That's some arrogation you have going there. To counter your first point, imagine, you have this disaster. It is coming every three months. You pray and pray. The whole world pray to whichever higher beings out there. Perhaps, your god would save you. But no, times passed, millions had died, psychotic murderers roam the land, there is no sign of divine. At this point, you realize, there is no god. Only golden man rescuing cats.




Why do they include reply section underneath? Surely, that is for something right? I wonder....
You get that the same thing happens IRL right? There is proof that specific religious beliefs are making things worse, and people pray harder.

Also, i know you're just using big words to sound photosynthesis and you don't know any better, but is love to hear you explain what rights and privileges are being arrogated in the post you are replying to.
 
They do actually have gods in Worm. They are called Heroes, as it doesn't always have to be a deity that is worshipped. People only need something they can believe in. And in such a setting, Heroes would fill that role perfectly.
Wouldn't work all that well. For the most part, as I said earlier, people join religions for a lot of reasons, with "I think big guy is cool" being pretty low on the reasons. IF said Hero worships had a lot of organization and structure, I could see it happening, but in crisis people are going to look for community and assistance.
 
I'm just waiting until there's a food surplus and we get a villainous pop-up soup kitchen that they'll try to shut down.

The rant (and the soup) will be delicious.
I expect that most of Brockton Bay's homeless live in Merchant territory, if only because the Merchants don't exclude anyone due to race.

Taylor bribes the Merchants with some orange-you-glad fruits to get permission to run your suggested pop-up soup kitchen in their territory. Vehicle Tinker get?

On the other hand, it would be quite funny if the fruit made Taylor drunk because it was fermenting, and she hadn't scanned for ethanol, and she'd never previously consumed alcohol. In this case, the Merchants would be a bit disappointed with the bribe, to say the least.
 
On the other hand, it would be quite funny if the fruit made Taylor drunk because it was fermenting, and she hadn't scanned for ethanol, and she'd never previously consumed alcohol. In this case, the Merchants would be a bit disappointed with the bribe, to say the least.

While this is amusing, methanol and ethanol are both absurdly useful chemicals and occur naturally in a lot of plants (methanol especially, and it's easily extracted from hardwoods even with preindustrial kit, hence its old name of 'wood alcohol') so checking the levels of them in sampled vegetation absolutely would be routine.
 
Slight change of plans regarding Emma Interludes. They're as much of a bitch as she is, so I'm going to finish the Neolithic one and only do that single one.
 
Nothing like that, think more along the lines of a cannabinoid
That would potentially be very useful as an analgesic. And it still meets requirements for scurvy reduction.
Huh.

I guess it's easier to explore a religious character without offending anyone this way. I'd have just gone with paganism but this works.
It is amazing how often people laugh of offending people with paganistic beliefs.
So, DL, let me just say, that I appreciate this approach.
Still gonna have to hit a supply story. I still don't like that volcano in the background.
As someone who lives in a technically active volcanic field, neither do I.
I'm afraid my first response to a current eruption would be to immediately look to relocate.
Sure it's a shield now, and sure there are barrier islands if it collapses. Those are not guarantees, and she has no idea of the geotech stress and fault conditions.

That said, her reaction would be shared with many. Sadly.
 
It is amazing how often people laugh of offending people with paganistic beliefs.

Oh you misunderstand, I'm not laughing at anyone!

I'd only be worried about using a mainstream religion because it would innevitably lead to a bunch of people screaming in the comments about her chosen religious beliefs. If she worshipped YHWH (for example) you'd have a crowd shitting all over the story and her characterization.

I'd only use paganism because I'm a fundamentally lazy and uncreative person. I wouldn't want to bother with building a whole religion for my character to follow. No disrespect to Pagans meant!

... though in hindsight, treating your beliefs like a resource mine for content probably isn't great, huh? Oop. I only recently outgrew New Atheism and have these shitty irreligious impulses that still leak out. My bad.
 
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While this is amusing, methanol and ethanol are both absurdly useful chemicals and occur naturally in a lot of plants (methanol especially, and it's easily extracted from hardwoods even with preindustrial kit, hence its old name of 'wood alcohol') so checking the levels of them in sampled vegetation absolutely would be routine.
Also, given how both common and dangerous-for-humans-to-ingest it is, presumably methanol at least would be part of the scan for safety reasons as well.
 
dangerous-for-humans-to-ingest it is,
Yep, its a good thing for everyone to remember that any alcohol that isn't Ethanol when ingested will do some funky and very not-good things to you! Methanol blinds you, Ethanol makes you drunk and we're pretty resilient to it but it can still kill from overdosing, Propanol causes pain and vomiting and confusion, Butanol can shut down the nervous system in enough quantities, Pentanol inflames your lungs and chokes you out both from inhalation or ingestion, Hexanol causes your insides to feel like they're burning up, Heptanol causes burning and dizziness and nausea and drowsiness, etc. Basically, the only moderately safe alcohol outside of very specific medical scenarios is Ethanol, so yeah…
would be part of the scan for safety reasons
…this is quite the important thing to make sure Taylor is scanning for, otherwise severe health problems. Its a mighty good thing that weird fruit had Ethanol in it rather than anything worse, considering Heptanol is a plant metabolite found in Rooibos, Help-Agrimony, Capillipedium grass and Brewer's Yeast. Its fine in small enough quantities considering its been safely used as a flavoring agent for a while and that its been used in winemaking through the yeast in the process, but if it replaced the Ethanol in that fruit that Taylor ate then there'd have been enough for it to have a repulsively oppressively strong flavor and cause her to pass out with her insides feeling like they're burning. I'd imagine one of Contessa's steps involved Taylor ending up in the area she's in specifically because of that drunk-fruit so she could realize that she needs to closely scan any and all possible new food sources in the future for its molecular composition and know what's likely safe and what's probably not.
 
…this is quite the important thing to make sure Taylor is scanning for, otherwise severe health problems. Its a mighty good thing that weird fruit had Ethanol in it rather than anything worse, considering Heptanol is a plant metabolite found in Rooibos, Help-Agrimony, Capillipedium grass and Brewer's Yeast. Its fine in small enough quantities considering its been safely used as a flavoring agent for a while and that its been used in winemaking through the yeast in the process, but if it replaced the Ethanol in that fruit that Taylor ate then there'd have been enough for it to have a repulsively oppressively strong flavor and cause her to pass out with her insides feeling like they're burning. I'd imagine one of Contessa's steps involved Taylor ending up in the area she's in specifically because of that drunk-fruit so she could realize that she needs to closely scan any and all possible new food sources in the future for its molecular composition and know what's likely safe and what's probably not.
If you look back at the section in question, Taylor had made a mistake with her settings. Namely, she told the drones to note whether the flora had dangerous concentrations of anything in addition to the presence of desired compounds. Thus, much to her Shard's amusement, she got stoned and decided to share her bounty with the nearest thing she has to a friend at the time. Which also neatly avoided her getting so high she'd actually be at risk on Tǩóymos.

And no, the [HOST] of Path to Shooting Self in Foot and Pretend You Won* was not involved in this in any way.

*Thanks Cal/Doghead13 for the wonderful alt-designation for PtV.
 
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If you look back at the section in question, Taylor had made a mistake with her settings. Namely, she told the drones to note whether the flora had dangerous concentrations of anything in addition to the presence of desired compounds. Thus, much to her Shard's amusement, she got stoned and decided to share her bounty with the nearest thing she has to a friend at the time. Which also neatly avoided her getting so high she'd actually be at risk on Tǩóymos.

And no, the [HOST] of Path to Shooting Self in Foot and Pretend You Won* was not involved in this in any way.

*Thanks Cal/Doghead13 for the wonderful alt-designation for PtV.

That's a much better name for Coil's power than for PtV.

Also, if Taylor Rescues the Undersiders, or at least Lisa, I think a scenario like the following would be very funny:

Lisa tells Taylor how Coil "proved" to Lisa that his power was "destiny manipulation," and Taylor asks if it might instead be a memory-altering "Pretend You Won" Stranger power.

Lisa realizes that neither she nor anyone else has any way of knowing if this is the case, and decides to ruin Coil's reputation by posting to PHO that Coil is a Stranger whose powers let him get away with not paying his mercenaries, since they don't remember not being paid.

Depending on the timeline, this might cause the Travelers to not accept his offer.
 
Aventho said:
Yep, its a good thing for everyone to remember that any alcohol that isn't Ethanol when ingested will do some funky and very not-good things to you!
Though it does, like many poisons, depend on species:
Admiral Biscuit said:
Applejack is named for a type of alcohol, specifically Applejack. Laird's of New Jersey is actually the oldest distillery in the US; they have license number 1, and they still sell applejack, although it isn't jacked anymore.

See, there are two ways to concentrate alcohol. One is evaporation, relying on the fact that water and alcohol evaporate at different temperatures. You let the water go off as steam, and collect the alcohol in a condenser. The other method relies on freezing, and the fact that the freezing point of alcohol is much colder than water. Skim off the ice, and your brew is more potent than it was when you started.

This is not without problems. Humans can't process methanol (a type of alcohol) in a safe manner. As I recall--and I'm too lazy to look it up--the intermediate steps it takes in your body are formaldehyde and formic acid, neither of which are particularly good for you, at least if you want to live and want to have eyesight.

If you concentrate to a low proof, that's not a problem, which is why ice beers are a thing. A high proof, though, you've got a potentially lethal concentration of methanol in your brew. Now, that can be filtered out, but . . .

Every bit of research I've done thus far implies that equines can process methanol, and the intermediate steps don't hurt them. Furthermore, Fiaura said that in her research into the subject, equines don't process all the alcohol, only ten percent or so, and they just pee the rest out.

Which, in a nutshell, means that if you get into a drinking contest with an equine, the most likely outcome is that you'll go blind.

And then you'll die.
(Story: Several Silly Short Stories for Sunday)

(Also, I didn't know that about those other alcohols -- though I think that in fact I hadn't even heard of most of those other alcohols; you appear to know a lot more chemistry than I do. Fortunately, I was already not in the habit of going around drinking strange liquids just because I didn't know they were poison. :D)
 
That's a much better name for Coil's power than for PtV.
It's poking fun, I believe, at how little good having PtV did Cauldron. Like, nothing they did actually helped stop Scion and probably actively hurt their efforts. Also it was from an outline of a rouge QA idea where Admin had found the desired solution, only to be ignored for so many Cycles that said Shard became properly sophont and found Taylor.
 
Neolithic Interlude Emma
Cauldron Compound, Jan 3, 2011.

It took all of Emma's self-control not to bounce in her seat and glower. Taylor already had a head start, even if the loser probably needed it just to not fail utterly, and grated on her. She'd spent far too much of the funds she'd painstakingly built up with Sophia's help on this – and still wound-up owing favors – for the power sellers to deviate from the plan without telling her ahead of time. It didn't matter that she was getting started earlier too, she was supposed to get her powers first and yet the cow-eyed weakling had gotten hers hours ago! Being too stupid to stay alive wasn't supposed to be rewarded, dammit!

"Mara? We're ready to administer your vial."

Emma shot the lab coat-clad woman a look. "It's about time!" the redhead all but snapped. "We're already off track, and I want to get my hero career off the ground. Preferably before Taylor manages to get herself killed."

The doctor's lips tightened slightly, before she replied "Your nemesis has settled into her base rather nicely and is no longer at risk. Now, shall we begin?"

"I've been waiting for this for weeks, so let's get this done already."

A look of amusement flickered across the doctor's face, before she produced a long, thin, vial from one of her pockets. "Formula number seven nine four eight dash E. Photonic manipulation Blaster-Shaker of medium potency and good stability, just as agreed. Remember, though, that stable does not mean you will gain your specific desired expression and no refunds are available for unsatisfactory results."

Emma froze under the suddenly intense gaze of the dark-skinned woman. "And under no circumstances does Cauldron allow for the revelation of our involvement in your empowerment. Nor are you to attempt to ascertain whether another cape's powers came from us. Understood?"

The redhead nodded carefully, keenly aware of the sweat now beading on her hairline. "Y-yes, I understand."

***​

Brilliant white-gold lights flashed as Emma pelted various targets with concussive blasts formed from the blazing aura surrounding her. It wasn't quite what she'd hoped, but it was likely better in terms of usefulness, even if it wasn't elegant like the one she'd dreamed of since childhood.

"If you're done trying out your power, I can give you your nemesis' ratings."

Sighing, the teen dismissed her power's manifestation and turned to look at the doctor. "Alright, how scary is the worm going to look? Have to look my best after all."

"As effective as your power is in combat, Mara, even a low-level Tinker can work around it given time and resources," the woman huffed. "As I told you when this started, there are no lemon powers here at Cauldron, and the one you picked for Ruth is one she has proven quite suited for. Our analysis pegs her as a Resource type, with a high probability of being multi-threaded too. With this in mind, her coming in at a three rating isn't to be taken at face value, as her powerset leaves her with quite an amount of room to improve and grow. Especially when paired with environmental analysis and intuitive skill."

Typing something into her tablet, the doctor continued, "Your power is set in stone, while you can learn to better utilize it, you are as powerful now as you will ever be. A Tinker like Ruth, though? As she builds more tools, she gains more options and capabilities. Her testing set her as a Tinker 3, with two secondary Thinker powers rated at 2 each, but she also is a Brute 0 as she made armor. Mover 9, because she built a teleportation system. Scout drones give her a Master rating of 2, and a helmet mounted display adds another 3 for Thinker. If you expect to win this, you will need to learn as much as you can about fighting Tinkers. And not just taking lessons, but actively seek out more information on the topic. Failure to counter your nemesis' abilities will mean this will end in an upset."

Emma rolled her eyes. Like she could ever lose to Taylor. And with Sophia at her side? The only question was how hard to push.

***​

PRTENE, Brockton Bay, Jan 4, 2011.

Emma wore the wide smirk on her face openly, not bothering to hide her pleasure as she and her father exited the Director's office. She was in the Wards now, and the first steps on her path to glory had been taken. A mere survivor no longer, now she was a predator with claws fit to carry her to the top, and everyone would see just how strong she was.

It would be a very eventful few days for her, but with Winslow closed because the school's boiler had failed, she'd have plenty of time to focus on power testing and getting proper branding for a queen-to-be. Once she had a sufficiently regal name and costume, it'd only be a matter of time before she became the media's darling Ward, especially once she could start beating down the worm. With all the stories they'd been told about the other girl's mother's time with Lustrum, there was no way Taylor wouldn't trying to emulate the Caged villain out of some stupid rose-tinted belief the lunatic was a good person.

Only way it would be better is if the other girl joined the Empire, but she was far too much of an anarchist to do that, nor was she quite that dumb.

Caught up in her plotting, the redhead failed to notice the startled lanky hero who had been conversing with Dauntless in an intersecting hall.

***​

PRTENE, Brockton Bay, Jan 5, 2011.

"No. No way in hell." Emma glared at the sketch in front of her, and then at the Branding specialist. "That is way too impractical and it looks like it was designed for a middle schooler!"

The suit-clad man blinked. "Just think of the merch! Magical girl is quite the popular aesthetic these days, and 'Miss Sunstream' would bring in almost as much revenue as Vista!"

Rolling her eyes and glowering, the redhead snapped back "It's nothing but lace and yellow gauze! The skirt is huge and the whole thing is just cumbersome fluff. It's a ridiculous travesty and would get in the way of my powers. Try again."

The man opened his mouth to respond, only to get cut off. "I want something regal. You can make it with visible or concealed armor, it can have a sensible skirt, even some sex appeal if it's tastefully done. And I want a name that isn't more suited to a children's cartoon. I'm a hero, not some… dress-up doll you can slap the latest trends onto." She'd done some small-scale modeling work, and knew exactly how long the 'in' thing lasted.

Shrinking back a little, the bureaucrat sighed and started digging through his small collection of folders. "If merchandizing isn't something you care about, we have a few… more aggressive… ideas. Here," he said, sliding a second sketch over to the teen. It was another dress, but slim-fitting and went down to the mid-thigh, where it transitioned into a series of reinforced strips that continued down to just below the knee. It also featured several pieces of medieval-style armor accentuating the chest, hands, and feet. The dress was marked as being blue, while the armor was to be gold. A sundisk tiara and standard visor finished off the costume, and the bottom-left corner bore the proposed name. Zenith.

Emma smiled. That? That would do quite nicely.

***​

"I knew you had it in you!" Sophia called as soon as Emma walked into the Wards common room. "Only question is, is there anything left of whatever morons got at you for me to go after?"

The redhead grinned at her friend, while the other Wards eyes bounced between the two. A small smirk made its way onto Emma's face, as she knew exactly what the tame wolves were thinking. Stalker? Having a friend? As if the coddled brats understood the bond of pack.

"Sorry Soph, I'm a Blaster. Everything's… dealt with." Or would be, once the stupid favors were paid off, but she couldn't say that even if she was willing to admit to having bought her power.

Natural capes apparently normally didn't take hearing that well.

Oh well, it was time to start getting her tendrils into her new team. Who knew, one of the boys might even be worth her attention, once she'd brought them around. Poaching Dean from that self-righteous collateral damage barbie would certainly be amusing…

***​

Much to Emma's surprise, there was a Protectorate hero waiting outside the Wards section when she exited. Leaning against the wall opposite the door was the lanky armor-plated form of Legion, who'd joined up around the same time the PRT'd press-ganged Sophia.

"Mind if we talk a moment Zenith?"

Giving the older cape a wary look, the teen replied "I'm not quite sure what business you might have with me, given that I only signed up yesterday…"

"Nothing really Wards related, just some questions about a couple of missing students from your school. We're pretty sure that at least one Trigger event was involved and we're trying to track them down before one of the gangs picks them up." Pushing off the wall, the man gestured at another doorway. "There's a conference room just over there, if you're willing to talk."

Going anywhere with a Master-class cape wasn't generally a good idea, but Legion created copies of himself from surrounding materials and she was a Blaster. So she followed. It wasn't like she knew anything about whatever losers might've cracked.

Settling into a chair, the Protectorate member then pulled off his helmet and leaned back as Emma's eyes widened. Danny Hebert ran a hand through his thinning hair, before he spoke with a sigh. "Have you seen or heard from Taylor at all recently? She disappeared from home at the start of Christmas break and nobody's been able to find out what happened to her. We think it was voluntary, as she seems to have taken all the food with her."

Rubbing his face, the man who had once been like a second father to her gave Emma a pleading look. "Was she at all close to an Emily Jacobs? She hadn't been talking to me much about school before she vanished and she might have run off with our other missing student if they were close."

Well, this was awkward. Her punching bag's father was in the Protectorate. He might be able to recognize the worm, and that would quite likely cause her problems. She'd need to start damage control now.

***​

PRTENE, Brockton Bay, Jan 9, 2011.

Emma leaned back in her seat, carefully suppressing a groan. She should've been preparing for her debut, not stuck waiting in a conference room with the rest of the Wards for some briefing about one of her set-piece upper classmen who'd set her parents' car on fire. Her time was important!

Finally the screen secure-linked to the Rig flashed to life, what felt like ages past the supposed start time. Armsmaster's helmeted visage gazed out over the assembled junior capes like a statue for a moment, before the man spoke. "Brockton Bay has seen two fresh Triggers emerge over the past week, one pyrogenic Blaster and one Tinker, the latter of which will be the primary focus of this meeting. The new Tinker, identified yesterday as 'Hausōs', was first encountered by Triumph and Kid Win Wednesday evening in the process of fleeing Bay Goods with an assortment of goods, predominately food."

The Protectorate Leader's face was replaced by an image of a tall figure clad in a studded coat, head covered by a helmet with a vaguely insectile-looking visor and flanked by two crude drones.

"The as-yet unnamed Hausōs, when confronted with an offer of surrender and a soft Wards pitch, proceeded to deliver a brief but heated monologue of a decidedly anti-establishment nature, and anti-PRT in particular before disappearing in a nearby alley. Now, ordinarily we would simply classify her as a villain and give a preliminary threat estimate, but she and others like her require a more delicate touch. During the confrontation, she stated herself to be homeless and her actions in all known appearances support this claim. Capes in such circumstances are difficult to handle, in part as they are near universally abuse victims or mentally ill. This presents a notable PR hurdle, as civilians tend to view law enforcement engaging such individuals as police brutality at the best of times, and enough rather public and destructive Triggers have occurred as a result of ordinary police actions that protocol dictates we handle Hausōs with kids gloves, so to speak."

Several scenes of carnage that looked like they'd been pulled out of war movies began to cycle over the screen, before Armsmaster continued.

"This is not to say you are not to confront her, but your rules of engagement are strictly to deescalate when possible and keep your use of force equal to, or less than, her own. Talk her down if you can, but don't push her. You do not want a Tinker to focus on weaponizing their power, especially if you're target number one, nor do we want her to start running more serious criminal operations or, worse, joining one of the gangs for protection. A criminal Tinker using their powers to survive is far easier to deal with than one who is gearing up for combat, and can be either coxed into the fold in time with offers of support, or be neutralized by covertly covering their needs and allowing them to direct all their focus onto their tinkering."

"Our other new parahuman has yet to appear as a cape, and thus we have little to talk about there beyond keeping an eye out for fires and ensuring you are properly following civilian interaction protocols. If you encounter her, she is currently listed as safe to attempt recruitment. If you have questions that you cannot find an answer to in the system, e-mail Miss Militia."

With that, the screen went blank and Emma groaned. "Kids gloves? Is he joking? This Hausōs girl's a villain, it doesn't matter what her sob story is. We can just smack her down, bring her in and let the courts sort her out, instead of giving her time build herself into an actual threat and join one of the gangs."

From the far end of the table, Vista dropped her head into her hands. "Great," she moaned "We have our own Brandish. Perfect."

Directing a decidedly unimpressed look at her newest team mate, the thirteen year-old then added "With her current rap sheet, Hausōs would be in the Wards within a day of being arrested and your grumpy edgelord friend is bad enough for the rest of us, and she was just a vigilante. A Tinker who'd rather be a villain living on the streets than join us? Are you a masochist?"

Rory coughed into his hand. "Vista, please. I'll handle this," he said with a mildly exasperated tone. "You're new to this Emma, so it's understandable you might not be very familiar with how things are done, especially if you're not very into the cape scene. We greatly prefer villains like Hausōs, who only commit crimes to support themselves, to dedicated villains like Crusader or Squealer. They do far less damage and cause far fewer problems for the average person. So we treat them much the same as humor villains, giving them far more slack than they would otherwise get, allowing them to stay that way and us to focus on the actively dangerous capes like those in the ABB and Empire. In most cases I've read about, they don't even fight if confronted by another cape, just run. While the news and PHO make a big deal about cape fights, a substantial number would rather not risk their lives in what some have described as a live-fire game of cops and robbers. Really the biggest difference between villains like Hausōs and rouges is their personal circumstances, to the point that we actually have a special program for those looking to go legit after they've gotten their feet back under them."

The redhead stared at the Wards Leader. Was he serious? Villains existed for heroes to topple and stomp on, but he was really saying that the small fry who only there for newcomers to cut their teeth on were supposed to be left to their rat work in the hopes that they'd stop being rats? She was beginning to wonder if she'd made the wrong choice in teams. But then, Haven didn't have any local branches and she wasn't about to abandon her future domain just for a less annoying team. Especially since Haven was far too large for her to turn to her own ends.


Maybe she could make use of her ability to task Taylor with criminal acts for their fights to get the PRT to drop the shackles?

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"What do you mean 'no fights can be scheduled at this time'? I paid for a nemesis and I want to make use of her!" The nerve of Cauldron, telling her how she could do this!

The doctor's sigh came over the phone with a slightly staticky edge to it. "Mara, you chose a Tinker nemesis. And you acknowledged that said choice meant a period for your nemesis to build up. If you had wanted to begin the fights immediately, instead of after a month, you should have chosen a power that does not require a delay. If that is all, I have other business to deal with."

Emma cut the call with a huff, glaring at her phone like it was a member of the Slaughterhouse 9. Or possibly Taylor. Hopefully her post-introduction patrol was eventful, she really needed to blast something or someone.

Alright, anyone who has a PHO post idea can get that sent over by messaging me now.
 
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Well, shit. Now I am even angrier at Danny for dropping the ball. Like, when he was a deadbeat Dad trying to keep a struggling industry alive I could understand, but with a Protectorate salary and whatever support and benefits that comes with, for him to screw up this bad is almost unforgivable.

I imagine when Taylor finds that factoid out she is going to a bit perturbed.
 
Well, shit. Now I am even angrier at Danny for dropping the ball. Like, when he was a deadbeat Dad trying to keep a struggling industry alive I could understand, but with a Protectorate salary and whatever support and benefits that comes with, for him to screw up this bad is almost unforgivable.

I imagine when Taylor finds that factoid out she is going to a bit perturbed.
Looks like we got things right then. Because that is exactly the reaction we were aiming for.
 
...Wooooow.

That's just...wow.

There is absolutely no excuse.

Emma is going to be sidelined hard once Taylor learns of this little detail. I mean, fuck dude! I wasn't expecting Danny (He's not her father anymore) to be a bigger bastard here.
 
Looks like we got things right then. Because that is exactly the reaction we were aiming for.
Like, I went off a while back over the whole "Forgot to get food for Taylor for like a week" thing, but "Danny the HR guy for a failing industry" has a pretty good excuse. I have definitely had periods in my early life where going without food for a few days due to either no money or just no time to get food, particularly when in a shit situation. But the me of now, with a very comfortable salary, and plenty of free time and support, doing the same would be way more questionable, and I don't have any dependents waiting on me.

It seems to me that Danny feels much more fulfilled being Legion than being Danny, and just gradually stopped really focusing on that part of his life up until Taylor ran away. Which raises the fairly dark question, of how long it took for Danny to realize Taylor was gone?
 
The doctor's sigh came over the phone with a slightly staticky edge to it. "Mara, you chose a Tinker nemesis. And you acknowledged that said choice meant a period for your nemesis to build up. If you had wanted to begin the fights immediately, instead of after a month, you should have chosen a power that does not require a delay. If that is all, I have other business to deal with."

"You should have chosen a changer or master power. I'm sure that would have turned out better for you."
 
Why am I envisioning in my mind that when Taylor finds out who her Sperm donor is in the Protectorate that anytime that Emma appears with him. She will take Emma/Zenith out in seconds and go for the jugular against Danny.
 
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Which raises the fairly dark question, of how long it took for Danny to realize Taylor was gone?

Two days from the sounds of it at least. Alan didn't mention it to Emma beforehand, and I have to assume that Danny would have called Alan at least out of desperation. Plus, I doubt Emma got signed up for the wards within 24 hours of getting her vial.

Enjoying this fic, though I'll admit that Amy did seem to just open up far too easily (unless Shaper was screaming as loud as they could 'go and do something interesting!'), but hey it's a minor gripe.
 
Well. That does explain where Danny has been spending all his time.

I can't help but wonder what triggered Danny, and then what led him to such a fundamental fuckup on the part of Taylor.

I'm angry at Danny of course, because jesus what a colossal fuck-up, but beyond that i'm rampantly confused as to how Taylor's neglect flew under the radar, now more than ever.

Though I suppose that Danny's powers lead me to think he had some sort of disassociative trauma involved in his trigger, something that led to him losing track of himself and/or his priorities for a while?

But then would he have noticed she was missing?

idk. Loving the update, thought not sure how this new facet of the Danny issue is going to play out beyond piling on the 'reasons to hate Danny'.
 
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Well. That does explain where Danny has been spending all his time.

I can't help but wonder what triggered Danny, and then what led him to such a fundamental fuckup on the part of Taylor.

I'm angry at Danny of course, because jesus what a colossal fuck-up, but beyond that i'm rampantly confused as to how Taylor's neglect flew under the radar now more than ever.

Though I suppose that Danny's powers lead me to think he had some sort of disassociative trauma involved in his trigger, something that led to him losing track of himself and/or his priorities.
On the bullying, maybe Cauldron removed the journals as part of the prep work for the contract. Having them come to light would interfere with Emma's side of the contract and make it harder to extract the future promises - bullying another girl into a trigger and then deliberately hunting them down on the streets is a Bad Look.
 
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