Shards of a Broken Sun [Megaten/Shugo Chara/Exalted]

Being fair, Amu probably is legitimately imagining the risks involved. Her concern is that something has happened to them, meaning she's probably thinking of men in suits with guns, or whatever Manticore wears that she saw in Kana's memories. And also imagining the Scavengers being dead.

To say she's not thinking of all that would likely be a lie.

Using Biokinesis to fake calmness would still require engaging in social combat, just with different stats (probably Performance rather than Socialize, which she still has no ranks in).
I'm not talking about faking calmness. I'm saying that she should make herself calm down, if she has to.

Indicator light says Baughn's here, so @Baughn, can we have Amu calm down by force of will (spending WP)? Or if that's not enough, can we write a stunt and roll for it?
 
Calming Amu herself is just step 1.

You'd still have to project that onto Midori, which I believe is basically the same as this default vote:
[ ] Play the risk of death down. Realistically, checking Kana's house shouldn't be that risky, right?
- Would have been more believable earlier.
- Contested roll, specifics depend on subvote; Manipulate + Socialize by default.
You might be able to use Charisma instead of Manipulate, but it would still be contested.
 
I see, so Nero200 and PistachioCookies really want to inform others of things. I brought this up before, but I really do not see a reason to do this. There's a trivial easy solution to get around it by just declaring it a secret that she promised to keep and that she's going no matter what because she's concerned for her friend. And only unreasonable parents would not understand that some times people pick up some kind of promises like that and that they want to look out for a friend. Also reasonable parents understand that keeping ones word is an actually important thing.
... I think you missed the part where Amu already mentioned that if anyone else went, they might get shot at.
"I- yes. Kana's my friend, and- I think I'm the only one. Anyone else who came visiting might get shot at. Or, or, um. Turned around and made to go home," [Amu said.]
Only completely unreasonable parents would allow their thirteen-year-old daughter to go into a situation where someone might end up shot, especially in Japan, where firearms possession is massively restricted.

Midori would be a really, really shitty parent if she let Amu go in this situation. The best thing to do, from her uninformed perspective, is call the police and have them deal with it. Given that we know just how terrible of an idea that is, we need to somehow convince her to not do that and to let her - again - thirteen-year-old child go instead, and that means we have to, at least, tell her that Scavenger has a very bad history with a shady government division, and hence doesn't trust the police.

I'm not talking about faking calmness. I'm saying that she should make herself calm down, if she has to.

Indicator light says Baughn's here, so @Baughn, can we have Amu calm down by force of will (spending WP)? Or if that's not enough, can we write a stunt and roll for it?
I'm not sure about the WP, but we can always stunt. Frankly, if I knew how to write a good stunt, I'd try to make one that gives us a Charisma + Presence roll, to take advantage of Amu's good stats in this situation. Unfortunately I'm not sure how to do that, especially since I'm effectively somewhat drunk right now.
 
That's trading her relationship with her mother, in exchange for keeping the Scavengers' trust.
I think the fear of loss of relationship with her mother is substantially over estimated. Of course there are impacts, but there are such in all routes and I think they'd be highly manageable. And considering the future, further issues like this are only bound to show up more. Trying to coddle and protect Amu is a fundamentally impossible strategy for her parents really, the future simply does not allow for that option to work.

Beyond that, I just don't like your plans idea of dragging in a psychic. It just for me seems like a fundamentally bad move, if only because doing something that weird can only cause trust issues with ones parent as well. So I can only consider it a misstep and find that particular plan as a mistake.

... I think you missed the part where Amu already mentioned that if anyone else went, they might get shot at.
I didn't, instead I forgot to bring that up again. Which is an oversight.
 
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Beyond that, I just don't like your plans idea of dragging in a psychic. It just for me seems like a fundamentally bad move, if only because doing something that weird can only cause trust issues with ones parent as well. So I can only consider it a misstep and find that particular plan as a mistake.
According to this, Midori would in fact prefer that you call in an adult:
[ ] Call in help. Mom will accept not knowing if you aren't the one to go. Probably.
- [ ]
Who?
- This is more true if you ask for help from an adult, or better yet JPs.
I can't make you believe it's a good idea, but you will also not make me believe that Amu shutting out her mother is a low-consequence decision or a good idea.
 
I didn't, instead I forgot to bring that up again. Which is an oversight.
... I think you missed my point, which is, "Why would Midori let her thirteen-year-old daughter go into a situation where the other side is in possession of illegal firearms, and is very likely to use them on anyone else, without getting a very good explanation?"

Responsible parents don't let their kids go into a situation where guns might be involved, even if they promised not to tell anyone else about the circumstances of the people they're going to visit. For all Midori knows, her daughter's "friends" are yakuza or some other form of organized crime, at which point letting the police go and deal with them is the right thing to do, regardless of said friends' opinion of the police.
 
I can't make you believe it's a good idea, but you will also not make me believe that Amu shutting out her mother is a low-consequence decision or a good idea.
I'm not convinced this is really a low-consequence decision. I personally suspect where the scavengers fall could matter a bit to the future and how Amu develops.


Also while calling in an adult can help in certain cases, like JP, I'm not convinced a psychic would really be a good option here. If you go such a route, you might as well do it properly.


Fundamentally, when one gets right down to it, as I said even, I think your initial premises are flawed. I don't think the stakes are just low, I don't think breaking promises should be as easily done, I don't think the Scavengers don't matter, I don't think the consequences with her mother would be nearly so large as supposed.


... I think you missed my point, which is, "Why would Midori let her thirteen-year-old daughter go into a situation where the other side is in possession of illegal firearms, and is very likely to use them on anyone else, without getting a very good explanation?"
It wasn't a choice, in my option Amu will simply go because she won't abandon her friend. The question is more if her mother decides to help her further in it or not. It was an oversight for me to not cover the gun matter in my vote though, I'll correct that.
 
Fundamentally, when one gets right down to it, as I said even, I think your initial premises are flawed. I don't think the stakes are just low, I don't think breaking promises should be as easily done, I don't think the Scavengers don't matter, I don't think the consequences with her mother would be nearly so large as supposed.
You believe Amu souring her relationship with her mother is of relatively low consequence, I don't.

I believe that a single phone call to a professional acquaintance of Midori's is of relatively low consequence, you don't.

Neither of us are the QM or can see the future, so we'll just have to agree to disagree on our estimations.

Edit: (I already wrote multiple posts about why I don't believe Saeki should be a problem, I assume you've either already seen them and still hold reservations or else your main issue is with the fact that we'd still break our promise and tell Midori if it's not predicted to be safe.)
 
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I believe that a single phone call to a professional acquaintance of Midori's is of relatively low consequence, you don't.
Honestly I agree with Nero's logic that telling Saeki is going to really fucking piss off Scavenger. It's one thing if Amu tells her own mother, who's already met one of them, about their situation in order to convince her to allow Amu to go check on them in case, y'know, Manticore found them or something; Naomi won't be happy about it, but I imagine the others could be convinced. Giving someone none of them have met enough information to let said person spy on them, on the other hand, is... much, much worse.

Honestly, we don't have enough information to make an informed choice here, and I think we should take the route that lets us get to searching for Scavenger as fast as possible, because - narratively speaking - odds are that they're in some kind of trouble and need Amu's help.

Also, on a meta level, it would be a lot easier to convince Scavenger we felt like we needed to help them, and told Midori what we needed to in order to convince her to let us assist, than it is to convince Midori that Amu needs to go looking for them without fully disclosing Scavenger's circumstances. And convincing Scavenger we only said what we had to in order to go help will be exponentially harder if, y'know, we tell someone completely uninvolved in the situation enough about Scavenger to allow her to successfully scry on the situation.

Frankly, I've pretty much written off Naomi's opinion, because I'm pretty sure that no matter what Amu does, Naomi is going to think that she's broken the promise. Short of dropping the matter with Mom and then sneaking out anyway, but uh, I really don't want to do that.
 
Once again, I already wrote multiple posts about why I don't believe Saeki should be a problem.

If you still have reservations about it and believe that, even without Saeki actually knowing anything about the Scavengers, it's still somehow a more grievous violation of trust than telling absolutely everything to Amu's magazine editor mother... I doubt I can do much more to sway your opinion.
Giving someone none of them have met enough information to let said person spy on them, on the other hand, is... much, much worse.
The vote explicitly spelled out "Without telling her anything about the Scavengers", which is also supposed to include the address of the house.

Saeki should be getting no information except what she sees in her vision (which is what I addressed in the third link and why it wasn't a problem), unless the QM decides Amu suddenly has loose lips.
 
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You believe Amu souring her relationship with her mother is of relatively low consequence, I don't.
No that's a misunderstanding, I don't believe it will lead to much souring of the relationship. For that to happen in my point of view, she would have to be a different kind of mother.

I also don't think that particular acquaintance in is a good idea. Yes, she has a relatively positive rap in the family, but even so she is an outsider and could be argued to be a worse promise break then having your mother force the secret out of you. In general bringing in outsiders like that to resolve internal family disputes is in my opinion something that would be considered weird. At least so far I understand family dynamics and this particular family dynamic. So I just don't personally think this is a good move as such.


In any case that's how I see things at current.
 
In general bringing in outsiders like that to resolve internal family disputes is in my opinion something that would be considered weird. At least so far I understand family dynamics and this particular family dynamic. So I just don't personally think this is a good move as such.
Bringing Midori to see the Scavengers and letting them explain is the proposed solution to resolving the dispute, assuming the Scavengers are there.

Saeki is only being called to provide early warning of ambush, in case there are men waiting to jump them when they get near the house or booby-traps waiting. She's only called to provide one prediction - "will Midori be safe if she comes with Amu on her visit?" - and given no information about the Scavengers, unless Amu is written to have poor judgment.

If the Scavengers are not there, it's assumed they are in trouble and then who cares about the promise, tell whoever you need to find them and save them.
No that's a misunderstanding, I don't believe it will lead to much souring of the relationship. For that to happen in my point of view, she would have to be a different kind of mother.
You can change my sentence to "Impact on Amu's relationship with her mother is low-consequence" if you like, same result - I predict it will cause problems but you don't.
 
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Saeki is only being called to provide early warning of ambush, in case there are men waiting to jump them when they get near the house or booby-traps waiting. She's only called to provide one prediction - "will Midori be safe if she comes with Amu on her visit?" - and given no information about the Scavengers, unless Amu is written to have poor judgment.
I wasn't talking about her use. I just don't like what it does to family dynamics, in my view on good family interactions bringing an outsider in to a family dispute is just weird and won't usually do one any favors in properly resolving it.

I mean what does it say that when you have a fight with your mother over your safety, that you bring in the fortune teller colleague? That you trust the fortune teller more then your mothers judgement?

Yes of course there are various ways one could socially try and correct that, but we already know Amu is not good at social.


Look this is just how I view such things, but due to it, I simply disfavor bringing Saeki in.
 
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[X] Plan Keep the Secret.

Yes, that should be good enough. I insist that the promise and the spirit of the promise are important. May be. Amu was pressured to make this promise, but she made it not because she was threatened, but because she understood how important it was for the group. Otherwise she wouldn't have been open with Naomi from the very beginning.

I'll keep the old vote as a backup for now, but I hope it's redundant.

[X] The most important part of the truth: they don't trust anyone but you and each other. And they're not that sure about you.
-[X] The danger is that they especially don't trust people like JPs, and the entire country knows you've been talking to JPs. They don't know for sure that you didn't tell JPs anything about them.
 
I mean what does it say that when you have a fight with your mother over your safety, that you bring in the fortune teller colleague? That you trust the fortune teller more then your mothers judgement?
If you had a dispute with your mother over how safe it was to be doing Muay Thai and wanted to show her the dojo, you (or at least I) would be happy to trust a taxi driver to take everyone there.

The fortune teller is the taxi driver. Just because he drives you to the dojo does not mean he is involved in the family dispute.
 
The vote explicitly spelled out "Without telling her anything about the Scavengers", which is also supposed to include the address of the house.

Saeki should be getting no information except what she sees in her vision (which is what I addressed in the third link and why it wasn't a problem), unless the QM decides Amu suddenly has loose lips.
I will admit, having never watched Shugo Chara, I don't know the nature or limits of Saeki's abilities. But I wouldn't be surprised if she somehow derived more information from her vision than the Scavengers are comfortable with.

Also, Amu did promise Scavenger that she'd keep their secrets, and while I can see her deciding to let her mother in on those secrets (because it's her mom and she trusts her implicitly), I really can't see her deciding to delegate to her mother's psychic professional acquaintance. Not least because she's kinda quietly freaking out right now, enough that I doubt such an orthogonal solution would be the first option to come to mind.

All that being said, though, I can see you're set in your opinion, and even if I believe it's both OOC for Amu and rather scummy in general, there's nothing I can realistically do to change that.
 
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Make it a voting option, and I'll tell you what the difficulty rating is. ...there's strong limits on what post-cog can read, but you're unlikely to run into them in this case. Although, I will note, it is at least hypothetically noticeable to the people being spied upon... if it's targeted to people.

That would require a botch. Which is a 10% chance in this case.
I just realised, based on this post by Baughn?

The Scavengers can potentially detect the precog and defend against it / run due to it.

That seems like it's something that should be accounted for, in the plan to use Saeki.
Aoi can very likely detect it at least, and possibly defend against it, since psionic precog is likely to rely on polling the CU for it's predictive model, pining the people involve for prediction.

So, another point against Saeki.

To be clear though, I'm still going for full disclosure, not trying to manipulate into partial truth.

To refresh people on my plan, and update it, considering the amount of messages.

[X] Plan: Full Disclosure
[X] Full disclosure to mum about the Scavangers circumstances.
- [X] Explain that they are a bit like Utau, though they suffered under a much worse group than Easter.
-- [X] Mention that Manticore are part of the government, unlike Easter, but like JPs, and so they don't trust any officials.
--- [X] And unlike JPs, they are evil. Like Easter.
- [X] If possible, avoid telling her that Kana is a murderer. That doesn't seem like it would go down well.
[X] Go with Midori and Miki to check the Scavengers house for them using mental scan from the longest range it is viable.
 
The problem with doing anything about this with the social combat mechanics is that I'm pretty sure we'd have to fucking WP-tap Amu's mom to get her to let Amu go into danger uninformed, and that's not really possible with natural mental influence unless she only has 2 WP left.
 
The problem with doing anything about this with the social combat mechanics is that I'm pretty sure we'd have to fucking WP-tap Amu's mom to get her to let Amu go into danger uninformed, and that's not really possible with natural mental influence unless she only has 2 WP left.
It also isn't going to happen. Amu would be WP-tapped first.
 
I don't consider that as a promise that much under duress really. Instead it was Amu promising vastly more then she ever had to, because she sucks at social in the end. As such it's a foolish promise, yes, but the current situation doesn't actually warrant breaking it when the current situation isn't all that serious yet.
I appreciate your desire to keep promises, but the most important part of that principle is not making promises that would be bad to keep. Letting people talk you into commitments you shouldn't actually keep, and then keeping them anyway, is a bad principle and if you find yourself following it you should stop.
 
A few things to note: First off, mom isn't the only one we'll have to convince. Dad is definitely getting involved. None of the votes mention dad, so I'm not sure people are remembering this.

Second,
A box in her wardrobe had a gemstone with an eye painted on it, a gift from Hikaru, who'd claimed it was a ward against evil.
I hope Amu remembers to bring this. I'm not sure we can actually swing enough votes to get it into the winning plan explicitly at this point. (If one of our parents ends up coming, they should be the one to bring it - they need it a lot more, assuming it works.)
 
I appreciate your desire to keep promises, but the most important part of that principle is not making promises that would be bad to keep. Letting people talk you into commitments you shouldn't actually keep, and then keeping them anyway, is a bad principle and if you find yourself following it you should stop.
Considering I noted that at current I didn't consider this particular promise that problematic, I don't think you need to worry about me keeping to promises unreasonably, I clearly already keep such concerns in mind as such.

Though in this case I as such just think Amu doesn't have a need to just break her promise for now and that there is very much value in keeping it for at least a bit longer. In the end if one wants ones promise to have value, one shouldn't break it to easily after all.
 
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