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WANNBE OVERLORD - A hazbin hotel quest

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morethanone said:
but everyday was the same tortuous cycle, over and over again.
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Should be torturous, I think. Tortuous is a word and if it's what you meant to use then disregard this.

morethanone said:
while using nothing other than water from chipped and broke sink
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Missing an a between from and chipped

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His "office" must have been some sort of restroom nit too long ago as tiles lined every inch of the place floor to ceiling. Your eyes wondered back to the pig man as he leaned against his uncomfortable looking wooden chair and continued
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Nit should be not, and wondered should be wandered

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drinked the memories of the day away before heading to bed . . . What the hell are you doing?
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Drinked should be drank

morethanone said:
drinking mub water for beer alone . . . All alone.
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mub should be mud



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who rather watch football than acknowledge his other son,
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needs a would between who rather


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Durinh
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During

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till you heard some crack. Your body went limb, then numb, then cold as you slipped into nothing.
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Some should be something, Limb should be limp

Doing this on mobile was a mistake. Also hate to be a bother, do we know when the next extermination is coming?
 
[X] Plan: We have to start somewhere

[X] Your appearance feels almost mocking, your arms and legs thinned and skeletal. Lacking the strength, small though it was, that you had in life. Your stomach is bulbous and soft, as if all the weight you had was concentrated there. Despite your height not changing you appear unnaturally lanky. You've taken to wearing baggier clothes to try and look less, unbalanced. It doesn't really work though, your hands are still as bony as ever and you haven't been able to find gloves that fit properly. Your eyes seem to glow with an internal light, and your mouth is much smaller than it seems like it should be. Finally your hair has become stiff and bristly, like thin sticks of wood almost, if not for the waxy texture they have. The ends sometimes catch fire when your excited or overwhelmed, letting out a smell like olive oil.
 
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    • Scheduled vote count started by morethanone on Oct 23, 2024 at 2:24 AM, finished with 46 posts and 11 votes.
    • [X] Plan: We have to start somewhere
      -[X] - PUMP SOME IRON!: One thing you learn quickly in hell is that it's a dog eat dog world, and you're a tiny chihuahua. It time to finally get into shape. (Head to the gym and work out)
      -[X] - SHOW ME YOUR WAR FACE: One important part of becoming a powerful and respected criminal kingpin is having an Intimating presence about you, something that a nerd like you lacks. (Learn to act intimating . . . And more)
      -[X] - WE NEED TO COOK: Every successful entrepreneur knows that when beginning your career, you should always find your niche, and that wisdom is still useful when becoming an Overlord. Now that you want to become one, you should find your Niche. (Find a service or product to sell)
      -[X] - I'm an actor: If you want to get good as an Overlord you need to learn to get good at acting, luckily you found a poster offering acting lessons for free . . . That's definitely doesn't sound weird at all (get free acting lessons).
      -[X] - Know thy self: Every night seen falling in hell you've been having nightmares about your past life, your failures as a living person, and what kind of a person you'll be now as a sinner. . . Who will you be now?. (Discover who you will be now in hell through your dreams)
      -[X] - lay of the land: You realized that you don't know the area you live in all that well at all, maybe a morning stroll will fix that? (Learn about your surrounding area).
      -[X] - Club meeting: So magic is real . . . Weird. Well since it is real it's better you learn it than to stay in the dark about it; There a so called "Magic club" that's meets up in the room next to yours, maybe they can teach you something? (Learn to unlock magic in the magic club)
      [X] Your appearance feels almost mocking, your arms and legs thinned and skeletal. Lacking the strength, small though it was, that you had in life. Your stomach is bulbous and soft, as if all the weight you had was concentrated there. Despite your height not changing you appear unnaturally lanky. You've taken to wearing baggier clothes to try and look less, unbalanced. It doesn't really work though, your hands are still as bony as ever and you haven't been able to find gloves that fit properly. Your eyes seem to glow with an internal light, and your mouth is much smaller than it seems like it should be. Finally your hair has become stiff and bristly, like thin sticks of wood almost, if not for the waxy texture they have. The ends sometimes catch fire when your excited or overwhelmed, letting out a smell like olive oil.
      [X] [Gluttony] Candy.
      [X] [Gluttony] Caffeine
      [X] [Appearance] you were screwed over. sure, you still had a normal amount of eyes in your now football shaped head. yeah, your nose wasn't that weird conpared to what other people were working with. your hair wasn't that fucking terrible. but you were so, so short. you'd trade your right arm, or put up with 3 weird insect ones, to just be a few feet taller. (yes, I've picked Arnold Shortman for our demon form.)
      [X] [Appearance] You looked like a fat tribal oni. You are all dark with bright white occult symbols were you got your life ending injuries from the boom. Your hair is bright yellow with heterochromia of of Black right and what you think is a weird Violet left and the small horn on the right side of your forehead that's neon pink for some reason
      [X] [Appearance] You looked like a fat Oni with a gas mask permanently attached to your face (with a zipper containing an opening to your mouth for eating and stuff). You are all dark with bright green toxic signs on your shoulder and chest as a not-so-subtle hint of how you died. Your hair is bright yellow with heterochromia of Black right and what you think is a weird Violet left and the small horn on the right side of your forehead that's neon pink for some reason
      [X] Plan: Oni Magic Drug Lord (with a weapon)
      -[X] - AND A GUN!: In hell, Everyone and their grandma is armed to the teeth with guns, knifes, axe, bombs, ect; Everybody but you, probably should fix that. (Buy a weapon for yourself. Will cost 50𝕊)
      -[X] - SHOW ME YOUR WAR FACE: One important part of becoming a powerful and respected criminal kingpin is having an Intimating presence about you, something that a nerd like you lacks. (Learn to act intimating . . . And more)
      -[X] - WE NEED TO COOK: Every successful entrepreneur knows that when beginning your career, you should always find your niche, and that wisdom is still useful when becoming an Overlord. Now that you want to become one, you should find your Niche. (Find a service or product to sell)
      -[X] - I'm an actor: If you want to get good as an Overlord you need to learn to get good at acting, luckily you found a poster offering acting lessons for free . . . That's definitely doesn't sound weird at all (get free acting lessons).
      -[X] - lay of the land: You realized that you don't know the area you live in all that well at all, maybe a morning stroll will fix that? (Learn about your surrounding area).
      -[X] - Club meeting: So magic is real . . . Weird. Well since it is real it's better you learn it than to stay in the dark about it; There a so called "Magic club" that's meets up in the room next to yours, maybe they can teach you something? (Learn to unlock magic in the magic club)
      [X] Plan: Oni Magic Drug Lord (With some moves)
      -[X] - Wax on, Wax off: You were getting the complete shit beat out of you when a little old lady came to help you. (Learn to defend yourself)
      -[X] - SHOW ME YOUR WAR FACE: One important part of becoming a powerful and respected criminal kingpin is having an Intimating presence about you, something that a nerd like you lacks. (Learn to act intimating . . . And more)
      -[X] - WE NEED TO COOK: Every successful entrepreneur knows that when beginning your career, you should always find your niche, and that wisdom is still useful when becoming an Overlord. Now that you want to become one, you should find your Niche. (Find a service or product to sell)
      -[X] - Know thy self: Every night seen falling in hell you've been having nightmares about your past life, your failures as a living person, and what kind of a person you'll be now as a sinner. . . Who will you be now?. (Discover who you will be now in hell through your dreams)
      -[X] - I'm an actor: If you want to get good as an Overlord you need to learn to get good at acting, luckily you found a poster offering acting lessons for free . . . That's definitely doesn't sound weird at all (get free acting lessons).
      -[X] - lay of the land: You realized that you don't know the area you live in all that well at all, maybe a morning stroll will fix that? (Learn about your surrounding area).
      -[X] - Club meeting: So magic is real . . . Weird. Well since it is real it's better you learn it than to stay in the dark about it; There a so called "Magic club" that's meets up in the room next to yours, maybe they can teach you something? (Learn to unlock magic in the magic club)
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    • szymonmolitoris2 said:
    Yes! My first plan to win!
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    congrats.
    Jonny_boy said:
    Sad that he isn't an Oni, but at least he's gonna be a "candy" maker.
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    yeah I can't even picture our sinner. serious just will not go from words to mental image.

    Candy addict. I highly doubt we have the skills, materials or appliances to make it ourselves.

    still prefer caffeine. kinda Ironic that the only one of the things I voted for that won was the one I initially didn't intend to vote for at all.
     
    Randino Treviani said:
    congrats.

    yeah I can't even picture our sinner. serious just will not go from words to mental image.

    Candy addict. I highly doubt we have the skills, materials or appliances to make it ourselves.

    still prefer caffeine. kinda Ironic that the only one of the things I voted for that won was the one I initially didn't intend to vote for at all.
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    we have high learning & occult, I'm sure we can learn some magical drug/potion/poison recipes and shape them to look like candy.
     
    morethanone said:
    MARTIAL: -3: -5 (Jackson Mcgril is a toothpick of a man with almost no muscles, the stamina of a terminal patient, and the physical endurance of a wet piece of paper.)

    DIPLOMACY: -3 : -5 (you're a stuttering, awkward mess with the same grace and charm as shit covered toilet paper.)

    STEWARDSHIP: 7: + 0 (you have a basic understand of money management and budgeting, but you do like to indulge every now and then.)

    INTRIGUE: 7: + 0 (Despite your lack of people skills, you're passable as a lier and trickster; But you still have a lot to learn.)

    PRESTIGE: -50: - 50 (You're as obscure as they can get; Not only are you unknown but people have a trend of forgetting you right after meeting you.)

    LEARNING: 17: +10 (While no super genius of any sort, you're a cut above the average when it comes your knowledge on a number of topics.)

    OCCULT: : -15: -15/unable to perform any magic spells. (While you can't perform any spells of your own, The knowledge you have on the dark arts is leading down the right path)
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    wabbitking said:
    I'll add my +5 to Lay of the land.
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    DaviProGamer27 said:
    Same as him.
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    just to be entirely clear, you do both know that your adding your plus fives to the only action that starts with a positive modifier, right?
     
    Randino Treviani said:
    just to be entirely clear, you do both know that your adding your plus fives to the only action that starts with a positive modifier, right?
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    I did not. I just picked one that seemed important. lol.

    morethanone said:
    @SunsetPuppet + 20
    @Randino Treviani +5
    @wabbitking +5
    @DaviProGamer27 +5

    Please tell me what choices in the winning plan you what to spend your points in.
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    In that case can I change my +5 to "Club Meeting"?
     
    Oof, The rolls are pretty great overall, but one is just painful to look at. While that roll may suck ass, you guys will at least be happy to learn who you all live very close to because of it.
     
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