Got it. Edited in diligence.
WANNBE OVERLORD - A hazbin hotel quest
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I want it to be a sixty-fourty split with the sixty being the more light-hearted, actiony part of the quest and the fourty being the "edge". The reason that I put Quotation marks is because it's less edginess and more of a gothic/horror Inspired tone that I will be going for. TL;DR: No, it will not be an edge fest.
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Should I use ai to draw what the characters look like to help the reader better visualize them or just stick to writing descriptions?
[ ] - yes use ai
[ ] - no, don't
[ ] - yes use ai
[ ] - no, don't
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more time investment that way. bit of a chore.
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I can do both, I would just use the pictures sparingly to either show new characters or important events in the story
Okay just good luck and don't burn out
[X] - yes use ai
[X] Plan got to go big and loud
Let's give ai a shot
[X] Plan got to go big and loud
Let's give ai a shot
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- Location
- sweden
[X] Plan "I actually like the heat. Cold is so much worse."
[X] Plan got to go big and loud
Eh to bad none really went full out like being a former priest being a bad guy or dying Ultra old imagine being the man who lived for over 100 years doing everything to stay alive just a bit longer throwing everything away and jumping in line for organ donations or just being willywonky movie grandparents level of living like a poor scrooge
[X] - no, don't
Descriptions are the nicest and the pictures often take center stage over it overpoweringly so
[X] Plan got to go big and loud
Eh to bad none really went full out like being a former priest being a bad guy or dying Ultra old imagine being the man who lived for over 100 years doing everything to stay alive just a bit longer throwing everything away and jumping in line for organ donations or just being willywonky movie grandparents level of living like a poor scrooge
[X] - no, don't
Descriptions are the nicest and the pictures often take center stage over it overpoweringly so
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Cassian does engage in petty to grand larceny at least in my headcanon. I'm sure the next phase of creation will give us a chance to further flesh out our MC's sins.
also if we actually meet Charlie and the gang I'd be up sneaking some angle dust into Vaggie's pockets for comedy reasons.
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[X] - no, don't
I'll end voting a bit early since it's clear who the winner is.
@wabbitking CONGRADULATIONS ON NOT ONLY BEING OUR FIRST READER, WRITER, VOTER, BUT ALSO THE FIRST TO HAVE A WINNING PLAN!!!! 🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳👯♂️👯♀️👯♂️, and the main character no less.
Well I'll start working on Jackson right-a-way and should be done around saturday/sundayish.
If you're reading this,I hope have a great week and a better month.
@wabbitking CONGRADULATIONS ON NOT ONLY BEING OUR FIRST READER, WRITER, VOTER, BUT ALSO THE FIRST TO HAVE A WINNING PLAN!!!! 🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳👯♂️👯♀️👯♂️, and the main character no less.
Well I'll start working on Jackson right-a-way and should be done around saturday/sundayish.
If you're reading this,I hope have a great week and a better month.
Also I will not be using Ai art as the voting shows, so art for the characters will be very important.
Every piece of art about them will get a +10 instead of a +5
Every piece of art about them will get a +10 instead of a +5
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SV seems to be leaning in favor of brainy characters lately. Second Character creation to generate thinker MC this week.
Man a bit sad mine didn't get in
Well let's see how this story goes
Well let's see how this story goes
Wait are you doing the other overlord quest on spacebattles and this one too because I am not a 100% sure your the same guy.
Yes, but I've abandoned that quest when I stupidly tried to create two quest running at the same time to have fun seeing how much they would differentiate from each other . . . But then I realized that I would have to run those two quests, Don't make decisions like that in the middle of the night.
Friends and Allies
Age: 18
Time of death: May 23rd of 2018, just days away from high-school graduation all due to the hands of his tormentors.
Appearance: Jackson's new body is that of a gray colored, lanky corpse with limbs as thin sticks and a bloated stomach. He lacks eyes and instead as two pinprick sized burning dots inside of his eye sockets. His head is close to blad with only a handfull of hair strands with the texture of dried wax and would lit themselves on fire whenever Jackson became highly emotional.
Traits:
- The Weird Kid: they were obsessed with the supernatural and unknown, leaving you with little friends to hang out with. ( +10 to occult and -10 to diplomacy.)
- A Bookworm: They loved to read and study about a multitude of different topics leading to them getting all A in their school, expect for gym class. (+10 for learning and - 10 for martial.)
- Jackson would cover and hide his pain Misery through eating and drinking; Hoping to forget.( Jackson has gained the sin:Gluttony. He must roll every turn reults to see if he lets his additions take over in the form of a roll check; If he does not pass, then one action will automatically fail.)
- Jackson never grew jealous or callous towards others, For their success would drive him to be better. (Jackson has gained the virtue of kindness: When Ever a hero unit Rolls a critical, Jackson's roll will gain a +40 in response.)
- Jackson never backdown when faced with a failure, he doubled down on it. (Jackson has gained the virtue of Diligence: When ever Jackson fails a roll for an action, the Dc for that roll will decease when he tries again.)
- Virginity: Because of Jackson's lack of any anysort of "intimacy" before death, Succubuses and incubuses can smell the Virginity radiating off of him, and their addicted to it. (+30 to all diplomatic interactions with incubuses and succubuses/They will be more nice and flirty to you than they normally would be, but be careful: Not all of then can control themselves.)
Possessions:
- twelve pairs of sweat and dirt covered wife-beaters and gray sweat pants.
- Living inside of a dirty apartment building head togeather with duck tape and gum, with it being filled with crack heads and murders.
Fun facts:
- his favorite band is Linkin Park, with his favorite being their song "New Divide"
- Lived in Cabrini-Green Chicago before his death.
- His voice
- enjoys a session or two of DnD
- Likes to study religions and their interesting texts
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: +8 (Jackson Mcgril has finially done the impossible: He has a normal physique . . . For a living human, as a sinner he's still pretty pathetic.)
- Health: 100/100
- Base damage output: d20
- Demonic Transformation: +30/Two turns (You feel indescribable strength when you enter this form, but you as though there's more; Like further power awaits you.)https://www.pinterest.com/pin/warriors-of-chaos--36591815717292992/
DIPLOMACY: +0 (you're a stuttering, awkward mess, but ,now that you look halfway normal, most people can tolerate you.)
STEWARDSHIP: +2 (you have a basic understand of money management and budgeting, but you still new to this whole thing abd have a lot left to learn.)
INTRIGUE: +8 (Despite your lack of people skills, you're passable as a lier and trickster; But you still have a lot to learn; Luckily you got Ash to show you the ropes.)
- Acting: +2 (The acting skill will be used when Jackson is lieing or trying to deceive others. This skill will not be used in other intrigue actions like stealing, spying, sabotaging, and other actions like that.)
PRESTIGE: - 25 (you're pretty unknown to pretty much anyone one who isn't a friend, but those who do know you say that there's something special about you)
LEARNING: +15 (While no super genius of any sort, you're a cut above the average when it comes your knowledge on a number of topics.)
OCCULT: : -5 /nearly able to perform magical spells. (Nail's teachings and your daily meditation has led you to the closest you have ever been to unlocking the magical potential laden within you.)
Time of death: May 23rd of 2018, just days away from high-school graduation all due to the hands of his tormentors.
Appearance: Jackson's new body is that of a gray colored, lanky corpse with limbs as thin sticks and a bloated stomach. He lacks eyes and instead as two pinprick sized burning dots inside of his eye sockets. His head is close to blad with only a handfull of hair strands with the texture of dried wax and would lit themselves on fire whenever Jackson became highly emotional.
Traits:
- The Weird Kid: they were obsessed with the supernatural and unknown, leaving you with little friends to hang out with. ( +10 to occult and -10 to diplomacy.)
- A Bookworm: They loved to read and study about a multitude of different topics leading to them getting all A in their school, expect for gym class. (+10 for learning and - 10 for martial.)
- Jackson would cover and hide his pain Misery through eating and drinking; Hoping to forget.( Jackson has gained the sin:Gluttony. He must roll every turn reults to see if he lets his additions take over in the form of a roll check; If he does not pass, then one action will automatically fail.)
- Jackson never grew jealous or callous towards others, For their success would drive him to be better. (Jackson has gained the virtue of kindness: When Ever a hero unit Rolls a critical, Jackson's roll will gain a +40 in response.)
- Jackson never backdown when faced with a failure, he doubled down on it. (Jackson has gained the virtue of Diligence: When ever Jackson fails a roll for an action, the Dc for that roll will decease when he tries again.)
- Virginity: Because of Jackson's lack of any anysort of "intimacy" before death, Succubuses and incubuses can smell the Virginity radiating off of him, and their addicted to it. (+30 to all diplomatic interactions with incubuses and succubuses/They will be more nice and flirty to you than they normally would be, but be careful: Not all of then can control themselves.)
Possessions:
- twelve pairs of sweat and dirt covered wife-beaters and gray sweat pants.
- Living inside of a dirty apartment building head togeather with duck tape and gum, with it being filled with crack heads and murders.
Fun facts:
- his favorite band is Linkin Park, with his favorite being their song "New Divide"
- Lived in Cabrini-Green Chicago before his death.
- His voice
- enjoys a session or two of DnD
- Likes to study religions and their interesting texts
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: +8 (Jackson Mcgril has finially done the impossible: He has a normal physique . . . For a living human, as a sinner he's still pretty pathetic.)
- Health: 100/100
- Base damage output: d20
- Demonic Transformation: +30/Two turns (You feel indescribable strength when you enter this form, but you as though there's more; Like further power awaits you.)https://www.pinterest.com/pin/warriors-of-chaos--36591815717292992/
DIPLOMACY: +0 (you're a stuttering, awkward mess, but ,now that you look halfway normal, most people can tolerate you.)
STEWARDSHIP: +2 (you have a basic understand of money management and budgeting, but you still new to this whole thing abd have a lot left to learn.)
INTRIGUE: +8 (Despite your lack of people skills, you're passable as a lier and trickster; But you still have a lot to learn; Luckily you got Ash to show you the ropes.)
- Acting: +2 (The acting skill will be used when Jackson is lieing or trying to deceive others. This skill will not be used in other intrigue actions like stealing, spying, sabotaging, and other actions like that.)
PRESTIGE: - 25 (you're pretty unknown to pretty much anyone one who isn't a friend, but those who do know you say that there's something special about you)
LEARNING: +15 (While no super genius of any sort, you're a cut above the average when it comes your knowledge on a number of topics.)
OCCULT: : -5 /nearly able to perform magical spells. (Nail's teachings and your daily meditation has led you to the closest you have ever been to unlocking the magical potential laden within you.)
Basic personality description: Charile but if she was a Gym Bro; He's very friendly and bubbly, but can be native due to his optimistic outlook on life and because he's really stupid too. While he's unquestionably a sweetheart, he becomes a monster when a workout is involved; Trying to get everyone to push themselves, including himself, to their limits.
Age: 25ish
Appearance: Rocket while a gentle and kind heart man, he looks fucking terrifying. He he towers over basically everyone at a height of 8'11 feet with his large and board frame packed with over four hundred pounds of pure muscles. He's often seen wearing either a pair of pink shorts and a baby blue tank top, OR a white tank top and a pair of gray sweat pants.
Traits:
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Possessions:
Living and working for his Uncle Jim at his Gym.
Relationships:
With Mc - Gym Bros 20/50 ( Rock sees amazing potential within you to be the best you and wants to help you reach that. BUT, while he is very friendly to you, you guys aren't that close outside of the gym.)
Fun facts.
His voice
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
Age: 25ish
Appearance: Rocket while a gentle and kind heart man, he looks fucking terrifying. He he towers over basically everyone at a height of 8'11 feet with his large and board frame packed with over four hundred pounds of pure muscles. He's often seen wearing either a pair of pink shorts and a baby blue tank top, OR a white tank top and a pair of gray sweat pants.
Traits:
???
???
Possessions:
Living and working for his Uncle Jim at his Gym.
Relationships:
With Mc - Gym Bros 20/50 ( Rock sees amazing potential within you to be the best you and wants to help you reach that. BUT, while he is very friendly to you, you guys aren't that close outside of the gym.)
Fun facts.
His voice
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
Basic personality description: he's very eccentric with a macob and dark sense of humor. He's also can be very immature at times when called out for his inflated sense of self. Even with all of these flaws, Nail can be kind and caring when he needs to be, but don't expect it to be shown in a normal way.
Age: 23ish
Appearance: his sinner form is that of a black and white, human shaped bat with the tips of his pointy ears having red flames adorn them. He is also quote famous for constantly having nails in his mouth that he shapes like teeth at times to really round out his vamperic appearance.
Traits:
???
???
Possessions:
living in your apartment's boiler room.
Relationships:
With Mc -Master and apprentice: 30/50 (While Nail can be annoying, whiny, and Clingy at times, you two manged to form a strange sort of friendship with him teaching you magic and other dark arts.)
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
Age: 23ish
Appearance: his sinner form is that of a black and white, human shaped bat with the tips of his pointy ears having red flames adorn them. He is also quote famous for constantly having nails in his mouth that he shapes like teeth at times to really round out his vamperic appearance.
Traits:
???
???
Possessions:
living in your apartment's boiler room.
Relationships:
With Mc -Master and apprentice: 30/50 (While Nail can be annoying, whiny, and Clingy at times, you two manged to form a strange sort of friendship with him teaching you magic and other dark arts.)
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
Basic personality description: while caring for others, they are also unstereotypically shy and reserved, preferring to stay alone instead of being with others; Although they have left their shell just a little bit because of Jackson.
Age: 20ish
Appearance:
Human disguise (Jennifier Wolfe)
Traits:
???
???
Possessions:
???
Relationships:
With Mc - Close Roommates 40/50 (while Ash is still a bit closed off, he can be surprisingly friendly and close towards Jackson; Especially After he saved him, leading to them developing a kind of friendship.)
Fun facts:
- Likes DnD
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
Age: 20ish
Appearance:
Human disguise (Jennifier Wolfe)
Traits:
???
???
Possessions:
???
Relationships:
With Mc - Close Roommates 40/50 (while Ash is still a bit closed off, he can be surprisingly friendly and close towards Jackson; Especially After he saved him, leading to them developing a kind of friendship.)
Fun facts:
- Likes DnD
Current Stats:
MARTIAL: ???
DIPLOMACY: ???
STEWARDSHIP: ???
INTRIGUE: ???
PRESTIGE: ???
LEARNING: ???
OCCULT: ???
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ebolasos
Hiiii please be my friend!
- Location
- Down under
SV has always had the trend towards that, nerdy people equals nerdy MC to be picked.
From our stats, I can tell that even though we're smart and a budding occultist, we're probably going to have to work under one of the gang bosses of our apartment or district to get the protection necessary to not just get bullied again. Hopefully, we can improve our intrigue to the point where we can subtly gain enough influence in a gang to take over by backstabbing the leader via Magitech shenanigans or eldritch rituals.
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I can tell a occult is going to be a pain in the ass to raise
Ninjaben
I have no master but the wind that blows free.
I feel like the might depend on how we go about things. if we try to take something from someone we might be able to learn more faster. though it is pretty risky.