparable to a fifth heavenstage cultivator. The only advantage was surprise.

He doubted that he needed to step back. His own physiology could easily counter any venom of that caliber. He amended that statement when he noticed a scorpion twice his size emerge from where he had stood, it's color barely distinct from the sand around it. Specifically, he focused on the back-tipped grey mandibles that marked it as the Grey Pit Scorpion.

A common target for hunters in Pleuron, Xiao Yingzi had hunted a few of these during the time he had known her. The Pit Scorpion had notoriously dangerous poison, effective even at foundation establishment but it's only other advantage was stealth. That made the poison more of a prize among those who could easily find it.

He landed a short distance away and watched as the creature shuddered, shaking the sand from its body like a dog. They studied each other for a moment, the creature's beady black eyes focused on him, it's claws snapping silently and it's stinger swaying menacingly.

Antonius' eyes followed the stinger, measuring its size and attempting to gauge its reach. That was really the only thing fast enough to pierce him and cause him concern. For higher realm cultivators, the poison was more of a paralytic but he was certain he would die if it entered his body.

He felt like he was out of it's range but the tail had twisted strangely when it had attempted to strike him. It was possible it could reach further than expected or even perform feints in order to get behind his guard. One could never fully account for the physiology of spirit beasts. It might be better to simply retreat. Coming to a decision, Antonius took a cautious step back.

Like lightning, the stinger struck.

In response, Antonius summoned the sea.

He stretched his arms out and touched his fingers, before spreading them apart. A burst of water ballooned out of the point where they met, deflecting the stinger with sheer tension as it grew like a bubble before finally, Antonius had stretched his hands as wide as they would go and let them fall, transitioning them into a push.

The bubble of water popped into a wave that tried to wash the scorpion away. The creature had retreated into its pit and used it as a brace to avoid being swept away. For a few moments, it struggled comically against the waves before they finally ceased.

Antonius considered it for a moment, wondering if it would leave him alone. Out of some suicidal insanity, the scorpion leapt towards him in an attempt to attack him once more. Instead, it was met by a more focused wave of watery force that met it mid-air before tossing it a fair distance away.

In defiance of sense, it scurried towards Antonius with determination in it's beady eyes. It kept close to the ground this time and maintained a grip that it likely hoped would ensure it did not get washed away.

He watched its advance with some bemusement but he also couldn't help but admire it's resolve. In the face of such resolve, what response could he give but return it? His face hardened as shifted into a true battle stance. Was this why the Will of Heaven struck those who rushed to meet it?

"Then if I must be challenged, then let my wrath be as that of heaven."

With those words uttered, he moved. A stamp on the ground to radiate force outward into the water that lay around him. Hands to the side and then up - water rising held up by nothing but his will as he they gathered more mass. His hands held still in front of him, palms facing towards each other. He surveyed the creature before him, already preparing for his attack. It had dug into the pit once more and braced for what was to come.

Like an emperor standing before a gladiatorial arena, my palms turned down.

Death.


The wave fell. It crashed into the earth, reminding the desert of sea that once fed the world.

It was as an ant before a hurricane, barely holding on with it's eight legs.

One leg got pushed aside. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six.

And the storm stopped.

The scorpion struggled to stand, it's determination unflagging before it's opposition.

But this time, I gave it no time to recover.

Another wave went forth, weaker than before but no less dangerous.

For the scorpion, unprepared and unbraced, it did what the tall waves could not.

It's grip shattered and it flipped over, carried by the current - my current.

It gripped the first piece of jutting stone it could find, but another wave crashed into it, cracking stone and all.

Every grip was broken. Every countermeasure washed away with sheer power. Wave after wave assaulted the creature, taking every inch and giving no quarter.

In the aftermath of the battle, Antonius stood alone in the desert sweating in the now humid air. The scorpion was washed away, dead or banished from his presence. He looked upon all he could survey and found it to be good.

Then he stood.

And realized he'd just gotten serious against a scorpion.

He closed his eyes and sighed, then wiped away the liquid on his face.

This was stupid.

He was going back to his room.
 
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Wei Feng 15 - Cultivator games
Wei Feng 15 - Cultivator games:

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What do cultivators do for fun?

Sparring might be the obvious answer. The righteous sects have grand tournaments where disciples can show off their skills (and risk "accidental" maiming). Practicing their crafts is another. Alchemist competitions of both the 'make the best quality pill from this specified recipe' and 'make the best pill you can with these ingredients' varieties are another frequent sight about the world.

Similar competitions happen for all manner of pursuits. From beast taming to spirit herb farming competitions to show off are a common sight all around the third sea.

But still, such are often matters of life and death. Though those who succeed on the path must flirt with such dangers almost constantly, sometimes even they may wish to relax occasionally.

Mortals hearing of cultivator games may dream of grand intrigues that topple kingdoms, of legendary swords clashing beneath a storm's rage. Such things do happen. What mortals do not dream of are games like qi ball, drop the goat or catch the goalpost.

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Wei Feng, famed phoenix of the immortal thirteen, was losing. Badly. He faced no less than a dozen opponents, well prepared on their home ground. He was losing his breath. He was losing his will to continue. Most of all, he was losing his dignity.

In his defence, catch the goalpost was not a very dignified game. Easy to set up? Yes. Fun? Usually. Dignified? Absolutely not.

Catch the goalpost had started out life as an evolution of mortal ball games played by low level cultivators. They had quickly discovered that having fixed goalpost had rendered such games absurdly simple with their new physiques. Players casually and constantly scored from the opposite side of the field.

First, they'd tried making the pitch bigger. It had sort of worked. A little. Until they tried introducing techniques into things. Stories of how catch the goalpost had been born varied, but the most commonly agreed upon was that during one of the absolutely chaotic melees that games tended to fall into, someone* had picked up the goal and run off with it in an effort to stop the other side from scoring.

From there two major variants had emerged: single post and two post. In single post variants a single goal was attached to a spirit beast, or a flying sword controlled by a neutral party, which the teams would then chase down. In two post matches, both teams started in control of their own goal and had to hunt down the other. In both cases, whoever caught the goal still had to get control of the ball and score an agreed upon number of points to finish the match.

This gave whichever team first lost control of a goal a chance to strike back before the match ended. Single post matches could have a surprising amount of strategy involved, such as ensuring the goal was only brought down in defensible areas. He'd been playing for about an hour against the team of 8th​ stages, chasing the goal (controlled by a legion centurion) winning handily on field goals despite being a single player against a dozen opponents. The advantage of being half again as strong as his opponents allowing him to score from significantly further away.

Unfortunately, he'd let his guard down retrieving the ball as the goal entered a valley between dunes. Five of his opponents had banded together, using earth and water techniques they'd turned the desert beneath him into a swamp, burying him up to his neck. Not something regeneration could help with, and while he was more than passable with water techniques, eroding through the qi holding the earth in place around him and loosening things enough to escape still cost him time. And the ball of course.

Worse, the other outsize half of the team had apparently managed separate the goal from the flying sword, bringing it down on the top of a dune with a commanding view around it. Meaning they had a perfect viewpoint from which to batter him with techniques if he tried to come after them.

He grinned. Sometimes there was no time for clever plans or techniques. Sometimes you just had to go for it.

He charged and was met by a blast of sand propelled by a wind technique. It battered at him, trying to take him from his feet, but Wei Feng had faced far stronger techniques without falling. He dug his feet deeper into the ground before blasting forwards in leaps and bounds. On his third leap he felt the ground suddenly give way beneath his right foot.

An earth technique. He swayed, transferring all his weight onto his left foot and pulling back his right as quickly as possible. It overbalanced him, but he pulled it into a half-roll, springing back up off his hands and resuming his sprint up the dune.

The wind technique picked up, sand almost blinding his eyes. The world grew darker as the sand cloud whipped about him. It grew suddenly even darker, and burst of qi against his spiritual senses was all the warning he got as one of his opponents came flying towards him, lent speed and concealment by the wind.

The exchange of blows is quick. A flurry of punches comes at him, the clansman aiming not to win but to delay. Unfortunately for him, Wei Feng has both power an experience on his side. Four exchanges in he overextends, and Wei Feng manages to get a grip on his arm. A heave, and the younger man goes tumbling down the dune.

He resumes the race, dodging lines of earth and wind. With one final leap he makes it to the top of the dune-

The whistle blows.

It is over.

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A few hours later he finds himself in the local tavern, toasting to the prowess of the Third Legion. Leicritus, the body cultivator who'd delayed him on the dune, was attempting to draw him into discussion of the relative merits of the Legion style when not fighting in ranks, while Calliphana, the water artist who'd helped trap him in a swamp, was asking questions about the way he'd used water qi to erode their control techniques so quickly.

He closed his eyes for a second and let the sounds wash over him. It was good to get a little relaxation now and again."

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*It was also a tradition for different path cultivators to claim that the first person to steal the goals was part of their path, with the most intense rivalries usually emerging between Body cultivators and Beast tamers.

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Just a fun little breather episode. This literally came to me after I saw someone mention moving the goalposts (in an argument) and I thought of what cultivator might be doing for fun. Just seemed fun to work out how cultivators would blow off steam. Not everyone can be a training/cultivating maniac after all.

I really don't know how this got to be over 1000 words long.
 
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Gaius Antonius Omake 17 - All Da Pillz
Gaius Antonius Omake #17: All Da Pillz

Despite often living through multiple centuries, and despite their goal ostensibly being to escape all earthly bounds and attain perfect immortality, Cultivators are often observed to be more childish than their years would suggest. This might be because of their brains being preserved in a young state hindering their emotional intelligence, or it might be because pursuing a Dao exaggerates certain aspects of one's personality. Either way, many cultivators are immature and given to bizarre hijinks. Case in point; in Gaius' apartment, there is a box of things that he never bothered to unpack but also doesn't want to throw out. Within is contained a small journal from his early twenties. If one were to crack it open, this is what they would find:

My name is Gaius Antonius. For reasons related to my own aptitude and long term goals, I have been told I use more drugs than the average Cultivator. At the behest of my friends, I will reluctantly rate every medicine, pill or elixir I take from now on, or until we all forget I'm doing this.

-First Grade Qi Replenishment Pill
Description: Small, flat, circular tablet with a sky blue color. Designed to aid in qi replenishment after heavy expenditure, taking more than one at a time is heavily discouraged.
Experience: Went down easily. My qi seemed to fill up faster than normal, but my muscles felt sore for an hour afterwards. From this, I can imagine what kind of thing might happen if I took more than one.
Rating: 7/10, did what it's supposed to do, nothing too fancy.

-Blood Replenishment Pill
Description: A spherical dark red pill about half an inch across. Designed to encourage rapid production of new blood to treat blood loss.
Experience: Made me very itchy, in a place that I definitely cannot scratch. I got a little bit too much blood back and had to get leech treatment for high blood pressure, so it's definitely not supposed to be taken unless you lose a lot of blood. 'Blood' no longer feels like a word.
Rating: 6/10, really useful for not dying, but very uncomfortable the whole way through.

-Impurity Purging Pill
Description: An oblong capsule filled with a smelly yellow powder. Designed to help those breaking through to a new Heavenstage by drawing impurities that would be expelled through the pores into the colon, where they are then expressed as bowel movements.
Experience: I'll give it this: the mess was definitely more localized. That is the only good thing I'll say about this pill; needless to say the experience was extremely painful, gave me an intestinal infection, and I will never touch it again.
Rating: 2/10, at least I didn't die.

-Channel-Paving Quicksilver Binding
Description: A complex compound of mercury, quicksilver and several other spiritual minerals, creating a viscous silver liquid which is incredibly expensive. It's meant for aiding in the proper healing of damaged meridians, though it can also help reshape deformed ones into a more optimal shape. It is administered by dipping the tip of an acupuncture needle in the substance and then piercing the meridian in question.
Experience: This stuff really does work like a charm! The meridian in question was one in my lower back which suffered severe damage when I was stabbed on a mission. Not only did it heal back to top form in two weeks, but I think it got a little better than before.
Rating: 10/10, Mercury really is the ultimate medicine.

-Mind-Expanding Elixir
Description: A dull green liquid that tastes bitter. Designed to induce a fugue state in which the senses are restricted and the mind is opened, to assist with closed-door cultivation.
Experience: Tasted bad but went down pretty easy. My cultivation that week didn't feel any different, I was just buzzed the whole time. Might be more effective for other people. It did let me see new colors, and taste them too, so that was fun.
Rating: 6/10, felt really nice but didn't do much for me.

-Bone-Knitting Salve
Description: A grey paste that numbs the skin wherever it touches. Designed to help minor fractures heal faster.
Experience: Did exactly as advertised, no side-effects, no lingering problems. Might have bad side-effects if overused.
Rating: 8/10, I'm gonna be using this a lot.

-Soul-Piercing Needle Pill
Description: A tiny, spherical red and yellow pill. Designed to help in opening one's meridians. Apparently a less extreme version of the more expensive and more dangerous Soul-Flaying Scourge Pill. I've been told that it will be painful, and using my qi for anything other than meridian-opening while the pill runs its course might cause meridian damage.
Experience: They weren't lying about the pain, wow that was intense. Still, I can't argue with the result; I avoided any bottlenecking whatsoever and am progressing through the Fifth Heavenstage at a smooth pace.
Rating: 6/10, very unpleasant, very effective.

-Cloudy Hydration Pill
Description: A capsule filled with blue and white powder. Designed to convert qi into water within a person's body, allowing a person to stay fully hydrated for three days.
Experience: So much piss. SO much piss. This thing works really well, but make sure you don't drink anything if you're already on one, because it really does saturate the body thoroughly. Really, this tells me I'm probably not drinking enough water normally.
Rating: 9/10, works like a charm.

-Meal-replacement Elixir
Description: A cloudy brown and red liquid that looks very unappetizing. Supposedly half a liter can replace two days' worth of nutrition.
Experience: Went down with great difficulty, and I had trouble keeping it down afterwards. I was sweaty, I had shakes, and the gas was pretty bad too. This thing isn't worth it, just pack rations.
Rating: 3/10, almost useless.

-Pain-Suppressing Lotion
Description: A white cream with orange flecks. Designed to numb pain without affecting any of the senses or reducing motor control
Experience: It worked... sort of. The aches and pians of physical training didn't bother me as much, but sometimes I would get little spikes of false signals. This stuff is good, I just think it needs to get some kinks worked out first.
Rating: 7/10, good for if you expect to get hit.

-Dimension-Travelling Elixir
Description: A black, smoky substance, a good deal thicker than water. Supposedly, drinking this will take you to another world, after which your perception is forever enhanced beyond the limits of normal humans.
Experience: It turns out, the guy who sold me this didn't mean that I would literally go to another world. It's been four days and it feels like my brain is rotating inside my skull. I will write no more of these terrible visions, it wouldn't do anyone any good to record them. This journal is over, from now on I'm only using new medicine when someone I trust vouches for it.
Rating: 1/10, I've seen things you people wouldn't believe.


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One more little omake at the last minute to add another thousand-something words. Ridiculously exotic medicines build on medieval medical logic are part and parcel of xianxia, and I wanted to do something with that. This was one of the first things I wrote for the backlog, and hopefully that doesn't mean it's too rough.

@Alectai @Humbaba @TehChron @BungieONI @ReaderOfFate Sorry for pinging so many people, just wanna make sure this gets threadmarked before the good seed fates are written.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 31 - [Turn 6] - [Journey to Qiguai 3: Stories and Meta-stories]
Tried something new at the end there. Hopefully, it turned out well.

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 31
[Turn 6]
[Journey to Qiguai 3: Stories and Meta-stories]

"It was at the border of their duchy where I finally faced their Duke in combat," Yahwen continued dramatically. "An ancient swordsman of foundation establishment, he towered above me in all aspects. With the embarrassment that I brought by defeating those under him, he had every motivation to slay me where I stood. Such was his rage, I could almost feel it radiating off of his aura."

"And how did you get out of that one?" Antonius asked her, sitting alongside Xiao Yingzi and Corvina as they all listened to her tell them stories.

"Good question!" She said, pointing at him with a nod. "How could our great heroine get out of this situation?"

"You challenged him to a duel of skill and he was forced to accept or lose face." Xiao Yingzi replied, causing Yahwen to blink.

"Exactly!" Yahwen agreed, recovering quickly. "The slightest excuse and my head could have been hewn from my body. But to strike me down would only make his shame greater! With utmost confidence in both her skills and the honor of her enemy, she challenged the man in an arena where she was certain she would win."

"Did you actually win?" Corvina asked sceptically.

Yahwen rubbed the back of her head sheepishly. "Somehow, yeah." She said, answering more normally.

"Traditional duels in the Divided Kingdoms attempt to eliminate the influence of cultivation by having both blademasters maintain the same slow pace." Xiao Yingzi noted. Corvina raised an eye at her interruption but just nodded along."Observers have described it as a synchronised dance of strike and counter-strike, ending when a warrior finally makes the wrong move."

Yahwen nodded and then drew herself up. "Our bodies moved to the rhythm of drums but our minds went from move to countermove, prediction and reaction already decided before the next beat of the drum."

"Wouldn't the one with higher cultivation still have an advantage?" Antonius interrupted, hand lightly resting upon the scale on his necklace. "They can think faster and so would have more time to strategize."

"'True skill is a thing of instinct'," Xiao Yingzi answered, her tone of one who was reciting a proverb. "'A true swordsman needs no thought between action and reaction.'"

Antonius stared at her for a second before turning to Yahwen. " That's pretty much word for word, the justification." She confirmed. "It's very much an expected part of the duel."

Antonius considers that for a moment. Then he turned to Xiao Yingzi with a furrowed brow. "While it's great that you are talking more, all of this knowledge sounds pretty obscure for a clan orphan. How'd you know about that?"

"You know, I'm curious about that as well." Corvina added and Yahwen also turned to her curiously.

"Oh." Xiao Yingzi looked at all of their faces before turning back to him. "I looked it up when I was researching the two of you."

He raised an eyebrow. "I assume this was around when we caught you sneaking on us. Still, that doesn't feel like knowledge you can get from a report. Did you look anywhere else?"

"Yes, I did." Xiao Yingzi confirmed. "I met some merchants from the Divided Kingdoms in Seven Trade Heaven's City who told me several stories in exchange for drinks."

"Huh." Antonius looked at her thoughtfully. "Looks like you've had your own interesting adventures."

"I've never actually been to that city," Yahwen thought out loud. "So people from my home are actually over there?"

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "It was the first place I looked since it was close to Pleuron."

"Small world," Corvina said, before turning back to Corvina. "So how did you win?"

Yahwen laughed. "I basically pissed him off. About an hour into the duel, my overconfidence annoyed him enough to commit where he shouldn't have. That gave me the opening to land the winning blow."

"I'm honestly surprised you made it through that alive." Corvina admitted.

"While initially it was only the two of us, the duel itself had witnesses from both our duchies - including my opponent's peers. Once the duel was declared everyone present was honor-bound to keep me alive and after I struck the winning blow, my own people were more than happy to protect me."

"You don't think he might have been one of the people behind you almost starving later?" Corvina asked with a grimace. "He would have the means and the motivation."

"It makes sense, I guess." She agreed easily. "But I don't really want to blame anyone else for that. If I hadn't focused monomaniacally on swordsmanship or hell, even willing to work as a guard or a mercenary, I would never have been in that position."

Corvina hesitated before nodding. "Well, for what it's worth I don't think the you that I know could be manipulated into such a situation so easily."

"Thank you," Yahwen said, beaming at her.

Xiao Yingzi fidgeted as they spoke before finally taking the silence after that exchange as the chance to ask her own questions. "How did you win meals off of your enemies? That part was never clear to me. Did you wager coin?"

Yahwen blinked at the sudden question before shaking her head. "Three meals are a traditional wager." She replied, to which Xiao Yingzi nodded in a manner that made it obvious she was committing it to memory.

"So you never actually had any money then?" Corvina asked, her expression carefully neutral.

"No?" She replied cautiously.

"So what would you have done if you had lost?"

Yahwen shrugged. "I've never really considered it." She admitted sheepishly.

"That's about what I expected." Corvina replied with a sigh. "You should really be careful about that. I wouldn't be surprised if there were a hundred different ways to abuse a 'traditional' wager, especially if you bet what you don't have."

"I'll keep that in mind," Yahwen replied with a light smile and Corvina just nodded in reply. The former swordswoman then turned to Xiao Yingzi. "Any other questions?"

"What style did you practise?"

"The Drifting Cloud Style," She answered proudly. "I made it myself."

"Do the Axe Clan and Sect also practise these sort of honor duels? How did you defeat them then?"

Yahwen smirked. "Hah! No.They are more of the type to punch you in the face after a defeat." She paused and smiled fondly at her memories. "None of their elders really thought fighting me would be fun and I was good enough by then to defeat their juniors the hard way. It was fun."

"Did you face any enemies in dragon territories?"

"Old challengers who followed me, sure and the occasional dragon clan member was also game but I mostly went by on donations until those suddenly dried up."

"Oh," Xiao Yingzi considered that before looking up with her final question. "Have you really sworn off swordsmanship?"

Yahwen blinked. "I don't think so…?" She replied, her good mood evaporating. "Is that what they are saying now?" At Xiao Yingzi's nod, she just sighed. "Honestly…" She looked down for a moment. "I don't know really at the moment. I haven't decided yet."

Xiao Yingzi's shadow drooped at the change in atmosphere and Corvina moved to say something. But Antonius made it first. "Yahwen, you are doing great. You even got Corvina to give you a compliment, which means you have to be doing something right." He told her with a grin.

Corvina turned to him with a glare. "What's that supposed to mean, Antonius?"

"Well you know how you two get along like a house on fire." He replied, turning his grin at the seer. "As in, the house might be on fire."

"The warning about us living in the same place is still applicable," She replied with mock-menace. Yahwen looked between them and gave them a grateful smile.

"I know, I know." Antonius said waving her off before continuing more casually. "I was surprised how you believed she defeated a cultivator a whole realm above her. Isn't that a bit implausible?"

"Hardly." She scoffed. "The story does a good job of explaining how he lost. Even if he can think faster, if he's thinking stupid thoughts he'll just stupid faster." She paused and raised an eyebrow at him. "Besides, you can hardly complain about plausibility given your luck in Yuan."

"Oh yeah, you were there too weren't you?." Antonius looked at her for a second. "Did you have any good luck in Yuan? It never came up."

"No, my luck was decidedly average." Corvina answered with a sigh, before giving him a smirk. "Did you ever find out how your mother got that jade arrow?"

Antonius considered that. "She mentioned a diviner. That was you then? How'd you find it anyway?"

"Dowsing," She explained with a smile. "Your mom basically handed me several strong focuses which did most of the work. It was boring, to be honest. I spent most of the time wondering what your mother and Centurion Ariadne were talking about just out of earshot."

"Probably just talking about Yixuan Shan," Antonius speculated. "It would have just happened and Aunt Ariadne would want all the details."

"You know," Yahwen finally spoke and both of them quieted down to look at her. "It's really weird how you are descended from both the Silver Maiden and the Jade Archer." Yahwen mused, her fingers tapping her chin. "Any ideas how that happened?"

"Perhaps their descendants simply joined together at some point?" Xiao Yingzi suggested. "It would be the most likely explanation."

"The most boring explanation, you mean." She said, before perking up. "Maybe the Jade Archer and Chang-e fell in love? I think you mentioned it was the Jade Archer who finally slew the JAde Emperor right, Antonius?"

Antonius nodded but Xiao Yingzi frowned. "That sounds unlikely." She told her, before considering it. "They were enemies after all. Though there have been many accounts of people falling for enemies and the Jade archer did indeed turn against the Emperor."

"It's something I'm hoping to figure out some day," Antonius agreed with a nod. "Though I don't think I ever mentioned these details to you, Xiao Yingzi. Did you read the report?"

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "It was part of what inspired me to embark on this expedition."

"Huh." He considered that and grinned. "So what about you tell us any of your stories? All three of us have talked enough but we've barely heard anything from you."

"Seconded." Yahwen added.

"I'm interested as well," Corvina said, examining their junior with interest.

Xiao Yingzi considered the attention. "I have participated in no truly interesting adventures so far, at least none that you weren't already a part of. However, your constant talk of adventures had inspired a game I was curious to get your opinion on."

Antonius shared curious looks with the other two seniors before turning back to her with a nod. "Sure, get whatever you need. We'll wait."

Xiao Yingzi bowed and left to gather her things.

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They had indeed exchanged a lot of stories. Antonius talked about the Yuan Mountains and all the missions he'd been part of. The tale of the thunder-toads had especially caught Xiao Yingzi's attention. Corvina and Yahwen had the most adventures, as befitting their age. Yahwen had stories of duel after duel and the strange cultures of the Divided Kingdom. Corvina had stories from the Devil Bee War and the many, many missions that she had been a part of.

Xiao Yingzi found that she had nothing that could compare and it also occurred to her that living through these adventures would have certainly helped her seniors in achieving their current levels of skill and power. As such, Xiao Yingzi tried to find the best way to prepare herself for living through those same adventures.

"I call this the Seed Simulation," Xiao Yingzi explained as she began setting up dice and opening up a small booklet of rules. "It is based off of both the adventures I have heard from my seniors and things I have picked up from my own research."

Corvina picked up the booklet and leafed through it curiously. "I've seen something like this before. I think some legions use these same rules to simulate individual battles?"

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "They were remarkably useful in designing my own version however they are optimised towards individual battles. I have used them alongside clan-wide statistics to design a game that can simulate the life of a cultivator."

Antonius paged through the booklet she had prepared for him. "This mentions figures?" He asked, skipping past the numbers on to the first word that caught his eye.

Xiao Yingzi placed a hand on the ground in front of her and concentrated, forcing her shadow into a three dimensional silhouette. "Something like this." She replied, as her construct dissolved. "You could also use water techniques or something else."

"My water would need a lot of focus to keep that up," Antonius said, eyeing her shadow. "It seems similar to your own constructs. Maybe bronze thread would work better? Corvina?"

She looked up from studying the booklet as her name was called. "We have a puppetry specialization that should fit in pretty well, though I don't know how to do that." She glanced at Xiao Yingzi. "Still, this is impressive. When did you start making this game?"

"I had the clan statistics prepared beforehand for my own reasons," Xiao Yingzi replied "Once I found other simulations of this type, it was a simple matter of adapting it."

"It seems like a great simulator," Corvina closed her booklet and put it aside. "I think it has potential but I have some concerns about the macro-level interactions."

"I would be glad for your insights, senior senior." Xiao Yingzi bowed slightly. "And I will endeavour to apply them as soon as I am able."

"Is it just me or do people die a lot in this?" Yahwen interrupted, waving her booklet in the air. "That doesn't seem right based on what I know."

Xiao Yingzi frowned. "That's just what the statistics showed."

"I think you're surprised because you are used to righteous cultivators," Corvina added thoughtfully. "You guys tend to be luckier in general. Still, it might be better to work on some other elements to make this work."

"What would you suggest?" Xiao Yingzi asked her with a frown. "I don't want it to lose it's accuracy."

"Well, you've helpfully generalised a list of advantages an individual could gain." Antonius mused. "Maybe we can just add the option for players to pick some of them to give the characters when they want."

"Make it limited based on time so that it doesn't get out of hand." Corvina suggested. "Maybe once every twenty years?"

Xiao Yingzi frowned. "It seems implausible for individuals to find those so often."

"It's more common than you think," Corvina replied. "But only if you limit it to good seeds rather than your average cultivator. Which I think you should."

"If you're doing that, maybe you should also remove the option for that starter bonus?" Antonius interjected. "It's basically an optional 'Cool Thing' that sets them apart from others but if they are all going to be good seeds then there is no need for a mechanical benefit like that."

"Enhanced cultivation for reduced lifespan," Yahwen read out loud curiously. "Is that actually a thing?"

Antonius blinked and leaned over to read that entry. "That's inspired by me, isn't it?"

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "As I mentioned, I used your own stories as a basis for designing this system."

"Huh. Not sure what to think about that." Antonius replied. "It's probably better to remove it to properly fit the new system."

"And what are these 'Fighting Across Realm' bonuses?" Yahwen asked, pointing to a particular part of the bonus list. "Do things like that exist?"

"Stuff that lets you temporarily fight someone in another great realm." Corvina answered. "They're really rare but they exist. At the end of the day, it's really just a matter of getting enough power or potency and making sure a junior can survive it. Our formations let us do that already in a way. You just need enough cultivators."

"Some of the Thirteen had them," Xiao Yingzi pointed out. "So I thought I should include that."

"Yeah, that was weird." Corvina agreed. "Usually stuff like that is really rare to the point where you don't even get them in secret realms. I guess those guys were just really lucky."

"Should I remove them then?" Xiao Yingzi asked her.

"Probably for the best," She replied, nodding. "That falls on the side of a bit too unlikely."

"I think the game is playable already." Antonius cut in. "How about we try it out and just see how it ends up?"

With a round of agreement, the game began.
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"Oi, Antonius. Why do you get to pick that cultivation for lifespan boost after removing it from the game?"

"I just wanted to get some benefit out of it… you know, before it kills me."

"...did you just try to guilt trip me?"

"...is it working?"
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"Okay, now what are you doing Antonius? How do you keep rolling so good?"

"I have been truly touched by the heavens. As a golden devil, it is such a burden on my soul."

"...it's funny how Yahwen, the only non-clan member keeps rolling the worst. They are so thoroughly average. Wasn't this supposed to simulate a good seed?"

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"Holy shit, Antonius."

"...I take back everything I said about you being lucky."

"...you know Yahwen, technically speaking I am as average as you are now."

"No. No you are not."

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"Now Xiaio Yingzi is shooting ahead. How is her cultivation at Foundation Establishment already?"

"She stole my luck."

"Antonius, you don't get to complain about luck when I specifically warned you about the dangers of secret realms."

"Remind me, Corvina. Why are the two experienced senior sisters lagging behind their juniors?"

"...I'm working on it."

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"How the hell did Yahwen win?"

"...I guess slow and steady wins the race?"

"You mean she turtled her way to victory."

"Hey, I just played the game."

"Then why are you so smug?"
 
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Good Seeds to Read 6 & 7: Maria & Gaius Antonius
I think I missed a turn with these, but even if I hadn't, whittling it down to one would've been impossible. Whittling it down to two was hard enough - I suspect I might do another Good Seed to Read post early next turn.

One of the big purposes of Good Seeds to Read is for everyone who isn't reading everything - or just plain finds the incredible mass of omake intimidating (and I don't blame you!) to highlight some stories I think are worth reading in their own right.

By this I don't necessarily mean that they're the best-written or most entertaining pieces (I also don't mean that they aren't), but my mind this turn is on recommending things that are just coherent plots you can enjoy reading on their own.

Starting with Maria, I think it's hard to go past this story. Maria starts out - well, I won't go through the details, but suffice it to say you have an engaging villain, a group of disparate Legionnaires coming to terms with one another - basically everything you want from an excellent, self-contained plot arc. I really, really enjoyed it.

" It was the weirdest threat that Maria had ever heard, but damn if he hadn't nailed the delivery. "

Secondly is Gaius Antonius. A great self-contained Scorpion Saga, as well as some... weirder stuff. You really need to read it, but let's just say on a score out of 10, one of these omake is smashingly funny. The 'required reading' to get Gaius's core plot is shorter - there are a few omake in alternative universes and a very funny digression as well. Well worth the read.
 
Good Seed Report - The Sons and Daughters of Fate (Bonuses)
David Pupillus
Fate: David stumbled into a great cavern, where an ancient Early Nascent Owl, Tong Fu Tong waited. It offered to play a game of stones with him, and won six of seven games. The last David somehow won, and as a reward the owl granted him a small crystal - on cultivating with it he skipped a decade of effort, and managed to rise into the 7th Heavenstage rapidly despite a lack of cultivation talent.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 7th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 54 (+33)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Demetrius Ceres
Fate: Demetrius followed a peculiar call. The call of a chef, a man seeking to make the perfect meal. In the lands of the Xin he followed a group of Dervishes who together worshipped at an ancient altar, hidden within Xin territory. Something the Dervishes had been seeking, he found. It was there he saved hundreds of mortals. At the heart of the altar was the fragment of an ancient iron cauldron. On touching it, he felt a peculiar affinity, and the energy within pushed him forward, a dam bursting within him, pushing him through the 11th Heavenstage from start to finish, and ending in the 12th.
Impact: 7 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (4 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 218 (+47)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Diomedes Cestus
Fate: Diomedes fought with Jin Fulong's Caravan. Once, twice, and thrice, he fought back attacks that were simply too large for him, but in this environment he fought an enemy skilled in soul arts. The Cannibal Burning Lily used her arts to try and break him, and almost he fell, but managed to use her savage attacks as tempering for his soul, rising into the 12th Heavenstage. In her fourth attack he repelled her entirely, though the raiders were only a hint of things to come. Caravan Master Jin rewarded him with a Soul-Bursting Luck Fragment (+3 Impact), a powerful artifact only usable by those who had risd into the 12th Heavenstage. At the cost of significant damage to one's soul, your luck could be increased dramatically for short periods of time. Usable again and again, though on average it would take ten years to recover from the soul damage - it would be unwise to use it more often.
Impact: 5 (+3)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (8 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 210 (+21)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Eirene of Nowhere
Fate: Eirene meditiated. With her newfound confidence from mediating wars between great creatures in the sea above the sky in the Qiguai Secret Realm, she mediated wars between mortals powers, conflicts between Clan cultivators, and reconciled a king with his daughter. The following day she reconciled a peasant and his son, and saw both as important. It was during a mission she was given to placate a great serpent that she failed, the beast inflicting minor wounds on her - nothing too serious, but her prior terrible wounds reopened, and she found herself unable to recover much if at all.
Impact: 12 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (14 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 209 (+0)
Health: Badly Wounded --> Badly Wounded

Gaius Antonius
Fate: To his enemies, Gaius Antonius was nearly a curse. Deployed in the Xin Kingdom, he rapidly found himself one of the central figures in striking down enemy raiders. A blessing of Earth hung about him, and while chasing a Dervish near the Five Element Fountain somehow absorbed a massive amount of Five Elements Qi, absorbing a substantial amount of Xin Kingdom Qi to bless his meridians with Earth, and to grant him the Form of Earth technique (+8 Impact). Able to submerge himself in soil or sand and move at three or four times his normal speed nearly indefinitely, he became able to ambush enemies at will, killing nearly twenty Dervishes , including slaying one exhausted Dervish in Foundation Establishment - ambushing the woman when she had no Qi left, and thought she was resting safely in her camp. Gaius erupted from underneath her and slew her before she knew what had happened.
Impact: 8 (+8)
Cultivation: 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 93 (+30)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Jiang Chrysanthos/Chrys
Fate: Jiang was nearly slain. Not by his enemies, or by the enemies of the Clan, but rather his own foolishness. Deciding to break through before he was ready, he failed - one of the rare few for whom failing their tribulation did not mean death, saved by the use of a powerful treasure. Heavenly lightning shattered his meridians, but he managed to avoid permanent crippling by a hair, living - though incredibly badly wounded. For his efforts he gained a piece of Crystallised Lightning (+1 Impact), a piece of Heaven's wrath his could use against his enemies, though it lacked the true power of tribulation lightning.
Impact: 1 (+1)
Cultivation: 9th Heavenstage (1 turn to FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 60 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> LST Interrupt --> Badly Wounded

Konstantinos Papadopoulos
Fate: Konstantinos cultivated, but spent most of his time writing. This had no great effects on his cultivation, barely reaching the Second Heavenstage, but it allowed him to spend time and Spirit Stones managing to purchase a treasure. The Spirit Press (+4 Impact) - a magical press that could imprint spiritual impressions into even regular stone, allowing Qi to be infused into temporary newsletters and newspapers without the normal requirement of an expensive Spiritual Jade. Admittedly, the stones did not last, but what was that compared to the ability to reach so many more with his words?
Impact: 4 (+4)
Cultivation: 2nd Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 29 (+8)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Magnus Centenius
Fate: (Note for Edric. You've asked for a cultivation boost, so I've applied it after your breakthrough). Magnus finally broke through to Foundation Establishment. It seemed a lifetime ago he was chasing Minervina, but now he had at least broken through at a higher realm than her. It was during the Siege of Three Frog City that he first preserved the city - after breaking through he became a key point in the defense, creating poisons for whatever could be found. His greatest creation in this period was the Meat Qi Rot Poison (+2 Impact). Created from rotting corpses and a little Poison Qi, it could be distilled into jars hurled at enemies, rotting their flesh and weakening their power to attack. While not the deadliest poison, almost anywhere one had a corpse one could make the poison.
Impact: 5 (+2)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar (Early) (10 HS)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 110 (+2)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy

Maria
Fate: Maria entered the siege of Three Frog City in the 8th Heavenstage, and left it in the 10th. Innate talent goes so far, but coupled with luck goes far further. Instrumental in the defense of a falling wall, she managed to kill six Cannibals, maim three, and wound almost ten, pushing back an attack until the Foundation cultivators were able to arrive. From the corpse of a Cannibal she found something absurd. An Iron Advancement Worm, a creature that one could fuse into a meridian and see dramatic advancement. Such worms could not be absorbed by Blood Path cultivators, however, and was no doubt held to be sold. Fusing it into her meridians, she leapt forward dramatically (+60 cultivation-years), her own innate talent pushing what was an immense gain even further. Now in the 10th Heavenstage, she managed to push back a major attack on the walls working in tandem with Edric, serving as a distraction as he poisoned the second wave of a nearly-successful attack.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 152 (+93)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Minervina Barda
Fate: Minervina Barda. Known among the Dervishes as the 'poison witch', the 'witch of terror', and most creatively 'fuck this, I'm out, that crazy witch has killed everyone else. The Dervishes were on the verge of slaughtering a minor city, and only one woman stood in their way. Well, one woman and immenes clouds of poison gas. Minervina proved her worth as one of the Clan's most deadly seeds by killing a number of Dervishes, before engaging three Dervishes - one in Late Foundation Establishment, two in Early, in mortal combat. The advantage that accrues to the poison cultivator is not simple, however, as over the course of a battle enemies weaken drastically while the poisoner remains intact. Within minutes her enemies were dying, and soon after dead. Minervina's greatest accomplishment here was not the slaughter of the Foundation cultivators, however. Nearly five hundred Cannibals in Qi Condensation scattered from her, each with a deadly slow poison upon them. In less than a week, they were all dead, and the primary thrust of the Whirling Dervishes into the Xin Kingdom was heavily blunted.
Impact: 9 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 6-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 303 (+12)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy
 
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Jin Muyi 24 - Jin Muyi 比武 (bǐ wǔ)
Jin Muyi: 比武 ( wǔ)

THUMP. THUMP. THUMP. The sound of his heart pounding resonated with the hoofbeats of the Legion as they rode to the aid of the Xin. It all happened so fast, they had been assigned a new Legate less then a year ago who had instantly thrown them into a series of drills with the Clan Formations as well as a Cultivation Art to be used in unison with their partnered Spirit Beasts.

At first, Alexios and the others were glad with the changes. Not only was Legate Muyi one of the Heroes from the most devastating Trial in recent Clan History, he also provided them with a Cultivation Art meant for Beast Tamers. Something that for the Clan is a rare Cultivation Art considering it's focus.

However, the drills on the Clan Formations focusing on the speed of switching between Formations, channeling Qi to enhance certain aspects of the formations as well as the new Cultivation Art allowing the Spirit Beasts to help cast and enhance the formations all brought to light the changes made to the Legion. No more were they the messengers and couriers of the legions, tasked to aid in communicating to assist in the Clan's strategic goal. They were now meant to be the Clan's Arrow, the first into any conflict to buy time for the Clan to muster it's forces.

And just as soon as the Legion finally made peace with their new roles, their Legate vanished for a month before suddenly appearing again and calling for the Legion to prepare for a battle in Xin lands against the Growling Dervishes.

Now, as they rode towards the Cannibal horde throwing themselves at one of the Xin Towers, Alexios felt his mouth go dry and his hands tremble as their untested Legion faced one of the deadliest forces under the Cannibals.

Muyi felt the tension among his legion rise as they rode closer and closer towards the horde. Letting out a low breath, he allowed his Dao, his Truth to flow out of him and settle around his legion. Calming their fears, stroking their anger and forging the many individuals of the legion into one amassed blob of untested potential.

Within the blob he could see it, the few whose courage overcame their fear, whose pride in being the first to take the fight to the foe shone like glimmers of bright bronze. Using his Dao, he stuck at the blob, taking the courage, the pride and spreading it among the fearful and the weak, tempering the proud with caution and the brave with cunning. Allowing his Dao to forge his legion into a Masterwork Ji fit for the duel he would be having with the commander of the force before him.


Alexios felt the change within the Legion. Soon after the Legate gave a sigh, a presence seemed to have erupted from him and covered the whole Legion, and within it his fear seemed to have faded away. Instead, the pounding of his heart seemed to have turned to excitement, and he could feel the reassuring weight of his brothers next to him as well as the desire to not let them down.

This excitement, this anticipation of the battle to come seemed to have spread among the legion. Without a single command being given, the Legion sped up and started to move a trot and then a gallop as they moved towards the foe.

As they approached, Alexios followed the urging in his heart and sped up ahead of the Legion along with a small group of fellow riders. At a glance, he noticed that like him, they were all known for their proficiency with the Philocates formation, and found himself casting the formation with unison with not a single word being shared, launching a volley of poisonous Qi arrows that flew unerringly towards the horde.

Muyi gave a slight smile as he threw a light thrust at the enemy with his "halberd" as the opening move to their Duel. The Legion had surprised him with their speed and responsiveness to his unspoken order, their trust in him and his Dao allowed them to respond with a speed that the foe was definitely unable to react to, essentially allowing him to land a free hit on the foe.

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Ya Fu let out a curse of surprise as a wave of Qi arrows suddenly bombarded his rear and threw his forces into shock. As the Qi arrows erupted into poisonous clouds that caused his troops to instinctively scatter, he quickly shook off his surprise and with growls and curses got his messengers to ride forth and bring the Horde back into some measure of order.

Turning his attention fully towards the direction the arrows were launched, he noticed an approaching Legion of Golden Devils and what seemed to be the skirmishers who had ambushed his rear.

With a loud bark and a wave of his hand, he instantly dispatched two wings to surround and envelop the Legion and their Skirmishers, to crush them in a pincer via overwhelming force.

Contrary to his expectations, instead of retreating and leaving the skirmishers behind to buy time for the retreat, another group of Golden Devils sallied forth from the Legion and quickly split into three groups that the skirmishers retreated into.

Just before his retaliatory strike-force reached them, the Golden Devils activated their hated formation, causing three golden warrior constructs to strode onto the battlefield. Without any hesitation, two of the constructs counter-charged his men, preventing the pincer from closing while the third construct remained at the back, sweeping and thrusting to ensure that the flanks of it's comrades remained unthreated.

As the foe launched a wild frenzy of strikes at him, Muyi whirled his "halberd" into a series of defensive parries, spinning and redirecting the force of the attacks into brief but sharp ripostes that chip away at the enemy. And yet, this situation would not last, the sheer number of attacks being launched were more than enough to eventually break through his defense. It was a good thing that his "halberd" wasn't the only weapon he had at hand.
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Without any warning, the skies turned into flames. Javelins made from fire rained down onto the Growling Dervishes forces engaging the three hoplites, reversing the situation in an instant. The gap between the two hoplites that was deemed to be the easiest to breakthrough was turned into a deathtrap that prevented the Cannibals from fleeing as the flames from the vengeful Xin sorcerers immolated the killers of their kin.

Hou Ye found himself weeping with joy and relief as the flames burned at these Demons who had ruined his world in a single morning. Looking around him, he saw the same mixed expression of joy and grief on the face of his fellow clansmen, all of them survivors of the raids the Growling Dervishes used to resupply their Great Hunt.

Like him, they were all young cultivators. Qi Cultivators but the greatest of their families, forced to hide and listen in horror as their families and towns were ravaged with no survivors. They were in so much despair and rage that when the Golden Devils came, without exception all of them launched an attack at them, for not being there and doing their duty as liege to the Xin.

It would have been within their rights to execute them for their transgressions. Instead, the Legate listened to their tale and wiped away their tears before offering them a chance at revenge, to strike back at the group of Cannibals that had hurt them.

Conscripting them into his legion as auxiliaries, each of them had doubled up with a Golden Devil as the Legion rode towards battle. And now, the promise had been fulfilled, the aegis of the Legion allowing them to not only use all their Qi for offense, it had also hid their presence from the Cannibals, allowing them to focus purely on firepower instead of diverting their attention towards using their Qi to probe for weakness.

Watching with teary eyes, Hou Ye observed as the Hoplite construct in the center seemed to shimmer and fade before the cultivators within fell back to join the greater portion of the legion. With the sound of a bugle, Qi billowed from the rest of the legion and took the form of an armored horseman clad in armor of bronze green. The bugle blew a second time and before it's echo could fade, the horseman blurred into a charge, piercing right through the gap where the third Hoplite once stood and cutting a swath through the reeling cannibals, splitting the mob once more into two.

Without looking back or hesitating, the Horseman charged through and towards the rest of the cannibals who were only just reacting to the span of disasters that fell on them.

Muyi's face bore a grim grin as a flaming spear flew from behind his back, past his whirling "halberd", into the foe causing them to stumble back in shock and put a halt to their flurry of strikes. Before they could recover, he lunged with his Ji driving it with pinpoint precision towards his foe's head to end the battle with a single stroke.

His foe was no fool though, and with a quick reflexive parry sent the Ji into his side turning a fatal blow into a long gash that started to bleed profusely. Refusing to let up and lose his momentum, Muyi jerked the "halberd" in a sharp abrupt motion that dismembered his foe's "arm" and moved to once more land a killing blow.


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Back and forth they traded blows, chipping away at each other until with a final grunt of effort Muyi lobbed off the head of his foe. The loss of one "arm" and the lack of time to adjust to it due to the aggressive pace Muyi set proved to be the shatterpoint of the duel. Panting heavily from the duel, Muyi released his "halberd" and let it fade as he closed his eyes and allowed the tight grip on his Dao to loosen.

Opening his eyes once more, Muyi watched as the last trace of his Dao Sight vanished and showed him the battlefield as it was in the real. Before him was a kneeling headless corpse in a gaudy tent surrounded by dismembered bodies of what had to be the corpse's bodyguards.

Turning around and exiting the tent brought within view a scene of carnage filled with wrecked tents and a flowing stream of blood. Far off in the distance, Muyi watched as members of his legion split into small groups of pursuers that chased down the broken and fleeing foe.

His Legion had proved themselves on the anvil of war and he had proved that the faith put in naming him Legate over other Core Formation Cultivators was not in vain. Entering the tent once more, he stepped over the kneeling corpse and allowed his exhausted body to drop into the throne placed in the center of the Cannibals' headquarters.

Lightly gripping his Dao once more and letting it envelope his senses, Muyi gazed at his Legion and found that the blob of unrefined mass had undergone some changes. Now, it appeared to have hardened and seemed to be in the crude shape of an ingot. A focused view of the ingot revealed that within its depths the glimmers of bright bronze had multiplied in scale and radiance, lighting it with a glow that appeared to move in a rhythmic pattern.

Letting it fade once more, Muyi found himself smiling slightly in satisfaction as he murmured out loud. "The first tempering was a success. As i forge my legion so shall i forge my Dao, the Trial approaches once more and it's newest spear shall not be found wanting."

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This is the rare Omake that i was inspired to churn out in just 2 days, probably the first one for 2021. So the title 比武 literally means Compare Skills, with the assumption that Compare = Compete and the Skill = Martial Arts.

In Wuxia, it's usually used as a polite way of calling a duel with the idea being that you compete/compare skills through combat and if you die? It just means your Skill is inferior to the other party and that you "lost".

With that context, this is basically me twisting the concept of "Duel" till it squeals to justify a warped view of how it could work for a Legate and how it affects the world he's viewing though it. So it turns to a Battle Mediation style aura but with a focus on subsuming the Will of those involved under you so that they become a "weapon" to wield in the "duel". Basically boiling down the conflict to a matter of General against General.

@Humbaba for the threadmark. Thanks
 
Magnus Centenius
Fate: (Note for Edric. You've asked for a cultivation boost, so I've applied it after your breakthrough). Magnus finally broke through to Foundation Establishment. It seemed a lifetime ago he was chasing Minervina, but now he had at least broken through at a higher realm than her. It was during the Siege of Three Frog City that he first preserved the city - after breaking through he became a key point in the defense, creating poisons for whatever could be found. His greatest creation in this period was the Meat Qi Rot Poison (+2 Impact). Created from rotting corpses and a little Poison Qi, it could be distilled into jars hurled at enemies, rotting their flesh and weakening their power to attack. While not the deadliest poison, almost anywhere one had a corpse one could make the poison.
Impact: 5 (+2)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar (Early) (10 HS)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 110 (+2)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy
Finally, After 200 years he broke through. At this speed I worry Magnus is not worthy of the good seed title.
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 32 -[Turn 6] - [Journey to Qiguai 4: Hog Attack]
@Alectai @Humbaba @TehChron @BungieONI @ReaderOfFate Hey guys, sorry for pinging but wanted to get this and this and this threadmarked before Occi starts getting back into reading good seeds. Thanks!

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 32
[Turn 6]
[Journey to Qiguai 4: Hog Attack]

The journey to Mogui City was long… and boring.

There was only so much they could do or talk about. Stories were fun for a while, but after some time they got tired from talking about them or making them up. Then hobbies came up with Antonius talking about food and fitness, the twin interests he had inherited from his parents.

Yahwen shared his interest in food and had her own new-found interest in arrays that Corvina reluctantly shared. Corvina spoke about arrays and metal-smithing and divination as well as how her clan combined them in incredibly complicated ways. None of them could really follow it, but Yahwen still enjoyed listening to it as if it was an interesting story. Xiao Yingzi also dutifully listened to everything she heard, noting it down even if she didn't always understand it.

Then they began to invent more ways to pass the time. Antonius brought up some games he used to play with his parents on the journey to Yuan. Corvina shared some legion tricks to pass the time. Yahwen was a genius at finding ways to pass the time and Xiao Yingzi often produced a gem as well. Word games. Color-spotting. But eventually, they began to run out of that too.

It was almost a relief when the caravan stopped.

The Forest of Petrified Trees was a location uncovered by a sandstorm only two hundred years ago. Through some unknown process, the trees were petrified while still living and one could feel the qi still flowing through them as if they were still alive or some manner of incredibly strange spirit stone.

While there would certainly be one lucky junior in the future with a perfect affinity for the forest, for most others the trees were useless. They carried their petrification with them and instead of aiding the cultivator, they instead calcified in their meridians. It was also easy to resist unless you took it in on purpose making it also useless as a poison.

Though useless, the qi was still there and that made it perfect camouflage for any group of bandits with even a modicum of control over their aura. It was a clever idea. Of course if bandits were any smarter, they would also have realised an ambush spot everyone knew about was no ambush spot at all.

"Enemy combatants!" The call went out as they slowed to a halt. They felt the qi of their centurion guide surge for a moment before it dimmed to non-existence. It was an assurance of their presence… and an invitation to handle the hostiles themselves.

Antonius glanced around the room.

Corvins had been meditating on a token inscribed with an archery technique. She cracked open an eyelid as she felt his gaze. "I have been meaning to test some things out," She said, answering his unspoken question.

Yahwen didn't say anything but she had no need to as she pushed her staff on the ground and used it to pull herself to her feet. Her actions were confirmation enough. Antonius paused and glanced around for the fourth member of their group. "Where's Xiao Yingzi?"

"She's already suppressed her presence and hidden herself among the trees." Corvina answered with a sigh. "You were too focused on the outside to catch her when she left."

"Right," Antonius replied lamely. "I need to work on that. Shall we head out?"

She nodded. "We probably should."

At a round of nods, they began their preparations.

Yahwen stretched a little before stepping outside with a staff. She was already prepared with her metal-topped staff at hand, a weapon that he was certain she only preferred because it had some sentimental value. While he beat her in raw power, she was the most skilled of them with any weapon. Even unarmed, he was sure she would be a threat.

Corvina had chosen to wield a bow and arrow. She wasn't really a strict fighter and she had been studying ranged combat so that she could contribute without getting into the thick of things. With the Blood of Bronze, her enhanced strength translated directly into speed and penetrative power - it was a perfectly logical choice that fit her style.

Rather than stepping out like Yahwen, she just glanced outside to get a look at the battle and then pulled herself atop their carriage. By the time she was gone, Antonius was also ready.

He'd been slowly condensing water drops around him, more summoned than pulled from the air. They flowed together into larger streams before joining three growing balls of water slowly orbiting his body. He had a sword by his side but he was unlikely to need it. Just in case, he had the flute near to hand and the sand-spitting marble in his mouth.

He looked out of the door and noted that it was much darker than he had expected. The desert sun should have been shining at full noon yet the surroundings were cool and shadowed. Of course, the tree-line was dense enough to block out the sun. It was easy to see why it was considered a perfect spot for an ambush.

He turned his eyes on the attackers.

And winced.

They were some grotesque fusion of man and hog. Muscular, humanoid creatures with the smallest at six feet tall. They had snouts more hog than man with sharp tusks and a guttural tongue that he felt certain was words but they were utterly unintelligible. Most of the hogs seemed to rely upon their thick leathery hides for defence but some also wore armor and they all carried weapons - primarily spears though there were a variety of others as well.

Most of the hogs had surrounded a group of legionnaires in formation and seemed to be keeping up with them through some technique that made their skin glow red but also increased their power. They were more like a mob than an organised force while the legion fought professionally, with their backs to each other and systematically whittled down their enemies.

They obviously held the advantage.

Other hogs were engaging cultivators who preferred to fight individually in small pocket here and there. Only so many of the hogs could engage with the formation at once without getting in each other's way because of how the guards fought and a few of them were looking to attack the caravans directly, only deterred by the giant Marathon Snails that were certainly intimidating to those who hadn't seen them before.

As they were urging each other to attack, Yahwen walked to the biggest of them - a burly swordshog of the sixth heavenstage with a wide blade as tall as he was. "I challenge you to a duel." She said, pointing him out directly with her staff. Though they didn't understand what she said, that was a clear enough signal.

For a moment the hog looked to his allies who urged him forward with what sounded like a laugh. Then he turned to Yahwen, who stood in front of him and stared him down. The warrior grinned and instead of replying, just lifted his sword to bring it down. Taking that as acceptance, Yahwen moved.

She struck his wrist with the metal head of her staff just as brought down the sword, causing him to roar and drop the sword mid-swing. Before the sword even left it's hand, Yahwen was already moving. She stepped past the falling blade and brought the staff up to his throat. Antonius winced as the man's roar was cut short by the crushing of his windpipe.

By the time the sword landed on the ground, Yahwen was already focused on her next opponent. "Who's next?" She called out, looking into the eyes of each and every one of the attackers. Unlike before, they stared back warily.

Antonius wondered if she would have to attack first but then two hogs looked to each other and attacked at once, one going low to strike her legs and the other high to take her head. She smashed her staff into the ground and used it as a support to jump and kick one hog in the face left the other frozen as her legs suddenly disappeared. She followed through by wrapping the second bandit's neck between her feet and with a burst of qi, she crushed it.

Antonius winced again and looked away, seeking his other teammates instead. That was far more brutal than he had realised and very different from how she was during spars as well. His eyes flitted across the battlefield, picking apart both friend and foe before his eyes landed on a hog of the third heavenstage. He was obviously new to battle and instead paying attention to his surroundings was busy gawking at Yahwen's massacre.

As he expected, he was suddenly pulled behind a petrified tree by a force he couldn't immediately see. He frowned and kept track of the battlefield until another hog was pulled back, this time from near the legion formation.

Now that he was looking for it, he noticed - just barely - the tendrils of shadow and smiled. The same ambient qi and darkness that worked as a cover for the enemies were now working to cover Xiao Yingzi as she picked off any enemy that showed even a momentary lapse.

He felt the sound of air parting above him and an arrow struck a pig between the eyes. Antonius turned around and looked up to the top of the caravan where Corvina had taken roost. She gave him a quick nod when she saw him watching and went back to focusing on the battle, shooting any enemy that gave her a clear shot.

Antonius took the moment to admire her form. Her every movement was slow and measured, every arrow loosed only after careful deliberation. It was incredibly different from his mother who would have fired several arrows in the time Corvina pulled back her string. But then, her mother was training from birth and Corvina had just picked up the bow. Still, there was something to be said about the way her muscles corded as she pulled back the string and the sheer strength with which her arrows flew.

Between loosing an arrow and reaching back to grab another, Corvina glanced at him with a frown. "What?" She demanded.

"Nothing," He replied with a grin. "Keep up the good work."

Before she could reply, he turned towards the largest concentration of enemies - near the legion formation and bent his legs to jump. After sparing a moment's focus to ensure that there weren't any enemies in the way, he leapt with all his power summoning a wave under his feet to propel himself even further.

He couldn't fly using the water as Yixuan Shan had done, but he found that he could propel himself pretty far as well as somewhat control the direction of his fall. He pulled in his legs and rolled into a cannonball instead of slowing down and used his control to angle himself into one of the bigger hogs.

Antonious was cushioned by water and durable besides, but the hog had no such advantages. As Antonius stretched his sense of qi in the instant before any other recovered from his landing he could tell the hog was knocked out cold. He quickly identified the bandits around him and summoned a wave of water to push them back. This gave him enough time to get back on his feet and get into a combat stance.

He looked at the legionnaires around him and hesitated for a second, before he drew his sword and studied the hogs who were growling and slowly backing away from him. "Good to see you here, Senior Brother." The guard next to him whispered and Antonius just nodded in response. Most likely he was the junior here but it was an easy mistake with his cultivation and hardly something to correct in combat.

He spared a glance at his friends who seemed to be enjoying themselves and decided to go slowly, brandishing his sword to get the enemies to attack him. His qi surged as it joined the symphony of the formation, bolstering it with the qi of one in the tenth heavenstage.

When he didn't summon any more water, the hogs seemed to gain some confidence and began closing in. Antonius picked a hog with a spear in the third heavenstage and engaged him, wondering how his own sword skills would fare against them.

The answer as it turned out was 'very badly'. He hadn't trained with the blade much at all and he quickly recalled the advantage of reach. When the bandit struck at his side with a single-hand strike, Antonius just brought his own blade to parry it, not realising too late that it was a feint until it was too late. The bandit switched suddenly, aiming a strike under Antonius' arm towards his now-open stomach.

It merely glanced off of his armor and Antonius simply stepped back out of the range of the creature's blade. But the attack shocked him and the damage was done, the momentary instability rippling through the whole formation until the summoned centurion collapsed without any formation to support it.As the legionnaires closed ranks, the hog that had attacked him raised his spear to rally the rest of his kind at the sight of formation failing.

They roared as one and moved in closer to pursue. As the hog eagerly leaned in after him, Antonius took a moment to thank his past self for buying an armor that was still useful at his level. When the enemy warrior closed in with a grin, Antonius didn't bother with his blade instead he just brought up his fist and summoned a wave to throw him back towards the attacking enemies.

The hog squealed as he flew through the air and crashed into another hog right behind him. A bronze arrow sprouted from his chest and Antonius idly noted that Corvina was happily taking advantage of the distractions he was providing. Rather than risk going into melee again and potentially getting killed because of his lackluster skillset, he shaped the water around him in mimicry of Xiao Yingzi's own shadow arts but instead of thin tendrils of shadow, he controlled eight thick tentacles of water that could grab and push the enemies away.

The legionnaires around him backed away towards the caravan in order to give him more space to maneuver and Antonius found himself standing in between them and the hog horde. Well, he decided. It was time to make up for screwing up the formation.

He stepped forward and attacked.

Ultimately, it wasn't a particularly difficult battle. None of them could really do much once he lifted them off their feet and threw them towards each other. Some of the stronger ones had techniques that could turn their fur red and greatly increase their qi, but he could match them and with the aid of the other legionnaires, dispatch them with ease.

A giant centurion stood behind him, stabbing at multiple hogs with every swing of it's spear and with every distraction, Corvina took killing shots and even Xiao Yingzi took advantage of the disruption he created to kill the hogs who were too weak for him to prioritise.

He could still sense Yahwen fighting on her own and there were still people in the caravan who hadn't joined the fight and likely would if it got more dangerous. Antonius remembered the qi of the Foundation Establishment expert who commanded this caravan. They were slowly winning and even in the worst case, he was confident they could pull through.

Then he heard Xiao Yingzi call out from the forest around them. "There are more hogs coming around to attack from above!" He looked around and spotted her on top of a stone branch, pointing underneath the caravan. The legion began to falter as they considered what to do and Antonius looked towards Corvina who was considering their next move.

He took a deep breath and jumped, using the water tentacles to push him higher and then grab the top of the caravan to pull him towards it. Once he landed, he moved himself next to Corvina who had leaned back to avoid the water. "Should I handle them?" Antonius asked her.

She glanced at Yahwen who was running out of opponents as the hogs just fled from her clutches and then nodded. "Just finish it," She replied with a sigh. "I don't think it's worth keeping this going any longer."

Antonius nodded. "Protect me?" He asked, closing his eyes to focus on his qi sense. He didn't see it but he felt her nod. Taking that as acknowledgement, he instead focused on the world around him.

He could sense the people in the caravan and the guards fighting the bandits outside. He could also sense Yahwen looking for more opponents and Corvina sitting beside him. But he couldn't sense the bandits that Xiao Yingzi spoke of and he couldn't sense Xiao Yingzi herself. That must be the petrified forest interfering with his senses.

He slowly moved his hands around him, pulling up the water he had summoned for his tentacles and focused it into a band around them. Then infused his qi into the band and summoned more water mass but he kept it compressed, letting the tension build. Then he let it explode, water spread out from him, multiplying as he summoned ever more water to add to it. It was diffuse enough not to do much damage but it was still infused with his qi.

It travelled through the battle and the forest around him. It even flowed into the earth, leaching through both sand and soil. For a moment, he had an image of the entire battleground in his mind. He could feel both the hogs and the legionnaires, the way their qi intermised in the air. He could feel the full length of the caravan and still hidden among the trees, he could see several hogs about to jump out from the canopy to land directly on the top of the carriages. Areas that were mostly undefended.

Xiao Yingzi's dull aura was poised to attack one of those hogs, but he felt her pull back her attack as she was splashed with his qi infused water. Each of the enemies reacted in their own way. Some of them turned to run, others moved faster on the attack. Others still froze. It didn't matter, they were all within his grasp now.

In his mind's eye, he plotted a path for the water to follow - moving through the hogs and avoiding everything else. Then he breathed in and pulled. The water gathered back around him, avoiding the guards who were surrounded but pushing the bandits that had surrounded them.

He opened his eyes to see what he had wrought. Several bandits lay on the ground, pulled from the canopy and all their surroundings. Some were dead and others were groaning. More still were hidden in the forest, in the same state but not pulled by the water all the way. "Didn't get all of them," Antonius said out loud to Corvina. "But I can point out where they'll likely be."

"I'll get Xiao Yingzi to confirm," She replied with a nod. "How is your qi?"

"Drained," Antonius replied with a smile. "But I can still keep going if we have to."

She rolled her eyes."Don't show off," She scolded. "We should be able to handle the clean up."

Antonius nodded as she jumped off and slumped down to catch his breath. He watched as Corvina took off to speak to Xiao Yingzi and a few of the legionnaires to coordinate the clean up and to see where the hogs actually came from. They needed to know that so that the clan could investigate later.

But that wasn't important. They'd handle all of this stuff. He just needed to wait until the caravan set out again. Preferably in his room though he couldn't force his body to heed that wish. Maybe in a few more moments.

That had been Water Style: Burst. A technique inspired by the time he and his parents were attacked and Yixuan Shan used the last of his qi to drive the enemy off. He had used the water as an extension of himself to both strike and see, while using accelerated thought to exert perfect and sublime control over it. Antonius could maintain a bare sliver of what the silver-finned pipefish did so casually for a few moments at the cost of exhaustion but at the right time, it was enough to turn the tide of a battle.

As he leaned back to look up at the tree canopy, he felt Yahwen walked towards him. He turned towards her and saw her grinning back at him. At his questioning look, she held up a deck of cards in her hands and his eyes widened.

"How?"

"One of the legionnaires had one."

He grinned back.

Well, they needed something to do while they waited.
 
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Btw, I've changed the snippet here:
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 27
[Sidestory - First Day of Basic Training]
It was supposed to be something that took place in turn 7 since I couldn't any motivation for turn 6 stuff. That has since changed and I've also written a much better version of what I wrote there that I want to use later. Because of that, I replaced the snippet there with a Basic Training omake that I had written when I was first working on Antonius' character but ultimately didn't use. Just noting it here in case people wanted to read it.
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 18: Middle Punch
Gaius Antonius Omake # 18: Middle Punch

It was a sunny day outside the Antonius estate. In most places, that would sound pleasant, but in the Organ Meat Desert, a sunny day means temperatures in excess of 100 degrees, reaching as high as 120 in the absolute worst places. This estate, being constructed in the perfect spot for its inhabitants' comfort while still being close enough to any towns under their rule to oversee their administration, was not hit so hard. It was "only" 105 degrees, reduced further to a downright crisp 95 within its low-level climate control arrays. Needless to say, these were not the ideal conditions for training, but they were the only ones young Gaius had ever known.

Strike, strike, strike. Again and again Gaius punched the wooden post in front of him. There was no big secret to this particular exercise; he was simply toughening his fists. While cultivation wasn't allowed until he turned fifteen, he could still begin honing his body in certain ways beforehand, and this was one of them.

"Stop, that's not right." Liu Fei spoke up, gesturing at his son to come over.

"Again? How do I practice if you're just gonna stop me over and over?" Gaius protested.

"I'll stop you as many times as I have to. Mental endurance is just as important as physical endurance. That means staying focused and not getting sloppy." His father droned on again. "Make a fist with me again. We're not going to stop until you can do fifty punches without losing your form." He explained, holding up both open hands, palm out and fingers spread open.

The little boy sighed in annoyance but did as his father asked and held out his own hands.

"Fold your pinkie finger at the second and third knuckle. Then your ring finger, then your middle finger, then your middle finger. Keep your thumb out." Liu Fei explained methodically, doing as he explained. Gaius followed along, first with his right hand, then his left. "Now fold each finger at the first knuckle in the opposite order. Index, middle ring, pinkie." Gaius continued to follow the instructions, making the same motion he'd meticulously performed dozens of times now.

Liu Fei's gaze grew far sharper now, as he moved on to the next part of the lecture. "Finally, close your thumb over your index and middle fingers. Squeeze it tight, but not too tight; keep control of that power. Now, reflect on this koan: 'of all the weapons a human can wield, this is the simplest. It is one every human understands, but it is the most difficult to master. This is your fist, this is your hammer. All people are born with this hammer, and a mighty force sleeps within it.'"

"Papa, you say the same thing every time, I get it!" Gaius whined, only for his father to suddenly slap him across the cheek.

"If you're saying things like that, then you don't get it at all. That is the first line of the Hong Xuan Clan's Hand Conditioning Litany. It is not enough to know it, you must make it a part of yourself. Combat training isn't some trivial matter. Fights are decided by inches and seconds, and as the level of the fight gets higher, inches become milimeters and seconds become miliseconds." Liu Fei passionately lectured as Gaius rubbed his face. "Therefore, the physical, mental and spiritual foundations must be flawless, or as close to flawless as each person is able to produce. If the foundation fails then nothing else matters: you will lose."

This was a side of Gaius' father that the boy wasn't used to seeing. This normally compassionate, even slightly goofy man had become a critical, severe taskmaster. Gaius supposed this is what he got for asking his father to teach him: for the duration of the lesson, Liu Fei had stopped being his father and become his teacher.

He returned to the post and took up the basic Zhan Zhuang stance Liu Fei had taught him in the last two lessons. No moves, just the stance; they hadn't moved on until Gaius got it perfect. He continued to strike the post, not daring to complain when the skin on one of his knuckles finally broke, putting a tiny flack of blood on the post for each blow. He was almost there, just a few more-

"Stop! Return again."

Oh, come on! He was so close too!

Gaius sat through his father's tutorial yet again, but before he began punching again, worked up the nerve to ask a question. "Papa, I will not question your lesson, but can you please tell me why? Why does the fist need to be perfect?"

Liu Fei thought on that for a moment before deigning to answer. "I'm glad you're so curious, that's a good trait to have in moderation. Alright, let me give you an example. Your fist is made of bone, yes?"

The boy nodded his head in response, confused about where this was going.

"And your enemy's body is also made of bones, correct?"

Gaius nodded again, comprehension dawning on his face.

"A fist is designed to make your hand as hard as possible, so that the bones support each other and won't break. When bone hits bone, the weaker bone breaks. This is why we condition our hands, but it's also why your fist must be perfect. A hammer is no good if it's made of something weaker than what it's hitting, after all." Liu Fei clapped his hands, as if to punctuate the end of his statement. "Now, continue striking."

This time, Gaius performed fifty strikes without his stance being compromised.

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It wasn't until about half an hour later, while Gaius' hands were soaking in some stinging mixture of chemicals he didn't know the name of, that his bones began to ache. He continued to hold his hands under like his father instructed, but began to rock back and forth in discomfort. "Papa, how long will I have to do conditioning before I'm done?"

Liu Fei chuckled at this question. "Forever, boy. It never ends. The hands of a mortal martial artist eventually become so stiff they can't move their fingers at all, at which point their career is over, but this doesn't happen to Cultivators until the last few years of their lifespan. You'll be polishing your body and soul for the rest of your life."

The son quaked at this revelation. "I... I don't know if I could do something like that..."

In response, the father patted his head. "It seems scary now, just starting out, but one day it won't feel like work anymore. It will just be a part of your life, and then it will be much easier to do."

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The ever-dilligent Gaius took his father's words one step further, of course. Under his new Dao, training and cultivation had gone from a chore, to a routine, to an addiction. He had not been taught more than the basics by the time his father abandoned him to die, and in his despair, did not practice them for the first couple of years afterwards. It wasn't until he began writing dow his revelations into the way of The Seeker that the young boy once more began to condition himself.

He performed the Zhan Zhuang and other basic stances. He struck posts, trees and stones with his fists, knees, elbows, feet and shins, he did the most simple and fundamental of sword forms with brooms, mops and sticks. None of this meant anything, and it was no substitute for true, guided teaching. He wasn't even sure if he was doing the conditioning properly, in a way that would thicken the bone. The important part was that it made him feel better, made that restless energy swirling around inside him quiet down just a bit. This wasn't enough, of course, but it was better than nothing. Just five more years, he thought to himself as he reviewed those rudimentary lessons again and again. Just five more years and he could start Seeking for real.

Here's my first omake of the new turn! It's another chapter, showing some more of Gaius' relationship with his dad before things went wrong. Gaius' Zhan Zhuang stance and Middle Punch are things which will be important later on, so I wanted to emphasize them ahead of time, and I had the fun idea for them to be the only combat techniques his father ever taught him.

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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 33 [Turn 6] [The Drifting Cloud Style]
In which Quest overthinks a side-character's swordsmanship style even though she's given up swordsmanship. @Humbaba threadmark please!

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 33
[Turn 6]
[The Drifting Cloud Style]

The Drifting Cloud Style was born when Swordmaster Yahwen travelled from her home in order to refine her skills. The name was inspired by a drifting cloud that caught her attention during the first moment of rest she had on her journey. Though Yahwen knows many styles learned from studying various weapons and martial cultures, these are the ones she created to use with her sword.

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First Kata: Storm Cloud

The storm is unreadable and unrelenting, a discordance of only emotion and power. However, at its heart is always the eye.

The neutral stance of the drifting cloud style.

Unlike other swordmasters who attempt to conceal their intent, the user cloaks themselves in an aura of discordant qi that reveals their presence for all to sense but blurs their form and hides their intent making them impossible to read and predict.

This is possible due to the user pushing out every errant thought into the qi that shrouds their body, making it seem as if their heart is clouded and unsure where in actuality it had been honed into a pure blade of will.
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Second Kata: Gale

The wind flows in many forms, sometimes a caressing breeze and other times a punishing gale. It forms the path the cloud will follow.

The step techniques of the drifting cloud style.

Many of the step techniques present within this kata are present in arts of both Blade Duchies, representing at most the ones that this art's creator considered most suitable for herself. It's true refinement comes from another technique that greatly enhances the effect of all movement techniques.

By turning the blade will upon oneself, they can winnow the link between body and earth. A master of the art can turn as light as a feather at one moment and return to their full weight the next, allowing them to match step techniques with mere physical strength. With the application of step techniques of their own, they can leap between the limits of the realms.
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Third Kata: Rainfall

The raindrops drizzle down like so many blades.

This set of techniques focuses on a flurry of strikes.

Whether delivered as combos against a single opponent or multiple strikes on multiple opponents, it's movements are light, sharp and flexible - relying more on the honing of qi with the physical blade merely being a delivery mechanism.

It has also incorporated spiritual techniques used by blue dragon and green dragon archers designed to multiply an arrow during flight in order to increase the number of sword strikes even further.

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Fourth Kata: Lightning

The wrath of heaven made manifest.

This set of techniques focus on single devastating strikes.

Designed after studying the powerful blows of the axe clan and sect then refined into its complete form after watching a cultivator ascend into the next realm. It contains several strikes that aim to cleave an enemy apart with both will and steel.

The most powerful strike in this kata is said to be reminiscent of tribulation lightning. By drawing the cloud of discordant qi that surrounds her into her swing, she can infuse the attack with something akin to heavenly wrath. It leaves her unshrouded but in return, the blow can fell almost any enemy.


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Fifth Kata: Thunder

Where lightning strikes, thunder quakes.

This set of techniques focuses on feints and parries.

In particular, this kata uses the killing intent that precedes killing blows and uses it to replicate a shadow of the blade of will. When even feints are committed to fully, it becomes difficult to distinguish between attacks to kill and attacks that aren't.

It contains variations of nearly all other katas, allowing the swordmaster to freely switch between attacks and fients without the opponent being able to predict them or shift a technique just so, in order to deflect an attack.
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Sixth Kata: Sunbeam

Unexpectedly, the clouds part - a single beam of sunlight.

This set of techniques focuses on ambush.

In a style focused on duels where the enemy stands before you and relying on sheer skill to scrape by in all others, this is a technique that stands apart. By incorporating techniques to hide your presence such as is used by assassins, one can create an ambush even in the middle of a duel.

In an opportune moment, the swordmaster suppresses their presence completely and dances into the edge of the enemies perception, leaving behind the storm cloud of discordant qi as a decoy. While the enemy focuses on where they used to be, the swordmaster strikes from where they least expect it.

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Seventh Kata: Hail

Heavy and unending, the hail falls.

When all else has failed and their back is to the wall, the only thing a swordsman can rely on is unrelenting power. With an unwavering heart, a master can draw out power from the body that can take them beyond their limits.

This kata contains techniques to be used in such an eventuality. In order to succeed when failure isn't an option, the swordmaster delivers blows that are as numerous as Rainfall and as powerful as Lightning in order to completely overwhelm their enemy.
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Ninth Prince 10 - Trials and Tribulations
Ninth Prince




Trials and Tribulations




A/N: For reference, this is set at the beginning of the turn, and I'm gonna ask for a tribulation boost so I can actually mechanically break through.

It was finally time.

The formations were set, the treasures were put in place, the location was picked out.

He'd gone through a solid decade of tempering and preparation, solely for this moment, and now that the moment was upon him, it was all he could do to not burst out laughing in sheer joy.

Yes, after fourteen decades of preparation and advancement, it was finally time for the Ninth Prince to advance to foundation establishment!

...Hmmmm, that felt slightly off, as if the situation the Ninth Prince was currently in was actually worthy of all the gravitas and weight he'd given it. This was truly a departure from the normal.

Anyways, the Ninth Prince was currently in the middle of some last minute preparations, aligning the ritual circles with the geomantic qi flow, harmonizing the fourth leyline with his meridians, and laying out the various natural treasures that would be used to resist whatever form his tribulation would take.

The Ninth Prince had everything completely planned out, too.

The natural treasures were collected over decades of clan missions, some of them impossible to obtain in the third sea, taken off the corpses of the trial invaders.

The formations were made by Achille Adeptos himself, 12 pointed and able to stand up to an attack from a Core Formation cultivator, aspected to the NInth Prince's unique qi signature.

The location was meticulously planned out, various sites of significance taken into consideration. The ruins of what used to be the Temple of Scales, the spot outside the city where the Ninth Prince first made his legend by scaring off a Core Formation cultivator, the site of his impalement outside of Pleuron, all considered, and all ultimately discarded in favor of a whirling sandstorm housing a single headstone.

Even the time of day was carefully chosen, the dead of midnight, when the entire desert was completely silent, and the moon hung in the night sky like an enormous pearl.

As the Ninth Prince stepped into the middle of his formation circle, Ulo to his left, Kha, Li, and Ya to his right, and Raj behind him, all in circles of their own, he let out a small chuckle. It was funny really, the Ninth Prince had gone through all of this preparation, obtained everything necessary for his advancement, but the one thing he didn't have, the sole thing he hadn't prepared, was his Dao.

Yes, that was right. Even on the eve of his ascension, the moment when his Dao was supposed to be tested to see if it was worthy of carrying him to the next great realm, the Ninth Prince didn't have one.

Normally, he'd take a few decades to figure it out, strengthen it, and prepare for tribulation, but some deep instinct within the Ninth Prince was screaming at him to undergo his tribulation, and, weirdly enough, to bring the nine iron fangs created as a byproduct of the reconstruction of his body at Pleuron.

And the Ninth Prince hadn't gone this far in life without listening to his instincts, even the ones that didn't seem to have any rationale to them. It was why he never skipped his daily dose of liquid fire, after all.

But that was enough talking. It was time to start his tribulation.

With a flash of green light, the Ninth Prince flared his aura to the heavens, a wordless challenge to the Turtle World itself, a sign that he was ready to defy it, and ready for its punishment.

And the heavens acknowledged him.

A door opened in the middle of the sky, crackling with multicolored lightning and leading to nowhere. The Ninth Prince watched as the door swung fully open, and began to descend.

To his left, right, and behind him, the Ninth Prince's bonded companions were in the middle of their own tribulations, completely invisible to the Ninth Prince. He spared a quick moment to wish them luck (not that they'd need it, they were his bonded companions after all), before fully focusing on his impending trial.

The door continued to descend, moving slowly and inexorably until it was at eye level with the Ninth Prince.

And then, a figure emerged from the door, a faceless humanoid made entirely of lightning that quickly coalesced into a shimmering warrior, pale skinned and with brown hair, wearing a fur cloak and leather armor, and wielding twin axes that hummed with lightning.

The Ninth Prince got into a ready stance, preparing for an epic clash of equally matched opponents that would tear the heavens asunder, waiting for the tribulation to attack and begin the duel!

And the Ninth Prince waited.

And waited.

And waited some more, as the tribulation projection simply stood there for what seemed to be days but was more likely mere moments.

Eventually, even the Ninth Prince's legendary patience wore thin, and so the Ninth Prince did the obvious thing.

He relaxed, held his spear loosely to his side, and waved. "Hello! How are you doing this fine night?"

The Ninth Prince didn't expect a response, obviously, or at least not a verbal one. After all, this was simply lightning in the form of a being, but even so, he was hoping that the verbal gesture would provoke the projection into doing some-dear Vritra the tribulation was talking.

The white-skinned warrior seemed as confused about the whole thing as the Ninth Prince, scratching the back of his head with one arm. "Yaknow, I've been doing this for a long time, comes with the territory of being an imprint of a transmi-well, I'm not allowed to tell you exactly what I am, but just take my word for it, I've been around for a while. Anyways, I've done this tribulation gig before, hells, I even fought you about a millenia ago, but this is the first time someone's actually tried talking to me."

Well. That was certainly a thing. The Ninth Prince wasn't exactly sure how he was supposed to process this new development. He was expecting a fight, dagnabbit! "So… are we going to fight, or…?"

The tribulation projection (the Ninth Prince really needed to learn his name) chuckled a bit. "Heh. Only if you want to. Otherwise I can just sit down and talk with you, ask you a few questions about your Dao."

"...Might be a little hard now that I think about it, what with you not knowing what your Dao is, but I'll figure something out." The foreigner muttered, looking towards the ground with an expression of slight consternation on his face.

Right, yeah, that worked perfectly. A chance to exercise his prodigious intellect and also not have to kill someone? This might just be one of the better nights of the Ninth Prince's life! "So, how do we start?"

The lightning projection sat down on the desert sands, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same. Obviously, since he wasn't a boor, the Ninth Prince graciously obliged, and soon after, the two of them were crouched down right next to Zhu Bhujie's grave, almost as if the old man was acting as a Dao Protector for him.

"So, how this is going to work, is that I'm going to ask you a question. Just one. And you're going to respond with the answer that you feel is the most correct. This does still count as a tribulation though, so treat it with the gravity you'd treat a normal one."

The Foreigner sighed. "My name is Thorfinn Hekleson, and before I died, I was a cultivator of the stage that this sea calls Spirit Severing. I did things I regret, committed a few atrocities in my day, but for the most part, I've made peace with my actions, and while I regret them, they don't define my life anymore."

Thorfinn paused, looking for the right words to convey his actions. "...Right. There's no real easy way for me to say this so I'm just going to spit it out. I destroyed an entire clan. Some bastard stole my most prized possession, a fragment of a lightning god's corpse that I was going to forge into a weapon of unparalleled power, and then use to pave my way to the next Great Realm, what this Sea calls Spirit Severing..

He took it straight off my body, and I killed him. Flayed him alive with whips of lightning. Then I killed his family, father, mother, siblings, nieces, nephews, uncles, aunts, the whole bloodline. They didn't die peacefully, so I chained their mindless ghosts, and used those to kill the rest of his clan.

I annihilated them, every mortal, every vassal, every cultivator from the first stage to the fifth, and I did it all in a week. Then Ii salted the earth and turned their compound into a hell of lightning."

The Ninth Prince looked on in horror and vague nausea. Now, the Ninth Prince wasn't a stranger to gore, blood, or general atrocities, having seen quite a few committed by blood path fiends he wasn't able to stop in time. And even beyond that, he knew that those atrocities weren't limited to the enemy. Even the Archegetes had his fair share of sins on his shoulders, wiping out towns, poisoning innocents, and quite a bit more. And while the Ninth Prince didn't like it, he could understand the reasons and necessities behind the actions, even if his blood boiled into acidic venom at the mere thought of such things being needed at all.

But this? This senseless destruction of human (or otherwise) life? No, the Ninth Prince couldn't countenance that at all.

He was about to say so to Thorfinn's face, but then the lightning projection spoke once more, head bowed and cast in shadow.

"I believe I already know the answer to this, but I must ask it anyways, as is my duty as your tribulation."

And here, Thorfinn leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the last son of the Naag could hear the lightning crackling under Thorfinn's skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

The Ninth Prince didn't even hesitate. "No. Not in the slightest. Justice is not killing innocents, Justice is never punishing those with no connection to the crime. Justice is making sure that the target of your ire is fully deserving, and that nobody else gets caught up in your struggle against that target."

Thorfinn smiled, something not entirely happy, but not entirely sad. If there was an emotion that the Ninth Prince would put to that smile, it would be pride. "Good. I won't say whether or not that's correct, because I can't say whether or not that's correct, but it's what you truly believe, and that's what's important."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Thorfinn Hekleson, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his first trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Thorfinn, and he began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As he did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's first fang pillar, the one created at the end of his first year impaled on the pillar. "YOU MIGHT WANT TO KEEP AN EYE ON THAT!", Thorfinn yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to examine his first fang pillar, the tribulation door, forgotten up until now, opened once more.

And, for the second time, a faceless humanoid emerged from the door, before coalescing into a warrior, darker skinned than the people of the third sea but much lighter skinned than the Naag, wearing a set of thick fur and metal armor, wielding a polearm encased in lightning.

The Ninth Prince decided to wait again, bringing his spear into a ready stance, just in case what had happened with Thorfinn was a fluke, and his next trial would actually be glorious combat.

And he waited

And waited

And waited some more.

But as the warrior didn't move at all, the Ninth Prince decided to relax his stance, wave to the tribulation projection, and be polite. So naturally, he opened with a greeting. "Hello! How are you doing this fine night?"

And, just like Thorfinn, this lightning projection also began talking. "Anush Naag, Terror of Jharkhand, Lord of Ten Thousand Serpents, Ninth Prince of the Naag. I fought you about a thousand years ago, did you know that? Well, obviously you wouldn't, what with the lack of memory and all, but just take my word for it."

The foreigner crossed her arms. "You weren't very good at fighting back then, though I suppose you were good enough to beat the mindless version of me. But, based on what your earlier trial did, I assume you'd like to go with the 'talking about your Dao' option?"

Well obvi-wait what. "Are you saying that cultivators get a choice?"

The tribulation projection laughed. "HAH! No. Most of the time, almost 99.999 percent of it actually, the tribulation is mindless, because the heavens are mindless. The heavens have will, sure, but that will doesn't have form, if that makes sense. But then there's the weird cases, like with you. You crossed the seas as a first stage cultivator, alone and technically under your own power, and Heaven can't deal with that, so you get echoes of dead cultivators stored in the cycle of reincarnation instead.

And we get to give you a choice. Well, if we want to. And right now I want to."

The cultivator tilted her head and leaned forward. "Hopefully that makes sense to you, because if it doesn't, I'm not gonna explain it again. Anyways, you want to fight, or you want to talk?"

The question was obviously a no-brainer. Killing people was normally bad unless they deserved it. And while Thorfinn might have deserved it, there was no reason to think that this lady would too. "I'll take the talk, please."

The lightning projection scoffed a bit. "Of course you would. Don't know why I even bothered to give you the option to fight me. Anyways, name's Khultal. This is how this is going to go. I'm gonna tell you something I did back in the day, and then you're gonna answer a single question about that encounter. Now, technically, there's no wrong answer except for what feels wrong to you, but we both know that's kind of bullshit, so do your best. This is still tribulation you know, and it still has all of the nasty consequences for failure."

Khultal sat down, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same. As the Ninth Prince wasn't a peasant, he obliged, sitting down next to his father's grave.

"So," Khultal said "I'm just going to get right into this. I did something that I'm not proud of, but I'd do again if I had the chance. I killed like half a sect. There was a bastard who tried to jump me, and I exploded his head. I was gonna let that be the end of it, but then some of his friends got annoyed at me and I exploded their heads. Then their elders tried to kill me and I exploded their heads. And finally, like half the sect mobilized to try to kill me, from their lowliest first stage outer sect disciples to the fifth stage sect master himself. And, as you might guess, I exploded all of their heads.

So, Anush Naag, Ninth Prince. I have one single question for you."

And here, Khultal leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the former Nascent Soul could hear the crackling thunder under Khultal's skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

Hmmmm. This was actually an interesting case, because, on the surface, it seemed completely horrific, Khultal killing those much weaker than her with seemingly no hesitation whatsoever and barely any remorse. But if the Ninth Prince dug a little deeper, it was actually quite nuanced. Khultal, according to her account, hadn't killed anyone who wasn't trying to attack her first. Even the inciting incident was some sort of young master type trying to jump her, thus turning the following actions of his sect into a bunch of bullies trying to get revenge, instead of people trying to get justice for the untimely and unjustified demise of one of their friends or juniors.

And the Ninth Prince decided to say so. He had to, this was technically a tribulation after all. "Yes, this is justice. Justice is making sure that all who are involved in your wrongdoing are punished, and punished appropriately, and you did that. Those cultivators attacked you with intent to kill, over an incident that wasn't your fault. You were entirely within your rights to kill them."

Khutul smiled, fierce and proud."Good! I'm not allowed to say whether or not you were right, but the fact that I'm not trying to strike you down where you stand should be proof enough."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Khutul, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his second trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Khutul, and she began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As she did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's second fang pillar, the one created at the end of his second year impaled on the pillar. "KEEP THAT ONE CLOSE BY, YOU'LL NEED IT EVENTUALLY!", Khutul yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his second fang pillar, the tribulation door, for the third time, opened once more.

And, for the third time, a faceless humanoid emerged from the door, before coalescing into a warrior, slightly lighter skinned than the Naag, wearing the pelt of a large feline, and wielding an enormous club, edged with obsidian and wreathed in electricity.

The Ninth Prince decided to wait again, bringing his spear into a ready stance, not because he thought the third trial would be a fight, but because there was no sense in being incautious.

And he waited

And waited

And instead of waiting some more, the ninth prince just decided to get on with it, directly speaking to the lightning projection. "Hello there! I am the Ninth Prince of the Naag, and whenever you're ready we can start the whole debate thing. There's no real rush, I'm happy to wait for as long as you need to get prepared."

The tribulation projection looked a bit perplexed, blinking once and not saying anything for a solid minute. Just when the Ninth Prince was worried that his third trial was somehow defective, the foreigner began to speak. "I am… not entirely sure how to proceed from here. You knowing that the trial isn't single combat to the death brings a lot of the fun out of the entire thing. I was going to be mysterious about the whole endeavor, hit you with the old bait and switch, but we can't do that anymore, so I suppose I'll just get right into the debate."

Ah. That was unfortunate, the Ninth Prince didn't intend to ruin somebody else's dramatic entrance. Why, such a thing was the height of improper conduct! "My apologies for ruining your entrance. If you wouldn't mind, could you tell me about what you had planned?"

Asking about what the projection was going to do was the least the Ninth Prince could do to make it up to him.

As expected, the projection noticeably brightened up once the Ninth Prince asked him to explain his plot to shock and awe the Naag. "Well! I'm glad you asked! I was going to start with just staring at you wordlessly until your patience reached its end and you asked me what I was doing. After that, I'd say something cryptic about the stars having changed and a blood moon hanging in the sky, which would lead into a spiel about the fundamental nature of life and the universe that would enrapture you for a solid five minutes, after which it'd be revealed that my club was at your throat.

I'd remove my club from your throat, citing that I wanted a fair duel, hype the battle up by talking about how you defeated the mindless version of me in our previous clash, but now you didn't just have to fight some puppet, you had to fight a warrior of legend! Here I'd pause to talk about my great deeds for a while, bragging and leaving some key opportunities for you to hop in with your own bragging, then I would formally challenge you to what I'd refer to as 'the greatest contest in existence'. Once I'd hyped you up enough and got you ready for a fight, I'd sit down, and say that I was challenging you to reasoned debate."

The projection looked at the Ninth Prince expectantly. "So, would that have worked on you?"

The Ninth Prince thought about it for a moment before shrugging. "Maybe. Solidly maybe. In a vacuum, it'd probably work, I wouldn't be expecting it from you, that's for sure. But in this instance, I'm not entirely sure. See, both Thorfinn and Khutul made it very clear that I had a choice between fighting them and just debating them, and I've been doing the same trick to dozens of juniors, peers, and enemies since basically the day I arrived in the Third Sea. on anyone else, in any other time and place, it would be guaranteed to work. Even against me, here and now, it's still a solid maybe."

The lightning projection hummed. "Hmmmmm. Better odds than I expected, less than I hoped for. But that isn't important right now. What's important is actually continuing with your tribulation and debating you. So, let's just get right on with that shall we?"

The foreigner sat down by Zhu Bhujie's grave, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same, before opening up with his story. "First off, my name is Tolcotl. Just wanted you to know that. Now, the thing I actually did is very specifically something I don't regret in the slightest, but that the heavens have decreed that I should ask you. Well, technically they didn't decree it, since the heavens aren't actually sapient, but it comes to more or less the same thing either way, so I'm just going to roll with it. Anyways, the thing I did was breaking a bunch of laws. Basically every law of the overarching equivalent to your 'demonic path', as well as most of the ones of my sect. At the end of it all, I was supposed to be executed twelve times, but I managed to wriggle my way out of it. And if you're wondering exactly what I did, I organized a rebellion, and tried to cast down every single one of the sects that used slave labor, which was all of them.

So, now that you've heard the barest bones of my tale, I have but one question for you."

And here, Tolcotl leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the former Lord of Ten Thousand Serpents could hear the crackling thunder under his skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

...This was perhaps the easiest trial he'd faced so far. "Yes. One hundred percent yes, I could hardly think of something that would be more just. The law is not justice. Sometimes laws are just, and sometimes they aid in the process of justice, but laws are not just simply because they're laws. There's a law that allows blood path cultivators to eat any mortal, any time they wish, and I don't stop killing blood path villains just because they're technically obeying the law."

The Ninth Prince frowned. "This really shouldn't even be a question, it's a bit obvious isn't it?"

Tolcotl smiled, quiet and happy."Well, that's actually quite reassuring to hear, and I'm glad you think so."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Tolcotl, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his third trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Tolcotl, and he began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As he did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's third fang pillar, the one created at the end of his third year impaled on the pillar. "LET THIS BE MY FIRST AND FINAL GIFT TO YOU!", Tolcotl yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his third fang pillar, the tribulation door opened again.

And, for the fourth time, a faceless humanoid emerged from the door, before coalescing into a warrior, dusky skinned but lighter than the Ninth Prince, wearing desert garb along with an ornate gold neckpiece, wielding a curved sword that sparked with lightning.

The Ninth Prince decided to wait, despite being completely certain of how this was going to go, partly because he felt bad about interrupting Tolcotl's dramatic entrance (really, that was quite unforgivable of him, blood feuds between Fifth Sea noble houses had started for less), and partly because for some reason he was quite exhausted, though not enough to actually affect hm in any meaningful way.

So he waited.

And waited a bit more.

The Ninth Prince didn't really wait any more than that though, since at this point, the dramatic entrance thing would've happened or wouldn't have worked anyways, so he felt no guilt at trying to speak to the tribulation projection. "Hello there! My name is the Ninth Prince, as you already probably know, and I'm wondering exactly how we're going to do this. Is this going to be some sort of a fight, or a debate, or something else?"

The foreigner looked up, a bit startled, though her face quickly smoothed out into calmness. "Ah, my apologies, I was a tad lost in thought there. I am Nefara, and if there are no objections, shall we continue with your tribulation and trials?"

Huh. That was new. "So, just to be clear, you're not going to do some entertaining and time-lengthening prelude, filled with witty repartee and bearing the unique stamp of your personality?"

Nefara looked mildly confused. "Does… Does that happen often? Is that the correct protocol here?"

The Ninth Prince shrugged. "Eh, kind of. It isn't a protocol thing, but most of the challenges I've faced, even beyond this tribulation, mind you, spent a few minutes talking before we got into the actual challenge, and Thorfinn, Khutul, and Tolcotl did the same, though I suppose that something like this does technically count, so barring anything you want to add, I think we're good."

Nefara blinked, before continuing onwards. "All right then. I believe the protocol for this sort of trial is for both of us to take a seat?" Nefara sat down on the sand floor, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same.

"As you already know, my name is Nefara, and this will be your fourth trial. I will relay one of my many experiences relating to justice, and then I will ask you a question. This question must be answered to the best of your capability, after which I will judge whether or not you passed this trial. Is that clear, and are there any questions? This will be your only chance to ask them."

The Ninth Prince shook his head. "Everything seems quite clear, thank you."

Nefara clapped her hands, the sound echoing unnaturally, as if propelled by qi. "Wonderful. In that case, we shall now begin your fourth trial. The experience I will be relating to you is one of the various court cases I have presided over, specifically my greatest regret. The case in question was one between a noted, I believe you would call their cultivation stage Nascent Soul, and a minor family, the strongest among them being equivalent to your Foundation Establishment cultivators. The minor family had brought a list of grievances against the 'Nascent Soul', most notably murder, theft, deception, and the rape of the family head's daughter. The 'Nascent Soul' gave no justification for their acts beyond the fact that they were a much more powerful cultivator who had jurisdiction over the family and thus was entitled to do what they wished with the family in question.

Both sides gave their arguments, the minor family speaking of unfairness and the compact between a lord and their vassal, that the vassal would only serve the lord if the lord protected them and treated them fairly, while the stronger cultivator repeated their point of being able to do what they wished to lower cultivators under their jurisdiction.

I ruled in favor of the 'Nascent Soul', judging that their actions were, while distasteful, still allowed.

My question to you is as follows, Anush Naag of the Golden Devil Clan."

And here, Nefera leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the Beast Tamer from the Fifth Sea could hear the crackling thunder under her skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

There was absolutely no question here. The answer was as clear as the desert glass formed under the Ninth Prince's feet from the sheer heat of his incandescent rage. "This is not justice. Justice is treating all equally in both reward and punishment. The crimes that this Nascent Soul has committed, with seemingly no remorse or guilt, are worthy of death ten times over. In addition, as the arbiter of this unjust sentencing, I would recommend that you undergo some sort of penance or punishment yourself." The Ninth Prince said, voice as cold as ice and fury within his heart.

Nefara smiled, sad and forlorn. "Thank you for your judgement, I simply wish I had possessed such wisdom earlier."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Nefara, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his fourth trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Nefara, and she began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As she did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's fourth fang pillar, the one created at the end of his fourth year impaled on the pillar. "KEEP THIS NEAR YOU, IT WILL BE NECESSARY LATER!", Nefarata yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his fourth fang pillar, the tribulation door opened.

And, once more, a faceless humanoid made out of thunder and lightning emerged from that door, before coalescing into a warrior, almost as light skinned as Thorfinn, wearing shining metal armor and wielding a double-handed greatsword that crackled with electricity.

The Ninth Prince, sort of lazily at this point because it was really obvious that nobody was going to actually fight him, got into a ready stance with his spear and waited a bit. Not out of any thoughts that this was going to go different than the last four trials, but because it was protocol at this point.

And he waited.

And he waited some more.

And, finall-

"WHAT HO, YOUNG HERO! I AM SER LUCINA CHATTERBURY THE FOURTH, AND I AM HERE FOR ONE PURPOSE! TO CHALLENGE YOU TO HONORABLE, RIGHTEOUS DEBATE!" Before the Ninth Prince could even greet this projection, she introduced herself with a bombast that nearly put the Ninth Prince to shame.

Nearly.

Slightly thrown off his game, the Ninth Prince took a second to compose himself. "Well! Hello there! I am the Ninth Prince, and, unless you have any witty repartee or banter you would like to complete beforehand, should we start the trial?"

Thankfully, Lucina responded in a much quieter tone of voice. "Of course! I have quite a large stockpile of witty banter I would like to empty out by the time this trial is over, but my duty requires that I act as the arbitrator to your trial, sharing one of my personal experiences and asking you a question about that experience! After the trial, however I'd be sucked back into the heavenly tribulation, and I wouldn't be able to actually use any of my banter. Truly a conundrum for the ages, one of life's greatest problems!"

The Ninth Prince was engaging in a spot of self reflection. ...Was this how he sounded to others? He hoped so, this was amazing!

But Lucina's conundrum was quite worrying indeed, especially as a possible fate that could await the Ninth Prince. Would he have to one day worry about doing his duty versus having a bit of fun? To that end, the Ninth Prince decided to try and solve her issue, or at least mitigate it. "Well, it seems to me that while you won't be able to use your banter on me, there have to be at least four other people stuck in the tribulation with you, right? Why don't you just start a good banter with one of them?"

Lucina reeled back as if struck, getting her bearings with a smile on her face. "OF COURSE! Why didn't I think of that myself?! Thank you The Ninth Prince, you have opened my eyes to an entirely new world of possibilities! But, now, we must continue with your trial, as time is of the essence! It isn't really of the essence, but I want to finish this up so I can put your advice into practice!"

Lucina sat down by Zhu Bhujie's grave, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same. "I am Ser Lucna Chatterbury the Fourth, and this is your trial! The experience that I wish to share with you is as follows: I was the leader of a Knightly Order, the equivalent to one of your sects, and we were at war with quite a few other Knightly Orders. One of these enemies eventually mustered an enormous army, made up of cultivators equivalent to your Qi Gathering, Foundation Establishment, and Core Formation stages, trying to assault my castle. My subordinates and juniors wished to fight them all in an enormous battle, but I forbid them from doing it, because I didn't want to see any of them get hurt. Instead, I warded the castle with all of the formations I could, killed the enemy leader, equivalent to what your sea would call a Nascent Soul, after one hundred years of combat, sped back to the castle, and destroyed the army laying siege to the fortress.

I'm not sure why I was directed to ask you this, the answer is pretty clear cut, but I suppose I have to.

So, The Ninth Prince."

And here, Lucina leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the Terror of Jharkhand could hear the crackling thunder under her skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

Hmmm. The answer seemed quite clear at first, of course this was justice, Lucina solved the problem and did so without a single one of her juniors getting hurt. But, the more the Ninth Prince thought about it, the less certain he was, until, finally, after half an hour of thought, the Ninth Prince gave his response. "No. This is not justice. Justice would be letting your juniors fight like they wished to, instead of trapping them in a siege for a hundred years. Coddling your juniors isn't justice, because when you are gone, they'll once more become prey to all the horrors around them, unable to fight back. Justice is making your juniors stronger, not doing everything for them." The Ninth Prince said, as Lucina stepped back as if struck by a mighty blow.

Lucina smiled, shaky and unsure. "I… I have a lot to think about. Either way, thanks for the insight. I don't know how long it would've taken me to figure this out on my own."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Lucina, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his fifth trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Lucina, and she began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As she did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's fifth fang pillar, the one created at the end of his fifth year impaled on the pillar. "HERE, AS A BIT OF A THANKS FOR HELPING ME OUT!", Lucina yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his fifth fang pillar, the tribulation door opened.

And, for the sixth time, a faceless humanoid made out of electricity emerged from that tribulation door, before coalescing into a warrior, one with a skin tone almost exactly like the natives of the third sea, dressed in ornate silks and armor and wielding a bow whose arrows sparked with thunder.

The Ninth Prince didn't even bother getting his spear into a ready stance. He knew the drill, he knew what was going on, and there was no real point to moving into a battle stance when there was zero chance of an actual battle.

As was customary by this point, the Ninth Prince waited for the projection to speak. It wasn't out of any hope that the projection would speak first, since that only happened once, and Lucna seemed quite out of the ordinary for a tribulation projection.

And he waited, but only for a little bit before speaking. "Hello! I'm the Ninth Prince, and, unless I am quite severely mistaken, you are my trial examiner. Would I be correct in that assumption?

The tribulation projection looked at the Ninth Prince with something quite similar to contempt, albeit less severe. "Hmmm, yes, yes I am. It is good to see that your mental faculties are capable of basic logical leaps. I will in fact be debating you today, and unlike the vast majority of the beings that I must unfortunately call peers, I have no patience for small talk. I despise being on this mortal plane for more than an instant longer than I actually must. My name is Wutian, I am from this Sea originally, though I was here before that Soup Chef fool killed the damn Turtle Young and damned this place to forever be the least of the seas. As I have said twice already, I am your examiner for the sixth trial of your tribulation. I say this three times so that I am certain you will remember it. Now, do you have any questions that I am required to answer, or shall I move to the important part of this trial?"

The Ninth Prince already hated this guy. But dislike of a person shouldn't be a factor when interacting with them, unless that person was someone like a Blood Path fiend of course. So, in the most polite tone he could muster, the Ninth Prince responded to Wutian. "No, I have no questions to ask you."

Wutian gave the Ninth Prince a look that from anyone else would be approval. "Well, perhaps you aren't as idiotic as I had assumed. But that is irrelevant. Now, sit." Wutian took a seat by Zhu Bhujie's grave, and motioned for the Ninth prince to follow.

"I will not waste my time explaining your trial, as you have undertaken it five times before this and I trust that you already know what it is. My name is Wutian, and this is the experience I will share with you today. In my travels, I came across a minor clan of qi gathering cultivators and mortals. The Patriarch of the 'clan' was barely in early foundation establishment, but their hidden valley and complete lack of any importance whatsoever allowed them to live peacefully with almost no strife. That is, until a young master from one of the larger Righteous Sects in my region took a fancy to the Patriarch's sister, promising the clan eternal stability if she married him. The sister had no interest in the young master, already having a husband and happy family, but the young master was insistent, throwing around the weight of his grandfather's reputation as a Nascent Soul. This is when I stepped in, claiming that this family was a clan of my descendants and daring this young master to bring his grandfather into this, as his grandfather was a weak old pissant who didn't deserve the title of nascent soul.

After the young master was scared off, I told the 'clan' that I had lied, they weren't related to me, I did all of this because I disliked the young master's face, and that we would never see each other again. I gave them a small stone that would call me if the pissant made trouble, which I would then use as an excuse to kill the pissant and his grandson. After that I left and never returned.

So, whatever your name is."

And here, Wutian leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the transmigrator could hear the crackling thunder under his skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

This was… mildly complicated, but not as thought provoking as the situation given by Lucina. On the surface, it seemed like Wutian was meddling with affairs that weren't his to meddle in, but the fact of the matter was that the clan had no other option, and as soon as the situation was resolved, Wutian stopped meddling. In that light, the answer was clear. "Yes, this was justice. Justice is not meddling with the affairs of your juniors, but that wasn't what happened here. You didn't coddle or save your juniors from a situation they could've handled, you stepped in when there was no other option for that clan, and once you weren't needed, you left."

Wutian smiled, arrogant and proud. "Of course my actions are justice. Really, you make it sound like there was any other option."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Wutian, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his sixth trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Wutian, and he began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As he did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's sixth fang pillar, the one created at the end of his sixth year impaled on the pillar. "YOUR PERFORMANCE WAS ADEQUATE!", Wutian yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his sixth fang pillar, the tribulation door opened for the seventh time.

And, for the seventh time, a faceless humanoid made out of tribulation lightning emerged from the tribulation door, before coalescing into a warrior, browner than the residents of the third sea, but of similar lightness of skin, wearing deerskin clothes, beaded necklaces, and a feathered headpiece, wielding twin daggers that sparked with lightning.

Once more, the Ninth Prince waited, though not for nearly as long this time, barely even a few minutes really, since he knew the score and was, by this point getting quite tired. As a cultivator of the Twelfth Heavenstage, he didn't need much sleep, but the Ninth Prince had been up for a solid week straight preparing for his tribulation, and he was beginning to get to the 'eyes feeling heavy' stage of sleep loss, which wasn't healthy. Proper sleep was the foundation of a proper life, after all.

So, after barely a minute or two, the Ninth Prince decided to just get on with it. "Hello! My name is the Ninth Prince! Shall we get on with my examination, or trial, or tribulation, or whatever you want to call it?"

The tribulation projection, to her credit, barely blinked at the Ninth Prince's brazen request, instead just rolling with it. "Well, yes, if you wish to, we can skip the formalities and move straight to the important part, though, based on your previous trials, I assumed you would have wanted to engage in pre-debate talking, witty remarks and that sort of thing. If you don't want to do that, however, I am perfectly fine with continuing onwards. Oh, also, for reference, my name is Dyani."

The Ninth Prince shrugged. "While normally I would be quite interested in banter and witty repartee, as of current, I am getting quite tired, and I do believe this actually counts as banter, so barring anything you want to say, I think we're good to go."

Dyani nodded her head, then took a seat next to Zhu Bhujie's grave, motioning for the Ninth Prince to sit down next to her. "Now that both of us are seated, we may start your trial in earnest. Of course, there is protocol to follow, so I'll be explaining the rules of the trial. I will share one of my life experiences with you, after which you will be asked a question. This question must be answered with complete sincerity, and there is a right answer. After you have answered your question to the best of your ability, I will judge whether or not you have passed the trial. If you fail, you will be struck down by the full force of what you would know as a nascent soul."

Dyani clapped her hands. "Right! With that out of the way, let us move on to the actual trial. The experience I will be sharing with you today is one I regret deeply. During my time as a wandering expert, I fought dozens of monsters, the beings you call spirit beasts, that were at my power level. During one of these hunts, the monster fled into a small hamlet that we destroyed through the sheer force of our battle. I could have let the monster flee, catching up to it somewhere else and fighting it away from civilization, but during that time, it would have almost certainly been able to eat an entire city's worth of cultivators and mortals alike, at the very least. This beast was a glutton of a monster, with ten mouths and a voracious appetite. I sacrificed the lives of the few for the survival of the many.

And so, Ninth Prince of the Naag."

And here, Dyani leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the member of the Indomitable Thirteen could hear the crackling thunder under her skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

The Ninth Prince was genuinely unsure about this one for a second. Not long, not more than a second or maybe even two, but even that hesitation was enough to show just how exhausted he really was. Still, after breaking through that little mind fog, the answer was obvious. "No, this is not justice. Justice isn't calculating the worth of a group of lives, because every life is immeasurable in value, more so than all other lives in the turtle world, yet paradoxically equal in importance. You cannot weigh lives as arithmetic, or, at the very least, you shouldn't. There are times when hard decisions must be made, yes, and this was a hard decision for sure, maybe even the correct decision. But that doesn't mean that this decision was just. Justice is saving everyone and anyone you can save, never letting an innocent get hurt if you can help it. True justice might be impossible, but the closer we get to it, the better things are for everyone."

Dyani smiled, soft and calm. "I concur with your judgement, and I appreciate the affirmation of my personal beliefs on the matter."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Dyani, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his seventh trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Dyani, and she began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As she did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's seventh fang pillar, the one created at the end of his seventh year impaled on the pillar. "A TOKEN OF MY APPRECIATION FOR YOUR JUDGEMENT!", Dyani yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his seventh fang pillar, the tribulation door opened for the eighth time.

And, for the eighth time, a faceless humanoid made out of thunder and lightning emerged from the tribulation door, before coalescing into a warrior, darker skinned than those of the third sea, and around the same as the Ninth Prince before he was turned into iron, but slightly redder skinned than those of the fifth sea, wearing brightly patterned cloth and wielding a shield that sparked with lightning.

Once again, the Ninth Prince waited, though this time, barely for anything more than a few minutes, since there was no other real way this was going to go other than a debate. Still, traditions had to be upheld, and at this point, it was kind of a tradition for the Ninth Prince to wait for a bit before calling out to his trial giver, almost like the invisible hand controlling events just beyond the fabric of the world had intentionally set up a formulaic method of weaving the tapestry of fate, in order to make things easier on themselves.

But that was silly, after all, the Ninth Prince had full control over his decisions and actions!

The Ninth Prince punched himself in the face.

...What. Why did he-

...On second thought, it was probably best not to think about such things.

ANYWAYS, it was time for the Ninth Prince to greet this tribulation projection, and greet them he would. "Hello there! I am the Ninth Prince, as you might already know, and I assume you're here to be my eighth trial?"

The tribulation projection looked up at the Ninth Prince, as if only just now realizing he was there."Ah, yeah, you assume correctly. I'm here to be your trial and also your examiner, but you know the score by now. A debate, although it's more me just asking you a question than a debate, and then you have to answer whatever question I ask you. You probably already know what the question I'm gonna ask is, but we have to do this by the book otherwise the higher-ups get mad, so I can't tell you what I'm gonna ask.

Now, you got any questions, or can I just get into this? Afraid we don't have any time for witty banter or stuff like that, you're gonna need all the time you can get for dealing with your ninth trial examiner." The tribulation projection winked. "He's a character, that's for sure."

The Ninth Prince blinked. "Alright, I appreciate the heads up, and I don't have any questions."

The foreigner sat down by Zhu Bhujie's grave, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same, which he obviously obliged. "Last thing before we get into this; my name's Alinta. Now, here's the experience I'm going to share with you. During my youth and my travels, I was approached by a coalition of lesser cultivators, minor sects and clans that had leaders at the peak of what you would consider the 'core formation' stage. They were being beset by bandit cultivators and raiders, of equal cultivation to their own but potent killing arts, and they had no recourse but to beg me to act as their champion and protector, and slaughter the raiders so that they could know peace. Naturally, I refused.

Instead, I taught them, showed them secret realms useless to one such as myself but of immeasurable value to their lesser cultivators, parted with small trifles from my vast library of techniques, and offered insight on the Dao to the greatest among their number. Eventually, I forged the cultivators into an army capable of standing up to the raiders, and after many long and bloody battles, the forces I had trained stood victorious, even as their numbers were severely lessened by the conflict.

And so, Ninth Prince of the Naag."

And here, Alinta leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the Good Seed of the Golden Devil Clan could hear the crackling thunder under her skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

The Ninth Prince was actually a bit perplexed. On the surface, this looked simple, but it was actually surprisingly complicated, because both sides of this question were obvious answers. This was obviously not justice because she let innocents die, but at the same time, hadn't the Ninth Prince himself said that letting one's juniors rely on oneself instead of growing on their own was actually injustice?

This was going to be tricky indeed.

Eventually, after quite some time of deliberation, ten whole minutes in fact, the Ninth Prince had his answer. "Yes. This is justice. Honestly, any choice that you could've made there, other than allying with the raiders or leaving them to rot, would have had a good argument for counting as justice, but what you chose was perhaps the most just option you could've picked. You laid out quite a few of your own secrets and techniques in an attempt to help them, and more so, you did it in a way that made it so that they could stand on their own two feet after you'd left. The acting as a champion thing would have been kind and perhaps the right thing to do, since you could always teach them afterwards, but kindness and justice aren't always the same thing. Justice is giving someone the tools they need to solve their own problems, not solving their problems and then giving them the tools they need to solve them."

Alinti smiled, sharp and proud. "Well, thanks for saying that I was right. Obviously I can't tell you whether you were right or not, protocol and all, but you should probably know already."

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Alinti, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his eighth trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Alinti, and she began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As she did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's eighth fang pillar, the one created at the end of his eighth year impaled on the pillar. "HERE'S YOUR GIFT FOR PASSING YOUR TRIAL, DO ME PROUD KID!", Alinti yelled, before disappearing completely.

As the Ninth Prince went over to collect his eighth fang pillar, the tribulation door opened for the final time.

And, finally, signalling the beginning of the end of the Ninth Prince's trials, a faceless humanoid made out of thunder and lightning emerged from the tribulation door, before coalescing into a warrior, one with the exact same skin tone as the Ninth Prince pre-ironification, dressed in the finery of the Cultivator Dynasties from the Fifth Sea, some sort of bloodline giving him snake-like eyes, angular facial features, and fangs, wielding a spear eerily similar to the Ninth Prince's own.

And then the Ninth Prince realized who this was, and he was stopped dead with shock. The tribulation projection seemed to feel the same way, both sides shocked into silence, waiting for the other to make the first move.

And they waited.

And waited.

And waited some more.

Until finally, both sides, the Ninth Prince, and the nascent soul version of him that was currently acting as his trial examiner, replied with the exact same words at the exact same time.

"WHAT IN THE FUCK IS GOING ON?!"

Sadly, there was no answer.

The Ninth Prince held his head with one hand. "...Al-Alright. I can-I can figure this out. We can work through this. This is pretty weird, I'm not going to lie, but I think I have a basic theory. All the other trial examiners were Nascent Soul, so it stands to reason that you are too. And the only time I was a Nascent Soul was before I was wiped of my memories and transported to another Sea. Add me moving from one sea to another has something to do with the entire thing, so, unless I miss my mark, you're me, just the me that was lost in the space between the seas due to the Curse of Regression and Exile, somehow absorbed into heavenly tribulation. That sound about right?"

The other Ninth Prince (right, this was going to get weird fast. Note to the Ninth Prince's internal narration: the Nascent Soul Ninth Prince would be referred to as Anush, while the normal Ninth Prince would be referred to as the Ninth Prince.) blinked, before speaking. "Yeah, that sounds about right. Now, no offense, but you're kind of creeping me out, so instead of exploring the moral, societal, and psychological implications of this, I'd prefer to just start the trial. So that's what I'm going to do."

Anush sat down by Zhu Bhujie's grave, motioning for the Ninth Prince to do the same. "So, you know the drill, I'm an intelligent person so I know you are too. I'm just gonna skip the entire introduction. Here's the experience I want to share with you. My younger sister, my favorite sibling, was raped by a man I considered my closest friend. Bhrigu fled his punishment when I heard of his deeds, and I chased him all the way to Jharkhand, where I slaughtered every man, woman, and child within the city's walls, mortal to what your adopted clan calls core formation, and used their corpses to create snakes of blood, bone, and sinew, which I used to attack Bhrigu, nearly killing him before his father intervened.

And here, Anush leaned in close to the Ninth Prince, close enough that the Naag Prince could hear the crackling thunder under his skin. "I ask of you this: Is this Justice?"

What.

What.

WHAT.


The Ninth Prince HOWLED his rage to the skies, a wordess cry of fury that broke the sandstorm around him through sheer anger. BHRIGU had done this? That bastard of a man he once called friend?

Death would be too good for his sins, and the Ninth Prince would burn the rivers and SALT THE EARTH, RAZE THIS BASTARD'S CLAN AND HOME TO THE GROUND, LEAVING NOTHING FOR EVEN THE VULTURES TO FEAST O-

With supreme force of will borne from years of repressing his problems until designated brooding time, the Ninth Prince calmed himself.

He knew Bhrigu's clan had fallen to deep dark depths, the Randhawa were obviously those who were attacking the Golden Devils, but beyond Bhrigu, the Ninth Prince had no real interaction with them, not even enough to talk about their fighting style, and he fully assumed that his old friend was either unaware or had raged against this injustice.

But Bhrigu would get what was coming to him eventually, this the Ninth Prince swore on his very soul. For now, however, there was a trial and a tribulation to finish. So the Ninth Prince gave his answer to himself. "No. This was not justice, as much as it pains me to admit it. Bhrigu deserved anything you did to him, but the mortals and lesser cultivators of the Randhawa? I cannot say that all of them were free of heinous sin, but I can easily say that not all of them possessed said sin."

The Ninth Prince frowned. "But that isn't the question you're trying to ask, is it? This is too easy for a final trial of a tribulation. The real question you're asking here is if I am Justice, is that correct?"

Anush nodded. "Right on the money, as expected of, well, me."

The Ninth Prince continued on with his speech. "And the answer to that question is no. I'm not justice. I'm someone who tries to execute its will, who tries to bring justice wherever he goes, but I'm not justice. My opinions are not automatically justice, and I'm not automatically just. I'm a person, and I'm imperfect. Hopefully, one day, I'll be able to get as close to justice as possible, but that isn't right now."

Anush smiled, fanged and happy. "Alright, that's good enough for me. Let's wrap this up, shall we?"

The tribulation projection looked up towards the heavens and spoke in a voice like thunder, addressing some unknown entity far out of sight. "I, Anush, do swear that the Ninth Prince of the Naag has faced and completed his ninth and final trial."

With those words, a bolt of lightning struck Anush, and he began to dissolve into sparks of electricity. As he did, some of that electricity was dragged into the Ninth Prince's ninth fang pillar, the one created at the end of his final year impaled on the pillar. "THAT'S ALL OF THEM, NOW YOU JUST NEED TO FIGURE OUT WHAT TO DO WITH THEM!", Anush yelled, before disappearing completely.

The tribulation door began to fall apart, dissolving and ascending back into the heavens, until it was completely invisible.

The Ninth Prince picked up his final fang pillar, looking at all nine of them together. He had a faint inkling of his dao, and he'd passed his tribulation, but he still wasn't Foundation Establishment yet.

There had to be something he was missi-

Oh.

Metaphysical parallels, rebirth and rejuvenation.

Yeah, the Ninth Prince knew what he was supposed to do.

The Ninth Prince stowed away eight of his fang pillars, leaving only the first in his palms. Gripping the dagger sized fang with both hands, he angled the tip towards his stomach, the exact area where he'd been impaled at pleuron, and, in one fluid motion, stabbed the fang pillar into his stomach and out the other end.

Miraculously, this did nothing bad to the Ninth Prince, the fang pillar slowly being absorbed into his body instead of acting like a dagger should act when it's stabbed into a person.

Eventually, the fang pillar was fully absorbed into the Ninth Prince's Dantian, and with that absorption came understanding, a sublime epiphany.



रक्षा करना





PROTECT




THE




INNOCENT





रक्षा करना





And, on the heels of that epiphany, came a smaller one. The Ninth Prince's Fang Pillars weren't Fang Pillars (Or, they were, but not just that), they were his Dao Pillars.

But the Ninth Prince could have all the realizations he wanted later. For now, it was time to relax, as Ulo, Kha Li and Ya, and Raj emerged from their circles, bearing the auras of Foundation Establishment, similar to his own.

The sun began to rise in the distance, visible through the sandstorm and painting the sky with a rainbow of reds and golds and purples.

The Ninth Prince took a deep breath.

So this was Foundation Establishment, huh?

It felt good.

Yeah, it felt real good.

A/N: It's certainly been a long ride, hasn't it? And I can't wait for more.

@occipitallobe
Thank you.
For this quest, for the writing, for the system, for everything.
I can't wait to see where we go next.
 
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Holy shit, is that an 11k update? For one of my fan-favorite characters at that, too! :D
The projection looked at the Ninth Prince expectantly. "So, would that have worked on you?"

The Ninth Prince thought about it for a moment before shrugging. "Maybe. Solidly maybe. In a vacuum, it'd probably work, I wouldn't be expecting it from you, that's for sure. But in this instance, I'm not entirely sure. See, both Thorfinn and Khutul made it very clear that I had a choice between fighting them and just debating them, and I've been doing the same trick to dozens of juniors, peers, and enemies since basically the day I arrived in the Third Sea. on anyone else, in any other time and place, it would be guaranteed to work. Even against me, here and now, it's still a solid maybe."

The lightning projection hummed. "Hmmmmm. Better odds than I expected, less than I hoped for. But that isn't important right now. What's important is actually continuing with your tribulation and debating you. So, let's just get right on with that shall we?"
I am liking these conversations and interactions so far. So much.

And -- I'm going to call it here and now, before I get further than the third Trial. I read the third trial, and with the Ninth Prince concluding 'This was the easiest question yet! What the heck?' and -- well. The narrative impetus is pretty clear here -- that of "These are all obvious questions and answers! It just... it's simple, right. Right?" -- though I suspect a difficulty spike around question 5 or 8 or so, but - I suspect that this will continue, and...

The final question he's asked?

The question that he will also go "That's obvious!" to?

... And which, in its obviousness, will make him literally kick himself and go "I AM SO STUPID! How did I not see that??" over it?

That question will be:

"What is your Dao?"

and the answer will be:

Justice.

And the Ninth Prince is going to be kicking his own butt over the fact that he didn't know and name this from the start, agh, how embarassing! ... Although on second thought, since he had been walking this path from the start, and keeping to it as much as he could, and -- all that's changed is that he just spoke the name out loud. It's just a realization and voicing. A formalization if you will.

So, that's my guess for what the Dao of the Ninth Prince will be: it will be THE DAO OF GREAT JUSTICE!!!

... And that is my prediction, for what his Dao is going to be.


To go a bit further though. What upholds Justice? What are the pillars that uphold Justice?

Why, nothing could be simpler; Virtues. That is what upholds justice.

Whether that be Virtues such as Wisdom, that which is the virtue of "making the right decision" -- actually a crucial virtue. As, if you do not know what the right thing to do is, how can you do the right thing? (Other than by defaulting to instinct or ethics, of course.)

Prudence/Wisdom, Justice/Fairness/Righteousness, Fortitude/Courage, Temperance...

... Okay, I guess my brilliant continuation of "What supports Justice? What could be the Pillars of Justice? Why, Virtues!" ran into the slight issue that one of the virtues is called Justice itself. Er. I guess you could label Justice an ideal, and use the "Righteousness" name of it, then...

... Although, other possible issues arise of the fact that there are only 4 virtues. And also, "Steel" and "Poison" are probably going to be Pillars for the Ninth Prince in Foundation Establishment, so... Hm.

EDIT: Ah, I was off a bit it seems.

The question was: "Is what you do, automatically just?" and the answer was: "No, because I am a man who tries to do justice; I am not justice itself."

His path may be that of justice, but that is because he tries to walk it; he tries to talk the talk and walk the walk, and to be just. Also a bit similar to the Euthyphro dilemma too. Sorta.
 
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