Harry And The Shipgirls: Prisoner of Shipping (A HP/KanColle Snippet Collection)

It's a good thing Harry didn't need to use Cajun voodoo to interact with his Friends on the Other Side.
Well, who knows about Louisiana?
In which Harry's mortality is discussed (although, due to the setting's mechanics, death, while tragic, isn't final.), and Harry and Ian...
wait. waitaminute. :o DID IAN SERIOUSLY SPILL THE BEANS ABOUT FLEET ENDING?!?!
Considering who we are talking about here...
And an even better thing that his Friends are actually helpful, and won't foreclose on his soul at the drop of a hat. Except Amaterasu. She foreclosed ages ago.
"Bork!"
I wonder what Ian just set in motion...
Are you seriously telling me you didin't realize that already? Of course he did.
He's a potter he finds it both funny And normal why wouldn't he talk about it?
Also, consider who we are talking about and what he got up to...
I think it's a terrible idea. Creating a character for the sake of shipping them with Nagato is a poor idea in any way, such things tend to end up with cancerous outgrowth characters that obviously don't belong.

Doesn't help that the language of the original idea immediately objectifies Nagato and reduces her to an extension of her husband.
... Dude, dial it back a little. You're throwing around some pretty heavy accusations there. And maybe have some trust in Harry's writing that he could create yet another interesting OC that will fit into the world that's been built up here without somehow sticking out like a sore thumb. As for your second point... dafuq are you on about?
I have to agree with @Shaithan here. This isn't the first time someone brought up Nagato needing a significant other for the reason of 'She is a woman and can't raise a man correctly.' Nagato has done well enough as a single parent. She doesn't 'need' a man because being a single mother is 'wrong.'
*Shrug* I just said that it was interesting to be honest, that was all, nothing for or against.

Though... it is somewhat better then the idea of dragging Lily back and eventually pairing the two of them off.
 
Well, yes, but... he is talking about the two of them getting into a relationship with each other. Not going to happen.
You mean that kind of relationship. There are many kinds of relationships, sexual being but one (or maybe a few if you want to subdivide). Siblings is a relationship. In their brother's household, the wife/concubine-friend relationship, as far as we've seen. The closer-than-sibling friendship between Richardson and Hiei (and I hope that's not going to get downgraded to something sexual). Admiral and fleet; granted, that can get complicated with shipgirls :confused:, but most of Goto's fleet don't feel toward him like Kongo does. The complicated web of relationships among the swords--a psych major could do a dissertation on that family!

HL shows some of these other kinds of relationships, although there's a tendency to move towards the romantic or erotic, as with Ooi/Kitakami recently. (Originally it was shown as friendship with a degree of codependence on one side. Ooi admitted as much.*)

Erotic is only one kind of love. Too many fanfic writers forget that there are other sorts of relationships that they can portray (or try). Professional writers, for that matter, can fall into the same trap, although that can depend on genre. ahemLyraahem

* And yes, relationships can evolve. But into bed isn't the only possible direction.

I have to agree with @Shaithan here. This isn't the first time someone brought up Nagato needing a significant other for the reason of 'She is a woman and can't raise a man correctly.' Nagato has done well enough as a single parent. She doesn't 'need' a man because being a single mother is 'wrong.'
I don't remember anyone implying that. Some people just want to see Nagato in a happy romantic relationship*, not something degrading. And I don't see Nagato tolerating a man who tries to undermine her strength as a ship or as a woman and mother.

* Or they just want everybody fixed up--see thread title. o_O
 
You mean that kind of relationship. There are many kinds of relationships, sexual being but one (or maybe a few if you want to subdivide). Siblings is a relationship. In their brother's household, the wife/concubine-friend relationship, as far as we've seen. The closer-than-sibling friendship between Richardson and Hiei (and I hope that's not going to get downgraded to something sexual). Admiral and fleet; granted, that can get complicated with shipgirls :confused:, but most of Goto's fleet don't feel toward him like Kongo does. The complicated web of relationships among the swords--a psych major could do a dissertation on that family!
Wait, how could Hiei and Richardson get downgraded considering how close those two and it that both of them outright stated that she had a real good chance at having scored the ring?

But yes, the Twins knew that they were likely to be in a wife/concubine relationship at best.
HL shows some of these other kinds of relationships, although there's a tendency to move towards the romantic or erotic, as with Ooi/Kitakami recently. (Originally it was shown as friendship with a degree of codependence on one side. Ooi admitted as much.*)

Erotic is only one kind of love. Too many fanfic writers forget that there are other sorts of relationships that they can portray (or try). Professional writers, for that matter, can fall into the same trap, although that can depend on genre. ahemLyraahem

* And yes, relationships can evolve. But into bed isn't the only possible direction.
Er, from the very start it has been hinted that Ooi and Kitakami were in love with one another... Especially as that is canon in the game. All I did was not shove it into people's faces.
I don't remember anyone implying that. Some people just want to see Nagato in a happy romantic relationship*, not something degrading. And I don't see Nagato tolerating a man who tries to undermine her strength as a ship or as a woman and mother.

* Or they just want everybody fixed up--see thread title. o_O
*Shrugs*
 
... the entire start of this was less "Nagato needs a man because she is a weak woman" and more "Hoppou thinks that Mommy might like to have someone special too and decides to play matchmaker". So y'all are blowing it vastly out of proportion. The assistant thing was purely because of vet technician and cute small animals being Nagato's kryptonite.
 
Wait, how could Hiei and Richardson get downgraded considering how close those two and it that both of them outright stated that she had a real good chance at having scored the ring?
Maybe say 'converted' then. At present, it doesn't seem to retain a sense of the romantic.

Er, from the very start it has been hinted that Ooi and Kitakami were in love with one another... Especially as that is canon in the game. All I did was not shove it into people's faces.
Didn't feel that way to me at first, and I'm pretty sure Ooi said it wasn't* when she told Harry that she needed some space from Kitakami to reduce her dependency on her friend. That was quite a while ago. By the time they were visiting Hogwarts, Kitakami was flirting with Ooi, apparently just to fluster her but maybe hinting. As I said, things can change.

I think they'd tell a better story as friends--something different from the usual shipping--but clearly that's not what you're doing.

* Of course she might not have realized.
 
I personally just like wholesome polyamory and am also a moderately degenerate pervert so I like the idea of twins finding someone they can share, both in a fulfilling and happy relationship sense and in a fulfilling and happy bedroom sense. I like that HL has done a pretty good job of portraying a relatively (Ian's powers of seduction aside) realistic collective and loving arrangement in full bloom with Ian as well as a slowly growing and developing one with Harry. Not to mention the expanding and complexifying of Richardson-Mutsu-Hiei dynamics.

I like it all, it pleases me. It's the best kind of fluffy goodness, second only to fox tails.
 
I have to agree with @Shaithan here. This isn't the first time someone brought up Nagato needing a significant other for the reason of 'She is a woman and can't raise a man correctly.' Nagato has done well enough as a single parent. She doesn't 'need' a man because being a single mother is 'wrong.'
No, that wasn't what I was implying at all. Never entered my mind, tbh. If anyone is the epitome of 'strong single mother' it would be Nagato. Hands down.
I don't remember anyone implying that. Some people just want to see Nagato in a happy romantic relationship
Exactly.
"Hoppou thinks that Mommy might like to have someone special too and decides to play matchmaker".
This. ^^ And then she calls in reinforcements in the form of Mutsu, who is always up for some fun. And when that doesn't work, out comes the really heavy artillery in the form of Jane and the Fleet of Smols. :rofl:
The assistant thing was purely because of vet technician and cute small animals being Nagato's kryptonite.
That would be perfect for Nagato...a veterinarian, a pet shop owner, or someone who works in an animal shelter. *Cue noise of 46,000-ton battleship melting into puddle of squeeing, cooing goo.* :lol
 
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You mean that kind of relationship. There are many kinds of relationships, sexual being but one (or maybe a few if you want to subdivide). Siblings is a relationship. In their brother's household, the wife/concubine-friend relationship, as far as we've seen. The closer-than-sibling friendship between Richardson and Hiei (and I hope that's not going to get downgraded to something sexual). Admiral and fleet; granted, that can get complicated with shipgirls :confused:, but most of Goto's fleet don't feel toward him like Kongo does. The complicated web of relationships among the swords--a psych major could do a dissertation on that family!

HL shows some of these other kinds of relationships, although there's a tendency to move towards the romantic or erotic, as with Ooi/Kitakami recently. (Originally it was shown as friendship with a degree of codependence on one side. Ooi admitted as much.*)

Erotic is only one kind of love. Too many fanfic writers forget that there are other sorts of relationships that they can portray (or try). Professional writers, for that matter, can fall into the same trap, although that can depend on genre. ahemLyraahem

* And yes, relationships can evolve. But into bed isn't the only possible direction.

I don't remember anyone implying that. Some people just want to see Nagato in a happy romantic relationship*, not something degrading. And I don't see Nagato tolerating a man who tries to undermine her strength as a ship or as a woman and mother.

* Or they just want everybody fixed up--see thread title. o_O

... the entire start of this was less "Nagato needs a man because she is a weak woman" and more "Hoppou thinks that Mommy might like to have someone special too and decides to play matchmaker". So y'all are blowing it vastly out of proportion. The assistant thing was purely because of vet technician and cute small animals being Nagato's kryptonite.

No, that wasn't what I was implying at all. Never entered my mind, tbh. If anyone is the epitome of 'strong single mother' it would be Nagato. Hands down.

Exactly.

This. ^^ And then she calls in reinforcements in the form of Mutsu, who is always up for some fun. And when that doesn't work, out comes the really heavy artillery in the form of Jane and the Fleet of Smols. :rofl:

That would be perfect for Nagato...a veterinarian, a pet shop owner, or someone who works in an animal shelter. *Cue noise of 46,000-ton battleship melting into puddle of squeeing, cooing goo.* :lol

Exactly. Besides, a practice - regardless of size - can always benefit from an extra set of hands to help tend to the patients. Things like taking the dogs on walks, feeding them, playing with the animals while they wait for the owners, maybe even just help file some paperwork or note on the status of the animals, leaving the Vet and/or nurses to tend to emergency calls and check ups (house calls especially being a drain on manpower in rural areas). And if Nagato wants to be a more active team member who does more than come in on her spare time, or even becoming an equal partner with her husbando, the only thing stopping her is the lack of a veterinarian medical license, and the only reason that would be an issue is whether or not she wants to pursue it. Even if the Abyssal War ends tomorrow, Nagato may or may not want to leave the MSDF and become a civilian.

Though... it is somewhat better then the idea of dragging Lily back and eventually pairing the two of them off.

And you've mentioned on occasion - at least on SB - why that would be awkward narratively and logically.
 
The complicated web of relationships among the swords--a psych major could do a dissertation on that family!

Exactly this. Even among the (relatively) more sane second and third generation, there is a pretty complicated spiderweb of close relationships thanks to Poor Muramasa Communication Skills, experiences that only two of the three share (round the world trip, WWII), personality quirks, past traumas, and so on.

For instance Colombe wants to punch Dad's teeth in because of abandoning her and all the shit that she went through trying to track him down while also desperately wanting some form of acceptance/acknowledgement from Norimune (Colombe runs on So Proud of You - TV Tropes).

Jackie OTOH sees Norimune as a personal hero, and at most wants to go off exploring with Dad.

Delilah also wants acceptance from Dad, but buries that very deeply under trying to get her mother and father reconciled "for Mom's sake" because of the toll that the breakup took on Jezabel. Also, this ties into Delilah's trust issues since she is very far into the closet in several key metrics (nonhuman working as a MACUSA Auror who spent a lot of time enforcing Rappaport's Law which banned 'her kind' from serving, conspiring to better the policies toward nonhumans under Rappaport's Law and then the SoS as the 'loyal opposition', living a 'double life' working for two intelligence agencies (MIB/Winters Network) who do not always see eye to eye, being in a romantic relation with another woman in Zamarad who is also nonhuman well before that was accepted by society (they got serious in 1942-43), and also by leveraging secrets and half truths know full well what kind of weapons secrets such as hers are against the person with the Dark Secret) which could have gotten her and her family destroyed literally or metaphorically. While she volunteered for it, and believes that she is doing the right thing, Delilah is under tremendous pressure 99.95% of the time because one mistake could get her mother or lover killed as she plays spy behind enemy or at least neutral lines. So she will be slow to open up to Dad and it will take fits and starts to do that even after the SoS falls and the pressure is off her. The habit of a literal lifetime (she started having to play infiltration games to conceal what she really is and believes in when she went to Ilvermorny in 1866-ish) is not easy to break.

Or in short, Delilah has extreme issues trusting other people without severe reservations and extensive proof of trustworthiness; Jackie has equally extreme issues committing deeply to a person, cause, or belief like Delilah does; and Colombe has extreme issues needing someone to accept her uncritically, pat her on the back and tell her that she has made them proud.
 
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Maes Omake: You're a Potter, Tsukiakari!
Confused, Harry frowned, "Yes? But... I don't know enough about farm chores or anything like that."

If anything though, that seemed to amuse Ian, "That is true, but you are a strapping young lad. Kikyo-Chan and Koyuki-Chan will both be making a few deliveries tomorrow. They could use some help with that."

Lost, Harry nodded despite being even more confused than he had been before. Meanwhile, Ian's smirk grew a touch and he walked over to the Arashi Elders and said goodbyes of his own to them, though everyone but them shook their heads at how Lyra said goodbye before she, Ian, and Koyomi all faded away into sparkles of light.

"Oh, before I leave... Tsukiakari?"

"Yes, Master Ian?"

"If you could do this old man a favor... do you think you could make an effort to drop the 'Master' part?"

"Wha-? But... but..."

"After all, Potter Tsukiakari, it would warm this old man's heart for his daughter to simply call him 'dad', and far more appropr-" *thud*

"... Tsuki?"

"Huh. I did not know swords could faint."

"Not helping, Lyra."


"Sooo... should I start calling her 'auntie Tsuki' now?"

"Maybe give it a few days, Harry?"
 
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... the entire start of this was less "Nagato needs a man because she is a weak woman" and more "Hoppou thinks that Mommy might like to have someone special too and decides to play matchmaker". So y'all are blowing it vastly out of proportion. The assistant thing was purely because of vet technician and cute small animals being Nagato's kryptonite.
*Shrug*
Maybe say 'converted' then. At present, it doesn't seem to retain a sense of the romantic.
*Waggles hand* If one looks closely, it's there. Sort of like with Arizona and Jintsuu.
Didn't feel that way to me at first, and I'm pretty sure Ooi said it wasn't* when she told Harry that she needed some space from Kitakami to reduce her dependency on her friend. That was quite a while ago. By the time they were visiting Hogwarts, Kitakami was flirting with Ooi, apparently just to fluster her but maybe hinting. As I said, things can change.

I think they'd tell a better story as friends--something different from the usual shipping--but clearly that's not what you're doing.

* Of course she might not have realized.
Ooi also stated that more than a few shipgirls and other people had issues with hers and Kitakami's relationship due to being "Sister Ships" though neither were built in the same dockyard, and also had different parents in this life as Natural Borns. Also, when Kitakami brought up her parents adopting her, Ooi mentioned that it could make things awkward and Kitakami agreed.
I personally just like wholesome polyamory and am also a moderately degenerate pervert so I like the idea of twins finding someone they can share, both in a fulfilling and happy relationship sense and in a fulfilling and happy bedroom sense. I like that HL has done a pretty good job of portraying a relatively (Ian's powers of seduction aside) realistic collective and loving arrangement in full bloom with Ian as well as a slowly growing and developing one with Harry. Not to mention the expanding and complexifying of Richardson-Mutsu-Hiei dynamics.

I like it all, it pleases me. It's the best kind of fluffy goodness, second only to fox tails.
One of the issues is that in such stories is... they're bland. The women all revolve around the guy and accept the whole coming together as a harem (because that is what they are as 99% of the time, they're not interested in each other, just the guy) and do so without an issue. You might as well say that they shrug and their biggest issue turns out in, well to be crude, "Getting the D", with everything revolving around that. But they got no real issue with the relationship or it soon fades away. All within days or weeks of the decision being made/happening, if not sooner.

Compare it to what is going on in story. We got a number of relationships revolving around a central point (Harry). At the same time, with Hachi and the Submarines while they do want the "Fleet Ending", they've got their own doubts regarding how well it would go. Within them, you got the attraction between Iku and Hachi, well as RO and Shioi. With Louisiana, she's putting in the work for her dream ending, which is being with both Harry and Natsumi, with Natsumi trying to make it work as well now as she gets worn down, or at least seeing if it could work. Shinano and Regina have become close friends, and one can see a bit of attraction there between them. But everyone is trying to at least see if they can make it work, though they do have doubts. And the whole thing is happening and building over years, not a few days of hormones.

With Mutsu, Hiei, Arizona, and Jintsuu, once more it is them all trying to make it work with John to some extent, and happening over years with the foundations coming first.

I would like to think that I am doing something a slightly bit differently here...
Sakaki/Nagato Pairing Confirmed? Yokosuka deafened by constant loud Squee-ing? Local strays brought in line by Mysterious Missing Iriomote Mountain Cat?
I... could see that working, though some might mistake them for the other. :p
No, that wasn't what I was implying at all. Never entered my mind, tbh. If anyone is the epitome of 'strong single mother' it would be Nagato. Hands down.
Yes, none can stand against Nagamom.
This. ^^ And then she calls in reinforcements in the form of Mutsu, who is always up for some fun. And when that doesn't work, out comes the really heavy artillery in the form of Jane and the Fleet of Smols. :rofl:
:lol
Exactly. Besides, a practice - regardless of size - can always benefit from an extra set of hands to help tend to the patients. Things like taking the dogs on walks, feeding them, playing with the animals while they wait for the owners, maybe even just help file some paperwork or note on the status of the animals, leaving the Vet and/or nurses to tend to emergency calls and check ups (house calls especially being a drain on manpower in rural areas). And if Nagato wants to be a more active team member who does more than come in on her spare time, or even becoming an equal partner with her husbando, the only thing stopping her is the lack of a veterinarian medical license, and the only reason that would be an issue is whether or not she wants to pursue it. Even if the Abyssal War ends tomorrow, Nagato may or may not want to leave the MSDF and become a civilian.
True, I have always seen Nagato after the war becoming a vet or what have you.
And you've mentioned on occasion - at least on SB - why that would be awkward narratively and logically.
Well... yeah, it kind of would be. On Harry's side, you got the fact that his biological mother is now back. But he's not sure how to take it. After all, he never actually knew her but from stories before. And while he does love her, he also loves Nagato. He would also be somewhat afraid of her taking him away from his family.

On Lily's side... to her, just yesterday Harry was one year old. Now he would be almost fifteen (assuming post-Fourth Year). On the one hand, he's her son. But on the other, he has lived about fourteen years without her. He's grown up into a man she is proud of. There is also Nagato, because while there is a part of Lily that is jealous that this woman raised her son and got to see him grow from a child, it is eclipsed by how thankful she is. Also, Lily does not want to interfere with the relationship, even though she wants to have a motherly relationship with her son, she sees such as trying to take Nagato's place (not that Nagato sees it that way). Doesn't help that Nagato has mentioned meeting her in the afterlife, which she has very foggy memories of.

Nagato Though has complicated feelings about the whole thing as well. To her, Harry is her son. She is somewhat afraid of being replaced. But her biggest fear is that the newly reunited mother and son might not be able to have a relationship with one another due to the time passed. She might even try to get the three of them closer.

As for romance between the two... Lily would not be in any real shape for it for some time. To her, James just died. Yes, he would be right there as a fairy, helping her through it, but still. So she would be grieving in a way for him for some time to come. Ironically, Nagato would realize this and do her best to support Lily. As a matter of fact, in some notes I did up for kicks, that would be what would kick it off. Any romance between the two would be a slow burn. Nagato would help her through her grief, and about Harry's Sixth Year, would start taking her out for a Girl's Night Out. No romantic stuff, but things like the two of them going out for drinks, karaoke, and having some fun to bring up Lily's mood. A year or so later, there might be some romantic undertones, but not much. It would not be until Harry is twenty or so that the two would have realized that they have fallen in a relationship with each other and decide that they were going to try and make it work, which it ends up doing.
"Oh, before I leave... Tsukiakari?"

"Yes, Master Ian?"

"If you could do this old man a favor... do you think you could make an effort to drop the 'Master' part?"

"Wha-? But... but..."

"After all, Potter Tsukiakari, it would warm this old man's heart for his daughter to simply call him 'dad', and far more appropr-" *thud*

"... Tsuki?"

"Huh. I did not know swords could faint."

"Not helping, Lyra."


"Sooo... should I start calling her 'auntie Tsuki' now?"

"Maybe give it a few days, Harry?"
:lol:rofl::lol
 
I have to agree with @Shaithan here. This isn't the first time someone brought up Nagato needing a significant other for the reason of 'She is a woman and can't raise a man correctly.' Nagato has done well enough as a single parent. She doesn't 'need' a man because being a single mother is 'wrong.'
I was going on the premise that she didn't meet the vet until well AFTER Harry has 'left the nest' and is off on his way to the JMSDF Academy.

Nagato doesn't 'need' a man to raise Harry. She did, and IS doing, just fine on her own.

If anything she might just be a bit lonely after he's gone (if she sees him for more than 7 months in total over the next 6 years after he joins up, she'll be lucky) and, following the trail of cute animals, runs into a veterinarian who is former JSDF/JMSDF, and has just a bit a soft spot towards animals as she does. Things progress slowly from there.

No need for Harry at all outside of keeping a weather eye on her emails/letters/etc to him that everything is fine. I'm sure at least some of us here either had this happen to them or friends, where they've moved out, and their single parent got into a relationship afterward.

Now, to mollify people, Leferts could introduce a vet that Nagato becomes friends with (he sends abused cases off to her, as she won't be harmed if they snap at her, she definitely would be caring, and god help you if you were the former abusive owner come looking for your pet, because she WILL go Ellen Ripley on your ass), and it never goes further than being friends. Perhaps it does, perhaps not. Let the flow of the story dictate how it plays out.
 
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One of the issues is that in such stories is... they're bland. The women all revolve around the guy and accept the whole coming together as a harem (because that is what they are as 99% of the time, they're not interested in each other, just the guy) and do so without an issue. You might as well say that they shrug and their biggest issue turns out in, well to be crude, "Getting the D", with everything revolving around that. But they got no real issue with the relationship or it soon fades away. All within days or weeks of the decision being made/happening, if not sooner.

Compare it to what is going on in story. We got a number of relationships revolving around a central point (Harry). At the same time, with Hachi and the Submarines while they do want the "Fleet Ending", they've got their own doubts regarding how well it would go. Within them, you got the attraction between Iku and Hachi, well as RO and Shioi. With Louisiana, she's putting in the work for her dream ending, which is being with both Harry and Natsumi, with Natsumi trying to make it work as well now as she gets worn down, or at least seeing if it could work. Shinano and Regina have become close friends, and one can see a bit of attraction there between them. But everyone is trying to at least see if they can make it work, though they do have doubts. And the whole thing is happening and building over years, not a few days of hormones.

With Mutsu, Hiei, Arizona, and Jintsuu, once more it is them all trying to make it work with John to some extent, and happening over years with the foundations coming first.

I would like to think that I am doing something a slightly bit differently here...

Hey hey hey now... I said polyamory for a reason. Not harems. I'm not interested in a bunch of girls all after the same guy with no interest in each other. I like this story because it is -as you put it- something different from the usual bland harem fare.

I'll thank you to not cast aspersions on my tastes when I compliment your writing...
 
I was going on the premise that she didn't meet the vet until well AFTER Harry has 'left the nest' and is off on his way to the JMSDF Academy.

Nagato doesn't 'need' a man to raise Harry. She did, and IS doing, just fine on her own.

If anything she might just be a bit lonely after he's gone (if she sees him for more than 7 months in total over the next 6 years after he joins up, she'll be lucky) and, following the trail of cute animals, runs into a veterinarian who is former JSDF/JMSDF, and has just a bit a soft spot towards animals as she does. Things progress slowly from there.

No need for Harry at all outside of keeping a weather eye on her emails/letters/etc to him that everything is fine. I'm sure at least some of us here either had this happen to them or friends, where they've moved out, and their single parent got into a relationship afterward.

Now, to mollify people, Leferts could introduce a vet that Nagato becomes friends with (he sends abused cases off to her, as she won't be harmed, would be caring, and god help you if you were the former abusive owner come looking for your pet, she WILL go Ellen Ripley on your ass), and it never goes further. Perhaps it does, perhaps not. Let the flow of the story dictate how it plays out.
That could possibly work to be honest, and I can see her continuing it after the war, helping abused pets recover.
Hey hey hey now... I said polyamory for a reason. Not harems. I'm not interested in a bunch of girls all after the same guy with no interest in each other. I like this story because it is -as you put it- something different from the usual bland harem fare.

I'll thank you to not cast aspersions on my tastes when I compliment your writing...
Er, sorry? I wasn't casting aspirations on you or your tastes, but rather on ones like what you were taking issue to... I didn't mean for it to come across like you think.
 
Er, sorry? I wasn't casting aspirations on you or your tastes, but rather on ones like what you were taking issue to... I didn't mean for it to come across like you think.

It came across to me like you were suggesting that I was interested in a type of story that I actually find sort of tasteless and dull unless very well executed.

Sorry if I overreacted, but I was feeling a little defensive because it felt as though you were implying I had worse tastes than I do.
 
"Oh, before I leave... Tsukiakari?"

"Yes, Master Ian?"

"If you could do this old man a favor... do you think you could make an effort to drop the 'Master' part?"

"Wha-? But... but..."

"After all, Potter Tsukiakari, it would warm this old man's heart for his daughter to simply call him 'dad', and far more appropr-" *thud*

"... Tsuki?"

"Huh. I did not know swords could faint."

"Not helping, Lyra."


"Sooo... should I start calling her 'auntie Tsuki' now?"

"Maybe give it a few days, Harry?"
Random Potter Motto: "I am a magpie. You are now a Potter."
 
It came across to me like you were suggesting that I was interested in a type of story that I actually find sort of tasteless and dull unless very well executed.

Sorry if I overreacted, but I was feeling a little defensive because it felt as though you were implying I had worse tastes than I do.
No worries, I just worded it wrong.
Random Potter Motto: "I am a magpie. You are now a Potter."
That... might become an unofficial motto thanks to Harry a few years/decades down the road.
 
Snippet 51: Harry Leferts
Yawning, Harry smacked his lips a bit as he entered the dining hall before bowing to the group of Arashi that was there already, "Good morning."

A smile on her face, Koyuki chuckled and waved to the seat beside her, "And a good morning to you as well, Itoko. Now come and have a seat so that you can have something to eat before we head out. We'll be working most of the morning."

Simply doing as she asked, the wizard glanced around a bit, "I don't mind a bit of work."

Grinning, Kikyo poked him, "You say that now, Harry-Kun. But will it hold out?"

Just shrugging, Harry shook his head, "Harry will do his best!" Ignoring the amused looks, he glanced around before noticing what Kikyo was eating, "Is that a breakfast roll?"

In reply, she held up a finger as she chewed. Swallowing, Kikyo gave him a nod as well as a smile, "Hai, it is." Looking at it, she gave him a knowing smile as she opened her mouth for another bite, "You're wondering why I'm having it, I take it?"

Bemused, Harry nodded at that, "Well... it is a bit odd to see. I mean, that's something from Ireland." Seeing the looks, he shrugged, "Seamus, one of my dormmates back at Hogwarts swears by them for breakfast. Complains if one is not on the table actually."

Chuckling after she swallowed, the Hone-Onna smiled, "Well... Kaa-San actually brought it back when Tou-San took her to Ireland on one of his trips back."

Eyes widening, Harry boggled a bit, "Wait, you meant that Grandpa Ian took her back to Britain? Seriously?"

Across from him, Koyuki snorted a bit, "Is that really that much of a surprise." At his blink, she shook her head, "Ian-Jiji actually often brought members of our clan with him on trips back to Britain via the Kazehana. Mostly during the first twenty years actually..." Frowning thoughtfully, she shook her head, "Anyways, it was mainly so that they could learn skills back in Britain and Europe. While Jeffery-Jiji was able to teach us a lot, Ian-jiji wanted those of us alive to have other skills that he couldn't teach us."

Head cocked to the side, Harry furrowed his eyebrows, "Wouldn't that take a while though? Especially since you were sailing?"

The two female Yokai shared a look that stated how many times they had been asked these questions. But it also stated that neither of them minded all that much, after all, it was family history. Having finished her breakfast, Kikyo turned to him, "Ah, but that was the brilliance of it. The British Ministry of Magic didn't really check vessels heading in and out. After all, most magicals would use either the world wide floo network, or apparation and Portkeys to enter the country, not sailing ships. As for the Kazehana... You did not think that the shrinking that she was put under was something that we did, did you?"

Seeing the thirteen year old's shocked and surprised look, both of them giggled. A grin on her face, Koyuki shook her head, "You see, there were two ways which were similar. One way was to sail across the Indian Ocean and up the Red Sea. Once there, they would take everyone off the ship onto a flying carpet, shrink the ship, and carry it across the land to the Mediterranean, where they would enlarge it and continue on. The other way, was to sail across the Pacific to Central America, and do much the same, except dropping the ship in the Caribbean before continuing on to Britain. In either case, it would cut off days and weeks from the journey. Once in Britain, Ian-Jiji would sell whatever goods were onboard and pick up whoever was returning. Then they would do the same in reverse, just switching up the route. And it worked pretty well."

With a hum, Kikyo sipped her tea, "That was actually how Lyra-Kaa-San was brought to Japan. The Potters had a time turner though which they used to help out some..." Pausing, she grimaced a bit, "It sort of broke in 1899 for some reason. Though Tekeli-Chan complained about people making mistakes."

For a few moments, Harry stared at her before he turned to the green haired maid only to see her turn part of her hair into a slime-like tentacle which she used to lift several plates as she hummed something that made it feel like his brain was itching, "Wait, she's been around since then?"

Kikyo shrugged some, "Hai, she's been working for the Potters since... 1859, I think? I asked Tou-San once and all he did was grumble about idiot goblins on stupid expeditions to stupid ice covered places. His Tou-San had found her, though she's happy serving us or the Potters." Frowning, she furrowed her eyebrows, "Something about her previous Masters working her for a very long time without any breaks... Anyways..." With a wave of her hand, the Hone-Onna shook her head, "She arrived here via an Owl Box in the old Potter Manor before it was destroyed. Your Kaa-San sent her because they were going to hide in a cottage and didn't want her getting hurt if the manor was attacked."

His own eyebrows furrowing, Harry considered asking more about the Maid, but something told him that he was better off not knowing. Deciding to listen, he took one of the breakfast rolls and began to eat, though he raised an eyebrow at the sight of Koyuki eating some muesli, "By the way, can I ask you something?"

Swallowing, the Yuki-Onna nodded, "Of course, what is it, Itoko?"

A frown on his face, Harry pointed at her breakfast, "I've noticed that you all eat a lot of dairy. From what I know... shouldn't you be lactose intolerant?" At their looks of amusement, he flushed a bit, "I mean, I know that doesn't mean that you can't eat or drink dairy, but... it does mean that you can't consume a lot."

Only chuckling, Kikyo shook her head while ruffling his hair, "That is because of Tou-San." At the confusion, her smile widened, "There is a potion that Tou-San came across in the Potter archives. Apparently, many centuries ago, a clan was lactose intolerant. So they created the ritual so that someone could pass onto them the ability to not be affected. And said ritual made it so that not being lactose intolerant bred true as it were... Tou-San used it on our Kaa-Sans and on those of us that had issues. We use it when we induct new members via marriage on our spouses, though our children would not need it."

Blinking, the teen stared for a moment before shaking his head, "Useful."

That got him giggles and more hair ruffles before the conversation turned to other things. Soon enough, he was in the small building that the Arashi used for a loading bay helping Koyuki lift various products into a small cube van that they used for deliveries. Glancing at her, he internally shook his head at the fact that she was wearing a shirt with the sleeves rolled up, completely unaffected by the cold in the warehouse which did made him slightly jealous. That said, he could also see the toned muscles in said arms which had come about through hard work on the farm. Finally, she nodded before closing the truck's door, "And there we go, Itoko."

Leaning out the window, Kikyo smiled a bit, "All done?"

Simply shaking her head, the Yuki-Onna walked over to where she had set down a clipboard and looked at it, "Hai, that's everything." Walking to the other side, she hopped off the loading dock and helped Harry down, "Give us a minute and we'll be inside."

A laugh answered them before they reached the door and Koyuki waited until Harry was inside the truck's cab before getting in herself. It was a bit of a squeeze, but the teen didn't mind much as he buckled himself in before grinning in excitement, "So where to first?"

Unable to help herself, Koyuki ruffled his hair before turning her attention to the clipboard, "Hmm... actually, the first delivery is to the base itself."

Nodding, Kikyo began to drive out of the small warehouse, waving to the Arashi in the office there who opened the door and closed it once they were through. Driving along the road, she glanced at Harry, "You can listen to something on the radio while we drive if you want. Neither of us mind whatever you chose to listen to."

The thirteen year old shrugged some, "Whatever you might listen to? I don't mind."

Expression brightening, Koyuki reached into the glove compartment and pulled out a CD, "Great! That means that I can put on the new Three Wolf Knights album!" Waving it around, both Harry and Kikyo could see that the title was 'This is Love, War, Nightmares and Dreams' with drawn picture of a bar on the cover, "I've been wanting to listen to it for a while now."

Mock sighing, the Hone-Onna looked at Harry who snickered at her next words, "Oh boy, here we go again."

A mock outraged look on her face, Koyuki shook a fist at her fellow Yokai, "You are just jealous of them! They got real talent!"

Soon enough, the two women began an argument about each other's musical tastes even as J-rock filled the cab. The whole time, Harry was grinning and snickering at their bickering. Upon arriving at the Kushiro Base, Akebono was surprised to see Harry when the truck stopped and they got out, "Harry-Chan? What are you doing here?"

With a shrug, Harry shook his head, "Helping out family with some stuff. Mum's back at the Arashi farm with Hoppou, but you know me."

Poking him in the forehead, the Destroyer sighed, "Yes, I do. So I should not be too surprised." Once the door was up, she hopped up inside with a single jump while Koyuki climbed up in alongside Harry. The two worked together to bring out the needed pallets of dairy product for Akebono to examine, while Kasumi took said pallets from the back and carried them over her head as if they weighed nothing.

Which, to be honest, to her they likely didn't weigh much if anything.

After everything that the base had ordered was offloaded, Akebono jumped out with Harry while Koyuki closed the door. Clapping her hands, the Yuki-Onna nodded, "That should be about everything for the next two weeks, I think, Akebono-San."

Checking her own clipboard, the Destroyer nodded, "It is as a matter of fact." Holding out her hand, she smiled when Koyuki shook it, "Thank you, Koyuki-San. Your farm really is an important supplier." With a nod to Harry and then to the Youkai after signing the paperwork and handing it over, she backed up some, "Both of you have a nice day... now to go and find my Shitty Admiral..."

Koyuki only shook her head but said nothing as they headed back to the truck's cab. After closing the door, she gave the other Arashi a shrug, "I will never understand that girl and how she is."

With a glance towards her, Harry buckled himself in before Kikyo started the truck and headed off, "Akebono-Nee? She's tsundere, like really tsundere." He grinned a bit, "She also really likes Tanaka-San and so does Kasumi-Nee."

For several moments the two Arashi stared at him. Then, Koyuki looked out the window, "Wait, she likes the guy? And calls him 'Shitty Admiral' all the time?"

All Harry did was shrug at that, "She's tsundere and that's practically her pet name for him."

Yet again, the two Yokai stared at him before sharing a look, the same thought going through their minds, 'Shipgirls are weird...'

The rest of the morning passed by well enough with the three making deliveries. Not just to normal human stores and such, but to a few Yokai operated businesses. Much to Harry's amusement, said Yokai only glanced at him and didn't bother to comment about it beyond a shrug when either Koyuki or Kikyo stated that he was a cousin. Finally, they came to the last stop of the day and Harry blinked a bit some at the slightly run down large home. It was rather big, but had a few issues that he could pick out. Once more hopping out, Koyuki waited for Harry's feet to hit the ground and she began walking up to the door and knocked. When the door opened though, Harry's eyes widened and he tilted his head back to stare up at the massive woman who stood in the doorframe who had to be eight feet tall. 'Wow...' It was obvious that she was not a shipgirl, though Harry thought for a moment that she was an Abyssal due to the black hair and pale skin as well as slightly glowing eyes. His own glowed for a moment before he dismissed it as he could not see a hull or anything. Then his eyes widened some as he realized what she was, 'Hachishakusama...'

Upon seeing who it was though, her expression brightened, "Oh good! You arrived!" Looking over her shoulder, she cleared her throat, "Children, the milk delivery is here."

From behind her Harry could hear rushing feet and blinked as several young Yokai appeared. Each of them stared at him in curiosity before another female voice spoke up, "Oi! Move aside for your Nee-San! We got to offload it so that you can all have food, after all."

The Hachishakusama raised one eyebrow as a young wolfess stepped into view, "Now, now, Karen-Chan. You know how excitable they get. Especially when they're getting treats delivered."

Sighing, the now identified Karen nodded, "Hai, Oba-Chan. Sorry." Arms crossed, she glanced at them, "But as their Nee-San, they should listen to me."

However, the much taller Yokai just patted her head some, "Yes, dear." Ignoring the flush on the wolfess' cheeks, she turned back to the house, "Mami-Chan! Megumi-Chan! Kokoro-Chan! Izumi-Chan! We need your assistance!"

Moments later, a voice called out, "Hai, Oba-Chan!" A grinning Neko came out followed by a second, slightly younger one as well as another wolfess, obviously related to the first. And then a teenaged human girl also came out. The grinning Neko turned to the others, "Okay, you heard Oba-Chan! Izumi-Chan, you levitate them into the house as we bring them out!'

The witch nodded some as she pulled her cloak tighter, "Hai."

Once the door to the truck was open, Harry started to help them get the various items out. He learned that the other wolfess was Mami and the other Neko was Kokoro. As they worked, Harry decided to chat with them, "Um, so is this an orphanage?"

Karen tilted her head back and forth, "Not an official one, but... more a foster home of sorts for orphaned Yokai children." She grimaced a bit, "Let me just say that the system for us in regards to the Magical Diet is not the best."

Also wincing, the thirteen year old could only nod, "Hai, I can understand that."

Head cocked to the side, Momo frowned some as her wolf ears twitched, "Can I ask you something?" At his nod, she continued, "I know that your name is Harry, but... are you related to the Arashi Clan?"

With a chuckle, Harry nodded, "We share the same Great-Great Grandfather as a matter of fact. How about you? I assume that you and Karen-San are related?"

Brightly smiling, the wolfess nodded, "We are, she's my Onee-San, though... Izumi-Chan is too in a way."

Seeing his confusion, the witch smiled a bit, "Our parents before they died in Blood Week were friends, so we grew up together. And, well... we're practically sisters."

Megumi jerked her thumb to the younger Neko, grinning, "And that is my Imouto there, before you ask. I've been helping to take care of her for the past three years."

As he nodded, Harry overheard the giant Yokai thanking Kikyo for the massive discount which made him frown. Even though he didn't say anything, Karen sighed. Catching him glance at her, she shook her head, "We... don't have a lot of money. So the Arashi Clan donates to us food and the like." Ears drooping a bit in shame, she looked down, "For the kids, it helps makes things better." After a few moments, Karen let out a huff, "Anyways, now that we're old enough, we're going to be trying to find jobs to get. Then, we'll bring in money and help the kids as true Nee-Sans should!"

Lips curling as the others nodded in agreement, the wizard patted her shoulder, "I'm sure that you will." Even as he did so, there was a odd feeling around them. One that felt familiar... Furrowing his eyebrows, his frowned before looking around with his eyes glowing, only to freeze when they fell on the Yokai he was working with, 'What the...'

Having noticed, Mami stared a bit, "Um, why are your eyes glowing?"

Rapidly blinking, Harry shut off the flow of energy to his eyes before shaking his head. He than grinned and held his fingers in front of his face in a pose, "Sorry, had an odd feeling so I was using my Eyes of Mystic Disillusion to see beyond the veil!'

For several moments, the five other teens stared at him before Karen sighed and rolled her eyes, "Oh boy... a magical Chunni."

Just frowning, Kokoro tilted her head to the side, "Is it really chunni if it is an actual power?"

Izumi raised her hand and shook her head, "That was just an Onmyoudo trick. It's supposed to see hidden spirits and stuff, not really that big of a deal."

While the female teens argued, the only male simply became thoughtful even as he continued to work. Soon enough, they were done and Koyuki closed up the now empty truck's loading door. Turning towards the female Yokai, Harry bowed to them, "Thank you for the help."

Lightly laughing, Megumi shook her head, "Don't worry about it, we do this sort of thing anyways and it was great to meet you, Harry-San. Not often that we see a foreigner after all or meet one." She then winked, "Especially cute boys like you~"

Rolling her eyes, Karen flicked her ear, "Stop."

In reply, the Neko only laughed more. Shaking his head, Harry considered a few things and glanced around, "Um, you are all looking for a job, right?" When they nodded, he chewed his lip, "If... I make a suggestion?"

Eyebrow raised, Izumi made a motion with her hand, "Sure, go ahead?"

With another glance around, the thirteen year old took a deep breath, "Maybe go down to the Naval base and talk with them. Not only are they looking around for civilian contractors and stuff but, I... think that there is something that they need to check out if you would help them."

Confused, the various female Yokai nodded before they turned to head back to the house. As they did so, Harry once more activated his eyes and stared at the ghostly hulls around them. The two wolf Yokai and the witch had a Heavy Cruiser that really looked like Maya before she got her Anti-Air Refit. Meanwhile, the two Neko Yokai had a Battleship that sort of resembled a Yamato, but slightly smaller with two double turrets aft and two forward for four in total. Shaking his head, it was a thoughtful Harry who got up into the cab with Koyuki and Kikyo...
 
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Confused, the various female Yokai nodded before they turned to head back to the house. As they did so, Harry once more activated his eyes and stared at the ghostly hulls around them. The two wolf Yokai and the witch had a Heavy Cruiser that really looked like Maya before she got her Anti-Air Refit. Meanwhile, the two Neko Yokai had a Battleship that sort of resembled a Yamato, but slightly smaller with two double turrets aft and two forward for four in total. Shaking his head, it was a thoughtful Harry who got up into the cab with Koyuki and Kikyo...
Five of them are described in the last paragraph as having hulls. Is there another reason why Harry's Mage Sight sees somewhat familiar ship hulls on these girls?
 
Looks to me like only three out of at least a dozen and then some are shipgirls.

Still a pretty big number, but not absurdly so.
 
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