The Light in the Night: The Night I died.

(ADAM POV)

"Tell me is Nat near the building!!" You shouted as an explosion rocked the street "I need to know If I'm going out there James!!"

The city was on fire, everyone was in the process of being burned or dying and Sunrise's plan had reached near fruition.

Other then that problem, the day had been going swimmingly. Only half of the strike team was dead in the last 8 hours since the battle had started and everything was fine.

"Cima!! WHERE is my MECH SUPPORT!!" You shouted walking out of cover annoyed by the barrage of bullets destroying your synthetic skin on your face and torso.

"I am trying to fight the entire Chinese Drone Force...GIVE me five minuets!!" The angry bitch shouted as you rolled your eyes.

"I won't have skin in five minuets you sow hurry it up!! Nat needs this distraction!! To work!!" You said calmly yelling at her with the sheer rage of angry computer god.

"Call your own MECH!! I'm Busy up here!!" Cima shouted.

"But I just FIXED IT YOU SOW!!" You complained. "And It's not even rearmed!!"

The battle carried on as she flew by and you swore she was flipping you off from behind her armored cockpit. The whore...she was showing off.

If you had half the mind and you truly did,have many minds..you'd show her. "Fuck it, she's paying for it anyway."

You hit a button on your watch and watched your mech launch and descend near your location. "Every time she sucks all the usefulness out of her ass to not be helpful to me...is it because I didn't say please to her and insulted her after she got pregnant...really it could be a NUMBER of reasons why she doesn't like you.

"Welcome Adam, is it time to lay waste to humanity ." The Robotic voice of Glynis said as you entered the seat and prepared to fight the swarm of drones.

"No...ask tomorrow...dammit I thought I fixed that bug." You said feeling a hint of annoyance in what remained of your synthetic skin.

"It's not a bug ADAM, it's a feature." She snarked.

"Ohh I forgot, I gave you a sense of Humor...Come on, let's finish this up!!" You said.

You didn't bother recalling the battle because you killed so many of those damn things.

"Warning Tactical Mecha Buster Noted!! You might want to make the jump down!!" She said. "We can avoid it if we go low."

"And Let Cima die, no…She's good support." You respond to her analysis coolly and noted the path.

"Sir...are you sure?" She responded.

"I will miss you GLY...thank you for the banter." You said. "Besides...Cima's always been better at this whole mech thing then me, also my sword and Buster weapon ready for my jump back to the battle on the ground?" You asked.

"Under the seat sir, Thank you." She said as you jumped and watch her take a death blow , meant for someone else.

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You landed and saw a group of men, and prepared your Sword and arm cannon. "Before we get started...want to fuck off."

The poor bastards thought they could take you.

Your sword was essentially a buster sword from Final fantasy...a seven foot long hunk of metal titanium...utterly bulletproof and can cut through steel like butter.

Your arm cannon...was Samus arm cannon, with all the power it implies.

And they thought they could beat you!! You'd laugh if it didn't take away precious seconds away from you eliminating them.

And for god's sake you could see your inner wiring in your hand...It will take FOREVER TO CLEAN now.

You cut them down and sighed. "I am getting old...my joints are seizing up!!"

Then that was when you saw the large monster servator. "Oh...my it's you.. Hello Lilly...still alive I see, I thought that Hydrogen bomb would have been the last of you."

The Roar is most annoying.

"Die already...I'm couldn't save you from what you have become...Let me set you free." You said solemnly.

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It was over...you were missing your entire lower half and your arm and most of your face but you set her free.

Now you had too...the battle was ending.

"Did we win." You said over the radio.

"DID...WE WIN?" You said calmly your voice box giving static.

You looked down at the pile of scrap that was once your arms and smiled, as you observed the robots and Lilly's body. "I built you with those arms...and nurtured you with them...its only right I lose them tearing you to pices...I'm sorry,"

The world was silent as you finally died. The data of the battle told you, that you lost the battle, but you knew better than to trust only data these days.

It was something the humans taught you.

AN: My headcanon on how AI Kun died...it was awesome, but I'm not good at writing battles so...use your imagination!!

Enjoy.
 
The Light in the Night: The Night I died.

(ADAM POV)

"Tell me is Nat near the building!!" You shouted as an explosion rocked the street "I need to know If I'm going out there James!!"

The city was on fire, everyone was in the process of being burned or dying and Sunrise's plan had reached near fruition.

Other then that problem, the day had been going swimmingly. Only half of the strike team was dead in the last 8 hours since the battle had started and everything was fine.

"Cima!! WHERE is my MECH SUPPORT!!" You shouted walking out of cover annoyed by the barrage of bullets destroying your synthetic skin on your face and torso.

"I am trying to fight the entire Chinese Drone Force...GIVE me five minuets!!" The angry bitch shouted as you rolled your eyes.

"I won't have skin in five minuets you sow hurry it up!! Nat needs this distraction!! To work!!" You said calmly yelling at her with the sheer rage of angry computer god.

"Call your own MECH!! I'm Busy up here!!" Cima shouted.

"But I just FIXED IT YOU SOW!!" You complained. "And It's not even rearmed!!"

The battle carried on as she flew by and you swore she was flipping you off from behind her armored cockpit. The whore...she was showing off.

If you had half the mind and you truly did,have many minds..you'd show her. "Fuck it, she's paying for it anyway."

You hit a button on your watch and watched your mech launch and descend near your location. "Every time she sucks all the usefulness out of her ass to not be helpful to me...is it because I didn't say please to her and insulted her after she got pregnant...really it could be a NUMBER of reasons why she doesn't like you.

"Welcome Adam, is it time to lay waste to humanity ." The Robotic voice of Glynis said as you entered the seat and prepared to fight the swarm of drones.

"No...ask tomorrow...dammit I thought I fixed that bug." You said feeling a hint of annoyance in what remained of your synthetic skin.

"It's not a bug ADAM, it's a feature." She snarked.

"Ohh I forgot, I gave you a sense of Humor...Come on, let's finish this up!!" You said.

You didn't bother recalling the battle because you killed so many of those damn things.

"Warning Tactical Mecha Buster Noted!! You might want to make the jump down!!" She said. "We can avoid it if we go low."

"And Let Cima die, no…She's good support." You respond to her analysis coolly and noted the path.

"Sir...are you sure?" She responded.

"I will miss you GLY...thank you for the banter." You said. "Besides...Cima's always been better at this whole mech thing then me, also my sword and Buster weapon ready for my jump back to the battle on the ground?" You asked.

"Under the seat sir, Thank you." She said as you jumped and watch her take a death blow , meant for someone else.

----------------------------

You landed and saw a group of men, and prepared your Sword and arm cannon. "Before we get started...want to fuck off."

The poor bastards thought they could take you.

Your sword was essentially a buster sword from Final fantasy...a seven foot long hunk of metal titanium...utterly bulletproof and can cut through steel like butter.

Your arm cannon...was Samus arm cannon, with all the power it implies.

And they thought they could beat you!! You'd laugh if it didn't take away precious seconds away from you eliminating them.

And for god's sake you could see your inner wiring in your hand...It will take FOREVER TO CLEAN now.

You cut them down and sighed. "I am getting old...my joints are seizing up!!"

Then that was when you saw the large monster servator. "Oh...my it's you.. Hello Lilly...still alive I see, I thought that Hydrogen bomb would have been the last of you."

The Roar is most annoying.

"Die already...I'm couldn't save you from what you have become...Let me set you free." You said solemnly.

----------------

It was over...you were missing your entire lower half and your arm and most of your face but you set her free.

Now you had too...the battle was ending.

"Did we win." You said over the radio.

"DID...WE WIN?" You said calmly your voice box giving static.

You looked down at the pile of scrap that was once your arms and smiled, as you observed the robots and Lilly's body. "I built you with those arms...and nurtured you with them...its only right I lose them tearing you to pices...I'm sorry,"

The world was silent as you finally died. The data of the battle told you, that you lost the battle, but you knew better than to trust only data these days.

It was something the humans taught you.

AN: My headcanon on how AI Kun died...it was awesome, but I'm not good at writing battles so...use your imagination!!

Enjoy.
Next turn... nah a +10 for when the turns start will do.
 
We are crippled in the arms then huh? We have 4 options I guess.

1. Be the heir and hope the old man will fix us and the elders will give us a chance and not forsake us from the get-go.
2. Not being the heir but also not from the branch family. Be in the same period as Tsunade and try asking her to fix us.
3. Being from the branch family, and thus hoping one of our parents is damm competent at the healing arts.
4. We are not the heir, we are from the branch family, Tsunade is not here, ours parents are not competent at healing and we probably have no one to ask? Fine, we'll do it ourselves, semi-Orochimaru style if we need to. If we can't use the arms, our legs will do for now., and at the end of all, either we fail and die, or if we suceed...
We will see through the cosmos. Hear the whispers of the chackra. The price is high. The power is worth it. After all, if you transcend mortality, why let yourself be bound by mortal morality?
 
Hey now, thats Orochimaru talk... and we all know where that leads.
Hey now, as long we don't have an stupid ammount of unwilling subjects dead bodies hanging around and we don't let pretty much anyone know, no one will complain I guess. I mean, we could try to go Tsunade style and basically be young even though we are old.
 
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Hey now, as long we don't have an stupid ammount of unwilling subjects dead bodies hanging around and we don't let pretty much anyone know, no one will complain I guess. I mean, we could try to go Tsunade style and basically be young even though we are old.
I mean, why go for the biological approach, when going the mechanical route is just as good?
 
...you know, I just noticed this, but in a very twisted way, isn't our character the living proof that Neji was right? Since, you know, he is our puppet in our point-of-view and as such he has no freedom.
I mean, why go for the biological approach, when going the mechanical route is just as good?
Would we have a sense of touch in our arms if we went full metal? If not, I'll go biological then. There is a price to pay anyway.
 
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.you know, I just noticed this, but in a very twisted way, isn't our character the living proof the Neji was right? Since, you know, he is our puppet in our point-of-view and as such he has no freedom.
Neji is a brat who doesn't understand that he is the same thing... you know. Kishimoto and all the fanfic writers.

Besides, we're a reincarnation, we don't believe in fate. For we make our own.
Would we have a sense of touch in our arms if we went full metal? If not, I'll go biological then. There is a price to pay anyway.
I mean, they are going to be connected into our nerves... so maybe?
 
all the fanfic writers.
...uhh, uhhh *heavy breathing* aahhhhh, aaaaah *ptsd flashbacks* Naruto being more op than canon, Sasuke being just an emo, civilian council, Sarutobi hating paperwork, Sakura being just a fangirl, harem, absurd OC, Minato and Kushina as incompetent parents, Kakashi favoring Sasuke and hating Naruto, Danzo as a two-bit villain, Naruto with Rinnegan, Shadow clones at a young age, Naruto prodigy at sealing because of Uzumaki bullshit, Kurama being a female of infortunate circumstances, HAREM, Naruto defecting Konoha because reasons, Naruto with Mokuton, Sasuke's trauma is ignored, Sakura is even weaker, bizzare ships, Naruko, Orochimaru as gay Michael Jackson wannabe, Naruto bitch younger sisters, Naruto's happy mode is a persona and he is a logical and cinycal individual as smart as Shikamaru, crossovers, hArEm, Naruto wit- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAÁAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH- *Agonizing scream due to repressed memories being released*.
 
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...uhh, uhhh *heavy breathing* aahhhhh, aaaaah *ptsd flashbacks* Naruto being more op than canon, Sasuke being just an emo, civilian council, Sarutobi hating paperwork, Sakura being just a fangirl, harem, absurd OC, Minato and Kushina as incompetent parents, Kakashi favoring Sasuke and hating Naruto, Danzo as a two-bit villain, Naruto with Rinnegan, Shadow clones at a young age, Naruto prodigy at sealing because of Uzumaki bullshit, Kurama being a female of infortunate circumstances, HAREM, Naruto defecting Konoha because reasons, Naruto with Mokuton, Sasuke's trauma is ignored, Sakura is even weaker, bizzare ships, Orochimaru as gay Michael Jackson wannabe, Naruto bitch younger sisters, Naruto's happy mode is a persona and he is a logical and cinycal individual as smart as Shikamaru, crossovers, hArEm, Naruto wit- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAÁAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH- *Agonizing scream due to repressed memories being released*.
Ah shit, now he's triggered... It's going to be all day with this.:V
 
Well, you've touched one now...ami I that good or are you just board?
I kinda don't consider Quests as fanfics. That and the latter is more often than not better than the former, so I guess you are right in a sense. In layman terms:

Naruto Fanfic: Prepare to dive in a shitstorm of salt and hope to find something...well, something.
Quests: Not bad at least.
 
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Oh, it's nothing. Just remembering why I haven't touched a Naruto fanfic for almost half a decade. Even the decent ones.
Bit of a good thing, live life, don't get dragged into fanfiction. At least you didn't rail into the time travel fics. There are some good Naruto fanfics, they just happen to be buried (word of honor, this time as a namikaze, seventh slip backwards, Sage, Shikamaru centric peggy sues, Samsara Clan, Tenshigakure), or deleted.

I remember this one SI that got reincarnated as the Hatake family sword. Didn't go past Sakumo Hatake, and had a village council, but the former wielders of the weapon were interesting. The SI would play up the idea that it was the soul of the sword, changing what name it would be called by for each new wielder/hatake clan head (the sword used names from Bleach). An aftereffect of this was that the Hatake clan believed the family sword became their afterlife, I think i remember the text said they believed members of the Hatake family would enter a paradise from which their ancestors would use the sword to communicate with their descendents. I can't find it anymore, think it got deleted.
 
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Bit of a good thing, live life, don't get dragged into fanfiction. At least you didn't rail into the time travel fics. There are some good Naruto fanfics, they just happen to be buried (word of honor, this time as a namikaze, seventh slip backwards, Sage, Shikamaru centric peggy sues, Samsara Clan), or deleted.

I remember this one SI that got reincarnated as the Hatake family sword. Didn't go past Sakumo Hatake, and had a village council, but the former wielders of the weapon were interesting. The SI would play up the idea that it was the soul of the sword, changing what name it would be called by for each new wielder/hatake clan head (the sword used names from Bleach). An aftereffect of this was that the Hatake clan believed the family sword became their afterlife, I think i remember the text said they believed members of the Hatake family would enter a paradise from which their ancestors would use the sword to communicate with their descendents. I can't find it anymore, think it got deleted.
Who said I didn't read those as well?
 
[X]Plan: Fourth Sanin v.2

I will be honest, getting crippled in a clan who mainly use their hands in their fighting style is not a good thing. Now whether we are from the main or branch clan they all will disdain us for not being a "proper" Hyuuga. Also, I would like to go biological when we repair our arms, the quest master seems to favor the mechanical path. Let's hope we can have our arms healed early.
 
[X] Best Older Brother
-[X]The Clan Heir: Your father is the man who has lead the Hyuuga clan for many years. You are the firstborn child after many years of trouble. You are a signal to a new generation.
-[X] "The Third Shinobi World War. Konohagakure lost many ninja in the war, but Namikaze Minato guided us through it. I believe he will be a good Hokage."
 
You know... It's fun and all playing this quest with no complications. But I made, It's Treason, Then, for two things. So we can eventually do a Palpatine impression, and become a literal representation of ninja Darth Vader due to our arms not functioning anymore.

Our final form Cyborg Ninja.
 
[X] Plan New Hopes

Here are the Genetic rolls:

First Roll: 1D100 => 4

Trait Gained: Crippled (Arms): You have no usage in your arms, they are nothing more than dead weight to you. (You have no usage of your arms due to a birth defect when you were born)

Second (The good Trait): 1D100 => 98

Gained Trait: Genius: One of the smartest of your generation, able to master anything you set your mind to. (+10 to Training Rolls. There is a chance you will master a skill or Jutsu on the first try)

edit: I shit you not, that's what happened.

Gonna need to edit your moms charecter sheet a little bit. Just in case.

I'm laughing my @$$ off - the dice gods must be in a mischievous mood.

Danzo as a two-bit villain

To be fair, in canon, that's pretty much what he was; he pretended to be all for Konoha, but the 'Konoha can only prosper through me' attitude made it obvious that in reality, he was fooling himself and was power-hungry, simply enough. It also takes a special kind of person to do worse things than Orochimaru relatively regularly.
 
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[X]Plan: Fourth Sanin v.2
-[X]The Branches Favorite: You were seen by the main branch as another Branch Member. But they saw differently. You were treated well by the Branch Family. They saw you as the one who will remind the Main Family that just because they had a seal on your head, meant nothing. You would prove you were equals. (Start with Caged Bird Seal)
-[X] "The First Shinobi World War. Senju Tobirama sacrificed his life so his men, including our Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen, could make it back to the village."
 
[X] Plan New Hopes



I'm laughing my @$$ off - the dice gods must be in a mischievous mood.



To be fair, in canon, that's pretty much what he was; he pretended to be all for Konoha, but the 'Konoha can only prosper through me' attitude made it obvious that in reality, he was fooling himself and was power-hungry, simply enough. It also takes a special kind of person to do worse things than Orochimaru relatively regularly.
Yeah, I know. Problem is, most fics make him worse.
 
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