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Maddie should actually legit repent for her sin for initiating this trope 

This story is not gonna run away and Horizon will not explode if you look away from it.
Thank you for saying that! I am still a novice writer so can't promise anything near this quest's quality, but I have my plans for LASERAlso, @ProfessorB has started their "make-a-superhero" quest. Check it out! LASER: the Lahti Academy for Superpower Emergence and Refinement
I mean, the next beat of this is:That said, this is his prerogative. If Bitterman likes what he's writing, then I won't say anything else that may dampen that enjoyment.
Nods sagelyI mean, the next beat of this is:
Yara haunting everyone's dreams to punish Maddie and save BlackGold because she's "compelled by the Yuri."
So since this is a superhero story, we're probably hitting that 5%.Standing there, facing the sea, is a weeping woman.
You're 95% sure that she isn't a ghost. Mostly sure. Pretty mostly sure.
This must be because of Dynamite! With her stacks of Clairvoyance, Yara counts as a psychic to be affected by its aftershocks, never mind the fact that she was in the middle of that courtroom.But at the same time, the image flickers and you see a figure wearing a black bodysuit spangled with stars, a green cape, and a green hood.
Her name comes to you.
Heavenly Astrologian. Han Yu.
Even Ellie's mom can see it! The closet is glass!"Girlfriend?"
"Yeah! Black Swan, the hero with the golden hair? Come on, you saw how she was all 'my Swan' and 'I've lost myself in unlimited cosmic power, oh wait I'm making babygirl sad, forget this!' You had to have seen it!"
The specter turns to consider you.
"It wasn't very subtle, was it?"
o7. RIP Heavenly Astrologian you were a real one."Perhaps you're right." Heavenly Astrologian smiles at you and then laughs. "Love is a wonderful thing."
She dissolves into a light posse of fireflies. You watch them dance across the surface of the water, as they begin their long journey to wherever they must go next.
You stay there and breathe in the salt air for a while.
Shelley, somewhere in the Apiary: Achoo! Ugh, I sense a fumble somewhere in the distance. Ok now back to finances.Now, what would Ellie like . . . m-maybe another leather jacket? You bite your lip.
Hm, so at minimum 45.Yeah!" you say, "You're old, right? I'm nineteen! Why else would an old guy want to hang out with me?"
". . . I'm the same age as King," he says a touch defensively, crossing his arms, "And mostly for the novelty. I told you it's been some time since I interacted with a peer—"
Cain! Dear lord you read him like a book with bolded text and footnotes.Oh 'wah-wah, only the strong survive'. Let me guess, someone you cared about died and now this is how you cope?"
He spreads out his arms, still holding the stuffed toy.
"Well, welcome to the club! It's terrible here!" he says, "Now, you're just like most people in the world. Only, you have superpowers, so, when you throw a tantrum like the giant baby you are, everyone has to pay attention!"
Mona was 100% willing to square up with essentially her worst fear for the gang. She's still awesome.You're in front of your stupid teammate(?) before you even fully process what's going on. The force of the displaced air still sends Cain flying and destroys dozens of stalls, but you spare him a major injury. Your construct-form flickers, but otherwise you're okay.
You stare the Terror of Horizon in the face.
You don't want to fight him again. You don't want to fight him again. You don't want to fight him again. You still have nightmares about that night that end with you floating alone in space while everyone you know has aged and died. You're Mona Merola-Morales. You just want to be a silly girl learning to be a hero and making friends wherever she goes.
You don't want to fight him again.
But you will.
Ah yes, the classic family stories. And Ellie seems to be taking moves from her Family Dinner Playbook.You are Rhys Garnder.
". . . so I say 'Cabo'? Sounds like you should 'cab-go'!"
You laugh as Gus' father, Harold, finishes telling his anecdote. Man . . . he's got a lot of them! Gus' mother rolls her eyes, no doubt having heard this story a hundred times. Ellie, to your shock, laughs along and smiles.
Oh. Ohhh no. Oh my opinion just dropped to the floor on these people.". . . Gus was a private guy. And, while we're dealing with revelations, I should also tell you he was Vul—"
"This is so hurtful," Lucille says, looking at her husband with tears in her eyes, "I just don't know why he did this to us."
"Gus loved you guys, it's just—"
"I just don't understand that boy," Harold says, shaking his head, "So hurtful. Spiteful toward his family. He's just like my brother! Maximilian was . . ."
"Leviathan's Blood, Bone, and Brain," you sigh under your breath, and Harold starts yet another story. Ellie scoots her chair back, stands up, and grabs one of the beers. She cracks it open, sniffs it, and makes a face. She offers it to you, evidently no longer interested.
You take one look, sigh again, and chug it.
Shelley got a pov, Cain and Song got a stream, so now Soraria gets her flowers. Perfectly balanced as all things should be.
So population decimation from Acid Rain… into a Named Behemoth. Ouch.Well, English-McLeod did take over the Creature's Den. Then Acid Rain attacked. Then A'Tuin of the Infinite Horizon woke up.
Shelley! Maybe don't cry over something as small as this!How were you supposed to make any sense out of this? You could feel your sanity slipping just by looking at it like it was a page from The King in Yellow!
"I don't understand how it's this bad," Shelley says from her end of the table, shellshocked. You, her, Belle Sabreuse, and Wolong were all crowded around Lady Leizi's desk. Shelley puts her face in her hands and you think you hear gentle weeping. "The only thing she bothered to keep proper invoices for were commissions of sexy art of her girlfriend!"
Weirdo to weirdo communication!!!Soraia, are you crying?" Shelley asks.
"It's just . . . I believe again!" you say, your voice trembling.
She narrows her eyes and looks at you.
"You act like you're normal, but you're lowkey just as weird as the rest of us, aren't you?"
Jorogumo.Because . . . because Nat's body hadn't just incinerated. It had been gnawed on. She bled before burning.
Like something had been eating her.
Someone tell him about Maddie.You can't help but smile to yourself as you replace some components. Yeah, Phillip's alright. Just need some guidance. Your smile turns a tad mauldin.
Maybe Zixuan will take him onboard at some point. Maybe he will get to be a hero like he dreamed. But you won't be there for it.
Even if everything goes okay and you manage to put down Phlogiston and his pack of wild dogs, you won't have a place with Justice Unlimited anymore. Heroes don't kill.
Yeah, definitely because of Dynamite. So maybe Ellie gets the memories and Yara gets the dialogue/closure.The Red Huntress. Harper English.
"It's not fair," she says as soon as she sees you, "Why does she get a second chance? After all she's done? She made my life a nightmare from the moment I was born, and now she gets a do-over? Where's my second chance at life?"
Harper must be dying on the inside from getting scolded by someone half her age lmaoDo you have any idea how envious I was, watching Uiara and The Red Huntress fight crime? You two were partners even before Justice Unlimited! I wanted to spend that time with Yazmin, but I didn't get to! And she was my sister!"
". . . sorry," the specter says, looking chastised, "I guess it's like Yazy used to say: you don't get what you deserve or deserve what you get. You only get what you get."
Bitterman yelling at certain omake writers"Wait," you call, "Who do you mean?! Bring peace to who?!"
The night does not answer you.
"You're only supposed to use pronouns once it's clearly established who you're talking about!"
He's coping so hard guys. Also he seemed to really like FM."His disrespect—"
"Yeaaaaaah, not buying it," you say with a dismissive gesture, "You seemed actually mad. Like how you got about Fantastic Metal. And, y'know, you never did actually answer why you wanted to hang out with me today . . ."
Oh hey Rei! Uh, sorry I cancelled your story… do your best to get that idea through Mona's dense head that maybe she had a crush.Ooh, Rei messaged you! You haven't spoken to her in forever! Maybe she knows what Ellie would like!
You're trying to explain to Rei that you don't have a crush on Ellie—you just think about her all the time and want her like you—when Scarlet Maturity finally speaks up.
Oh. There's a tragic backstory here, isn't there. Ok Rei you might wanna sit this one out.Another such team was The Guardian Wave, led by Fantastic Metal. She protected all who came under her aegis, even little boys abandoned by society."
Whoa. "She sounds awesome . . ." you say, reverently.
"All of them were. Wild Rose. XTreme. Trail Chaser. Bullet Proof. Tenebrism. They were all what modern 'heroes' pretend to be. The Guardian Wave worked tirelessly to protect the forgotten of this city, right until they met their end."
Fuuuck that's a valid reason to crash out. I probably would have done the same if I was 14-18 in that situation."During the fight, the boy tried to sacrifice himself. Buy time for the real heroes to escape. Even if his enhancements of their powers did not persist beyond his death, he still would have served The Guardian Wave well. Only, he did not die when was supposed to. His wounds, which he thought fatal, stitched themselves back together. His frame filled out, granting him new strength. He was not only able to delay Typhon, but, as the battle dragged on, he could match the creature."
Apiary was friends with Scarlet maturity? Not surprising, considering her power and personality.". . . no. There was one other. But I eventually ate her too. In the end, one must have power to survive. The strong must devour those below them, lest they be devoured themselves."
Presumptuous but correct.And why does this mean you can't have friends right now?!" you demand, building up steam, "Sure, I'm gonna outlive everybody, but doesn't that just mean I should spend time with them while I can?"
"That's—"
"Oh my god, Simon-o—"
"Simão."
"Whatever! Cain was right! You're just scared your friends will die and you'll be alone again! That's why you want to hang out; I'm immortal!"
"Presumptuous—"
PREACH, ELLIE! God that was satisfying to hear."Oh, we're just saying it now?" Ellie asks, perking back up, "You two are malignant narcissists. You've spent this whole time talking about yourselves. You've yet to express any grief about the passing of your son or ask his partner about how he's feeling. Instead, you've shared three hours of mind-numbingly dull stories."
Damn. Someone get Rhys a hug."I just . . . gaaaaah!" you shout into the fading light, "I just wanted . . . some kind of closure? I wanted to know how Gus really felt about me, y'know? I thought . . . thought maybe he would have told them something, but they know even less about him than I do!"
"Sure sounds like you knew Gus pretty well," Ellie says with a raised eyebrow.
"Yeah, I know he loved me, but . . . I don't know-know, y'know?" you say miserably, "Good lord, I wish he was the type to leave a final romantic letter spelling out all of his feelings or something, but he wasn't. Whatever was in his heart died with him and . . . a-and . . . I . . ."
You've fallen to the ground, crouching on the sidewalk. Your hands are on your head as hot tears fall from your eyes and onto the ground
"I got nothin' now.".
Oh my god he's such a nerd. He'd love Death Battle. Or the versus debates forums."Sounds like a battle for the ages! I knew Key was a fool, but never how much of one she was! She never should have engaged you directly. She should have used Uiara to flood the area and then freeze you all at once. And Man o' War was able to move his limbs? Did he have complete control of them at that point, or were they still autonomous except for where he put them?"
He punches a fist into a palm.
"So many questions!"
Write that down, write that down!He glares at you, annoyed. "The Horae Guard, girl. Keep up. They're divided into three ranks. 'Seconds' are their grunts, not much more powerful than the chaff you would find here on Horizon. The 'Minutes' are fewer and more powerful, as strong as your Handyman at a minimum."
That would explain why Dr. Ibis aimed for a brain implant; the serotonin directly counters LPP's brain debuffs.. . . I do hate fighting psychics."
"Ugh, tell me about it!" you call, "We're gonna have to fight Le Petit Prince eventually and I'm probably going to get benched for that."
"Actually, I'm fairly certain his power is biokinetic in nature. You're likely immune."
"Oh!"
"It's the 4th Hour you should avoid at all costs. Her power would conquer you in an instant."
Now, what is he cooking…"They do!" Cain says, pulling you back toward the stalls, "And for a modest finder's fee, I can find you the perfect thing to woo the woman of your dreams . . ."
Scarlet Maturity to your surprise, stands up and follows you both.
"Now this, I have to see."
HOLY SHIT!!! Goddamn Gus worked his ass off for that house. Respect.
Wolong my glorious king!!!
…"Fun fact!" he says, "Did you know that there's an underground market for metahuman blood, spit, and, ah, other fluids? Folk wisdom is that ingesting them will increase your own odds of gaining superpowers and that some act as a potent aphrodisiac!"
". . . gross."
Hm; seems like a good thing for a nice blaster power! I know Shelley would like that Intangibility, and we can go into Battle Precognition with that as well.Name: Bullet Proof, True Name Unknown
Keywords: Teleportation, Enhanced Senses, Intangibility
Faction: The Guardian Wave
Potency: 5
Author: LucidProp
Good value! Very nice.Name: Trail Chaser, Kione Ele
Powers: Fitness, Enhanced Speed
Faction: The Guardian Wave
Potency: 2
Author: EternalObserver
Ah, that's an interesting power. Autobio+Phasewalking build off of this is a good idea I think.Name: XTreme, Matteo Porter
Keywords: Teleportation, Regeneration
Faction: The Guardian Wave
Potency: 4
Author: StarSingerBlue
Ibis Jr.'s Notes: XTreme was another "hero" who originally led a life of crime before reforming to join The Guardian Wave. I'm sensing a theme! Perhaps I should try crime before becoming a hero, just like my father!
UPDATE: I cut in line in the cafeteria and felt so guilty I cried for forty minutes in a broom closet.
Her+Adamant for P5 is hilarious just for the annoyance of unbreakable stabby stab.Name: Wind Rose, Vanessa Almeida
Keywords: Telekinesis, Construct Creation, Clairvoyance
Potency: 5
Author: ArgentThyme
Gossip in the DNA profiles?!?!??!?!I will consult my paramor, Natalie Rhodes, for her opinion! After our third date, she agreed to go steady so long as "neither of our fathers ever, ever find out."
Note-self: delete that last part later.
Ooh that's a crazy mix of powers, good for FFM as well. Rad.Name: Tenebrism, Zende Listman
Power: Construct Creation, Energy Manipulation, Solar Absorption, Enhanced Strength
Faction: Independent
Potency: 4
Oh, that probably does something similar to Rosemary's Baby… interesting.Unlocked research action: Red Glow at Mourning, Promethean's Warning.
How is right. I want a research action just for that because ohhh my god that's insane. SM will likely hate us for it tho.Name: Fantastic Metal, Tatiana Menezes Padilha
Keywords: Algernon-type, True Telepathy
Potency: 13
Ibis Jr.'s Notes: I don't understand. I've run the test three times, and the results have remained the same. But it's impossible. Fantastic Metal has never demonstrated any telepathic ability whatsoever in any capacity. Yet, I see the ability for it in her DNA.
But . . . beyond that. Her medical records show no sign of the Rebound. At all. We know she made frequent use of her power, but she seems to have suffered no ill effects from it. Even my father, who is as judicious about the usage of his Algernon-type as one advancing their field can be, shows early signs of degeneration. Yet, she does not.
How?
Pffft
Aww cute. Guess Ellie's in a better mood after that long day."Nope!" you confirm, "I'm a hero because I wanna help people and look cute! Just that simple!"
You expect her to huff or roll her eyes, but instead she gives you a smile that makes your insides feel all gooey.
"Yes," she says, "That sounds like you."
Ouch. Ooh. That hurts.Don't deny it, it's obvious. And none of my business! But . . . I saw you two just now, and I figure, if you don't already know, someone outta tell you. Ellie has a boyfriend."
The warm feelings you had suddenly freeze, and then shatter. You go still. "W-what?"
"Yeah . . . they apparently just started dating? Maddie filled me in. I didn't know if you knew yet."
"O-oh."
"Mona, I'm really sorry—"
"No, no, it's fine!" you say, trying not to cry, "I-I didn't know if Ellie even liked girls so . . . um, g-guess not?"
Maddie better apologize.Miss Naught misses how her mentee roots in place and how her eyes go wide.
"Oh no," Maddie breathes, "I have fucked up."
And here's the hearth. Also mmm marshmallows.I have to do something," you whisper.
"Such as what?" the shade of Justiciar asks. The two of you are roasting marshmallows.
HOLY SHIT!!!"I don't know," you admit, "Something. Perhaps for love . . . or maybe justice."
Ugh, again? Man.D4 check: 3.
You're about to drift back to sleep(?) when you feel something enter your beach. It's large, filthy, and rotten, the smell alone enough to make you retch. You race to the edge of your deck, coughing and sputtering, only to realize you recognize the stench.
It's Trismegistus.
Fried his ass! Again! Get him OUT!You erase his presence the way light erases shadow, until there is nothing but a naked, shivering man on your surf.
"Y-you!" he gasps. His skin is mottled and bloated, his expression more tumor than face. He looks at you in shock and awe. "What have you done?! You . . . took it away?! Why? I am so close!"
"I don't care!" you shout at him, "Get the fuck off my beach! Come back never!"
Yeah, I see why Bitter said this was the predictable outcome. Cute!"Oh, who is it now?!" you shout.
"I can leave if you would prefer. I would not wish to overstay my welcome, Yara."
You jerk up at the sound of the voice, and capture the speaker in a great, big hug.
"Triss!"
Already put out my opinion on these choices here.[ ] . . . a school of colorful fish, in all shapes and sizes. Darting an elusive, part of a whole yet individual.
[ ] . . . ocean birds flying overhead. They swoop into the waters, striking fast with expert precision.
[ ] . . . a great sea serpent, larger than you dare imagine. It moves with slow grace, its power undeniable, irresistible.
…dammit, now I'm invested in the Scarlet Maturity character arc."Have they?" Faust says with a raised eyebrow, "Well, do inform me. Hopefully you can use the money to furnish your home. It's very, as they children say, 'male living-space'.
"I want Powers, Faust, all of it," Scarlet Maturity says bluntly, "After I've won your war, I want you to void every contract you have with every member. Then, I want you to stay out of my business, unless you have a job offer."
"Oho," Faust says, a smile coming to his thin lips, "Where is this coming from?"
"The same place it always does." Scarlet Maturity approaches the mantle, and takes several figures out of a bag. He arranges them carefully, placing Fantastic Metal last. "Strength comes in many forms."
It Was Always Meant For Two.How is right. I want a research action just for that because ohhh my god that's insane. SM will likely hate us for it tho.
No, this is something unique to Yara.Wait, is the side effect newly created or was it something on The Side Effect Tables that you just hand-selected?
Well yeah, but even if we're completely honest Take The Stage/the audit still always a good opportunity for our enemies to use something to slander us for being liars.Haven't been super involved in the quest's discussion, but is it crazy that I kind of want to do Take the Stage? Dr. Ibis is the only one that can administer new powers from how I understand it, so there's still our monopoly on things even without considering we aren't going to just give out instructions for how its done.
"I can tell you about some other missions?" Phillip offers, "There was this one with a bunch of magical girls and this really pretty girl who turned out to be really evil . . ."