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Brian looked about, awkwardly adjusting the ascot that Alec had given him (for some reason), and then coughed into his hand as the people gathered around the poorly bound businessman, who was wearing a pointed white hood (for some reason). Nearby the rest of the Undersiders stood in the conference room, the rope to an elaborate pulley system still half-clutched in Lisa's hand, having dropped the mess of rope onto Anders when he chased them into the room. The blonde tugged at the cuff of her orange sweater after letting it go before whispering something in Bitch's ear.

"Well, gang, the... the 'business ghost' gave us quite a chase through this old, abandoned mead hall, but we finally caught him! Now to see who he really is..!" Brian declared, reaching forward to tug at the cloth on supervillain's face, which he wore in lieu of his armor (for some reason). It came off easily, to reveal-

"Old Man Anders?" Gasped literally everyone.
Max, you're required to say, "I'd have been alright, if it wasn't for those pesky kids! And their dog(s)!".
*cough*Ozymandias *cough* "And this too shall pass..."
Bitch straightened up from where she'd been slouching against the wall, her rumpled green shirt hanging from her shoulders, crumbs from the overly massive sandwich she'd enjoyed during their stakeout of the building falling to the carpet, and said in a halting, stilted voice, "Like, man, get away with it? We did it thirty minutes ago." Then she turned to the blonde beside her, Lisa adjusting her glasses while Max was marched past them. "Alright, I said it, now where's my ten fucking dollars?" Rachel asked.

"You little bitches!" Max shouted as the policemen (for some reason), led him away, struggling in his hand cuffs (for some reason).

Alec looked up from his nails, waving goodbye to the ranting millionaire, and twirled to face the rest of his former gang members, purple skirt and orange wig flaring, "Well guys, it looks like his Empire's crumbling, huh?"

Everyone, including, the policemen as the elevator doors finished closing, laughed. The Great Dane Rachel had brought with her let out a bark, and peed on the carpet.
 
Settling Debts, Part 2 New
The teen boy looked aged beyond his years. He walked carefully, aware of his surroundings, and formally and precisely sat down opposite Lisa.

Lisa gestured to the contents of the table. "Have a snack, a drink something."

The boy, obligingly, poured himself a glass of water and touched it to his lips.

Lisa sighed. "Look, I'm sorry, I'm sorry about all this. She means well but, uh, she's really bad at comforting."

The boy looked at Lisa impassively. "OK, OK, try a different tack. I'm Lisa. I live in the Bay. Ask me whatever... Oh, no that won't work, you've lived there longer."

"As you say," the boy said politely. "How can I help you?"

"No, no," Lisa said, shaking her head, before shrugging elaborately. "I could show you... no, that would scare you."

The boy touched the glass to his lips again.

"OK," Lisa tried again, "so you might be able to go home soon. Your dad has been playing fuck around with, like, the whole federal soup, and he's coming up on the find out part."

"Oh?"

"Yep! See, a whole bunch of stuff happened, like the thing where some cops got shot by the Empire, I assume by accident, or when Krieg, well, probably Kreig, anyway his car blew up and then he tried to firebomb his house with cops in it, anyway Medhall got put under lots of scrutiny and your dad kind of I think lost the line between what is OK and what is not, so, yeah, Max Anders, especially after the Gesellschaft Master thing, he has also been flagged as a potential Master victim if not a Master himself, and..." Lisa trailed off, seeing the boy's baffled expression. She sighed. "Maybe I could get you some newspapers?"

Note: So it turns your fantastic success with the mystery parahuman who turned out to be your friend GSG is not, in fact, a good starting point in befriending and comforting Theo Anders, who you've never interacted with and thinks this is all an elaborate stunt...

Also, I haven't decided yet if Theo is going to trigger (or already has), and if so, how his power would manifest...
 
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yeah, Max Anders, especially after the Gesellschaft master thing, he has also been flagged as a potential master victim if not a master himself, and..."
As much as the Kaiser's goons think he's part of the Master Race, the use of the word 'Master' ought to be capitalized here, right? Since it's the category of M/S protocols, and one of the twelve, capitalized, power categories.

Also, poor Theo.
 
I think you accidentally a word in here.

I can/should get you some newspapers.

Or something like that?
I'll get you some newspapers, maybe?

Poor Theo indeed. Lisa is being far too circuitous to get this done properly, I think; this should be a bandaid-ripping-off conversation where it starts with "Look, you know your dad is a complete shitheel who runs a racist gang, in addition to being a corrupt CEO, right? Yeah, turns out the feds also know that and, uh, they're doing something about it." Theo knows who his dad is, all this dancing about the subject in an attempt to be kind is self-defeating, but Lisa needs to be clever.
 
I think you accidentally a word in here.

I can/should get you some newspapers.

Or something like that?

As much as the Kaiser's goons think he's part of the Master Race, the use of the word 'Master' ought to be capitalized here, right? Since it's the category of M/S protocols, and one of the twelve, capitalized, power categories.

Also, poor Theo.

Typos fixed in the text! Thank you very much!
 
Also, I haven't decided yet if Theo is going to trigger (or already has), and if so, how his power would manifest...
I could see him having Triggered, quietly, and no one really noticing. I could also see QA having glared at his shard, "[BEST HOST] [APPROVES] [FULL ACCESS]".

So, metal won't hurt him? And, full-on automata (humanoid, any size) made of metal (that don't wreck his surrounding, and are mostly not noticed, 'Stranger') try and help him, if he gets upset? (Metal goes back to previous shape+location, afterward.)

Result? He keeps rather rigid self-control, otherwise, weird stuff starts happening around him?

Just an idea...
 
I could see him having Triggered, quietly, and no one really noticing. I could also see QA having glared at his shard, "[BEST HOST] [APPROVES] [FULL ACCESS]".

So, metal won't hurt him? And, full-on automata (humanoid, any size) made of metal (that don't wreck his surrounding, and are mostly not noticed, 'Stranger') try and help him, if he gets upset? (Metal goes back to previous shape+location, afterward.)

Result? He keeps rather rigid self-control, otherwise, weird stuff starts happening around him?

Just an idea...

He has been around Dr. Weaver, and QA is not shy about showing favoritism.

I like his canon metal sense power application, and I expect QA/Weaver would approve as well. I am also toying with a sort of social thinker ability around sensing intent, as he has been surrounded by people who he is not sure he can't trust.

Of course, this power would be of little practical use, as for example his Father may well have intended to help Theo even when he was mistreating the boy. Since, you know, it's something he may have wanted and appears superficially useful but doesn't actually solve his problem.

Or Lisa, who vaguely wants to be helpful, but without context knowing that Lisa wants to help doesn't really help Theo figure out what to do.
 
I like his canon metal sense power application, and I expect QA/Weaver would approve as well. I am also toying with a sort of social thinker ability around sensing intent, as he has been surrounded by people who he is not sure he can't trust.
Sensory abilities are good - their possibilities are often overlooked, for the more flashy stuff. I'm... unsure about mixing social Thinker stuff with metal/material sense and manipulation stuff. Without some excuse for this, may arguably be a bit too diverse?

Theo. Father Max, metal manipulation, mother Heith, same powers as the Valkyries - giant metal hands look credible. Based on 'false heredity'.

Thinker stuff? More tricky... Sounds like Dean/Gallant...

('Worm' has a sorta weird 'conventional supers' feel - you can ignore that, but IMO it needs a little care...)
 
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Sensory abilities are good - their possibilities are often overlooked, for the more flashy stuff. I'm... unsure about mixing social Thinker stuff with metal/material sense and manipulation stuff. Without some excuse for this, may arguably be a bit too diverse?

Theo. Father Max, metal manipulation, mother Heith, same powers as the Valkyries - giant metal hands look credible. Based on 'false heredity'.

Thinker stuff? More tricky... Sounds like Dean/Gallant...

('Worm' has a sorta weird 'conventional supers' feel - you can ignore that, but IMO it needs a little care...)

I do feel like the thinker thing would be a secondary power or bud. I like the metal sense and might augment it slightly (QA).

I do want some additional metal aspect. Maybe more versatility at the expense of power? Not sure yet.
 
I do feel like the thinker thing would be a secondary power or bud. I like the metal sense and might augment it slightly (QA).

I do want some additional metal aspect. Maybe more versatility at the expense of power? Not sure yet.
Let him have a shoulder devil and angel, only he (and some Thinkers) can see? They might... give him advice (only he can hear). Lisa might try lip-reading them... No, they're not there all the time.
(Devil looks, a little, like Max, angel like Kayden?)

Metal... how about he hears faint music, melody only, that is in some way associated with the past history of the metal object? A knife used for murder, a knife used only for cooking, say. Lots of metal, many tunes, need to get close to listen to, pick-out, one? I'm pretty sure an author might have... a bit of fun with this...

EDIT:

I only realised, later... Metal Music, maybe Heavy Metal Music...
(Blue Oyster Cult??? Yes, the 1981 movie...)
 
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Thinker stuff? More tricky... Sounds like Dean/Gallant...
I do feel like the thinker thing would be a secondary power or bud. I like the metal sense and might augment it slightly (QA).

I do want some additional metal aspect. Maybe more versatility at the expense of power? Not sure yet.
Eh, just tack on some mettle sense and call it a day. Boom, social Thinker. It lets him detect who would make a good Shonen protagonist.

[Taylor Hebert of Earth, you have the ability to overcome great fear levels of mooks. Welcome to the Parahuman Corps.]

That sorta thing.
 
[Taylor Hebert of Earth, you have the ability to overcome great fear levels of mooks. Welcome to the Parahuman Corps.]

I could see this going something like as follows:

"Taylor Hebert, you have the ability to... (hold on, this can't be right? Are you sure about this? It's real?!), Er, live a long and fruitful life. Uhm, here's your transfer papers to Anywherebuthere High School."
 
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