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The Rebellion of Akuma Homura against the Law of Cycles has caused irreparable damage to the Human Order. In an effort to restore balance, Alaya has sent their best man back in time to prevent calamity and set the timeline on a more proper course. If only it were that easy.

Now, Akemi Homura is forced to team up with the heroic spirit Emiya in order to make it through this most unusual timeline to defeat Walpurgisnacht and save the day. New allies, new enemies, and a new magic system to contend with, all rolled into one package.

This is a most unusual timeline indeed.

Continued from the previous thread.​
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Day 17 Chapter 1

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Around here
Day 17 Begin
Special Omake Episode

"Welcome back to Japan, McRemitz-san," the man at the Customs desk says as he finishes his perusal through your passport with an affixed stamp and a smile. "I hope you enjoy your stay."

Bazett Fraga McRemitz, reads the name on your passport, snapping it closed as the Customs official returns it to you. With a terse smile, you slide it into the pocket of your suit jacket, adjusting your tie ever so slightly as the motion disturbs its place. "Hopefully better than the last," you respond, giving your shifting luggage one last heft as you walk away.


That had been three hours ago that you arrived at Tokyo International Airport on a direct flight from London. The Shinkansen will be arriving at your destination in twenty minutes, so you decide to take this time to make one last review of the information you had been sent. While all the other passengers can be seen readying their luggage for departure, you remain seated, undoing the latches of your attaché case.

"Subject number one- Mami Tomoe," you say to yourself, flipping through the folder containing the information printouts you had been sent. A picture is included, showing the round, youthful face of a young girl with warm golden eyes and blonde hair pinned into drill-curls by a pair of flower-shaped hairpins. She's smiling, but there's more than her fair share of melancholy in her smile. "Age fifteen. Lost her parents in a car accident three years ago, and currently lives alone in a highrise apartment complex a few blocks from school. Top marks in all her classes, and not involved in any afterschool activities. Limited circle of friends, of which Homura Akemi (see below) is a member. On March sixteenth, she became the first of three subjects to present with Command Seals. Servant unknown."

"Subject number two- Homura Akemi, age fourteen." Another picture included, showing a pale girl with cold royal purple eyes and hair the colour of raven feathers. There's a certain indescribable sharpness to the image, as though the girl in question is staring at you through the ink of the photograph. "Lost her mother last year, and then her father three months later. Officially registered at Saint Hilda's in Tokyo for her seventh year, but her heart condition caused her to miss the entire school year. Transferred in to Mitakihara Junior High at the start of her eighth year. Top marks in all her classes, and not involved in any afterschool activities. Limited circle of friends, of which Mami Tomoe (see above) is a member. On March seventeenth - the date of her transfer into Mitakihara - she became the second of three subjects to present with Command Seals. Akemi is registered as living by herself, though friends have made mention of a live-in guardian named Archer. Presumed to be her servant."

"Subject number three- Kirika Kure, age fifteen. Officially registered as living with her mother, no father in sight. Fairly low marks all across the board, displays little interest in school." Between the sharp and lopsided grin, the inconsiderate mess that is her untamed chin-length dark chocolate hair, and that mischievous glint in her amber-coloured eyes, you can almost feel the delinquency she exudes. "On March twenty-first, she became the third of three subjects to present with Command Seals. Servant unknown."

"All three subjects have one trait shared in common- A silver ring worn on the left middle finger. Purpose unknown. Perhaps used to denote membership in a secret mage's union?"

You check the time with a sigh, and return the folder to your attaché case, sealing it up before moving to collect your other pieces of luggage as the train rolls to a stop. The doors slide open, and you join the other passengers as they depart.

It's been close to six years since you were last in Japan, by your reckoning, and your Japanese is a little rusty, but thanks to the map included with your information you manage to find your way to the hotel in under an hour. You've arranged for a five-day stay at the Mitakihara Hyatt, though
[ ] you're hoping to be out of here before that. Being called away like this so suddenly, and by that person, has put you in a sour mood.
[ ] you're hoping to take no more time than you need to. You're here on business and you need to remain professional and alert at all times.
[ ] you're hoping to stay a little longer. Even if it's work, it'll be nice to get away from those stiffs at the Association even for just a few days.

It's a little before twelve noon as you depart from the hotel, leaving behind the rolling suitcase filled with the bulk of your necessaries, as well as the over-the-shoulder metal cylinder and its contents that had given you so much trouble at Customs. All you take with you as you head towards the school is your attaché case, carrying inside the folder containing all the information that person had sent to you when they requested your presence here in Mitakihara, as well as-

"Can I see some identification, ma'am?" asks the man at the front desk.

You nod, producing a set of papers to show to him. "I'm with the Health Ministry. I'm here to meet with," as you speak, the man looks over your documents. "Caren Ortensia, regarding a few recent changes in policy."

"Of course, ma'am." They must be damn good forgeries that person sent you, because he returns them to you with no issue. Apparently, the fact that you don't even look remotely Japanese does little to convince him that you aren't really with the Health Ministry so long as you have the proper documentation. "Nurse Ortensia is on the second floor, just past the bridge. Do you need someone to take you there?"

"No thank you. I believe I can manage by myself."

In hindsight, perhaps you should have taken him up on his offer. This school is massive. But eventually, you make it to your destination.

"I didn't believe you when you said you were working as a nurse at a junior high school," you say as you pull up a chair. "Caren Ortensia, a school nurse? What the hell could have possibly made you want to pick this job of all things?"

"Serving as the school nurse is one of only a handful of ways in which I can indulge my pleasures in a socially acceptable manner."

You can't help but roll your eyes at her comment. "Of course you'd say that."

[ ] Wat do?



Friday, 1 April, 2011

Major objectives:
Bazett
- Investigate and interrogate the three identified subjects
- Determine if the three identified subjects pose a threat to the Mage's Association in any way
- Determine if a Holy Grail War has really started up in Mitakihara


Hello and welcome back, my fellows!

If you're joining us for the first time, you're probably wondering why we're starting off at Day 17. Well, the first thread - which actually starts here - was only adopted by me; I didn't make the thread, which I only found out too late was causing problems where my players weren't getting notifications that posts were up. It was decided that once I got to a good stopping point - that being the end of Part 1 - I'd make a new thread so that I'd be the one in control of threadmarking and notifications and whatnot, and hopefully that would sort out any of the above problems.

I strongly encourage that new players read through the first sixteen days in order to get themselves up to speed, but the basic gist of the quest is that servants have sprung up in Mitakihara, and it's up to Homura and Archer to figure out what's going on and why, while attempting to keep Madoka safe from a world that's growing ever more dangerous by the day. Play switches between Homura and Archer at player-requested intervals or whenever I feel like it, and in addition to the regular "[x] vote here to do stuff" method of play, the option also exists to play as Alaya and send messages to Archer.

And to both returning members and new ones, no, we have not suddenly turned into Bazett Quest. The change will last for only this day, and if you want to know why then look no further than the in-quest date for your explanation.

Enjoy!​
 
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Characters
Akemi Homura is one of the two main characters of this quest, along with her servant Archer. She's been through timeline after timeline to get to this point, but after countless tries things are finally starting to look up. She's built up a solid block of friends and allies, and with her servant and surrogate father Archer (and now True Assassin as well) there's no way this timeline can go wrong!

Oh, who are we kidding. This is Akemi Homura we're talking about. Suffering follows her like the plague, and the introduction of servants to the mix just means that she's got a different set of challenges to overcome this time around.​

Magic: Timestop, Projection, Reinforcement, ice
Grief Seeds: 33
Runes:
Freeze 5/5 [Max]
-Applies a large, wide-area freezing effect to Projected arrows
-Freeze up to whole large enemies/objects when hit by Projected arrows
-Allows for invocation of the rune by drawing it with frozen atmospheric water molecules
-Allows for all-over freezing of water in any molecular state
-Splash freeze status across adjacent enemies.
-Project arrows made entirely from frozen atmospheric water molecules
-Grants access to Finitora Freccia, a -273°C arrow attack
--Finitora Freccia Minore - A single arrow with a wide-area freezing effect and freezing splash damage (same as regular ice arrows)
--Finitora Freccia Maggiore - A self-replicating wide-area scattershot, with a wide-area freezing effect and freezing splash damage
Drain 1/0
Stasis 1/0
Transfer 4/4 (next level 5/1)
-Allows for a moderate amount of energy transfer between two bodies.
-Allows for a medium-power Gandr shot to be used as a means of depleting moderate amounts of Grief from the user's Soul Gem.
-Allows the user to "hold hands" with the mana of another living person or persons.
Kaname Madoka is Homura's greatest love, and the safety of Kaname Madoka is Homura's greatest priority, but Madoka just wishes she knew how to help her friends and the people around her. Despite being tentatively aware of the world of the puella magi around her, she doesn't realize just how valuable the power contained within her soul is.

As it turns out, that power is immeasurable. Her Origin of Kindness was to be expected, but there's absolutely nothing that could make her dual Elements of World and Leyline make any amount of sense, and for someone with no mage lineage having more magic circuits than can accurately be quantified is beyond miraculous.​

Affection - 10
This timeline has thus far been kind to Miki Sayaka. She has yet to sell her soul to the Incubator, she hasn't had to see anyone get their head bitten off, and she and Homura are on very good terms, all things considered. It's just too bad that, despite knowing how dangerous being a puella magi can be, she still harbors a secret desire to take up the mantle, if it means being able to protect her friends from the dangers of the world; and, unbeknownst to Sayaka, she possesses the potential to summon the Saber servant, should she ever decide to contract and become a puella magi. She also possesses a Water Element and Music Origin, though her complete lack of magic circuits means that if she wants to learn magecraft like Hitomi, she'll have to stick to applications that don't require her to use her own mana.

Sayaka has recently discovered that she is bisexual, and is currently testing the waters of her new relationship with Kyouko. Here's hoping everything goes well for them.​

Affection - 8
Shizuki Hitomi is not a man-stealing bitch. She is not a horrible person. And she does not believe that girls can't love girls. What Shizuki Hitomi is, is a young girl in love with her best friend's best friend. Despite a traditional upbringing at the hands of her parents, she is making an active attempt to broaden her tolerances, and accepts that Homura and Madoka love each other in a romantic sense. And she's trying to be as supportive as possible of all her friends and help them through their problems in whatever way she can, whatever those problems may be.

Upon the discovery of active magic circuits within her body - only four, though their A-ranked quality helps to mitigate their low number - Hitomi has recently taken to studying introductory magecraft. She's just a beginner, but her Origin of 'Structure' is very conductive to her studies. One could say that she has completed a basic mastery of Projections, and is eager to move on to other facets of her studies.​

Affection - 8
Tomoe Mami is Mitakihara's most experienced veteran, and the master of the incredibly powerful Caster servant. Despite her seniority, she has largely yielded authority to Akemi Homura when it comes to organizing the coordination of their alliance. She's tough, capable, and willing to do what needs to be done to keep Mitakihara and its citizens safe, though she would prefer it be done without unnecessary bloodshed.​

Affection - 8.5
Magic: Ribbon construction, allied combat enhancements, Grief dampening, enhanced tracking, minor magic sealing
Grief Seeds: 16
Runes:
- Wunjo
- Berkano
Sakura Kyouko is rude, abrasive, a veteran puella magi like her onetime mentor Tomoe Mami, and master of the Rider servant. She doesn't go to school, preferring to spend her time beating the unsuspecting at the local DDR machines for lunch money. She's generally useful as an ally, even if she has to be bribed with food in order to lend her assistance.

Currently, she's living with Mami in her highrise apartment, and has recently entered into a romantic relationship with Sayaka after weeks of neither of them being able to spit out their feelings for one another.​

Affection - 7.5
Magic: Illusions, enhanced tracking, flame manipulation
Grief Seeds: 23
Runes:
- Berkano
- Sowilo
Mikuni Oriko honestly just wanted to do the right thing. Unfortunately, her over-reliance on her clearly faulty precognition has led to her believing that the wrong thing was actually the right thing. Master of the Lancer servant and lover of Kure Kirika, Mikuni Oriko has made a lot of mistakes and has a lot to answer for, and faced with the choice of death or capitulation, has allied herself with Akemi Homura and her bloc for the chance at redemption. To the surprise of everyone, she's actually made real progress towards redeeming herself in the eyes of her allies.

In a surprisingly twist of Fate, Oriko is actually related to Caren Ortensia- Their grandmothers were sisters, and their mothers - cousins to each other - shared a lifelong friendship in spite of never having met face-to-face. Oriko would very much like to strike up the same friendship with Caren that their mothers once shared, though her cousin's reticence may put a damper on her efforts.​

Affection - 9
Magic: Precognition, advanced barrier and Bounded Field construction, advanced healing magic
Grief Seeds: 38
Runes:
-Othala
- Uruz
In stark contrast to her more level-headed lover, Kure Kirika has no regrets about her actions. The master of the Berserker servant has no reason to feel remorse for the lives she has taken as a result of Oriko's choices- And why should she? Everything she's done has been in the service of Oriko, which mean it can't be wrong, even if it's wrong! She'll follow Oriko anywhere, even to the depths of Hell!

As it turns out, what causes Kirika to be so loyal towards and so non-functional without Mikuni Oriko is because of something to do with her wish rewriting her personality. She's still loyal to Oriko, but now that Oriko is firmly on the side of good her efforts to be useful to Oriko have shifted, and she's no longer skulking about looking for the next kill to bring back to her mistress. It also turns out that Kirika is, contrary to all prior evidence, capable of forming and maintaining emotional connections and interests with people and things that aren't Mikuni Oriko. She has a library of videogames, anime, and manga she enjoys entirely without Oriko's involvement; and despite living apart from her she clearly cares about her mother very much. Maybe her grandparents too, if she'd talk about them more.

She's Homura's official Big Sis, through and through. Good god, Kirika has come a long way from the person she used to be. We're all proud of her.​

Affection - 10
Magic: Time alter, improved mana transference, mana vampirism
Grief Seeds: 32
Runes:
- Fehu
- Gebo
Saber servant, Shinmen Musashi at your service! ... Wait a minute, isn't Miyamoto Musashi supposed to be a guy? Well, yes, the key word being supposed to. This is the elder sister of the boy who was born to the name Bennosuke, who grew up to study the sword using his name, and who became Miyamoto Musashi in his stead. But make no mistake, this is the correct Miyamoto Musashi of this timeline, not to be confused with the dimension-hopping Saber servant of a certain other timeline.​

True name - Emiya Shirou
Master - Akemi Homura​

Archer is one of the two main characters of this quest, along with his master and surrogate daughter Akemi Homura. Sent down to Mitakihara by Alaya, Archer at first had only the vaguest idea of what he was supposed to accomplish, but as more and more details reveal themselves and as the threats keep mounting, one thing has become clear- Protect Kaname Madoka, no matter the cost.

Over the course of his stay in Mitakihara, Archer's beautiful dream has come back to him, and rather than remain the bitter and cynical warrior we all knew him as in the Visual Novel, he's once again taken up the mantle of a hero of justice, striving to help the people around him however he can for as long as he's here.​

Affection - 10

True name - Brynhildr
Master - Mikuni Oriko
Lancer is the dutiful and reliable servant of Mikuni Oriko. In addition to acting as the butler of the Mikuni household when not being used in combat, Lancer has taken to teaching her master and allies the art of rune magic to great success. All five members of the Puella Magi Holy Quintet have learned and can use the ancient runes thanks to Lancer.​

Just, don't make her mad. Seriously; it's not a good idea.

True name - Achilles
Master - Sakura Kyouko
Rider is a pretty cool dude. He's hoping to have just as much fun here as he did the last time he was in a Grail War.

True name - Gilgamesh
Master - Tomoe Mami
Gilgamesh the King is a spirit too powerful to be confined to a single class, deigning to appear as a Caster as the vessel of Archer was already taken. Think not of him as the King of of the Babylonia singularity, but rather as the King who would have been had that singularity never occurred. A valuable ally and nowhere close to the asshole that was his Archer incarnation, if frequently stubborn to lend a hand when he feels his help is not required.​

True name - Hassan of Serenity
Master - Akemi Homura
While Jack the Ripper may have been the most proper Assassin servant for a War fought in the world of the puella magi, it was always one of the Hassan-i-Sabbah who were meant to be summoned as the True Assassin of the Mitakihara War. The Hassan of Serenity has answered Akemi Homura's call, but what her purpose will be in this war remains to be seen. Her constant desire to be touched by someone who can withstand her poisonous body makes her troublesome to deal with, so until a more permanent solution can be found, let's hope she doesn't accidentally poison any of Homura's loved ones.​
Affection - 8

True name - Lancelot du Lac
Master - Kure Kirika
Through the use of a Command Seal, Berserker's master has lifted the Mad Enhancement which plagued his mind. Because of this, Berserker's stats have been altered, and they now represent a point closer to his incarnation as a Saber-class servant. While his base stats are now lower than when his Mad Enhancement was active, the return of his mind means that Berserker has been made an even more capable and deadly member of the team; and as well, his final Noble Phantasm, the holy sword Arondight, has been permanently unlocked for use at his master's discretion.​
Caren Ortensia is a member of the Holy Church, who was sent to Mitakihara three years ago on assignment, where she serves undercover as the nurse at Mitakihara Junior High, a position she took because it enables her to only have to deal with children who are sick or hurt. While obviously no sane school board would let such a woman anywhere near children otherwise, it seems there's more at work than meets the eye, and what the Church wants from her in Mitakihara is anyone's guess.

In a surprisingly twist of Fate, Caren is actually related to Mikuni Oriko- Their grandmothers were sisters, and their mothers - cousins to each other - shared a lifelong friendship in spite of never having met face-to-face. Unfortunately, Caren shows little interest in striking up the same friendship with Oriko, unless it also involves turning her cousin into an asset for the Church.​

Affection - 4.5
An agent of the Mage's Association and master of Cú Chulainn, the Lancer servant of the previous Grail War from seven years ago, called from London to Mitakihara by Caren Ortensia in response to all the plain bizarre shit that's been going on in the past few weeks. She doesn't look too scary, but it's probably not a good idea to get into a fight with her; she's a master of unarmed combat and an expert at taking down non-compliant mages. So far, she has proven to be a competent, not-quite-ally to the puella magi of Mitakihara, but being an agent from what is ostensibly a rival faction of magic users still makes her existence in the city an unknown variable, and possibly a threat.

Following a fight with the intangible familiars of the witch Elsa Maria, Bazett went to Mifune City to replace her prosthetic arm which was destroyed in the fight. There, master mage and puppetmaker Aozaki Touko gave her Airgetlám, a top-of-the-line custom-made prosthetic arm equipped with the ability to recreate the Claíomh Solais, the sword of light wielded by the one-armed god Nuada of Irish mythology.​

Affection - 6
The Lancer servant from the Fifth Fuyuki Holy Grail War, originally summoned by Bazett Fraga McRemitz seven years earlier at the start of the War. Cú Chulainn is in Mitakihara at the order of his then-current master, Caren Ortensia, to help clean up the city from the 'wraiths' infesting it. Cú Chulainn participated in the battle against Elsa Maria on the night of April 15th, and after a brief tussle between his original and then-current master, mastership of Cú Chulainn was finally transferred back to Bazett.

The pair make for quite noisy upstairs neighbors, as Homura learned later that night.​

One of the trio of puella magi hailing from Shirome, only Nagatsuki Miyuki has decided to continue living the puella magi lifestyle, likely only due to her having manifested a set of Command Seals. Faced with the responsibility to summon the Saber servant and keep the peace come Walpurgisnacht, Miyuki has decided to stick around where her friends have not.

Soft-hearted, at least to a point, and with an unexpected dry side to her as well, Nagatsuki Miyuki has taken the murder of her friend worse than either Asako Koito or Namekata Akira, having taken to drinking herself to sleep to cope with the loss; and for good reason, as it turns out that Miyuki was in love with Komaki, despite knowing that the latter likely would have displayed the same contempt for her as she did to Mikuni Oriko were she to find out. As a puella magi, she fights using her skill as a fencer and with a pistol capable of employing attacks based on the four Elements. She also possesses the ability to see through illusions and is immune to external sources of Grief thanks to the nature of her wish magic, and has just recently come into her own as the master of the Saber servant. How she'll fit in with the rest of the team is anyone's guess.​

Affection - 6
Grief Seeds - 9 (three for each member of the Shirome Trio)
The divorced single mother of Kure Kirika. Because she was forced to drop out of high school when her then-boyfriend got her pregnant, she has to work multiple jobs in order to provide for herself and secure her daughter's future. Recently has developed a crush on Archer, and his desire to help her take control of her life probably isn't helping his case any. Only time, and more than a few pushes from Kaname Junko, her supervisor and professional matchmaker, will tell if her feelings blossom into something more. Or whether Homura and Kirika end up as step-sisters.
Affection - 7
(The Archery Club is too poor to afford a picture to put here)

With only five members, the Archery Club is MItakihara's most poorly-funded club. Starting from the first Tuesday in April, they meet in the run-down archery shack out behind the track field every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday after classes. They're 100% reputable, despite what their club's dirt-poor appearance would have you believe.
Members:
Kasuga Shinji - Club captain, in the same grade as Tomoe-san but in a different class. Has a crush on Tomoe-san, but is unwilling to verbalize his feelings to her in person.
Mochizumi Nico - Club vice-captain, the tan girl with messy hair that sits next to Homura. Has a crush on Kasuga Shinji, but doesn't want to be the one to make the first move, and is stubbornly waiting for him to get over his feelings for Tomoe-san in the hopes that he will notice her.
Tanaka Harou - A third-year who has notoriously bad luck with women. An orphan who lives with his grandfather - whom he often gets into confrontation with - and a female cousin around his age.
Suzuhara Daigo - A second-year with a sister who is in the hospital. He thinks his next-door neighbor might like him, but is afraid to approach her because the rest of her family terrifies him.
Akemi Homura - The Archery Club's newest member.​
 
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The Story Thus Far
Chapter 01
Chapter 02
Chapter 03
Chapter 04
Chapter 05
Chapter 06
Chapter 07
Chapter 08
Chapter 09
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Coming soon!
 
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[X] Plan First Step Into Paradise
-[X] you're hoping to stay a little longer. Even if it's work, it'll be nice to get away from those stiffs at the Association even for just a few days.
-[X] First question Caren on what she knows of what's currently going on in Mitakihara, and if she's interacted with anyone suspected to have Command Seals. If she has, then ask what she knows if their personalities.
-[X] After questioning her, ask her if she can arrange a check up on the suspected Master that's been hospital bound recently, Akemi Homura. She should be the easiest to question here without rousing suspicion from the staff or other potential Masters here.
--[X] If Caren manages to arrange it today, stick around until Akemi gets here. Since Akemi is already aware of Caren's knowledge of the Moonlit World and the previous "Hollow Grail War" explain to Akemi that she's here to confirm that a Grail War has begun; press that she's only under orders to confirm the prior factor and that she will not be interfering in this war other than in extenuating circumstances. Ask if all of the Servants have been summoned, and if she's encountered any odd Class Containers that aren't of the original seven. Ask if there's anything off about this Grail War, and if she's aware of a Greater or Lesser Grail connected to this war. Finally confirm to her that she's aware that she's a part of a group of Magic Users that have rings marking them as such; question her on the nature of those rings, in whether all who have them are part of a unified group or not, or if the rings are cursed and put on them by someone.
-[X] Regardless if she manages to question her second subject, thank Caren for her time and depart, and scope out the residence of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika. Don't enter for now, but look for any oddities such as Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, and the like. Afterwards, get situated in her hotel and wait until the evening, when the events of Grail Wars typically commence. Prepare to head out then.

Well, this'll certainly be an exciting experience for Bazett. And sorry for such a large vote, though the bulk is just questions for Homura if she manages to set up the meeting under the guise of an agent from the Health Department. And congrats on making it to Thread 2!
 
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[X] Plan First Step Into Paradise
-[X] you're hoping to stay a little longer. Even if it's work, it'll be nice to get away from those stiffs at the Association even for just a few days.
-[X] First question Caren on what she knows of what's currently going on in Mitakihara, and if she's interacted with anyone suspected to have Command Seals. If she has, then ask what she knows if their personalities.
-[X] After questioning her, ask her if she can arrange a check up on the suspected Master that's been hospital bound recently, Akemi Homura. She should be the easiest to question here without rousing suspicion from the staff or other potential Masters here.
--[X] If Caren manages to arrange it today, stick around until Akemi gets here. Since Akemi is already aware of Caren's knowledge of the Moonlit World and the previous "Hollow Grail War" explain to Akemi that she's here to confirm that a Grail War has begun; press that she's only under orders to confirm the prior factor and that she will not be interfering in this war other than in extenuating circumstances. Ask if all of the Servants have been summoned, and if she's encountered any odd Class Containers that aren't of the original seven. Ask if there's anything off about this Grail War, and if she's aware of a Greater or Lesser Grail connected to this war. Finally confirm to her that she's aware that she's a part of a group of Magic Users that have rings marking them as such; question her on the nature of those rings, in whether all who have them are part of a unified group or not, or if the rings are cursed and put on them by someone.
-[X] Regardless if she manages to question her second subject, thank Caren for her time and depart, and scope out the residence of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika. Don't enter for now, but look for any oddities such as Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, and the like. Afterwards, get situated in her hotel and wait until the evening, when the events of Grail Wars typically commence. Prepare to head out then.

Umm, yeah, I know what's going on. Totally.
 
@WanderingTwix Forgot that your not as knowledgeable in Fate lore despite how active you were in Thread 1. Basically, Bazett Fraga McRimitz is an Enforcer for the Mages Association, who are usually very combat capable, and take care of things for the Association and occasionally the Church like hunting down Sealing Designates, or killing Dead Apostles, and in this case to be sent into a suspected active combat zone in order to investigate things. Bazett was basically one of the protags in the visual novel Fate/Hollow Ataraxia, which is basically a time-looping simulation in Bazett's head caused by Angra Mainyu (All the Worlds Evils) of the events of the Third Holy Grail War with characters from the Fifth. Caren was the one who was aiding Bazett which she was in her coma-state during this, while also diving into her mind in order to stop the loop. Since this basically gives her experience of a Grail War, they probably sent her to investigate things due to that.

Since the Greater Grail (the Holy Grail basically, which was corrupted by Angra Mainyu) was dismantled since the ending of Fate/Stay Night, it is very concerning that a Grail War is happening, especially since such a thing typically requires the Greater Grail which was constructed with the aid of the Second True Magic via Zelretch, the Wizard Marshall of the Mages Association. As for the lesser grail, they're typically a Homonculus, like Ilya or Irisviel, which allow the proper activation of the Greater Grail in order to grant a wish to the winner. They probably think that someone has created something similar to the Greater Grail in Mitakihara, which is incredibly illegal and a huge taboo in the eyes of the Mages Association. In regards to the class containers bit, Bazett, during the Hollow Grail War, had a servant under the Avenger class, of which she later finds out to be Angra Mainyu.

Hope this helped a bit in figuring out what's going on. Also, you can just post [X] Plan First Step Into Paradise as your vote, as it automatically accounts for all of the subvotes in the vote counter.
 
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Forgot that your not as knowledgeable in Fate lore
Read: Know basically nothing about Fate lore
Basically, Bazett Fraga McRimitz is an Enforcer for the Mages Association, who are usually very combat capable, and take care of things for the Association and occasionally the Church like hunting down Sealing Designates, or killing Dead Apostles, and in this case to be sent into a suspected active combat zone in order to investigate things. Bazett was basically one of the protags in the visual novel Fate/Hollow Ataraxia, which is basically a time-looping simulation in Bazett's head caused by Angra Mainyu (All the Worlds Evils) of the events of the Third Holy Grail War with characters from the Fifth. Caren was the one who was aiding Bazett which she was in her coma-state during this, while also diving into her mind in order to stop the loop. Since this basically gives her experience of a Grail War, they probably sent her to investigate things due to that.

Since the Greater Grail (the Holy Grail basically, which was corrupted by Angra Mainyu) was dismantled since the ending of Fate/Stay Night, it is very concerning that a Grail War is happening, especially since such a thing typically requires the Greater Grail which was constructed with the aid of the Second True Magic via Zelretch, the Wizard Marshall of the Mages Association. As for the lesser grail, they're typically Homonculus', like Ilya or Irisviel, which allow the proper activation of the Greater Grail in order to grant a wish to the winner. They probably think that someone has created something similar to the Greater Grail in Mitakihara, which is incredibly illegal and a huge taboo in the view of the Mages Association. In regards to the class containers bit, Bazett, during the Hollow Grail War, had a servant under the Avenger class, of which she later finds out to be Angra Mainyu.

Hope this helped a bit in figuring out what's going on. Also, you can just post [X] Plan First Step Into Paradise as your vote, as it automatically accounts for all of the subvotes in the vote counter.
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Yeah, I can dig that.
 
[X] Plan First Step Into Paradise
-[X] you're hoping to stay a little longer. Even if it's work, it'll be nice to get away from those stiffs at the Association even for just a few days.
-[X] First question Caren on what she knows of what's currently going on in Mitakihara, and if she's interacted with anyone suspected to have Command Seals. If she has, then ask what she knows if their personalities.
-[X] After questioning her, ask her if she can arrange a check up on the suspected Master that's been hospital bound recently, Akemi Homura. She should be the easiest to question here without rousing suspicion from the staff or other potential Masters here.
--[X] If Caren manages to arrange it today, stick around until Akemi gets here. Since Akemi is already aware of Caren's knowledge of the Moonlit World and the previous "Hollow Grail War" explain to Akemi that she's here to confirm that a Grail War has begun; press that she's only under orders to confirm the prior factor and that she will not be interfering in this war other than in extenuating circumstances. Ask if all of the Servants have been summoned, and if she's encountered any odd Class Containers that aren't of the original seven. Ask if there's anything off about this Grail War, and if she's aware of a Greater or Lesser Grail connected to this war. Finally confirm to her that she's aware that she's a part of a group of Magic Users that have rings marking them as such; question her on the nature of those rings, in whether all who have them are part of a unified group or not, or if the rings are cursed and put on them by someone.
-[X] Regardless if she manages to question her second subject, thank Caren for her time and depart, and scope out the residence of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika. Don't enter for now, but look for any oddities such as Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, and the like. Afterwards, get situated in her hotel and wait until the evening, when the events of Grail Wars typically commence. Prepare to head out then.

As far as interlopers go it could have been worse, but it seems fortune is still on our side (if our diplomacy is up to snuff). I was kinda expecting El Melloi II (Waver) since he wanted to get into the 5th Grail War but missed it.
 
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Yeah, I can dig that.
Have I ever mentioned just how crazy dense the Fateverse is? Because it's crazy dense.

As far as interlopers go it could have been worse, but it seems fortune is still on our side (if our diplomacy is up to snuff). I was kinda expecting El Melloi II (Waver) since he wanted to get into the 5th Grail War but missed it.
I had thought about it, but pound for pound Bazett is the much smarter choice to send in when you look at from the Association's perspective, per Enetious's above comment.



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Day 17 Chapter 2
[X] Plan First Step Into Paradise



You can't help but roll your eyes at Ortensia's comment. "Of course you'd say that," you say, as the silver-haired woman slides a saucer of tea towards you. "In all seriousness, though, this is bloody big. How'd you even get your hands on this information?"

"I'm the school nurse, McRemitz," Caren responds, sipping her own tea with a look that borders uncomfortably on an emotion you'd rather not think about. "And one of our masters recently had surgery to mitigate a congenital heart defect. She has to come see me every day to take her medicine. It's easy to notice things about a person when you see them that often."

"Homura Akemi, right?" You're in Japan now, Bazett; you're not reading an English-language printout. Gotta remember name order if you want to get anywhere. "... Sorry, Akemi Homura. I keep forgetting that Japanese names go backwards. Anyway, was she the one that clued you in to the fact that the Holy Grail War's started up in this city?"

"It would have been rather difficult for her to have done so, given that Tomoe Mami was seen with Command Seals the day before Akemi Homura transferred in."

"Then, who was it?"

"None of them, really. At least, not all at once." Ortensia looks out the window as the end-of-lunch bell rings, and you opt to join her. You see several clusters of students funneling in through the front gate, after having left school grounds to seek lunch elsewhere. Your stomach growls just thinking about lunch. The last time you ate had been over Russian airspace too many hours ago. "I saw them on Tomoe Mami completely by chance, and I didn't think all that much of it at the time. It was an inconspicuous sort of pattern, and I thought she might have just gotten burnt or something. I saw them again on Akemi Homura the next day, but it wasn't until Kure Kirika showed up for class one Monday sporting what were clearly Command Seals that I realized it wasn't just a random thing. The next day, Akemi Homura came into my office feeling lightheaded, and as we were talking she got really jittery when I mentioned that she wasn't the only girl at school to have them, and that's when it really all came together for me."

"That would have been the twenty-second, right? That was still over a week before you got in contact with me. Why the wait?"

"Well, I wasn't sure at first whether a Grail War had actually started, or was only about to start, and I wanted to wait and see what I was looking at before getting in contact. Of course, by the time the first battle had started, I knew exactly what I was dealing with."

"You mean the War has already started? Why didn't you say so sooner?"

"I told you, McRemitz. I wanted to make sure I knew exactly what was going on before I got in contact with the Association. I didn't want to waste their valuable time if, for example, I was only dealing with some low-level mages who had somehow lucked into a set of almost-Command Seals for their pet familiar, or something. I did my due diligence and waited until I was absolutely sure that a Grail War had started. The night I contacted you, I saw two servants going at it over the train bridge that crosses into neighboring Kazamino. I couldn't see much, but from the way they fought I presume it was Archer and Berserker. Berserker disappeared before Archer could finish her off, though."

"Archer and Berserker," you say, pondering on the information you had been given. "That would be... Akemi, probably, and one other. What can you tell me about her?"

"What can I tell you about Akemi? Well, she's a quiet girl, for the most part, and she keeps to just a small group of friends. Exceptionally bright- She took top ranking in all her classes after just a week- Even PE, which came as a surprise to me given her heart condition. I'm fairly certain that she's got it bad for one of her classmates, but to my knowledge she hasn't said anything to them. Or if she has, they've made no move to make it official."

Good student, quiet, and apparently more than a little shy. Somehow, only that last part surprises you. The picture you had been given hardly conveyed "shyness" very well. "Can I speak with her?"

"Of course. That won't be a problem at all." Ortensia ceases her window-gazing, turning towards the phone at her desk. "Hello, main office? This is Nurse Ortensia. Do you think you could have Akemi Homura sent over to me for just a second? No, everything's fine. I just need to talk to her about her medication, that's all. ... Thank you."

That sounded almost professional. You scoff. "The staff must love you."

"Oh, the trick to keeping this job is, I never let the higher-ups know how much I love seeing a child in misery." You have to roll your eyes for a second time.

It takes a few minutes, but eventually Akemi Homura arrives, looking, feeling, and sounding exactly like you had imagined she would. Even that sort of cold undercurrent in her voice as she says "You wanted to see me, Nurse Ortensia?" upon entering and seeing you, is exactly the way you had imagined her to be.

"Well, not I, specifically." You'll take the confused look on Akemi's face as she turns her gaze on you to be your cue.

"My name is Bazett Fraga McRemitz." You introduce yourself in the best Japanese you can muster. "Nurse Ortensia requested that I come to Mitakihara and investigate a few things that have the potential to cause some very important people a lot of worry." You can see Akemi tensing up the more you speak. "I'll cut right to the chase. What do you know about the Holy Grail War?"

"Only that the Grail was destroyed seven years ago, and that further Grail Wars should have been rendered impossible."

"Then perhaps you can explain to me where you got your Command Seals from?" You clearly see Akemi's eyes dart down to her hand. Your own eyes follow suit, tracing the lines of an ornate diamond pattern broken up into three distinct segments. And there on her other hand, right where the report said it would be, is that strange silver ring that all three masters have in common. "Relax. I'm only here to gather information. I won't get involved in whatever you and the other masters are up to unless I think I absolutely have to. I just want to know if a Grail War has actually started up in this city, or if there's something else going on entirely."

Akemi raises her hand, staring deeper at the sigils. "McRemitz-san, to be perfectly honest I don't know how I obtained these Command Seals. As for your second point, while I have been informed that what is going on is some shade of War, it is not particularly a Grail War, if you understand me."

"In other words, it's got all the trappings of a Grail War, but no actual Grail to be had at the end?" Akemi nods, and you mutter under your breath "So, it's like it was six years ago..." ... "And, who was it that gave you this information?"

"That would be my servant."

"Archer, correct?"

Again, you can see Akemi tensing up. "How did you know?"

"You're registered as living by yourself, so talk of a live-in guardian who goes by the name of "Archer" is easy enough to pick up on. And if, say, the right person were to put two and two together, it'd be easy for them to figure out who "Archer" really was. Now, I'm aware that there are two other girls at this school who are masters, Tomoe Mami and Kure Kirika. Is that correct?" Again, Akemi nods. "Good. can you tell me which servants are theirs?"

"I'm afraid that's not my information to reveal to you."

"I figured as much. Can you at least tell me this- Have all seven servants been summoned, and have you encountered any servants belonging to an irregular class?"

"Six of the seven have been summoned, though I am unsure what you mean by an "irregular class"."

"If you don't know, don't worry about it. I'm just trying to get a feel for things, see if everything's going like normal or if there's anything that's off."

"I'm afraid I wouldn't know enough about what's normal to tell you if anything were off."

"I see. And you're absolutely sure that there is, without a doubt, no Holy Grail involved in any of this?" Akemi shakes her head. "What about the person who gave the three of you those rings you're all wearing. I'm assuming they've got something to do with all of this. Have you ever heard them mention anything about a Greater or Lesser Grail?"

Again, Akemi shakes her head. "The one who gave us these rings knows as little as we do, McRemitz-san. In fact, I might go so far as to say that we know more than they do."

Well, that's certainly unexpected. Gotta compose yourself, Bazett. No time to be thrown off. "Maybe you can tell me a little bit more about those rings, or the person who gave them to you. Are they used to denote membership in some kind of mage order? Or were they cursed and forced on you by this person?"

"All of the above, in a manner of speaking." Akemi twists the ring back and forth on her finger as you speak, clearly ill at ease to talk about it. In a tone colder than before, she responds "McRemitz-san, I should be returning to class now if Nurse Ortensia doesn't actually need to speak with me."

You'd like to see if you can get more out of Akemi, but with the sudden shift in tone it's clear that you've hit a brick wall. "Alright then. You can get back to class." Akemi stares at you for a brief moment, before finally leaving.

"So, that was Akemi Homura," you say, quickly jotting down her responses on the back of the page that details her. "She seems nice enough. Intelligent, well-spoken-"

"-And she definitely knows more than she's letting on." Ortensia interjects. You nod your head in agreement.

"Exactly. When I have the time, I'll do some investigating into the residences of her, Tomoe, and Kure. In the mean time," your stomach rumbles, louder than before. "Do you happen to know where I can get some good grub in this city?"

[ ] Wat do?​
 
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Talk to to Tomoe since she is a more reasonable person compare to the other one. By the way since Gil can see the other worlds events can he know of the events in Prisma Illya as well.
 
Talk to to Tomoe since she is a more reasonable person compare to the other one. By the way since Gil can see the other worlds events can he know of the events in Prisma Illya as well.

Some musical cues and Caren's role as the school nurse are the only nods to Prillya's existence that I'm going to give to this thread.
 
[X] Get some grub
[X] Investigate the residences of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika without entering. Look for anything suspicious like certain types of Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, etc.
 
Hmm if we are going to investigate about masters can we put investigating Tomoe as last since it would be dangerous since Gil is a caster here that would mean he would have defences that would easily kill most servants.
His auto defensor alone can cover the entire residence. Also I don't want to find out if he has any magic cannons that he use in Babylonia nearby as well.
 
[X] Get some grub
[X] Investigate the residences of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika without entering. Look for anything suspicious like certain types of Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, etc.
 
Hmm if we are going to investigate about masters can we put investigating Tomoe as last since it would be dangerous since Gil is a caster here that would mean he would have defences that would easily kill most servants.
His auto defensor alone can cover the entire residence. Also I don't want to find out if he has any magic cannons that he use in Babylonia nearby as well.

Bazett doesn't know that Mami has Caster nor does she know of Caster's identity. Best to avoid going too meta when it comes to these votes, so I try and keep it in character for people I vote on without letting too much meta knowledge bleeding into it.
 
[X] Get some grub
[X] Investigate the residences of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika without entering. Look for anything suspicious like certain types of Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, etc.

Hah fair let's just hope we are not going to target practice for Gil or a punching bag for berserker later.
 
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[X] Get some grub
[X] Investigate the residences of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika without entering. Look for anything suspicious like certain types of Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, etc.

Hah fair let's just hope we are not going to target practice for Gil or a punching bag for berserker later.

I don't think Caster is that much of arse, unless we act a fool.

Berserker and his master might be another matter, hopefully Oriko is there to calm their jimmies.
 
[X] Get some grub
[X] Investigate the residences of Tomoe Mami, Akemi Homura, and Kure Kirika without entering. Look for anything suspicious like certain types of Bounded Fields, the presence of Servants, etc.



I don't think Caster is that much of arse, unless we act a fool.

Berserker and his master might be another matter, hopefully Oriko is there to calm their jimmies.

Eh, I kinda guessed that Kirika and Berserker would be living with Oriko for the time being, so they probably won't be at Kirika's. It'd certainly be difficult to hide Berserker's tendencies from her mother after all.
 
Eh, I kinda guessed that Kirika and Berserker would be living with Oriko for the time being, so they probably won't be at Kirika's. It'd certainly be difficult to hide Berserker's tendencies from her mother after all.

Or the missing legs. Probably be harder to hide those than anything else.
 
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